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Itou Masumi - Yokan (TV Size)

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Azure
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月14日 at 下午 08:24:06

Artist: Itou Masumi
Title: Yokan (TV Size)
Source: RDG Red Data Girl
Tags: P.A. Works Kishida Meru Kadokawa Shoten Hayami Saori Hata Aki Ending
BPM: 80
Filesize: 4819kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.21 stars, 133 notes)
  2. Normal (1.89 stars, 74 notes)
Download: Itou Masumi - Yokan (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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「予感」
   唄:伊藤真澄

with Lyrics SB & Skin
#RDG Red Data Girl ED / OP - Annabel - Small Worldrop (TV Size) by mintong89
eveless Nymph
Pipse Cola
Mod Request

Normal

00:00:844 (1,1) - The Note is too soon after the spinner for a normal diff.
00:05:344 (3) - NC.
00:15:844 (4) - Whistle to head, Clap to reverse arrow, Whistle to End.
00:19:969 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same Hitsounds for 3,4 as you used for 1,2.
01:11:344 (5) - NC.
01:23:531 (1) - Optional, sounds nice imo: AudioChange to 15% at the end and add Finish Sound.


Hard

00:46:219 (4) - Correct y: 240 For perfect stack with 00:45:094 (2) - End.
00:53:344 (1) - Correct x: 199, y: 123 For perfect stack of this one's End with 00:52:594 (4) - End.
01:05:344 (1) - Correct x: 103, y: 278 For perfect stack with 01:04:594 (6) - End.
I think you see what I did with all these annoying Correct x, y thingies, it is about if you want to have "perfect" stacks. You can make perfect stacks, if you place a Note at the line after the Note you want to stack with, as you know, it automatically stacks perfect this way, then move the stacked note at the timeline.

That's all for your Diffs, btw you did great work here! Skin, Colours, Bg and Gameplay are awesome!
But you really should map Easy and Insane as well, because the song is short.

Cheers, InC0 :)
Alarido
From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
[Normal]
* Very clean diff :) I found no complaints here (:

[Hard]
* Also no complaints here :)

:idea: And a note here on the song itself: I noticed so many 1/8 beats in the song, specially at Kiai Time. Could be interesting try map a Insane diff here, with well-made rhythms, either by yourself or asking for a Guest Diff (:

The SB lyrics (Jap + Chinese) is very well-made, including the chosen font type. Congrats for who made it ♥

And GOOD LUCK ^^ For Ranking soon!

Take a star *

(Still getting some mods and then ask a BAT)

Att.
ts8zs
Hard
Slider Tick Rate 2
00:03:094 (2) - Ctrl+G (我转圈是逆时针的……所以这是建议ww)
00:23:344 (3) - move to196,108
01:03:844 (5) - 我觉得这里是升调……所以应该是从下往上
01:15:844 (5) - 这个为什么不叠在下面
Normal
01:18:094 (1,2,3,4) - 既然拉不开为什么不换个梗……
Topic Starter
Azure

ts8zs wrote:

Hard
Slider Tick Rate 2 fix 這倒底是幹嘛用的
00:03:094 (2) - Ctrl+G (我转圈是逆时针的……所以这是建议ww)
00:23:344 (3) - move to196,108 FIX
01:03:844 (5) - 我觉得这里是升调……所以应该是从下往上 不好接下個 ((●゜c_゜●))
01:15:844 (5) - 这个为什么不叠在下面
Normal
01:18:094 (1,2,3,4) - 既然拉不开为什么不换个梗……被發現了
mintong89
Artist: Itou Masumi
Jycool
[general]
音效很好听啊
[normal]
十分善良,我挑不出毛病,很好
[hard]
00:41:344 (4) - 建议重新拉一下啊
00:53:344 (1) - 没和00:52:594 (4) - 的尾巴stack住
01:17:344 (1) - 尾巴稍微往里摆点啊,有点出格

很完善了,我挑不出什么了,poor mod
祝rank :)
Topic Starter
Azure

jyc-Binggan wrote:

