Nishino Kana - Clap Clap!! · forum

xChippy

Joined August 2011

xChippy 2013-07-14T21:04:46+00:00

Hi~ :3
Mod request from in-game PM~
Don't expect a super mod, I'm still a noob =w=

[Insane]
00:28:937 (1) - NC fits alot better and it's consistent
00:34:827 errr.. the vocal starts here you should add a note here, while playing it felt kinda awkward without it.
00:38:876 (4) - this note is touching (2), move it a little up or make a blanket with (2)
00:53:231 (6) - remove NC ---> NC should be here: 00:53:600 (3) -
01:23:047 (1) - add finish at end
01:36:851 (2) - I suggest to shorten the slider since errr... there should be a circle here: 01:37:219, to catch the vocal.
01:51:391 (5) - fix the stack if it's not intentional
01:52:127 (1,2,3) - Same NC as mentioned above for the same part
02:21:759 (6,1) - fix this blanket by move last anchor point a little
02:21:943 (7) - Remove this NC
03:26:728 (6) - Ctrl+G?
~~I'll finish the rest tommorow time to head to sleep =w= ~.~~
[Dark_Ai's Hard]
01:35:195 (1) - maybe center it o-o?
02:33:722 (5) - move the last anchor point a little to the right, for a better blanket
03:10:900 (1,2) - Blanket looks a little off to me

[Normal]
00:27:465 (1) - add note here with finish
00:31:146 (3) - add clap on end

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-07-15T08:49:37+00:00

Hi; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General

Use Nishino Kana's kanji name (西野カナ) in the Artist column and leave Kana's romanized name in Romanized Artist. I think it's obvious why.
Umm, doesn't the album have the space between the comma and "Love"? Add a space there please. (Read: Use "Thank you, Love" on tags, not "Thank you,Love" without the second space.)

>Normal

Hey, the SliderMultiplier and the sliders' code are broken. It isn't really visible and doesn't have any noticeable effect for the diff itself, but that sure doesn't look good... Just saying.
Uhm, isn't CS4 too small for a Normal diff (which is the easiest diff in this mapset)? I recommend to use CS3 here...
00:25:992 (4) - Drag the red anchor point to (260,152) so the 00:25:992 (4,5) pattern will look nicer?
00:51:023 (1,2) - Err, why are these sliders touching each other? They should be easily avoidable, right?
01:49:919 (1,2) - ^
02:22:311 (2) - Uh, NC this because this is the beginning of a new section in the music? Feels weird not to have one here.
02:28:569 - Use a clap here by copying the normal-hitclap and make it normal-slidertick2, then use N:C2 here so the tick will sound like a clap, and thus the hitsound pattern will be consistent? (I recommend you to do this to places that are similar like this, for example the second and fourth white tick of a stanza which has a slider tick there.)
02:31:882 (2,3) - Eh, why is the spacing inconsistent here?

>Dark_Ai's Hard

00:35:931 - Err, there isn't anything that resembles any heavy instrument in this spot, so remove the finish? It only makes this spot sound unnecessarily loud, IMO.
00:39:244 - 00:45:133 - There aren't any heavy sounds from the instruments here, so remove all the finishes? Those finishes felt pretty awkward and forced. Yeah, sometimes you can make a hitsound pattern by yourself without following how the vocal and instrument goes in a song, but for this, they just don't fit.
00:47:710 (1,3) - Uh, swap NC since you followed the stanza constantly before this? Why are you suddenly following the lyrics for the combo pattern
00:49:919 - Uh, remove the clap here because this spot has no sound from the music that sounds like a clap? Not trying to say that you should remove the clap from 00:51:391 and 00:52:127 because there's nothing like that on the music part, but since there's nothing at 00:48:446 and 00:49:182, wouldn't it be better if this one is not given a clap too?
01:38:139 - 01:45:501 - Same as 00:39:244 - 00:45:133.
01:46:606 (3,4) - Umm, add finishes too here, to follow the instrument? Use the Soft sampleset and lower volume to follow them more accurately.
01:49:919 (1) - Remove finish because there isn't anything it can follow in the song?
01:52:863 - ^
02:26:176 (7,1,2,3) - Hmm, looks like you want to make them symmetrical, but why not make the spacing here consistent too? The flow will be better, IMO.
02:32:618 (5) - Also remove the finish here?

>Insane

00:34:827 - Umm, add a circle here too to follow the vocal? Feels really weird if unmapped, and is confusing since it might lead people to think that 00:35:011 (1) is at 00:34:827, which is not the case at all.
00:39:244 - 00:46:606 - Same as Dark_Ai's diff; finishes are not needed and suitable here.
01:21:943 (1,5) - ^
01:32:158 - Add a note here to follow the vocal?
01:33:630 - ^
01:37:035 - I would like to see this spot mapped to follow the vocal and instrument at once; right now skipping it with a slider is just... awkward.

Well, that's it I guess

Good luck on the way

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-07-15T10:09:36+00:00

Normal
CS-1? it's easiest diff QAQ
00:31:882 (4) - ctrl+J and put in 256,300?
00:39:244 (1) - 288, 236?
00:49:182 (2) - 444,288?
00:51:023 (1,2) - i suggest to not make touched together, kinda ugly when this diff is Normal
00:59:857 (1) - make branket? http://puu.sh/3Dh1z.jpg
01:20:103 (1) - finish?
01:48:078 (2) - 68,120?
01:49:551 (4) - 272,180?
01:49:919 (1,2) - same as 00:51:023 (1,2) -
02:12:004 (2) - 187,186 please
02:23:415 (3,4,1) - why suddenly 1,5x spacing?
02:28:201 (5,1) - swap NC to follow stanza?
02:32:618 (3) - 1,5x spacing again? OAO
03:13:477 (1) - 3rd anchor 1 grid left to make symmetrical?

Hard
00:35:931 (6) - remove finish in head?
00:47:158 (6) - use normal spacing to keep consistency spacing?
00:47:710 (1,3) - swap NC for stanza?
00:49:550 (5) - try http://puu.sh/3DklO.jpg ?
00:52:495 (6,1) - swap NC?
01:04:090 (4) - 332,332? you play a lot branket here so i suggest make jump with branket too
01:08:692 (9,1) - swap NC due stanza?
01:12:004 (2,4) - it will be nice if you ctrl+G (2) and then ctrl+G in (4) too
01:46:974 (1,2) - stack them perfectly?
02:18:630 (7) - unstack? better imo
02:21:943 - add note for follow vocal?
02:32:618 (5) - remove finish? in slow vocal imo better not finish
02:43:293 - 02:43:477 - add note with clap to consistency with 02:44:765 (3,4) -

