This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 7. September 2013 at 11:52:21

Artist: Dubba Jonny
Title: A Brief Tutorial On Vip Production
BPM: 140,01
Filesize: 6131kb
Play Time: 01:46
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1,24 stars, 69 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 387 notes)
3. Normal (3,89 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Dubba Jonny - A Brief Tutorial On Vip Production
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Pending~
thanks to xyxxyxxy for making that sexy "speed up!" sb element

Random Mod from a noob for a noob :3
Ignore stuff u dont like, and tell me what u chanaged and what not
So lets start

Insane

00:47:697 (1,2,3,4,5) - mach die 1/6 scheiße weg und mach nen reverse slider auf 1/8 weil der beat 1/8 darstellen soll, und 1/8 zu schnell zu streamen wäre du kannst auch nen sliderstream auf 1/8 machen
00:51:554 (11,4) - würd ich lieber ersetzen durch 2 kleinere slider
00:57:554 (10) - würd da ne neue combo klatschen
01:11:268 (10) - da auch ne neue combo klatschen
01:18:553 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1/8 slider oder sliderstream wie oben
01:35:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - mach die pls auf nen 1/1 beat aber bitte nich 1/4 Q_Q
01:36:981 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - der stream geht bis zum nächsten 1/2 beat weiter also mach da noch n circle rein

KIAI TIME

00:48:126 (1) - start
01:08:268 (8) - beim zweiten slidertick stopp

01:09:554 (1) - start
01:15:339 (5) - beim letzten slidertick stopp

01:18:982 (1) - start
01:46:409 (6) - stopp

From: Productive Mod Team!

Ok this beatmap if going to ranked must have atleast 2 diff
-mostly many undistanced notes but fix it
-many double timed notes
00:07:199 please delete this pattern and only slider you will add until 00:08:484
00:20:698 weird pattern should redo this until 00:22:091
00:43:840 ok this? is not in line mostly broken
this is the only i can mod right know pls poke me if an experience modder just mod this and i will do thi again k? cause this maps looks cool right now

thanks

hello~ from my queue

General: disable countdown on all diffs? it is somehow weird to me while playing this map

[Insane]
General: some spacing changes from big to small doesnt play very well, could be more cautious making the spacing changes next time
00:05:270 (1,2) - the spacing between two slider is too small, can try some different arrangement for those sliders.
00:28:412 (7,8) - it does not flow well to me for this stack at here, i would move 8 to x:372, y:32 (maybe? a triangle between note 8 and next two notes)
00:32:912 (5) - NC?
00:35:483 (8) - same
00:39:769 (5) - NC?
00:46:840 (1,2) - maybe do like this? http://puu.sh/3GBL0.jpg
00:50:697 (7) - NC..(i think you missed many NC lol)
01:18:982 (1) - head finish?
01:36:124 (5,6) - here is the place i mentioned, from 01:35:267 (1,2,3,4) - these 4, player jumps alot, but 01:36:124 (5,6) - this two slow down too sudden on spacing)

i dont see problems playing easier diff, so thats all

heres the replay file if you needed (1st play) http://puu.sh/3GBZX.osr
almost fail haha

thanks

IRC mod

Danny1291208 wrote:

IRC mod

thanks~

Hi ^^
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

That's it ^^

Hope to get ranked soon !!!! and get a STAR for map quality (:

Att.

thanks!~
about that hard diff.. i think i'll make one myself because of various reasons like having to wait for the gd mapper etc.. ^-^
also thanks for the star ;3

Hi, late mod From my modding queue
[General]
-I like the combo colours you used in the map, so keep it.

-I dont like copy - paste parts of the map, but i will post the fixes *maybe*

-I hate the taiko hitsounding and i would like to see it removed

-Adding Custom tick hitsounds would be nice for easy and normal

-Im not best at stroby board but i think the sign ,,speed up'' should start at big white tick and It should be continued to next white tick

[Easy]
00:13:841 (1,2) - I would like to kinda curve them
Like this



00:17:270 (1) - Curve this slider in other way
Like this


00:24:127 (1) - Curve it in other way
Like this

Or use other pattern hmm... maybe use
Something like this:

It seems better for me

Or if you dont like it you can curve
00:26:269 (2) - in other way and make it look like


