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Miwa Manabu - Hizamakura de Sugosu Houkago

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Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年11月16日 at 23:41:17

Artist: Miwa Manabu
Title: Hizamakura de Sugosu Houkago
Source: ヨスガノソラ
Tags: galgame sphere mtbbsben sun_rainbow
BPM: 77
Filesize: 7547kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.16 stars, 196 notes)
  2. Normal (1.41 stars, 134 notes)
Download: Miwa Manabu - Hizamakura de Sugosu Houkago
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Long time after it being submitted...

wip, remapping.

Thanks to Sun Rainbow For the storyboard.
Last edited by Koiyuki , edited 27 times in total.
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
总之先顶，明天看看有没有时间mod。
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[Relaxing]
01:09:325 (6,1,2,3) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/3xuqO.jpg → and → http://puu.sh/3xurD.jpg
01:39:325 (5) - Avoid these small overlaps here. Suggestion → http://puu.sh/3xuuM.jpg
02:16:338 (3) - Move the 2nd node to x:460 y:284, so it will get parallel with 02:15:558 (2)

[Rhythmic]
Found inconsistent spacing on some parts like 00:35:428 (6,7,8) (compare with prior patterns)
00:28:415 (6) - Silence the slider's tail (this can be done by two green timing lines around the sliders tail).
:!: 00:58:026 (8) - Object under slider path... please move it for another place. I suggest x:192 y:156

Aaaand That's it ^^

I hope this sweet song get Ranked as soon as possible (: Felt need some modding and then a BAT ♥



Att.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Alarido wrote:

From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[Relaxing]
01:09:325 (6,1,2,3) - Could make like this? → http://puu.sh/3xuqO.jpg → and → http://puu.sh/3xurD.jpg
En...I can't find the differences between these two...Add whistle? or other things? :(
01:39:325 (5) - Avoid these small overlaps here. Suggestion → http://puu.sh/3xuuM.jpg
Accepted~
02:16:338 (3) - Move the 2nd node to x:460 y:284, so it will get parallel with 02:15:558 (2)
Accepted~

[Rhythmic]
Found inconsistent spacing on some parts like 00:35:428 (6,7,8) (compare with prior patterns)
Hmmm...Because it's a hard diff, so I make different distance spacing in different parts.
The 00:34:649 (5,6,7,8) - changed
Before 00:50:234 (1) - Use 0.6x
Before 01:47:896 (1) - Use 0.8x
Before 02:10:883 (1) - Use 1.0x
And the last use 1.2x
This is that I won't changed~ :)
00:28:415 (6) - Silence the slider's tail (this can be done by two green timing lines around the sliders tail).
Accepted~
:!: 00:58:026 (8) - Object under slider path... please move it for another place. I suggest x:192 y:156
Accepted~


Aaaand That's it ^^

I hope this sweet song get Ranked as soon as possible (: Felt need some modding and then a BAT ♥



Att.
Thank you very much for modding my map~ :)
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
General
00:25:299 I don't think this is an appropriate time to use Kai time-yet.
02:14:584 - Kai time should start at 02:14:389 instead.

Relaxing mode:
00:58:026 - Remove hit circle.
02:42:441 - Remove finish (sounds terrible!). Add Whistle instead.

Rhythmic
This mode's really good :D
00:58:415 add hit circle.

Apart from that, your maps looking lovely! :)
Hope this helps~!
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

10crystalmask01 wrote:

General
00:25:299 I don't think this is an appropriate time to use Kai time-yet.ok~
02:14:584 - Kai time should start at 02:14:389 instead.ok~

Relaxing mode:
00:58:026 - Remove hit circle.Accepted~
02:42:441 - Remove finish (sounds terrible!). Add Whistle instead.Accepted~

Rhythmic
This mode's really good :D
00:58:415 add hit circle.Accepted~

Apart from that, your maps looking lovely! :)
Hope this helps~!
:) Thank you very much
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
挂着国旗我就用中文了啊._.
[relaxing]

00:38:935 (5) - 在这里结束00:40:104
01:35:818 - 可以不空啊
01:44:389 (2,3) - 移开
02:10:493 - breaktime从这开始
用记事本打开这个难度最大化拖到最下面把最后一行替换成308,272,159325,2,0,B|196:308|112:240|96:160|112:88|160:40|236:8|336:16|380:132|336:208|244:196,1,640.000004768371,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:看看会不会好些
SPOILER

[rhythmic]

02:27:636 (4,5) - 建议移开
01:31:922 (5,6) - 会不会有点坑._.
另外01:35:428 (1) - 1.75真的没问题嘛 :?

就是这样 希望有帮助 :)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

ZZHBOY wrote:

挂着国旗我就用中文了啊._.
[relaxing]

00:38:935 (5) - 在这里结束00:40:104 Accepted~
01:35:818 - 可以不空啊 Accepted~
01:44:389 (2,3) - 移开 Accepted~
02:10:493 - breaktime从这开始 这个我觉着问题不大，不改了
用记事本打开这个难度最大化拖到最下面把最后一行替换成308,272,159325,2,0,B|196:308|112:240|96:160|112:88|160:40|236:8|336:16|380:132|336:208|244:196,1,640.000004768371,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:看看会不会好些OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~WONDERFUL~十分感谢~

SPOILER

[rhythmic]

02:27:636 (4,5) - 建议移开Accepted~
01:31:922 (5,6) - 会不会有点坑._. 在前面变回1.0x的时候增加了NC，这样就可以了~
另外01:35:428 (1) - 1.75真的没问题嘛 :? 我觉得没问题，因为是循序上去的并且还加了NC，应该能感受得到~所以不改了

就是这样 希望有帮助 :)
8-) 感谢modding，帮忙射个星么~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
先占位，回来再mod


General
超喜欢这首歌啊就是没有吉他版的
我能做个GD么

Relaxing
感觉就是像顺时针转圈一样==
CS能在大一点么，因为是2星

最好改一下的问题
01:27:636(6) easy的combo不能超过5
01:46:337(5) ^
00:33:091(1) ^
00:47:117(6) ^
00:53:351(3) ^
类似的就不说了
01:35:818(7,1) 隔这么远？

未完，上课要迟到啦！！！！
勿KD勿quote
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

615915887 wrote:

先占位，回来再mod


General
超喜欢这首歌啊就是没有吉他版的
我能做个GD么

Relaxing
感觉就是像顺时针转圈一样==
CS能在大一点么，因为是2星

最好改一下的问题
01:27:636(6) easy的combo不能超过5
01:46:337(5) ^
00:33:091(1) ^
00:47:117(6) ^
00:53:351(3) ^
类似的就不说了
01:35:818(7,1) 隔这么远？

未完，上课要迟到啦！！！！
勿KD勿quote
知道你没写完，先谢Mod
不过2星的其实是normal~不是easy~
因为这歌比较舒缓，不适合堆放notes，所以做成normal和hard星星都比较少
在我心里觉得relaxing是应该3星，而rhythmic是应该4.5星的 :(

至于GD就算了……谢谢你的好意
bigfrog
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
bigfrog
hello~
from m4m

Relaxing
00:31:532(3) 試試這個?
00:37:766(4,5) 覺得這樣會比較好看 o.o
00:40:883(1,2,1) 不知道這樣擺如何?
01:10:883(1) 包圍 01:12:052(2)
01:24:519(3) 盡量不要覆蓋到 01:25:688(4)...
01:29:974(9) x268 y200
01:30:753(1) x296 y72
01:32:701(5) 往上一格
01:39:325(5,1) 這個?
01:41:273(2) 盡量不要覆蓋到 01:43:221(1) pls D:
02:03:091(2,3) x384 y252
02:31:922(1) 再彎曲點
02:39:325(8) 這個滑條很好看 :3

Rhythmic
01:18:286(1) 再彎曲一點? 跟 01:19:065(2) 類似
01:20:234(4) 包圍 01:19:844(3)
01:26:467(1) 下移兩格
01:26:467(1,2,3,4) 呈菱形排列如何? 類似01:30:753(1,2,3,4)
01:36:987(3) 不要那麼彎曲

大概就這樣
很不錯的純音樂 :)
Good Luck!
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
来继续

粉红色表示个人看法 :)
蓝色表示得改一下（类似unrankable）

Relaxing
如果实在想提高星级就只有改ar，cs那些了

试着每个大节滑条头+whistle
00:25:605 - 00:31:995 等等

00:53:351(3) 建议NC
01:12:831 这里摆个note然后spinner从 01:13:221 开始
01:27:636(6) NC
01:35:818(7,1)隔这么远？
02:42:441 消音

不太美观的 :D 一些建议而已
00:31:532(3)
00:45:948(5)
00:37:766(4,5)
00:55:299(5)
01:09:325(6)
01:19:643(2,4)
01:21:402(6) 无语ing==
01:26:467(5)
01:29:974(9)
01:36:987(3)
01:39:714(1)
01:43:221(1)
02:02:701(2)
02:33:091(2)

最后那个spinner好像一坨翔 :D

浅陋之见，望采纳
另一个diff吃完饭再看

脱力哎子，好图一张 :D
:)
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

bigfrog wrote:

hello~
from m4m

Relaxing
00:31:532(3) 試試這個?
直接改成当中只有一个拐点了
00:37:766(4,5) 覺得這樣會比較好看 o.o
Accepted~
00:40:883(1,2,1) 不知道這樣擺如何?
Accepted~
01:10:883(1) 包圍 01:12:052(2) No
01:24:519(3) 盡量不要覆蓋到 01:25:688(4)...Accepted~
01:29:974(9) x268 y200Accepted~
01:30:753(1) x296 y72Accepted~
01:32:701(5) 往上一格Accepted~
01:39:325(5,1) 這個?
Accepted~
01:41:273(2) 盡量不要覆蓋到 01:43:221(1) pls D:Accepted~
02:03:091(2,3) x384 y252Accepted~
02:31:922(1) 再彎曲點Accepted~
02:39:325(8) 這個滑條很好看 :3这个要感谢楼上帮我拉的~

Rhythmic
01:18:286(1) 再彎曲一點? 跟 01:19:065(2) 類似Accepted~
01:20:234(4) 包圍 01:19:844(3)Accepted~
01:26:467(1) 下移兩格我把上面的滑条往上放了一点，嗯，这样也不错~
01:26:467(1,2,3,4) 呈菱形排列如何? 類似01:30:753(1,2,3,4)Accepted~
01:36:987(3) 不要那麼彎曲
Accepted~

大概就這樣
很不錯的純音樂 :)
Good Luck!
Thank you~ 做的早的缘故normal的滑条拉的有点奇葩了 :o 谢指出~
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

615915887 wrote:

先占位，回来再mod


General
超喜欢这首歌啊就是没有吉他版的
我能做个GD么

Relaxing
感觉就是像顺时针转圈一样==
CS能在大一点么，因为是2星No

最好改一下的问题
01:27:636(6) easy的combo不能超过5 已加NC
01:46:337(5) ^
00:33:091(1) ^
00:47:117(6) ^
00:53:351(3) ^
类似的就不说了
嗯……这是normal，除了第一个别的都No了，sorry~
01:35:818(7,1) 隔这么远？Fixed~

未完，上课要迟到啦！！！！
勿KD勿quote
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

615915887 wrote:

来继续

粉红色表示个人看法 :)
蓝色表示得改一下（类似unrankable）

Relaxing
如果实在想提高星级就只有改ar，cs那些了 算了CS改了要remap的，ar改了也升不上多少星的

试着每个大节滑条头+whistle 音效会加
00:25:605 - 00:31:995 等等

00:53:351(3) 建议NC Accepted~
01:12:831 这里摆个note然后spinner从 01:13:221 开始Accepted~
01:27:636(6) NC
01:35:818(7,1)隔这么远？ Accepted~
02:42:441 消音 Accepted~