Insane
OD+1?
01:10:348 (6) - NC too make easier read?
fine imo

Good Luck ~

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-15T13:27:11+00:00

Thank you all for modding >u</
I will check it and fix soon~

G S X

88 posts

Joined August 2012

G S X 2013-07-16T03:59:47+00:00

[Normal]
00:33:722 (2) - 取消折返并在00:34:642加一个circle
00:37:771 (4) - blanket
[Hard]
01:10:532 (3,4,5) - ,02:09:428 (3,4,5) - ,03:03:906 (3,4,5) - finish?
01:13:109 (1,2,3) - ,01:16:054 (1,2,3) - ,02:12:004 (1,2,3) - ,02:14:949 (1,2,3) - try this?http://puu.sh/3DYwH.jpg
[Insane]
00:32:250 (2,3,4) - 都换成1那种3/4滑条?
00:33:354 (1,2) - 尝试在中间红线加一个circle?
00:34:642 (6,1) - 中间这里的停顿似乎有点不合适
00:45:133 (1,2,3,4) - 建议间距大一点
00:50:655 (4) - 与2重合吧（我有强迫症
00:59:857 (1) - 第一个点x264 y288 第二个点x368 y304可以包的更圆滑另外包的圆不圆可以通过那个circle的收缩圈来看的
01:10:532 (7) - 01:10:900 (1,2) - circle和滑条头finish?
01:13:109 (1,2,3,4) - 有点怪..用01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) - 的节奏就挺不错啊
01:23:047 (1) - 考虑加速这个滑条试试
01:32:066 (3,4) - 叠个三连
01:33:538 (1,1) - ^
01:36:851 (2) - 不太适合用长滑条换成3个单点?
01:39:612 (1) - ^
01:49:551 (4) - 与2重合吧（我真的有强迫症
01:51:391 (5) - 没叠好
01:58:753 (1) - 第一个点x296 y256 第二个点x236 y312
02:09:428 (2,3,4) - 滑条头finish?
02:12:004 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏同01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) -
02:14:949 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:17:894 (1,2) - 滑条尾换成S音效或者调低音量
02:21:943 (1) - 加速?
02:23:047 (4) - 为什么这个不是0.75倍速滑条呢
02:32:618 (1,2,3) - 可以试试换成3/4滑条
02:53:231 (1) - 第一个点x216 y128 第二个点x296 y68
03:03:906 (7) - 03:04:274 (1,2) - 滑条头和circle都加N音效的finish吧
03:06:483 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏同01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) -
03:11:636 (3) - 03:12:373 (1) - 这两个都没叠好
03:24:152 (1,2) - 滑条尾换成S音效或者调低音量

图挺流畅的赞一个！
另外有空的话求帮忙mod一下我的图

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/92933

Last edited by G S X 2013-07-16T04:59:18+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-07-16T04:39:14+00:00

~~Gonna take a look when I'm at home ^^~~

@ ts8zs
no change and about the break I will wait what yanlu will say about it ^^

xChippy

xChippy wrote:
[Dark_Ai's Hard]
01:35:195 (1) - maybe center it o-o? okay
02:33:722 (5) - move the last anchor point a little to the right, for a better blanket okay
03:10:900 (1,2) - Blanket looks a little off to me I dont think so

Hinsvar

Hinsvar wrote:
>Dark_Ai's Hard
00:35:931 - Err, there isn't anything that resembles any heavy instrument in this spot, so remove the finish? It only makes this spot sound unnecessarily loud, IMO. I dont think so since you can hear a finish sound in the music too
00:39:244 - 00:45:133 - There aren't any heavy sounds from the instruments here, so remove all the finishes? Those finishes felt pretty awkward and forced. Yeah, sometimes you can make a hitsound pattern by yourself without following how the vocal and instrument goes in a song, but for this, they just don't fit. deleted
00:47:710 (1,3) - Uh, swap NC since you followed the stanza constantly before this? Why are you suddenly following the lyrics for the combo pattern didnt sawp this just added a NC on 3 I think it follow better for me
00:49:919 - Uh, remove the clap here because this spot has no sound from the music that sounds like a clap? Not trying to say that you should remove the clap from 00:51:391 and 00:52:127 because there's nothing like that on the music part, but since there's nothing at 00:48:446 and 00:49:182, wouldn't it be better if this one is not given a clap too? okay
01:38:139 - 01:45:501 - Same as 00:39:244 - 00:45:133. same as above then
01:46:606 (3,4) - Umm, add finishes too here, to follow the instrument? Use the Soft sampleset and lower volume to follow them more accurately. okay
01:49:919 (1) - Remove finish because there isn't anything it can follow in the song? okay
01:52:863 - ^ okay
02:26:176 (7,1,2,3) - Hmm, looks like you want to make them symmetrical, but why not make the spacing here consistent too? The flow will be better, IMO. eeehm nope I didnt want make it symmetrical
02:32:618 (5) - Also remove the finish here? okay

Xinely

Xinely wrote:
Hard
00:35:931 (6) - remove finish in head? same as the mod before...
00:47:158 (6) - use normal spacing to keep consistency spacing? I dont like it :c
00:47:710 (1,3) - swap NC for stanza?
00:49:550 (5) - try http://puu.sh/3DklO.jpg ?
00:52:495 (6,1) - swap NC? same as the mod before...
01:04:090 (4) - 332,332? you play a lot branket here so i suggest make jump with branket too okay
01:08:692 (9,1) - swap NC due stanza? no :c
01:12:004 (2,4) - it will be nice if you ctrl+G (2) and then ctrl+G in (4) too okay
01:46:974 (1,2) - stack them perfectly? tried my best already but couldnt make it better
02:18:630 (7) - unstack? better imo okay
02:21:943 - add note for follow vocal? okay
02:32:618 (5) - remove finish? in slow vocal imo better not finish okay
02:43:293 - 02:43:477 - add note with clap to consistency with 02:44:765 (3,4) - okay

fixed version

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nishino Kana - Clap Clap!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Clap Clap!!
TitleUnicode:Clap Clap!!
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:Nishino Kana
Creator:yanlu
Version:Dark_Ai's Hard
Source:
Tags:Thank you,Love Dark_Ai
BeatmapID:274999
BeatmapSetID:102786