00:29:269 (2) - Move that slider down and make it
Look like this:

Then move the
00:30:984 (1) - A bit down and use
That pattern

00:33:126 (2) - spacing about that slider seems okay so you can keep it


00:39:983 (2) -



00:48:126 (1,2) - I would like to see it
Like this:


01:24:125 (2) - Just curve it
(use left mouse button + ctrl)


01:20:696 (2,3,1) - Curve the (2) move a bit (3) and (1)
Like this:


01:29:267 (1,2) - Chose other shape
Like this:


01:32:696 (1,2,3) - Use other shapes and placements for the notes
Like this:
I dont like when sliders are going straight


01:39:981 (1) - I dont like straight sliders, but straight slider would look just nice here
Make it like this:


01:44:695 (2) - This slider should be curver A bit earlier
Something like this:
So it can look better


I think im done with easy now im going to mod normal

[Normal]
00:15:556 (2,3) - Use other pattern, curve the slider a bit so it can play and look batter
Like this


00:27:555 (1) - I dont like that kind of sliders, please take an other, i have no idea how to replace it, same with 00:30:984 (1) -


00:34:412 (1) - Curve that one in other way to make it look better


00:35:698 (2,3) - If you curved the previous slider, also move this so it can fill better previous slider
Like this:


00:49:197 (2) - Just curve it so it can look better, not sure if it plays better but sure it dont plays worse
Like this:


00:49:840 (3) - Curve it so it can look better, also i think it plays better
(use ctrl + left mouse button to make this)


00:51:554 (2) - For the better look use that pattern


00:53:268 (1,2) - curve both
and make it look like:


00:54:340 (3) - Also i would like to see that slider cirved to make better look for it
Something like this


00:56:697 (2) - Curve it in other way, i dont know if screenshot is needed
But here you have:


01:00:125 (3) - Curve it, for better blanket so it can look much better
like this:


01:05:268 (2) - Curve it at previous slider
Like this


01:12:125 (1) - make it look like ( just delete one square that curves slider *dont know how its called lol* )
(use right mouse button with ctrl)


01:12:982 (2) - The previous change was small but now you can use that pattern
-Delete the 01:12:982 (2) -
-copy 01:12:125 (1) - at the previous (2) time
- THen use Ctrl + > and Ctrl + H
- You should have that pattern:


01:13:839 (3) - Move it a bit higher due to prebvious pattern !


01:28:624 (3) - Curve it a bit to the left *no screenshot needed* i guess


01:30:124 (2) - make better blanked here please
SS:


01:32:267 (2) - a bit down


Rest seems fine

[Insane]
00:00:128 (1) - I hate this shape
I would use this:


00:00:770 (3,4,5,6,7) - Also dont foget to move them due to previous change!


00:02:056 (8) - New Combo please


00:07:627 (2,3,4) - 00:08:270 (6,7,8) - try to curve them a bit so it can look better ( i dotn like straight things)
Just a bit, like this:


00:13:841 (1) - Just make blanket
Like this


00:15:127 (7) - Curve it for a better flow, im not sure about the spacing of the next slider, but please try to arrange it good
SS


00:17:270 (1) - making ctrl + g here would make a little jump and the flow to the next notes would be really good


00:18:341 (6) - Also move that one note a bit left
SS:


00:23:698 (1) - That would look nice if you curved it a bit
Like this:


00:31:198 (1,2,3,4) - Ctrl + H - looks better


00:33:769 (8) - Curve it a bit, also stack the 2 next notes to it
Like this


00:34:412 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think that was already mapped part, maybe try to arrange notes in other style to make it better? Hmm?


00:38:698 (4) - just little curve for blanket and better look
Like this


00:43:840 (4) - That one to the left (please continue shape of previous notes)


00:48:983 (2,3,4,5) - I find that pattern look better if you kinda curve them
SS:


00:50:697 (7,8) - Also here i find other pattern
SS: ( do the same to the left side too to keep symmetry)


00:53:268 (2,3,4) - Same here
SS:


00:57:554 (1,2,3,4) - try to find shapes for that sliders


01:02:697 (2,3,4,5) - This pattern is great but it nbeeds better shape


01:05:268 (9) - Ctrl+ g for better flow


01:20:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Thats is nice stream but curve it a bit Im not sure if it plays better but it looks better for sure
Note: try to do this with every stream


