[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
红色:必须遵守
蓝色:只是建议
·according to wiki your source is wrong. It should be Subarashiki Hibi Furenzoku Sonzai but not Subarashiki Hibi
·根据维基的注释,这游戏全名应该是美好的日子 ~不连续存在~。所以source的罗马音应该是Subarashiki Hibi Furenzoku Sonzai
·this needn't Tag?
·Tag什么都没有吗?好歹也加个制作公司KeroQ这样的
·There are too many redundant timing section,please check it
·多余的绿线太多了,建议清一下[
Easy]
OD+100:16:925 (1) - remove NC
00:44:715 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的音效可以和00:38:862 (3,4,5,6) - 一样啊,00:45:447 (4) - 用soft-normalhit不是很好
00:58:618 (5) - 建议和00:57:154 (3) - 的y轴保持一致或者换种排列
00:59:349 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:59:349 (1,1,1) - 我看了后面01:05:203 (1,2,3) -感觉你这里有点乱用NC某些狗你懂得,还是去掉了好
01:10:325 (4) - whistle?
01:19:837 (3) - NC
02:02:276 (4) - 音效的处理和02:00:813 (3) - 一样?
02:30:813 (3) - 响一点。。我根本听不出拍子。。
02:33:740 (1) - ^
02:35:414 (1) - 最后这个转盘我觉得用whistle更好
[
Normal]
Is this normal or hard diff?spacing should be the same in normal diff这是Nomral还是Hard?看了下面的难度我决定把这个当HARD,所以你尽快把难度名给我改回来00:20:561 (1) - 用SC2的whistle
00:21:289 (3) - 滑条头用SC1的clap
00:27:886 (3) - 这个应该是SC1的finish吧
00:40:325 (5) - 滑条头whistle
00:52:032 (1) - ^
01:19:837 (1) - 滑条头用SC1的finish
01:41:788 (1) - remove NC
02:16:911 (3) - 滑条头whistle
02:28:618 (3) - ^
02:36:016 (3) - 稍微往上去点,间距不变的情况下
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Hard]
Maybe it is a Insane diff这个是I难度了吧00:14:743 (3) - 这里和前面音乐是一样的为什么不参照前面00:13:289 (3,4) - 的音效下法
00:17:652 (3) - ^
00:20:561 (1,2) - clap
00:23:471 (6,7) - 6往左上去一格,当然如果你这么做7也相应的调整下
00:35:752 (7,1) - 建议这两个和前面三连的间距一样
01:09:959 (3,4,1) - 建议3改成SC2的whistle,4改成01:09:593 (2) - 。01:10:691 (1) - 同3
下次能不能全改好了再给我看