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:6
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232,208,181882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,208,182066,2,0,P|168:256|168:332,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,183170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,96,183906,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184274,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,184642,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,40,185011,6,0,L|388:44,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,40,185379,2,0,L|124:44,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,185746,2,0,L|320:204,1,80
200,124,186115,2,0,L|192:204,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,236,186483,6,0,P|136:292|192:320,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,187035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,319,187219,2,0,P|376:292|392:236,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,187955,6,0,L|280:88,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,156,188323,2,0,L|228:148,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,216,188691,2,0,L|280:208,1,80
148,276,189059,2,0,L|228:268,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,304,189428,6,0,P|352:296|412:316,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,260,189980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,184,190164,2,0,P|388:184|340:148,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,190900,6,0,P|160:52|140:124,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,112,191452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,184,191636,2,0,P|328:216|392:176,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,140,192188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,76,192372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,220,192740,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,296,193108,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193477,12,0,196422,0:0:0:0:
256,72,196790,6,0,L|256:152,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,312,197158,2,0,L|256:232,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
402,192,197526,2,0,P|364:200|324:192,1,80
109,191,197894,2,0,P|148:184|188:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,264,198262,6,0,P|200:316|280:296,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,232,198814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,160,198998,2,0,P|364:160|404:228,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,332,199735,6,0,P|244:320|208:328,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,344,200103,2,0,P|92:356|128:348,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,272,200471,2,0,P|172:236|172:196,1,80
140,56,200839,2,0,P|124:92|124:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,196,201207,6,0,P|248:184|276:108,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,120,201759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,201943,2,0,P|312:40|352:104,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,256,202679,6,0,P|312:244|272:184,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,233,203415,2,0,P|128:245|168:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,356,203968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,204152,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,192,204520,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,132,204888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,205256,12,4,208201,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Dark_Ai 2013-07-16T13:59:13+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

yanlu

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Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-16T13:48:23+00:00

judgment light

judgment light wrote:
[Normal]
00:33:722 (2) - 取消折返并在00:34:642加一个circle 覺得現在的還好~
00:37:771 (4) - blanket 不改..
[Hard]
01:10:532 (3,4,5) - ,02:09:428 (3,4,5) - ,03:03:906 (3,4,5) - finish?
01:13:109 (1,2,3) - ,01:16:054 (1,2,3) - ,02:12:004 (1,2,3) - ,02:14:949 (1,2,3) - try this?http://puu.sh/3DYwH.jpg
[Insane]
00:32:250 (2,3,4) - 都换成1那种3/4滑条? 不..
00:33:354 (1,2) - 尝试在中间红线加一个circle?
00:34:642 (6,1) - 中间这里的停顿似乎有点不合适嗯...在想想.-.
00:45:133 (1,2,3,4) - 建议间距大一点故意的
00:50:655 (4) - 与2重合吧（我有强迫症故意的...
00:59:857 (1) - 第一个点x264 y288 第二个点x368 y304可以包的更圆滑另外包的圆不圆可以通过那个circle的收缩圈来看的這沒關西的.-.
01:10:532 (7) - 01:10:900 (1,2) - circle和滑条头finish?
01:13:109 (1,2,3,4) - 有点怪..用01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) - 的节奏就挺不错啊是但我想做不同的節奏這樣/.\
01:23:047 (1) - 考虑加速这个滑条试试沒必要
01:32:066 (3,4) - 叠个三连不想
01:33:538 (1,1) - ^
01:36:851 (2) - 不太适合用长滑条换成3个单点? ..還好啦
01:39:612 (1) - ^
01:49:551 (4) - 与2重合吧（我真的有强迫症
01:51:391 (5) - 没叠好對我是故意的
01:58:753 (1) - 第一个点x296 y256 第二个点x236 y312
02:09:428 (2,3,4) - 滑条头finish?
02:12:004 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏同01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) -
02:14:949 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 改了這個
02:17:894 (1,2) - 滑条尾换成S音效或者调低音量 ok
02:21:943 (1) - 加速? nop
02:23:047 (4) - 为什么这个不是0.75倍速滑条呢 nc後的才是0.75x
02:32:618 (1,2,3) - 可以试试换成3/4滑条試了不太好
02:53:231 (1) - 第一个点x216 y128 第二个点x296 y68
03:03:906 (7) - 03:04:274 (1,2) - 滑条头和circle都加N音效的finish吧
03:06:483 (1,2,3,4) - 节奏同01:16:054 (1,2,3,4) -
03:11:636 (3) - 03:12:373 (1) - 这两个都没叠好好 fixed
03:24:152 (1,2) - 滑条尾换成S音效或者调低音量 ok

图挺流畅的赞一个！
另外有空的话求帮忙mod一下我的图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/92933

謝謝mod~;3

Xinely

Xinely wrote:
Normal
CS-1? it's easiest diff QAQ
00:31:882 (4) - ctrl+J and put in 256,300?
00:39:244 (1) - 288, 236?
00:49:182 (2) - 444,288? ok
00:51:023 (1,2) - i suggest to not make touched together, kinda ugly when this diff is Normal
00:59:857 (1) - make branket? http://puu.sh/3Dh1z.jpg fixed
01:20:103 (1) - finish? ok
01:48:078 (2) - 68,120?
01:49:551 (4) - 272,180?
01:49:919 (1,2) - same as 00:51:023 (1,2) -
02:12:004 (2) - 187,186 please
02:23:415 (3,4,1) - why suddenly 1,5x spacing? next is 0.75x..
02:28:201 (5,1) - swap NC to follow stanza? i follow the vocal~
02:32:618 (3) - 1,5x spacing again? OAO =3="
03:13:477 (1) - 3rd anchor 1 grid left to make symmetrical? fixed

Insane
OD+1? it's a little jumpy so od6 fine i think..
01:10:348 (6) - NC too make easier read? nop..
fine imo

Good Luck ~

thank you Xinely~

Hinsvar

Hinsvar wrote:
Hi; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>General
Use Nishino Kana's kanji name (西野カナ) in the Artist column and leave Kana's romanized name in Romanized Artist. I think it's obvious why.
Umm, doesn't the album have the space between the comma and "Love"? Add a space there please. (Read: Use "Thank you, Love" on tags, not "Thank you,Love" without the second space.) I will fix that tags with space~but Artist is fine imo =3=
>Normal
Hey, the SliderMultiplier and the sliders' code are broken. It isn't really visible and doesn't have any noticeable effect for the diff itself, but that sure doesn't look good... Just saying. ?_?
Uhm, isn't CS4 too small for a Normal diff (which is the easiest diff in this mapset)? I recommend to use CS3 here... i want cs4...keep in now ;3
00:25:992 (4) - Drag the red anchor point to (260,152) so the 00:25:992 (4,5) pattern will look nicer? fixed
00:51:023 (1,2) - Err, why are these sliders touching each other? They should be easily avoidable, right? hmm...it's fine imo..
01:49:919 (1,2) - ^
02:22:311 (2) - Uh, NC this because this is the beginning of a new section in the music? Feels weird not to have one here. okay,add nc
02:28:569 - Use a clap here by copying the normal-hitclap and make it normal-slidertick2, then use N:C2 here so the tick will sound like a clap, and thus the hitsound pattern will be consistent? (I recommend you to do this to places that are similar like this, for example the second and fourth white tick of a stanza which has a slider tick there.) hmm...not really need to imo
02:31:882 (2,3) - Eh, why is the spacing inconsistent here? haha..mark it :v
>Dark_Ai's Hard
00:35:931 - Err, there isn't anything that resembles any heavy instrument in this spot, so remove the finish? It only makes this spot sound unnecessarily loud, IMO.
00:39:244 - 00:45:133 - There aren't any heavy sounds from the instruments here, so remove all the finishes? Those finishes felt pretty awkward and forced. Yeah, sometimes you can make a hitsound pattern by yourself without following how the vocal and instrument goes in a song, but for this, they just don't fit.
00:47:710 (1,3) - Uh, swap NC since you followed the stanza constantly before this? Why are you suddenly following the lyrics for the combo pattern
00:49:919 - Uh, remove the clap here because this spot has no sound from the music that sounds like a clap? Not trying to say that you should remove the clap from 00:51:391 and 00:52:127 because there's nothing like that on the music part, but since there's nothing at 00:48:446 and 00:49:182, wouldn't it be better if this one is not given a clap too?
01:38:139 - 01:45:501 - Same as 00:39:244 - 00:45:133.
01:46:606 (3,4) - Umm, add finishes too here, to follow the instrument? Use the Soft sampleset and lower volume to follow them more accurately.
01:49:919 (1) - Remove finish because there isn't anything it can follow in the song?
01:52:863 - ^
02:26:176 (7,1,2,3) - Hmm, looks like you want to make them symmetrical, but why not make the spacing here consistent too? The flow will be better, IMO.
02:32:618 (5) - Also remove the finish here?
>Insane
00:34:827 - Umm, add a circle here too to follow the vocal? Feels really weird if unmapped, and is confusing since it might lead people to think that 00:35:011 (1) is at 00:34:827, which is not the case at all. i know..but it's fine when i test ;D
00:39:244 - 00:46:606 - Same as Dark_Ai's diff; finishes are not needed and suitable here. fix~
01:21:943 (1,5) - ^
01:32:158 - Add a note here to follow the vocal? i don't want a stream here~
01:33:630 - ^
01:37:035 - I would like to see this spot mapped to follow the vocal and instrument at once; right now skipping it with a slider is just... awkward. =3=keep
Well, that's it I guess

