-Gamu- wrote:

Hi~
Mod request from Gamu & iyasine's queue [General/Mod/M4M/Guest] ✌('ω')✌

Red: Unrankable / You should fix absolutely.
Orange: Strong Suggestion / I think you should fix it.
Black: Suggestion
Blue: message

[General]

●Tags is different. Should unify. Must follow the rules.

●Tags: Add "初音ミク"
I'm recommended that you add the hatsune miku in Japanese. But, if you don't add, then there is no problem. Well, there is a map that is actually added. The decision to add is up to you :3

●"Widescreen support" is different. Should unify.
Easy : On
Normal: Off
Hard: Off
Insane: Off


[Easy]

●00:39:642, 00:40:709 and 00:41:427 - Object's end is not snapped! Is probably a bug, but you can fix it. Method example: Remove an object once. Then re-create. It is possible to fix in this.

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●00:14:289 (1) - Add finish (end). will fit a song~
●00:24:646 (1) - Hmm... hitsoung is so strange (start). Remove whistle and clap please. Cause of the strange sound is whistle and clap
●00:24:646 (1) - Add clap (end). good sound~
●00:26:074 (1) - Remove new combo. In order to maintain the consistency of the new combo.
●00:26:074 (1) - Same as 00:24:646 (start)
●00:26:074 (1) - Same as 00:24:646 (end)
●00:27:503 (2) - Add new combo. The reason is same as 00:26:074 (1).
●00:27:503 (2) - Same as 00:24:646 (start)
●00:27:860 (3) - Remove clap (start and whole). Clap here have been strange. Here is sufficient soft-hit. then, add clap (end)
●00:28:932 (4) - Add finish (start). It is needed to be emphasized.
●00:28:932 (4) - Remove finish (end). Here is strange..
●00:30:360 (1) - spacing strange. Why 1.00x? It is strange that here's 1.00x.. You should fix 1.20x.
●00:31:789 (2) - ^
●00:30:360 (1) - Remove whistle and clap. and, add finish. The reason is the same as 00:24:646 (start).
●00:30:360 (1) - Add Same as 00:24:646 (end)
●00:39:289 (4) - Add new combo. The reason is same as 00:26:074 (1).
●00:44:646 (1,2,3,4) - It is recommended that you do not to be stacked for beginners. confusing rhythm.. Players may be confused. Therefore, change the placement. Or, changes to the two slider. It will be easier to grasp the rhythm.
●01:05:360 (2) - Add new combo. The reason is same as 00:26:074 (1).
●01:33:932 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:44:646 (1,2,3,4)
●01:37:503 (1) - Add circle please. If you have added, then it is necessary to remove the spinner previous.
●01:54:646 (3) - Add new combo. The reason is same as 00:26:074 (1).

[Normal]

●00:14:289 (1) - Add finish (end). will fit a song~
●00:24:646 (1) - Remove clap (start). And, add finish (start). It is needed to be emphasized.
●00:28:574 (7) - Remove clap and finish. These two strange. It would be enough just whistle.
●00:30:360 (1) - hitsoung is so strange (start). Remove whistle and clap please. Cause of the strange sound is whistle and clap.
●00:30:360 (1) - Add clap (end). good sound. And, It is strange here's missing..
●00:33:932 (4) - Add clap. ^
●00:34:646 (6) - Hmm....finish ⇒ whistle change? finish sound is a little too big. I prefer this.
●00:38:574 (6) - Add clap (start). good sound.
●01:22:146 (4) - Remove clap (end). and, add clap (start)? I prefer this~
●01:22:503 (1) - Move to 01:24:467 the end of the spinner. fit to song~
●01:31:074 (1) - Why 1.46x? Surely, it would be your mistake..
●01:39:289 (3) - Why 0.80x? ^
●01:41:967 (7,8) - Hmm..It is hard to grasp the rhythm for beginners. Remove (7). would be solved by this.
●01:54:646 (5) - Add new combo. In order to maintain the consistency of the new combo.

[Insane]

●00:16:432 (6) - It is not completely stack with 00:15:539 (4).
●00:18:753 (5) - stack is good, but I don't like.. Flow of the slider the following bad.. Change the placement. For example, x:340 y:48.
●00:36:074 (1) - Remove whistle and clap (start). And, add finish (start). It is needed to be emphasized.
●00:44:646 (1) - Add finish (start). good sound~ You are using in the second of the song! > 01:33:932 (1,2,1,2)
●00:45:182 (2) - ^
●00:45:717 (1) - ^
●00:46:253 (2) - ^
●01:00:003 (2) - Add new combo. sound was change.
●01:19:646 (1) - Add finish (start). good sound~



need a lot of work told you so > Easy diff, Normal diff and Insane diff. maybe.
good luck ></

KanaRin wrote:

Not yet

@YunoFanatic

Seems we have the tags conflict with different diffs, better to unify all of them again.

@m1ng's Taiko

59 Unsnapped notes! and also..



What's wrong? Or it's just me? i dont know what happened to

KanaRin

Not yet

@YunoFanatic

Seems we have the tags conflict with different diffs, better to unify all of them again.

@m1ng's Taiko

59 Unsnapped notes! and also..



What's wrong? Or it's just me?

1. and my another suggestion is how about the kiai ends are at 00:58:217 - and 01:48:217 - ? because the ranked map by MMzz did it too

mingmichael wrote:

KanaRin

Not yet

@YunoFanatic

Seems we have the tags conflict with different diffs, better to unify all of them again.

@m1ng's Taiko

59 Unsnapped notes! and also..



What's wrong? Or it's just me?

lol sorry for the unsnapped notes orz how could i do that? lol
here's mine, Yuno~ http://puu.sh/4nNmS.osu

btw, suggestion for all Ono's taiko diffs
why do you not stop the kiai at 00:58:932 - , and it starts again at 01:00:003 - ? Because you used that at the 2nd kiai part at 01:37:503 - , which you stopped the kiai part at 01:48:217 - and it started again at 01:49:289 -. the first kiai and second kiai part are same, so change it to make it consistently

1. and my another suggestion is how about the kiai ends are at 00:58:217 - and 01:48:217 - ? because the ranked map by MMzz did it too

btw, no KD yuno~


*EDIT :
add new timing point at 00:14:646 - ; 00:48:217 and 01:37:502 - for all the diffs! because the new timing starts at here. you can see the metronome too! it should x:0, but the fact is x:2. you can see from the ranked beatmap too which used it too. better add it, please

YunoFanatic wrote:

and in your diff new prob object isnt snapped lol wtf

UPDATED!

mingmichael wrote:

YunoFanatic wrote:

and in your diff new prob object isnt snapped lol wtf

UPDATED!

LOL here's mine http://puu.sh/4nPII.osu

if i were you, i would snap it by myself orz it's easy to resnap it lol

-Gamu- wrote:

[LilyWhite's Insane]

●00:46:074 (1,2,3) - create a large triangle? Move to x:164 y:112 (2) and move to x:348 y:112 (3). Then, Ctrl+G > 00:46:253 (2,3). good flow and jump :3

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I find it too big of a jump imo.

●nice map ;3 Thank you!
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1. Letterboxes cut the head of the girl on your BG. It looks strange, disable letterboxes!

1. Comboing feels inconsistent. 01:33:931 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - example
2. 01:33:931 (1) - it kinda breaks your consistent rhythm. I'd go with something different, like making this slider 1/2 longer. However, you can keep your rhythm this way, then you should reduce your OD by one tick.
   
   Velocity changes are confusing for beginners. I'd try to avoid them when it's possible. Rhythm is kinda easy to catch, but sometimes it feels weird. Comboing could be much better, tho

1. 00:45:717 (1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - comboing. Try to work on your comboing.
2. 01:48:930 - that'd be great to remove unused green lines.
   
   Diff feels kinda strange, try to use AR5 and OD/HP4. That'd make more sense with your patterns and rhythm. Flows kinda strange, imo. However, maybe it's just me. Flow doesn't look nice to me and patterns are pretty messy. Well, maybe it's just me

mingmichael wrote:

SPOILER

btw, suggestion for all Ono's taiko diffs
why do you not stop the kiai at 00:58:932 - , and it starts again at 01:00:003 - ? Because you used that at the 2nd kiai part at 01:37:503 - , which you stopped the kiai part at 01:48:217 - and it started again at 01:49:289 -. the first kiai and second kiai part are same, so change it to make it consistently
Because in this way I can emphasize the SV change more, while the first kiai doesn't need it. Muzu contains this break for kiai consistency.

1. and my another suggestion is how about the kiai ends are at 00:58:217 - and 01:48:217 - ? because the ranked map by MMzz did it too

Why should I follow MMzz ranked map? There is no reason for it, also I like it how it is.

• 00:27:860 (2) - end on 00:28:217 -
  01:17:859 (6) - end on 01:18:574 -
  01:43:216 (8) - NC
  
  [Normal]
  
  • 00:34:645 (3) - move to (200,132). it look like better
    00:54:288 (1,2) - makes to same slider shape
    01:13:931 (1,2) - ^
    01:28:574 (5) - NC
    01:39:287 (3) - a little bent
    
    [Tsusuko's Hard]
    
    • 00:26:074 (5,6) - overlapping
      00:36:610 (2) - opposite slider. it look like better :3
      00:52:502 (5) - NC to follow song
      01:01:074 (5) - ^
      01:06:788 (5) - ^
      01:09:109 (2,3) - avoid overlapping. many players will click earlier than necessary
      01:38:930 (5) - straight slider
      01:41:787 (7) - NC to follow song
      
      [LilyWhite's Insane]
      
      • Nice :3
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:18:753 (5,1) - distance
          01:20:002 (2) - a little bent
          01:49:287 (1) - remove NC
          
          i like this song >w<

DJNightmare wrote:

Haii!~ I'm from the modding queue!~

Blue = Suggestion
Red = Recommended
Green = Comments

General
I think that the offset of the song is just alittle late.
It could be me though so it is up to your to change it :3

[Tsusuko's Hard]
01:48:930 (1) - Add a soft-hitfinish on the end of this slider. This slider is awkwardly silent. it already have one xD

[Normal]
00:34:645 (3) - Move to X:208 Y:152 Coordinate. Helps build a better shape between the last two notes and colliding between the 2nd last note from this note ok
01:54:644 (1) - Move to the left by 2 grids. Prevents colliding with the next slider.
00:33:217 - Add a note here. To keep the rhythm or flow going, feels awkward not to have a beat here umm wrong imo xD but if you the timing was for the next white tick i have to say no i want to keep inconsistancies with the breaks..

[Easy]
01:35:895 (1) - Have the Spinner to stop at 01:37:145 instead Stopping here seems better than the previous length. ok
01:42:144 (5) - Move left by 1 grid Keeps the distance snap more consistent totally missplacced that xD fix

Well, I don't see much problems here! Good luck on your map :3 thanks

legendarydragon wrote:

pls rank!.. everyday when i see this in pending i cry

[ Sana ] wrote:

legendarydragon wrote:

pls rank!.. everyday when i see this in pending i cry

Hey are u sub account?

happy623 wrote:

you asked me to mod Normal and Easy, so here I go :

General

1. checking with Aimod :
   
   SPOILER

   
2. Sound placement is quite weird for me, you may learn more from here : :roll:

Easy

1. 00:20:003 (1) - add the same sound placement as you did at 00:14:289 (1) -, it feels empty if there is no sound for me
2. 00:26:074 (2) - is it intentional that you added whistle in the slider?
3. 00:30:360 (1,2,3) - I guess you may use 1/1 Beat snap divisor instead of 1/2 here, it isnt fit the music imo, because there is a loud hit at 00:31:074 , if I were you, I would put it like this :
   
4. 00:33:931 (3) - you better remove the clap and use whistle instead to consist you sound pattern
5. 00:41:788 (1) - try you best to stack it with 00:40:003 (2) - 's tail, it looks nice imo
6. 00:46:610 (1) - hmm, will this spinner too fast? idk if newbies have time for the reaction
7. 01:35:895 (1,1) - I guess newbies would not have time to catch 01:37:502 (1) - , you better remove 01:37:502 (1) -, or end 01:35:895 (1) at 01:36:788 -, but it may too fast for the spinner, you should deeply consider this
8. 01:37:502 (1) - no sound placement for this part? try to place some and make the diff more fun! Apply to Normal diff as well!!
9. 01:43:216 (7) - NC here, since you did NC at 00:53:931 (1) - , to get consistency, moreover, it fits the music
10. you get improvement! the diff is way better now! keep going!

Normal

1. 00:20:003 (1) - same as Easy, you should add the same sound with 00:14:289 (1) -
2. 00:34:645 (3) - please snap with the distance by using 1.2x ( your original distance
3. 00:44:645 (3) - you better NC here, to notice that the melody changes
4. 01:48:930 - hey your green line to turn off kiai should be placed here, you did it at Easy too

Diffs are improved much, look forward to getting the rank!

yurunneram wrote:

hihi ^^

EASY

00:29:288 - Move middle point one square right (yesh it matters) fix

00:33:931 (3) - Weird distance spacing pls move fix

00:40:003 (2) - Move one square right (then move 00:41:788 (1)) fix

00:42:860 (2) - suggestion i have to disagree because this was blanketing 2 notes if i change the posistion how about the blanketing

01:42:502 (6) - Spaced to far from prev note umm its totally fine

01:43:930 (8) - ^ (it's stacked anyway)

That's all

NORMAL

nothing in particular. Just that you might want to consider standardising the dist spacing. rechecking dist again!

HARD

Nothing haha sorry but I found it enjoyable star~ ty >w<

Have a nice day~ u tu bro

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~ thanks for the mod!

Irreversible wrote:

It's a bit sad that you didn't make the highest diff in the mapset though, I really recommend adding an insane made by you again. . D: up to you though

AnreFM wrote:

Mod as promised~
haven't modding in a very long time, sorry if this suck :'

[Easy]
spacing
00:14:289 (1,1) - How about changing the shape of these two become like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/995231 the current one isn't so interesting and this one fits with vocal too~
00:33:217 (3) - Antijump. Space this out normally
00:37:145 (2) - Blanket 00:36:788 (1) - better
00:39:288 (1) - Make a copy of 00:38:574 (3) - and turn it 30 degree to make them neater like this 00:38:574 (3) -
00:41:074 (3) - Move the tail to 300/112 so that it blanket 00:40:003 (2) - better and 00:41:788 (1) - can stack better too
00:44:645 (1) - why overlap move to 356/240
01:00:002 (2) - NC here for another kiai start
01:00:002 (2) - yeah blanket 00:59:645 (1) - better
01:05:359 (3) - NC for vocal?
01:17:145 (4) - NC. too long combo for an easy
01:41:073 (4) - NC ^ and for consistency with combo length for the rest of diff.
01:44:644 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/995257 Plays better owo and cuter
01:49:287 (1,2) - the (1) is kinda meh, try this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/995269

[Normal]
00:14:289 (1,1) - Try the same shape as i suggested at easy o3o
00:27:860 (5) - NC to keep combo length safe(normal; 5-6)
00:36:074 (1) - lol please blanket 00:37:145 (2) - better
00:38:574 (4) - Would play better if you just change the red dot to a white one. Keep the shape just make them smoother owo
00:41:788 (1,2) - Make them like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/995291 straight is a bit boring(and doesn't really match well with current vocal) ouo
00:45:717 (1,2) - Since the first slider pair ( 00:44:645 (1,2) ) is straight, how about making these two curvy?
00:51:788 (5) - NC
01:17:145 (5) - ^
01:22:502 (1) - If you follow vocal here, start the spin at 01:22:681 (1) - instead
01:28:574 (5) - NC~
01:40:716 (5,6) - Will be neater if you're just mirroring them using ctrl h and j ouo
01:55:716 (2) - I stumbled here orz no spacing problems, but i think the move is kinda too hard to read on normal :'

okay the rest of the diff's are fine, very neat on tsusuko's pro bgt
Call me after you done editing for a recheck!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Tsusuko's Hard]

00:26:431 (6) - Move to x:468, y:92

01:01:431 (6,7) - How about change to slider? -> Like this

01:04:466 (7) - Move to x:72 y:100 and then, 01:04:645 (8) - x:156, y:92

01:56:430 (6) - 0.7 distance is better, i think. -> Like this

[LilyWhite's Insane]

00:53:931 (1,2) - i think this pattern is looks better -> This

01:03:216 (4,5,6) - how about this pattern? -> This

01:44:644 (1,2) - this pattern is looks better -> This


Well... So Nice map
Sry for low quality mod

GL!

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Wow. so many SP.
Hi, From PM request.
-> My mod always recommended.
-> Im noob modder. Not good quality :#
-> My engilsh is so bad. Please understand
-> i can't mod EASY ~ NORMAL. Sorry

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[Tsusuko's Hard]

00:26:431 (6) - Move to x:468, y:92 i have to say no

01:01:431 (6,7) - How about change to slider? -> Like this i think its fine

01:04:466 (7) - Move to x:72 y:100 and then, 01:04:645 (8) - x:156, y:92 nope

01:56:430 (6) - 0.7 distance is better, i think. -> Like this fix


Well... So Nice map
Sry for low quality mod

GL!

YunoFanatic wrote:

Irreversible wrote:

It's a bit sad that you didn't make the highest diff in the mapset though, I really recommend adding an insane made by you again. . D: up to you though

I dont intend to make a mistake again they suggest to remove it even the expert players... im a bit sad i dont know

Irreversible wrote:

then make a better one o.o

HeShu wrote:

In-Game m4m

[General]

First you seem to have quite a lot of internal conflit :


[Easy]

00:27:503 New combo here to get along with the drum fix!
00:44:645 Curve it a little so it will fit previous curvy slider not really wanna keep my style and if i use that curvy slider it will be bad because if i streched it
01:00:002 No need of new combo here needed follow new beat
01:49:287 ^ ^

You're below 80% of your map mapped, expand it on the beginning

[Normal]

Beware, two unspanned item !

00:51:453 Put it exactly under the two slider before tail i dont really know what is this xD

You're below 80% of your map mapped, expand it on the beginning

Else all's good

[Tsusuko's Insane]

only 11 spacing occurence here
Why different combo colors from other maps ?

00:32:145 This object is trouble for me... Maybe supress it or extand previous slider mapping style by tsusuko
00:50:002 ^ ^
00:53:395 New combo here why?

You're below 80% of your map mapped, expand it at the beginning and the end

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[LilyWhite's Insane]

00:53:931 (1,2) - i think this pattern is looks better -> This Nope, I like it as it is.

01:03:216 (4,5,6) - how about this pattern? -> This Nope, I like it as it is.

01:44:644 (1,2) - this pattern is looks better -> This Nope, I like it as it is.

HeShu wrote:

[LilyWhite's Insane]

I think this map AR is too high for that kind of music Nope, Insane is insane~
You have strong spacing issues here, 75 occurence ! Have you ever heard about jumps, my friend?

00:30:721 supress it to get a triplet instead Nah, I like it as it is.

You're below 80% of your map mapped, expand it at the beginning and the end Please not the spinner problem again.

1. Circle Size 3, please.

1. Minus AR by 1.

Zero__wind wrote:

I must say that, wow, why you modders are so careless and did YGO forget how to mod as a BAT

Tsusuko's Hard
01:49:377 - this green line should be at 01:49:287 - while currently it's not
and you guys should know what this means

and further more
00:59:645 (1) - its head with 20% soft sample could be barely heard and this shuold be really unrankable
same happens here 01:48:930 (1) -
You'd better adjust the volume to 40% and add whistles to their heads and they would be fine