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Kan-ya wrote:

Thank you very much for modding, emmy! ^_^ I fixed almost all what you said, but...

emmy wrote:

03:25:528 (2) - ctrl+g this middle slider
I think sliders look very cool like they were located :roll:

emmy wrote:

i feel 03:32:014 - and on is missing a lot of claps
It is just does not have those notes, which might sound as claps. By the way, wherever they are, they sound just as part of the song ^^

Sorry for Engrish :)
that's fine! it wasn't too big of a suggestion
good luck on your map~
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Kan-ya wrote:

Спасибо! Можно ли узнать где точно? Я не настолько меток в расстановке оффсета)
00:42:068 - здесь просто убери наследование бпм у тайминг секции
02:25:203 - сюда добавь секцию с таким же бпм (жмёшь на этом месте плюсик и сразу убираешь наследование)
02:55:689 - убери наследование и поставь ритм 3/4 (time signature)
03:11:256 - тоже убери наследование, но поставь уже 4/4

могу в чём-то ошибаться, не спец. но так правильнее
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Kert, спасибо, за то время, что прошло, я уже разобрался ^^"
Только вопрос всё же есть, что меняется при смене ритма с 4\4 на 3\4?
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послушай метроном, он теперь правильнее указывает на главные биты (музыкальными терминами не владею, возможно это по-другому называть надо)
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Hi from my queue!
Accidentally deleted my draft :(

[General]
Storyboard and skin look awesome :o
00:51:149 - Use whistle instead of claps from here until the next bookmark
01:14:501 - ^
02:56:663 - ^

[Easy+]
00:20:663 (1) - Divide the slider like: http://puu.sh/432ez
00:25:041 (3) - Shorten by 1 beat and add circle: http://puu.sh/432u5
00:31:041 (1) - Replace with just a circle and make 00:31:528 (2) start 1/2 earlier
00:35:419 (3) - Replace with: http://puu.sh/439gK.jpg
00:39:798 (2) - cut this into 2 sliders
01:06:879 (3) - remove reverse arrow and add a circle on the white tick ( 01:07:365 )
01:07:690 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about notes, try http://puu.sh/4346W , but I'm not sure of my suggestion either :?
01:12:068 (1) - shorten by 1/2 beat
01:35:582 (3) - start it earlier by 1/2 beat
02:10:609 - Add circle
02:53:095 (3) - A spinner would be better I think
03:22:284 - 03:29:419 - Consider remapping this section; follow the guitar maybe

[Normal+]
00:17:257 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't feel right, try: http://puu.sh/43833
00:19:852 (3,4) - ^Similar, but leave the last slider just as a circle
00:20:663 (1) - Remove circle, and start 00:20:825 (2) 1/2 beat earlier
00:27:068 (2) - Looking at it closely, it starts on 1/8 beat, is this intentional? Might want to change that
00:31:528 (2) - Start this slider 1/2 beat earlier
00:38:825 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry would be nice:http://puu.sh/43axh.jpg
03:58:122 (4) - NC
03:58:933 (7) - ^

Lunatic looks fine I guess :)

I might be missing some mods since my draft got delete :?
Anyway, Good luck ^^
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Thank you very much, Meatloaf! ^_^ It's a great mod!
I've done all what you suggested and it's now look much nicer ;)

MeatloafCereal wrote:

01:07:690 (1,2,3,4) - Not sure about notes, try http://puu.sh/4346W
Yeah, it's a lot better than what I've made before :3

MeatloafCereal wrote:

03:22:284 - 03:29:419 - Consider remapping this section; follow the guitar maybe
It's just my most lovely moments in the song, I've tried to not skip them >.< But anyway I've changed it as you suggested ;)

MeatloafCereal wrote:

00:27:068 (2) - Looking at it closely, it starts on 1/8 beat, is this intentional? Might want to change that
Hmm? I see it placed on 1\4 beat... Or I just misunderstood your suggestion :o

MeatloafCereal wrote:

03:58:122 (4) - NC
03:58:933 (7) - ^
Not sure what you want, but changed :D
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ну, привет что ли :D?

я тут решил посмотреть подумать. вообще, не плохо было бы сделать переработку ритма, чтоб карта не выглядяла так, будто она из 2010го года. но для первой мапы это вполне сойдет если что.

Общее
  1. Ну по правилам, размер сб элементов такого тпа не должен превышать 800х600. (сам редактор сторибоарда расчитан на 640х480)
  2. 100% громкости хитсаундов это перебор, убавь громкости немного!
  3. Touhou уже есть в источнике, в тэгах дублировать это слово не надо!
  4. Cкорость слайдеров должна отличаться на дифах. И меняется она во вкладке тайминг!

