1. Easy (0.84 stars, 89 notes)
2. Normal (2.93 stars, 155 notes)

• [General]

1. hitclap feels reeeeally out of place with the music. Soft Whistle hitsounds feels better compared to the current hitclap. If you like too, change every clap to whistle, include hitsounds mod from my mod. If you do this, delete the hitclap because it's custom.
2. There's a useless file at the mapset's folder. Imagen2. Delete it. Or maybe you want to use it for intro SB? Because, if I'm not wrong, the text's "Anata ga itai" which is the same as the song's title.
3. Add "0verflow" to tag?
   
   [Easy]
   
4. The distance between each hitobjects are really short imo. This is confusing because the slider's speed is faster than the DS. Consider replacement every hitobjects with DS 0.8x or 1.0x. Or if you want to keep it, at least make the DS same. The DS at intro are far more short compared to other part of the map. Which is confusing.
5. 00:01:335 - 00:14:192 - lower the volume on this part. The clap is too loud if you keep the current one.
6. 00:08:192 (2,3,4,5) - The flow is quite weird. Good flow is important on beginner difficulties. So, beginners are easily able to guess where notes will show up. I prefer a circular flow here. It looks much better imo.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:10:763 (4) - There's should be a clap here
8. 00:12:049 (1) - imo. It'll be better if you move this to 00:11:620 and delete (5). Also make sure that the end is at 00:14:192, because intro finished right there.
9. 00:15:049 (1) - Add a finish at the head
10. 00:21:477 - Add a spinner here? It feels really empty there.
11. 00:29:620 (4) - This object placement is too high. It'll almost blocked by the accuracy indicator. Move it down
12. 00:29:620 (4,1) - Nazi. move (1) a bit to down? So it'll have a better flow with (4)
13. 00:24:477 - 00:38:192 - Same suggestion with 00:01:335 - 00:14:192
14. 00:49:335 (4) - Try to make this encircle (3). It'll look better :3
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    Also, make sure to move (5) as well for good DS, for example, Move it to 352,72
15. 00:53:620 (1) - Enable finish at the tail.
16. 01:11:620 (4) - The body of this slider is blcked by health bar. Consider to move it down
17. 01:21:049 (1) - Enable finish at the tail
18. 01:21:049 - Move this inherited point to 01:21:906. Refrain starts there
19. 01:22:763 (2,3) - Why there's no clap here?
20. 01:34:763 (1) - Finish at the end of the slider, also, enable clap at the start.
21. 01:43:335 (3) - The clap should be at the head, not the tail. If you do this, also add a clap at the head of 01:45:049 (4)
22. 01:47:620 (2) - Oh look. you can make this encircle (3).
    
    SPOILER

    
    
    Note : the blank one is (2)
23. 01:49:335 (3) - looking at how you add finish at 01:42:477 (2) and 01:45:049 (4). How about you add a finish at here, too?
24. 02:00:477 (7) - delete. This object doesn't follow anything from the music. If you do this, maybe you would like to change (6) as well. Make (6) a spinner that ends at 01:59:620 (1)
25. 02:06:477 - What is this point doing here?

Pagno wrote:

Hello o/

~ Mod here ~

[General]
I love the hitsounds!
Missing Kiai time in both difficulties- Fixed

[Normal]
I think that at the beginning, you should distance more the notes with different timing, maybe try using Distance Snap!
00:03:049 (3) - More distance
00:04:763 (5) - Distance + New combo
00:06:477 (1) - Distance and remove New combo
00:08:192 (3) - Distance + New combo
00:09:906 (4,5) - Distance or CTRL+H them- Fixed all

00:53:192 (1) - Shouldn't this begin the white beat after?- Done

00:59:192 (4) - Maybe make this slider shorter by 1 white beat, and fill the empty part with a hitcircle, like this:


01:19:335 (2,3,4) - These 3 notes should be further to the slider's end, maybe consider making them like this:



01:21:049 (1) - Make this slider shorter by 1 white beat, and fill the empty part with a hitcircle just like before, then:
01:21:906 (2) - start the Kiai time here, on the hitcircle you just placed

01:52:335 (1) - Make the Kiai time finish here- Done both

[Easy]
00:29:620 (4) - Maybe consider converting this into a slider which lasts 2 white ticks

01:21:049 (1) - Start the Kiai time here...
01:52:763 (1) - ...and make it finish here- Done

What about making a Hard difficulty? It would be nice...!

silverboxer wrote:

[General]
I would recommend using grid level 4 so your placement can be more accurate.

[Easy]
00:06:477 (1) - too far from previous note- Fixed
00:35:620 (4) - slightly covered by the drain bar. Not a big problem.- Replaced
00:39:049 (1) - too far from previous note
00:40:763 (2) - ^
00:44:192 (5) - if you use grid level 4 you can fix this slider shape. It looks very out of place compared to the rest of the song.
00:51:049 (5) - move to fix the distance before and after this note- Fixed
01:00:477 (6) - this is in a really bad spot, because it gets covered by everything on the right side. You should move it here:
01:06:477 (5) - this is also in a bad spot because it gets covered by the leaderboards.- Done both
01:21:049 (1) - not distance snapped
01:40:763 (1) - ^
01:42:477 (2,3) - try to avoid going outside of the grid. These notes are also covered.- Replaced

[Normal]
All of the distances between the notes seem to be off by a very little amount. I think this is because you are mapping on grid level 3, so I won't say anything else about this until you fix that.- Used DS

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Hi, from my queue.
here is my my noob mod D:


[Easy]

00:08:192 (2) - you can make this ? :

SPOILER

00:12:049 (1) - Give time to beginners after the spinner, you might shorten it to 00:14:192 - Done
00:20:192 (5) - you can make this ?
00:26:192 (2) - you can make something like this, better movement. :

SPOILER

00:41:620 (3) - 1 grid left (for a consistent spacing) - Fixed
00:49:335 (4) - better blanket for (3), you see the approach circle of 3 :

SPOILER

You also have to move 5.
00:53:620 (1) - Add finish (end of the slider)
01:15:049 (2) - ^ (at the beginning)
01:18:477 (5) - ^ (at the beginning)
01:21:049 (1) - clap at the beginning, finish at the end - Finish added
01:22:763 (2) - clap at the beginning
01:24:477 (3) - ^ at the beginning
01:34:763 (1) - Finish at the end
01:49:335 (3) - add finish.
01:51:049 (5) - ^ (at the beginning) - Done all

[Normal]
If the mapset has 2 diffs, i suggest you to use circle size 4
AR +1

00:09:906 (2,3) - why don't to make something like this ?

SPOILER

00:21:692 - 00:24:049 Insert break here.
00:25:763 (3) - a bit lower, it is overlapped on the scorebar - Moved
00:36:906 (4) - 1 grid left
00:55:763 (5,1) - Overlap, you might move 5 or 1 somewhere else. - Moved
01:07:763 (1) - Finish at the end of the slider. - Done
01:11:620 (1) - remove 1 reverse and add a note here : 01:12:906
01:15:049 (4) - Add finsh at the beginning of the slider.
01:17:620 (1) - ^ at the end
01:21:906 (2) - ^
01:22:335 (3) - clap at the end
01:35:620 (2) - Add finish - Finish already added
01:44:192 (2) - ^
01:45:049 (4) - Add clap
01:45:477 (5) - remove clap at the end and add finish instead.
01:47:620 (4) - Finish at the beginning
01:48:906 (5) - ^ at the end - Done all


Well that's all , well mapped but i think you can map a Hard. Hitsounding was my suggestion.
Good Luck ~

General

Easy

1. 00:03:906 (3) - Could have used the shape of the same slider at 00:01:335 (1) - for a better gameplay (ctrl+c/ctrl+v).
   
   Example

   
2. 00:08:192 (2) - Consider adding a clap at the end of it and one at 00:10:763 (4) - for consistency of hitsounds.
3. 00:11:620 (5) - I'd place the spin where this circle is, it fits better in my opinion.
4. 00:16:763 (2,3,4) - Try to make variations of their placement on the grid, so it won't look something repetitive and boring to play. Doing this will also make the flow better.
   
   Example

   
5. 00:27:906 (3,4) - Could have made a blanket here.
   
   Example

   
6. 00:35:620 (4) - Make the middle node (the red one) a bit lower so it fits completely on the grid.
7. 00:37:335 (5,6,1) - Another place you could improve their placement by making variations, you could basically just move (6) and (1) a bit more to the left.
8. 00:45:906 (1) - Hmm, better move this down a bit since it's off the grid don't you think?
9. 00:48:477 (3,4) - Blanket could have been improved. You can do this by just moving the slider a bit to the left, so the circle can fit better on that spot.
   
   Example

   
10. 00:56:192 (3,4) - I really recommend lowering the slider (4) so you can do a nice blanket between them. Plus the flow would be great.
    
    Example

    
11. 01:09:906 (3,4) - Pretty much the same as above, thought here you actually need to make changes on the shape of the slider, so take a look at the image below and see if you agree.
    
    Example

    
12. 01:18:477 (5,6) - I'd replace them for a spin, in my opinion it fits better because of the long vocals at this section. What do you think?

Normal

1. 00:03:049 (3,4) - Would be better if you rotate them (ctrl+>), I'm not comfortable with their placement since the circle is a kinda off in the grid.
2. 00:11:192 (1) - Spinner should begin at 00:11:620 - to 00:13:763 - .
3. 00:25:763 (3) - Ctrl+h works much better for the gameplay (flow). You could also make a blanket with them, but it's not necessary, since they are already on the limit of the grid for making changes. The same applies for 00:39:906 (3) - .
   
   Example

   
4. 01:02:620 (4) - Better rotate the slider to improve flow. Something like the screenshot below would be awesome.
   
   Example

   
5. 01:31:763 (6) - Could have stick with only one arrow, it feels pretty much something unnecessary. Better come up with a pattern like this. The same thing applies for 01:39:906 (2) -.
6. 01:52:335 (1) - Better not make a long slider like this when the kiai ends. Consider reducing the slider until 01:52:763 - and add a circle at 01:53:192 - .
7. 01:55:335 (4,5) - Suggesting another pattern (http://puu.sh/3Akbv.jpg) because it doesn't really fits with the song in my opinion. Give it a try and see if you agree, I'm pretty sure that long slider should be moved to 01:55:335 - because of the vocals, something like you did with 02:00:049 (4) - .
8. 02:02:620 (7) - Slider should be rotated, improving flow and making the coming spinner a lot better to play.
   
   Example

   

1. Distance between every notes in easy and normal diff must be the same

1. SV0.9 Distance spacing 0.6 map it with distance snap

1. 00:01:335 (1) - do it like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863747

1. 00:56:192 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863758

1. 00:59:620 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863763

1. 01:09:906 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863765

1. 01:50:192 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863768

1. 00:03:049 (3,1) - Too Bend, looks not very good,and make 1 surround 2

1. 00:24:906 (2,3) - do like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863780,ctrl+G,H,J

1. 00:39:906 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863784

1. 00:46:763 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863789

1. 00:50:192 (1) - deal with it more carefully

1. 00:54:906 (4,5) - make 4 surround 5

1. 01:00:906 (1) - 1 surround 6 better

1. 01:08:620 (2) - too bend~2 surround 1's end more suitable

1. 01:17:620 (1) - end at 01:18:049 - and add spinner from 01:18:477 - to 01:20:192 - remove 234

1. 01:38:620 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/863800

cubelrti wrote:

Hi~
I'm looking for M4M.

Something to tell you

Just click Give kudos at the left of the mods , it will give some reward to the modders and it will make the star priority of your map higher.

Red:Unrankable issue
Green:You should fix it
Blue:Just suggestions

[General]
00:21:692 - maybe insert a short break...?
Enable Letterbox during breaks in the easy diff. - Done both
Enable 1500ms music lead-in to give the players some prepare time - Done
Why not Hard - Working on it

[Normal]
00:11:620 - start the spinner here
00:13:763 - end the spinner here - Done
00:19:763 (4) - move it one grid left to make it align with (3) - Moved
00:39:906 (3) - Ctrl + H?
00:51:049 (2) - How about copy the 00:50:192 (1) - and press Ctrl+H Ctrl+G to make it better?like this:

SPOILER

01:46:335 (1,2,3) - a tringle? make them neat - Moved
Nice!


[Easy]
00:11:620 (5) - Remove this circle and start spionner here - Done
00:35:620 (4) - like this?

SPOILER

I can't find any problem ;w;


Awesome song amd mapset i like it very much

Wolf wrote:

Hi there.
Mod requested from my Modding Queue
You should give kudosu to silverboxer, nanda2009 and [ Zzz ] if their mod was useful to you (which also gives star priority to your map). Other people already said this, but I'm saying it again, since it looks like you have forgot about it.
Would be nice if you add something in the description of the map, giving some information about the map, anime, changes, etc.

