1. All diffs Title "アウターサイエンス" Artist"じん"
   code::
   Title

   アウターサイエンス

   Romanised Title

   Outer Science

   Artist

   じん

   Romanised Artist

   Jin

2. Source:Vocaroid
3. Add "topecnz" in Tags(All diffs)

• If this map for rank,Star Difficulty under 3.24

1. 00:25:915 (3) - sharp Slider use. reason: this normal diff..this Slider cause confusion..
2. 00:29:453 (4) - ^
3. 00:39:453 (1,2) - follow (2)Slider arrangement
   idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:915 (4) - straight line Slider
5. 01:37:300 (2) - remove note?
6. 01:48:684 (1) - End at 01:48:992 -
7. 01:55:761 (4) - End at 01:55:915 -
8. 03:01:300 (1,2) - Spacing
   more unify Distance Snap this map

litoluna wrote:

hi~from topecnz request

[general]

1. All diffs Title "アウターサイエンス" Artist"じん" ~all fixed
   code::
   Title

   アウターサイエンス

   ~fixed
   Romanised Title

   Outer Science

   ~fixed
   Artist

   じん

   ~fixed
   Romanised Artist

   Jin

   ~fixed
2. Source:Vocaroid ~im not sure if the vocaloid is the source, im not gonna put it yet
3. Add "topecnz" in Tags(All diffs) ~added

[topecnz's Normal]

• If this map for rank,Star Difficulty under 3.24

1. 00:25:915 (3) - sharp Slider use. reason: this normal diff..this Slider cause confusion.. ~fixed
2. 00:29:453 (4) - ^ ~fixed
3. 00:39:453 (1,2) - follow (2)Slider arrangement ~nice idea, fixed
   idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:45:915 (4) - straight line Slider ~ i dont get it , anyway, i just changed the pattern
5. 01:37:300 (2) - remove note? ~removed
6. 01:48:684 (1) - End at 01:48:992 - ~fixed
7. 01:55:761 (4) - End at 01:55:915 - ~its already fixed, o.o
8. 03:01:300 (1,2) - Spacing ~i extended 03:01:915 (2) , i think it fits
   more unify Distance Snap this map~fixing XD

Good Luck~!
poor English sorry

Mira-san wrote:

