Marcin wrote:

I know it's already bubbled, but just passing by and saw
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01:01:574 (3) - Slider end, isn't it supposed to have for example whistle?

1. 00:02:550 (2,3) - curve them further on like this? more catching with the previous slider(1,4). http://puu.sh/412Oi.jpg
2. 00:11:330 (3,4) - same with abovve?
3. 00:35:965 (4) - some hard for beginners as the first diff since the circle is on the red line and there has a gap with previous slider (3).. how about to stagger that with the following slider?
4. 01:41:818 (4) - moving the anchor on that tail onto x~0 y~156? looks better imo.
5. 01:42:550 (1) - right 1 grid on the middle anchor of the slider.(same reason as above.~
6. 01:50:355 (1,2) - same as 00:02:550. i.e. http://puu.sh/413nk.jpg
7. 01:54:013 (5) - strongly recommend to remove the circle since it's really over the difficulty it should have.. honestly the 1/4 slider is already hard to read for beginners imo..
8. 02:04:013 (3) - 1 grid up for the consistency?
9. 02:08:891 (5) - i'd make the blanket better~ http://puu.sh/413BM.jpg
10. 02:36:940 (1) - really too hard to catch on the red tick as the beginning of the part.. (and 02:40:843 (1) - 02:44:745 (1) - 02:48:648 (1) - 02:53:526 (6) -
11. 03:25:965 (1,1,1,1) - just merging them? i didn't see any reason to do that like now on the beginning diff.

Strawberry wrote:

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the present diff is a bit excessive for a beginning diff.. some suggestions from me.

1. 00:02:550 (2,3) - curve them further on like this? more catching with the previous slider(1,4). http://puu.sh/412Oi.jpg I hope I've polished all the sliders' shapes mentioned
2. 00:11:330 (3,4) - same with abovve?
3. 00:35:965 (4) - some hard for beginners as the first diff since the circle is on the red line and there has a gap with previous slider (3).. how about to stagger that with the following slider? as I'm following the vocal throughout this diff, moving it to white tick would make the rhythm quite weird, while unstacking the circle will only make it looks worse for me considering the distance snap. So I'd prefer to keep it. After all, it's a Normal, hopefully it'll be ok
4. 01:41:818 (4) - moving the anchor on that tail onto x~0 y~156? looks better imo. k
5. 01:42:550 (1) - right 1 grid on the middle anchor of the slider.(same reason as above.~
6. 01:50:355 (1,2) - same as 00:02:550. i.e. http://puu.sh/413nk.jpg
7. 01:54:013 (5) - strongly recommend to remove the circle since it's really over the difficulty it should have.. honestly the 1/4 slider is already hard to read for beginners imo.. no no I never used 1/4 slider in this diff. I think it's ok to do so though, just a 1/2-gap circle between two sliders. As it's at a intense connecting part, I think it fits
8. 02:04:013 (3) - 1 grid up for the consistency? nope, already nice now
9. 02:08:891 (5) - i'd make the blanket better~ http://puu.sh/413BM.jpg
10. 02:36:940 (1) - really too hard to catch on the red tick as the beginning of the part.. (and 02:40:843 (1) - 02:44:745 (1) - 02:48:648 (1) - 02:53:526 (6) - hmm, actually when the gap is longer, players have more time to recogonize what is happening next. just one stacking circle on sliders' head should be ok in Normal though, it would really look bad if unstack them
11. 03:25:965 (1,1,1,1) - just merging them? i didn't see any reason to do that like now on the beginning diff. it's the idea of DNA, to match the 4 sentences with 4 spinners. I think there's nothing different for the players, they only need to keep spinning, whether they're splited or merged

Zero__wind wrote:

and to the BAT who may wanna rank this map
I'd like to see the title and artist appear at 00:16:696 - (white color is ok I think)
gratefully thanks

kanpakyin wrote:

[General]

1. Aimod showed this to me: File missing:sb\rain\rain.png discussed directly and this is alright

[Insane]

1. 01:02:550 (1,2) - 我覺得這邊可以弄一點花樣, 比如說超小間距甚麼的, 這樣做的話剛好能夠fit上pitch
   
   建議

   
   nice idea
2. 01:22:062 (3) - inperfect blanket, you can improve it by removing the grid snap. hope I've got it right this time =.= fixed so many times...怀疑美死早

[Hard]

1. 01:01:330 (5) - I would say adding a new combo here and then removing at 01:01:574 (1) - is much better in order to fit the vocal. I'm always adding NC at downbeat

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1. 00:34:257 (3) - imo, this should be ended at 00:34:989 - , so that it can fit the vocal and the music. k
2. 00:43:769 (6,1) - Probably swap the new combo here? I mean you could add a new combo on (6)- and then remove on (1)- no, adding NC at downbeat
3. 00:45:965 (3) - Same as 00:34:257 no, considering the difficulty, consistent 1/1 beat gap at both sides of 00:47:428 (4) - would make it much easier to be handled by new players imo
4. 03:25:965 - ~ end - 太懶不能忍...至少我覺得不用這樣四個spinner帶過去啊... 哭了啊 不想改了啦 我觉得4个spinner对应4句话的这个点子还不错的说 不是真的因为懒…
5. 我覺得這diff的 1/2slider + 1/1 slider的梗太多了 因为基本上…节奏就是这样的啦 跟vocal有时候节奏会这样蠢……

kanpakyin wrote:

Ranked.

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