Good luck on the way

thank you Hinsvar!!

xChippy

xChippy wrote:
Hi~ :3
Mod request from in-game PM~
Don't expect a super mod, I'm still a noob =w=

[Insane]
00:28:937 (1) - NC fits alot better and it's consistent okay, fixed
00:34:827 errr.. the vocal starts here you should add a note here, while playing it felt kinda awkward without it. hmm...mark it
00:38:876 (4) - this note is touching (2), move it a little up or make a blanket with (2) fixed
00:53:231 (6) - remove NC ---> NC should be here: 00:53:600 (3) -
01:23:047 (1) - add finish at end ok
01:36:851 (2) - I suggest to shorten the slider since errr... there should be a circle here: 01:37:219, to catch the vocal. nop~want to keep it
01:51:391 (5) - fix the stack if it's not intentional nop~=w=
01:52:127 (1,2,3) - Same NC as mentioned above for the same part nooo
02:21:759 (6,1) - fix this blanket by move last anchor point a little it's fine~
02:21:943 (7) - Remove this NC noo><
03:26:728 (6) - Ctrl+G? nop=3="
~~I'll finish the rest tommorow time to head to sleep =w= ~.~~
[Dark_Ai's Hard]
01:35:195 (1) - maybe center it o-o?
02:33:722 (5) - move the last anchor point a little to the right, for a better blanket
03:10:900 (1,2) - Blanket looks a little off to me

[Normal]
00:27:465 (1) - add note here with finish hmm..mark it
00:31:146 (3) - add clap on end already have lol

thanks~=3=

包子

ts8zs wrote:
[Insane]
00:24:060 (3) - 前移 1/4? 為何...不對拍啊.-.
00:59:397 (3) - ^
01:58:293 (3) - ^
03:28:109 (1) - ^?
略诡异……尤其是第二个
00:37:771 (1) - Ctrl+G? 不改這比較符合flow
>00:38:508 (3) - Ctrl+G?
00:50:655 (4) - 移到256,156 我就想stack這邊.-.
01:07:587 (2,3) - 交换?
01:49:551 (4) - 移到256,228
02:53:231 (1) - 移到216,128
02:55:072 (2) - Ctrl+G?
03:19:182 (3,4) - 交换
01:23:784 - break 在这里开始沒道理...orz
02:34:458 - break 在这里开始
[Dard_ai's Hard]
03:21:943 (3) - blanket:3
01:23:784 - break start here
02:34:458 - break start here
[Normal]
01:23:784 - break start here
02:34:458 - break start here
我绝对不会去试着hid这张图……

求mod:3

雖然沒改什麼不過還是感謝mod~

update with Ai's diff~

thanks all ^^

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-07-16T17:12:32+00:00

[General]
remove Letterbox check? Because, face might be hidden.

[Normal]
I think HP and OD -1
00:51:759 (2) - would hide the slider previous. try this?

SPOILER

01:09:796 (2) - nazi sorry 1grid down better.
01:50:655 (2) - same as 00:51:759 (2) -
02:18:998 (1) - spinner immediately after more need break time.
02:32:618 (3) - mistake? check DistanceSnap
02:51:759 (1) - spinner immediately after more need break time.

[Dark_Ai's Hard]
00:50:103 (4) - remove note?
01:04:090 (4) - Move x:328 y:340 better?

[Insane]
00:29:673 (4) - umm....I think ugly slider... change it?
00:34:827 - add note?
01:32:158 - ^
01:33:630 - ^

lol!! really nice map!! good luck yeah yeah yeah yeah~~ clap clap!! star~

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-17T09:22:44+00:00

Satellite wrote:

[General]
remove Letterbox check? Because, face might be hidden. ok

[Normal]
I think HP and OD -1 ok
00:51:759 (2) - would hide the slider previous. try this? ..k fixed :/
SPOILER
01:09:796 (2) - nazi sorry 1grid down better. fixed
01:50:655 (2) - same as 00:51:759 (2) - done
02:18:998 (1) - spinner immediately after more need break time. fine~
02:32:618 (3) - mistake? check DistanceSnap done ;<
02:51:759 (1) - spinner immediately after more need break time. fine~

[Insane]
00:29:673 (4) - umm....I think ugly slider... change it? change a bit
00:34:827 - add note? ..k fixed
01:32:158 - ^ nop
01:33:630 - ^ ^

lol!! really nice map!! good luck yeah yeah yeah yeah~~ clap clap!! star~

Thank you for modding and star~<3

update~!