mod yuiyuiyui

2013-07-15 20:16 Mira-san: ok
2013-07-15 20:16 Mira-san: gonna mod
2013-07-15 20:16 Mira-san: huehue
2013-07-15 20:16 _Asagi_: d mo n ba lalagyan ng spinner sa una?
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: wag na
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: haha
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: 00:02:838 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: ^d2?
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: bket?
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: para sakto combo
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: huehue
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: 1370
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: sakto??
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: haha!! lol
2013-07-15 20:17 _Asagi_: mababawasan p yan
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: ganda total
2013-07-15 20:17 Mira-san: 37,745,000
2013-07-15 20:18 _Asagi_: 00:34:453 (12) -
2013-07-15 20:18 _Asagi_: lagay k isa
2013-07-15 20:18 _Asagi_: 00:37:300 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:18 _Asagi_: parang offbeat ata
2013-07-15 20:19 Mira-san: parang lang
2013-07-15 20:19 Mira-san: ^^
2013-07-15 20:19 _Asagi_: 00:52:069 (4) -
2013-07-15 20:19 _Asagi_: gawin mo n lng slider?
2013-07-15 20:19 _Asagi_: 00:54:530 (7) -
2013-07-15 20:19 _Asagi_: pati to
2013-07-15 20:20 Mira-san: yep
2013-07-15 20:20 _Asagi_: 01:43:453 (6,7,8,9,10,11) -
2013-07-15 20:20 _Asagi_: ewan ko parang d ko gusto ung tunog
2013-07-15 20:20 Mira-san: tinanggal ko yung nasa blue tick
2013-07-15 20:21 Mira-san: pakinggan mo
2013-07-15 20:21 _Asagi_: tanggalin mo ung pag kaka triplet or ayusin mo n lng ung beat
2013-07-15 20:21 _Asagi_: yun
2013-07-15 20:21 _Asagi_: 01:44:146 (2) -
2013-07-15 20:21 _Asagi_: ^try mo nga lagyan kung okay
2013-07-15 20:22 _Asagi_: 01:46:223 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:22 _Asagi_: palitan mo to. parang ang panget pakinggan
2013-07-15 20:22 Mira-san: sa 01:44:146
2013-07-15 20:22 Mira-san: ano lalagay ko?
2013-07-15 20:22 Mira-san: ah
2013-07-15 20:22 _Asagi_: circle lewl
2013-07-15 20:22 _Asagi_: HAHAHA
2013-07-15 20:22 Mira-san: 223 napupunta lol
2013-07-15 20:22 _Asagi_: magiging triplet cya
2013-07-15 20:23 Mira-san: pede
2013-07-15 20:23 _Asagi_: 01:46:223 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:23 _Asagi_: tanggalin mo to
2013-07-15 20:23 _Asagi_: tapos lagyan mo ng blah blah blah blah blah
2013-07-15 20:23 Mira-san: ok
2013-07-15 20:24 Mira-san: ohwait
2013-07-15 20:24 Mira-san: shet
2013-07-15 20:24 _Asagi_: bket? shet haha
2013-07-15 20:24 Mira-san: ibang 223 yung naedit ko pero tingnan mo na lang mmya haha
2013-07-15 20:24 _Asagi_: saken spinner d2
2013-07-15 20:24 _Asagi_: carry on
2013-07-15 20:25 _Asagi_: pansin ko walang error sa mga kiai time ,hahaha~~~!!
2013-07-15 20:25 _Asagi_: 02:22:530 (10) -
2013-07-15 20:25 _Asagi_: ^panipisin mo
2013-07-15 20:25 _Asagi_: kahit 1/6 lng
2013-07-15 20:26 Mira-san: ok
2013-07-15 20:26 Mira-san: next
2013-07-15 20:26 _Asagi_: 02:38:838 (7) -
2013-07-15 20:26 _Asagi_: ^slider?? or wag na?
2013-07-15 20:26 Mira-san: wag na
2013-07-15 20:27 _Asagi_: palitan mo n nga lng to XD
2013-07-15 20:27 _Asagi_: 03:15:453 (5) -
2013-07-15 20:27 _Asagi_: gawin mo n lng ashe reference haha
2013-07-15 20:27 Mira-san: ok na siyaaaa pero ok
2013-07-15 20:27 _Asagi_: ^wat?? XD
2013-07-15 20:27 Mira-san: para wag parepareho
2013-07-15 20:27 Mira-san: haha
2013-07-15 20:27 Mira-san: ok na yan ^^
2013-07-15 20:27 _Asagi_: 03:20:530 (6) -
2013-07-15 20:28 _Asagi_: NC
2013-07-15 20:28 _Asagi_: 03:20:992 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:28 Mira-san: remove nc
2013-07-15 20:28 Mira-san: san lipat haha
2013-07-15 20:28 _Asagi_: 03:20:530 (6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - gawin mo pla mag kakatulad to ng kulay
2013-07-15 20:28 Mira-san: ah ok lol
2013-07-15 20:28 _Asagi_: 03:25:300 (1) -
2013-07-15 20:28 _Asagi_: GG spinner XD
2013-07-15 20:29 Mira-san: ashe reference
2013-07-15 20:29 _Asagi_: geh
2013-07-15 20:29 _Asagi_: bahala k pla haha
2013-07-15 20:29 _Asagi_: baka may maicp ka na iba XD

gg rank pls.

si7zi wrote:

topecnz's Normal
For a Normal Map it's a really hard Diff: 4.53 Stars~im gonna nerf it to be a normal


00:14:530 (3) - Overmapping in a normal Diff - hard to understand for Beginners
shortening the slider before and move the circle to the correct position 00:14:530 (2) - ~fixed


00:25:915 (3) - This note is not snaped correctly ~fixed


00:29:453 (4) - Let this slider end here: 00:29:607 (4) - ~fixed


01:00:684 (4,5) - The sliders dont hit with the song. Move them to 01:00:530 (4,5) ~fixed


