M4M
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion
General
romanized title should be Omocha to Issho ni Asobu no da! つ half length sound is silence.
in the japanese name, add ! at the end おもちゃと一緒にあそぶのだっ!
no need to put your name in the tag. you can keep the japanese one i guess
you might as well add azusa in the tag
add this one you source アスタロッテのおもちゃ! < anime name
source http://www.kasi-time.com/item-54670.html
Easy
Nothing to suggest at all
Normal
hp drain -1? if new player miss any slider combo, they will instant fail the map
00:07:155 (5) - reverse point on the blue line made it kind weird. end the slider on red line and add note on 00:07:827 stack on slider tail
00:12:752 (2) - try this shape?
Hard
00:07:379 (7,8) - reduce it hitsound by 10%
00:12:976 (2) - stack this on 00:11:857 (1) - slider head
00:14:543 (6) - suggesting use this this part as a stream.
try this?
00:20:812 (1,2,3) - check this spacing, jump kinda sudden
00:38:499 (5) - add note?
00:42:081 (4,5) - unstack this, low ar is kinda confusing
try this?
00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this kind of stream is hard to read, shouldnt be in the hard difficulty
00:51:931 (2) - unstack
epic hitsound + moe song hhooohoh. the map havent been throughmuch any mod, but the mapset almost perfect. get this rank plz
kudo 4 u
Kudo or no kudo your choice.
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion
General
romanized title should be Omocha to Issho ni Asobu no da! つ half length sound is silence.
in the japanese name, add ! at the end おもちゃと一緒にあそぶのだっ!
no need to put your name in the tag. you can keep the japanese one i guess
you might as well add azusa in the tag
add this one you source アスタロッテのおもちゃ! < anime name
source http://www.kasi-time.com/item-54670.html
Easy
Nothing to suggest at all
Normal
hp drain -1? if new player miss any slider combo, they will instant fail the map
00:07:155 (5) - reverse point on the blue line made it kind weird. end the slider on red line and add note on 00:07:827 stack on slider tail
00:12:752 (2) - try this shape?
Hard
00:07:379 (7,8) - reduce it hitsound by 10%
00:12:976 (2) - stack this on 00:11:857 (1) - slider head
00:14:543 (6) - suggesting use this this part as a stream.
try this?
00:20:812 (1,2,3) - check this spacing, jump kinda sudden
00:38:499 (5) - add note?
00:42:081 (4,5) - unstack this, low ar is kinda confusing
try this?
00:46:782 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this kind of stream is hard to read, shouldnt be in the hard difficulty
00:51:931 (2) - unstack
epic hitsound + moe song hhooohoh. the map havent been through
kudo 4 u
Kudo or no kudo your choice.