01:45:981 (4,5,6) - Just use other shape


I didnt liked the copy/paste moments so i didnt mentioned them again
Also i didnt liked the taiko hitsounds ;_;
Rest looks okay o3o/

firefox crashed i wont write what i applied and what i didnt applied again..
thanks <3
also i wanted many stuff straight and not curved map would look too kawaii xD o3o
updating later

hi from my queue
[Easy]
00:17:270(1) move red point to x:488 y:244
00:22:412(2)move red point to x:136 y:112
01:20:696(2) mirror the slider at 01:18:982(1)
thats all for easy
[Normal]
00:13:860(1)do this
00:20:701(2) do this
00:37:840(1) do this
00:53:697(2) do this
[Insane]
Nice

well, thanks.. you brought soooo awesome reasons in your mod, also it caused soooo many changes in my map, i changed 1 object by 1 pixel.
sad

EDIT: ^me being an asshole. sorry. tried apologizing via pm

KonataN wrote:

mod

onepiece314 wrote:

hi from my queue
[Easy]
00:17:270(1) move red point to x:488 y:244
00:22:412(2)move red point to x:136 y:112
01:20:696(2) mirror the slider at 01:18:982(1)
thats all for easy
[Normal]
00:13:860(1)do this

SPOILER

00:20:701(2) do this

SPOILER

00:37:840(1) do this

SPOILER

00:53:697(2) do this

SPOILER

[Insane]
Nice

well, thanks.. you brought soooo awesome reasons in your mod, also it caused soooo many changes in my map, i changed 1 object by 1 pixel.
sad

ONE OF MY RULES WAS TO BE NICE
I COULDNT FIND MUCH MISTAKES SO FOR A MOD ALL I DID WAS TELL YOU WHAT I FOUND WHAT WAS WRONG
IF IT WASNT HELPFULL THEN DONT GIVE ME A KUDOSU
YOU ARE NOW BLACKLISTED BYE~BYE

KonataN wrote:

well, thanks.. you brought soooo awesome reasons in your mod, also it caused soooo many changes in my map, i changed 1 object by 1 pixel.
sad

If you think that you're modding is so much better, why don't you help her instead? It's a much politer way to give her some suggestions how to improve, and not leaving shitcomments such as 'sad'. Everyone was a beginner, even you. Don't forget that.

That's not the way to thank someone who spent time looking at your map. She's clearly new at modding. Like Irre said: better lend her a hand and explain what she could improve rather than replying bluntly her mod. That's not the way to do it.

Nobody likes when someone despises their work, regardless of how good or bad it is.

That's all I wanted to say. Good luck with your map btw!

I remember when I had this attitude too.. I've learned to be thankful and still to be consequent if I can use the Mod suggestion or not. I understand that it wasn't meant to be offensive or that you purposed to be offensive but now you know it.

i tried apologizig per pm at the same evening..

thanks for telling me it on a nice way though..

Hi~ KonataN

[Easy]

HP + 1 OD + 1

Ai Mod Check

01:20:267 (1) - No NC

[Normal]

Ai Mod Check

00:52:411 (1) - No NC

00:54:983 (1) - No NC

00:58:411 (1) - No NC

01:01:840 (1) - No NC

01:06:125 (1) - No NC

01:08:696 (1) - No NC

01:12:125 (1) - No NC

01:13:839 (2) - NC

[Insane]

Ai Mod Check

00:22:412 (8) - NC

00:26:055 (1) - NC

00:50:697 (7) - NC

01:24:982 (3) - More Good

01:27:232 (6) - DS 0.42 > 0.37

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/147483 My Map !!

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ KonataN

[Easy]

HP + 1 OD + 1 i wanted it like this

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

01:20:267 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

[Normal]

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

00:52:411 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

00:54:983 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

00:58:411 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

01:01:840 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

01:06:125 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

01:08:696 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

01:12:125 (1) - No NC yes, because of the music

01:13:839 (2) - NC true, but you forgot some NC i think (same in the end part)

[Insane]

SPOILER

Ai Mod Check

00:22:412 (8) - NC i am not sure..

00:26:055 (1) - NC i am not sure..

