mercury2004 wrote:

M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
romanized title should be Omocha to Issho ni Asobu no da! つ half length sound is silence.
in the japanese name, add ! at the end おもちゃと一緒にあそぶのだっ!
no need to put your name in the tag. you can keep the japanese one i guess it's not my name,it's rotte's name ww
you might as well add azusa in the tag
add this one you source アスタロッテのおもちゃ! < anime name

source http://www.kasi-time.com/item-54670.html


and fixed all problems except delete tag "rotte" .

Easy
Nothing to suggest at all

Normal Normal not modded.
hp drain -1? if new player miss any slider combo, they will instant fail the map
00:07:155 (5) - reverse point on the blue line made it kind weird. end the slider on red line and add note on 00:07:827 stack on slider tail
00:12:752 (2) - try this shape?

SPOILER

Hard
00:07:379 (7,8) - reduce it hitsound by 10%
00:12:976 (2) - stack this on 00:11:857 (1) - slider head not fix it ,I'll keep it on late slider.
00:14:543 (6) - suggesting use this this part as a stream.[/color] no.
try this?

SPOILER

00:20:812 (1,2,3) - check this spacing, jump kinda sudden I'll remember your opinion.
00:38:499 (5) - add note? To be honest, I don't want to mod it.
00:42:081 (4,5) - unstack this, low ar is kinda confusing I don't like your idea,but I want to mod it
try this?

SPOILER

00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this kind of stream is hard to read, shouldnt be in the hard difficulty on purpose.
00:51:931 (2) - unstack not modded it.

epic hitsound + moe song hhooohoh. the map havent been through much any mod, but the mapset almost perfect. get this rank plz

kudo 4 u

Kudo or no kudo your choice.

Shinchaechae wrote:

Easy:

Nothing to suggest at all

Normal:
M-moee~
00:52:155 (2) - The song kinda speeds up around this mark, so I suggest you add an inheriting timing section and set the speed to at least 1.3x

Hard:
So moe i almost peed mysel ;__;

ts8zs wrote:

Moe~ >w<
Hard
基本均为建议，建议基于本人的顺手（逆时针）
00:08:499 (2) - 尝试Ctrl+G看看？个人觉得这样比较顺手 没必要啊
00:12:976 (2) - 这个尝试放在1下面？ 这个不改
00:14:543 (6) - 以后类似的都拆成两个比较好 故意的
00:17:230 (5) - NC? 嗯好
00:23:499 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842611 不换
00:32:454 (6) - 觉得不太顺但是不会改= =b 先留着吧
00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这是insane用的梗吧？等别的modder吐槽看看…… 这是亮点
01:08:275 (1) - Remove NC？ 不
01:07:379 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842621 ……无视这个吧……
Normal
00:10:513 - 这个tick声减小点？ 没什么影响吧
Easy
00:40:513 (1) - 这个和 00:40:066 (5) - 粘上了最好把后面两个点移开点http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/842626 好

有时间的话请mod下我签名:3

Kissflying wrote:

不设置倒数3,2,1会有问题吗？
好像没KIAI TIME，要紧吗？

Normal
00:05:140(2) - 那么尖的滑条可以优化 这个是故意的
00:06:484(4) - 新COMBOL 好的
00:07:155(5) - 可以拆分成 00:07:155(5)note 00:07:379(6) -滚轮；滚3次还是4次随便你，你看怎么方便就怎么改 故意的
00:26:185(1) - 同00:05:140 故意的
00:42:752(3) - 新COMBOL 这个不行，加了会破坏这一段cb
01:08:722收尾的绿线木有 没必要吧

节奏没什么问题，其他两个难度都玩过了，HARD，EASY不错，所以就选NORMAL MOD了

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

又短又渣的mod :3

[Easy]
00:56:633 (3) - 可以上移些少? 好的

[Normal]
00:07:155 (5) - 完在 00:07:379 这个梗音效咱比较喜欢w
01:01:558 (1) - 尾加finish 加了


[Hard]
00:07:827 (8) - 用 00:07:379 (7) - 的Slider之後旋轉 (嘛...其實這個可以無視) 这个故意的
00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這未免太鬼畜 :3 这是亮点啊

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi there

[Easy] all fixed
00:38:499 (3) - 1/2 might be too hard for Easy..imo just removing it sounds fine
00:44:096 (1) - whistle on end, then 00:45:887 (3) - add whistle at start? like 00:58:424 (1,2,3) -

[Normal]
CS -1? no changed.
00:32:006 (2) - how about adding finish here? ok~
00:44:096 (1) - add whistle on start ok
00:46:558 (4) - http://puu.sh/3t28c.jpg ? IMO a slider with two repeats is kind of weird to play, especially if it starts on a 1/2 I think my idea is well
00:51:260 (1) - add finish on start ok
00:58:424 (1) - add whistle on start ok
01:01:558 (1) - add finish on end ok
01:05:588 (1) - add finish on start ok
01:07:379 (1) - add finish? (01:07:379 - , 01:07:827 - , and 01:08:275 - ) 01:07:827 - not added

[Hard]
00:08:275 (1) - add whistle? it's there in other diffs oh yeah
00:22:603 (1) - ^ oh yeah
00:31:558 (4) - add finish on start? oh yeah
00:42:305 (5) - kind of hard to read since it's covered up by 00:41:409 (3) - but I want to keep myself thought.
00:49:021 (1,2) - switch NCs? no
00:58:424 (1) - add finish? there's one at 00:44:096 (1) - I add whistle,I think whistle is fit in this place
01:05:588 (1) - add finish? imo it makes a nice transition where the more strong part of the song ends whistle

everything else is fine for me o.o nice map and good luck~

Fycho wrote:

Hello ,from your M4M queue

Black: suggestion
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
背景图片不要超过1024*768
音效有点吵，用soft如何

[Hard]

• 
  00:06:484 (5) –NC 一根大白线一次，全歌曲统一比较好
  00:10:066 (5) –NC
  00:13:648 (4) –NC
  00:15:439 (1) –whistle?Finish
  00:26:185 (1) –Finish
  00:27:976 (5) –NC
  00:31:558 (4) –NC后面还有一些就不说了
  00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) –这个梗略难读啊
  00:57:528 (8) –这里设置成1/4note和前面一样如何0 0 ?
  01:00:103 (1,2,3,4,5) –有些overmap
  01:06:708 (4) –换成短滑条从01:06:931 –开始，在这里01:06:708 –设置空拍
  01:08:499 (2,3) –这两个莫名，建议delete

[Normal]

• 00:05:140 (2) –滑条到这里00:05:588 –结束，然后紧接着放两note
  00:26:185 (1) –好奇怪，感觉片面追求节奏独特但没什么特别意义啊
  00:30:663 (2,3) –这里略别扭，这里00:30:887 -最好设置成note或者00:30:663 –放短滑条，总之中间那个音别盖掉
  
  00:46:558 (4) –改成单折返放到这里00:46:782 -0 0因为00:46:558 –没音放着很别扭
  01:06:484 (3) –拉长，01:06:931 –这个别空着
  01:08:499 (2,3) – 同H

[Easy]

• 
  主要摸音效
  00:08:275 (1) –首是不是漏了whistle，不过建议加finish
  00:22:603 (1) –首建议改为finish
  00:44:096 (1) –首finish，前后统一比较好
  00:58:424 (1) -^
  三个难度音效最好统一下

0.0哎哟我受不了了，声音太萌了。。好久没听钉宫的声音好不容易戒掉了。现在听了下又上瘾了怒补番;w;Good luck

abalee wrote:

background 最大 1024x786，这个必须要改。啊？我记得现在16:9 的1366x768也是可以的啊

[Normal]
建议:
00:07:155 (2) - 移到 00:07:379 (x) - 在原本的位置上加一个cricle。 我觉得就我现在这个挺好听啊.....

[Hard]
00:38:499 (5) - add a circle? 这个是故意的

abalee wrote:

...就算这两个点可以不改但是BG这个还请重新裁剪成1024x768大小...

Death Rock wrote:

abalee wrote:

...就算这两个点可以不改但是BG这个还请重新裁剪成1024x768大小...

Rules已經改了請再確認一次，我新的rank圖用的是超過1024x768的16:9大小，這已經被允許了

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
General
Good!
Easy
Good!
Normal
CS-1?
00:07:155 (2) - 这个放蓝线感觉不太舒服。。推荐改一下 我决定normal不动www
Good!
Hard
00:04:133 (6) - 这个音符在连打串里显得很突兀 往左移一点让整个一串平滑一些吧 保持原先不变

00:14:543 (6) - 这么短也弯 好难看 最好变直 故意的

00:28:872 (8) - ^同上 ^同上

00:07:827 (8) - 同上 同上

00:42:081 (4) - 这个真的很难看啊...都不如改成二连 很多人都提出来了，这个换了个jump梗

00:49:021 (1) - 这个少往返一次 00:49:021 (1) - 这里加个circle吧 因为背景音乐很明显 嗯好，这个不错
00:49:021 - 00:49:916 - 00:50:364 - 是三个重音
而把第一个作为滑条的结尾不合适 因为这削弱了节奏
00:01:558 (2) - ^同上 这个不改

00:52:043 - 加个circle? 感觉听起来这样更适合节奏

00:53:722 (2) - 这个滑条往下一点? 让滑条的flow和连打的flow连在一起 这个不违和

00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 很不推荐这个 但如果你一定要用的话就算了... 这个是本图特点

00:45:439 (5) - 这个 推荐改成1/2滑条 因为和音乐实在不符合 00:45:439 (5) - 然后可以在这里加个note 你没仔细听这个w

00:35:140 - 加个转盘 然后结束在00:36:484 曲子需要一个小休息点

01:04:693 (3,4,5,6) - 这个可以再摆得有意思点的 比如这样我感觉很不错啊ww 强烈建议改 嗯好，这个变了一个jump梗

SPOILER

Good map

啊 顺便给我留个M4M的位置ww 等我以后做完图了求mod

abalee wrote:

前面是我没跟上rule的更新而误判，这个是我的错。
但是我依然认为 hard 的00:38:611 (1) - 这个不算合适，或者你可以另外找支持你观点的BAT，他认为OK(不是pass)的话我随时可以补泡。

Nymph wrote:

[Hard]
00:49:021 (1) - 这丢了个clap吧 加上咯

[Normal]
00:07:155 (2) - 这个slider转折的位置玩着很奇怪啊很奇怪 随便弄了弄，弄了个slider+note

00:10:066 (1) - 我去这个tick在我这听音量太大了 跟爆破音一样 换音效了

00:26:185 (1) - 同上（我建议减小tick那个文件的音量 所有tick听着都好大声音啊 起码改成60%我觉得才能跟现在你普通clap声音一样大） 同

00:30:887 (3) - 感觉尾巴clap略多余 弄死了

Nymph wrote:

乌拉喵!