    Замечу: на тайминг пнели, множители скорости предназначены для изменения основной скорости на ОТДЕЛЬНОМ участке.


Вообще, зря ты вики игнорируешь. Смотри, какой у нас вики-раздел отличный!
RU:Rankinf Criteria
RU:Standard
RU:Insane
Ru:Easy
RU:Normal

Серьезно, это все очень важные штуки, и тебе правда стоит их почитать/перечитать! Если что-то не очень понятно, буду рад помочь!
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Хай, Бакари :D Не знаю что не так с моим ритмом, мне кажется все хорошо :3

Насчет Сторибоарда... Ну я сказал что совершил ошибку и не заметил этого когда делал сторибоард. Заметил уже когда он был сделан, теперь менять размер изображений значит создавать сторибоард с нуля, заного, что не очень хорошо :( Неужели ну никак нельзя оставить это? Размеры моя карта не превышает ни чуть...

А громкость я выставил на Лунатике, но забыл установить такую же на других сложностях ^^"

Тэги поправил. Слайдеры поправил, я просто раньше не знал как это правильно делается :D

А вики я читал, спасибо) Ничего я вроде не нарушил кроме размера сторибоарда...

Спасибо :)
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[Easy+]
00:55:528 (3) - x:372 y:208
01:07:365 (4) - I think it is hard to see for a beginner.
01:20:338 (2) - x:128 y:196
01:43:690 (4) - One grid to the left.
01:52:122 (1) - The distance of this slider is not the same as 01:50:176 (1,2) . It need to be somewhere at prev: 0.80x
02:03:960 (6) - Try to make something else so it could have a flow (kind of). Make it curvy like:

03:07:041 (1,1) - Remove these NC?
03:21:960 (3) - It makes me think that it's two notes because of 03:22:284 (1) . It's confusing for a beginner.
03:24:555 (4) - ^
03:32:663 (3) - NC?
03:49:528 (4) - Reduce it to one tick.

[Normal+]
00:17:257 (3,4,5) - I think it's hard for a normal. Replace them to a repeat slider.
00:19:852 (3,4,5,6) - ^
00:22:933 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:25:690 (5,6,7) - ^
00:31:528 (2,3,4) - ^
00:35:906 (4,5,6,7) - ^ The distance of this 1/2 stream need to have a same distance snap as the other 1/2 stream.
01:29:257 (3) - Distance problem.
01:41:257 (6,7,8,1) - Lift it more up.
01:53:095 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - It is not for a normal.
02:45:636 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1/2 streams are hard for an normal. Try to replace them with repeat slider.

In general, use the distance snap more often in easy difficulty and normal.

Good Luck!
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Oh, hi sheela901, sorry, I forgot that I make request in your queue :o
After Bakari's explanation how to make difficulties I started to change difficulties more matching to 2013y :D
But I will anyway take your mod, thanks very much :)
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Here I am from the |--> Food Queue (o´・_・)っ <--|


[Hard]

_ 00:20:338 (6,1) - Maybe add a circle between [6] and [1]?
_ 00:31:041 (1,2) - ^ [1] and [2]
_ 00:36:555 (1,2,3,4) - It's better if you move them more or less there:

_ 00:37:852 (5,6,7,8) - And then move them according to 00:36:555 (1,2,3,4)
_ 00:52:771 (9,10) - Space them more, it's hard to read such spacing.
_ 00:57:636 (1,2) - Add a circle between [1] and [2]
_ 01:07:690 (1,2) - ^
_ 01:23:419 (6) - Maybe move it to> x:464 y:80 ?
_ 01:39:311 (2) - Isn't better if you place [2]'s head in the previous white (1/1) and not in the red (1/2) ?
_ 01:49:528 (2,3) - Why did you change the spacing?

_ 02:45:311 (6) - Why is it in the blue (1/5) ? Move it to the white (1/1) .

_ 03:36:879 (1,2) - Add a circle between [1] and [2]
_ 03:39:311 (8,9) - Why did you change the spacing?
_ 03:50:825 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - Maybe add some sliders?


[Lunatic]

_ 00:17:906 (9,10,11,12) - This is better:

_ 00:25:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - [3] is a part of the stream, so move it to the stream.
_ 00:27:960 (7,8) - Maybe is better if you swap [7] with [8] for better flow.