[general]
音效很好听啊
[normal]
十分善良,我挑不出毛病,很好 :D
[hard]
00:41:344 (4) - 建议重新拉一下啊 拉成啥...?
00:53:344 (1) - 没和00:52:594 (4) - 的尾巴stack住 fix
01:17:344 (1) - 尾巴稍微往里摆点啊,有点出格 fix

很完善了,我挑不出什么了,poor mod
祝rank :)
thank you for mod :)
Fycho
Hello~random mod
Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
请删除多余的OSB文件Ito Masumi - Yokan (TV size) (Azure).osb
SE和SB赞个0 0不错
建议不要使用绿线消音

[Hard]
确定这是Hard不是Normal0.0?感觉作为Hard太简单,可以用点1/8note。1/4的note之间也不需要overlap

  • 00:41:344 (4) –变速滑条最好NC下,虽然不是必须的但是那些喜欢挑刺的BAT还是会说的。。
    00:43:969 –add note
    00:54:844 (4) -NC
    01:00:469 (4,5) –这两个可以顺着滑条轨迹摆,Flow好
    01:06:844 (3) –NC
    01:09:844 (4) -^
    01:12:844 (5) –这个尾端放在01:14:344 (3) -–的圆心会好看点
    01:14:344 (3,4) –看起来总觉得不对称的样子,也不想圆,可能弧度要改下
    01:21:844 (3,4,5,6,1) –可以摆成波浪形试试0.0

[Normal]
确定这不是Easy;w;?
OD-1

  • 00:05:344 (1) –去掉NC
    00:18:094 (5) –NC,最好别超过5
    00:34:969 –add note
    01:05:344 (3) –NC
    01:06:844 (5) –可以摆摆正,美观点0.0
    01:11:344 (5) –NC

Good luck
Topic Starter
Azure

Fycho wrote:

Hello~random mod
Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
请删除多余的OSB文件Ito Masumi - Yokan (TV size) (Azure).osb 謝謝!沒注意到這個 (ノ_゜●)
SE和SB赞个0 0不错
建议不要使用绿线消音

[Hard]
确定这是Hard不是Normal0.0?感觉作为Hard太简单,可以用点1/8note。1/4的note之间也不需要overlap

  • 00:41:344 (4) –变速滑条最好NC下,虽然不是必须的但是那些喜欢挑刺的BAT还是会说的。。 ok
    00:43:969 –add note
    00:54:844 (4) -NC
    01:00:469 (4,5) –这两个可以顺着滑条轨迹摆,Flow好
    01:06:844 (3) –NC
    01:09:844 (4) -^
    01:12:844 (5) –这个尾端放在01:14:344 (3) -–的圆心会好看点
    01:14:344 (3,4) –看起来总觉得不对称的样子,也不想圆,可能弧度要改下
    01:21:844 (3,4,5,6,1) –可以摆成波浪形试试0.0

[Normal]
确定这不是Easy;w;?
OD-1

  • 00:05:344 (1) –去掉NC
    00:18:094 (5) –NC,最好别超过5
    00:34:969 –add note
    01:05:344 (3) –NC
    01:06:844 (5) –可以摆摆正,美观点0.0
    01:11:344 (5) –NC

Good luck
幾乎全都改了,謝謝 :D
pw384
还债#3
善良图 好评

[General]
* 可以加一种颜色来作为慢的滑条的combocolor,白色就挺不错的

* SB可以多加一些效果啊 比方说花瓣飞舞什么的(只是建议)


[Hard]
* 00:21:844 (4) - 可以把它的前1/2长度用来和00:21:094 (2) - blanket

* 00:22:969 (1,2,3) - 这里的hitcircle和slider构成的弧线就不太协调了,而00:24:469 (4) - 可以和(3) blanket起来,所以我会这么改:

* 00:57:094 (2) - 我比较喜欢这种:

* 01:03:844 (5) - 感觉应该向上移动一格(Grid Level为Tiny),这样就能让01:02:344 (1,3,5) - 之间的距离协调一点


[Normal]
* 00:56:344 (1) - 这个滑条有些短,最好不要用两次折返吧

* 其它没多大问题


有kudosu以后来补一颗星 :3
Good luck~

EDIT:补上了
Topic Starter
Azure

384059043 wrote:

还债#3
善良图 好评

[General]
* 可以加一种颜色来作为慢的滑条的combocolor,白色就挺不错的

* SB可以多加一些效果啊 比方说花瓣飞舞什么的(只是建议)有想過可是不會做 :?