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-07-17T17:21:54+00:00

no change on my Diff sry ><

Kinomi

1,220 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2013-07-19T13:28:41+00:00

Hi~璐璐
m4m req

General
喵喵喵喵喵喵西野加奈clap clap~。Thank you, Love 为什么不是加在source里面。。不是专辑名字吗

Normal
00:23:415 (1) - 为何不在折返处和尾端加soft clap，其他地方也可以这么办，要大声哦。
00:48:078 这边一直到后面1.0 的地方要用1.3 DS哦
01:46:974 ^
02:23:600 ^
03:13:477 (1) - 没拉好哦

SPOILER

02:44:397 插个短break吧
03:25:256 (1) - 拉到03:27:465 后面let's clap clap的地方加两个note，用soft clap，音量可以调大一点

Dark_Ai's Hard
Hi~Hi~
00:23:415 (1,2) - use soft clap,at the end of the slider ，and 3,50% volumn is awesome
there are some same parts,use it pls :3
01:04:090 (4,5,6) - spacing
02:44:765 (3,4) - 3 is better to stack on02:43:477 (3) -
02:32:986 (7) - instead with a slider?
03:25:256 (1) - shorten to 03:27:649,then add note at 03:27:833 and 03:28:201,soft clap，use loud volumn

Insane
OD6实在太低了，而且这是个没steam的insane。。不要这么送，+1或2
00:23:784 (2,3) - 和其他diff一样,为什么不用soft clap，调大声，50%
00:29:673 (4) - 折返箭头挪开一点比较好
00:35:747 (4) - 00:35:379 (3) - 折返，然后这个再now的地方改成单点
01:06:299 (2) - 间距不太对
02:10:532 (1) - yeah yeah yeah yeah 的时候是不是用点什么音效
02:23:600 (1) - 往下微调一下位置

>3<good luck~

Mira-san

1,038 posts

Joined May 2012

Mira-san 2013-07-19T14:25:13+00:00

Hi yanlu.

M4M.

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

02:21:943 - I suggest putting this at X:0 Y:0
02:32:802 - No beat here, just remove this one and try copying the style of the ast 2 hitcircles.
03:21:759 - Move to X:196 Y:112

[Insane]
01:51:391 - Put starting point at the endpoint of slider (3)
02:03:906 - Put starting point at x:432 y:192
02:04:274 - Put starting point at x:464 y:60
02:14:213 - Move starting point at end of slider (1)
02:29:673 - Move starting point at end of slider (4)
03:25:129 - Somehow this slider doesn't seem symmetrical to me, but I think that's just me.

^^

Good map.

Rey-volution

1,342 posts

Joined June 2011

Rey-volution 2013-07-19T14:33:22+00:00

[normal]
00:27:465 (6) - can you add finish note ?

overall is okay (y)

[insane]
00:23:415 (1,2,3) - Its difficult >< you can change like this

SPOILER

Make note number 2 stack under slider number 1

or

00:26:728 (4) - the distance too far, make the distance 1,01 like this

SPOILER

or, make still like before, but note 3 make it little far

same with 00:58:753 (1,2,3) - and 01:57:649 (1,2,3) - ? okay let it pass if you dont like that

00:27:096 (6) - too far with before
00:34:827 (7,1,2,3) - my gosh I'm confuse ><
and the other is good

[Dark_Ai's]
02:13:477 (1) - down 02:13:845 (2) - up 02:14:213 (3) - UP? 02:14:581 (4) - up. Make it down in that bold XD
03:07:955 (1,2,3,4) - same like ^? okey, ignore if you dont like it

Well, sorry if my mod isn't helpful. good luck

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-21T13:53:32+00:00

烤肉

baldrace wrote:
Hi~璐璐
m4m req

General
喵喵喵喵喵喵西野加奈clap clap~。Thank you, Love 为什么不是加在source里面。。不是专辑名字吗因為是專輯所以放tags呀~

Normal
00:23:415 (1) - 为何不在折返处和尾端加soft clap，其他地方也可以这么办，要大声哦。 nop
00:48:078 这边一直到后面1.0 的地方要用1.3 DS哦 why....
01:46:974 ^
02:23:600 ^
03:13:477 (1) - 没拉好哦改個形狀~
SPOILER
02:44:397 插个短break吧 ok
03:25:256 (1) - 拉到03:27:465 后面let's clap clap的地方加两个note，用soft clap，音量可以调大一点 ok

Insane
OD6实在太低了，而且这是个没steam的insane。。不要这么送，+1或2 .-. 好吧+1
00:23:784 (2,3) - 和其他diff一样,为什么不用soft clap，调大声，50%
00:29:673 (4) - 折返箭头挪开一点比较好
00:35:747 (4) - 00:35:379 (3) - 折返，然后这个再now的地方改成单点
01:06:299 (2) - 间距不太对
02:10:532 (1) - yeah yeah yeah yeah 的时候是不是用点什么音效
02:23:600 (1) - 往下微调一下位置

>3<good luck~

thx烤肉~ovo

Mira-san

Mira-san wrote:
Hi yanlu.

M4M.

[Insane]
01:51:391 - Put starting point at the endpoint of slider (3) nop
02:03:906 - Put starting point at x:432 y:192 fix some
02:04:274 - Put starting point at x:464 y:60 ^
02:14:213 - Move starting point at end of slider (1) k
02:29:673 - Move starting point at end of slider (4) it's fine imo
03:25:129 - Somehow this slider doesn't seem symmetrical to me, but I think that's just me. ok fixed >_<

^^

Good map.

thank you~

Rey-vo

Rey-vo wrote:
[normal]
00:27:465 (6) - can you add finish note ? ok
overall is okay (y)

[insane]
00:23:415 (1,2,3) - Its difficult >< you can change like this no change..
SPOILER
Make note number 2 stack under slider number 1

or
00:26:728 (4) - the distance too far, make the distance 1,01 like this fix a bit
SPOILER

or, make still like before, but note 3 make it little far
same with 00:58:753 (1,2,3) - and 01:57:649 (1,2,3) - ? okay let it pass if you dont like that
00:27:096 (6) - too far with before it's fine i think lol
00:34:827 (7,1,2,3) - my gosh I'm confuse >< lol
and the other is good

Well, sorry if my mod isn't helpful. good luck

thank you for mod~

update~!

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-07-27T11:01:41+00:00

here my diff, sorry no reply this time >< next time again x.x

SPOILER

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Creator:yanlu
Version:Dark_Ai's Hard
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Tags:Thank you, Love Dark_Ai
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336,172,118385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,320,118753,6,0,P|192:292|216:220,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,152,119305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,223,119489,2,0,P|320:292|396:320,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,260,120042,5,0,0:0:0:0:
396,200,120226,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,184,120410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,260,120593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,200,120778,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,184,120962,2,0,P|468:144|440:112,1,80
332,43,121330,2,0,P|340:83|364:112,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,116,121698,6,0,P|408:180|328:180,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,144,122250,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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148,108,122986,2,0,P|120:140|108:184,1,80
140,248,123354,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,248,123538,2,0,P|260:248|300:272,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,339,123907,2,0,P|387:339|352:320,1,80
294,267,124275,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,172,124642,6,0,P|380:109|308:125,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,125195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
205,125,125379,2,0,P|133:109|88:172,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,125931,2,0,P|180:236|208:264,1,80
256,324,126299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,263,126483,2,0,P|332:236|348:196,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,126851,2,0,P|316:128|396:132,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,100,127404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,180,127588,2,0,P|408:152|396:68,2,160,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,180,131636,2,0,L|320:260,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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440,136,136422,6,0,P|372:128|332:52,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,141943,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,60,142311,6,0,B|176:92|132:84|132:84|108:112|116:152,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,204,143231,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,152,143415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,140,146176,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,188,173784,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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424,112,174520,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,48,174704,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,32,174888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,180,180409,2,0,L|304:116,1,80
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232,208,181882,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,96,183170,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,280,187035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,319,187219,2,0,P|376:292|392:236,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,80,187955,6,0,L|280:88,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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468,260,189980,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,184,190164,2,0,P|388:184|340:148,1,120.000004577637,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-28T05:06:59+00:00

thx :3

update~

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2013-07-28T07:42:36+00:00

Hi Nyanlu and ai :3 from My queue.