General

• 

The letterbox issue means in Easy you have disabled it, though in Normal it is activated. This is not recommended because of inconsistency, you should stick with something on both diffs, this means both of them should be either activated or either disabled. - Done
The kiai issue means that they end on different places on the diffs, which is not recommended. You should also stick with one spot to begin and one to start on both of the diffs as well, in your case, just fix their respective ending places. Even though they start on the same spot, I really think you should start them at 01:21:906 - , it's the best place to start, give it a check. - Done

Easy

Consider using grid level 4 (View>Grid Level>4).
Reminder: make sure to check all previous and next objects spacing when making changes.

1. 00:03:906 (3) - Could have used the shape of the same slider at 00:01:335 (1) - for a better gameplay (ctrl+c/ctrl+v).
   
   Example

   
   - Done
2. 00:08:192 (2) - Consider adding a clap at the end of it and one at 00:10:763 (4) - for consistency of hitsounds.
3. 00:11:620 (5) - I'd place the spin where this circle is, it fits better in my opinion.
4. 00:16:763 (2,3,4) - Try to make variations of their placement on the grid, so it won't look something repetitive and boring to play. Doing this will also make the flow better. - Done
   
   Example

   
5. 00:27:906 (3,4) - Could have made a blanket here.
   
   Example

   
6. 00:35:620 (4) - Make the middle node (the red one) a bit lower so it fits completely on the grid. - Done
7. 00:37:335 (5,6,1) - Another place you could improve their placement by making variations, you could basically just move (6) and (1) a bit more to the left.
8. 00:45:906 (1) - Hmm, better move this down a bit since it's off the grid don't you think? - Done
9. 00:48:477 (3,4) - Blanket could have been improved. You can do this by just moving the slider a bit to the left, so the circle can fit better on that spot.
   
   Example

   
10. 00:56:192 (3,4) - I really recommend lowering the slider (4) so you can do a nice blanket between them. Plus the flow would be great.
    
    Example

    
11. 01:09:906 (3,4) - Pretty much the same as above, thought here you actually need to make changes on the shape of the slider, so take a look at the image below and see if you agree.
    
    Example

    
12. 01:18:477 (5,6) - I'd replace them for a spin, in my opinion it fits better because of the long vocals at this section. What do you think?

Normal

Reminder: make sure to check all previous and next objects spacing when making changes. - Done

1. 00:03:049 (3,4) - Would be better if you rotate them (ctrl+>), I'm not comfortable with their placement since the circle is a kinda off in the grid.
2. 00:11:192 (1) - Spinner should begin at 00:11:620 - to 00:13:763 - - Done.
3. 00:25:763 (3) - Ctrl+h works much better for the gameplay (flow). You could also make a blanket with them, but it's not necessary, since they are already on the limit of the grid for making changes. The same applies for 00:39:906 (3) - .
   
   Example

   
4. 01:02:620 (4) - Better rotate the slider to improve flow. Something like the screenshot below would be awesome.
   
   Example

   
5. 01:31:763 (6) - Could have stick with only one arrow, it feels pretty much something unnecessary. Better come up with a pattern like this. The same thing applies for 01:39:906 (2) -.
6. 01:52:335 (1) - Better not make a long slider like this when the kiai ends. Consider reducing the slider until 01:52:763 - and add a circle at 01:53:192 - .
7. 01:55:335 (4,5) - Suggesting another pattern (http://puu.sh/3Akbv.jpg) because it doesn't really fits with the song in my opinion. Give it a try and see if you agree, I'm pretty sure that long slider should be moved to 01:55:335 - because of the vocals, something like you did with 02:00:049 (4) - .
8. 02:02:620 (7) - Slider should be rotated, improving flow and making the coming spinner a lot better to play.
   
   Example

   

I think that's it.
Good luck with this project and don't give up!

xChippy wrote:

hi
quick check on normal

Normal
01:52:335 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - for this part put whistles where you hear the piano also lower the volume
I highly recommend to put a Whistle on every downbeat where you hear the piano

00:03:906 (4) - this is touching the hp bar you should fix it.
00:04:763 (1,2) - make a blanket instead
00:14:620 (2) - This should be a finish not clap
00:20:192 (5,6) - add clap both heads
00:54:477 (3) - add finish
01:26:192 (3) - clap at head
01:29:620 (2) - add clap
01:31:763 (6) - add clap at end
01:36:477 (3) - add clap
01:39:906 (2) - add clap at head
01:41:620 (3) - ^
01:46:763 (2) - add clap
02:02:620 (7) - finish at end - Done most of them

This should have covered most of the finishes, just in case recheck I may have missed some
goodluck~