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Hola

General:

  1. About the diff of the Extra diff, I feel don't make much sense to have your name on it, since is your map, probably you can add a nice diff name instead, for example: Terrorism or something tasteful
  2. your BG have a weird dimensions, will be better to change it to 1024x768


Extra:

  1. 00:11:073 consider to silence the spinner end, since it sound not nicely there IMO
  2. 00:11:930 (1,2) - this doesn't play comfortable IMO, since the leniency of 00:11:930 (1) - don't allow me to do a comfortable movement to 00:12:252 (2) - consider to CTRL G 00:12:252 (2) -
  3. 00:15:037 (9) - I really feel this slider doesn't express the music correctly, since in this point both beats 00:15:037 - and 00:15:144 -, need click actions, I will like if you change the slider for 2 circles for more empathize with the music
  4. 00:15:894 (3) - similar case as above, you can CTRL G the rhythm with 00:15:894 (3,4) - , will follow the music better
  5. 00:21:894 (7,1) - hello kodora hehe
  6. 00:27:680 (2,3) - I like your slider flow, since there are interesting cursor movements, but not in 00:27:894 (3) - In my opinion is like a flow breaker, try something like this:
  7. 00:30:037 (6,8) - if posible try to avoid the overlap here, doesn't look nice
  8. 00:34:752 (3,4,5) - nazi, try to stack this properly, since you're aiming for that, right?
  9. 00:38:609 (1) - missing finish in the head
  10. 00:42:037 (6,7,8) - this doesn't play nice, since 7 is to close from 6 and after that you make a big jump from 7 to 8, but maybe is what you're aiming here
  11. 00:44:180 (1,1) - try to improve flow and spacing here, is really hard to notice the 1/4 gap, it looks like 1/2 now
  12. 00:48:787 (5,6) - use more spacing here, since is really confused to play, you're not sure if it is 1/4 or 1/2, if you don't want to change this add a NC in 00:49:109 (6) -
  13. 00:59:394 (6,7,8,9) - this square is symmetric in ¨x¨ and ¨y¨, for experience that symmetry patterns doesn't place nice, also it doesn't fit wit your style, consider to rotate it a bit.
  14. 01:03:894 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much overlaps here, consider to clean up this part a bit
  15. 01:18:466 (6) - CTRL G ? will make some interesting cursor movements here
  16. 01:19:752 missing finish in the head
  17. 01:25:966 (2,3) - stack this properly, broccoly y sus bonitas stack hehe
  18. 01:40:216 (5,6) - this part doesn't play naturaly, since (5) bring the flow up to the grid instead of going to (6), maybe try this:
  19. 01:46:537 (2,3,4) - spacing pls , I don't feel that this will be intuitive in game
  20. 02:29:073 (1) - I don't feel this long slider fit the music at this point, I know you're trying to follow the vocals there, but at same time the drums hit there are important in this section of the song, maybe try this:
  21. 02:30:144 (1) - this is unsnapped
  22. 02:46:216 (1) - I know how much you like this kind of sliders shapes, but this one is not rankable anymore, due to you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, you should change this for a normal slider shape instead


Another:

  1. 00:11:073 same as extra diff
  2. 00:15:037 (7,8) - they are touching the HP bar and doesn't look nice, consider to move them a bit down
  3. 00:15:359 (1,5) - can you avoid the overlap? it doesn't look nice IMO
  4. 00:22:216 (1,2) - nazi, try to stack this better, since it doesn't look nice in game :(
  5. 00:26:394 (4) - mmm try to don't end sliders in strong beats in the song, like the stanza in 00:26:609 -, since it should be a slider head or a circle, but not a slider end IMO
  6. 00:38:609 missing finish, since it fit pretty nice with the song in this point
  7. 00:38:823 - 00:39:037 - unnecessary green lines
  8. 00:42:037 (5,6,7) - spacing, consider to use the same spacing between them actually 5 and 6 look like 1/4 gap when it is 1/2 .
  9. 00:51:359 (1) - missing finish <:
  10. 01:00:466 (3,5) - same as 00:22:216
  11. 01:19:752 missing finish
  12. 01:19:966 - 01:20:180 - unnecessary green lines, better remove them
  13. 01:32:502 (1) - missing finish here too
  14. 02:08:502 (1) - ^
  15. 02:18:787 (1) - mmm I doubt that this slider can be rankable, anyways I'm not sure about this one, better ask for more opinions
  16. 02:30:466 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that 1/2 slider will be better here, since the vocals are stronger than the instruments in this point, that's why, this is what I mean:
  17. 02:30:787 missing finish
  18. 02:44:555 (1) - well I feel this spinner doesn't fit the song, since will be better if you map this one properly


Hyper:

  1. 00:11:073 consider to silence the spinner end, since it sound not nicely there IMO
  2. 00:16:859 (6) - I don't agree with your rhythm here, since the repeat and the tail are strongers than the head, try this one instead:
  3. 00:17:609 (1,2,3) - following the drums is not the better option here, you can listen some specials sounds in the music, I feel is better to represent them instead of the drum line, try this:
  4. 00:38:609 finish fit better instead of whistle
  5. 00:41:930 remove this circle? since it doesn't follow nothing clearly in the music, also is not consistent with your antijumps pattern
  6. 00:48:787 (4,5,6) - pretty confused pattern for a hard diff, since the stacks have different gaps in the time line, consider to unstack them for better playability
  7. 00:52:752 use 30% volume here, like Broccoly did, since 65% is too loud for this slider
  8. 01:19:752 finish fit better the music here
  9. 01:27:680 (2,3) - stack this properly, it doesn't look nice in game
  10. 01:29:930 (4,5,6) - same as 00:48:787 (4,5,6) - I don't thing this will be ok for a hard diff
  11. 01:33:894 (1) - same as 00:52:752
  12. 02:03:091 should be a circle here, the drums are too loud for be ignored at this point
  13. 02:05:930 (4,5,6) - same as 00:48:787
  14. 02:30:252 (5,6,7,8,9) - similar as above ^, this stacks with different gaps in the timeline are really hard to play, but in this case you can make them noticeables just adding NC in 02:30:787


Standard:

  1. your diff settings look really unbalanced, also making a big gap between the hyper and this diff, your sv and pattern are to fast AR 5 fit better here, and for better spread use OD 4
  2. 00:11:073 same as your extra diff
  3. 00:11:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - To be honest all this part doesn't fit the song, is a normal diff you can play more with the rhythms instead of using long sliders
  4. 00:17:073 (3) - similar as above, try this rhythm instead:
  5. 00:18:144 this beat here should be mapped, since you mapped the previous one here 00:17:930
  6. 00:18:787 (1,2,3) - same as 00:11:930
  7. 00:25:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - too much sliders, consider to change the rhythm some times and use some circles too, since your current way is too monotonous for an intense song like this
  8. 00:39:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same as above
  9. 00:53:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - even if this is too hard, this part represent the music more closely than the previous one
  10. 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - then again the slider spam <:
  11. 02:02:394 (2) - maybe use another rhythm instead? since there is not way to know how many repeats this have, plus you didn't use something similar before in the diff
  12. 02:05:930 (4) - this is offscreen
  13. 02:17:394 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is pretty nice, I'll like if you remap some sections in this diff (the ones with a lot of long sliders), since you did great at this part I feel you can bring a better gameplay experience to new players if you make the rhythms more interesting in all the diff


