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PinocchioP - Mushroom Mother [Osu|Taiko]

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YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
the Mother of mushroom is dead and need to be Graveyarded

R.I.P Mother of Mushrooms Mushroom of Mother

Taiko icon or nothing
OnosakiHito
osu!taiko Paragon
6,812 posts
Joined March 2010
OnosakiHito
Well, I'm not sure what is going on, but you could also look for a normal BAT who osu-icon this.
Maybe Tasha has something to do atm.
LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU

YunoFanatic wrote:

the Mother of mushroom is dead and need to be Graveyarded

R.I.P Mother of Mushrooms Mushroom of Mother

Taiko icon or nothing
why would you give up find BATs and try to get a bubble >:I dont give up
karterfreak
osu! Alumni
724 posts
Joined August 2011
karterfreak
Aaaah sorry I completely forgot about this ;~;

TAIKOS APPROVED *Dissapears into the mist*
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Tasha wrote:

Aaaah sorry I completely forgot about this ;~;

TAIKOS APPROVED *Dissapears into the mist*
Ahrigahtouh gozaimas ^^
mingmichael
1,720 posts
Joined May 2012
mingmichael

YunoFanatic wrote:

the Mother of mushroom is dead and need to be Graveyarded

R.I.P Mother of Mushrooms Mushroom of Mother

Taiko icon or nothing
c'mon yuno, don't give up >3<
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
2nd Attempt Revived
Asagi Mutsuki
osu!trivium Champion
1,469 posts
Joined February 2013
Asagi Mutsuki
lol you finally did it
Gogo Rank! >w<
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
Updated, Fixed Spacing and changed to x1.0 suggested by Irreversible.
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
yes please
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

AnreFM wrote:

yes please
FARKIN UNFAIR
Ive ask some BATs around :( is there something
That prevents a BAT to come in this thread :( seriously


Edit: atleast let me know your honest opinions. I mean ur a BAT afterall tell me if i need to remap i need to this or that. Your a BAT so in my mind i honestly need to follow you since you are thr one who suspects my mpset!
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
I'm on it, show some (well i know, you did already) more Patience, I'm going to help you for sure now.
PROGUY
osu! Alumni
936 posts
Joined October 2010
PROGUY
Hi again [Shi-Ra] :)
Here's my random mod.

[Easy]
00:32:860 (1) Rotate this note (Ctrl + Shift + R) by 40 degrees anti-clockwise from selection centre.
00:41:788 (7) Add New Combo.

[Normal]
01:21:074 (3,4) Gaps between 2 & 3 as compared to 1 & 2 is slightly further, and 3 & 4 is too close to each other. Move 3 and 4 to the point that the gaps are the same as the one in 1 & 2.
01:22:859 (5) Add New Combo.
01:45:716 (4) ^
01:55:716 (2,3) Move further away from 1, something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1305936

[Tsusuko's Hard]
01:09:645 (4) Add Finish hitsound.
01:57:144 Move this inherited point to 01:57:502.

Hope this helps! Good luck!
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again [Shi-Ra] :)
lol?

Normal:

01:40:716 (5) - Missing clap at the head.

No kudosu
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again [Shi-Ra] :)
Here's my random mod.

[Easy]
00:32:860 (1) Rotate this note (Ctrl + Shift + R) by 40 degrees anti-clockwise from selection centre.
00:41:788 (7) Add New Combo.

[Normal]
01:21:074 (3,4) Gaps between 2 & 3 as compared to 1 & 2 is slightly further, and 3 & 4 is too close to each other. Move 3 and 4 to the point that the gaps are the same as the one in 1 & 2.
01:22:859 (5) Add New Combo.
01:45:716 (4) ^
01:55:716 (2,3) Move further away from 1, something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1305936

[Tsusuko's Hard]
01:09:645 (4) Add Finish hitsound.
01:57:144 Move this inherited point to 01:57:502.

Hope this helps! Good luck!
fixed all

Sonnyc wrote:

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again [Shi-Ra] :)
lol?

Normal:

01:40:716 (5) - Missing clap at the head.

No kudosu
fixed

update
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Hard
01:30:895 - must whistle on head
01:29:466 (5) - whistle
01:42:680 - NC
01:43:216 - remove nc
01:46:073 - nc

Normal
OD -1
00:32:503 (2,3,1,2) - these look confusing together
00:28:217 - from this part, i kind of moved your notes so that ^ wont look confusing (don't worry it doesnt ruin the rest of map)
00:28:574 (2) - x:136 y:200
00:29:288 (3) - x:344 y:216
00:30:181 (1) - x:284 y:340
00:30:895 (2) - x:120 y:176
00:31:431 (3) - x:292 y:228
00:31:788 (1) - x:336 y:116
00:32:503 (2) - x:504 y:132
00:33:217 (3) - x:268 y:184
00:33:395 (1) - ctrl+h this and x:328 y:188
00:33:931 (2) - ctrl+h this too and x:244 y:300
00:34:645 (3) - x:281 y:133
00:35:181 (4) - x:108 y:120
in the end it will look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317858 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317860 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317864 anddd http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317867
00:37:145 (1) - let's center this x:260 y:256
00:37:860 (2) - now this looks really weird here, if you applied previous one for "1" move 2 to x:452 y:172
00:40:717 - whistle here
00:49:288 (2,4) - nonono that's why:
00:49:288 (2) - x:324 y:364 and
00:49:645 (3) - ctrl+g this
00:50:359 (4,6) - dont forget to fix the stack as well
00:54:288 (2) - let's make this symmetrical so it looks good on previous slider: http://puu.sh/6Obgr.jpg
00:55:002 (3) - don't forget to change this as well if you apply this ^
00:57:502 (5) - this slider is a nono here. that's why hmm.. let's 00:58:217 (6) - ctrl+shift+r and write 3 and press ok. Then http://puu.sh/6Obl8.jpg (so they will look parallel somehow)
and dont forget to move 00:59:645 (1) - to x:304 y:108
01:06:788 (3,5) - stack better please
01:11:431 (3,5) - stack better
01:15:359 (3,1) - stack better
01:13:931 (1,2) - use same sliders, they look reversed
01:28:216 - whistle
01:29:288 (2) - whistle
01:31:074 (1,3) - stack better
01:48:930 (1) - well this is wrong here. At least stack it on 4's tail.

Easy
00:31:788 (2,1) - nono, this will be confusing for newbies, x: 264 y: 336
00:40:360 (6) - end this slider here 00:41:074 -
00:44:645 (1) - NC (don't have more than 4-5 combos in Easy)
00:39:288 (3) -
00:53:574 (1,3) - stack them
00:56:788 - NC
00:58:574 - for here i tried something like this so sliders don't ruin each other: http://puu.sh/6ObCK.jpg
if you apply this ^ 01:01:074 (2) - x:416 y: 200
01:02:145 (3) - x:336 y:240
01:02:502 (1) - ctrl+g this and x:248 y:248
01:04:645 (2) - we will stack this with previous slider, x:416 y:200
01:35:002 (2,3) - this doesnt look good as well, i dont know what to do for this though ;_;
01:41:073 - NC
01:41:787 (2,3,4) - well putting on white ticks won't help new players. Even i could mis-click these because of the vocal. http://puu.sh/6ObOW.jpg ?
01:46:430 - NC and move this a bit, so it doesnt touch 4

Okay this is all i could find, hope you will get it ranked soon!
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite
Wait a minute, it's not dead?
Well, that map might bring me back to my mapping mood. If I get any mods for my diff.
...Yes I am back.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

UnderminE wrote:

Hard
01:30:895 - must whistle on head
01:29:466 (5) - whistle
01:42:680 - NC
01:43:216 - remove nc
01:46:073 - nc

Normal
OD -1
00:32:503 (2,3,1,2) - these look confusing together
00:28:217 - from this part, i kind of moved your notes so that ^ wont look confusing (don't worry it doesnt ruin the rest of map)
00:28:574 (2) - x:136 y:200
00:29:288 (3) - x:344 y:216
00:30:181 (1) - x:284 y:340
00:30:895 (2) - x:120 y:176
00:31:431 (3) - x:292 y:228
00:31:788 (1) - x:336 y:116
00:32:503 (2) - x:504 y:132
00:33:217 (3) - x:268 y:184
00:33:395 (1) - ctrl+h this and x:328 y:188
00:33:931 (2) - ctrl+h this too and x:244 y:300
00:34:645 (3) - x:281 y:133
00:35:181 (4) - x:108 y:120
in the end it will look like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317858 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317860 and http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317864 anddd http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1317867
00:37:145 (1) - let's center this x:260 y:256
00:37:860 (2) - now this looks really weird here, if you applied previous one for "1" move 2 to x:452 y:172
00:40:717 - whistle here
00:49:288 (2,4) - nonono that's why:
00:49:288 (2) - x:324 y:364 and
00:49:645 (3) - ctrl+g this
00:50:359 (4,6) - dont forget to fix the stack as well
00:54:288 (2) - let's make this symmetrical so it looks good on previous slider: http://puu.sh/6Obgr.jpg
00:55:002 (3) - don't forget to change this as well if you apply this ^
00:57:502 (5) - this slider is a nono here. that's why hmm.. let's 00:58:217 (6) - ctrl+shift+r and write 3 and press ok. Then http://puu.sh/6Obl8.jpg (so they will look parallel somehow)
and dont forget to move 00:59:645 (1) - to x:304 y:108
01:06:788 (3,5) - stack better please
01:11:431 (3,5) - stack better
01:15:359 (3,1) - stack better
01:13:931 (1,2) - use same sliders, they look reversed
01:28:216 - whistle
01:29:288 (2) - whistle
01:31:074 (1,3) - stack better
01:48:930 (1) - well this is wrong here. At least stack it on 4's tail.

Easy
00:31:788 (2,1) - nono, this will be confusing for newbies, x: 264 y: 336
00:40:360 (6) - end this slider here 00:41:074 -
00:44:645 (1) - NC (don't have more than 4-5 combos in Easy)
00:39:288 (3) -
00:53:574 (1,3) - stack them
00:56:788 - NC
00:58:574 - for here i tried something like this so sliders don't ruin each other: http://puu.sh/6ObCK.jpg
if you apply this ^ 01:01:074 (2) - x:416 y: 200
01:02:145 (3) - x:336 y:240
01:02:502 (1) - ctrl+g this and x:248 y:248
01:04:645 (2) - we will stack this with previous slider, x:416 y:200
01:35:002 (2,3) - this doesnt look good as well, i dont know what to do for this though ;_;
01:41:073 - NC
01:41:787 (2,3,4) - well putting on white ticks won't help new players. Even i could mis-click these because of the vocal. http://puu.sh/6ObOW.jpg ?
01:46:430 - NC and move this a bit, so it doesnt touch 4

Okay this is all i could find, hope you will get it ranked soon!
Fixed all including tsu-chan's diff :P! THANKS Miney >W<

LilyWhite wrote:

Wait a minute, it's not dead?
Well, that map might bring me back to my mapping mood. If I get any mods for my diff.
...Yes I am back.
omg lily so pru
Yes its umm.. alive i think i think i think
HelloSCV
3,490 posts
Joined April 2011
HelloSCV
here's your ticket

[Easy]
  1. same NC and hitsound suggestion with Normal
  2. 00:20:003 (1) - same opinion with Normal
  3. 00:40:360 (4) - i don't prefer to use some slider like this.. how about making straighten slider instead? (not only here but also other silimar sliders)
  4. 01:08:217 (5) - this overlap isn't good imo..
[Normal]
  1. hp -1 for ballancing among diffs
  2. try to rearrange NCs and hitsounds consistently in low diffs
  3. 00:20:003 (1) - what about adding a repeat here? sound on 00:20:717 - here is too strong to let it empty
  4. 00:34:645 (3,4) - considering this is Normal diff i don't think there is anything special reason to decrease DS suddenly
  5. 00:52:145 (1,2,3) - i really don't recommend using 1/4 beats on low diffs, this rhythm works much better than current one imo
  6. 00:58:217 (6) - i'm not sure whether this slider is acceptable enough or not... try changing it for sure?
  7. 01:09:556 (7) - misplaced note?
  8. 01:15:359 (3) - this jump.... isn't recommended, there is no reason to add jump suddenly
[Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:53:395 (7) - add NC for consistency or 01:42:680 (1) - delete this NC for same reason
  2. 00:59:645 (1,3) - i recommend using normal sampleset on the tail of those sliders, it hears better to me
  3. 01:05:359 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:07:859 (5) - according to the vocal sounds, the rhythms on this part seem bit awkawrd i'd rather follow the vocal instead of using symmetric patterns
    example
    you can use this if you want
    160,120,67859,2,0,P|156:160|168:196,1,75
    148,272,68217,6,0,B|192:280|220:256|220:256|252:296,1,112.5
    272,312,68574,2,0,L|356:288,1,75
    412,244,68931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    392,164,69109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    228,152,69467,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:30:716 (8) - try using soft sampleset instead of normal because there isn't any sound for adding normal sampleset imo
  6. 01:30:806 (9) - also, i think placing triplet like this in Hard diff is little bit inappropriate, since i can hear drum hat sound in blue ticks, placing triplet is acceptable enough i know, but considering this is Hard diff and you didn't add much triplets in previous parts, you'd better to delete this as well, besides, triplet doesn't fit nicely with the music
  7. 01:35:002 (3) - what about reversing this slider using ctrl g? to have better flow
  8. 01:46:609 (1) - remove NC, it isn't needed
  9. 01:48:930 (1,3) - same opinion with 00:59:645 (1,3) - here
  10. 01:48:930 (1) - deleting finish on the head of slider to fit with the music and keep consistency
  11. 01:54:644 (1,3) - same with 00:59:645 (1,3) - here
  12. 01:55:805 - maybe you forgot to set sample as N here


[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:24:645 (1) - perhaps you had a mistake on this slider
  2. 00:29:645 (1) - hmm i think this NC seems unnecessary
  3. 00:30:360 (1) - it's a kind of nazi mod lol, anyway how about keeping DS consistently?
  4. 01:22:681 (5) - hmm i think that i know what you tried to express but placing note on here isn't reallt good for it imo, you'd better to remove it
  5. 01:25:270 (8) - how about removing this note? since there isn't any reasonable sound for a note, removing this note would be great for rhythm
  6. 01:39:287 (7) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note fits better with the vocal imo
  7. 01:42:055 (6,1) - swap these NCs and add a NC on 01:43:216 (2) - this slider for consistency
  8. 01:58:216 (1) - it seems that you gave emphasis with NC here but deleting this NC and adding it on 01:58:930 (5) - here fits much better for consistency and emphasis both


Easy and Normal need more works imo.. there are so many weird rhythms and flows, i really want to avoid saying this but.. you'd better to remap Normal (and Easy if you think it's needed), btw about Hard and Insane, both have nice placements especially on Hard, but Insane has many awkward flows to play orz

well... let's see what will be happend
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic
Fixing, ;_; well.. now i know a BAT's reaction to this map.

Maybe its better to be graved.
Or so it will be a LEGEND :O

Well im gonna stick to mania, trying to improve mapping there. maybe its the best choice ^^

I never knew i get this far in mapping Standard! Im so happy atleast 156 SP ! Y.O.L.O
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite

HelloSCV wrote:

[LilyWhite's Insane]
  1. 00:24:645 (1) - perhaps you had a mistake on this slider No, it's intentional.
  2. 00:29:645 (1) - hmm i think this NC seems unnecessary Fixed.
  3. 00:30:360 (1) - it's a kind of nazi mod lol, anyway how about keeping DS consistently? Hahaha no melt in the jumps.
  4. 01:22:681 (5) - hmm i think that i know what you tried to express but placing note on here isn't reallt good for it imo, you'd better to remove it Ah, right. Fixed.
  5. 01:25:270 (8) - how about removing this note? since there isn't any reasonable sound for a note, removing this note would be great for rhythm In that case, explain where I put my slider afterwards.
  6. 01:39:287 (7) - dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note fits better with the vocal imo Fixed.
  7. 01:42:055 (6,1) - swap these NCs and add a NC on 01:43:216 (2) - this slider for consistency Fixed.
  8. 01:58:216 (1) - it seems that you gave emphasis with NC here but deleting this NC and adding it on 01:58:930 (5) - here fits much better for consistency and emphasis both Aaaaaaand fixed.
*eats HelloSCV*
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47503
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:マッシュルームマザー
Artist:PinocchioP
ArtistUnicode:ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Insane
Source:
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459,197,107859,2,0,L|530:120,2,100,14|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
273,120,108394,6,2,L|273:94,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,192,108930,6,2,B|28:172|28:172|44:192|44:192|56:172|56:172|72:192|72:192|88:172|88:172|100:192|100:192|116:172|116:172|132:192|132:192,1,200,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,88,109644,2,2,P|264:44|376:92,1,200,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,263,110180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,194,110359,2,0,P|219:146|325:138,1,150
330,138,110716,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,270,110894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
123,207,111073,2,0,P|133:157|176:124,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,332,111609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,264,111787,6,0,P|311:210|182:244,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,145,112323,2,0,L|31:106,2,50
137,372,112680,2,0,P|123:331|136:278,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,330,113216,2,4,P|378:342|417:250,1,200,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,250,113752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,290,113930,1,4,0:0:0:0:
225,180,114109,2,2,L|252:166,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,54,114644,6,0,P|511:104|496:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,206,115002,2,0,P|347:156|362:104,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,151,115359,2,0,P|511:196|498:246,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,302,115716,2,0,P|349:252|364:200,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,96,116073,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,116252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,116341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,116430,2,0,L|220:320,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,116787,2,0,P|76:132|212:144,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,311,117323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,252,117502,6,0,P|264:204|368:180,1,150
376,172,117859,2,0,P|424:152|440:100,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,118216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,118394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,118573,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,28,118752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,118930,5,4,0:0:0:0:

PS: I still have the old diff BG, lol.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

HelloSCV wrote:

here's your ticket

[Easy]
  1. same NC and hitsound suggestion with Normal
  2. 00:20:003 (1) - same opinion with Normal
  3. 00:40:360 (4) - i don't prefer to use some slider like this.. how about making straighten slider instead? (not only here but also other silimar sliders)
  4. 01:08:217 (5) - this overlap isn't good imo..
[Normal]
  1. hp -1 for ballancing among diffs
  2. try to rearrange NCs and hitsounds consistently in low diffs
  3. 00:20:003 (1) - what about adding a repeat here? sound on 00:20:717 - here is too strong to let it empty
  4. 00:34:645 (3,4) - considering this is Normal diff i don't think there is anything special reason to decrease DS suddenly
  5. 00:52:145 (1,2,3) - i really don't recommend using 1/4 beats on low diffs, this rhythm works much better than current one imo
  6. 00:58:217 (6) - i'm not sure whether this slider is acceptable enough or not... try changing it for sure?
  7. 01:09:556 (7) - misplaced note?
  8. 01:15:359 (3) - this jump.... isn't recommended, there is no reason to add jump suddenly
[Tsusuko's Hard]
  1. 00:53:395 (7) - add NC for consistency or 01:42:680 (1) - delete this NC for same reason
  2. 00:59:645 (1,3) - i recommend using normal sampleset on the tail of those sliders, it hears better to me
  3. 01:05:359 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:07:859 (5) - according to the vocal sounds, the rhythms on this part seem bit awkawrd i'd rather follow the vocal instead of using symmetric patterns
    example
    you can use this if you want
    160,120,67859,2,0,P|156:160|168:196,1,75
    148,272,68217,6,0,B|192:280|220:256|220:256|252:296,1,112.5
    272,312,68574,2,0,L|356:288,1,75
    412,244,68931,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    392,164,69109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    228,152,69467,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:30:716 (8) - try using soft sampleset instead of normal because there isn't any sound for adding normal sampleset imo
  6. 01:30:806 (9) - also, i think placing triplet like this in Hard diff is little bit inappropriate, since i can hear drum hat sound in blue ticks, placing triplet is acceptable enough i know, but considering this is Hard diff and you didn't add much triplets in previous parts, you'd better to delete this as well, besides, triplet doesn't fit nicely with the music
  7. 01:35:002 (3) - what about reversing this slider using ctrl g? to have better flow
  8. 01:46:609 (1) - remove NC, it isn't needed
  9. 01:48:930 (1,3) - same opinion with 00:59:645 (1,3) - here
  10. 01:48:930 (1) - deleting finish on the head of slider to fit with the music and keep consistency
  11. 01:54:644 (1,3) - same with 00:59:645 (1,3) - here
  12. 01:55:805 - maybe you forgot to set sample as N here

FIXED ALL

Easy and Normal need more works imo.. there are so many weird rhythms and flows, i really want to avoid saying this but.. you'd better to remap Normal (and Easy if you think it's needed), btw about Hard and Insane, both have nice placements especially on Hard, but Insane has many awkward flows to play orz

well... let's see what will be happend
/me sigh

Fine if that's the case ._. remapped sht ill go get mods again :|

star rating plz staph
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
As your request E

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:074 (1,2,3) - 00:37:503 (3) - this slider overlap. try this.
    img
    code
    400,104,36074,6,0,P|440:128|460:168,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    312,116,37145,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    224,140,37503,2,0,P|283:203|368:187,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:38:574 (4,1) - ^ and try this.
    img
  3. 00:43:574 (2,3,4) - try beautiful triangle here.
    img
  4. 00:46:610 (1) - too short spinner. I guess remove spinner.
  5. 00:49:645 (3,4,5,6) - overlap. try this.
    img
    and 00:51:074 (1,2,3) - this. 00:52:502 (3) - I think last 00:53:038 - here.

    img
    00:49:645 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this code
    300,360,49645,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    388,340,50002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    412,252,50359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    348,180,50717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    304,100,51074,6,0,B|348:84|392:100,2,90,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    348,180,52145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    396,256,52502,2,0,B|376:272|348:272|348:272|320:264|320:264|288:264|264:280,1,135,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:53:931 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Why change DS? try DistanceSnap *1.00
  7. 01:02:502 (1) - overlap. 01:01:431 (5) - this slider change note?
    img
  8. 01:02:502 (1,2,3) - Why DS0.9? try *1.00
    img
  9. 01:06:431 (2) - I guess mini danger.(overlap)
  10. 01:35:895 (1) - 00:46:610 (1) - same as here.
try my mod. good luck!
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Satellite wrote:

As your request E

[Easy]
  1. 00:36:074 (1,2,3) - 00:37:503 (3) - this slider overlap. try this.
    img
    code
    400,104,36074,6,0,P|440:128|460:168,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    312,116,37145,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    224,140,37503,2,0,P|283:203|368:187,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:38:574 (4,1) - ^ and try this.
    img
  3. 00:43:574 (2,3,4) - try beautiful triangle here.
    img
  4. 00:46:610 (1) - too short spinner. I guess remove spinner.
  5. 00:49:645 (3,4,5,6) - overlap. try this.
    img
    and 00:51:074 (1,2,3) - this. 00:52:502 (3) - I think last 00:53:038 - here.

    img
    00:49:645 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - this code
    300,360,49645,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    388,340,50002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    412,252,50359,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    348,180,50717,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    304,100,51074,6,0,B|348:84|392:100,2,90,4|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    348,180,52145,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    396,256,52502,2,0,B|376:272|348:272|348:272|320:264|320:264|288:264|264:280,1,135,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  6. 00:53:931 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Why change DS? try DistanceSnap *1.00
  7. 01:02:502 (1) - overlap. 01:01:431 (5) - this slider change note?
    img
  8. 01:02:502 (1,2,3) - Why DS0.9? try *1.00
    img
  9. 01:06:431 (2) - I guess mini danger.(overlap)
  10. 01:35:895 (1) - 00:46:610 (1) - same as here.
try my mod. good luck!
fixed thanks!
LexiaLovesU
822 posts
Joined June 2012
LexiaLovesU
[Easy]
  1. 00:30:360 (1) - The transition between 1 and 2 is a bit iffy since you made 1's tail curve greatly away in the opposite direction of 2's head causing awkward gameplay for newbs who are just starting out in the game. This type of positioning is more commonly found in Hards and Insanes. what im thinking is that you were starting to think that doing the same postioning was getting boring so you wanted to do something different. That is a good thought its a good thing to be able to tell when things will get boring, in easy its best to keep things as clean as possible that means trying to come up with things that are new and fun but while still giving a clean gameplay for newbs. Something like this
    SPOILER
  2. 00:34:645 (2) - I would suggest ending the slider at 00:35:181 so that it hits the note there properly and then add a repeat so that it hits the note there and makes the rhythm still in easy standards. This is one way to make a red tick more acceptable in a easy diff just don't this a lot though because it should only be used when nessicary like when there is a red tick rhythm.
  3. 00:37:503 (3,4,1) - try to avoid overlapping like this in easy it doesnt look the very nice. Overlaps can be very avoidable I would suggest trying to do a pattern like this so it looks neat and clean and new
    SPOILER
  4. 00:41:431 (3) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard >< but if you wanna keep it then I would suggest you curve 2's tail towards 3 so that the transition is not awkward also I would make sure that 2 and 3 don't have a flow that is abrupt by abrupt I mean like you see that 3 is literally to the side of 2 and then directly below 1 well if you draw the flow between them you will see that they create a sharp flow which in easy is sorta difficult to hit. in easy you would like to have a more gradually flow something as a light curve like this
    SPOILER
    instead of a sharp one like the current one owo
  5. 00:43:574 (2,3,4) - make sure these flow gradually as well :D
  6. 00:44:645 (1,2,3,4) - ^^
  7. 00:46:788 (5) - Make this start of the white tick since that is when the sound is most prominent also moving this to the whit tick will make this easier to hit for newbies since the bpm is fast for newbs they will have a extremely difficult time trying to hit it >< then end this on the Stanza or big whit tick because if you listen closely that is where there is a another note owo
  8. 00:48:217 (1) - Make sure these don't overlap 5 since that is pretty confusing and not very nice looking ><
  9. 00:48:217 (1,2) - Make sure these 2 flow nicely like this
    SPOILER
    also I suggest that you make these 2 identical and to do that you just click on the slider and press crtl+c and then go onto 00:48:931 an press crtl+v to paste it then click on the new slider and press crtl+h then crtl+ j then crtl+g.

    As of now I will stop mentioning gradually flow so that you can be able to look for them yourself this will help you improve upon finding them and be able to prevent them in the future owo
  10. 00:50:717 (4) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard
  11. 00:52:502 (3) - add a repeat so that it hits the note on the white tick and makes the rhythm still in easy standards.
  12. 00:56:788 (5) - NC here Try keep the pattern of NC
  13. 00:57:859 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 00:56:788 (1,2,3) - This is a very nice pattern good job :D just make them identical like this owo
    SPOILER
  15. 00:59:645 - pls add a circle here it feel so empty without one ><
  16. 01:00:002 (2) - make sure that you improve on this note >< you can try something like this owo
    SPOILER
  17. 01:02:145 (5) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard
Okay use this and check the whole easy diff since most of the problems are the same in here. once you have done this call me and Ill check the whole easy diff ;) then when im done with easy ill give a whole mod owo so NO KD
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

LexiaLovesU wrote:

[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:30:360 (1) - The transition between 1 and 2 is a bit iffy since you made 1's tail curve greatly away in the opposite direction of 2's head causing awkward gameplay for newbs who are just starting out in the game. This type of positioning is more commonly found in Hards and Insanes. what im thinking is that you were starting to think that doing the same postioning was getting boring so you wanted to do something different. That is a good thought its a good thing to be able to tell when things will get boring, in easy its best to keep things as clean as possible that means trying to come up with things that are new and fun but while still giving a clean gameplay for newbs. Something like this [spoilerbox]
00:34:645 (2) - I would suggest ending the slider at 00:35:181 so that it hits the note there properly and then add a repeat so that it hits the note there and makes the rhythm still in easy standards. This is one way to make a red tick more acceptable in a easy diff just don't this a lot though because it should only be used when nessicary like when there is a red tick rhythm.00:37:503 (3,4,1) - try to avoid overlapping like this in easy it doesnt look the very nice. Overlaps can be very avoidable I would suggest trying to do a pattern like this so it looks neat and clean and new
SPOILER
00:41:431 (3) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard >< but if you wanna keep it then I would suggest you curve 2's tail towards 3 so that the transition is not awkward also I would make sure that 2 and 3 don't have a flow that is abrupt by abrupt I mean like you see that 3 is literally to the side of 2 and then directly below 1 well if you draw the flow between them you will see that they create a sharp flow which in easy is sorta difficult to hit. in easy you would like to have a more gradually flow something as a light curve like this
SPOILER
instead of a sharp one like the current one owo00:43:574 (2,3,4) - make sure these flow gradually as well :D00:44:645 (1,2,3,4) - ^^ 00:46:788 (5) - Make this start of the white tick since that is when the sound is most prominent also moving this to the whit tick will make this easier to hit for newbies since the bpm is fast for newbs they will have a extremely difficult time trying to hit it >< then end this on the Stanza or big whit tick because if you listen closely that is where there is a another note owo00:48:217 (1) - Make sure these don't overlap 5 since that is pretty confusing and not very nice looking ><00:48:217 (1,2) - Make sure these 2 flow nicely like this
SPOILER
also I suggest that you make these 2 identical and to do that you just click on the slider and press crtl+c and then go onto 00:48:931 an press crtl+v to paste it then click on the new slider and press crtl+h then crtl+ j then crtl+g.

As of now I will stop mentioning gradually flow so that you can be able to look for them yourself this will help you improve upon finding them and be able to prevent them in the future owo
00:50:717 (4) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard 00:52:502 (3) - add a repeat so that it hits the note on the white tick and makes the rhythm still in easy standards.00:56:788 (5) - NC here Try keep the pattern of NC00:57:859 (1) - Remove NC00:56:788 (1,2,3) - This is a very nice pattern good job :D just make them identical like this owo
SPOILER
00:59:645 - pls add a circle here it feel so empty without one ><01:00:002 (2) - make sure that you improve on this note >< you can try something like this owo
SPOILER
01:02:145 (5) - I highly suggest removing this there is a tiny sound but it not very prominent . I would suggest removing this cause you don't want your easy to get too hard [/spoilerbox]
Okay use this and check the whole easy diff since most of the problems are the same in here. once you have done this call me and Ill check the whole easy diff ;) then when im done with easy ill give a whole mod owo so NO KD

Done all of that. check some overlap ( i hope ididnt miss one ;w;) Ohmygod Lexi4BAT
Although im not sure for the patterns you gave me from the picture is looks really different xD
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
Hi hi hi ~

[General]
  1. clean
[Insane]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    01:48:307 - snap to 01:48:305
    01:54:021 - snap to 01:54:019
    01:54:378 - snap to 01:54:376
  2. 00:14:289 why you didn't start mapping there like the others diffs?
  3. 00:24:645 (1) - Is better if you finish this slider in 00:24:824
  4. 00:25:003 I really don't get what are you trying to follow here is not better using 1/2 slider in 00:25:003 (2) - and then a circle in 00:25:360 (3) - (due to the highest pitch), like:
    SPOILER
  5. 00:25:360 add finish or clap? to bring more emphasis to the music
  6. 00:26:074 (1) - same as above ^
  7. 00:26:610 add clap
  8. 00:28:217 ^
  9. 00:28:038 (2,3) - This rhythm can be better, actually you are not following the music correctly IMO, try this:
    SPOILER
  10. 00:28:931 add finish
  11. 00:30:270 nothing in the music here, consider to remove this beat
  12. 00:31:074 add clap
  13. 00:31:788 add finish or whistle
  14. 00:32:145 (2) - remove whistle in the head and add it in the repeat, acoording to the music
  15. 00:33:574 (2) - whistle in the repeat too, following the music :3
  16. 00:37:413 nothing in the music here use 2 circles instead, like:
    SPOILER
  17. 00:38:931 (1,4) - try to avoid the overlap doesn't look nice IMO
  18. 00:41:788 remove clap? just keep finish sound better IMO
  19. 00:43:217 (4) - following your combo pattern, you are missing one here 00:43:217 (4) -
  20. 00:43:753 (7,8) - ending sliders on heavy beats doesn't follow the song properly, try this instead:
    SPOILER
  21. 00:46:610 (1) - if you are following the vocals, make more sense start the spinner in 00:46:520 and end it in 00:47:503
  22. 00:48:931 (3,2) - stack this properly
  23. 00:54:645 (4) - should be a triplet here :>
  24. 00:55:002 (5) - ^
  25. 00:55:895 (3,4) - similar to 00:43:753 for this case try:
    SPOILER
  26. 00:58:217 (1,2,3) - whistle spam doesn't sound nice try to remove some of them
  27. 01:00:716 (4,5) - this rhythm doesn't represent the song properly (also should be a NC in 01:01:074), change it to:
    SPOILER
  28. 01:14:645 (2,3) - I don't feel this rhythm with the music, maybe change this to:
    SPOILER
  29. 01:18:216 (5) - missing NC?
  30. 01:19:288 (9,1) - also the rhythm here can be better, try:
    SPOILER
  31. 01:21:074 NC should be here instead of 01:21:252 (1) -
  32. 01:21:966 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider will represent better the vocals
  33. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish from slider body
  34. 01:29:466 (5,6) - similar to 00:43:753 , for this case try some like:
    SPOILER
  35. 01:30:359 (8) - same as above, try this:
    SPOILER
  36. 01:33:752 you need to add a circle here since is the same sound at 01:33:038 (5,6,7,8) -
  37. 01:35:895 (1) - same as 00:46:610
  38. 01:38:752 (5,6) - another rhythm issue, try this:
    SPOILER
  39. 01:41:609 (5,1) - same as above
  40. 01:50:359 (5,8) - try to avoid the overlap

    Diff is fine, but some rhythms can be better IMO
[Hard]
  1. OD -1 (6) for better diff spread
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    01:41:789 - snap to 01:41:787
    01:42:414 - snap to 01:42:412
    01:43:307 - snap to 01:43:305
    01:50:003 - snap to 01:50:001
    01:55:003 - snap to 01:55:001
  3. 00:25:360 (3) - remove whistle from the tail and add it in the head fit better the music
  4. 00:26:074 add finish in the head
  5. 00:26:610 add whistle or clap? you can hear the music need some hitsound there
  6. 00:27:503 (1) - add finish in the head
  7. 00:28:217 (3) - same as 00:25:360
  8. 00:28:931 (5) - add finish in the head
  9. 00:30:360 (1) - same as above
  10. 00:31:074 (3) - same as 00:25:360
  11. 00:31:788 missing finish in the head
  12. 00:32:324 add whistle in the head
  13. 00:33:217 add finish in the head and swap NC 00:33:217 (9,1) -
  14. 00:33:931 (2) - same as 00:25:360
  15. 00:34:645 add finish in the head
  16. 00:37:503 add whistle in the head
  17. 00:46:520 is better to finish the spinner in 00:47:503
  18. 00:55:359 (5,6) - I preffer if you stack this for consistency with 00:49:645 (5,6) -
  19. 00:59:288 low the volume to 40%? 80% is too much for this part imo
  20. 01:06:788 (5,6) - stack this properly
  21. 01:09:109 (4,5) - you need to add more distance here, due to the time difference in the timeline
  22. 01:19:466 (8) - this rhythm doesn't represent the song properly, since the sound at 01:19:645 need a click action due to the strong sound, try this:
    SPOILER
  23. 01:23:931 add finish in the head
  24. 01:30:895 (9,1) - this rhythm doesn't follow the music properly, try this isntead:
    SPOILER
  25. 01:35:806 (1) - same as 00:46:520
  26. 01:44:644 (5,6) - stack this properly
  27. 01:48:573 same as 00:59:288

    actually this is a fun hard, just try to add some more hitsounds <:
[Normal]
  1. AR +1 (5) for better diff spread
  2. 00:24:645 (1) - add finish in the head and whislte in the tail
  3. 00:26:074 (2,3) - add whistles
  4. 00:27:503 (1) - remove whistle and add finish
  5. 00:27:503 (1,2) - use a properly distance between them, this is not ok for a normal diff
  6. 00:28:931 (2) - add whistle in the head
  7. 00:32:860 (4) - use two circles instead for better rhythm, you can notice how strong is the sound at 00:33:217 -, It need a clickable action.
  8. 00:33:217 remove whistle and add finish
  9. 00:35:181 (3,1) - use a properly distance
  10. 00:37:145 (2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:38:574 (4,1) - ^
  12. 00:40:360 (3) - this slider shape is not rankable, use a normal one instead
  13. 00:41:788 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - all this part have inconsistency spacing, try to rearrange them
  14. 00:46:431 (5) - add a spinner instead of the slider? fit better the music
  15. 00:48:217 (1) - remove clap and add finish
  16. 00:48:574 add clap
  17. 00:48:931 remove clap and add whistle
  18. 00:52:145 (6) - add clap
  19. 00:52:502 remove clap
  20. 00:52:859 add clap
  21. 00:55:359 (3,4,5) - Fix the distance
  22. 00:58:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - wow o:, but I believe this pattern is not ok for a normal diff, try a simple rhythm instead
  23. 01:00:002 add finish
  24. 01:01:074 (3) - whistle in the head clap in the tail
  25. 01:02:502 (1) - remove clap from the head and tail
  26. 01:03:931 (3) - remove clap from the head
  27. 01:05:717 add clap
  28. 01:06:788 (3) - 2 circles fit better the vocals than a slider, also you are using too much sliders in this section.
  29. 01:09:645 add finish
  30. 01:10:181 (2,3) - a slider fit better the music, also is more suitable for a normal diff
  31. 01:10:716 (4,5) - ^
  32. 01:12:502 (1,2,3) - a 1/2 repeat slider fit better for a normal diff
  33. 01:14:645 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
  34. 01:14:288 add clap
  35. 01:15:002 ^
  36. 01:15:359 add whistle in the head and clap in the tail is better
  37. 01:17:145 (2,3) - use a properly distance
  38. 01:16:788 (1) - add finish
  39. 01:17:859 (3,4) - use this rhythm instead, is more accurate with the music:
    SPOILER
  40. 01:21:074 (3) - remove clap from the head and add whistle
  41. 01:22:145 (5,6) - use a properly distance
  42. 01:22:502 (6) - add NC, also add finish on it
  43. 01:25:359 (1) - remove clap just keep the finish
  44. 01:25:359 (1,2) - this rhythm doesnt fit the song, try this:
    SPOILER
  45. 01:29:288 (2) - use two circles instead for better rhythm
  46. 01:30:002 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - use a properly distance in this part pls
  47. 01:35:716 (5) - a spinner fit better the music
  48. 01:37:502 (1) - add finish and remove clap
  49. 01:42:859 (1) - use two circles instead also the NC should be in 01:43:216
  50. 01:44:287 (3) - use circles instead for variation, also for better rhythm
  51. 01:46:073 (5) - missing NC
  52. 01:48:930 you should add a circle here like you did on previous kiai
  53. 01:50:002 (2) - use two circles instead for better rhythm
  54. 01:56:073 (3,4) - use a properly distance here


I'm sorry is too late here, you can take hitsounds and rhythms suggestion in normal and apply them to the easy diff too, GL don't give up :3
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Natsu wrote:

Hi hi hi ~

[General]
  1. clean


[Hard]
  1. OD -1 (6) for better diff spread
  2. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    01:41:789 - snap to 01:41:787
    01:42:414 - snap to 01:42:412
    01:43:307 - snap to 01:43:305
    01:50:003 - snap to 01:50:001
    01:55:003 - snap to 01:55:001
  3. 00:25:360 (3) - remove whistle from the tail and add it in the head fit better the music
  4. 00:26:074 add finish in the head
  5. 00:26:610 add whistle or clap? you can hear the music need some hitsound there
  6. 00:27:503 (1) - add finish in the head
  7. 00:28:217 (3) - same as 00:25:360
  8. 00:28:931 (5) - add finish in the head
  9. 00:30:360 (1) - same as above
  10. 00:31:074 (3) - same as 00:25:360
  11. 00:31:788 missing finish in the head
  12. 00:32:324 add whistle in the head
  13. 00:33:217 add finish in the head and swap NC 00:33:217 (9,1) -
  14. 00:33:931 (2) - same as 00:25:360
  15. 00:34:645 add finish in the head
  16. 00:37:503 add whistle in the head
  17. 00:46:520 is better to finish the spinner in 00:47:503
  18. 00:55:359 (5,6) - I preffer if you stack this for consistency with 00:49:645 (5,6) -
  19. 00:59:288 low the volume to 40%? 80% is too much for this part imo
  20. 01:06:788 (5,6) - stack this properly
  21. 01:09:109 (4,5) - you need to add more distance here, due to the time difference in the timeline
  22. 01:19:466 (8) - this rhythm doesn't represent the song properly, since the sound at 01:19:645 need a click action due to the strong sound, try this:
    SPOILER
  23. 01:23:931 add finish in the head
  24. 01:30:895 (9,1) - this rhythm doesn't follow the music properly, try this isntead:
    SPOILER
  25. 01:35:806 (1) - same as 00:46:520
  26. 01:44:644 (5,6) - stack this properly
  27. 01:48:573 same as 00:59:288

    actually this is a fun hard, just try to add some more hitsounds <:
[Normal]
  1. AR +1 (5) for better diff spread
  2. 00:24:645 (1) - add finish in the head and whislte in the tail
  3. 00:26:074 (2,3) - add whistles
  4. 00:27:503 (1) - remove whistle and add finish
  5. 00:27:503 (1,2) - use a properly distance between them, this is not ok for a normal diff
  6. 00:28:931 (2) - add whistle in the head
  7. 00:32:860 (4) - use two circles instead for better rhythm, you can notice how strong is the sound at 00:33:217 -, It need a clickable action.
  8. 00:33:217 remove whistle and add finish
  9. 00:35:181 (3,1) - use a properly distance
  10. 00:37:145 (2,3) - same as above
  11. 00:38:574 (4,1) - ^
  12. 00:40:360 (3) - this slider shape is not rankable, use a normal one instead
  13. 00:41:788 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - all this part have inconsistency spacing, try to rearrange them
  14. 00:46:431 (5) - add a spinner instead of the slider? fit better the music
  15. 00:48:217 (1) - remove clap and add finish
  16. 00:48:574 add clap
  17. 00:48:931 remove clap and add whistle
  18. 00:52:145 (6) - add clap
  19. 00:52:502 remove clap
  20. 00:52:859 add clap
  21. 00:55:359 (3,4,5) - Fix the distance
  22. 00:58:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - wow o:, but I believe this pattern is not ok for a normal diff, try a simple rhythm instead
  23. 01:00:002 add finish
  24. 01:01:074 (3) - whistle in the head clap in the tail
  25. 01:02:502 (1) - remove clap from the head and tail
  26. 01:03:931 (3) - remove clap from the head
  27. 01:05:717 add clap
  28. 01:06:788 (3) - 2 circles fit better the vocals than a slider, also you are using too much sliders in this section.
  29. 01:09:645 add finish
  30. 01:10:181 (2,3) - a slider fit better the music, also is more suitable for a normal diff
  31. 01:10:716 (4,5) - ^
  32. 01:12:502 (1,2,3) - a 1/2 repeat slider fit better for a normal diff
  33. 01:14:645 (2) - remove clap and add whistle
  34. 01:14:288 add clap
  35. 01:15:002 ^
  36. 01:15:359 add whistle in the head and clap in the tail is better
  37. 01:17:145 (2,3) - use a properly distance
  38. 01:16:788 (1) - add finish
  39. 01:17:859 (3,4) - use this rhythm instead, is more accurate with the music:
    SPOILER
  40. 01:21:074 (3) - remove clap from the head and add whistle
  41. 01:22:145 (5,6) - use a properly distance
  42. 01:22:502 (6) - add NC, also add finish on it
  43. 01:25:359 (1) - remove clap just keep the finish
  44. 01:25:359 (1,2) - this rhythm doesnt fit the song, try this:
    SPOILER
  45. 01:29:288 (2) - use two circles instead for better rhythm
  46. 01:30:002 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - use a properly distance in this part pls
  47. 01:35:716 (5) - a spinner fit better the music
  48. 01:37:502 (1) - add finish and remove clap
  49. 01:42:859 (1) - use two circles instead also the NC should be in 01:43:216
  50. 01:44:287 (3) - use circles instead for variation, also for better rhythm
  51. 01:46:073 (5) - missing NC
  52. 01:48:930 you should add a circle here like you did on previous kiai
  53. 01:50:002 (2) - use two circles instead for better rhythm
  54. 01:56:073 (3,4) - use a properly distance here


I'm sorry is too late here, you can take hitsounds and rhythms suggestion in normal and apply them to the easy diff too, GL don't give up :3
omgus thx! fixed this all
arviejhay
1,413 posts
Joined August 2009
arviejhay
hi from my modding queue
sorry late mod kasi school
[Easy]
Enable Letterbox para di mag conflict sa other diffs
00:20:717(1)- remove this extra slider
00:30:360(3) - slider start - add whistle
00:46:610(5) - ang hirap nito para sa easy
00:48:217(1), (2) - slider start - remove clap
00:50:717 - add a circle and add clap?
01:01:074(6) - remove clap
01:01:431(7) - slider start - add clap - slider end - remove clap
01:20:716(4) - add clap
01:21:074(5) - slider start - remove clap
01:22:145(6) - add clap
01:35:895(5) - kapareho ng 00:46:610

[Normal]
Enable letterbox para di mag conflict sa other diffs
check mo un aimod check distance snaps may 3 warning, fix mo
00:20:717(1) - remove this extra slider
00:46:074(4) - move mo to sa timeline to 00:46:163
00:46:163(4) - stack mo sa kasunod na slider x:40 y:176
01:35:359(4) - kapareho ng 00:46:074 at 00:46:163

na fix na ata to nasa taas ko
check mo nalang
good luck modding
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
A quick look at the easy.

00:20:003 (1) - I don't understand why you're using a different rhythm from 00:14:289 (1) -
00:28:931 (2) - There's a much better strong beat at 00:30:360 (3) - to end this slider on. It'll also make it less boring since you're changing the rhythm up a little bit.
00:30:360 (3) - New combo since the musical phrase is repeating
00:36:074 (1,2,3,4) - I think instead of going into a metronome-centric (1/1/1) rhythm, you should try to continue what you started with 00:34:645 (2) - . Maybe try a simpler rhythm like this

00:44:645 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of trying to hit every beat in the song, simplify it.

00:46:610 (5) - And no, please don't use something like this in an Easy. You can't hear it, it's a 1/2 after another 1/2 rhythm... save it for a Normal/Hard.
00:53:931 (1,3) - Try not to overlap hit objects like this. It makes it really difficult to read the patterns for new people.

Anyway, a couple ideas for you to play with. See if you can apply similar fixes for the rest of the map.

Another thing I noticed is that your new combo progression is really strange. I recommend you try changing every two tall white ticks in the time line. That will fit most of the musical phrasing and make more sense as you play.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Garven wrote:

A quick look at the easy.

00:20:003 (1) - I don't understand why you're using a different rhythm from 00:14:289 (1) -
00:28:931 (2) - There's a much better strong beat at 00:30:360 (3) - to end this slider on. It'll also make it less boring since you're changing the rhythm up a little bit.
00:30:360 (3) - New combo since the musical phrase is repeating
00:36:074 (1,2,3,4) - I think instead of going into a metronome-centric (1/1/1) rhythm, you should try to continue what you started with 00:34:645 (2) - . Maybe try a simpler rhythm like this

00:44:645 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of trying to hit every beat in the song, simplify it.

00:46:610 (5) - And no, please don't use something like this in an Easy. You can't hear it, it's a 1/2 after another 1/2 rhythm... save it for a Normal/Hard.
00:53:931 (1,3) - Try not to overlap hit objects like this. It makes it really difficult to read the patterns for new people.

Anyway, a couple ideas for you to play with. See if you can apply similar fixes for the rest of the map.

Another thing I noticed is that your new combo progression is really strange. I recommend you try changing every two tall white ticks in the time line. That will fit most of the musical phrasing and make more sense as you play.
Fixed all of this! Thanks again garven!

arviejhay wrote:

hi from my modding queue
sorry late mod kasi school
[Easy]
Enable Letterbox para di mag conflict sa other diffs
00:20:717(1)- remove this extra slider
00:30:360(3) - slider start - add whistle
00:46:610(5) - ang hirap nito para sa easy
00:48:217(1), (2) - slider start - remove clap
00:50:717 - add a circle and add clap?
01:01:074(6) - remove clap
01:01:431(7) - slider start - add clap - slider end - remove clap
01:20:716(4) - add clap
01:21:074(5) - slider start - remove clap
01:22:145(6) - add clap
01:35:895(5) - kapareho ng 00:46:610

[Normal]
Enable letterbox para di mag conflict sa other diffs
check mo un aimod check distance snaps may 3 warning, fix mo
00:20:717(1) - remove this extra slider
00:46:074(4) - move mo to sa timeline to 00:46:163
00:46:163(4) - stack mo sa kasunod na slider x:40 y:176
01:35:359(4) - kapareho ng 00:46:074 at 00:46:163

na fix na ata to nasa taas ko
check mo nalang
good luck modding
Salamat sa pag mod! Helpful mod ^^ marami namn akong nafix ^^ goodwork! :)

Thanks for modding arvie and garven! pleasures all yours! ^^
Last edited by Garven , edited 1 time in total.
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite

Natsu wrote:

[Insane]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    01:48:307 - snap to 01:48:305
    01:54:021 - snap to 01:54:019
    01:54:378 - snap to 01:54:376 All fixed.
  2. 00:14:289 why you didn't start mapping there like the others diffs? Simply because in the past, many people were complaining about a sudden spinner being placed here, and I cannot really find anything to replace it. So yeah, emptiness here.
  3. 00:24:645 (1) - Is better if you finish this slider in 00:24:824 Woops. Fixed.
  4. 00:25:003 I really don't get what are you trying to follow here is not better using 1/2 slider in 00:25:003 (2) - and then a circle in 00:25:360 (3) - (due to the highest pitch), like:
    SPOILER
    And fixed!
  5. 00:25:360 add finish or clap? to bring more emphasis to the music No.
  6. 00:26:074 (1) - same as above ^ same as above ^
  7. 00:26:610 add clap ARE YOU OBSESSED WITH CLAPS? I AM, CAPTAIN!!! ...A.K.A no.
  8. 00:28:217 ^ ^
  9. 00:28:038 (2,3) - This rhythm can be better, actually you are not following the music correctly IMO, try this:
    SPOILER
    ...No sorry.
  10. 00:28:931 add finish ...No.
  11. 00:30:270 nothing in the music here, consider to remove this beat And then it gets utterly confusing and I dunno where to put everything afterwards ;A;
  12. 00:31:074 add clap You seriously have an obsession with claps. XD
  13. 00:31:788 add finish or whistle ...And other hitsounds.
  14. 00:32:145 (2) - remove whistle in the head and add it in the repeat, acoording to the music Hallelujah I fixed it. Lol
  15. 00:33:574 (2) - whistle in the repeat too, following the music :3 Fixed.
  16. 00:37:413 nothing in the music here use 2 circles instead, like:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  17. 00:38:931 (1,4) - try to avoid the overlap doesn't look nice IMO Fixed.
  18. 00:41:788 remove clap? just keep finish sound better IMO But clap is good here ;A;
  19. 00:43:217 (4) - following your combo pattern, you are missing one here 00:43:217 (4) - Fixed???
  20. 00:43:753 (7,8) - ending sliders on heavy beats doesn't follow the song properly, try this instead:
    SPOILER
    No.
  21. 00:46:610 (1) - if you are following the vocals, make more sense start the spinner in 00:46:520 and end it in 00:47:503
  22. 00:48:931 (3,2) - stack this properly WHERE. >>
  23. 00:54:645 (4) - should be a triplet here :> Uh nah.
  24. 00:55:002 (5) - ^ ^
  25. 00:55:895 (3,4) - similar to 00:43:753 for this case try:
    SPOILER
    ...No.
  26. 00:58:217 (1,2,3) - whistle spam doesn't sound nice try to remove some of them Removed some.
  27. 01:00:716 (4,5) - this rhythm doesn't represent the song properly (also should be a NC in 01:01:074), change it to:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  28. 01:14:645 (2,3) - I don't feel this rhythm with the music, maybe change this to:
    SPOILER
    No sorry.
  29. 01:18:216 (5) - missing NC? missing NC.
  30. 01:19:288 (9,1) - also the rhythm here can be better, try:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  31. 01:21:074 NC should be here instead of 01:21:252 (1) - Fixed.
  32. 01:21:966 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider will represent better the vocals Fixed.
  33. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish from slider body Fixed.
  34. 01:29:466 (5,6) - similar to 00:43:753 , for this case try some like:
    SPOILER
    Natsu hates my sliders. (Not fixed btw, I find it good as it is. unu
  35. 01:30:359 (8) - same as above, try this:
    SPOILER
    No.
  36. 01:33:752 you need to add a circle here since is the same sound at 01:33:038 (5,6,7,8) - Juuuust hoping the overlapping won't disturb anybody's souls. Fixed.
  37. 01:35:895 (1) - same as 00:46:610 Fixed.
  38. 01:38:752 (5,6) - another rhythm issue, try this:
    SPOILER
  39. 01:41:609 (5,1) - same as above No.
  40. 01:50:359 (5,8) - try to avoid the overlap Fixed.

    Diff is fine, but some rhythms can be better IMO
Thanks for the mod.
*eats Natsu*
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47503
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:マッシュルームマザー
Artist:PinocchioP
ArtistUnicode:ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
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YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

LilyWhite wrote:

Natsu wrote:

[Insane]
  1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    SPOILER
    01:48:307 - snap to 01:48:305
    01:54:021 - snap to 01:54:019
    01:54:378 - snap to 01:54:376 All fixed.
  2. 00:14:289 why you didn't start mapping there like the others diffs? Simply because in the past, many people were complaining about a sudden spinner being placed here, and I cannot really find anything to replace it. So yeah, emptiness here.
  3. 00:24:645 (1) - Is better if you finish this slider in 00:24:824 Woops. Fixed.
  4. 00:25:003 I really don't get what are you trying to follow here is not better using 1/2 slider in 00:25:003 (2) - and then a circle in 00:25:360 (3) - (due to the highest pitch), like:
    SPOILER
    And fixed!
  5. 00:25:360 add finish or clap? to bring more emphasis to the music No.
  6. 00:26:074 (1) - same as above ^ same as above ^
  7. 00:26:610 add clap ARE YOU OBSESSED WITH CLAPS? I AM, CAPTAIN!!! ...A.K.A no.
  8. 00:28:217 ^ ^
  9. 00:28:038 (2,3) - This rhythm can be better, actually you are not following the music correctly IMO, try this:
    SPOILER
    ...No sorry.
  10. 00:28:931 add finish ...No.
  11. 00:30:270 nothing in the music here, consider to remove this beat And then it gets utterly confusing and I dunno where to put everything afterwards ;A;
  12. 00:31:074 add clap You seriously have an obsession with claps. XD
  13. 00:31:788 add finish or whistle ...And other hitsounds.
  14. 00:32:145 (2) - remove whistle in the head and add it in the repeat, acoording to the music Hallelujah I fixed it. Lol
  15. 00:33:574 (2) - whistle in the repeat too, following the music :3 Fixed.
  16. 00:37:413 nothing in the music here use 2 circles instead, like:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  17. 00:38:931 (1,4) - try to avoid the overlap doesn't look nice IMO Fixed.
  18. 00:41:788 remove clap? just keep finish sound better IMO But clap is good here ;A;
  19. 00:43:217 (4) - following your combo pattern, you are missing one here 00:43:217 (4) - Fixed???
  20. 00:43:753 (7,8) - ending sliders on heavy beats doesn't follow the song properly, try this instead:
    SPOILER
    No.
  21. 00:46:610 (1) - if you are following the vocals, make more sense start the spinner in 00:46:520 and end it in 00:47:503
  22. 00:48:931 (3,2) - stack this properly WHERE. >>
  23. 00:54:645 (4) - should be a triplet here :> Uh nah.
  24. 00:55:002 (5) - ^ ^
  25. 00:55:895 (3,4) - similar to 00:43:753 for this case try:
    SPOILER
    ...No.
  26. 00:58:217 (1,2,3) - whistle spam doesn't sound nice try to remove some of them Removed some.
  27. 01:00:716 (4,5) - this rhythm doesn't represent the song properly (also should be a NC in 01:01:074), change it to:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  28. 01:14:645 (2,3) - I don't feel this rhythm with the music, maybe change this to:
    SPOILER
    No sorry.
  29. 01:18:216 (5) - missing NC? missing NC.
  30. 01:19:288 (9,1) - also the rhythm here can be better, try:
    SPOILER
    Fixed.
  31. 01:21:074 NC should be here instead of 01:21:252 (1) - Fixed.
  32. 01:21:966 (3) - 1/2 repeat slider will represent better the vocals Fixed.
  33. 01:23:931 (1) - remove finish from slider body Fixed.
  34. 01:29:466 (5,6) - similar to 00:43:753 , for this case try some like:
    SPOILER
    Natsu hates my sliders. (Not fixed btw, I find it good as it is. unu
  35. 01:30:359 (8) - same as above, try this:
    SPOILER
    No.
  36. 01:33:752 you need to add a circle here since is the same sound at 01:33:038 (5,6,7,8) - Juuuust hoping the overlapping won't disturb anybody's souls. Fixed.
  37. 01:35:895 (1) - same as 00:46:610 Fixed.
  38. 01:38:752 (5,6) - another rhythm issue, try this:
    SPOILER
  39. 01:41:609 (5,1) - same as above No.
  40. 01:50:359 (5,8) - try to avoid the overlap Fixed.

    Diff is fine, but some rhythms can be better IMO
Thanks for the mod.
*eats Natsu*
osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:マッシュルームマザー
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Version:LilyWhite's Insane
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256,136,60181,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,164,60359,2,0,P|112:220|152:264,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,109,60716,2,0,P|214:69|292:68,1,100,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,52,61074,5,0,0:0:0:0:
461,191,61341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,191,61431,2,0,L|462:291,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,192,61788,2,0,L|348:84,1,100
268,220,62145,2,0,P|308:268|368:272,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,264,62502,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,268,62681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,62859,2,0,P|136:88|192:72,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,63216,2,0,P|44:176|156:200,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,204,63574,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,276,63752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
109,54,63931,6,0,P|188:92|204:148,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,168,64288,2,0,P|272:168|336:40,1,200,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,192,64824,2,2,L|404:220,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,136,65359,6,0,P|56:116|32:68,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,204,66074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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416,152,67324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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225,116,69288,1,8,0:0:0:0:
114,216,69467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,235,69645,6,2,P|368:252|421:226,1,100,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,238,70002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,45,70181,2,2,P|296:84|294:140,1,100
97,141,70538,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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301,158,71074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
122,66,71252,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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328,64,72681,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,73216,12,12,73931,0:0:0:0:
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248,270,76252,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,260,76431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
154,135,76609,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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275,172,77324,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,132,78752,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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284,140,79645,6,0,P|328:128|376:148,1,87.500000834465,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,260,80002,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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381,317,80984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,300,81074,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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256,104,82502,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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404,40,84824,1,2,0:0:0:0:
409,61,84913,1,2,0:0:0:0:
414,81,85002,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,101,85091,1,2,0:0:0:0:
426,122,85181,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,142,85270,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,162,85359,6,0,P|454:208|366:281,1,175.00000166893,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,151,85895,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,23,86074,2,0,P|312:71|265:89,1,87.500000834465,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,219,86431,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,120,86609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,251,86788,2,0,P|259:291|346:279,1,131.250001251698,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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367,308,99287,2,0,P|360:216|320:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,184,103216,6,0,P|145:140|93:135,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,208,103930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,297,104109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,155,104287,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,297,104466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
405,129,104644,6,0,B|380:77|336:75|320:75|320:75|301:33,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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249,177,105359,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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136,364,106430,1,8,0:0:0:0:
171,167,106609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,106787,2,0,P|316:308|344:360,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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409,253,107591,1,0,0:0:0:0:
426,234,107680,1,0,0:0:0:0:
443,216,107769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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273,120,108394,6,2,L|273:94,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,200,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,88,109644,2,2,P|264:44|376:92,1,200,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,263,110180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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259,270,110894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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205,332,111609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,264,111787,6,0,P|311:210|182:244,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,145,112323,2,0,L|31:106,2,50
137,372,112680,2,0,P|123:331|136:278,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,330,113216,2,4,P|378:342|417:250,1,200,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,250,113752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,290,113930,1,4,0:0:0:0:
225,180,114109,2,2,L|252:166,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,54,114644,6,0,P|511:104|496:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,206,115002,2,0,P|347:156|362:104,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,151,115359,2,0,P|511:196|498:246,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,302,115716,2,0,P|349:252|364:200,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,96,116073,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,116252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,116341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,116430,2,0,L|220:320,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,116787,2,0,P|76:132|212:144,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,311,117323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,252,117502,6,0,P|264:204|368:180,1,150
376,172,117859,2,0,P|424:152|440:100,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,118216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,118394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,118573,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,28,118752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,118930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
Yay all updated. now happy 161 sp!
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

LilyWhite wrote:

[*]ARE YOU OBSESSED WITH CLAPS? I AM, CAPTAIN!!!
orz :c ahaha probably QQ
Winek
887 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
Here is the Night Hotel to serves you ~
Since you already got a Taiko Icon, i'll only mod standard difficulty. I hope you don't mind.
Btw i seen on your profile that chingchangchong then you got silenced. This made laugh hard xD

[General]
One of your Taiko background has gotten a wrong size. You need 1024x768 or 1366x768, review that. The file is named Taiko_BG and the size is 800x600.

[Easy]
00:14:289 (1) - Since this is the only note here, Try to find it a better position, such as the middle. Also, the shape is kinda boring. This note is alone, so go ahead and be crazy! (Sadly, the slider is short.) Your current is kinda uncreative, don't you think? Same opinion for 00:20:003 (1).
00:14:289 (1,1) - I don't see the reason why the first slider has got no reverse arrow while the 2nd has gotten one. These are the same vocals you are trying to follow, so make sure it's constant! Either add a reverse arrow to the first slider, or remove the 2nd. I'd rather add a reverse arrow at the first one.
00:28:931 (2) - This note kinda break the flow since are all curved the same size, while that note isn't. What about making it similar to 00:24:645 (1,2,1)?
00:30:360 (1) - This straight line is out of place. I'd suggest you to curve it, and even try to blanket with 00:31:788 (2) . Yes, you'll have to do some tweaking so if you're too lazy, just ignore this suggestion.
00:36:074 (3) - Excuse me, NC? Also do the same at 00:43:217 (8) .
00:53:931 (4) - Yuno y u no NC . Know the goo dmoments for NC. In general in easy, it falls on a downbeat. Around 2 fulls beat, i think. But again, it depend on the song, soo don,t belive me too much or i might confuse you.
00:55:359 (6,1) - Sorry for little nazi, but it's not well stacked. /me runs
00:59:645 (4) - I'm not the type to just say NC NC NC, so I won,t repeat any NC. Just to tell you. When there is a little "New part", Just NC the note. Try having them constant aorund 4-6.
01:00:002 (5,7) - You could greatly blanket these two notes itf you wanted.
01:07:502 (5) - What about moving it a bit upper-left to avoid the overlap with (3) ?
01:08:217 (6) - I think it would be best if this was a simple 2/1 slider and then, adding a note at 01:09:288
01:18:931 (1,2) - Sorry, but i must tell... Swap NC. Try having your NC's only on downbeat!
01:40:359 (2) - I think it would fits better as a simple 2/1 slider. Also, when trying to move the anchor... It act weirdly. Try remove and replace again.
01:48:930 - I really think you should add a note here.
01:51:787 (4,5) - The blanket could be much better here if you curves more (4). Try it!

[Normal]
00:14:289 (1,1) - Refer to Easy mod.
00:26:074 (2,3) - This can be quite confusing. Try replacing the two circle by only one slider.
00:36:074 (1,3) - I liked that blanket. But if oyu work more on it, it'll be even more perfect.
00:37:503 (3,1,3) - Hehe... Perfect stack please ~
00:46:074 (4) - Instead of this, what about placing a simple circle at 00:46:253
00:51:074 (5) - First, NC this note. I've written about that stuff on easy, refer there. Also you should really avoid having those type of slider that are kinda bezier.
00:55:359 (3,4) - `Just to have more appeal: Try a perfect stack on the tail of both sliders.
00:56:788 (5) - Please refer to easy ; NC. Also there seems to be a little spacing problem, around 0.07 only, but just fix this lol.
01:08:217 (6,7) - Again, move this note a bit, there seems to be a little spacing problem, around 0.04 just fix that lol.
01:08:217 (6) - I also think you should NC this note. Even if the combo's gonna be short, you must know to be constant no matter what.
01:10:181 (2,3,4,5) - Really confusing, I'd suggest you to remove these and place break instead.
01:17:145 (2) - What about curving more this one? it will make a cross-like with 01:15:359 (3) which can be rather pretty.
01:19:645 (1,2,3) - Hehe ~ Try triggering these 3 notes, you should see little spacing errors. Nothing really that is bothering, just a small matter.
01:25:359 (1,2) - Here we got a Distance problem. Don't change the snap to 0.90 so suddenly ;)<
01:28:216 (1) - I think the flow get broken here ; The other curves are simple 01:25:359 (1,2,3,4) while this one is too curved.
01:35:359 (4) - Refer to 00:46:074 (4) mod.
01:44:287 (3,4) - Big spacing error, fix this.
01:49:287 (1) - Don't NC for nothing, please.

[PCB stage 3 Lilywhite]
00:33:574 (2) - As you tried to follow vocals on the previous part, you should try following them as well here by reducing this to a 1/2 slider, keep the reverse arrow, and maybe placing a circle at 00:34:288 that can maybe be positioned under 00:34:467 (3)
00:48:931 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't think this stream fits well at all. I'd remove it.


[Tsusoko]
00:14:289 (1,1,2) - Refer to Normal and Easy diff. Yes, this suggestion sucks.
00:36:074 (1,2) - Don't you think it kinda break the flows? :< I mean, The frist slider is curved, while the other is ( implement an english word to tell a story about a sliders with a double anchor ) . I'd rather make (2) a simple curve.
00:43:038 (4,5) - If oyu tried following the vocals on this part, i'd rather swap timing. (and position, of course.)
01:04:645 (8) - Don't really feel the use of a reverse arrow here. I'd rather remove it and expend to a 1/1 slider , and you could also make a cute blanket with 01:04:466 (7) with some working.
01:04:466 (7,5,6) - Heh, disable grid snap and make perfect stack, lol.
01:18:752 (6,7,8,9) - Even for a hard difficulty it can be hard to read. I'm talking about spacing, so either stack them or find a solution so that ( I ) and other players don't confuse it for 1/2
01:22:145 (8) - What about removing reverse arrow? Would fits better the vocals, that you are trying to follow in this part.
01:35:806 (1) - I seriously think this spinner should end at 01:36:788 , and I don't think i'm the only one to think that.

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YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

Winek wrote:

Here is the Night Hotel to serves you ~
Since you already got a Taiko Icon, i'll only mod standard difficulty. I hope you don't mind.
Btw i seen on your profile that chingchangchong then you got silenced. This made laugh hard xD

[General]
One of your Taiko background has gotten a wrong size. You need 1024x768 or 1366x768, review that. The file is named Taiko_BG and the size is 800x600.