[Hard]
* 00:21:844 (4) - 可以把它的前1/2长度用来和00:21:094 (2) - blanket fix

* 00:22:969 (1,2,3) - 这里的hitcircle和slider构成的弧线就不太协调了,而00:24:469 (4) - 可以和(3) blanket起来,所以我会这么改:
好評,我喜番


* 00:57:094 (2) - 我比较喜欢这种:改了,不過感覺3遠了xD


* 01:03:844 (5) - 感觉应该向上移动一格(Grid Level为Tiny),这样就能让01:02:344 (1,3,5) - 之间的距离协调一点 fix


[Normal]
* 00:56:344 (1) - 这个滑条有些短,最好不要用两次折返吧 沒改耶因為懶了

* 其它没多大问题


有kudosu以后来补一颗星 :3
Good luck~

EDIT:补上了
謝謝MOD謝謝星星 :oops: /me hug 384
Poggo
Hi from my modding queue ~

[General]

Your soft-hitfinish2.wav is toooo low~ You should make this sound louder or use volume 60% in every place where you use it. It will be sounds much better.

[Hard]

00:38:344(1,2) - Wrong spacing, you should fix it~
00:41:344(1) - this slider is veryyyyy slow. Will be better if you vil use speed 0.75, with bmp 80 it will much better
00:54:844(1)- ^ same
00:43:969(2,1) - plz fix this overlap it looks ugly~ Put this notes in another place for better flow
00:55:594 - if you will better listen to music then make stream here with volume 20%, 30%, 40% http://puu.sh/3tn7M.jpg
01:06:844 - Said about already, and in all identical places

[Normal]

00:03:094 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
00:34:969(3) - wrong spacing, fix it. Beginners can be very confused in this place


It's all for me~ Good luck~
ssssssssssssssss
0.0
超高校级的善良mapper Azure!
Megurine Luka
Hello from my queue
闻到了善良mapper的味道(¯﹃¯)

[General]
  1. 因为有hitcircle的皮肤所以你需要在[Color]下方手动添加Sliderborader的值以防与玩家自定义的皮肤冲突
    白色值是255,255,255
    具体的可以参考 ↓
    随便开了一张自己的图做示范截图了0.0 这个值不是白色的,你只要把数字改成三个255就好

[N]
  1. 00:23:344 (4) - 感觉0.0太直了,总觉得那么温柔的歌好像用弯一点的好点,类似
  2. 00:47:344 (4) - 略丑0.0感觉还不如
  3. 01:12:844 (4) - 同样觉得略丑了囧

[H]
  1. 00:12:844 (3) - 感觉不如
  2. 总体觉得有些减速稍微有一些突然,就是有种好像不应该减速但是减了速也没啥问题的那种感觉。所以大概可以考虑把减速的sldier设定成一个专门的combo color用以区分0.0 比如减速的都用浅黄色什么的

其他也没啥了0.0
Topic Starter
Azure

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my modding queue ~

[General]

Your soft-hitfinish2.wav is toooo low~ You should make this sound louder or use volume 60% in every place where you use it. It will be sounds much better. fix, I change it to 85% 8-)

[Hard]

00:38:344(1,2) - Wrong spacing, you should fix it~ fix
00:41:344(1) - this slider is veryyyyy slow. Will be better if you vil use speed 0.75, with bmp 80 it will much better I like original..
00:54:844(1)- ^ same
00:43:969(2,1) - plz fix this overlap it looks ugly~ Put this notes in another place for better flow fix
00:55:594 - if you will better listen to music then make stream here with volume 20%, 30%, 40% http://puu.sh/3tn7M.jpg nice! I like this :)
01:06:844 - Said about already, and in all identical places

[Normal]

00:03:094 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. fix
00:34:969(3) - wrong spacing, fix it. Beginners can be very confused in this place fix

It's all for me~ Good luck~
Thank you for mod

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello from my queue
闻到了善良mapper的味道(¯﹃¯)

[General]
  1. 因为有hitcircle的皮肤所以你需要在[Color]下方手动添加Sliderborader的值以防与玩家自定义的皮肤冲突
    白色值是255,255,255
    具体的可以参考 ↓
    随便开了一张自己的图做示范截图了0.0 这个值不是白色的,你只要把数字改成三个255就好
原來是這個,改好了,謝謝!

[N]
  1. 00:23:344 (4) - 感觉0.0太直了,总觉得那么温柔的歌好像用弯一点的好点,类似fix
  2. 00:47:344 (4) - 略丑0.0感觉还不如fix
  3. 01:12:844 (4) - 同样觉得略丑了囧fix

[H]
  1. 00:12:844 (3) - 感觉不如fix
  2. 总体觉得有些减速稍微有一些突然,就是有种好像不应该减速但是减了速也没啥问题的那种感觉。所以大概可以考虑把减速的sldier设定成一个专门的combo color用以区分0.0 比如减速的都用浅黄色什么的
只加在Hard的難度不知道行不行?因為Normal沒有變速...

其他也没啥了0.0
謝謝大哥 :)
Konei
(TV Size)
eveless
[General]
Change (TV size) to (TV Size)

[Hard]
00:08:719 (1,2,3) - 按照音高来说我觉得2不应该向下凹毕竟这还是个高音,建议垂直坐标按照音高排列即可、
00:09:844 (4) - 整个滑条(即点击滑条整体而不是两头)加上whistle再降点音量配合音乐的效果音如何?
00:11:344 (1) - flow感觉不是很好,如图
对我而言我个人偏向于绿线而不是红线,也就是这样的。如果你按照我这样改其实后面的也不用动,意外的效果不错。
00:13:594 (4) - 补个clap然后降低音量?不然加个soft默认clap也行。以及我觉得在这里用弯的折返效果反而不如直的折返来得好。你可以对比一下效果
00:18:844 (3) - 结尾clap同^
00:15:844 (4,1) - 试试改成这样?00:18:844 (3,4,1) - 在转向1的flow不是那么好,虽然我这图可能画的不是那么好不过……我觉得蓝线和绿线都是可以参考的flow
00:22:969 (1,2,3) - 3连这么放加上那么弯的一个sldier感觉非常不好看,建议改平一点如00:24:844 (5,6) -
略别扭的感觉,特别是yasa和前后都有个过渡+反差因素在里面,感觉就这么处理也略平淡,当然flow也是一方面。暂时给出2种方案

00:28:219 (4) - ki这个音很平缓,对比之前00:26:344 (1) - 的shii,这个hibiki的ki在这里已经有收的感觉了,从音量和感情以及音的长短来说我个人都觉得这个ki不应该和shii一样那么圆,反而是选择用比较平缓的一个slider来处理。
00:36:094 (2) - flow不是很好,说老实话,3/4slider+1/2slider你和米桶都有一个相同的问题就是喜欢圆+圆,并且衔接的角度以及slider本身的弧度都比较大,一个容易造成审美疲劳,第二个1/2slider本身并不长,配合3/4两个都做出角度比较大形状的时候就不是那么好看了。个人推荐要么索性就直,要么索性就微微有点弧度。

^感觉再写下去就变成我在作图了,于是到此为止。
如果不改的话找我要泡也行,当然能做到更好的话希望你能做到更好。
基本上我的观点也很明显了,如果能懂我的意思的话……那么后面也能尝试着自己改动一些。
如果不能的话我也只能233了。
mintong89
泡前留名
Nemis
[General]
The offset is a little bit off, the correct one should be 2370. Before change it check my mod, I used the unsnapped elements to mod.
I'd suggest to add custom numbers too 'cause not all the skins fit these hitcircles.

