1. Hard (4.94 stars, 221 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 294 notes)
3. Normal (2.96 stars, 106 notes)

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Since only your insane mode is finished, I'll only mod that diff.

Here's some suggestions:

Try adding in two extra hit circles at 00:11:790 and 00:11:897 stacked up on the slider at 00:12:004, like this:
fixed

You could also add in an extra hit circle at 00:55:397 and 00:57:111 too! fixed

00:27:861 - clap effect on slider i add a finish sound instead of clap
01:07:933 - finish sound fixed

Apart from that, Luv this song, and FMA- BRotherhood xD

Hope this helps~!

thanks for your mod!

FreeSongs wrote:

thanks for your mod!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

As promised, Here's my suggestions for:

Easy mode:

Hard mode:

Try placing another hit circle at 00:11:576 and 00:11:790, it'l help remove that awkward gap. Like this:


This way, it'll look more finished. fixed

Also try shrinking the slider at 00:37:076, so that it's timing will match the vocals better.


i remove the slider at 00:37:397 and add two circles at 00:37:504 and 00:37:611 like this:

SPOILER

And after 00:48:433, that's where the speed of the song increases, yet there not enough hit circles here. It makes this part look unfinished, plus, it makes the timing look off.
Try adding in more hit circles at
00:48:861
00:49:290
00:49:719

And the hit circles should look something like this:


Also do the same, adding in more hit circles at:
00:50:576
00:51:015
00:51:433
00:52:290
00:52:719
00:53:147
00:55:719
00:56:147
00:56:576
00:57:838
00:58:290
00:59:147
00:59:576
01:00:004.

Or

You could also try replacing 2 hit circles with 1 slider in this combo instead.
eg. a sldier at 00:57:433 instead?


i try both ways to fix it, and it seems much better than before!

And move the slider at 01:25:290 more left like this:
I don't like how its being stacked on before.

fixed!

Hope this helps~! it helps a lot!!

thank you very much for your mod!

sammy711 wrote:

red=unrankable
black= strongly recommend
pink=just advise
Hard
00:40:290 - 无用的绿线 fixed
01:00:433 - 无用的绿线 fixed
01:15:219 (5) - NC 01:15:861 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:32:790 (1) - Ctrl+G fixed
01:07:933 (5) - Ctrl+G fixed
Insane
01:00:433 - 无用的绿线 fixed
Normal
00:19:290 - 无用的绿线 fixed
00:21:004 - 无用的绿线 fixed
00:21:861 - 无用的绿线 fixed
00:40:290 - 无用的绿线 fixed
00:26:576 (6) - 遵守DS啊.. fixed
00:54:219 (2,3) - ^
General
tag里的两个删掉
歌曲名 出处 歌手名不需要放在tag里 fixed