[General]

I recommend you to use the original artist : 西野カナ

[Normal]

Circle size +1 .It is a little difficult for beginners.
00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
00:27:465 (1) - i guess it is confusing many beginners here.
00:56:912 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. same as your pattern. 01:55:808 (1) -
02:21:207 (1) - Dont forget to add a new combo after spinner.
02:28:201 (5) - try to put a new combo from here ? as here is cymbal sound .How about putting new combos regularly ?
02:34:090 - i want a sound here. Because i want to add a finish.
02:45:869 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - nice part ♪ <3
03:22:311 (3) - try this ~ ? you can make the natural flow.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888024

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
00:49:550 (3) - ^ whistle.
00:53:231 - add a note ? I recommend you to put 1/1 rhythm.
01:46:606 (3) - add a new combo ? same as your pattern at here. 00:47:710 (1) -
01:49:919 (1) - add a finish.
01:52:127 - Same as above.
01:52:864 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
01:53:600 (3) - ^ whistle.
02:18:814 - i want a sound here. same as your previous part. 01:19:735 (7) -
03:02:802 - add a note.
03:05:011 - remove a finish since it follows nothing and too loud.
03:25:256 (1) - How about following the vocal ?

nice flow :3

[Insane]

00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider.
00:29:673 (4) - ctrl + h you can make the natural flow.
00:34:827 (7) - add a new combo from here ? it is fit for vocal.
00:46:238 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.
00:56:544 (7) - more spacing please.
00:58:753 (1) - Dont forget to add a new combo after spinner.
01:03:354 (2) - try to make a triangle and jump ? it is better for flow.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/893311
01:10:532 (7) - add a whistle for constant rhythm.
01:30:225 - ,01:33:630 - add a note. how about following the vocal ?
01:51:391 (5) - try to move to 1 grid right for stack at here. 01:50:655 (3) -
01:52:127 (1) - add a whistle. same as your pattern at here. 00:53:231 (1) -
01:57:649 (1) - same as reason at here. 00:58:753 (1) -
02:09:428 (2) - add a whistle to the head of the slider.
02:21:759 (6,1) - it is better to make more blanket.
02:23:047 (4) - emm... i want more spacing around 1.1x
02:30:225 - clap sound !! >.<
02:59:857 (3,4) - try this ? 02:59:857 (3) - ctrl + g , 03:00:409 (4) - stack on 02:59:121 (1) - to the head.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/893330
03:05:011 (1) - remove a finish since it follows nothing.

great mapset

Let's Rank Rank! lol

good luck with the Rank

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-07-31T14:01:32+00:00

alacat

alacat wrote:
Hi Nyanlu and ai :3 from My queue.

[General]
I recommend you to use the original artist : 西野カナ umm..okay >-<
[Normal]
Circle size +1 .It is a little difficult for beginners. oh...
00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. nop ><
00:27:465 (1) - i guess it is confusing many beginners here. yah...fixed"
00:56:912 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. same as your pattern. 01:55:808 (1) - kk
02:21:207 (1) - Dont forget to add a new combo after spinner. orz
02:28:201 (5) - try to put a new combo from here ? as here is cymbal sound .How about putting new combos regularly ? un~kk
02:34:090 - i want a sound here. Because i want to add a finish. add OAO
02:45:869 (1,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - nice part ♪ <3 www <3
03:22:311 (3) - try this ~ ? you can make the natural flow. good~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/888024
[Dark_Ai's Hard]
00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. nop><
00:49:550 (3) - ^ whistle. k
00:53:231 - add a note ? I recommend you to put 1/1 rhythm.
01:46:606 (3) - add a new combo ? same as your pattern at here. 00:47:710 (1) -
01:49:919 (1) - add a finish. k
01:52:127 - Same as above.
01:52:864 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. no add
01:53:600 (3) - ^ whistle. kk
02:18:814 - i want a sound here. same as your previous part. 01:19:735 (7) -
03:02:802 - add a note.
03:05:011 - remove a finish since it follows nothing and too loud. ok~
03:25:256 (1) - How about following the vocal ?

nice flow :3
[Insane]
00:23:415 (1) - add a finish to the head of the slider. ><
00:29:673 (4) - ctrl + h you can make the natural flow. fixed a bit~
00:34:827 (7) - add a new combo from here ? it is fit for vocal. sure!
00:46:238 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical. ohh
00:56:544 (7) - more spacing please. fixed
00:58:753 (1) - Dont forget to add a new combo after spinner. orz
01:03:354 (2) - try to make a triangle and jump ? it is better for flow. ok
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/893311
01:10:532 (7) - add a whistle for constant rhythm. k
01:30:225 - ,01:33:630 - add a note. how about following the vocal ? nop...i keep that ;P
01:51:391 (5) - try to move to 1 grid right for stack at here. 01:50:655 (3) - ><nuuu
01:52:127 (1) - add a whistle. same as your pattern at here. 00:53:231 (1) - ok
01:57:649 (1) - same as reason at here. 00:58:753 (1) -
02:09:428 (2) - add a whistle to the head of the slider.
02:21:759 (6,1) - it is better to make more blanket.
02:23:047 (4) - emm... i want more spacing around 1.1x
02:30:225 - clap sound !! >.< un >.<
02:59:857 (3,4) - try this ? 02:59:857 (3) - ctrl + g , 03:00:409 (4) - stack on 02:59:121 (1) - to the head.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/893330
03:05:011 (1) - remove a finish since it follows nothing. k
great mapset Let's Rank Rank! lol

good luck with the Rank

really helpful mod~~thank you nyancat 'w'/

update~(with Ai's diff as i said fixed in reply :3

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-07-31T20:37:55+00:00

well changed the another thing owo
Ty for your mod

here for baka yanlu owo

osu file format v12

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Breeze

osu! Alumni

4,949 posts

Joined March 2009

Breeze 2013-08-03T13:30:54+00:00

随便看看

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

感觉slider速度有点略快，相比normal，这个hard增加的速度似乎快了很多
01:13:109 - 这个0.75xBPM意义不明啊
01:16:054 - ^
01:19:735 (7) - 这个结尾音听起来有点奇怪，我觉得还不如在01:20:103结束slider然后隔1/4拍就开始spinner
02:12:004 - 你知道我想说什么
02:14:949 - ^
02:18:630 (7) - 我怎么感觉复制粘贴的嫌疑很重

[Insane]

00:34:825 (1,2,3,4) - 总觉得这里乱序排列的看起来好可怕，不太好读

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-08-03T18:11:15+00:00

謝謝微風娘娘的mod!

