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Ikaros_F

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-04T15:58:32+00:00

liangv587 wrote:
Normal

可以考虑re，好多3/4没用到

Hard

00:02:527 (3,1) - 这个滑条太短了个人喜欢把滑条放前面，或者把note和上一个note合并成1/2滑条。
后面的也考虑下吧，这样也可以多两个招式。
如下：
折叠一下免得占太多空间
00:04:709 (4,5) -
00:06:891 (3,4) -
00:19:982 (6,1) -
00:22:164 (3,4) -
00:24:345 (5,1) -
00:42:891 (1,2) -
00:46:164 (2,3) -
00:47:254 (6,1) -
00:59:254 (4,5) -
01:07:982 (4,5) -
01:09:073 (2,3) -

00:08:664 (4,1) -
00:26:118 (3,1) - 这两个可以考虑变成1/8折返

01:19:436 (2) - 还是拆成两个note比较好

另外NC感觉也不是很妥
00:01:982 (1) - 取消nc，00:02:254 (2) - nc
00:03:345 (1) - 取消nc，00:04:164 (2) - nc
00:05:254 (1) - 取消nc
00:07:436 (1) - 取消nc，以此类推吧
这条不喜欢可以忽略

我比较水，就只找到这些，骗一分
有空也看看我的麦芽糖呗 http://osu.ppy.sh/b/332784

xDDD，谢谢，唔，现在有点晚，我明天会摸你的图的

cirnocon

60 posts

Joined May 2013

cirnocon 2013-12-05T05:36:37+00:00

Hi ikaros~
整体
Source: 求来源？
Tag: 可以考虑放歌曲名，专辑，作曲人等等，只要相关的就可以了...>.<
Normal
slider tick rate +1
Hard
既然都高难度了，可以增加整体难度的吧...？

HP Drain rate +3
Circle size +1
Approach rate +2
Overall diffculty +2
这样的话我想会没问题的？
一样slider tick rate +1
00:00:345 - , 00:00:618 - , 00:00:891 - 可以考虑加圈圈
像这样

评价：很宁静的一首歌...
大概就这样~

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-05T09:03:08+00:00

cirnocon wrote:
Hi ikaros~
整体
Source: 求来源？
Tag: 可以考虑放歌曲名，专辑，作曲人等等，只要相关的就可以了...>.<
Normal
slider tick rate +1
Hard
既然都高难度了，可以增加整体难度的吧...？

HP Drain rate +3
Circle size +1
Approach rate +2
Overall diffculty +2
这样的话我想会没问题的？
一样slider tick rate +1
00:00:345 - , 00:00:618 - , 00:00:891 - 可以考虑加圈圈
像这样

评价：很宁静的一首歌...
大概就这样~

谢谢你的Mod

huoyaoyuan

12 posts

Joined March 2013

huoyaoyuan 2013-12-12T05:22:58+00:00

[Normal]
01:22:164 (1) - 转盘时间有点短
[Hard]
01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉作为Hard难度有点大，建议间距调小一点
01:22:709 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 同上

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-12T09:13:46+00:00

huoyaoyuan wrote:
[Normal]
01:22:164 (1) - 转盘时间有点短
[Hard]
01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 感觉作为Hard难度有点大，建议间距调小一点
01:22:709 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 同上

谢谢你的Mod

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2013-12-14T13:46:42+00:00

Hello~
From pm req. Sorry for the late mod..

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Hi~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵

[Normal]
General
God.. 我觉得怎么hard质量不错，到了normal。。
Tag 和 Source conflict，查下aimod。
Beats
00:02:664 (3) - 蓝线起滑条。。虽然是个重音，但是这样去强调蓝线然后这个滑条吞了很多音的用法是在无法赞同
00:19:436 - 漏音，建议加上，曲子已经开始伸展了应该加一个note问题不大，难度上我觉得也还比较适应normal
00:38:800 (3,4) - 这两个音一个跟钢琴一个跟了鼓，串音轨的问题是一直存在的，不过因为太普遍我觉得不好一一挑出来，这里是比较明显的
00:54:618 (3) - 你听一下这里还是音轨跟的乱，钢琴的感觉还是不错的，这一声跟的破坏了钢琴的停顿
00:56:527 (2) - 看看这里又用clap去跟了钢琴
00:58:982 (5,6,1) - 我要跳这里节奏，很明显是一个更加紧凑的节奏型，却只放了白线带过，参考这种节奏型，然而你后边又确实比较缓。。

SPOILER

01:13:709 (2,3,4) - 这里不应该做的那么紧凑，相反，01:15:073 - 这里你漏了一个音，应该紧凑来表现音乐发展的地方你没有紧凑起来，却在本来节奏松散的地方加了一些节奏。。这是应该警惕的地方。
Placement
00:06:618 (5,1) - 继续吐槽，这种一挑一个准的blanket。。不然的话就不要做成像blanket的形状嘛。。
00:21:618 (4,5) - 检查这里的blanket，尾巴跟5的blanket没有包好
00:23:527 (1,2) - 也是blanket
00:36:073 (1,2) - ^, 这个确实太歪了
00:44:800 (1,2,3) - 适合blanket请务必包好，这个样子实在是我不能接受的
00:51:345 (5,6) - 还是blanket
01:18:073 (1,2) - ^
Hitsound
00:01:164 (1) - 我要吐槽这个音效，第一，怎么在重音上加了clap？24白线clap不是最基本的音效么。。前边一段的clap都下在了13白线上实在是违和
00:06:345 (4) - 吐槽：clap感觉莫名
00:12:618 (1) - 还是来吐槽clap
00:51:345 (5,6) - 音效头上的两声鼓实在是违和，即便是音效我感觉也要连贯地加，像这一段已经听不见clap了
NCs
00:33:891 (3) - 按照你之前的加法这里是nc比较好的（参考00:16:436 (1) - ）

[Hard]
General
间距问题比较多，我觉得还是好好注意一下，平时不跳基本还是开ds，到了跳一点的时候再把间距调的高一点，会感觉整齐不少。
节奏上感觉跟的音轨是有点乱的，不过考虑到这首曲子也还可以。。也许可以吧。。
Beats
00:08:527 (2,3,4) - 分配三点打击感我感觉节奏不对，我看看大概是这种节奏？

SPOILER

（1/8）大概这样会有乐趣？

00:15:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里是一个相当轻的地方，如果一定要这种节奏的话也尽量减少打击感的存在，尤其是之前和之后这种类似自创比较少的情况下，我的建议是改成折返滑条，虽然降低难度了（其实也是没有啥好点子）。
00:25:982 (3,4,5) - 前边类似的地方说过。。这还是自己斟酌一下。
00:42:073 (4) - 这个地方我看了好几遍最后还是决定写上，你看一下这个滑条是不是拆开成一个3/4加单note来强调那个滑条尾巴上的重音，我觉得值一次打击。
Placement
00:01:164 (1,2,3,4) - 没感觉1,2之间有一个将近2.0的间距。。虽然打起来会在这里没什么感觉，不过接下来的一些间距就会感觉变得比较小
00:03:345 (1,2) - 来对比一下这里 00:05:527 (1,1) 我觉得间距等价。。
00:11:254 (5,1) - 明显减小的间距，而且flow也是有问题，因为这里绿线改sv的问题，我感觉大概应该是这样的感觉

SPOILER

（仅仅针对距离，这种顺flow的感觉也是一般，排的时候再想想别的排列）
00:18:618 (3,4) - 还是做一下比较00:20:800 (1,2) - 00:22:982 (1,2) - 这两个地方也是类似，不过我倾向于拉大后边两处的距离，等间距在这个地方是有一点点浪费
00:26:527 (6,1) - 主观意见：感觉上可以来个跳
00:27:891 (2,3,4) - 还是做个比较00:29:800 (2,3,4) - 我感觉这两个地方比较相似了，间距还是稍微统一下
00:31:709 (3,4,5) - 说起来的话这两边blanket都没弄好
00:33:345 (6,1) - stack理由不充分，感觉应该是个跳，一个建议而已。
00:36:618 (4,5) - 这个地方flow是有一点问题的，4的尾巴比5的高了一些这样会有一点突然拐下来的感觉。这张图的flow是比较顺的，这样的小地方还是不要破坏整体
00:51:073 (3,4) - 继续对比一下这里00:44:527 (5,1) - 是要拉开还是叠起来，感觉都还可以，倾向拉开
00:55:436 (4,1) - 我感觉没包好，你再修一下为好，其实nazi。。
00:56:527 (1) - 这里可以跳一下吧。。
01:03:345 (5,1) - flow别扭，就是单纯的别扭。。
01:15:891 (5,6) - 没有包好，另外我感觉kiai做的不错

Hitsound
00:29:254 (1) - 这里是一定要挑一下的，你的打击感是在滑条头上，不过头上的音效实在实在太弱了。。强烈建议加强这里的音效。
00:56:527 (1) - 头上这么强的音下了好弱的音效，不科学，还有打击感也有问题
01:24:073 (1) - 用clap么。。不舒服还是觉得finish好
NCs
00:06:345 (1) - 参考你之前的nc加法，我觉得这里应该是不需要nc的
00:29:254 (1) - 实话说我不太清楚这里为何如此强调。。总之音效挑了一下我感觉nc也是想挑，应该是没有nc的。。也许是跟你的思路相违了，还是作为一个意见作为参考

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.

.

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-15T08:54:53+00:00

Atrue wrote:
Hello~
From pm req. Sorry for the late mod..

[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.
[General]
Hi~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵
[Normal]
General
God.. 我觉得怎么hard质量不错，到了normal。。
Tag 和 Source conflict，查下aimod。
Beats
00:02:664 (3) - 蓝线起滑条。。虽然是个重音，但是这样去强调蓝线然后这个滑条吞了很多音的用法是在无法赞同
00:19:436 - 漏音，建议加上，曲子已经开始伸展了应该加一个note问题不大，难度上我觉得也还比较适应normal
00:38:800 (3,4) - 这两个音一个跟钢琴一个跟了鼓，串音轨的问题是一直存在的，不过因为太普遍我觉得不好一一挑出来，这里是比较明显的
00:54:618 (3) - 你听一下这里还是音轨跟的乱，钢琴的感觉还是不错的，这一声跟的破坏了钢琴的停顿
00:56:527 (2) - 看看这里又用clap去跟了钢琴
00:58:982 (5,6,1) - 我要跳这里节奏，很明显是一个更加紧凑的节奏型，却只放了白线带过，参考这种节奏型，然而你后边又确实比较缓。。
SPOILER
01:13:709 (2,3,4) - 这里不应该做的那么紧凑，相反，01:15:073 - 这里你漏了一个音，应该紧凑来表现音乐发展的地方你没有紧凑起来，却在本来节奏松散的地方加了一些节奏。。这是应该警惕的地方。
Placement
00:06:618 (5,1) - 继续吐槽，这种一挑一个准的blanket。。不然的话就不要做成像blanket的形状嘛。。
00:21:618 (4,5) - 检查这里的blanket，尾巴跟5的blanket没有包好
00:23:527 (1,2) - 也是blanket
00:36:073 (1,2) - ^, 这个确实太歪了
00:44:800 (1,2,3) - 适合blanket请务必包好，这个样子实在是我不能接受的
00:51:345 (5,6) - 还是blanket
01:18:073 (1,2) - ^
Hitsound
00:01:164 (1) - 我要吐槽这个音效，第一，怎么在重音上加了clap？24白线clap不是最基本的音效么。。前边一段的clap都下在了13白线上实在是违和
00:06:345 (4) - 吐槽：clap感觉莫名
00:12:618 (1) - 还是来吐槽clap
00:51:345 (5,6) - 音效头上的两声鼓实在是违和，即便是音效我感觉也要连贯地加，像这一段已经听不见clap了
NCs
00:33:891 (3) - 按照你之前的加法这里是nc比较好的（参考00:16:436 (1) - ）
[Hard]
General
间距问题比较多，我觉得还是好好注意一下，平时不跳基本还是开ds，到了跳一点的时候再把间距调的高一点，会感觉整齐不少。
节奏上感觉跟的音轨是有点乱的，不过考虑到这首曲子也还可以。。也许可以吧。。
Beats
00:08:527 (2,3,4) - 分配三点打击感我感觉节奏不对，我看看大概是这种节奏？→这个idea很不错啊
SPOILER
（1/8）大概这样会有乐趣？
00:15:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里是一个相当轻的地方，如果一定要这种节奏的话也尽量减少打击感的存在，尤其是之前和之后这种类似自创比较少的情况下，我的建议是改成折返滑条，虽然降低难度了（其实也是没有啥好点子）。→我降低了它的音量不知行不行，orz
00:25:982 (3,4,5) - 前边类似的地方说过。。这还是自己斟酌一下。→good idea
00:42:073 (4) - 这个地方我看了好几遍最后还是决定写上，你看一下这个滑条是不是拆开成一个3/4加单note来强调那个滑条尾巴上的重音，我觉得值一次打击。→fix
Placement
00:01:164 (1,2,3,4) - 没感觉1,2之间有一个将近2.0的间距。。虽然打起来会在这里没什么感觉，不过接下来的一些间距就会感觉变得比较小→我把它移进来了一点。
00:03:345 (1,2) - 来对比一下这里 00:05:527 (1,1) 我觉得间距等价。。→我占时考虑不出来该怎么改
00:11:254 (5,1) - 明显减小的间距，而且flow也是有问题，因为这里绿线改sv的问题，我感觉大概应该是这样的感觉→fix
SPOILER
（仅仅针对距离，这种顺flow的感觉也是一般，排的时候再想想别的排列）
00:18:618 (3,4) - 还是做一下比较00:20:800 (1,2) - 00:22:982 (1,2) - 这两个地方也是类似，不过我倾向于拉大后边两处的距离，等间距在这个地方是有一点点浪费→._.我还在想改怎么改呢...
00:26:527 (6,1) - 主观意见：感觉上可以来个跳→↑
00:27:891 (2,3,4) - 还是做个比较00:29:800 (2,3,4) - 我感觉这两个地方比较相似了，间距还是稍微统一下
00:31:709 (3,4,5) - 说起来的话这两边blanket都没弄好→我把4往左移动了一点，5稍微修了下
00:33:345 (6,1) - stack理由不充分，感觉应该是个跳，一个建议而已。→fix
00:36:618 (4,5) - 这个地方flow是有一点问题的，4的尾巴比5的高了一些这样会有一点突然拐下来的感觉。这张图的flow是比较顺的，这样的小地方还是不要破坏整体→，其实我是想把4的开头和2的开头放一起的._.我看看能不能把这4个滑条放成一个稍微弯弯的四边形。
00:51:073 (3,4) - 继续对比一下这里00:44:527 (5,1) - 是要拉开还是叠起来，感觉都还可以，倾向拉开→._.我就想用下2个不同的梗._.
00:55:436 (4,1) - 我感觉没包好，你再修一下为好，其实nazi。。→fix
00:56:527 (1) - 这里可以跳一下吧。。→fix
01:03:345 (5,1) - flow别扭，就是单纯的别扭。。→没改._.
01:15:891 (5,6) - 没有包好，另外我感觉kiai做的不错→改了

Hitsound
00:29:254 (1) - 这里是一定要挑一下的，你的打击感是在滑条头上，不过头上的音效实在实在太弱了。。强烈建议加强这里的音效。→fix
00:56:527 (1) - 头上这么强的音下了好弱的音效，不科学，还有打击感也有问题→fix
01:24:073 (1) - 用clap么。。不舒服还是觉得finish好→我记得我是用finish的...orz，谢谢提醒
NCs
00:06:345 (1) - 参考你之前的nc加法，我觉得这里应该是不需要nc的 → fix
00:29:254 (1) - 实话说我不太清楚这里为何如此强调。。总之音效挑了一下我感觉nc也是想挑，应该是没有nc的。。也许是跟你的思路相违了，还是作为一个意见作为参考→其实是感觉变了sv才加的nc

That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me. .

我做的这个Normal的确太水了._.看了下你的mod感觉可以remap了
谢谢你的神mod

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2013-12-15T09:48:06+00:00

先吐槽下坑爹的音效数量……没看文件真的听不出来有这么多233

其实我曾经想送mod~~刷post~~来着的……那个时候打了一遍……尽是有音没note有note没音就果断删了……

两个难度的tag不一样

[hard]

某些排版的细节和大局观比较差，可以拉近物件的打击时间感觉一下……比如一开始的00:02:527 (6,7) - ……这样会好很多↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

就算这样也只是比原来的好，看上去还是很奇怪的，我更建议吧00:01:845 (6) - 放到（244.144）并且挪动后面的物件，我感觉你需要把很多物件到处挪动……好好利用版面空间

还有几何图形太少了，很多地方可以加，像00:04:164 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 完全有条件弄个近似的五角星↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

注意那个00:04:164 (2) - 跟前一个物件的距离太大了，整个挪近一点……

01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:10:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这些完全可以弄成完全的五角星……关于下五角星的正确姿势↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

00:04:164 (2) - （320.208）也是美观的问题，类似的就不说了。记得fix00:28:709 (1) - 保持距离

01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一般鬼畜图才用1距离的连打，弄近一点

就只说这些比较重要的了，其他的细节问题像00:52:982 (2) - 的放置↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

每一个都发图估计我的puu要用掉一兆……

一分钟的图没什么好mod的~~更何况我本来就是来水的233~~……部分排版还是很漂亮的……

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-17T10:42:15+00:00

zengdaen wrote:
先吐槽下坑爹的音效数量……没看文件真的听不出来有这么多233

其实我曾经想送mod~~刷post~~来着的……那个时候打了一遍……尽是有音没note有note没音就果断删了……

两个难度的tag不一样

[hard]

某些排版的细节和大局观比较差，可以拉近物件的打击时间感觉一下……比如一开始的00:02:527 (6,7) - ……这样会好很多↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

就算这样也只是比原来的好，看上去还是很奇怪的，我更建议吧00:01:845 (6) - 放到（244.144）并且挪动后面的物件，我感觉你需要把很多物件到处挪动……好好利用版面空间

还有几何图形太少了，很多地方可以加，像00:04:164 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 完全有条件弄个近似的五角星↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

注意那个00:04:164 (2) - 跟前一个物件的距离太大了，整个挪近一点……

01:02:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:10:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这些完全可以弄成完全的五角星……关于下五角星的正确姿势↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

00:04:164 (2) - （320.208）也是美观的问题，类似的就不说了。记得fix00:28:709 (1) - 保持距离

01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一般鬼畜图才用1距离的连打，弄近一点

就只说这些比较重要的了，其他的细节问题像00:52:982 (2) - 的放置↓↓↓↓↓

SPOILER

每一个都发图估计我的puu要用掉一兆……

一分钟的图没什么好mod的~~更何况我本来就是来水的233~~……部分排版还是很漂亮的……

谢谢你的Mod,学到五角星了

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2013-12-27T15:30:29+00:00

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1vhNnK
那个百度pending吧里面说可以抱个大腿的那个是我然后似乎是上上周做完以后校园网一直出问题就拖到了现在..
总之这个是guest difficulty
no kudosu for this post

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-27T15:47:52+00:00

Banana wrote:
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1vhNnK
那个百度pending吧里面说可以抱个大腿的那个是我然后似乎是上上周做完以后校园网一直出问题就拖到了现在..
总之这个是guest difficulty
no kudosu for this post

谢谢你的GD，正在上传，柑橘可以厚脸皮找一波mod了
顺便求个mu啊

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2013-12-27T19:55:36+00:00

modding queues的~

Banana'a Insane

直接一點...
節奏難以掌握
距離令整份譜出現誤讀
長短音同音樂有點不配合
hitsound不能配合

00:00:345 - 如果在這裡開始可能比較好
00:13:573 (1,2,3,4) - 做成誤讀
00:20:254 (2) - 取消比較好
00:36:073 - 如果這裡是用00:36:209 (2) - 的反彈會比較配合音樂 (試試將00:36:073 (1,2) - ctrl+g)

以上只是隨便摸一下
整張圖的問題你可以試試打一次你可能會感覺得到
1.方向(移動路線)
2.距離(誤讀,節奏,急停和加速)
3.背景音樂(例: 鼓聲是短,可以用圈 ; 琴聲是長, 可以用slider)
4.hitsound (請在有需要才落例如重音跳音)
5.主音樂/副音樂 (請在製圖時確認你的節奏主音樂(主旋律)理論上是重要的)
6.在高潮點(kiai time) 可以嘗試增加難度

小量參考:
00:01:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡是合理及有可玩性可以參考一下
00:10:436 - 這到可以開始一個slider/設一個圈以配合節奏

在有需要的情況下
請remap一次~

祝你能學到做圖的技巧及期待你的作品

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-12-28T09:47:53+00:00

Hi,Ikaros_F,In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.或許可以試試紅線部分的S音效改成S:C1音效，這樣滑條滑的時候就不會有聲音了。
2.今天發現你增加了香蕉的diff，所以你tag要加他的ID，有GD的在tag裡都要加ID。

[Normal]

00:19:709 (8) - 能Blanket 00:20:800 (1) 。
00:33:345 (6,1,2,3,4) - 可以試試用ctrl+D做個五邊。
00:42:618 (5) - 上下對齊比較好看:

SPOILER

00:49:164 (6) - 似乎忘了+clap? (同一套的顏色建議還是規律加個音效比較好)
00:54:618 (5) - ^ +大白線。

[Hard]

00:07:709 (1) - Blanket。
00:13:164 (1) - ^ 這樣會變好看的pattern。
00:49:982 (1,2) - 全選往上移一點，形成個三角點。
00:52:164 (5) - 如果這邊也是有Blanket的話，也會有個三角點不錯看。
00:55:436 (4) - 這應該也是Blanket吧，歪了。
01:10:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 微調一下，對照前面的pattern吧，你這邊35疊到了，4又疊到後面的滑條頭。
01:11:800 (1) - 滑條有聲音是故意設置的?
01:16:164 (6) - 試試滑條頭+whistle。
01:16:982 (7) - 滑條頭不疊好嗎?
01:24:073 (1) - 我認為歌曲結束了，所以這邊音量不應該100%反而是要比前面音量更小。

[Banana's Insane] Clap聲有點響亮，音量減去10%看看?

00:03:618 (2) - 疊 00:03:754 (3) 滑條頭?
00:15:754 (2) - 這個連打似乎放太遠了點?
00:23:391 (4) - (28|208)?
00:26:118 (1) - 微調一下呈個弧度?

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2013-12-28T12:51:10+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,Ikaros_F,In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

1.或許可以試試紅線部分的S音效改成S:C1音效，這樣滑條滑的時候就不會有聲音了。
2.今天發現你增加了香蕉的diff，所以你tag要加他的ID，有GD的在tag裡都要加ID。FIX
[/color]
[Normal]

00:19:709 (8) - 能Blanket 00:20:800 (1) 。FIX
00:33:345 (6,1,2,3,4) - 可以試試用ctrl+D做個五邊。不懂._.
00:42:618 (5) - 上下對齊比較好看FIX:
SPOILER
00:49:164 (6) - 似乎忘了+clap? (同一套的顏色建議還是規律加個音效比較好)FIX
00:54:618 (5) - ^ +大白線。FIX

[Hard]

00:07:709 (1) - Blanket。
00:13:164 (1) - ^ 這樣會變好看的pattern。
00:49:982 (1,2) - 全選往上移一點，形成個三角點。
00:52:164 (5) - 如果這邊也是有Blanket的話，也會有個三角點不錯看。
00:55:436 (4) - 這應該也是Blanket吧，歪了。
01:10:436 (1,2,3,4,5) - 微調一下，對照前面的pattern吧，你這邊35疊到了，4又疊到後面的滑條頭。
01:11:800 (1) - 滑條有聲音是故意設置的?
01:16:164 (6) - 試試滑條頭+whistle。
01:16:982 (7) - 滑條頭不疊好嗎?
01:24:073 (1) - 我認為歌曲結束了，所以這邊音量不應該100%反而是要比前面音量更小。
↑，除了第三点，其他都FIX了

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

谢谢你的Mod

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2013-12-29T15:27:15+00:00

tellertheworld wrote:
modding queues的~
Banana'a Insane
直接一點... 好吧我也直接一点..
節奏難以掌握
距離令整份譜出現誤讀间距是有意的比如 00:03:345 (1) - 1/2节奏全是0.2间距 1/4节奏都会大一些
長短音同音樂有點不配合原曲节奏并不复杂为了有趣
hitsound不能配合我是认真下音效了诶.-.

00:00:345 - 如果在這裡開始可能比較好考虑过不过后来还是跟了新加进来的电子音
00:13:573 (1,2,3,4) - 做成誤讀前面解释了间距问题了.-.虽然这个样子排列确实难了一些
00:20:254 (2) - 取消比較好和后面都是一样的节奏来着
00:36:073 - 如果這裡是用00:36:209 (2) - 的反彈會比較配合音樂 (試試將00:36:073 (1,2) - ctrl+g) 这里用的是圈跟钢琴滑条跟其他东西这样的梗已经从00:27:891 (1) - 一直用到这里了

以上只是隨便摸一下
整張圖的問題你可以試試打一次你可能會感覺得到 .-.我找人试过图他差一个100ss
1.方向(移動路線)
2.距離(誤讀,節奏,急停和加速)
3.背景音樂(例: 鼓聲是短,可以用圈 ; 琴聲是長, 可以用slider)
4.hitsound (請在有需要才落例如重音跳音)
5.主音樂/副音樂 (請在製圖時確認你的節奏主音樂(主旋律)理論上是重要的)
6.在高潮點(kiai time) 可以嘗試增加難度嗯我也觉得这确实是个问题虽然做的时候设想是kiai简单一点不过kiai之前的部分显得过难了 kiai前的间距稍微减小了一些

小量參考:
00:01:164 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡是合理及有可玩性可以參考一下
00:10:436 - 這到可以開始一個slider/設一個圈以配合節奏

在有需要的情況下
請remap一次~ .-.

祝你能學到做圖的技巧及期待你的作品

smallboat wrote:
[Banana's Insane] Clap聲有點響亮，音量減去10%看看? done rearranged volume

00:03:618 (2) - 疊 00:03:754 (3) 滑條頭? 因为放了大梗 1/4间距都比较大而且全曲就是没有1/4叠在一起的所以没改.-.-
00:15:754 (2) - 這個連打似乎放太遠了點? 稍微近了一点点.-.（因为bpm比较低所以...
00:23:391 (4) - (28|208)? 嗯改了个位置在这个基础上把这边几个都动了一下
00:26:118 (1) - 微調一下呈個弧度? 倒是觉得现在这样从上面打下来没什么问题所以没改

谢谢你们的mod~

修改稿

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Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-01-11T14:53:05+00:00

as JoySide's req

General

日本艺人名字写法顺序照常：改成Kajiura Yuki，顺便unicode可以写tag里的“梶浦由記"

Banana's Insane

01:24:209 (1) - 可以考虑消尾音
什么都不说了射2星，神麻婆为何要归隐

Hard

00:07:436 (6,1) - 考虑blanket
00:14:254 (3,4) - ^，后面不说了，实在不想弄也行，只是为了整齐罢了
00:28:300 这里钢琴有个三连不用一下么
01:01:573 (7) - 前后ds差的有点多
嗯。。。怎么说呢，似乎单点note排的有点散，另外或许是收到ds的限制？有些可以跳挺远的地方依旧很拘谨的放的很近，呃，不过看个人感觉吧（最近hard都难到爆你知道吗orz

Normal

00:05:254 (5) - 前后ds差太多
00:10:436 (1,2) - 低难度还是做个blanket吧，后面还有很多我就不说了，都看一下吧
00:14:254 (1) - 噗。。。其实没事还是少拉蚯蚓滑条，特别是低难度233
00:42:073 (6,1) - 这节奏不对啊。。。歌里那个琴明明是三分拍的，这里为什么要这样下节奏？存在感那么强的track还是不要漏掉比较好
01:02:254 (5,1) - nc移动
01:07:164 (5,1) - ^
01:10:982 (4,1) - ^
01:14:800 (2) - nc，nc还是放在重音吧
蚯蚓太多啦blanket又没perfect看着有点乱，整理一下谱面还是可以的0.0

梶浦由记好啊

good luck

Jemmmmy

526 posts

Joined September 2012

Jemmmmy 2014-01-11T15:07:32+00:00

Irc

2014-01-12 01:19 Ikaros_F: ._.
2014-01-12 01:20 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-01-12 01:21 Ikaros_F: 黑子大大好
2014-01-12 01:21 Jemmmmy: 芭娜娜难度要看看吗
2014-01-12 01:21 Ikaros_F: →_→乃想看就看嘛
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: 00:11:800 (6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/6ha60.jpg
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: hard
2014-01-12 01:23 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: 先看看hard难度
2014-01-12 01:23 Ikaros_F: 好的
2014-01-12 01:24 Jemmmmy: 00:33:618 (1) - http://puu.sh/6haag.jpg 节奏
2014-01-12 01:24 Ikaros_F: 这个是把8移动上面一些嘛._.
2014-01-12 01:25 Jemmmmy: flow顺一点，7移动下一点8上一点
2014-01-12 01:26 Ikaros_F: 好的，谢谢
2014-01-12 01:28 Jemmmmy: 01:04:982 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/6halI.jpg 移动点点
2014-01-12 01:28 Jemmmmy: 一点点
2014-01-12 01:29 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:29 Jemmmmy: 01:02:527 (2,2) - 两个重叠？
2014-01-12 01:30 Ikaros_F: ._.居然没有重叠上去，赶紧改改
2014-01-12 01:30 Jemmmmy: 01:05:800 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/6hapW.jpg
2014-01-12 01:30 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:30 Jemmmmy: 如果想3,4距离大一点也可以，这主要是改改1.2,3的位置
2014-01-12 01:31 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:32 Jemmmmy: 这个串和后面的串最好还是摆一个弯01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-01-12 01:33 Jemmmmy: 两个弯在9个note的串有点表现不出来
2014-01-12 01:34 Jemmmmy: 00:49:164 (3,1) - 包一包？
2014-01-12 01:35 Jemmmmy: 01:14:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距感觉不好，1,2,3间距应该小过3,4,5的间距
2014-01-12 01:36 Ikaros_F: 能不能弱弱的问一句串拐弯是什么意思呢，比如我把这个串先往右上走，然后再往右下？
2014-01-12 01:38 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6haNj.jpg
2014-01-12 01:38 Jemmmmy: 这样可以画出两个圆弧就是两个弯，，
2014-01-12 01:39 Ikaros_F: ok,谢谢
2014-01-12 01:40 Jemmmmy: 01:18:618 (5) - 这些类型滑条前面跟note的话最好要这样http://puu.sh/6haUF.jpg
2014-01-12 01:41 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:43 Jemmmmy: 00:26:527 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/6hb1m.jpg 这里flow有点断了
2014-01-12 01:43 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:44 Jemmmmy: normal
2014-01-12 01:44 Jemmmmy: 00:02:527 (2) - 换成白线circle？
2014-01-12 01:45 Ikaros_F: 好
2014-01-12 01:45 Jemmmmy: 00:19:709 (2,3) - 没包好
2014-01-12 01:46 Jemmmmy: 00:28:436 (4,1) - ^
2014-01-12 01:46 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:46 Jemmmmy: 00:36:073 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/6hbd0.jpg 减小滑条角度
2014-01-12 01:47 Ikaros_F: 好的
2014-01-12 01:47 Jemmmmy: 00:44:254 (2) - http://puu.sh/6hbgs.jpg
2014-01-12 01:48 Jemmmmy: 00:48:073 (1) - http://puu.sh/6hbhw.jpg
2014-01-12 01:48 Jemmmmy: 00:49:164 (3) - http://puu.sh/6hbip.jpg
2014-01-12 01:49 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:50 Jemmmmy: 01:01:982 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/6hbnv.jpg
2014-01-12 01:50 Jemmmmy: 上面主要是01:02:254 (5,1) - 这两个连接不是很好
2014-01-12 01:51 Ikaros_F: 了解
2014-01-12 01:51 Jemmmmy: 01:05:800 (4) - 不跟前面一样用单点？
2014-01-12 01:52 Ikaros_F: ._.就想改变以下
2014-01-12 01:52 Jemmmmy: normal最好不用这样的滑条，比较难处理01:08:527 (2) -
2014-01-12 01:52 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:54 Jemmmmy: normal其实不用太跟一条音轨，鼓点也可以
2014-01-12 01:55 Ikaros_F: ._.好的，但是有的时候可以2个都跟么
2014-01-12 01:55 Jemmmmy: 01:08:800 - 有些长白线你用滑条带过或者直接成为滑条尾了
2014-01-12 01:56 Ikaros_F: 长白线的时候最好放在滑条头或者circle么
2014-01-12 01:56 Jemmmmy: 对，长白线打击感音轨是最重的。
2014-01-12 01:56 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:58 Jemmmmy: 还有这些音01:07:709 - 也不要放滑条尾，因为这些音相对比你滑条头的音重了很多
2014-01-12 01:58 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:59 Jemmmmy: 01:16:164 (4) - 长度拉到下个白线
2014-01-12 01:59 Ikaros_F: 好
2014-01-12 02:00 Jemmmmy: 00:38:254 (1,2) - 两个要遵守DS
2014-01-12 02:01 Ikaros_F: 差0.1可以么._.
2014-01-12 02:02 Jemmmmy: 。。应该不行，0.05就行
2014-01-12 02:02 Ikaros_F: 好._.
2014-01-12 02:03 Jemmmmy: 看了芭娜娜，怎么也在玩遮挡和节奏梗，不过没什么问题。
2014-01-12 02:03 Jemmmmy: 先这样吧

加油！

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-01-13T04:02:04+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
as JoySide's req
General
日本艺人名字写法顺序照常：改成Kajiura Yuki，顺便unicode可以写tag里的“梶浦由記"

Hard
00:07:436 (6,1) - 考虑blanket 改了
00:14:254 (3,4) - ^，后面不说了，实在不想弄也行，只是为了整齐罢了
00:28:300 这里钢琴有个三连不用一下么思考中._.
01:01:573 (7) - 前后ds差的有点多改了
嗯。。。怎么说呢，似乎单点note排的有点散，另外或许是收到ds的限制？有些可以跳挺远的地方依旧很拘谨的放的很近，呃，不过看个人感觉吧（最近hard都难到爆你知道吗orz
Normal
00:05:254 (5) - 前后ds差太多改了
00:10:436 (1,2) - 低难度还是做个blanket吧，后面还有很多我就不说了，都看一下吧
00:14:254 (1) - 噗。。。其实没事还是少拉蚯蚓滑条，特别是低难度233._.
00:42:073 (6,1) - 这节奏不对啊。。。歌里那个琴明明是三分拍的，这里为什么要这样下节奏？存在感那么强的track还是不要漏掉比较好fix
01:02:254 (5,1) - nc移动改了↓
01:07:164 (5,1) - ^
01:10:982 (4,1) - ^
01:14:800 (2) - nc，nc还是放在重音吧
蚯蚓太多啦blanket又没perfect看着有点乱，整理一下谱面还是可以的0.0
梶浦由记好啊

good luck

谢谢你的Mod

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-01-13T04:02:31+00:00

Jemmmmy wrote:
Irc
2014-01-12 01:19 Ikaros_F: ._.
2014-01-12 01:20 Jemmmmy: 0.0
2014-01-12 01:21 Ikaros_F: 黑子大大好
2014-01-12 01:21 Jemmmmy: 芭娜娜难度要看看吗
2014-01-12 01:21 Ikaros_F: →_→乃想看就看嘛
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: 00:11:800 (6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/6ha60.jpg
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: hard
2014-01-12 01:23 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:23 Jemmmmy: 先看看hard难度
2014-01-12 01:23 Ikaros_F: 好的
2014-01-12 01:24 Jemmmmy: 00:33:618 (1) - http://puu.sh/6haag.jpg 节奏
2014-01-12 01:24 Ikaros_F: 这个是把8移动上面一些嘛._.
2014-01-12 01:25 Jemmmmy: flow顺一点，7移动下一点8上一点
2014-01-12 01:26 Ikaros_F: 好的，谢谢
2014-01-12 01:28 Jemmmmy: 01:04:982 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/6halI.jpg 移动点点
2014-01-12 01:28 Jemmmmy: 一点点
2014-01-12 01:29 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:29 Jemmmmy: 01:02:527 (2,2) - 两个重叠？
2014-01-12 01:30 Ikaros_F: ._.居然没有重叠上去，赶紧改改
2014-01-12 01:30 Jemmmmy: 01:05:800 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/6hapW.jpg
2014-01-12 01:30 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:30 Jemmmmy: 如果想3,4距离大一点也可以，这主要是改改1.2,3的位置
2014-01-12 01:31 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:32 Jemmmmy: 这个串和后面的串最好还是摆一个弯01:20:527 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2014-01-12 01:33 Jemmmmy: 两个弯在9个note的串有点表现不出来
2014-01-12 01:34 Jemmmmy: 00:49:164 (3,1) - 包一包？
2014-01-12 01:35 Jemmmmy: 01:14:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - 间距感觉不好，1,2,3间距应该小过3,4,5的间距
2014-01-12 01:36 Ikaros_F: 能不能弱弱的问一句串拐弯是什么意思呢，比如我把这个串先往右上走，然后再往右下？
2014-01-12 01:38 Jemmmmy: http://puu.sh/6haNj.jpg
2014-01-12 01:38 Jemmmmy: 这样可以画出两个圆弧就是两个弯，，
2014-01-12 01:39 Ikaros_F: ok,谢谢
2014-01-12 01:40 Jemmmmy: 01:18:618 (5) - 这些类型滑条前面跟note的话最好要这样http://puu.sh/6haUF.jpg
2014-01-12 01:41 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:43 Jemmmmy: 00:26:527 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/6hb1m.jpg 这里flow有点断了
2014-01-12 01:43 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:44 Jemmmmy: normal
2014-01-12 01:44 Jemmmmy: 00:02:527 (2) - 换成白线circle？
2014-01-12 01:45 Ikaros_F: 好
2014-01-12 01:45 Jemmmmy: 00:19:709 (2,3) - 没包好
2014-01-12 01:46 Jemmmmy: 00:28:436 (4,1) - ^
2014-01-12 01:46 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:46 Jemmmmy: 00:36:073 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/6hbd0.jpg 减小滑条角度
2014-01-12 01:47 Ikaros_F: 好的
2014-01-12 01:47 Jemmmmy: 00:44:254 (2) - http://puu.sh/6hbgs.jpg
2014-01-12 01:48 Jemmmmy: 00:48:073 (1) - http://puu.sh/6hbhw.jpg
2014-01-12 01:48 Jemmmmy: 00:49:164 (3) - http://puu.sh/6hbip.jpg
2014-01-12 01:49 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:50 Jemmmmy: 01:01:982 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/6hbnv.jpg
2014-01-12 01:50 Jemmmmy: 上面主要是01:02:254 (5,1) - 这两个连接不是很好
2014-01-12 01:51 Ikaros_F: 了解
2014-01-12 01:51 Jemmmmy: 01:05:800 (4) - 不跟前面一样用单点？
2014-01-12 01:52 Ikaros_F: ._.就想改变以下
2014-01-12 01:52 Jemmmmy: normal最好不用这样的滑条，比较难处理01:08:527 (2) -
2014-01-12 01:52 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:54 Jemmmmy: normal其实不用太跟一条音轨，鼓点也可以
2014-01-12 01:55 Ikaros_F: ._.好的，但是有的时候可以2个都跟么
2014-01-12 01:55 Jemmmmy: 01:08:800 - 有些长白线你用滑条带过或者直接成为滑条尾了
2014-01-12 01:56 Ikaros_F: 长白线的时候最好放在滑条头或者circle么
2014-01-12 01:56 Jemmmmy: 对，长白线打击感音轨是最重的。
2014-01-12 01:56 Ikaros_F: ok
2014-01-12 01:58 Jemmmmy: 还有这些音01:07:709 - 也不要放滑条尾，因为这些音相对比你滑条头的音重了很多
2014-01-12 01:58 Ikaros_F: 嗯
2014-01-12 01:59 Jemmmmy: 01:16:164 (4) - 长度拉到下个白线
2014-01-12 01:59 Ikaros_F: 好
2014-01-12 02:00 Jemmmmy: 00:38:254 (1,2) - 两个要遵守DS
2014-01-12 02:01 Ikaros_F: 差0.1可以么._.
2014-01-12 02:02 Jemmmmy: 。。应该不行，0.05就行
2014-01-12 02:02 Ikaros_F: 好._.
2014-01-12 02:03 Jemmmmy: 看了芭娜娜，怎么也在玩遮挡和节奏梗，不过没什么问题。
2014-01-12 02:03 Jemmmmy: 先这样吧
加油！

x谢谢黑子

hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2014-01-16T14:37:04+00:00

全局：
一段很轻的音乐中，“啪”一声吓跑不少人

难度：Normal
-->感觉跟钢琴比较好，跟鼓很诡异。比如00:04:982 (4)这个
00:06:618 (2) - 缩短一半+往返
01:19:709 (1) - 在上一条白线结束吧，连转两遍对新手来说是个难度

难度：Hard
-->基本没问题发现

难度：Banana's Insane
-->基本没问题发现

写这么短就送一分吧，加油

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-01-17T06:27:40+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
全局：
一段很轻的音乐中，“啪”一声吓跑不少人

难度：Normal
-->感觉跟钢琴比较好，跟鼓很诡异。比如00:04:982 (4)这个fix
00:06:618 (2) - 缩短一半+往返
01:19:709 (1) - 在上一条白线结束吧，连转两遍对新手来说是个难度

难度：Hard
-->基本没问题发现

难度：Banana's Insane
-->基本没问题发现

写这么短就送一分吧，加油

其他没有改，谢谢mod

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-02-01T05:20:00+00:00

m4m~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
might want to keep combo colours consistent across all diffs (Banana's diff has more rich colours which can be used in Normal/Hard)

[Normal]
OD-1, its currently too high for the lowest diff in a set
would be cool to hear some more whistles in the beginning to mimic the piano sound, i suggest every 3rd beat in a measure (00:02:254, 00:04:436, 00:06:618 etc)
00:04:845 (4,5) - rhythms with circles like this are really challenging for a normal diff, use a setup like this instead:

SPOILER

00:26:254 (1) - rid the repeat here, follows the music better and provides some rhythmic variations
00:33:618 (6) - start the NC here instead of 00:34:436 (1)
00:36:073 (4) - similarly start the NC here instead of 00:38:254 (1), and add NC to 00:40:436 (3)
00:43:027 (7) - again, the beginning will be difficult for newbies to time properly, try this:

SPOILER

00:51:345 (1,2,3) - this is a bit difficult to play since 00:52:436 (2) lands on a minor beat, try a rhythm like this:

SPOILER

00:58:982 (5) - forgot clap on start
01:07:164 (6) - NC here instead of 01:08:254 (1)
01:08:800 (3) - clap end
01:19:709 (1) - end this at 01:21:891 to capture the piano; start 01:21:891 (1) at 01:22:027 instead
imo in the kiai you should swap the claps onto the 2nd and 4th ticks in a measure since thats where the claps are in the music

[Hard]
there are a lot of redundant green lines, delete all the ones that does not change volume/sv. e.g. 00:12:345, 00:15:073, etc.
00:18:718 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:18:754
00:30:618 (1,2,3) - keep these the same spacing would look a lot nicer
00:33:891 (1,2,3,4) - do a gradual spacing change here would fit the music nicer
00:56:527 (1) - hmm why did you decrease the volume here? imo this should be a gradual volume increase starting from 00:55:709 (1) to reflect the music
00:57:891 (4) - NC here to mark the start of kiai
01:04:982 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - the way this flows is a bit hard to catch, try something like this:

SPOILER

01:15:345 (3) - NC here instead of 01:14:800 (1)
i would end the map with a spinner after 01:24:073 (1), which will end at 01:28:345 like Insane

[Banana's Insane]
00:08:527 (1,2,3) - reduce the spacing here a bit, will mirror 00:26:118 (1,2,3) better
00:22:982 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is a bit challenging to play, mostly because of the awkward spacing at 00:23:118 (2) and the linear flow. try to make this like 00:27:345 (1,2,3,4) would be much better
00:41:800 (2,3,4,5) - i am very prone to breaking here, i think raising 00:42:209 (5) a bit would make it flow better
00:43:300 (3) - i would move this note to 00:43:164, because for similar patterns before there was always a piano sound on the blue line that you are following, but its not present here
00:57:073 (3) - because of the change in spacing and music its best to have a NC here
01:05:391 (2) - change this into a 1/2 repeat slider, follows the piano better and gives a more interesting jump onto 01:05:800 (3)
01:09:209 (3,5) - do a ctrl+g here, i would always miss 01:09:209 (3) because im anticipating a larger spacing when seeing 01:09:209 (3,4)
01:10:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern confused me while playing, i was tempted to hit 01:10:982 (3,4) as 1/2 due to having the same colour. Either add NC to 01:11:254 (4) or make 01:11:254 (4,5,6) - furthur
01:21:618 (3) - ctrl+g here would give a more interesting flow
really interesting anti jumps, a diff where you improve your performance as you play it more

Nothing major there, though i'd like to see a few more mods focusing on hitsounds and combo consistency on the lower diffs, then you can call me back for a recheck after. Good Luck!

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2014-02-11T18:43:30+00:00

~~777post美丽~~

Hollow Wings

01:24:209 (1) - 可以考虑消尾音结尾转盘分数蹭蹭蹭的还是挺爽的所以（
什么都不说了射2星，神麻婆为何要归隐因为懒（~~哇两颗星~~

jonathanlfj

00:08:527 (1,2,3) - reduce the spacing here a bit, will mirror 00:26:118 (1,2,3) better emm.. here is a circle between sliders, anyway, 1.86->1.5
00:22:982 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is a bit challenging to play, mostly because of the awkward spacing at 00:23:118 (2) and the linear flow. try to make this like 00:27:345 (1,2,3,4) would be much better no, under the BPM of 110, it's not too hard for a Insane (英语编不下去了我还是说中文这边钢琴比较重后面那个比较轻这边就跳了一下
00:41:800 (2,3,4,5) - i am very prone to breaking here, i think raising 00:42:209 (5) a bit would make it flow better nothing wrong here imo? 其实是没看懂英文（
00:43:300 (3) - i would move this note to 00:43:164, because for similar patterns before there was always a piano sound on the blue line that you are following, but its not present here yea, not same to the piano parts, it follow the same track like 00:06:209 (4), though not so loud here
00:57:073 (3) - because of the change in spacing and music its best to have a NC here ok
01:05:391 (2) - change this into a 1/2 repeat slider, follows the piano better and gives a more interesting jump onto 01:05:800 (3) no, i follow the drums here, as it repeat at 01:20:664 (4)
01:09:209 (3,5) - do a ctrl+g here, i would always miss 01:09:209 (3) because im anticipating a larger spacing when seeing 01:09:209 (3,4) i did think it over, and i find it more reasonable to keep 01:09:209 (3,5,1) these three have same spacing between them, just like the small spacing at 00:09:618 (6) or other former 1/2 spacing
01:10:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern confused me while playing, i was tempted to hit 01:10:982 (3,4) as 1/2 due to having the same colour. Either add NC to 01:11:254 (4) or make 01:11:254 (4,5,6) - furthur nc added
01:21:618 (3) - ctrl+g here would give a more interesting flow yea
really interesting anti jumps, a diff where you improve your performance as you play it more

thanks for your mods~

修改稿

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顺便骗个kd（划掉）好了

[general]
whistle声音略小啊倒不如用默认whistle(

[Easy]
00:18:618 - 这里开始70%音量的绿线前面过渡的两个滑条可以稍微大点音量现在那三个70段的圈跟着钢琴有点吵
01:08:254 (1) - 删clap
01:08:800 (3) - 开头clap
01:09:891 (4) - clap移到开头
01:10:982 (1) - 结尾clap
01:12:618 (2) - 去掉clap
01:14:800 (1) - 开头whistle换clap
01:16:164 (3) - 尾巴加clap
00:34:436 (1,3) - 加whistle
00:41:527 (5) - 去掉whistle
00:42:073 (6) - 开头whistle
00:45:891 (2) - 开头whistle
00:52:982 (3) - 开头whistle
kiai whistle太少.-.
00:58:982 (5) - 开头可whistle
01:01:164 (3) - 同上
01:04:164 (3) - 同上
01:10:982 (1) - 开头去掉whistle
00:31:709 (3) - new combo
00:36:073 (4) - nc
00:38:254 (1) - 去掉nc
00:40:436 (3) - nc
00:50:527 (4) - nc
00:51:345 (1) - 去掉nc
00:54:073 (4) - nc
00:57:891 (4) - nc
01:00:073 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:164 (6) - nc
01:08:254 (1) - 去掉nc

[Hard]
整体说来clap还有点乱简单建议作为参考
00:16:436 (2) - whistle改成clap 前半部分每个长白线一个clap这边漏了这些clap全部不要和whistle一起用
00:26:118 (4) - whistle似乎是点在滑条上了建议是把最后尾巴上的whistle删掉
00:33:618 (7) - 加whistle？加的话00:34:982 (3) - 的whistle可以考虑删
00:40:164 (6) - 同样的建议这里加whistle 00:41:527 (3) - 滑条头删whistle 同样是建议
00:51:073 (3) - 再同..我不po时间点了（lan
00:56:527 (1) - 这边降音量虽然不明白什么意思但是尾巴放个clap效果还可以（划掉
00:57:891 (4) - clap和finish放在一起的话就全难度都这么放前面有单独finish建议这边不clap
kiai部分我猜测了一下你下clap的思路似乎没猜出来（
于是..建议还是24clap

jonathanlfj wrote:
imo in the kiai you should swap the claps onto the 2nd and 4th ticks in a measure since thats where the claps are in the music

长白线开始冻次大次长白线对着冻然后后面三个白线是次打次就在两个次上面下clap
不过这种方法现在已经下了这么多clap有点不好改可以先试试这个思路：
就是全部白线上都下clap 除了一些滑条或者空拍带过的白线然后带过的白线附近的clap也稍微改一改
于是建议：
00:58:982 (7) - whistle改clap
01:06:618 (4) - 和kiai开始那条一样建议不clap
01:07:709 (3) - whistle改clap
01:08:527 (1) - 滑条尾whistle改clap
01:18:618 (5) - whistle和clap冲突了这边whistle其实可以先空着留到最后两个串那边考虑一下怎么下 01:20:527 (2,5) - 这两个加或者别的方式都行两个串相同也行

关于nc的吐槽

00:12:345 (7) - 这里new combo
00:13:164 (1) - 去掉nc
00:14:254 (3) - nc
00:15:891 (1) - 去掉nc
00:16:436 (2) - nc
00:28:709 (1) - 去掉nc
00:29:800 (3) - nc
00:30:618 (1) - 去掉nc
00:31:709 (3) - nc
00:40:164 (6,1) - 我个人是比较喜欢stack中间一般不nc 不然颜色不同很讨厌不过这个一般不挑所以我只是建议一下
00:42:618 (5) - nc
00:42:891 (1) - 去掉nc
00:51:345 (4) - nc
00:52:436 (1) - 去掉nc
00:53:527 (3) - nc
00:54:345 (1) - 去掉nc
00:56:527 (1) - 去掉nc
00:57:073 (1) - 去掉nc
00:57:891 (4) - nc
00:59:800 (1) - 去掉nc
01:00:073 (2) - nc
01:03:618 (6) - nc
01:08:527 (1) - 去掉nc
01:09:073 (2) - nc
01:11:800 (1) - 去掉nc
01:12:618 (2) - nc
01:13:164 (1) - 去掉nc
01:19:436 (6) - nc
01:19:709 (1) - 去掉nc
01:20:527 (2) - nc
01:22:709 (3) - nc

[Banana's Insane]
九号自定义音效不见了（http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD24jx3

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-02-14T03:55:37+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
m4m~

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
might want to keep combo colours consistent across all diffs (Banana's diff has more rich colours which can be used in Normal/Hard)

[Normal]
OD-1, its currently too high for the lowest diff in a set
would be cool to hear some more whistles in the beginning to mimic the piano sound, i suggest every 3rd beat in a measure (00:02:254, 00:04:436, 00:06:618 etc)
00:04:845 (4,5) - rhythms with circles like this are really challenging for a normal diff, use a setup like this instead:
SPOILER

00:26:254 (1) - rid the repeat here, follows the music better and provides some rhythmic variations
00:33:618 (6) - start the NC here instead of 00:34:436 (1)
00:36:073 (4) - similarly start the NC here instead of 00:38:254 (1), and add NC to 00:40:436 (3)
00:43:027 (7) - again, the beginning will be difficult for newbies to time properly, try this:
SPOILER
00:51:345 (1,2,3) - this is a bit difficult to play since 00:52:436 (2) lands on a minor beat, try a rhythm like this:
SPOILER
00:58:982 (5) - forgot clap on start
01:07:164 (6) - NC here instead of 01:08:254 (1)
01:08:800 (3) - clap end
01:19:709 (1) - end this at 01:21:891 to capture the piano; start 01:21:891 (1) at 01:22:027 instead
imo in the kiai you should swap the claps onto the 2nd and 4th ticks in a measure since thats where the claps are in the music
Normal all fix

[Hard]
there are a lot of redundant green lines, delete all the ones that does not change volume/sv. e.g. 00:12:345, 00:15:073, etc.
00:18:718 - unsnapped green line, snap to 00:18:754
00:30:618 (1,2,3) - keep these the same spacing would look a lot nicer
00:33:891 (1,2,3,4) - do a gradual spacing change here would fit the music nicera little change
00:56:527 (1) - hmm why did you decrease the volume here? imo this should be a gradual volume increase starting from 00:55:709 (1) to reflect the music
00:57:891 (4) - NC here to mark the start of kiai
01:04:982 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - the way this flows is a bit hard to catch, try something like this:
SPOILER
01:15:345 (3) - NC here instead of 01:14:800 (1)
i would end the map with a spinner after 01:24:073 (1), which will end at 01:28:345 like Insane
others are fix

Nothing major there, though i'd like to see a few more mods focusing on hitsounds and combo consistency on the lower diffs, then you can call me back for a recheck after. Good Luck!

About hitsounds and NC. I accept some Banana's suggestions.

thanks for your mod

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-02-14T04:01:06+00:00

Banana wrote:
~~777post美丽~~

Hollow Wings
01:24:209 (1) - 可以考虑消尾音结尾转盘分数蹭蹭蹭的还是挺爽的所以（
什么都不说了射2星，神麻婆为何要归隐因为懒（~~哇两颗星~~

jonathanlfj
00:08:527 (1,2,3) - reduce the spacing here a bit, will mirror 00:26:118 (1,2,3) better emm.. here is a circle between sliders, anyway, 1.86->1.5
00:22:982 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is a bit challenging to play, mostly because of the awkward spacing at 00:23:118 (2) and the linear flow. try to make this like 00:27:345 (1,2,3,4) would be much better no, under the BPM of 110, it's not too hard for a Insane (英语编不下去了我还是说中文这边钢琴比较重后面那个比较轻这边就跳了一下
00:41:800 (2,3,4,5) - i am very prone to breaking here, i think raising 00:42:209 (5) a bit would make it flow better nothing wrong here imo? 其实是没看懂英文（
00:43:300 (3) - i would move this note to 00:43:164, because for similar patterns before there was always a piano sound on the blue line that you are following, but its not present here yea, not same to the piano parts, it follow the same track like 00:06:209 (4), though not so loud here
00:57:073 (3) - because of the change in spacing and music its best to have a NC here ok
01:05:391 (2) - change this into a 1/2 repeat slider, follows the piano better and gives a more interesting jump onto 01:05:800 (3) no, i follow the drums here, as it repeat at 01:20:664 (4)
01:09:209 (3,5) - do a ctrl+g here, i would always miss 01:09:209 (3) because im anticipating a larger spacing when seeing 01:09:209 (3,4) i did think it over, and i find it more reasonable to keep 01:09:209 (3,5,1) these three have same spacing between them, just like the small spacing at 00:09:618 (6) or other former 1/2 spacing
01:10:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this pattern confused me while playing, i was tempted to hit 01:10:982 (3,4) as 1/2 due to having the same colour. Either add NC to 01:11:254 (4) or make 01:11:254 (4,5,6) - furthur nc added
01:21:618 (3) - ctrl+g here would give a more interesting flow yea
really interesting anti jumps, a diff where you improve your performance as you play it more

thanks for your mods~
修改稿
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389,88,27754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
323,152,27891,5,0,0:0:0:0:
300,158,28164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
277,159,28436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
254,152,28709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
234,140,29254,5,2,0:0:0:0:
54,324,29527,5,8,0:0:0:0:
76,328,29800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
98,325,30073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,319,30345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
139,307,30618,6,0,L|201:328,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,178,30891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,186,31027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
165,192,31164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
142,185,31436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
47,69,31709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
69,64,31982,1,2,0:0:0:0:
91,62,32254,1,2,0:0:0:0:
113,64,32527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,73,32800,6,0,L|381:62,1,57.5,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,74,33073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,73,33345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
146,92,33618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,326,33891,5,8,0:0:0:0:
117,258,34164,2,0,L|37:265,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,324,34436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,258,34709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,319,34982,5,8,0:0:0:0:
141,282,35254,2,0,L|72:273,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,313,35527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
141,282,35800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
322,301,36073,5,8,0:0:0:0:
444,310,36209,2,0,L|507:272,2,57.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,287,36617,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,205,36754,2,0,L|205:214,2,57.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
354,269,37164,5,8,0:0:0:0:
408,126,37300,2,0,L|438:67,2,57.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,249,37709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
322,98,37845,2,0,L|247:168,2,57.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,228,38254,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,204,38527,2,0,L|449:202,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,100,38800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,116,39073,2,0,L|392:112,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,67,39345,5,8,0:0:0:0:
71,69,39482,2,0,L|8:54,2,57.5,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,88,39891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
269,134,40027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
159,108,40164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,157,40300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,126,40436,5,8,0:0:0:0:
127,141,40709,2,0,L|60:160,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,259,40982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,276,41254,2,0,L|258:257,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,345,41527,5,8,0:0:0:0:
83,354,41800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,276,41936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,322,42073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
434,274,42209,2,0,L|491:325,2,57.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,308,42618,6,0,P|242:315|185:295,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,227,43027,1,2,0:0:0:0:
367,57,43300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
441,116,43436,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,132,43709,6,0,P|357:153|291:140,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,189,44118,2,0,P|122:187|66:155,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,64,44527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,38,44664,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,53,44732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,67,44800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,313,45073,2,0,L|252:311,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
61,306,45345,2,0,L|3:305,1,57.5
181,290,45618,2,0,L|250:288,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
445,71,45891,6,0,B|435:146|435:146|449:194,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,327,46300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,229,46436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,217,46709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,62,46982,6,0,B|297:127|297:127|292:178,1,115,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,264,47391,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,229,47527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
158,311,47800,5,2,0:0:0:0:
105,231,47936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
50,143,48073,2,0,P|112:129|173:148,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,150,48482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
389,230,48618,2,0,P|327:244|266:225,1,115,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,220,49164,5,8,0:0:0:0:
91,286,49436,2,0,L|97:344,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,159,49709,2,0,L|115:101,1,57.5
97,344,49982,5,2,0:0:0:0:
157,184,50254,2,0,L|170:129,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
119,348,50527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
422,293,50800,2,0,L|439:235,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
141,346,51073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,272,51345,5,8,0:0:0:0:
295,128,51618,2,0,L|241:146,1,57.5
380,67,51891,2,0,L|443:47,1,57.5
282,278,52164,5,2,0:0:0:0:
115,210,52436,2,0,L|66:180,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,248,52709,2,0,L|296:286,1,57.5
420,295,52982,5,2,0:0:0:0:
302,365,53254,2,0,L|239:356,1,57.5
441,287,53527,5,8,0:0:0:0:
459,273,53800,2,0,L|457:194,1,57.5
469,70,54073,2,0,L|471:128,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,82,54345,5,2,0:0:0:0:
191,70,54618,2,0,L|242:43,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,101,54890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
170,287,55164,2,0,L|99:323,1,57.5
321,122,55436,5,2,0:0:0:0:
316,145,55709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,97,55982,2,0,L|102:136,1,57.5
196,246,56254,2,0,L|148:216,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,322,56527,5,2,0:0:0:0:
268,322,56800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,326,57073,5,2,0:0:0:0:
396,309,57345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
470,288,57618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
133,353,57891,5,12,0:0:0:0:
56,269,58164,2,0,L|72:194,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,52,58436,2,0,L|162:109,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,342,58709,2,0,L|174:267,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,324,58982,5,0,0:0:0:0:
401,183,59118,2,0,L|414:127,1,57.5
316,297,59391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
446,274,59527,2,0,L|433:329,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,268,59800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
283,133,60073,5,0,0:0:0:0:
215,254,60209,2,0,L|228:198,1,57.5
241,102,60482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
167,40,60618,2,0,L|152:102,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
142,183,60891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
49,258,61164,6,0,L|106:273,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,366,61436,2,0,L|166:351,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
74,364,61709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
325,346,61982,6,0,L|385:356,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
441,266,62254,2,0,L|365:255,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,220,62527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
346,224,62664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
254,146,62800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
431,47,63073,6,0,L|503:37,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,163,63345,2,0,L|332:173,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,134,63618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
245,97,63754,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,50,63891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
266,112,64164,6,0,L|312:76,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,16,64436,2,0,L|114:52,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,159,64709,1,2,0:0:0:0:
43,86,64845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,213,64982,6,0,P|61:280|14:315,1,115,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,240,65391,2,0,P|244:218|314:221,1,115,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
437,327,65800,2,0,P|384:330|319:299,2,115,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
453,311,66618,5,12,0:0:0:0:
463,113,66891,2,0,L|391:84,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
247,26,67163,2,0,L|301:46,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,191,67436,2,0,L|291:162,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,188,67709,5,0,0:0:0:0:
127,94,67845,2,0,L|140:38,1,57.5
145,217,68118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
39,125,68254,2,0,L|26:180,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,244,68527,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,205,68800,5,0,0:0:0:0:
471,169,68936,2,0,L|456:231,1,57.5
410,304,69209,1,2,0:0:0:0:
383,153,69345,2,0,L|396:97,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,290,69618,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,205,69891,5,0,0:0:0:0:
254,193,70027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,159,70164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,114,70300,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,68,70436,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,322,70709,5,2,0:0:0:0:
138,323,70845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,348,70982,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,329,71254,5,0,0:0:0:0:
320,346,71391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,358,71527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
477,351,71800,1,2,0:0:0:0:
299,205,72073,5,0,0:0:0:0:
254,193,72209,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,159,72346,1,0,0:0:0:0:
210,114,72482,1,2,0:0:0:0:
218,68,72618,2,0,L|137:89,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,199,72891,2,0,L|423:178,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,358,73164,5,0,0:0:0:0:
399,360,73436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,351,73573,1,2,0:0:0:0:
395,328,73709,2,0,L|316:313,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,329,73982,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,169,74254,6,0,L|295:205,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
134,159,74527,2,0,L|79:123,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,297,74800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,299,75073,1,2,0:0:0:0:
381,230,75345,5,12,0:0:0:0:
467,260,75618,1,0,0:0:0:0:
481,169,75891,1,8,0:0:0:0:
41,197,76164,5,2,0:0:0:0:
103,266,76300,2,0,P|172:284|234:262,1,115,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,300,76709,2,0,L|354:260,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,118,76982,2,0,L|417:58,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,195,77254,2,0,L|463:250,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,344,77527,6,0,L|470:370,1,57.5,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,254,77800,2,0,L|221:232,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,115,78073,2,0,L|125:51,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
78,222,78345,2,0,L|100:274,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,326,78618,6,0,L|355:255,1,57.5,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,205,78891,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,193,79027,1,2,0:0:0:0:
222,159,79164,1,8,0:0:0:0:
210,114,79300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,68,79436,2,0,L|137:89,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,307,79709,5,12,0:0:0:0:
222,323,79982,2,0,L|141:344,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,251,80254,2,0,P|99:222|45:230,1,115,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,124,80664,2,0,P|324:178|385:204,1,115,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,327,81073,6,0,L|491:306,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,292,81345,2,0,L|280:349,1,57.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,248,81618,2,0,L|137:300,1,57.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
18,188,81891,5,12,0:0:0:0:
29,168,82164,2,0,L|84:137,1,57.5,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,40,82436,2,0,P|197:66|248:61,1,115,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,195,82845,2,0,P|354:200|315:224,1,115,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,357,83254,5,0,0:0:0:0:
178,313,83390,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,269,83526,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,226,83663,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,182,83799,1,2,0:0:0:0:
166,76,83935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,101,84072,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84209,12,0,88345,0:0:0:0:
顺便骗个kd（划掉）好了

[general]
whistle声音略小啊倒不如用默认whistle(

[Easy]
00:18:618 - 这里开始70%音量的绿线前面过渡的两个滑条可以稍微大点音量现在那三个70段的圈跟着钢琴有点吵
01:08:254 (1) - 删clap
01:08:800 (3) - 开头clap
01:09:891 (4) - clap移到开头
01:10:982 (1) - 结尾clap
01:12:618 (2) - 去掉clap
01:14:800 (1) - 开头whistle换clap
01:16:164 (3) - 尾巴加clap
00:34:436 (1,3) - 加whistle
00:41:527 (5) - 去掉whistle
00:42:073 (6) - 开头whistle
00:45:891 (2) - 开头whistle
00:52:982 (3) - 开头whistle
kiai whistle太少.-.
00:58:982 (5) - 开头可whistle
01:01:164 (3) - 同上
01:04:164 (3) - 同上
01:10:982 (1) - 开头去掉whistle
00:31:709 (3) - new combo
00:36:073 (4) - nc
00:38:254 (1) - 去掉nc
00:40:436 (3) - nc
00:50:527 (4) - nc
00:51:345 (1) - 去掉nc
00:54:073 (4) - nc
00:57:891 (4) - nc
01:00:073 (1) - 去掉nc
01:07:164 (6) - nc
01:08:254 (1) - 去掉nc

[Hard]
整体说来clap还有点乱简单建议作为参考
00:16:436 (2) - whistle改成clap 前半部分每个长白线一个clap这边漏了这些clap全部不要和whistle一起用
00:26:118 (4) - whistle似乎是点在滑条上了建议是把最后尾巴上的whistle删掉
00:33:618 (7) - 加whistle？加的话00:34:982 (3) - 的whistle可以考虑删
00:40:164 (6) - 同样的建议这里加whistle 00:41:527 (3) - 滑条头删whistle 同样是建议
00:51:073 (3) - 再同..我不po时间点了（lan
00:56:527 (1) - 这边降音量虽然不明白什么意思但是尾巴放个clap效果还可以（划掉
00:57:891 (4) - clap和finish放在一起的话就全难度都这么放前面有单独finish建议这边不clap
kiai部分我猜测了一下你下clap的思路似乎没猜出来（
于是..建议还是24clap
jonathanlfj wrote:
imo in the kiai you should swap the claps onto the 2nd and 4th ticks in a measure since thats where the claps are in the music
长白线开始冻次大次长白线对着冻然后后面三个白线是次打次就在两个次上面下clap
不过这种方法现在已经下了这么多clap有点不好改可以先试试这个思路：
就是全部白线上都下clap 除了一些滑条或者空拍带过的白线然后带过的白线附近的clap也稍微改一改
于是建议：
00:58:982 (7) - whistle改clap
01:06:618 (4) - 和kiai开始那条一样建议不clap
01:07:709 (3) - whistle改clap
01:08:527 (1) - 滑条尾whistle改clap
01:18:618 (5) - whistle和clap冲突了这边whistle其实可以先空着留到最后两个串那边考虑一下怎么下 01:20:527 (2,5) - 这两个加或者别的方式都行两个串相同也行
关于nc的吐槽
00:12:345 (7) - 这里new combo
00:13:164 (1) - 去掉nc
00:14:254 (3) - nc
00:15:891 (1) - 去掉nc
00:16:436 (2) - nc
00:28:709 (1) - 去掉nc
00:29:800 (3) - nc
00:30:618 (1) - 去掉nc
00:31:709 (3) - nc
00:40:164 (6,1) - 我个人是比较喜欢stack中间一般不nc 不然颜色不同很讨厌不过这个一般不挑所以我只是建议一下
00:42:618 (5) - nc
00:42:891 (1) - 去掉nc
00:51:345 (4) - nc
00:52:436 (1) - 去掉nc
00:53:527 (3) - nc
00:54:345 (1) - 去掉nc
00:56:527 (1) - 去掉nc
00:57:073 (1) - 去掉nc
00:57:891 (4) - nc
00:59:800 (1) - 去掉nc
01:00:073 (2) - nc
01:03:618 (6) - nc
01:08:527 (1) - 去掉nc
01:09:073 (2) - nc
01:11:800 (1) - 去掉nc
01:12:618 (2) - nc
01:13:164 (1) - 去掉nc
01:19:436 (6) - nc
01:19:709 (1) - 去掉nc
01:20:527 (2) - nc
01:22:709 (3) - nc
[Banana's Insane]
九号自定义音效不见了（http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD24jx3

芭娜娜的mod，这么帮助我感动哭了 ._.
关于nc已经全部接受了
音效什么的其实我自己看不懂诶，就照着你的改了
9号自定义音效找回来了XD

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2014-02-15T06:23:43+00:00

quick recheck no kd

[Normal]
00:36:073 (1) - is whistle on the slider body intentional? same goes to 00:38:254 (3)
01:14:800 (1) - delete this and use this setup instead:

SPOILER

[Hard]
change the last two green lines to S:C1 sample
00:46:164 (5,6) - make this a triplet like 00:45:618 (2,3,4), more natural to play imo
01:05:527 (5) - forgot a clap here

also if you want swap the default clap with this: http://puu.sh/6WKzi.wav, sounds much more fitting imo
let me know afterwards

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-02-19T11:42:29+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
quick recheck no kd

[Normal]
00:36:073 (1) - is whistle on the slider body intentional? same goes to 00:38:254 (3)
01:14:800 (1) - delete this and use this setup instead:
SPOILER

[Hard]
change the last two green lines to S:C1 sample
00:46:164 (5,6) - make this a triplet like 00:45:618 (2,3,4), more natural to play imo
01:05:527 (5) - forgot a clap here

also if you want swap the default clap with this: http://puu.sh/6WKzi.wav, sounds much more fitting imo
let me know afterwards

done

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-02-20T02:15:16+00:00

alright should be good to go now. Good luck!

Bubbled~

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-02-20T03:03:54+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
alright should be good to go now. Good luck!

Bubbled~

THX！

dkun

osu! Alumni

4,486 posts

Joined August 2009

dkun 2014-02-27T05:54:17+00:00

Made a few changes over IRC, including fixing the formatting of the source and adding the JP characters for the artist's name.
We also added variety to a few combos in Hard and changed where the ending spinner ended via H/I.

Have a heart!

Ikaros_F

88 posts

Joined December 2012

Topic Starter

Ikaros_F 2014-02-27T05:56:04+00:00

dkun wrote:
Made a few changes over IRC, including fixing the formatting of the source and adding the JP characters for the artist's name.
We also added variety to a few combos in Hard and changed where the ending spinner ended via H/I.

Have a heart!

Akabato

207 posts

Joined October 2013

Akabato 2014-02-27T06:13:15+00:00

恭喜～

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-02-27T06:45:30+00:00

gratz～

Banana

794 posts

Joined October 2010

Banana 2014-02-27T09:43:14+00:00

好评

Sunao Yoshikawa

Sunao Yoshikawa 2014-02-27T14:16:38+00:00

good

Selisi

721 posts

Joined October 2012

Selisi 2014-02-28T02:13:56+00:00

恭喜..

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