Beginner:

  1. your diff settings are not balanced and doesn't make a good spread with the standard diff, use OD2 here
  2. 00:01:859 (1) - this spinner is too long and can be really stressful for new players, but ask for more opinions about this
  3. 02:06:252 (4,1) - avoid using stacks in easy diffs, also at this hight bpm will be really confused for new players, and is the only stack in the whole diff hehe


Buena suerte ;)
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Natsu wrote:

Hola

General:

  1. About the diff of the Extra diff, I feel don't make much sense to have your name on it, since is your map, probably you can add a nice diff name instead, for example: Terrorism or something tasteful Maybe.. but i want to tell people that this style is different from other Broccoly style, (hence 8r0cc01y!). We'll see how it goes
  2. your BG have a weird dimensions, will be better to change it to 1024x768 i think it's ok.. cuz it's under 1366x768.


Extra:

  1. 00:11:073 consider to silence the spinner end, since it sound not nicely there IMO done
  2. 00:11:930 (1,2) - this doesn't play comfortable IMO, since the leniency of 00:11:930 (1) - don't allow me to do a comfortable movement to 00:12:252 (2) - consider to CTRL G 00:12:252 (2) - no change, cuz I like the movement, and many testplayers didn't have problem~
  3. 00:15:037 (9) - I really feel this slider doesn't express the music correctly, since in this point both beats 00:15:037 - and 00:15:144 -, need click actions, I will like if you change the slider for 2 circles for more empathize with the music I think a slider works nice too, because it gives more 'ending' and powerful feeling than two circles.
  4. 00:15:894 (3) - similar case as above, you can CTRL G the rhythm with 00:15:894 (3,4) - , will follow the music better hmm maybe i'll consider. But for now I like the flow as it is now.
  5. 00:21:894 (7,1) - hello kodora hehe lol
  6. 00:27:680 (2,3) - I like your slider flow, since there are interesting cursor movements, but not in 00:27:894 (3) - In my opinion is like a flow breaker, try something like this: That's a nice idea. But then 00:27:894 (3,6) - these overlap and can confuse players? but i'll consider that in the future
  7. 00:30:037 (6,8) - if posible try to avoid the overlap here, doesn't look nice fixed
  8. 00:34:752 (3,4,5) - nazi, try to stack this properly, since you're aiming for that, right? yup, fixed
  9. 00:38:609 (1) - missing finish in the head fixed
  10. 00:42:037 (6,7,8) - this doesn't play nice, since 7 is to close from 6 and after that you make a big jump from 7 to 8, but maybe is what you're aiming here good point, i stacked 7 to 9
  11. 00:44:180 (1,1) - try to improve flow and spacing here, is really hard to notice the 1/4 gap, it looks like 1/2 now fixed. more close
  12. 00:48:787 (5,6) - use more spacing here, since is really confused to play, you're not sure if it is 1/4 or 1/2, if you don't want to change this add a NC in 00:49:109 (6) - added NC
  13. 00:59:394 (6,7,8,9) - this square is symmetric in ¨x¨ and ¨y¨, for experience that symmetry patterns doesn't place nice, also it doesn't fit wit your style, consider to rotate it a bit. Fixed~
  14. 01:03:894 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - too much overlaps here, consider to clean up this part a bit I think it's fine
  15. 01:18:466 (6) - CTRL G ? will make some interesting cursor movements here That's a good idea! hmm I can't decide which one to use. I'll wait for now
  16. 01:19:752 missing finish in the head fixed
  17. 01:25:966 (2,3) - stack this properly, broccoly y sus bonitas stack hehe si yo soy bonitos
  18. 01:40:216 (5,6) - this part doesn't play naturaly, since (5) bring the flow up to the grid instead of going to (6), maybe try this:
    Hmm I like now better. I'll take that into consideration later
  19. 01:46:537 (2,3,4) - spacing pls , I don't feel that this will be intuitive in game That spacing works because there is a jump right after (from 3 to 4). so players don't get confused and can read it right
  20. 02:29:073 (1) - I don't feel this long slider fit the music at this point, I know you're trying to follow the vocals there, but at same time the drums hit there are important in this section of the song, maybe try this: that's good, but I wanted to emphasize the vocal at the climax.
  21. 02:30:144 (1) - this is unsnapped
  22. 02:46:216 (1) - I know how much you like this kind of sliders shapes, but this one is not rankable anymore, due to you're manipulating the slider velocity with all these anchors, you should change this for a normal slider shape instead


Another:

  1. 00:11:073 same as extra diff fixed
  2. 00:15:037 (7,8) - they are touching the HP bar and doesn't look nice, consider to move them a bit down done
  3. 00:15:359 (1,5) - can you avoid the overlap? it doesn't look nice IMO oh fixed
  4. 00:22:216 (1,2) - nazi, try to stack this better, since it doesn't look nice in game :(fixed
  5. 00:26:394 (4) - mmm try to don't end sliders in strong beats in the song, like the stanza in 00:26:609 -, since it should be a slider head or a circle, but not a slider end IMO That was part of a rhythm variation. I know it's not used often, but i wanted to give an accent.
  6. 00:38:609 missing finish, since it fit pretty nice with the song in this point added
  7. 00:38:823 - 00:39:037 - unnecessary green lines deleted
  8. 00:42:037 (5,6,7) - spacing, consider to use the same spacing between them actually 5 and 6 look like 1/4 gap when it is 1/2 . fixed
  9. 00:51:359 (1) - missing finish <: added
  10. 01:00:466 (3,5) - same as 00:22:216 fixed
  11. 01:19:752 missing finish added
  12. 01:19:966 - 01:20:180 - unnecessary green lines, better remove them done
  13. 01:32:502 (1) - missing finish here tooadded
  14. 02:08:502 (1) - ^ added
  15. 02:18:787 (1) - mmm I doubt that this slider can be rankable, anyways I'm not sure about this one, better ask for more opinions I think it's okay.. it doesn't manipulate slider speed. but yeh i'll ask
  16. 02:30:466 (1,2,3,4) - I feel that 1/2 slider will be better here, since the vocals are stronger than the instruments in this point, that's why, this is what I mean: Fixed
  17. 02:30:787 missing finish
  18. 02:44:555 (1) - well I feel this spinner doesn't fit the song, since will be better if you map this one properly i'll get more opinions on that


Standard:

  1. your diff settings look really unbalanced, also making a big gap between the hyper and this diff, your sv and pattern are to fast AR 5 fit better here, and for better spread use OD 4 Done
  2. 00:11:073 same as your extra diff Done
  3. 00:11:930 (1,2,3,4,5) - To be honest all this part doesn't fit the song, is a normal diff you can play more with the rhythms instead of using long sliders
  4. 00:17:073 (3) - similar as above, try this rhythm instead: Fixed
  5. 00:18:144 this beat here should be mapped, since you mapped the previous one here 00:17:930 I'll think about that
  6. 00:18:787 (1,2,3) - same as 00:11:930
  7. 00:25:644 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - too much sliders, consider to change the rhythm some times and use some circles too, since your current way is too monotonous for an intense song like this
  8. 00:39:359 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same as above
  9. 00:53:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - even if this is too hard, this part represent the music more closely than the previous one
  10. 01:06:787 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - then again the slider spam <:
  11. 02:02:394 (2) - maybe use another rhythm instead? since there is not way to know how many repeats this have, plus you didn't use something similar before in the diff
  12. 02:05:930 (4) - this is offscreen fixed
  13. 02:17:394 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is pretty nice, I'll like if you remap some sections in this diff (the ones with a lot of long sliders), since you did great at this part I feel you can bring a better gameplay experience to new players if you make the rhythms more interesting in all the diffthanks! i didn't do this in other parts because I wanted to let the players feel more excited at the very last kiai. But I totally get what you mean. I'll try to reflect your thoughts on that.


Buena suerte ;)
pro mod!!! really helpful!!! thanks bro~ ;)
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2014-04-26 20:04 Frobe: 제 모딩은 지극히 제 취향 많이 들어가는데
2014-04-26 20:04 Broccoly: 갠찬습니다
2014-04-26 20:05 Frobe: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/269773 Zips - Reiwai Terrorism [8r0cc01y's Extra]]
2014-04-26 20:06 Frobe: 01:47:287 (1) - 여기 뉴콤 01:47:073 (5) - 여기로 옮겨여
2014-04-26 20:06 Frobe: 리딩에 안조음
2014-04-26 20:07 Broccoly: ㅇㅎ
2014-04-26 20:07 Broccoly: 그렇게한담에
2014-04-26 20:07 Broccoly: 01:47:287 (2) - 이건 뉴콤안해도되요/?
2014-04-26 20:07 Frobe: 넹 갠찬아여
2014-04-26 20:08 Broccoly: 굿굿
2014-04-26 20:09 Frobe: 01:06:144 (1,2,3) - 이건 적당히 떨어트려 두는게 오히려 리딩하기 좋음
2014-04-26 20:09 Broccoly: 아 거기
2014-04-26 20:10 Broccoly: 그게 원래 떨어뜨려놨었는데
2014-04-26 20:10 Broccoly: 콤보브렉이 잘나더라구요
2014-04-26 20:10 Broccoly: 어떻게 처리해야할지몰라서
2014-04-26 20:10 Broccoly: 걍 좀더 붙여놧는데
2014-04-26 20:10 Frobe: 음
2014-04-26 20:11 Frobe: 저게 아마
2014-04-26 20:11 Frobe: 떨어트려 놓으면
2014-04-26 20:12 Frobe: 1번노트 기준으로 1번노트의 슬라이더가 백슬라로 갔을때 플레이어 커서는 이미 2번노트 시작점에 있어서 그런거일텐데
2014-04-26 20:12 Broccoly: 음 그게
2014-04-26 20:12 Broccoly: 1번노트치고
2014-04-26 20:12 Broccoly: 아 이게 리핏슬라구나 하고 조금 커서를 위로 올릴때
2014-04-26 20:13 Broccoly: 이미 노래는 2번 시작지점으로 가서 그런건듯?
2014-04-26 20:13 Broccoly: 는 불확실
2014-04-26 20:13 Frobe: 반드시 삼각형으로 두실거 아니면 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1550470 이런식으로 두면 브레이크 그렇게 잘 안나요
2014-04-26 20:14 Frobe: 근데 전 삼각형 좀 벌려놔도 딱히 콤보 브레이크는 안나는데...
2014-04-26 20:14 Broccoly: ㅇㅋ..
2014-04-26 20:14 Broccoly: 그럼 좀더 벌려놓는쪽으로 다시 가볼게요
2014-04-26 20:15 Broccoly: 아니면
2014-04-26 20:15 Broccoly: 2, 3번 순서를 바꿔볼까요?
2014-04-26 20:15 Broccoly: http://puu.sh/8oSml.jpg
2014-04-26 20:15 Broccoly: 이런식으로
2014-04-26 20:15 Broccoly: 왠지모르지만 더 치기쉬워진거같기도
2014-04-26 20:16 Frobe: 좀 더 낫긴 하네영
2014-04-26 20:24 Frobe: 02:12:466 (3) - 이거 보기 좀 안좋아 보이는데 좀 떨어트리는게 낫지 않을까요
2014-04-26 20:24 Broccoly: 4번이랑요?
2014-04-26 20:24 Frobe: 넹
2014-04-26 20:25 Broccoly: http://puu.sh/8oT7a.jpg
2014-04-26 20:25 Broccoly: 이런식으로 해볼가요?
2014-04-26 20:25 Frobe: 그것도 괜찮네영
2014-04-26 20:25 Frobe: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1550504 저같으면 요렇게 두는데
2014-04-26 20:26 Broccoly: ㅇㅎ
2014-04-26 20:26 Frobe: 아 2번슬라가 3/4박 슬라구나
2014-04-26 20:27 Frobe: 02:09:252 (4,5,6) - 그리고 이 연타 디스턴스를 좀 더 줄이는게 어떨지
2014-04-26 20:28 Frobe: 연타 간격이 좁아보이면 브픔 높은 빠른 연타인걸 알아채기 쉽거든요
2014-04-26 20:28 Broccoly: 오
2014-04-26 20:28 Broccoly: 굿띵킹
2014-04-26 20:28 Frobe: 4,6번 노트를 5번노트로 2~3그리드 땡기면 괜찮을거 같은데
2014-04-26 20:28 Broccoly: http://puu.sh/8oTo2.jpg
2014-04-26 20:28 Broccoly: 이정도?
2014-04-26 20:29 Frobe: 연타인거 딱 보일듯 ㅋㅋ
2014-04-26 20:29 Broccoly: 굿ㄱ굿
2014-04-26 20:31 Frobe: 갠적으론 엑스트라보단 어나더가 맘에드네영
2014-04-26 20:32 Broccoly: ㅋㅋ어나더가 최근에 만든거여서..
2014-04-26 20:32 Broccoly: 스타일이 좀더 정교(?)해졌달까
2014-04-26 20:32 Broccoly: 엑스트라는 노트가 좀 날라다녀요..
2014-04-26 20:38 Frobe: 음 그외엔 플레이에 딱히 문제는 없어보이니
2014-04-26 20:38 Frobe: 잡을게 업네여
2014-04-26 20:38 Frobe: 애초에 제가 단타맵을 만든적이 적어서 배치를 어찌 해야할지도 잘 모르니 ㅋㅋ
2014-04-26 20:38 Broccoly: 아항ㅋㅋ
2014-04-26 20:38 Frobe: 마지막으로 하나
2014-04-26 20:38 Broccoly: 넹
2014-04-26 20:38 Frobe: 이건 걍 제가 리딩고자라 그럴지 모르겠는데
2014-04-26 20:39 Frobe: 02:28:752 (7,8,1) - 리딩 연계가 조금 불편한데 지금은 그냥 넘어가시고 혹시 비슷하게 지적 들어오면 한번 생각해보세용
2014-04-26 20:39 Broccoly: 아
2014-04-26 20:39 Broccoly: 네 저도 좀 걱정이엇음..
2014-04-26 20:39 Broccoly: 02:28:216 (5,1) - 이렇게 두개가
2014-04-26 20:39 Broccoly: 5번이 가려서 그런지
2014-04-26 20:40 Frobe: 걍 리딩하는 진로가 조금 꺾인 느낌이랄까
2014-04-26 20:40 Broccoly: 8번에서 1번이 꺾이는 느낌이 들긴하죠 ㅇㅇ
2014-04-26 20:41 Frobe: 1번 노트를 ctrl+g 하면 리딩은 괜찮은데 그냥 평범한 노트느낌
2014-04-26 20:41 Broccoly: 저도 글케 해볼까하고 생각해봣는데
2014-04-26 20:41 Broccoly: 좀더 강렬한 느낌이 안나서..
2014-04-26 20:42 Frobe: 음
2014-04-26 20:44 Frobe: 전 이제 자러갈게용 ㅎ
2014-04-26 20:44 Broccoly: 넵!
2014-04-26 20:44 Broccoly: 포럼에올리시면
2014-04-26 20:44 Broccoly: 쿠도스드릴게요
2014-04-26 20:44 Frobe: ㄴㄴ
2014-04-26 20:44 Frobe: 전 쿠도스 필요업써영
2014-04-26 20:44 Broccoly: ㅋㅋ네 그럼..
2014-04-26 20:45 Frobe: ㅂㅂ~
2014-04-26 20:45 Broccoly: 굿밤!
posted
noob mod, first time modding Q_Q