Same Problem here: 01:03:146 (4) - move the slider to 01:02:992 (4) - ~fixed

At least I have to say, this Normal Map is too hard for Beginners - try to change Situations like this: ~im gonna remap some parts

SPOILER

00:50:377 (2,3,4,5,6) -


00:52:838 (1,2,3,4,5) -


00:55:300 (1,2,3,4) -

- this mapset dosn't have any Easy/Normal Diff, this is a Hard or Normal+, but not a Map for Beginners. ~need to be fix

Nevertheless I wish you good luck with ranking


si7zi

neonat wrote:

It's currently unrankable as the mapset does not have a difficulty that is 3 stars or below. You are going to need an Easy difficulty. ~WIP

topecnz's Normal~all done with all the hitsounds

00:20:069 (1) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:20:992 (3) - add whistle
00:21:300 (4) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:22:223 (6) - add whistle
00:22:530 (1) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:23:453 (3) - add whistle
00:24:992 (1) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:25:915 (3) - add whistle
00:26:223 (4) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:27:146 (6) - add whistle
00:27:453 (1) - whistle on the end of the slider
00:28:377 (3) - add whistle
00:49:607 - for the inheriting section here, change it to Soft hitsounds instead, fits better
00:57:146 - place the next inheriting section here instead of 00:56:530 to change back to Normal hitsounds
00:59:453 (1) - finish on the start of the slider
you can place claps on every alternating white line as well for the kiai time,

For example

00:59:453 (1) - clap on end of slider
01:00:069 (2) - ^
01:00:684 (3) - clap on first repeat of slider at 01:00:992
01:01:607 (4) - clap
01:02:223 (2) - ^
01:02:530 (3) - clap on end of slider
01:03:146 (4) - clap on first repeat of slider
01:04:069 (5) - clap
01:04:684 (7) - clap on start of slider
01:05:300 (1) - clap
01:05:915 (3) - clap on start of slider
01:06:530 (1) - clap on start and end of slider
01:07:453 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:08:377 (4) - clap on start of slider
01:08:992 (5) - clap on start of slider only
01:09:300 (1) - finish on start of slider and clap on end of slider
01:09:916 (2) - clap on end of slider
01:10:531 (3) - clap on the repeat of slider
01:12:070 (2) - clap
01:12:377 (3) - clap on end of slider
01:12:993 (4) - clap on the repeat of slider
01:13:916 (1) - clap
01:14:531 (3) - clap on start of slider
01:15:147 (1) - clap
01:15:762 (3) - clap on start of slider
01:19:146 (5) - clap

01:53:607 (4,5,6) - distance spacing is not constant ~fixed
01:54:838 (6,7) - ^ ~fixed
01:56:069 - this is a better inheriting section point than 01:55:607 - you wouldn't have to worry about circle (7) ~fixed
01:58:530 - 02:18:530 - same as the previous kiai time, claps on alternating white lines, and add those finishes when appropriate
Actually now that I see it, alternating claps fit the msot of the song, like the start of 00:16:684 (4) and the end of 01:43:761 (1) - basically when there is snare drum beat.
02:37:300 - add a slider that ends at 02:37:915 - you can curve it around 02:36:992 (3) - ~i just make i straight and make it a tiny wave blah blah XD
claps in the next Kiai time as well. ^
02:55:453 (8,1) - doesn't look that nice with these sliders overlapping each other by a bit ~fixed
02:57:915 (5,1) - not good, especially for a Normal, you cannot really see 02:58:838 (1) - ~fixed
Make sure the spacing is constant throughout the song as well, somehow, I was using 0.8x spacing to check at the start, but I ended up with 0.9x at the end. ~well the last kiai time is x0.9 until the end
You should continue mapping from 03:11:453 onwards, end it at the same place where the other difficulties end as well, this is quite abrupt. ~done

Hard~all hitsounds done

00:06:838 (6) - end at 00:06:992 ~fixed
00:08:069 (4,5) - this rhythm does not make sense, try and make it like this, it has better flow. ~fixed