_ 01:04:933 (3,4,5,6) - Do like: " 00:17:906 (9,10,11,12) - This is better: "
_ 01:12:879 (5) - Move it to> x:72 y:240

_ 01:41:582 (7) - Move it near 01:41:257 (3,4,5,6).
_ 01:46:528 (10,11,12) - Move them near 01:46:284 (9)
_ 02:07:365 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 02:07:690 (5)
_ 02:27:960 (1,6,7,8,9) - ^ 02:29:582 (5)
_ 02:44:825 (10) - ^ 02:44:014 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
_ 03:41:825 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^ 03:41:582 (7)

|__________________________________________________________________|


Good Luck!~
posted
Thanks for modding, Panino! ^_^ I've changed all what you requested! :)
posted
From ax_pokl's Modding Queue
M4M Chindren's Song Remix.

[Easy]
Well done!
WidescreenStoryboard: 0
01:12:555 (5) - (del clap?)

[Normal]
(AR+1?)
00:22:447 (4) - End the slider 00:23:257?
00:52:771 (4) - (Put it more far?)
03:31:528 (1) - Do not put this slider start with red line.

[Hard]
(AR+1?)
(HP-1?)
(OD-1?)
Too many circles, use some sliders instead.
00:36:392 (8,1) - (Too far.)

[Lunatic]
(No Problem)

Good map, good luck.
posted
Thanks, ax_pokl! ^^ Wait a little for my mod)
posted
From the modding queue:

[General]
evil BG of the SB scared me hahaaa.... :(
Personally think : the SB effect is kinda over-used, too much of it; anyway, I am not good in SB, could just choose to ignore my suggestion
No problem here~

[Easy]
00:20:014 (1) - Don't make it so curve
00:20:987 (2) - Follow by ^
00:38:825 (1) - Remove this
00:39:149 (3) - Add a slider here, ends 00:39:474
02:08:987 (3) - Make it like PIC1

02:33:960 (2) - Move to 02:34:122
02:45:636 (1) - Stack with 02:43:690 (2)
02:51:798 (2,3) - Adjust the slider shape like to something like PIC2

03:24:230 (4) - NC
03:26:825 (6) - ^
03:29:419 (8) - ^
~Solid one, great

[Normal]
00:38:338 (4) - Extend it to 00:38:825
00:38:825 (1) - Remove
00:39:149 (5) - Add a circle here
00:39:474 (6) - ^
01:53:095 (2) - This shape look kinda strange... but its okay too keep, no problem
02:44:014 (2) - Adjust the slider, don't let it hit 02:42:717 (1)
01:04:284 (3) - Change into slider, ends on 01:04:771
01:04:609 (4) - Remove
03:06:717 (4,1) - The space between here is empty?
03:54:717 (5,1) - ^
03:21:149 (2) - Remove this
03:21:311 (2) - Add a slider , ends on 03:21:636
03:28:771 (5) - NC
03:30:717 (1) - Remove NC
03:36:068 (2) - Make it curve, don't let it touch 03:34:609 (1) that much

[Hard]
00:30:392 (4) - Add a note
00:31:528 (3,4,5) - Adjust the position of it, make it curve perfectly
00:51:960 (5) - NC
00:52:771 (9,1) - The empty ?
00:55:528 (5,1) - ^
00:58:122 (4,1) - ^
01:29:257 (3,1) - ^
01:26:663 (3,1) - ^
01:39:149 (2) - Add a note
01:50:176 (6) - Remove this
01:50:338 (7) - Start on 01:50:176
01:50:825 (8) - Remove
02:53:419 (1,2,3) - Just repeat twice
02:55:852 (1) - Start the slider here 02:55:690
02:56:338 (2) - Add a note
03:21:149 (5) - NC
03:23:582 (5) - ^
03:32:663 (3) - Extend slider to 03:32:987
03:33:474 (6) - NC
03:37:690 (5,6) - angel like this isn't a great flow
03:38:663 (7) - NC
03:54:717 (6,1) - Add a spinner between the empty space?
~Its okay to add small stream in a hard diff, or maybe you could just use rapid-repeat slider

[Lunatic]
OD6/7
00:17:257 (6) - NC
00:30:879 (7,8,1,2) - Fix the spacing of the stream
00:32:663 (8) - NC
00:53:906 (3) - Slider start on 00:53:744
00:53:744 (3) - Add a slider here, ends 00:54:230
00:54:230 (5) - Remove
00:56:501 (3,4) - Slider start on 00:56:339
00:56:987 (5) - Add a note
01:12:068 (1) - Avoid using x2repeat slider here
01:15:798 (11) - NC
01:19:690 (1) - Remove NC
01:19:852 (2) - NC
01:49:528 (2) - Add a note
02:48:555 (9) - NC
02:52:365 (8) - Add a note
03:10:284 (4,1) - Try to add note or slider between this space
03:29:906 (8,1) - ^
03:14:014 (4,1) - ^
03:16:771 (5) - NC
03:17:419 (13) - NC
03:19:447 (6) - NC
03:22:284 (1) - Avoid so many repeat
03:25:528 (2) - C&P 03:24:879 (1)
03:34:447 (13) - Add a note
03:33:636 (7) - NC
03:46:447 (9,10) - Avoid slider pattern like this
03:51:555 (10) - NC
03:54:879 (1) - Spinner to 03:56:987
03:58:122 (4) - NC

Not bad as your first map >.o/
Your flow of note and slider have space of improvement, good luck for it~
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Thanks AI! ^_^ Really a great mod!
posted

Kan-ya wrote:

Thanks AI! ^_^ Really a great mod!
ur welcome \:D/
posted
good job

hmm……my english ……bad,ignore me when my expression is not clear

[general]

Change the color……use lovely color like pink&mauve pale in steady time and skip red&Silver gray,just use red&Silver gray when storyboard be in progress

add more timing ,to change sound volume or slider velocity。

good skin

many slider ……not beautiful……dull……please bend your some sliders,and your some sliders too curved like your hard's 02:13:852 (9,10) - ,typesetting should in accordance with music。

good rhythm

good luck
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Komeiji Hatsu wrote:

Change the color……use lovely color like pink&mauve pale in steady time and skip red&Silver gray,just use red&Silver gray when storyboard be in progress
Great! I was looking for what is missing in my map, but now I found this because of you! Thanks~ ^_^

add more timing, to change sound volume or slider velocity。
For what or... where? ._. I though all is good here...

many slider ……not beautiful……dull……please bend your some sliders,and your some sliders too curved like your hard's 02:13:852 (9,10) - ,typesetting should in accordance with music。
You can be not so lazy and explain which sliders should I change and how ( ^.~)/
I will change some sliders, but without details it will be not so much...

Anyway thanks for mod and star! ^_^
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all suggestions ,you can ignore me

Just for lunatic……

your storyboard very ……contrast……i think it more than music itself,but no problem。i think you need add timing to reduce the speed of slider when steady part and make raise jump in kiai…… to reflect contrast……This tune is not immutable…… How about you?

if you agree with me……

00:16:122 (2,5,2) - 00:19:690 (7,2,2,8,2,3) - raise distance away from slider……and others same it

00:51:149 - 01:02:825 - SV*0.8 in between……and others same it

destination is to reflect contrast,Of course ……you can make SV*1.25 in kiai,Reduce the distance in steady part ,but,if you make SV*1.25,it's too difficult……
your lunatic&hard typesetting batter than easy&normal,i think you not carefully for easy&normal,like your normal’s 00:30:230 (4,1,2) - …… add a red point in 00:31:203 - to bend 00:31:041 (1) - why not?

00:15:798 (1,3,4,1,1) - there slider no problem,but 00:17:095 (5) - ……it no flow for 00:16:609 (4) - 。if you hope player can be comfortable,move 00:17:095 (5) - to (384.164)or (372.242)and fix 00:17:257 (1) -…… Pay attention to other similar places

00:25:528 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:28:284 (9,10,11,12) - 00:31:041 (1,2,3) - Distance is not the same……you may wanna there equal……Pay attention to other similar places

01:01:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - good and accurate……but your 01:02:825 (1,2,3,4,5) - imprecise

01:12:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make your 01:12:636 (3,4,5,6,7) - in a straight line and set the corner at 01:12:798 (5) - like your 01:53:419 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) -

01:59:906 (4) - 01:54:717 (1,2) - there could be better like your 01:33:311 (1) - , 01:22:771 (3) - ,02:28:122 (2) - and 02:08:663 (1) - Pay attention to other similar places,Long slider not suitable for only three white point

03:33:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - Become a Five-pointed star!why not?

typesetting is difficult,i’m new mapper, so i can‘t give you more concrete suggestions,you could ask for mod with ……professional ax_pokl is good mapper but he to give you more help no,you need good person ,not only good mapper
00:17:987 (5) - it's overmap……i dislike it ,just personal preference,therefore……i can't provide suggestion in rhythm,If you want to modify rhythm。please ask for the best mapper,such as zero_wind,because ……common mapper point out some mistakes only,best mapper guide you better


All bat ……all bat……don't you say……don't you see……they are ……lazy……lazy very much very more!

Hence……if you wanna rank your map……придержив……earn kudosu……after that……♂ ♥
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