不太美观的 :D 一些建议而已
00:31:532(3)
00:45:948(5)
00:37:766(4,5)
00:55:299(5)
01:09:325(6)
01:19:643(2,4)
01:21:402(6) 无语ing==
01:26:467(5)
01:29:974(9)
01:36:987(3)
01:39:714(1)
01:43:221(1)
02:02:701(2)
02:33:091(2)

最后那个spinner好像一坨翔 :D 那还得再转几圈，你看看parapara的那个绕圈。。。

浅陋之见，望采纳
另一个diff吃完饭再看

脱力哎子，好图一张 :D
:)
至于滑条问题前面一位modder也提出了，所以大多数都已经改了~
你说我给你两个kds还是一个好？- -
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

mtbbsben wrote:

615915887 wrote:

来继续

粉红色表示个人看法 :)
蓝色表示得改一下（类似unrankable）

Relaxing
如果实在想提高星级就只有改ar，cs那些了 算了CS改了要remap的，ar改了也升不上多少星的

试着每个大节滑条头+whistle 音效会加
00:25:605 - 00:31:995 等等

00:53:351(3) 建议NC Accepted~
01:12:831 这里摆个note然后spinner从 01:13:221 开始Accepted~
01:27:636(6) NC
01:35:818(7,1)隔这么远？ Accepted~
02:42:441 消音 Accepted~

不太美观的 :D 一些建议而已
00:31:532(3)
00:45:948(5)
00:37:766(4,5)
00:55:299(5)
01:09:325(6)
01:19:643(2,4)
01:21:402(6) 无语ing==
01:26:467(5)
01:29:974(9)
01:36:987(3)
01:39:714(1)
01:43:221(1)
02:02:701(2)
02:33:091(2)

最后那个spinner好像一坨翔 :D 那还得再转几圈，你看看parapara的那个绕圈。。。

浅陋之见，望采纳
另一个diff吃完饭再看

脱力哎子，好图一张 :D
:)
至于滑条问题前面一位modder也提出了，所以大多数都已经改了~
你说我给你两个kds还是一个好？- -
果断两个还是不要乱给好了
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
From my queue:3
[节奏]
00:25:299 (1) - Whistle in head
00:28:415 (6) - Whistle in head , NC
00:29:974 (5) - Remove whistle
00:31:532 (5) - Whistle
总之Whistle先……都压在钢琴重音上比如
00:34:649 -
00:37:766 -
02:01:922 -
End
00:45:948 (5) - NC
00:50:234 - 20%哨子
01:38:156 (4) - 滑条的哨子去掉
01:46:338 (1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/862000 后面那个转盘哨子去掉
02:03:091 (2,3) -
02:04:649 (5,6) -
02:06:208 (8,9) - 都加哨子看看:3
不一定非得要kiai的...貌似不合适:3
00:55:299 (1) - NC？
01:26:467 (1) - Remove NC
……好乱
除了NC什么都没改 Edit:重新编辑了
osu file format v12

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AudioFilename: .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 109455
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Hizamakura de Sugosu Houkago
TitleUnicode:膝枕で过ごす放课后
Artist:Manabu Miwa
ArtistUnicode:三轮 学
Creator:mtbbsben
Version:Rhythmic
Source:yosuga no sora
Tags:galgame sphere
BeatmapID:270397
BeatmapSetID:102294

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.20000000596046
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
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音效呢= =b
02:39:325 (8) - 都最后了……咱能用转盘么……
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

ts8zs wrote:

From my queue:3
[节奏]
00:25:299 (1) - Whistle in head
00:28:415 (6) - Whistle in head , NC
00:29:974 (5) - Remove whistle
00:31:532 (5) - Whistle
总之Whistle先……都压在钢琴重音上比如
00:34:649 -
00:37:766 -
02:01:922 -
End
00:45:948 (5) - NC
00:50:234 - 20%哨子
01:38:156 (4) - 滑条的哨子去掉
01:46:338 (1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/862000 后面那个转盘哨子去掉
02:03:091 (2,3) -
02:04:649 (5,6) -
02:06:208 (8,9) - 都加哨子看看:3
不一定非得要kiai的...貌似不合适:3 (加就加呗……）
00:55:299 (1) - NC？
01:26:467 (1) - Remove NC
……好乱
除了NC什么都没改 Edit:重新编辑了
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456,96,79065,2,0,P|488:136|484:208,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,264,79844,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,332,80234,6,0,P|304:268|332:212,2,120.000000596046,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,81402,2,0,P|184:328|132:292,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,224,82182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,128,82571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,56,83351,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,40,83740,5,0,0:0:0:0:
432,100,84130,1,2,0:0:0:0:
452,196,84519,2,0,P|480:256|468:320,2,120.000000596046,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,164,85688,2,0,P|304:168|248:208,1,120.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,252,86467,5,2,0:0:0:0:
236,264,86857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,340,87247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,348,87636,6,0,P|128:340|80:304,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,316,88415,6,0,P|92:268|68:168,1,150.000000745057,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,89195,6,0,P|140:164|212:72,1,180.000007760524,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,156,89974,6,0,P|300:96|432:76,1,210.000003045797,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,90753,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,244,91143,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,212,91532,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,91922,2,0,P|328:332|256:324,1,120.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,324,92700,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,93090,2,0,P|52:196|48:160,1,120.000000596046
88,204,93870,6,0,P|60:148|92:64,1,150.000000745057,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,132,94649,6,0,P|144:64|240:36,1,180.000007760524,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,88,95428,6,0,P|276:56|372:76,1,180.000007760524,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,96208,5,0,0:0:0:0:
496,184,96597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,256,96987,2,0,P|408:304|360:352,2,120.000000596046,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,216,98156,2,2,P|300:280|124:304,1,240.000001192092
64,272,99325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,180,99714,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,92,100104,6,0,P|144:68|192:96,2,120.000000596046,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,168,101273,2,0,P|196:184|252:148,1,120.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,64,102052,2,0,P|384:32|460:108,1,240.000001192092
472,192,103221,5,0,0:0:0:0:
424,276,103610,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,324,104000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,336,104389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,300,104779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,216,105169,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,128,105558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,96,105948,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106338,8,0,107506,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107896,8,2,109065,0:0:0:0:
152,140,109454,6,0,P|104:104|80:36,2,120.000000596046
272,124,110623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,84,110818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,72,111013,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,168,111402,2,0,P|496:232|496:284,2,120.000000596046
372,260,112571,6,0,P|340:292|312:304,1,60.000000298023
268,312,112961,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,320,113351,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,280,113740,2,0,P|24:228|36:164,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,120,114519,6,0,P|168:68|240:32,1,120.000000596046
340,32,115299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,52,115493,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,92,115688,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,116078,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,320,116467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,348,116857,5,0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,117052,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,328,117247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,117636,2,0,P|128:232|184:176,1,120.000000596046
64,148,118415,2,0,P|40:100|80:24,1,120.000000596046
180,24,119195,2,0,P|264:44|288:68,2,120.000000596046
236,128,120364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,320,121143,2,0,P|440:296|468:240,1,120.000000596046
408,144,121922,6,0,P|472:96|480:36,2,120.000000596046
300,88,123091,5,0,0:0:0:0:
188,44,123480,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,88,123870,2,0,P|252:136|252:208,1,120.000000596046
128,176,124649,5,0,0:0:0:0:
12,140,125039,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,176,125428,2,0,P|80:224|80:296,1,120.000000596046
192,284,126208,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,212,126597,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,284,126987,2,0,P|248:332|316:340,1,120.000000596046
388,268,127766,5,0,0:0:0:0:
288,212,128156,1,2,0:0:0:0:
388,268,128545,2,0,P|432:232|448:160,1,120.000000596046
372,80,129325,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,36,129714,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,80,130104,2,0,P|360:152|308:184,1,120.000000596046
256,192,130883,8,0,134000,0:0:0:0:
164,100,134389,6,0,P|104:128|76:184,2,120.000000596046
304,64,135558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,52,135753,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,84,135948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,224,136338,2,0,P|436:300|388:328,2,120.000000596046
328,200,137506,6,0,P|276:188|248:200,1,60.000000298023
204,220,137896,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,360,138286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,332,138675,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,139065,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,56,139454,6,0,P|196:28|248:28,1,120.000000596046
368,48,140234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,72,140428,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,132,140623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,276,141013,2,0,P|432:328|368:336,1,120.000000596046
264,256,141792,5,0,0:0:0:0:
212,308,141987,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,336,142182,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,220,142571,2,0,P|92:144|84:80,2,120.000000596046
188,156,143740,6,0,P|224:120|256:108,1,60.000000298023
296,84,144130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,44,144519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,180,144909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,228,145299,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,360,145688,6,0,P|448:304|464:248,2,120.000000596046
248,360,146857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,316,147247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,196,147636,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,68,148026,2,0,B|168:64|300:164|300:216|192:248|84:216|84:164|220:64|288:68,1,480.000002384184
412,124,149974,6,0,P|428:76|492:36,2,120.000000596046
272,164,151143,2,0,P|320:212|380:204,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,184,151922,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,316,152312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,364,152701,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,316,153091,2,0,P|376:284|328:288,1,120.000000596046
200,292,153870,2,0,P|76:252|28:136,1,240.000001192092
128,64,155039,6,0,P|176:108|160:156,2,120.000000596046
272,52,156208,5,0,0:0:0:0:
416,68,156597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,212,156987,2,0,P|436:160|428:104,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,180,157766,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,224,158156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,360,158545,2,0,P|172:324|168:260,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,276,159325,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,212,159714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,84,160104,2,0,P|424:120|432:192,1,120.000000596046,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,200,160883,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,112,161273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,224,161662,2,0,B|144:316|240:120|296:200,1,240.000001192092,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
略牛X，thanks~
[放松]
音效呢= =b
02:39:325 (8) - 都最后了……咱能用转盘么……Nooooooo~
感谢包子为音效指出的问题~非常感谢！
等会出门，已经把rhythmic的改了，relaxing的回来再改~
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
OK，音效什么的都完成了
all finished……

好累……so tired.........



WaitForMod~
Kinomi
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Kinomi
finish推荐用自定义的铃铛声
http://puu.sh/3DZv8.wav
然后看长白线音比较重就加。。营造下气氛

Rhythmic
难一点吧。。摆些跳，像是00:30:364 (1,2) - 这两个，后面那个明显抬高的音可以跳远一点，根据曲子摆一点梗
01:23:351 (5) - NC在载前面的那个note上面
01:43:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你可以摆一个渐变间距的跳
02:43:805可以加转盘

Relaxing
01:46:337 (5) - NC
01:36:208 (1) - NC加在前面那个上面，后面的01:39:325 (5) - NC
01:57:636 (6) - NC
02:07:766 (1,2,3) - 怎么跳了
00:33:091 (5) - NC
00:45:948 (5) - NC

没啥好mod的..
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki

baldrace wrote:

finish推荐用自定义的铃铛声
http://puu.sh/3DZv8.wav
然后看长白线音比较重就加。。营造下气氛（加上去我觉得怪怪的……还是没加）

Rhythmic
难一点吧。。摆些跳，像是00:30:364 (1,2) - 这两个，后面那个明显抬高的音可以跳远一点，根据曲子摆一点梗 专注送分三十年~而且这个难度的distance spacing是根据歌曲每部分变的，前面就送分点了
01:23:351 (5) - NC在载前面的那个note上面 Accepted~
01:43:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 你可以摆一个渐变间距的跳 Accepted~
02:43:805可以加转盘 保证歌曲长度一致所以就不改了~

Relaxing
01:46:337 (5) - NC Accepted~
01:36:208 (1) - NC加在前面那个上面，后面的01:39:325 (5) - NC Accepted~
01:57:636 (6) - NC 觉得加在5上面比较好
02:07:766 (1,2,3) - 怎么跳了 对称么，问题不大这个，不改了
00:33:091 (5) - NC Accepted~
00:45:948 (5) - NC Accepted~

没啥好mod的..
谢谢烤肉~不然咱们cp吧 ;)
popner
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popner
首先，bpm应该是77。
然后，上来红线的kiai是什么情况？

排列，总结了一下，基本就是首尾相接一长串，这样的话排列没有层次感。

看我这个图：
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31695
怎样在歌曲很慢又没梗的情况下做出排列，以及怎么样不显得生硬。

最后一些细节问题：
popner(980289974) 2:40:04
你这个图感觉没什么形状啊
popner(980289974) 2:40:33
既不是平滑曲线也不是blanket
popner(980289974) 2:41:07
00:51:792 (1,2) -

popner(980289974) 2:41:25
flow实际上断了一下
popner(980289974) 2:42:12
两个的弧度也不一致
popner(980289974) 2:43:23
这种只要脑补一个椭圆就行了
Koiyuki
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popner's note

popner wrote:

首先，bpm应该是77。
然后，上来红线的kiai是什么情况？

排列，总结了一下，基本就是首尾相接一长串，这样的话排列没有层次感。

看我这个图：
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31695
怎样在歌曲很慢又没梗的情况下做出排列，以及怎么样不显得生硬。

最后一些细节问题：
popner(980289974) 2:40:04
你这个图感觉没什么形状啊
popner(980289974) 2:40:33
既不是平滑曲线也不是blanket
popner(980289974) 2:41:07
00:51:792 (1,2) -

popner(980289974) 2:41:25
flow实际上断了一下
popner(980289974) 2:42:12
两个的弧度也不一致
popner(980289974) 2:43:23
这种只要脑补一个椭圆就行了

现在没空上osu改，不过感谢泡泡的帮助~
红线kiai是以前弄的时候搞错了但是kiai删不掉了 :o :(
另外我用bpm analyzer测了一下还是154，这个似乎问题不大的吧……？
popner
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popner

mtbbsben wrote:

另外我用bpm analyzer测了一下还是154，这个似乎问题不大的吧……？
有问题，你把他和其他的154bpm的比一下就知道了。歌曲气氛是很重要的一方面。
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki

popner wrote:

mtbbsben wrote:

另外我用bpm analyzer测了一下还是154，这个似乎问题不大的吧……？
有问题，你把他和其他的154bpm的比一下就知道了。歌曲气氛是很重要的一方面。
嗯……既然如此那我调成77吧~谢谢泡泡
Teara
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Teara
[Relaxing]
00:34:649 (4,1) - Considering this is the easiest diff in the mapset, this jump is way to large.

01:46:337 (1,2) - 0.50x slowdown is a bit to much, consider 0.75

Hitsounds
00:28:415 (5) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:30:363 (1) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:31:143 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:34:649 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:37:766 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:40:883 (1) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:44:000 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:47:117 (2) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:00:364 (4) - Add a whistle.
02:17:506 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:19:844 (2) - Add a whistle.

[Rhythmic]

00:28:415 (1,2) - This plays weird and I'm not sure what you are mapping it on. I'd suggest you make it a long slider only.

00:36:208 (8,1) - This jump feels forced and it doesn't really flow with the music, I'd reduce the distance a bit.

00:58:415 (5,1) - ^

01:33:090 (1,1,1,1) - While the idea is nice, the music and tempo stays the same, making this play really awkward. This would more suited at 01:43:221 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - since the song changes.

You can also work on the end a bit. Relaxing was better imo :)

You also need to work on the hitsounds. I'd suggest you use a blank sliderslide.ogg to make it a bit better.

Mostly the map feels forced into making it harder. Don't do this, map according to the music. You did a relatively well job on Relaxing, but I still think this diff needs a lot of work.
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