SPOILER

00:20:377 (2) - like normal, whistle on start of slider ~fixed
00:20:992 (3) - ^ you can keep the clap if you want
00:21:607 (5) - ^
00:22:223 (3) - ^
00:22:838 (3) - ^
00:25:300 (3) - ^
00:25:915 (5) - ^
00:26:530 (2) - ^
00:27:146 (2) - ^
00:27:761 (3) - ^
00:28:377 (3) - ^
00:49:607 - Soft hitsounds for this portion fits better than Normal hitsounds
00:59:453 (1) - finish
01:02:838 (4) - clap
01:03:300 (2) - clap on the end of slider
01:07:146 (1) - clap on start of slider
01:07:761 (3) - ^
01:09:300 (6) - finish on the start of slider
from 01:11:761 (1) to 01:14:684 (3) - where are the claps that are found in the other parts of the kiai time and song?
01:15:453 (4)01:19:146 (3) - same as ^ till

Hitsounds

01:15:761 (6) - clap
01:16:223 (1) - clap on the repeat of slider
01:16:684 (2) - whistle on the start of slider and whistle at the end of slider
01:17:146 (3) - ^
01:17:915 (3) - clap on start of slider
01:18:223 (4) - clap on end of slider

01:31:607 (1) to 01:32:838 (3) - the claps?
01:33:607 (1) - clap
01:44:223 (2) to 01:45:761 (1) - the alternating claps again?
01:58:530 (1) - finish
01:59:607 (3) - remove the clap on this slider, put the clap on the end of 01:59:300 (2)
02:05:915 (4) to 02:07:915 (2) - the alternating claps?
02:10:838 (1) to 02:13:761 (3) - ^
02:14:838 (6) to 02:17:300 (4) - ^ (this one same as from 01:16:684 (2) to 01:18:223 (4) - )
02:22:530 (5) - whistle on the whole slider, including the body
02:32:378 (5) - ^
02:48:992 (6) - finish
02:50:530 (5) - clap on start of slider
02:51:146 (1) - clap
02:51:453 (4) - clap on end of slider
02:52:992 (6) - clap on start of slider
02:56:685 (5) - ^
02:57:300 (1) - ^
02:57:916 (2) - claps on this slider at 02:57:915 and 02:58:069 for effect
02:58:377 (3) - claps on this sldier at 02:58:607 - 02:58:684 and 02:58:761
02:58:839 (4) - finish on start, keep the clap as well
03:00:531 (6) - clap on the end of slider
03:01:300 (1) - ^
03:02:223 (1) - clap on start of slider
03:02:839 (3) - ^
03:03:300 (1) - clap on repeat of slider
03:03:762 (2) - clap on end of slider
03:05:300 (6) - clap
03:05:762 (1) - clap on repeat of slider
03:06:223 (2) - whistle on the start and clap on the end of slider
03:06:685 (3) - ^
03:07:146 (1,2) - clap
03:07:453 (1) - whistle on the start and clap on the end of slider
03:07:915 (2) - ^
03:08:377 (3) - clap on start and repeat of slider and swhistle on end of slider
03:08:992 (2) - clap
03:09:146 (3) - whistle on the start and clap on the end of slider
03:09:607 (4) - ^
03:11:146 (2) - finish
03:15:454 (5) - whistle on the whole slider
03:25:301 (5) - ^

Insane

00:02:838 (1) - end spinner at 00:04:992 ~fixed
00:06:838 (4) - end at 00:06:992 ~fixed
00:49:607 - use Soft hitsounds for this inheriting section ~done
02:22:531 (5) - whistle ~added
02:32:378 (5) - ^ ~added

Most of the hitsounds can be inferred to the rest also. That's it for now.~"for now XD"

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

[Easy]
00:14:223 (5,1) - Spacing here is Wrong! Totally unintuitive to newbies, they will click on the object too early and break combo To fix this, maybe you have to make Ctrl+H on 00:15:453 (1,2,3) and then adjust 00:19:146 (4,5,6) notes like this → http://puu.sh/3Io0z.jpg
01:02:223 (1,2,3) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/3Io8x.jpg
01:12:069 (1) - Move 1 grid down to perfect the pattern (:
03:20:530 (7) is a bit tricky to newbies if occurs right before another object, because they will have to decide either (a) keep the cursor longer here at risk of lose time to catch the next slider, or (b) go early to next object at cost of losing combos. However, can be fine if made as the last object before a break, like 02:37:453 (7) because player can (theorically) leave the button hit even the object disappeared.