8roccoly's Extra
00:18:359 (8) - delete this note, I cant hear any sound from the song at this point
00:18:466 (9) - add a new combo if u apply ↑, if you dont, nvm

00:24:252 (2) - ~ 00:25:323 (8) - decrease volume to 50~60% since the song has only low bass(?) sound
02:44:823 (2) - ~ 02:45:894 (4) - same as ↑

00:56:180 (7) - http://puu.sh/8p8La/754d7a43a7.jpg to http://puu.sh/8p8Oj/2711dfec1a.jpg since the lyric restarts at this point (I personally prefer to follow the lyric if there is) or at least new combo it

02:20:394 - similar to ↑

02:01:644 (1) - ~ 02:03:037 (1) - It will be great if there is some custom hit sound for those note. It sounds like some kind of whistle effect, but I dont think the basic whistle sound fits in here and cant find a good one Q_Q

02:03:037 (1) - really weird since the rhythm of the song didn't change but the rhythm of the note changed. just 3 1/2 beat notes or a slider with 1 reverse arrow will be better

02:39:037 (8) - new combo since the new rhythm starts
02:39:359 (1) - delete new combo if u apply ↑

02:44:502 (1) - delete new combo
02:44:823 (2) - add new combo if u apply ↑


Another
00:29:823 (4) - 00:29:930 (5) - move these to the end of the previous slider

01:03:252 (10) - delete this note

01:06:787 (1) - reverse this slider. Its too hard to move that space after that slider with bunch of reverse arrow

02:01:644 (1) - ~ 02:03:037 (9) - same as extra diff (hit sound)
02:03:037 (9) - same as the one in the extra diff

I personally really like this diff XD



Karia's Hyper
I mainly focused on reading(like will it be easy to read for the ppl who mainly plays hard diff than insane diff) since I dont have a lot of knowledge on hard/hyper diff


00:41:073 (1) - move it so that it becomes easier to read the timing
01:06:787 (1) - same
01:22:216 (1) - same

01:47:609 (1) - 01:47:930 (4) - decrease space a bit between note

02:01:644 (1) - 02:03:144 (4) - It will be great if there is some custom hit sound for those note. It sounds like some kind of whistle effect, but I dont think the basic whistle sound fits in here and cant find a good one Q_Q

01:05:073 (7) - move it to the end of the previous slider or somewhere
01:46:216 (7) - same
02:29:073 (7) - same


idk anything about easy/normal diff, so im not gonna mod those.
sry for that and thx for reading this noob mod
posted

Natsu wrote:

Hola

Beginner:

  1. your diff settings are not balanced and doesn't make a good spread with the standard diff, use OD2 here @Broccoly can you fix it for me? please.
  2. 00:01:859 (1) - this spinner is too long and can be really stressful for new players, but ask for more opinions about this if someone else mentions it I'll change it
  3. 02:06:252 (4,1) - avoid using stacks in easy diffs, also at this hight bpm will be really confused for new players, and is the only stack in the whole diff hehe nah is easy to read imo


Buena suerte ;)
posted
2개월만의 제대로 된 모딩입니다.
(request another user)


General

  1. add "nico nico douga" in tags? umm..

Gero's Beginner

  1. 00:01:859 (1) - umm add this effect? "contractible sound" but if you fixed this mod, 00:11:609 ~ 00:11:930 - change higher sound ex) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552342 understand this?
  2. 00:15:680 (1,2) - i heard the big sound(maybe it's big sound) 00:15:894 - this part. so.. change slider? not two note. hmm. how about this rhythm? umm http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552360
  3. 00:30:252 (2) - move this slider start at 00:30:037 ?
  4. 00:33:680 (2) - ^
  5. 00:32:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too long combo.. umm
  6. 00:55:644 (3) - NC?
  7. 00:58:216 (5) - ^
  8. 01:00:787 (1) - remove NC?
  9. 01:02:502 (3) - ...umm...NC?
  10. 01:06:894 - remove this effect? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552394
  11. 01:36:787 (3) - NC?
  12. 01:39:359 (5) - NC? and 01:41:394 (1) - remove NC?
  13. 01:43:644 (4) - NC?
  14. 01:48:144 - like 01:06:894
  15. 02:08:394 (3,4) - umm how about this? (also checking fade out effect. i... i think better this?.. umm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552421&#41;
  16. 02:26:502 (4) - NC?
  17. 02:39:359 (1,2) - change one slider? 02:39:359 ~ 02:40:323
  18. 02:46:216 (3) - NC?