[Easy]
00:14:289 (1) - Since this is the only note here, Try to find it a better position, such as the middle. Also, the shape is kinda boring. This note is alone, so go ahead and be crazy! (Sadly, the slider is short.) Your current is kinda uncreative, don't you think? Same opinion for 00:20:003 (1).
00:14:289 (1,1) - I don't see the reason why the first slider has got no reverse arrow while the 2nd has gotten one. These are the same vocals you are trying to follow, so make sure it's constant! Either add a reverse arrow to the first slider, or remove the 2nd. I'd rather add a reverse arrow at the first one.
00:28:931 (2) - This note kinda break the flow since are all curved the same size, while that note isn't. What about making it similar to 00:24:645 (1,2,1)?
00:30:360 (1) - This straight line is out of place. I'd suggest you to curve it, and even try to blanket with 00:31:788 (2) . Yes, you'll have to do some tweaking so if you're too lazy, just ignore this suggestion.
00:36:074 (3) - Excuse me, NC? Also do the same at 00:43:217 (8) .
00:53:931 (4) - Yuno y u no NC . Know the goo dmoments for NC. In general in easy, it falls on a downbeat. Around 2 fulls beat, i think. But again, it depend on the song, soo don,t belive me too much or i might confuse you.
00:55:359 (6,1) - Sorry for little nazi, but it's not well stacked. /me runs
00:59:645 (4) - I'm not the type to just say NC NC NC, so I won,t repeat any NC. Just to tell you. When there is a little "New part", Just NC the note. Try having them constant aorund 4-6.
01:00:002 (5,7) - You could greatly blanket these two notes itf you wanted.
01:07:502 (5) - What about moving it a bit upper-left to avoid the overlap with (3) ?
01:08:217 (6) - I think it would be best if this was a simple 2/1 slider and then, adding a note at 01:09:288
01:18:931 (1,2) - Sorry, but i must tell... Swap NC. Try having your NC's only on downbeat!
01:40:359 (2) - I think it would fits better as a simple 2/1 slider. Also, when trying to move the anchor... It act weirdly. Try remove and replace again.
01:48:930 - I really think you should add a note here.
01:51:787 (4,5) - The blanket could be much better here if you curves more (4). Try it!

[Normal]
00:14:289 (1,1) - Refer to Easy mod.
00:26:074 (2,3) - This can be quite confusing. Try replacing the two circle by only one slider.
00:36:074 (1,3) - I liked that blanket. But if oyu work more on it, it'll be even more perfect.
00:37:503 (3,1,3) - Hehe... Perfect stack please ~
00:46:074 (4) - Instead of this, what about placing a simple circle at 00:46:253
00:51:074 (5) - First, NC this note. I've written about that stuff on easy, refer there. Also you should really avoid having those type of slider that are kinda bezier.
00:55:359 (3,4) - `Just to have more appeal: Try a perfect stack on the tail of both sliders.
00:56:788 (5) - Please refer to easy ; NC. Also there seems to be a little spacing problem, around 0.07 only, but just fix this lol.
01:08:217 (6,7) - Again, move this note a bit, there seems to be a little spacing problem, around 0.04 just fix that lol.
01:08:217 (6) - I also think you should NC this note. Even if the combo's gonna be short, you must know to be constant no matter what.
01:10:181 (2,3,4,5) - Really confusing, I'd suggest you to remove these and place break instead.
01:17:145 (2) - What about curving more this one? it will make a cross-like with 01:15:359 (3) which can be rather pretty.
01:19:645 (1,2,3) - Hehe ~ Try triggering these 3 notes, you should see little spacing errors. Nothing really that is bothering, just a small matter.
01:25:359 (1,2) - Here we got a Distance problem. Don't change the snap to 0.90 so suddenly ;)<
01:28:216 (1) - I think the flow get broken here ; The other curves are simple 01:25:359 (1,2,3,4) while this one is too curved.
01:35:359 (4) - Refer to 00:46:074 (4) mod.
01:44:287 (3,4) - Big spacing error, fix this.
01:49:287 (1) - Don't NC for nothing, please.

[Tsusoko]
00:14:289 (1,1,2) - Refer to Normal and Easy diff. Yes, this suggestion sucks.
00:36:074 (1,2) - Don't you think it kinda break the flows? :< I mean, The frist slider is curved, while the other is ( implement an english word to tell a story about a sliders with a double anchor ) . I'd rather make (2) a simple curve.
00:43:038 (4,5) - If oyu tried following the vocals on this part, i'd rather swap timing. (and position, of course.)
01:04:645 (8) - Don't really feel the use of a reverse arrow here. I'd rather remove it and expend to a 1/1 slider , and you could also make a cute blanket with 01:04:466 (7) with some working.
01:04:466 (7,5,6) - Heh, disable grid snap and make perfect stack, lol.
01:18:752 (6,7,8,9) - Even for a hard difficulty it can be hard to read. I'm talking about spacing, so either stack them or find a solution so that ( I ) and other players don't confuse it for 1/2
01:22:145 (8) - What about removing reverse arrow? Would fits better the vocals, that you are trying to follow in this part.
01:35:806 (1) - I seriously think this spinner should end at 01:36:788 , and I don't think i'm the only one to think that.

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omg very helpfu >~< sorry if i dont reply but i fixed mostly all in the easy and normal only declined 2 in easy and 3 on normal.
fiixed few in tsu-chan's diff (God i dont know how to reply on std mods again.)
Overwrite
218 posts
Joined December 2012
Overwrite

Winek wrote:

[PCB stage 3 Lilywhite] Failed, it's stage 4. *runs*
00:33:574 (2) - As you tried to follow vocals on the previous part, you should try following them as well here by reducing this to a 1/2 slider, keep the reverse arrow, and maybe placing a circle at 00:34:288 that can maybe be positioned under 00:34:467 (3) Fixed!
00:48:931 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't think this stream fits well at all. I'd remove it. Yoo, guess what? I fixed it after months of complaining from the modders! *hides*
Thank you for the mod!

*eats Winek*
osu file format v12

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YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

LilyWhite wrote:

Winek wrote:

[PCB stage 3 Lilywhite] Failed, it's stage 4. *runs*
00:33:574 (2) - As you tried to follow vocals on the previous part, you should try following them as well here by reducing this to a 1/2 slider, keep the reverse arrow, and maybe placing a circle at 00:34:288 that can maybe be positioned under 00:34:467 (3) Fixed!
00:48:931 (3,4,5,6,7) - Don't think this stream fits well at all. I'd remove it. Yoo, guess what? I fixed it after months of complaining from the modders! *hides*
Thank you for the mod!

*eats Winek*
osu file format v12

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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Mushroom Mother
TitleUnicode:マッシュルームマザー
Artist:PinocchioP
ArtistUnicode:ピノキオP
Creator:YunoFanatic
Version:LilyWhite's Insane
Source:
Tags:hatsune miku vocaloid onosakihito lilywhite tsusuko mingmichael
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273,120,108394,6,2,L|273:94,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,192,108930,6,2,B|28:172|28:172|44:192|44:192|56:172|56:172|72:192|72:192|88:172|88:172|100:192|100:192|116:172|116:172|132:192|132:192,1,200,2|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,109466,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,88,109644,2,2,P|264:44|376:92,1,200,2|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,263,110180,1,0,0:0:0:0:
201,194,110359,2,0,P|219:146|325:138,1,150
330,138,110716,1,8,0:0:0:0:
259,270,110894,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,208,111073,2,0,P|97:153|113:105,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
205,332,111609,1,0,0:0:0:0:
339,264,111787,6,0,P|311:210|182:244,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,145,112323,2,0,L|31:106,2,50
137,372,112680,2,0,P|123:331|136:278,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,330,113216,2,4,P|378:342|417:250,1,200,4|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
269,250,113752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,290,113930,1,4,0:0:0:0:
225,180,114109,2,2,L|252:166,4,25,2|2|2|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
498,54,114644,6,0,P|511:104|496:156,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,206,115002,2,0,P|347:156|362:104,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,151,115359,2,0,P|511:196|498:246,1,100,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
362,302,115716,2,0,P|349:252|364:200,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,96,116073,5,0,0:0:0:0:
140,188,116252,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,208,116341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,228,116430,2,0,L|220:320,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,197,116787,2,0,P|76:132|212:144,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,311,117323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,252,117502,6,0,P|264:204|368:180,1,150
376,172,117859,2,0,P|424:152|440:100,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,88,118216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,88,118394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,172,118573,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,28,118752,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,118930,5,4,0:0:0:0:
updated. BATs plz ;~;
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
your request

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:14:289 (1) - remove finish slider head. really loud and not fit.
  2. 00:20:003 (1) - ^
  3. 00:38:931 (3) - add NC.
  4. 00:41:788 (5,1) - switch NC.
  5. 00:57:859 (2) - (x:31 y:222)
  6. 01:02:502 (1) - remove finish slider end. really loud and not fit.
  7. 01:08:217 (6) - add NC.
  8. 01:09:645 (7) - move (x:440 y:148). more natural flow.
  9. 01:13:931 (1) - remove finish slider end.
  10. 01:21:074 (4) - remove finish slider end, and add clap slider end.
  11. 01:32:859 (2,1) - this overlaps is bad. try bit far. but, should DS 1.00.

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:20:003 (1) - remove finish slider head.
  2. 01:12:502 (5) - try this rhythm.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:37:502 (1) - distance wrong. 1.00 around better.
YunoFanatic
1,699 posts
Joined April 2013
Topic Starter
YunoFanatic

P o M u T a wrote:

your request

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:14:289 (1) - remove finish slider head. really loud and not fit.
  2. 00:20:003 (1) - ^
  3. 00:38:931 (3) - add NC.
  4. 00:41:788 (5,1) - switch NC.
  5. 00:57:859 (2) - (x:31 y:222)
  6. 01:02:502 (1) - remove finish slider end. really loud and not fit.
  7. 01:08:217 (6) - add NC.
  8. 01:09:645 (7) - move (x:440 y:148). more natural flow.
  9. 01:13:931 (1) - remove finish slider end.
  10. 01:21:074 (4) - remove finish slider end, and add clap slider end.
  11. 01:32:859 (2,1) - this overlaps is bad. try bit far. but, should DS 1.00.

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:20:003 (1) - remove finish slider head.
  2. 01:12:502 (5) - try this rhythm.
    SPOILER
  3. 01:37:502 (1) - distance wrong. 1.00 around better.
fixed all! ^^ thanks for the modding!
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