but...
Dark_Ai是外國人她不懂中文的啊啊啊啊QwQ

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-08-03T21:23:40+00:00

? ;A;

Breeze

osu! Alumni

4,949 posts

Joined March 2009

Breeze 2013-08-03T23:28:20+00:00

现在做西野加奈的歌用kantoku的图做BG成了习惯了么

Translation:

[Dark_Ai's Hard]

I feel slider speed is too high, as to normal, it become faster in an unexpected level
01:13:109 - why 0.75xBPM here?
01:16:054 - ^
01:19:735 (7) - Ends slider here sounds ood, maybe you can end at 01:20:103 then start spinner 1/4 beat right after the sldier
02:12:004 - you know what I want to say
02:14:949 - ^
02:18:630 (7) - Hmm, copy-paste is not a good way for mapping, I feel you have many part copy paste

Dark_Ai

1,832 posts

Joined July 2010

Dark_Ai 2013-08-04T13:59:16+00:00

=w=

I like the slider speed btw :c

Here fixed version

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nishino Kana - Clap Clap!!.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59857
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 23047,83415,142311
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Clap Clap!!
TitleUnicode:Clap Clap!!
Artist:Nishino Kana
ArtistUnicode:西野カナ
Creator:yanlu
Version:Dark_Ai's Hard
Source:
Tags:Thank you, Love Dark_Ai
BeatmapID:274999
BeatmapSetID:102786

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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2,154290,162025
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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yanlu

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yanlu 2013-08-06T14:38:10+00:00

Thanks~

update >3</

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-08-15T04:56:11+00:00

~~占座防忘~~

[Insane]
02:06:851 (3,4) - 这节奏太勉强了啊也不合曲建议还是用1/2slider吧

03:18:262 (1) - 像这种slider 转折点跟音乐毫无关系欸我感觉一般这么用不太好不过一定要这样用的话或许插几个绿线让转折的箭头音量减小会更舒服一些就不需要听到转折点没鼓点却又发出的hitnormal的声音

03:21:207 (1) - same

yanlu

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yanlu 2013-08-16T14:14:43+00:00

Nymph wrote:
~~占座防忘~~

[Insane]
02:06:851 (3,4) - 这节奏太勉强了啊也不合曲建议还是用1/2slider吧唔~~好吧; ;

03:18:262 (1) - 像这种slider 转折点跟音乐毫无关系欸我感觉一般这么用不太好不过一定要这样用的话或许插几个绿线让转折的箭头音量减小会更舒服一些就不需要听到转折点没鼓点却又发出的hitnormal的声音嗯是有點吵> <直接改掉sampleset了

03:21:207 (1) - same same

update~! Thank you Nymph: 3!

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-08-17T10:47:22+00:00

bubbled.

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-08-17T11:12:10+00:00

omg go go go moe yanlu ~

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2013-08-17T18:30:32+00:00

Dark_Ai wrote:

omg go go go moe yanlu ~

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-08-17T19:42:05+00:00

Just modding Insane, need to point out some stuff since i don't want to see this.... oh, and some suggestions

You should make slider tick 2, since when slowdowns you cant read them

00:26:912 (5) - Remove this (since there is no beat, and no voice to map to) , make an antijump with 00:26:728 (4) - as in stacking then 00:26:360 (2,3,4) - make these consistant spacing
00:27:649 - Add a circle here instead, since here is a voice you can map to, what you did through the map
00:28:569 (5,6) - Tbh, Ctrl + G them, it flows better, plays better, fits better and... when you play the 5 to 6 is a bit blocking in gameplay
00:29:305 (2,3,4) - Spacing change doesnt fit here
00:31:514 (6,7,1) - Spacing from 7 to 1
00:32:618 (3,4) - Jump doesnt fit very well
00:33:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pointing this out, you have consistant spacing and then making this weird spacing with the star pattern, well ok... do that but dont put the first 3 circles into the star pattern, this confuses so much and is not good to play
00:35:011 (2,3) - Reverse the, flows better and plays better
00:39:060 - No point of putting a circle here, here is nothing to map to actually, remove it and make an antijump again or better make normal spacing with 00:38:508 (3,4) -
00:41:820 (5,1) - Why spacing change, this just doesnt really suit
00:43:293 (6,1) - Jump doesnt fit very well, there is no jumpy part tbh
00:45:133 (1,2,3) - Consistant // 00:45:869 (3,4,5) - Inconsistant
00:49:182 (2,4) - Why not making the same placement, would play better with the following slider too 00:50:655 (4,1) -
01:02:066 (3,4) - Jump doesnt suit here
01:02:618 (6) - Also this doesnt fit any good since no voice or beat to it, its more of a filler
01:08:876 (2) - move this to 01:08:692 - and remove the circle at this place, fits more and rythmwise its actually right
01:12:741 (4,5,1) - Jump actually doesnt fit, but at least make the spacing consistant
01:30:409 (4,1,1) - 01:33:354 (7,1,1) - Combospam needed?
01:35:195 (1,2,3) - Make a consistant spacing here, its nonsense to have such spacing
01:36:299 (4,5) - Reverse them, plays better
01:36:851 (2) - This slider is rythmwise incorrect, just saying
01:50:655 (3,5) - Should be stacked proper
01:52:495 (3) - Rythmwise incorrect
02:00:593 (2,3,4,5) - Make the spacing at least consistant
02:18:998 (1,2) - Reverse combo, since it just is rythmwise and patternwise correct
02:21:023 (2) - If you delete this, it would make a better pattern which creates more fun. It will also fit the clap clap more
02:22:679 - Slowdown should start here, its otherwise confusing
02:29:673 (2,3,4) - First you have this jump, then this antijump 02:30:409 (4,1) - , either stack it or make correct spacing
02:47:526 - When you place a circle here with the same spacing as you had at 02:44:765 (4,5) - , then its not a consistant spacing anymore, improve it
02:47:342 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Inconsistantcy everywhere
02:55:440 (3,4,5,6) - The two jumps are not consistant either, first 1,91 then 1,89
02:58:017 (2,3) - ^
02:59:857 (3,4,1) - Make these consistant too
03:03:538 (5,1) - Reverse this combo, this comboing is just wrong due to the jumps
03:06:115 (4,1) - Spacing change needed?
03:09:059 (4,1) - ^
03:18:998 (2,3,4) - Consistant and then this 03:19:366 (4,5) - ,why, even more when it not fits (03:21:943 (2,3,4,5) - is better)
03:23:231 (2) - conisder moving this to 03:23:968 (4) - , plays better
03:25:256 (1) - comboing is wrong

Oh well, this is just what should get fixed imo. I hope you think about it when next time mapping. Good luck with rank.

yanlu

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yanlu 2013-08-18T13:28:16+00:00

>BounceBabe
I saw your every mod...but sorry I can't agree your mod > <
I like the jumpy now,so no change to this time..
anyway,thanks for modding! :3

p.s, slider tick 2 isnt needed imo ;v

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2013-08-18T13:50:58+00:00

thats a huge mod for after a bubble, would like you to post reasons for the stuff, so that us bats know you checked it fully and not just denied due to the map bubbled. sorry its just "no denied everything" doesnt seem good imo, its best to actually give reasons

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-08-18T16:38:30+00:00

My mod is the longest on the whole thread for your Insane and you didn't apply one thing, most likely because you have a bubble? ... that's a bit rude to do, can I get at least reasons?