Standard

  1. 00:01:752 (1) - 이지처럼 소리 조금씩 줄여가다 마지막부분에 스핀소리 크게 하는 효과 넣으시는건?
  2. 00:51:359 (1) - 스핀이 너무 짧으니까 스핀 대신 슬라이더를 넣어보시는건?
  3. 01:19:752 (5) - 01:19:537 이 부분과 01:19:644 이부분에 소리가 들려서 차라리 1/2 슬라이더+리버스 한번으로 하시는건 어떤가요.
  4. 02:02:394 (2) - 이 슬라이더가 (저희들은 아니지만) 초보들에겐 한번만 왔다갔다 하는걸로 생각할수도 있기에 여기에 NC를 넣거나 아니면 다른 패턴으로 바꿔보시는게....? (이 난이도에서 1/2슬라이더 리버스는 이 패턴말고는 다 한개씩이니까요)
  5. 02:10:216 - 페이드 아웃 효과 추가 해보시는건? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552452

8r0cc01y's Extra좋은 난이도 이름

  1. Extra 난이도 인데 hp를 높여도 괜찮을듯..?
  2. 00:01:859 (1) - 스핀 소리 점점 줄어드는 효과 추가..? (잘 보니 처음부터 40%의 소리를 갖고 시작하네요. 모든 난이도가 안해도 될듯)
  3. 01:18:466 (6) - ctrl+g?
  4. 01:13:323 (6,7) - 7번 노트를 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 7번슬라이더 위치 까지 늘리시는건?
  5. 01:13:323 (6,2) - 살짝 겹치네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552555
  6. 02:16:752 ~ 02:16:966 - 이부분에 슬라이더 추가?
  7. 02:46:216 (1) - 이건.. 어디서 본것 같군요..!

Another

  1. not yet

Karia's Hyper

  1. not yet


슬라이더틱 사운드가 없어서 아쉽다를 영어로 어떻게 하죠

karia님 난이도랑 어나더 난이도는 내일 할게요..orz
posted

Natsu wrote:

Hyper:

  1. 00:11:073 consider to silence the spinner end, since it sound not nicely there IMO fixed
  2. 00:16:859 (6) - I don't agree with your rhythm here, since the repeat and the tail are strongers than the head, try this one instead: fixed
  3. 00:17:609 (1,2,3) - following the drums is not the better option here, you can listen some specials sounds in the music, I feel is better to represent them instead of the drum line, try this: I prefer current rhythm. Sorry
  4. 00:38:609 finish fit better instead of whistle fixed
  5. 00:41:930 remove this circle? since it doesn't follow nothing clearly in the music, also is not consistent with your antijumps pattern This note follows the vocal,,Sorry
  6. 00:48:787 (4,5,6) - pretty confused pattern for a hard diff, since the stacks have different gaps in the time line, consider to unstack them for better playability Stack is better IMO. Sorry
  7. 00:52:752 use 30% volume here, like Broccoly did, since 65% is too loud for this slider fixed
  8. 01:19:752 finish fit better the music here fixed
  9. 01:27:680 (2,3) - stack this properly, it doesn't look nice in game np IMO..Sorry
  10. 01:29:930 (4,5,6) - same as 00:48:787 (4,5,6) - I don't thing this will be ok for a hard diff Same
  11. 01:33:894 (1) - same as 00:52:752 fixed
  12. 02:03:091 should be a circle here, the drums are too loud for be ignored at this point Too hard in 280 BPM Hard diff IMO. Sorry
  13. 02:05:930 (4,5,6) - same as 00:48:787 Same
  14. 02:30:252 (5,6,7,8,9) - similar as above ^, this stacks with different gaps in the timeline are really hard to play, but in this case you can make them noticeables just adding NC in 02:30:787 fixed

koma wrote:

[Karia's Hyper]
00:41:073 (1) - move it so that it becomes easier to read the timing np IMO. Sorry
01:06:787 (1) - same ^
01:22:216 (1) - same ^

01:47:609 (1) - 01:47:930 (4) - decrease space a bit between note Not too hard with current DS IMO. Sorry

02:01:644 (1) - 02:03:144 (4) - It will be great if there is some custom hit sound for those note. It sounds like some kind of whistle effect, but I dont think the basic whistle sound fits in here and cant find a good one Q_Q added some one

01:05:073 (7) - move it to the end of the previous slider or somewhere same
01:46:216 (7) - same ^
02:29:073 (7) - same ^
Thanks for moddings~

osu file format v12

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Countdown: 0
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ArtistUnicode:じっぷす
Creator:Broccoly
Version:Karia's Hyper
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid2 AREN Kenji Not-116 Megpoid GUMI heisei project kairiki bear soul distortion terrorism jippusu Gero Karia
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posted
here's my mod !! :)

Standard

1. source ?
2. add to tags : zips, <your nickname>
3. AR4,HP DR4
4. color, don't use black. its not a monochromic song/BG. either you change it/ remove it.
5. is the standard similar to normal ? if yes, your SV is waaay too low. normal SV should around 1,10 - 1,40.
6. offset at 1761
7. 01:19:109 add object here.
8. 01:19:537 add object here.
9. 01:59:930 remove it or reduce hitsound to 50%
10. 02:09:894 - 02:15:466 instead of empty/break, why don't you try to fill it ?
8r0cc01y's Extra

this one is fine :)
1. HP DR 6 - 7, AR8.
2. once again don't use black as color.
Another

kinda hard to mod the map since it's insane :o
but, atleast improve your hitsound, change your color, fill your source and complete your tags
:)

well, that's my mod for you, hope my mod will be useful
good job and good luck :D:)
posted
From my queue~
thanks for M4M!

[General]
  1. I suggest to add "vocaloid" for tags serching
  2. combocolor 1 and 4 is too similar to distinguish, imo
  3. combocolor 5 and 6 is same as above

[Standard]
  1. OD -1. because, hard to find rhythm for normal
  2. 00:15:359 (1,2) - symmetric slider is better
  3. 00:43:752 (2,3) - avoid overlap or stack correctly
  4. 01:05:073 (1) - a little difficult. I suggest to end at 01:06:466

[Another]
  1. HD, OD +1~2 (I prefer to make more than hyper-diff)
  2. 00:33:037 (3) - x:280 y:184 (stack correctly)
  3. 02:44:394 (8,9) - I prefer to exchange their position

[8r0cc01y's Extra]
  1. HD, OD +1~2 (I prefer to make more than hyper-diff)
  2. 00:38:609 (1,1,1) - cool~
  3. 01:19:752 (1,1,1) - ^
  4. 00:58:537 (2,4) - how about making paralle?
  5. 01:40:537 (6,7,8,9,1) - intersting!
  6. 01:46:752 (3,4) - i prefe to stack
  7. 02:24:466 (3,4) - don't you blanket?
  8. 02:46:216 (1) - skillful!