[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - Make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:06:844 (4) - Same as above, make this slider perfectly symmetrical
00:08:344 (1) - Move this note 1 square to left in the grid level, so you obtain 00:06:094 (3) - this note flipped horizontally. Then I'd move 00:09:094 (2) - this slider too since 00:08:344 (1,2) - these two elements were in the same x coord
00:29:344 (1,2) - Fix this blanket
01:00:094 (4,1) - Fix this blanket a little bit
01:05:344 (1,2,3) - Try to make a perfect triangle

[Hard]
00:04:219 (4) - Change this slider with 00:03:094 (2) - this one rotated by 180°
00:15:844 (4) - Add whistle on this slider (no head/end)
00:18:844 (3,4) - Fix this blanket
00:18:844 (3) - Clap S 20% on its end? You did the same 00:13:594 (4) - here
00:30:281 (3) - Add a note here, it fits the vocal
00:36:844 (3,5) - Since you unstacked 00:37:219 (4,6) - these two notes I'd unstack these two too
00:38:344 (1,2) - In my opinion these two elements are really close... I'd fix the spacing
00:48:844 (2) - Move this slider at x:372 y:352, now it's stacked under 00:47:344 (1) - 's middle. Anyway 00:47:344 (1,2) - these two elements are really close...
00:51:094 (2,3) - Same, again. I think that these two elements are too close
00:55:781 (2,3,4,1) - Increase the spacing a bit here (x1.8 should be fine) and try to make a curved stream:
01:00:469 (4,5,6) - Stack these notes or make a linear triple, a curved and tiny triple is a bit weird
01:01:594 (7,2) - Make a blanket with these two elements and then fix 01:02:344 (1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern
01:05:344 (1) - This note is stacked under 01:04:594 (6) - this slider and then when you play the map 01:05:344 (1) - this note breaks 01:05:344 (1,2,1) - this line. Move 01:04:594 (6) - at x:236 y:304 to unstack it or find another idea to place it
01:13:969 (1,2,3,4,5) - I'd not stack them all, a manual stack/correct spacing between the sliders would be better
Good luck Azure :3
Topic Starter
Azure
Thanks Nemis' tiny mod, all fix :lol:
eveless
Recheck

[Hard]
Since the bpm is slow and the diff itself is not so hard, so i advise AR-1

[Normal]
00:03:094 (1) - there are no “new combo”‘s icon after the spinner, tho this is not a big problem...
eveless
as your request
Fycho
wwww
qoot8123
Rank前留名
pw384
刘明
Nymph
[General]
RDG EDBG.png is almost 2M big, I think maybe we can reduce the size of this file? so we can save some place and let people download this map faster.(如果转成JPG我感觉至少能减少1.5M容量 因为我没觉得有必要PNG呀 如果实在要PNG的话转个新的PNG似乎也能省不少地方)

nothing else :3
Topic Starter
Azure

Nymph wrote:

[General]
RDG EDBG.png is almost 2M big, I think maybe we can reduce the size of this file? so we can save some place and let people download this map faster.(如果转成JPG我感觉至少能减少1.5M容量 因为我没觉得有必要PNG呀 如果实在要PNG的话转个新的PNG似乎也能省不少地方)

nothing else :3
改成jpg重新上傳了,謝謝妮妮!
Nymph
=A= ranked.
Topic Starter
Azure
Thanks eveless' bubble and Nymph's rank ヾ(●´▽`●)ノ
Satellite
Gratz!
pw384
好评
mintong89
恭喜 :O!
Megurine Luka
恭喜w
Fycho
恭喜
raririn
咦Az姑姑又rank惹
Topic Starter
Azure
Thanks you all except raririn :D
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