1. osu! forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked/Approved Beatmaps
show more
posted
Hey!! Guys!!
posted
7K Burst
00:12:359 - 加个NOTE在1
00:12:565 - 加N在1
00:20:168 (20168|5,20168|1) - 这两个删掉好点吧
00:24:174 (24174|1) - 移到1好点
00:24:174 (24174|1) - 加个note在右手吧

7K Hard
00:20:168 (20168|6,20168|5,20270|2) - 往上移动1/4
01:10:716 (70716|4,70921|5) - 这两个试试往上移动1/4
posted

Luyuja wrote:

7K Burst
00:12:359 - 加个NOTE在1 -已加
00:12:565 - 加N在1 -已加
00:20:168 (20168|5,20168|1) - 这两个删掉好点吧 -全删不妥,删了一个
00:24:174 (24174|1) - 移到1好点 -已改
00:24:174 (24174|1) - 加个note在右手吧-这个意义不明……

7K Hard
00:20:168 (20168|6,20168|5,20270|2) - 往上移动1/4 -作了适当调整
01:10:716 (70716|4,70921|5) - 这两个试试往上移动1/4 -作了适当调整
谢鲈鱼哥~
posted
Good map :D
posted
4K Easy,Accel难度:

总的来说没什么问题,个人建议是最后那段长音来根面条。

7K Normal:

没发现问题,不过最后那一滑有点容易路人200。

7K Hard:

无暇号码~~~~~~~~~~

7K Burst:

这里违和感十足,说不出哪里怪异,建议简化成乱键+最后一条楼梯。

建议弱化这段地方:
00:33:318 (33318|0) - 从这里开始
00:40:510 (40510|3) - 到这里结束

反之强化KIAI段难度。
posted
4K Easy 因为是Easy所以感觉OD6比较好?
7K Normal 和hard的OD一样吗?建议Normal OD7
7K Hard 感觉··HP7?
谱子方面打起来挺顺手 也是很喜欢的曲子 :) 都是个人意见 轻拍;w;
posted
4K EZ 适当的加一些双键
4k accel 感觉3键的梗用的太多了
7K normal 感觉良好
7k Hard 和Burst 感觉需要一点人声。整体感觉很好。。。
嘛。。水平有限。。只能说到这了 :)
posted

MgerSy wrote:

4K Easy,Accel难度:

总的来说没什么问题,个人建议是最后那段长音来根面条。 -的确最后可以用长条,不过我想保持全程无面条XD

7K Normal:

没发现问题,不过最后那一滑有点容易路人200。 -就是为了坑你蛤蛤蛤 这里不滑一下反而不科学了而且这种也蛮流行的(大雾

7K Hard:

无暇号码~~~~~~~~~~ -~~

7K Burst:

这里违和感十足,说不出哪里怪异,建议简化成乱键+最后一条楼梯。 -1/12乱键难得要死,我会继续考虑有没有更好的摆法的,多谢指出问题

建议弱化这段地方:
00:33:318 (33318|0) - 从这里开始
00:40:510 (40510|3) - 到这里结束

反之强化KIAI段难度。 -异议,副歌部分是歌曲最燃的地方,排列应该考虑爽快而不是难,此外你提到的那段之所以做得有一定难度是因为接下来的00:40:305 - 00:41:948这里有一个小休息段正好可以喘口气然后迎接爽快的KIAI段XD
多谢神隐~~
posted

Simple_Star wrote:

4K Easy 因为是Easy所以感觉OD6比较好?
7K Normal 和hard的OD一样吗?建议Normal OD7
7K Hard 感觉··HP7?
谱子方面打起来挺顺手 也是很喜欢的曲子 :) 都是个人意见 轻拍;w;
多谢小星~~
HP已改
OD就不改了,这歌节奏相当强烈并且无面条,高OD并无不妥~
posted

victorica_db wrote:

4K EZ 适当的加一些双键 -这个我是真无语了,做成这样都能有3.4星标N,难道非要做成tutorial那样么……
4k accel 感觉3键的梗用的太多了 -为了体现重音,没办法……做4K限制太大
7K normal 感觉良好 -谢谢~
7k Hard 和Burst 感觉需要一点人声。整体感觉很好。。。 -有人声哦~只不过没做成面条~
嘛。。水平有限。。只能说到这了 :)
谢谢db酱~~
posted
1.把BG水平翻转一下,让人像在右边。
2.offset 845
posted
hello, i think 4K looks okay i guess...here suggestion mod (not force you change everything)


[7K Normal]

00:02:907 (2907|5) - move 4
00:05:579 (5579|4) - move 3
00:06:400 (6400|4) - move 2
00:08:250 (8250|4) - move 4 OR 00:08:558 (8558|2) - move 4 OR 00:08:250 (8250|4,8558|2,8866|1) - move 4
00:10:202 (10202|2) - move 5 00:10:510 (10510|4) - move 4
00:12:359 - add a note on 7 00:12:565 (12565|5) - move 5 00:12:976 (12976|4) - move 6
00:13:181 - add a note on 5
00:19:962 (19962|5,20065|1,20168|5,20270|1,20373|5) - like this? http://puu.sh/3uQm1.png
00:21:606 (21606|1,21811|6) - try mirror this like 00:20:784 (20784|2,20989|5,21195|2) like this http://puu.sh/3uQnf.png
00:26:537 (26537|3,26948|3) - move on 6
00:31:880 (31880|2) - move 2
00:33:729 - add a note on 2
00:35:373 - add a note on 7
00:40:921 (40921|5,41024|1,41126|5,41229|1,41332|5) - try change others? like this? http://puu.sh/3uQvu.png
00:41:537 (41537|2) - move on 2 (this suit if you changed 00:40:921 ^ mod, if not change dont use it)
00:44:825 (44825|3) - move 3
00:46:674 (46674|2) - move 4
00:47:085 (47085|1) - move 3
00:53:661 (53661|1) - ^
00:54:277 (54277|5,54380|2) - move left
00:54:688 (54688|1) - move 5
00:59:620 (59620|3,59825|2,60031|1,60236|0,60442|1,60647|2,60852|3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3wcbL.png
01:07:222 (67222|4,67325|3,67428|2,67531|1) - move right

[7K Hard]

00:32:907 (32907|4) - move 4
00:40:716 (40716|6) - move 6
00:57:770 (57770|5) - move 5
01:00:339 (60339|1) - move 3
01:07:017 (67017|0) - move 2

[7K Burst]

00:39:277 (39277|4,39380|5,39483|4) - if like this? http://puu.sh/3wctg.png
01:02:496 (62496|4,62496|3,62496|0,62496|5,62702|6,62907|4,62907|1,62907|5,62907|0) - this note too weird....try change another one...if like this? http://puu.sh/3wcCz.png
01:03:113 (63113|2,63318|1) - move left (if you use my suggestion)
posted

woc2006 wrote:

1.把BG水平翻转一下,让人像在右边。 -已翻
2.offset 845 -我自己测下来感觉853准一点,并且我看了下另外几个和我同一音源的map也都是853
多谢开源哥~
posted

ExPew wrote:

hello, i think 4K looks okay i guess...here suggestion mod (not force you change everything)


[7K Normal]

00:02:907 (2907|5) - move 4 -Nope, here for the balance of two hands
00:05:579 (5579|4) - move 3 -^
00:06:400 (6400|4) - move 2 -Moved to 3
00:08:250 (8250|4) - move 4 OR 00:08:558 (8558|2) - move 4 OR 00:08:250 (8250|4,8558|2,8866|1) - move 4 -Rearranged
00:10:202 (10202|2) - move 5 00:10:510 (10510|4) - move 4 -Nope, considered the pitch and the notes after here
00:12:359 - add a note on 7 -Nope 00:12:565 (12565|5) - move 5 -Done00:12:976 (12976|4) - move 6 -Done
00:13:181 - add a note on 5 -Nope
00:19:962 (19962|5,20065|1,20168|5,20270|1,20373|5) - like this? http://puu.sh/3uQm1.png -Changed to a similar pattern
00:21:606 (21606|1,21811|6) - try mirror this like 00:20:784 (20784|2,20989|5,21195|2) like this http://puu.sh/3uQnf.png -Both done
00:26:537 (26537|3,26948|3) - move on 6 -Rearranged
00:31:880 (31880|2) - move 2 -Nope
00:33:729 - add a note on 2 -Done
00:35:373 - add a note on 7 -Done
00:40:921 (40921|5,41024|1,41126|5,41229|1,41332|5) - try change others? like this? http://puu.sh/3uQvu.png -Rearranged
00:41:537 (41537|2) - move on 2 (this suit if you changed 00:40:921 ^ mod, if not change dont use it) -^
00:44:825 (44825|3) - move 3 -Nope
00:46:674 (46674|2) - move 4 -Done
00:47:085 (47085|1) - move 3 -Done
00:53:661 (53661|1) - ^ -Nope
00:54:277 (54277|5,54380|2) - move left -^
00:54:688 (54688|1) - move 5 -^
00:59:620 (59620|3,59825|2,60031|1,60236|0,60442|1,60647|2,60852|3) - how about this? http://puu.sh/3wcbL.png -Good pattern, but here I want to make some regular things XD
01:07:222 (67222|4,67325|3,67428|2,67531|1) - move right -Nope

[7K Hard]

00:32:907 (32907|4) - move 4 -Nope
00:40:716 (40716|6) - move 6 -Done
00:57:770 (57770|5) - move 5 -Nope
01:00:339 (60339|1) - move 3 -Done
01:07:017 (67017|0) - move 2 -Nope

[7K Burst]

00:39:277 (39277|4,39380|5,39483|4) - if like this? http://puu.sh/3wctg.png -Nope
01:02:496 (62496|4,62496|3,62496|0,62496|5,62702|6,62907|4,62907|1,62907|5,62907|0) - this note too weird....try change another one...if like this? http://puu.sh/3wcCz.png -Rearranged
01:03:113 (63113|2,63318|1) - move left (if you use my suggestion) -Didn't change 01:02:907 (62907|1) ,so nope
Great thanks~~ :)
posted
7K NM
00:05:784 到 00:06:606 擺放的時間點可以跟 00:06:606 到 00:07:428一樣 ,間隔3-3-2(4KEZ也可以改成這樣
00:43:798 (43798|4) - 00:50:373 (50373|4) - 這2顆我不知道是甚麼= = 可以改成白線到白線的長條

ALL
00:00:647 到 00:00:853 可以加個長條 其他難度也一樣 但如果覺得加長條太難那就不要加了~
posted

c36098651 wrote:

7K NM
00:05:784 到 00:06:606 擺放的時間點可以跟 00:06:606 到 00:07:428一樣 ,間隔3-3-2(4KEZ也可以改成這樣 -鼓点还是有明显区别的,感觉都3-3-2的话体现不出鼓点上的差异
00:43:798 (43798|4) - 00:50:373 (50373|4) - 這2顆我不知道是甚麼= = 可以改成白線到白線的長條 -有乐器音啦~我不是跟vocal的XD

ALL
00:00:647 到 00:00:853 可以加個長條 其他難度也一樣 但如果覺得加長條太難那就不要加了~ -主要是这图我刻意全程不放长条,而且尽量跟乐器而不是人声(除非简单难度有些地方用来增加点变化XD)
多谢c酱mod~ :D
posted
Yeah, fun map.
posted
recheck
7K Normal
00:25:510 (25510|5,25613|4,25716|3,25818|2,25921|1) - Avoid this pattern(stair) in normal, just follow strong beat here. The same fix to the pattern behind.
01:11:537 (71537|0) - remove

7K Hard
01:05:168 (65168|5) - move to 01:05:270 (65270|5) - , you put double notes on weak beat, and single for strong.
posted

woc2006 wrote:

recheck
7K Normal
00:25:510 (25510|5,25613|4,25716|3,25818|2,25921|1) - Avoid this pattern(stair) in normal, just follow strong beat here. The same fix to the pattern behind. -Fixed this one and the stair next to it, but don't want to change the rest.
01:11:537 (71537|0) - remove -Fixed.

7K Hard
01:05:168 (65168|5) - move to 01:05:270 (65270|5) - , you put double notes on weak beat, and single for strong. -Fixed.
Thanks for recheck~ :)
posted

17VA wrote:

Yeah, fun map.
thx~
show more
Please sign in to reply.