[Gero's Beginner]
  1. 02:01:644 (1) - I prefer to reduce hitsound's volume

[Karia's Hyper]
  1. 00:39:680 (2,3) - mmm.. avoid overlap
  2. 02:25:109 (4) - leftward slider is bettter
  3. 02:30:787 (9) - NC?
  4. 02:46:216 (1) - end at 02:47:716


indivisual mapping <3

~Good Luck~
posted

RandomEffect wrote:

[Karia's Hyper]
  1. 00:39:680 (2,3) - mmm.. avoid overlap fixed
  2. 02:25:109 (4) - leftward slider is bettter I prefer current shape. Sorry
  3. 02:30:787 (9) - NC? Already NC here,, ;w;
  4. 02:46:216 (1) - end at 02:47:716 A bit early IMO. Sorry
Thanks for modding~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Leiwai Terror Rhythm.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 136754
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Reiwai Terrorism
TitleUnicode:レイワイテロリズム
Artist:Zips
ArtistUnicode:じっぷす
Creator:Broccoly
Version:Karia's Hyper
Source:
Tags:Vocaloid2 AREN Kenji Not-116 Megpoid GUMI heisei project kairiki bear soul distortion terrorism jippusu Gero Karia
BeatmapID:385553
BeatmapSetID:101953

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"video.avi"
0,0,"bg (2).jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,108130,119932
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo4 : 205,122,207
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karia's hyper -

01:05:716 (4) - 01:05:716 ~ 01:05:823 - 슬라이더 추가 , 01:05:930 ~ 01:06:144 - 슬라이더 추가 리듬 해보시는건? 01:05:823 - 이부분에서 그..음.. 드럼?소리가 세게 나니까.. 이거 수정 안하신다면, 대충 이렇게 감싸는 걸 해보시는 것도? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1559808

01:21:037 (4) and 01:24:466 (4) - 슬라이더 리버스가 2번이라서 다른거와 헷갈릴수 있습니다..아마도? 0.75배속 1/2 슬라이더는 이거 두개인줄알고 일단 넘어갔는데 02:17:073 (2) - 이부분은 0.75배에 슬라이더 1번 리버스...니까, 아무래도 02:17:073 (2) - 쪽을 다른 것으로 바꿔 보시는건? 이왕이면 같은 방법으로..?

01:32:180 (5) - 4번 슬라이더와 같은 모양으로 해보시는건? 예시 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1559815 (아마 2번 슬라이더랑 부딪치는게 별로라서 이렇게 하셨겠죠?..)

01:59:930 - 다른 broccoly님 난이도 처럼 여기에 검은색(NC) 노트를 하나 놔두시는건? (그러면 뉴콤보를 싹다 갈아 엎어야 겠죠 orz)

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Another 난이도는 아직 다른 맵퍼들 모딩한게 쌓여있어서(...) 다 확인하시면 저도 그때...? (아마 제가 체크 안해도 좋은 난이도 일거라고 생각해요.)

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oh wow sorry guys, I wasn't subscribed to this thread and wasn't being notified of you guys' mods.
I'll check and update asap!
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Losertic wrote:

2개월만의 제대로 된 모딩입니다.
(request another user)


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  1. add "nico nico douga" in tags? umm..
음 제가 알아봣는데 소스 안적어도 된다던데... 한번 뱃한테 물어볼게요

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  1. 00:01:752 (1) - 이지처럼 소리 조금씩 줄여가다 마지막부분에 스핀소리 크게 하는 효과 넣으시는건? 이건 생각해보겟습니다
  2. 00:51:359 (1) - 스핀이 너무 짧으니까 스핀 대신 슬라이더를 넣어보시는건? 스핀이 끝내는 느낌을 더 강하게 주는것같아서.. 일단 고려는 해볼게요
  3. 01:19:752 (5) - 01:19:537 이 부분과 01:19:644 이부분에 소리가 들려서 차라리 1/2 슬라이더+리버스 한번으로 하시는건 어떤가요. 오 좋은생각이네요. Fixed
  4. 02:02:394 (2) - 이 슬라이더가 (저희들은 아니지만) 초보들에겐 한번만 왔다갔다 하는걸로 생각할수도 있기에 여기에 NC를 넣거나 아니면 다른 패턴으로 바꿔보시는게....? (이 난이도에서 1/2슬라이더 리버스는 이 패턴말고는 다 한개씩이니까요)아 네 이게 지금고민이라... 어떻게고쳐야할지 감이안오네요.. 모딩더 받아보고 결정하겠습니다
  5. 02:10:216 - 페이드 아웃 효과 추가 해보시는건? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552452 굿굿굿

8r0cc01y's Extra좋은 난이도 이름

  1. Extra 난이도 인데 hp를 높여도 괜찮을듯..? hp6부터는 하락걸면 처음 스피너에서 오토가 죽어서..ㅠ
  2. 00:01:859 (1) - 스핀 소리 점점 줄어드는 효과 추가..? (잘 보니 처음부터 40%의 소리를 갖고 시작하네요. 모든 난이도가 안해도 될듯) 음 좋은아이디어네요.. 근데 일단은 한번 생각해볼게요 ㅋㅋ
  3. 01:18:466 (6) - ctrl+g? Fixed
  4. 01:13:323 (6,7) - 7번 노트를 지우고 6번 슬라이더를 7번슬라이더 위치 까지 늘리시는건? 01:12:466 (3) - 이거랑 일관성있게 리듬을 맞추고싶어서..
  5. 01:13:323 (6,2) - 살짝 겹치네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1552555 굿케치! Fixed
  6. 02:16:752 ~ 02:16:966 - 이부분에 슬라이더 추가? 이건 별로네요..ㅎㅎ;
  7. 02:46:216 (1) - 이건.. 어디서 본것 같군요..!
ㅋㅋ발한테 허락을 받아야하는데.. 발이 잘 안들어오네요


슬라이더틱 사운드가 없어서 아쉽다를 영어로 어떻게 하죠 I wish there was slidertick sound?

karia님 난이도랑 어나더 난이도는 내일 할게요..orz 넵 감사합니다~ 별도 감사!

koma wrote:

noob mod, first time modding Q_Q

8roccoly's Extra
00:18:359 (8) - delete this note, I cant hear any sound from the song at this point 엑스트라에서는 노래에서 소리가 안들린다고 노트를 안놓아야하는게 아님ㅋ 박자 맞추는용이나 빈공간채우는 용으로도 쓸수잇음..
00:18:466 (9) - add a new combo if u apply ↑, if you dont, nvm

00:24:252 (2) - ~ 00:25:323 (8) - decrease volume to 50~60% since the song has only low bass(?) sound 50~60은 너무작았고.. 좀 내렸다 ㅇㅋ
02:44:823 (2) - ~ 02:45:894 (4) - same as ↑

00:56:180 (7) - http://puu.sh/8p8La/754d7a43a7.jpg to http://puu.sh/8p8Oj/2711dfec1a.jpg since the lyric restarts at this point (I personally prefer to follow the lyric if there is) or at least new combo it 뉴콤은 강한 다운비트들에서 하는스타일을 좋아해서.. 가사랑은 상관없이..

02:20:394 - similar to ↑

02:01:644 (1) - ~ 02:03:037 (1) - It will be great if there is some custom hit sound for those note. It sounds like some kind of whistle effect, but I dont think the basic whistle sound fits in here and cant find a good one Q_Q 이건 뭐말하는지 모르겠어서 일단 볼륨은 내렸고.. 뭔지 생각나면 말해줘 ㅋㅋ

02:03:037 (1) - really weird since the rhythm of the song didn't change but the rhythm of the note changed. just 3 1/2 beat notes or a slider with 1 reverse arrow will be better 여기서 갑자기 나오는 드럼을 표현하고싶엇으...계속 1/2 노트 3개 더 놓으면 별로 특별하지가 않아서.

02:39:037 (8) - new combo since the new rhythm starts 위에랑 같은이유
02:39:359 (1) - delete new combo if u apply ↑

02:44:502 (1) - delete new combo
02:44:823 (2) - add new combo if u apply ↑


Another
00:29:823 (4) - 00:29:930 (5) - move these to the end of the previous slider 오 그것도 좋긴한데 좀 일반적이다. 그래도 의견 더 들어오면 니방식대로 고칠겡

01:03:252 (10) - delete this note 이게 있어야 다음노트에 힘이실리는데 ㅋㅋ

01:06:787 (1) - reverse this slider. Its too hard to move that space after that slider with bunch of reverse arrow 음 이건 모딩좀더 받아보고 결정함

02:01:644 (1) - ~ 02:03:037 (9) - same as extra diff (hit sound) 엑스트라와 같은결정
02:03:037 (9) - same as the one in the extra diff ^

I personally really like this diff XD Thanks!


idk anything about easy/normal diff, so im not gonna mod those.
sry for that and thx for reading this noob mod
Thanks a lot~~~
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WinglessAsura wrote:

here's my mod !! :)

Standard

1. source ? i heard you don't need source for this song
2. add to tags : zips, <your nickname> don't have to, because they are title and my nickname
3. AR4,HP DR4
4. color, don't use black. its not a monochromic song/BG. either you change it/ remove it.
5. is the standard similar to normal ? if yes, your SV is waaay too low. normal SV should around 1,10 - 1,40. oh it's because it's bpm 280. 1.1~1.4 is way too fast
6. offset at 1761
7. 01:19:109 add object here.
8. 01:19:537 add object here. Done
9. 01:59:930 remove it or reduce hitsound to 50% Done
10. 02:09:894 - 02:15:466 instead of empty/break, why don't you try to fill it ? hmm maybe. but i felt like it's kinda risky to map that part


well, that's my mod for you, hope my mod will be useful
good job and good luck :D:)
Thanks!!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
thanks for M4M! thank you too

[General]
  1. I suggest to add "vocaloid" for tags serching hmm there is 'vocaloid2' in the tags so i think it's ok?
  2. combocolor 1 and 4 is too similar to distinguish, imo
  3. combocolor 5 and 6 is same as above

[Standard]
  1. OD -1. because, hard to find rhythm for normal
  2. 00:15:359 (1,2) - symmetric slider is better I like now better...
  3. 00:43:752 (2,3) - avoid overlap or stack correctly I like how it look lol
  4. 01:05:073 (1) - a little difficult. I suggest to end at 01:06:466 Fixed

[Another]
  1. HD, OD +1~2 (I prefer to make more than hyper-diff)
  2. 00:33:037 (3) - x:280 y:184 (stack correctly) Done
  3. 02:44:394 (8,9) - I prefer to exchange their position hmm i like to leave it as that because up to down feels more ending

[8r0cc01y's Extra]
  1. HD, OD +1~2 (I prefer to make more than hyper-diff)
  2. 00:38:609 (1,1,1) - cool~
  3. 01:19:752 (1,1,1) - ^
  4. 00:58:537 (2,4) - how about making paralle? maybe
  5. 01:40:537 (6,7,8,9,1) - intersting!
  6. 01:46:752 (3,4) - i prefe to stack i like the blanket better :<
  7. 02:24:466 (3,4) - don't you blanket? i already did it
  8. 02:46:216 (1) - skillful!



indivisual mapping <3

~Good Luck~
Thanks!
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Losertic wrote:

karia's hyper -

01:05:716 (4) - 01:05:716 ~ 01:05:823 - 슬라이더 추가 , 01:05:930 ~ 01:06:144 - 슬라이더 추가 리듬 해보시는건? 01:05:823 - 이부분에서 그..음.. 드럼?소리가 세게 나니까.. 이거 수정 안하신다면, 대충 이렇게 감싸는 걸 해보시는 것도? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1559808 지금이 나은것같아요. 감싸는것도 안감싸는게 더 부드러워서 일부러 안해서,,

01:21:037 (4) and 01:24:466 (4) - 슬라이더 리버스가 2번이라서 다른거와 헷갈릴수 있습니다..아마도? 0.75배속 1/2 슬라이더는 이거 두개인줄알고 일단 넘어갔는데 02:17:073 (2) - 이부분은 0.75배에 슬라이더 1번 리버스...니까, 아무래도 02:17:073 (2) - 쪽을 다른 것으로 바꿔 보시는건? 이왕이면 같은 방법으로..? 이부분은 그냥 음악에 맞춘거라 괜찮을꺼에요

01:32:180 (5) - 4번 슬라이더와 같은 모양으로 해보시는건? 예시 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1559815 (아마 2번 슬라이더랑 부딪치는게 별로라서 이렇게 하셨겠죠?..) xP

01:59:930 - 다른 broccoly님 난이도 처럼 여기에 검은색(NC) 노트를 하나 놔두시는건? (그러면 뉴콤보를 싹다 갈아 엎어야 겠죠 orz) 뉴콤은 상관이 없는데 전 그냥 이 상태가 더 좋네요..
Thanks for modding~
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태그는 맞고 틀린게 없기때문에 뱃한테 안물어보고 맘대로 하셔도 됩니다. (물론 남용은 금지)

브로콜리 diff 처음스피너 전 아직도 좀 아니라고 생각되네요. 제가 해봤는데 스핀 350으로 돌리고 다음노트 하나틀리면 바로죽어요.
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No Dap wrote:



태그는 맞고 틀린게 없기때문에 뱃한테 안물어보고 맘대로 하셔도 됩니다. (물론 남용은 금지)

브로콜리 diff 처음스피너 전 아직도 좀 아니라고 생각되네요. 제가 해봤는데 스핀 350으로 돌리고 다음노트 하나틀리면 바로죽어요.
p/2591415 여기 들어가시면 니코니코동화는 소스에 안넣는걸로 룰이 정해져있습니다. 그래서 태그에 넣어보라는 글을...