[topecnz's Normal]
00:13:607 (2) - Place it at x:328 y:352 to avoid overlap.
01:08:992 (5) and 02:08:069 (5) maybe the reason why this diff feels more like a Normal+

[Mira]
♥ 00:24:377 (6) - Amazing ♥ (valid for all sliders alike)

[Other Diffs]
* No complaints on [AI], [Insane] and [Unexpected]

Alarido wrote:

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND V

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

[Easy]
00:14:223 (5,1) - Spacing here is Wrong! Totally unintuitive to newbies, they will click on the object too early and break combo To fix this, maybe you have to make Ctrl+H on 00:15:453 (1,2,3) and then adjust 00:19:146 (4,5,6) notes like this → http://puu.sh/3Io0z.jpg ~nice idea fixed
01:02:223 (1,2,3) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/3Io8x.jpg ~yep, fixed
01:12:069 (1) - Move 1 grid down to perfect the pattern (: ~fixed
03:20:530 (7) is a bit tricky to newbies if occurs right before another object, because they will have to decide either (a) keep the cursor longer here at risk of lose time to catch the next slider, or (b) go early to next object at cost of losing combos. However, can be fine if made as the last object before a break, like 02:37:453 (7) because player can (theorically) leave the button hit even the object disappeared.~well i think youre right, so i make 03:20:530 (7) a slider with a tiny wave pattern

[topecnz's Normal]
00:13:607 (2) - Place it at x:328 y:352 to avoid overlap. ~fixed
01:08:992 (5) and 02:08:069 (5) maybe the reason why this diff feels more like a Normal+ ~hmmm.. well i dont know.. i think its fine?? XD

[Mira]
♥ 00:24:377 (6) - Amazing ♥ (valid for all sliders alike) ♥

[Other Diffs]
* No complaints on [AI], [Insane] and [Unexpected]

Thaaaat's it ^^
Thanks for modding
Good luck for Ranking and...

This mapset (I felt) is tailor-made for various styles of Pro -- [Unexpected] is stream-less but wisely harder than common Insanes with streams we found around osu! mapsets. ~i think so too XD

Att.

YunoFanatic wrote:

Ayaw kona magshoot nalang ako ng star dem hirap nito imod xD almost perfect pero my minor probs pero wont mention na hirap kac mag mod pag deltamax style xD

topecnz wrote:

xD

Need More Mod queue's

_Asagi_ wrote:

nakapila pa siguro hahaha

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
- The bitrate of the MP3 need to be less than 192kbs or more than 128kbs. Here's one: http://puu.sh/3KItE.mp3 ~replaced
- There's conflicts with unicode artist and title. ~fixed
- 03:10:069 - Add point here and reduce the volume like at 30% ~i think 30% is too low.. so i adjust it to 40%

[Easy]~all fixed
00:44:684 (6) - NC and remove NC 00:46:223 (1)
01:09:300 (3) - NC
01:13:300 (3) - Stack with the end of the slider 01:12:069 (1) and 01:12:992 (2) - move it next to the start of the slider 01:13:300 (3)
01:43:761 (6) - NC and remove NC 01:45:300 (1)
02:32:069 (1) - Remove NC and NC 02:32:992 (2)
02:58:839 (3) - NC
03:29:915 (6,7,1) - It isn't hard for an easy? Make a repeat slider

[Normal]
CS +1? ~hmmm.. i think the CS is okay
02:28:069 (2) - Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H ~no problem here o.o
01:08:992 (5) - It may be hard for normal. Change to something like this. ~fixed
02:08:069 (5) - ^ ~fixed

[Mira]
01:57:607 - Add point here slow the slider velocity at 0.50x and replace the spinner to a slider? ~nice idea.. fixed

Good Luck!

THANKS

A l y s s wrote:

Really good map! C:
A lot of extra beats though, but other wise very nice^^