Dark_Ai

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Dark_Ai 2013-08-18T17:25:52+00:00

siiiiigh....

Well there are some things you really should change but some you dont really need to. I've check some things if you want I can pointing this out. sigh

dkun

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dkun 2013-08-19T06:54:44+00:00

okay, let's put it this way.

give details to why you're rejecting it or this map isn't going anywhere.
just because you have a bubble does not mean you should reject mods for no reason.

please call me back when you've gone through with it. (I do like this map as it is, but please reply to a mod post when you get one. you don't need to change anything, just give reason to why you don't want to.)

yanlu

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yanlu 2013-08-19T14:38:24+00:00

okay,
sorry before that I didn't reply carefully...not have much time to explain why I didn't fix it and the reason yesterday.
(since I think it's fine and my poor english won't let me to explain fast...orz)

but now I got it---

BounceBabe wrote:
Just modding Insane, need to point out some stuff since i don't want to see this.... oh, and some suggestions

You should make slider tick 2, since when slowdowns you cant read them as my post above,tick 2 isn't necessary o.o

00:26:912 (5) - Remove this (since there is no beat, and no voice to map to) , make an antijump with 00:26:728 (4) - as in stacking then 00:26:360 (2,3,4) - make these consistant spacing (5) is a beat that i make it a rhythm,if no this...is another rhythm. and (2,3,4) not the consistant spacing as before cuz the vocal"say- "i want make a change start here..
00:27:649 - Add a circle here instead, since here is a voice you can map to, what you did through the map that strange as you said 00:26:912 (5) - ,and my thinking is on the contrary from yours...;3
00:28:569 (5,6) - Tbh, Ctrl + G them, it flows better, plays better, fits better and... when you play the 5 to 6 is a bit blocking in gameplay the flows is fine now imo
00:29:305 (2,3,4) - Spacing change doesnt fit here i don't think so..
00:31:514 (6,7,1) - Spacing from 7 to 1 ..? (1)is the new part o-o
00:32:618 (3,4) - Jump doesnt fit very well nop,i think it's fit..
00:33:354 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Pointing this out, you have consistant spacing and then making this weird spacing with the star pattern, well ok... do that but dont put the first 3 circles into the star pattern, this confuses so much and is not good to play that 3 is before the star pattern ,when in gameplay,it will disappear when you finish hit...but if you still confuse,yah okay...I changed to make a bit tip..like NC?
00:35:011 (2,3) - Reverse the, flows better and plays better the flows is fine now imo
00:39:060 - No point of putting a circle here, here is nothing to map to actually, remove it and make an antijump again or better make normal spacing with 00:38:508 (3,4) - hmm..the same reason as 00:26:912 (5) -,00:27:649 -
00:41:820 (5,1) - Why spacing change, this just doesnt really suit
00:43:293 (6,1) - Jump doesnt fit very well, there is no jumpy part tbh i like this jumpy...it isn't too strange for player i think~
00:45:133 (1,2,3) - Consistant // 00:45:869 (3,4,5) - Inconsistant im intended to do
00:49:182 (2,4) - Why not making the same placement, would play better with the following slider too 00:50:655 (4,1) - ...becuz,I want to ;_; it isn't strange imo
01:02:066 (3,4) - Jump doesnt suit here i like it...nop
01:02:618 (6) - Also this doesnt fit any good since no voice or beat to it, its more of a filler
01:08:876 (2) - move this to 01:08:692 - and remove the circle at this place, fits more and rythmwise its actually right I had try yours,but the beat isn't suit with others for me.
01:12:741 (4,5,1) - Jump actually doesnt fit, but at least make the spacing consistant nop...why you so dislike my jump ;w;
01:30:409 (4,1,1) - 01:33:354 (7,1,1) - Combospam needed? yep...;3
01:35:195 (1,2,3) - Make a consistant spacing here, its nonsense to have such spacing thats jumpy o.o
01:36:299 (4,5) - Reverse them, plays better the flow..break for me
01:36:851 (2) - This slider is rythmwise incorrect, just saying intended to do :<
01:50:655 (3,5) - Should be stacked proper ^
01:52:495 (3) - Rythmwise incorrect i can't understand why incorrect...it's really fine for me/.\
02:00:593 (2,3,4,5) - Make the spacing at least consistant
02:18:998 (1,2) - Reverse combo, since it just is rythmwise and patternwise correct "day-"start with a new nc for me!
02:21:023 (2) - If you delete this, it would make a better pattern which creates more fun. It will also fit the clap clap more nop...;__;my parttern
02:22:679 - Slowdown should start here, its otherwise confusing hmm...not really :/ I start on nc
02:29:673 (2,3,4) - First you have this jump, then this antijump 02:30:409 (4,1) - , either stack it or make correct spacing okay,changed to stack after many test..
02:47:526 - When you place a circle here with the same spacing as you had at 02:44:765 (4,5) - , then its not a consistant spacing anymore, improve it that part with 02:48:814 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - ,i want the spacing change more bigger then before,it fit the vocal
02:47:342 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Inconsistantcy everywhere ^
02:55:440 (3,4,5,6) - The two jumps are not consistant either, first 1,91 then 1,89 i like it...
02:58:017 (2,3) - ^ same..
02:59:857 (3,4,1) - Make these consistant too same reason like above~
03:03:538 (5,1) - Reverse this combo, this comboing is just wrong due to the jumps nuuuu....nc it from "ya-" start better
03:06:115 (4,1) - Spacing change needed? thats different parttern D:
03:09:059 (4,1) - ^ ^
03:18:998 (2,3,4) - Consistant and then this 03:19:366 (4,5) - ,why, even more when it not fits (03:21:943 (2,3,4,5) - is better) ehh..make it like 03:21:943 (2,3,4,5) - now
03:23:231 (2) - conisder moving this to 03:23:968 (4) - , plays better noooo it's same as 03:10:900 (1,2,3,4) -
03:25:256 (1) - comboing is wrong same as 02:18:998 (1) -

Oh well, this is just what should get fixed imo. I hope you think about it when next time mapping. Good luck with rank.

thanks for modding again and sorry again that I did not reply your mod..~.

update_

dkun

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dkun 2013-08-21T06:38:29+00:00

Excuse me for taking so long, yanlu! Here is your bubble back. Great map!

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Oyatsu 2013-08-21T10:58:12+00:00

Go! Go! Nishino Yanlu~

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Kinomi 2013-08-23T16:31:33+00:00

yanlu go go \0.0/

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