그나저나 남은 하나 난이도는 자고나서 꼭 체크..
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Long overdue, but here's your mod I guess

[extra :L]
00:01:859 (1) - god i hate long spinners
00:20:073 (6) - could move here for flow, but i use transparent circles so this might not be a good idea http://puu.sh/8zoc9.jpg
00:25:644 (1,2) - could blanket these http://puu.sh/8zo7C.jpg
00:34:216 (1) - could blanket better http://puu.sh/8zoqD.jpg
00:45:680 (6) - not sure what this repeater is following in the song
00:52:752 - seeing as you're following those 4/4 vocals, id add a .5 sv multiplier and a slider: http://puu.sh/8zoZ9.jpg
00:58:537 (2) - should stack this right on top of 7
01:11:716 (9) - ctrl+g?
01:11:930 (1,2) - blanket, it'd match with 3 and 4
01:13:537 (7) - delete to keep consistent
01:19:109 (1,2,3) - oddly spaced imo
01:20:180 (1) - hohooho this bothers me, pls ctrl+g
01:33:894 - same suggestion
01:38:502 (5) - should move this a little to the left, it's semi confusing especially since it's not a nc (people have hated me for doing this :c)
02:24:680 (4) - blanket maybe? idk, sometimes there's random unblankets and it fits, but w/e
02:46:216 (1) - stole from val, reported

I tried. These are pretty nitpicky, and they are just suggestions, so feel free to poop on them and declare yourself as superior mapper as you see fit.
i love you
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Midge wrote:

Long overdue, but here's your mod I guess

[extra :L]
00:01:859 (1) - god i hate long spinners me too
00:20:073 (6) - could move here for flow, but i use transparent circles so this might not be a good idea http://puu.sh/8zoc9.jpg yeah the slider gets in the way
00:25:644 (1,2) - could blanket these http://puu.sh/8zo7C.jpg then the distance between them gets too close imo
00:34:216 (1) - could blanket better http://puu.sh/8zoqD.jpg
00:45:680 (6) - not sure what this repeater is following in the song it's following the drum, and yeah i know there are no sound but that's how i'd like to express that drum. It fits well i think..
00:52:752 - seeing as you're following those 4/4 vocals, id add a .5 sv multiplier and a slider: http://puu.sh/8zoZ9.jpg I thought about that too, but i think it gets in the way of the energetic, explosive start of the kiai.
00:58:537 (2) - should stack this right on top of 7 Fixed
01:11:716 (9) - ctrl+g? woa, jump to 1 gets really hard
01:11:930 (1,2) - blanket, it'd match with 3 and 4 distance gets too close :<
01:13:537 (7) - delete to keep consistent 2nd verse i didn't use stops, so i think it's ok
01:19:109 (1,2,3) - oddly spaced imo that was on purpose. that's why i used NC, and it was to warn the players of the incoming slowdowns
01:20:180 (1) - hohooho this bothers me, pls ctrl+g Loll why i like it.
01:33:894 - same suggestion
01:38:502 (5) - should move this a little to the left, it's semi confusing especially since it's not a nc (people have hated me for doing this :c) hmm. i'll get more opinions on that
02:24:680 (4) - blanket maybe? idk, sometimes there's random unblankets and it fits, but w/e gets too close to the previous object
02:46:216 (1) - stole from val, reported lol i think it's unrankable in the first place

I tried. These are pretty nitpicky, and they are just suggestions, so feel free to poop on them and declare yourself as superior mapper as you see fit.
i love you
Thanks man i appreciate it. Some blankets I totally get what you're saying but then two objects get too close.. so i couldn't
posted
Hello there. foo I will mod your map man jeez LOL

[Easy]

  1. 00:32:180 (4) - Well, I'd prefer if you don't make this titled outward a bit, the flows is a bit weird that way, I think it would be much better if you can allign them try something like this? http://puu.sh/8zIFW.jpg
  2. 00:36:252 (5) - This combo is really long, maybe you can add a new combo to here to shorten it? technically it last longer than any other combo's in the map as I see it.
  3. 00:58:216 (5) - Uh, this slider doesn't need to be symmetrical to anything, can you make it more intersting by changing the point after the 2nd point please? try this http://puu.sh/8zJgD.jpg
  4. 01:43:644 (4) - New combo here too please.
  5. 02:26:502 (4) - ^ for consistency here of course.
  6. 01:04:537 (4) - ^
  7. 02:10:216 - You should extend the break to here to around 02:10:216 -


[Normal]

  1. 00:38:180 (4) - Finish at the end of slider please? it seems much more appropriate.
  2. 00:42:787 (1) - You should add a finish and decrease its volume here, I can already hear a finish like sound without the finish hitsound added on to it.
  3. 00:44:502 (3,4) - .___. mapping like this so not pretty, and the overlapping oh my, can you try something else here please? like this : http://puu.sh/8zLwc.jpg that would be great!
  4. 00:49:644 (1,2) - Since you have the opportunity to do blanketing here, I really recommend you do that and try to blanket these 2 notes to each other here, it wouldn't hurt right?
  5. 00:53:609 (2) - Wah, why did you put it under the previous slider? the slider direction is signaling that the next note is most likely going to go up and so you should put it so it goes up. http://puu.sh/8zLHj.jpg Try that?
  6. 00:56:502 (1) - Do the same thing as I told you to do above, and try this : http://puu.sh/8zLJW.jpg
  7. 01:08:502 (3) - Uh, this note touches the hp bar, you should really fix this.
  8. 02:10:216 - You should extend the break to here to around 02:10:216 -
  9. 01:37:644 (1) - Issue like before, what I said about 00:56:502 (1) - goes for here too.


[Karia's Hyper]

  1. 01:21:037 (4) - Maybe a little more hard to read, maybe remove a reverse and add a note that stacks with 01:21:466 (5) - ? would be better and easier to read here.
  2. 01:39:359 (1) - I think a little bit increase in spacing here would be a great idea? maybe you can move it down a little more here? http://puu.sh/8zOhL.jpg that seems like a better idea to me.
  3. 02:22:216 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8zOl1.jpg
  4. 02:24:252 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/8zOmG.jpg
  5. 02:46:216 (1) - Move slider forward 1 tick and add a note here? it seems to be better to me, and add a new combo to the note if you decide to add it.

    Awesome Diff :D


[Another]

  1. 00:42:573 (8) - The flow here is a little wierd, you have this misleading flow where the directions are really flicked up, the circular movement of rhythm is pretty gone here, and that honestly is a bad thing. If you want to keep it you should Ctrl+G this note.
  2. 00:32:180 (7) - Same as the above, the circular flow is broken here and a Ctrl+G will fix it.
  3. 00:56:180 (8) - Wow, a SV decrease/slowdown works really well here, I recommend you do it for just this slider.
  4. 00:59:609 (8) - ^ nvm this slider too.
  5. 01:37:323 (9) - ^ you should know the places to do this now.
  6. 01:10:216 (1) - The stacking oh my look at the end of the slider.
  7. 01:43:644 (5) - again check the stacking man.
  8. 02:15:359 (9) - Add a new combo to make the pause not drain all your hp.
  9. 02:41:609 (3,4) - Again the circular flow, http://puu.sh/8zP34.jpg


[Extra]

  1. 00:22:966 (4,5) - Wah, this is misleading there needs to be a jump to 5 and not 4 omg
  2. 00:46:966 (5,6) - ^
  3. 00:37:644 (1) - the blanket is terrible, and that's the fact are you trying to blanket notes here?
  4. 01:38:823 (6,7) - Oh what do you know a time overlap's are actually good, well do it here because the previous notes before might be blocked and it'll be hard to read, if you don't slightly overlap them LOL


Those are all the major errors I found
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