00:50:697 (7) - NC true

01:24:982 (3) -

SPOILER

More Good has to be like this due reguarity issues

01:27:232 (6) - DS 0.42 > 0.37 fixed

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/147483 My Map !!modded

i am aware what ai mod says and i dont care about ai mod xD
if you are starting to tell NC's be sure you tell them all ^-^
thanks for looking at my map

Na.
Easy:
Anfang mappen d:
00:54:126 (1) - vllt gerade? sieht so besser aus, finde ich.
01:27:982 (2) - ^ ?

Normal:
Anfang mappen, lol. owo
00:28:841 (2,3) - vllt den slider gerade machen?
00:35:698 (2,3) - ^
00:50:697 (1) - Mehr als reverse arrow ist zu verwirrend für normal. Wird mir auch andauern gesagt qwq
00:55:840 (1) - ^
01:00:982 (1) - ^
01:02:697 (1) - ^
01:04:411 (1) - ^ (lol)
01:08:054 (3) - vllt gerade? sieht besser aus c:
01:09:554 (1) - Ich zitiere: "Mehr als reverse arrow ist zu verwirrend für normal. Wird mir auch andauern gesagt qwq"
01:14:696 (1) - ^ (...)
01:20:696 (2) - ^ (Das isn fluch Qwq)
01:21:553 (3) - ^ (ärger mich nich >:)
01:24:982 (3) - ^
01:35:267 (1) - ^
01:38:695 (3) - ^
Yes D: <

Insane:
00:05:270 (1,2) - is das spacing bisschen kaputt oder sind es meine augen? qwq
00:29:269 (3,4) - setz die 2 bisschen weiter nach außen, damit die in der mitte nich so behindert aussehen qwq
00:36:126 (3,4) - ^
00:55:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lässt sich doof spielen owo finde ich, aber is ja dein geschmack D;
01:04:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:089 (3,4,5) - Lass die vorherigen streams doch so aussehen.
01:09:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lassen sich wieder doof spielen qwq
01:45:552 (3) - bisschen komisch platziert owo
Hitsounds sind irgendwie toll. owo

Badum >:

dannkii. aber warum forum pnst du mich nich sondern hetzt mir robin auf?D: xD
ich schau ma wenn ich zeit hab genauer an owo

edit:

Ami wrote:

Na.
Easy:
Anfang mappen d: nö :l
00:54:126 (1) - vllt gerade? sieht so besser aus, finde ich. k
01:27:982 (2) - ^ ? nö

Normal:
Anfang mappen, lol. owo nö :l
00:28:841 (2,3) - vllt den slider gerade machen? noep
00:35:698 (2,3) - ^ noep
00:50:697 (1) - Mehr als reverse arrow ist zu verwirrend für normal. Wird mir auch andauern gesagt qwq heheheh ich überspring mal den part weil kb :U
00:55:840 (1) - ^
01:00:982 (1) - ^
01:02:697 (1) - ^
01:04:411 (1) - ^ (lol)
01:08:054 (3) - vllt gerade? sieht besser aus c: noep
01:09:554 (1) - Ich zitiere: "Mehr als reverse arrow ist zu verwirrend für normal. Wird mir auch andauern gesagt qwq"
01:14:696 (1) - ^ (...)
01:20:696 (2) - ^ (Das isn fluch Qwq)
01:21:553 (3) - ^ (ärger mich nich >:)
01:24:982 (3) - ^
01:35:267 (1) - ^
01:38:695 (3) - ^
Yes D: < keen beck :<

Insane:
00:05:270 (1,2) - is das spacing bisschen kaputt oder sind es meine augen? qwq fixud
00:29:269 (3,4) - setz die 2 bisschen weiter nach außen, damit die in der mitte nich so behindert aussehen qwq doen
00:36:126 (3,4) - ^
00:55:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - lässt sich doof spielen owo finde ich, aber is ja dein geschmack D; es muss hard sein! Ò-Ó
01:04:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:07:089 (3,4,5) - Lass die vorherigen streams doch so aussehen.
01:09:554 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lassen sich wieder doof spielen qwq
01:45:552 (3) - bisschen komisch platziert owo fixed
Hitsounds sind irgendwie toll. owo dank

Badum >: tss

Don't stop, senpai D: