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Black Raison d'etre - INSIDE IDENTITY [Taiko|Osu]

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asaink
hi, for M4M. ;)
This is all suggestion, so feel free ignore.but, please tell me why it is no change.I can't mod about hitsounds sorry...

[General]
  1. BG size is not 4:3 or 16:9. resize?
  2. If this mapset doesn't include video or SB, you need enable letterbox during breaks.
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:00:751 (1,2,3) - all 1 grid right
  2. 00:37:215 (2,3,1) - This rhythm is a bit odd. try this?:
  3. 00:52:699 (3) - move to (X:172,Y:168). flow is better.
  4. 00:57:054 (2) - Ctrl + H & G : 00:56:247 (1).
  5. 01:01:086 (5) - 1 grid down
  6. 01:28:344 (1) - add finish?
  7. 01:59:795 (2,3,1) - same as 00:37:215 (2,3,1).
  8. 02:03:021 (4) - 2 grid up
  9. 02:10:441 (3) - This is better:
    408,280,130441,2,0,L|360:308,1,50
  10. 02:27:537 (2) - stack with 02:25:279 (2).(i.e. move to (X:216,Y:60).) In accordance with this, also move 02:26:570 (1) to somewhere.
  11. 02:28:344 (4) - extend slider's end until 02:28:828.
  12. 02:46:570 (2,1,2) - This rhythm is odd. change like this:
  13. 02:53:828 (2) - 1 grid left
  14. 02:56:408 (2,3,1) - This rhythm is odd. change like this:
  15. 03:14:957 (4) - 1 grid down
  16. 03:44:634 (green line) - not snapped
  17. 03:50:441 (1) - move to (X:372,Y:276).
  18. 03:52:054 (5) - shorten slider's end until 03:52:215
  19. 04:14:876 ~ 04:15:924 (green line) - There are many no need green line.
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:805 (1,1) - very confusing. change like this:(spinner's end is 00:07:215.)
  2. 00:10:602 (4) - flow is not good. This is better:
    208,268,10602,2,0,P|232:236|232:196,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:27:215 (3) - move to (X:416,Y:212).
  4. 00:37:376 (2,3,4) - This is not accurate triangle placement. move 4 to (X:420,Y:228).
  5. 01:06:247 (3,4,1) - keep DS constant.
  6. 01:16:408 (3) - 1 grid down
  7. 01:20:924 (1) - The slope is different from 01:19:957 (2). This is on purpose?
  8. 02:09:876 (1) - This spinner is a little short.(Auto gets only 2000 bonus.) delete 02:09:795 (1), and start spinner here.
  9. 02:14:150 (3,4,1) - keep DS constant.
  10. 02:17:941 (1) - This spinner is too short and doesn't fit song. reconsider?
  11. 02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - DS is different from 00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4), why?
  12. 02:20:602 (1,2) - This is hard to play. change like 00:58:021 (1,2,3).
  13. 02:28:183 (2) - 1 grid right
  14. 02:29:473 (2) - 1 grid up
  15. 02:42:134 (1,1) - This rhythm is odd. change like this:(spinner's end is 02:43:989.)
  16. 02:46:408 (2,3,4,5,6) - flow is a bot no good. This is suggestion:
    304,272,166408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    394,238,166570,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    391,143,166731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    299,116,166892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    245,196,167054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  17. 02:54:150 (2) - move to (X:272,Y:268).
  18. 02:56:892 (5) - move to (X:104,Y:352). and If need, also move 02:57:054 (6) to somewhere.
  19. 02:57:860 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep DS constant.
  20. 03:23:505 (1) - move to (X:396,Y:188).
  21. 03:33:586 (1) - This spinner is short.(Auto gets only 2000 bonus.) reconsider?
  22. 03:44:634 (green line) - not snapped
  23. 04:14:150 (4,5,6) - hmm...This placement is a bit hard to play. make more good one.
[Insane]
  1. HP -1, OD -1  Because this is full ver., OD9 is too hard imo.
  2. 00:09:634 (6) - DS is not constant.. move to (X:384,Y:172). In accordance with this, also move 00:10:924 (1,2,3,4,5).
  3. 00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - I felt that this stream is a bit odd. change like this?
    140,348,16892,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    372,348,17054,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:22:699 (1,2) - There is a gap slightly. make more natural flow?
  5. 00:26:247 (5,6) - Why is y-coordinate different?
  6. 00:26:731 (2,3) - ^
    00:27:214 (2,3) - ^
  7. 00:37:376 (3,4,5) - (suggestion) :
    380,288,37376,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    452,180,37537,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    484,24,37699,1,4,0:0:0:0:
  8. 00:41:731 (5,1) - flow is not good.
  9. 00:56:247 (1,2,3,4) - This is not accurate square placement.
  10. 00:57:053 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  11. 01:02:699 (1,3) - x-coordinate is different. (If this is on purpose, I'm sorry.)
  12. 01:03:021 (2,4) - ^
  13. 01:27:376 (2,3) - change place each other.
  14. 01:56:731 (1) - Ctrl + J :01:56:247 (4). and some grid up.
  15. 01:58:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is better:
  16. 02:10:441 (3,1,2,1) - hmm...This rhythm is odd. try this?:
  17. 02:20:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7).
  18. 02:22:054 (3) - Ctrl + J : 02:22:699 (1). and some grid down.
  19. 02:34:634 (2,3) - (suggestion):
    120,40,154634,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    12,116,154795,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  20. 02:46:570 (1,2,3,4) - This placement is hard to play. make more simple flow?
  21. 03:10:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like this placement. Because it's random. make pattern?
  22. 03:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Stream is a little long. change like this?:
  23. 03:32:860 (3) - make more symmetrical. please use this:
    136,364,212860,2,0,P|184:380|228:364,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  24. 03:44:634 (green line) - not snapped
  25. 03:58:666 (1) - slider's end overlap own.
  26. 04:14:795 (6) - a bit overlap 04:14:150 (4).
Good Luck! :)

EDIT: add mod about Normal diff.
Topic Starter
Natsu

asaink wrote:

hi, for M4M. ;) Hi
This is all suggestion, so feel free ignore.but, please tell me why it is no change.I can't mod about hitsounds sorry... ok thanks

[General]
  1. BG size is not 4:3 or 16:9. resize? Oh lol i was lazy and i Forget it gonna do it asap
  2. If this mapset doesn't include video or SB, you need enable letterbox during breaks. I dont like how letterbox look also maybe I add a SB in future :p
[Hard]
  1. 00:05:805 (1,1) - very confusing. change like this:(spinner's end is 00:07:215.) Since I finish the spinner there on purpose cuz next beat is a change on rhythm
  2. 02:09:876 (1) - This spinner is a little short.(Auto gets only 2000 bonus.) delete 02:09:795 (1), and start spinner here. Is ok if the auto just get 1000 is not a problem also the previous note is part of my style i always did that :p
  3. 02:14:150 (3,4,1) - keep DS constant. Oh next is a jump is little also NC make it readable
  4. 02:17:941 (1) - This spinner is too short and doesn't fit song. reconsider? Is ok same auto get 2000 here also it fit for me if other mother say the same I will change it
  5. 02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - DS is different from 00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4), why? for variation
  6. 02:20:602 (1,2) - This is hard to play. change like 00:58:021 (1,2,3). I think this way is a little more easy than a triplet also take in consideration this is a 4 notes stream
  7. 02:42:134 (1,1) - This rhythm is odd. change like this:(spinner's end is 02:43:989.) gonna keep it for now :3
  8. 03:33:586 (1) - This spinner is short.(Auto gets only 2000 bonus.) reconsider? Is ok since 2000 is fine also 1000 is fine on a spinner
[Insane]
  1. HP -1, OD -1  Because this is full ver., OD9 is too hard imo. Done since that star rating make me sad orz
  2. 00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - I felt that this stream is a bit odd. change like this? Keep it for now
  3. 00:22:699 (1,2) - There is a gap slightly. make more natural flow? I dint understand this
  4. 00:41:731 (5,1) - flow is not good. I think it flow very natural imo
  5. 01:27:376 (2,3) - change place each other. wanna keep my jumps
  6. 01:58:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is better: I preffer mine
  7. 02:10:441 (3,1,2,1) - hmm...This rhythm is odd. try this?: ^
  8. 02:20:602 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as 00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7). Is not od for me orz :/
  9. 02:46:570 (1,2,3,4) - This placement is hard to play. make more simple flow? I will think about it sine i like the flow but i may change it
  10. 03:10:441 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like this placement. Because it's random. make pattern? :/ I did it on purpose since i like it
  11. 03:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Stream is a little long. change like this?: Is ok since it follow the music perfectly
  12. 03:32:860 (3) - make more symmetrical. please use this: is on purpose
  13. 03:58:666 (1) - slider's end overlap own. this is on purpose
Good Luck! :)Thanks for mod I just response the not fixeds others are done
On_WanWan
From p/2446694/ :3
These are my suggestion only :? :?

General

Full verson <3
Background size better use 16:9

Xinely's Normal

00:18:505 - Add a note?
01:41:086 - ^
01:28:344 (1) - Add finish
The Rest is fine for me :3

Hard

00:05:805 (1) - End at 00:06:731 or 00:06:892 ? The current one is quite hard to hit 00:07:215 (1) for Hard diff
00:11:408 (2) - Head add clap
00:12:376 (1) - Head add finish
02:14:150 (3) - ^
00:14:473 (3) - Head remove clap , reverse add clap
00:18:989 (1) - Reverse add clap
00:27:699 (4) - Remove NC , 00:27:860 (1) NC head add finish too
00:46:247 (2,2) - Head add finish
00:53:344 (4) - Head add clap
01:11:731 (1) - End add clap
01:41:731 (2) - ^
01:46:892 (3) - ^
01:48:666 (4) - Reverse add finish
01:49:150 (1) - End add finish
02:17:941 (1) - End at 02:18:505

Good Luck for Rank~
Topic Starter
Natsu

On_WanWan wrote:

From p/2446694/ :3
These are my suggestion only :? :?

General

Full verson <3 yes <3
Background size better use 16:9 will change on this days since im trying to make an sb


Hard

00:05:805 (1) - End at 00:06:731 or 00:06:892 ? The current one is quite hard to hit 00:07:215 (1) for Hard diff the current one follow better the music imo
00:27:699 (4) - Remove NC , 00:27:860 (1) NC head add finish too added finish but not nc
02:17:941 (1) - End at 02:18:505 same as previous spinner

Good Luck for Rank~ thanks for mod others are fixed :D
neurosis


Colour-coded modding:
Red is unrankable. You must fix this.
Orange is highly suggested. These are things we think you should really fix, and if you do not we want to know why you didn't.
Everything in normal black is personal opinion. You are free to take this advice or ignore it.

[General]
fine.

[Insane]
03:44:642 - kiai end isn't snapped, offset should be 224634


00:02:997 (3) - i'd ctrl+< and move it to around x:32 y:56 to avoid unsightly overlap
00:27:376 (3,1) - spacing is pretty large here.. i'd move it back to 1.20 like used before jumps
00:40:763 (1) - excessively high spacing again here, caught me off guard
01:00:118 (1) - this should be starting at 00:59:957 -
01:10:441 (1) - ^ 01:10:279 -
01:27:699 (4,5) - these two 1/2 sliders are really confusing especially with the stack of 01:28:344 (1) - , it looks nice but it doesn't really play nice. i wouldn't overlap such a large jump pattern
01:40:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the symmetry is nice here but nothing in the music is suggesting jumps this extreme
03:01:570 (1) - i'd like this stream down around x:112 y:76 so it isn't so high up
03:51:731 (1) - high spacing
this was a fun diff, especially the streams! try to keep your spacing a little more consistent though.

[Hard]
03:44:642 - kiai end isn't snapped, offset should be 224634


00:57:054 (1,2,3,4) - the way this is stacked feels like it would confuse most [hard] players, try to rework the shape
01:27:376 (2,3,1,2) - a little too difficult again. why not try adding a 1/2 repeat slider in this?
02:09:876 (1) - spinner feels unneccessary. auto only gets 3k this so it's not a very forgiving spinner in a [hard] difficulty. you should keep the slider pattern going for this.
03:20:924 (2,3) - lower this spacing to 1.50x? 1.7 is a lot for something so sudden
03:23:505 (1,2,3) - i feel each note should be nced here to add impact for the kiai time
eeh...this feels nearly identical to the insane with lowered sv and ar..still enjoyable though~

[Xinely's Normal]
03:44:642 - kiai end isn't snapped, offset should be 224634

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - i'd really prefer a repeat slider here, or at least starting (1) a little closer to the middle of the playfield.
00:02:997 (2) - hmm, shouldn't this be extended to 00:03:639 - ?
00:08:505 (2) - move to 00:08:183 (2) -
really great normal! couldn't find almost anything wrong with it

nice mapset and song! good luck~
Topic Starter
Natsu

emmy wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:997 (3) - i'd ctrl+< and move it to around x:32 y:56 to avoid unsightly overlap Since i did it on purpose i think it flow very natural when you play it
00:27:376 (3,1) - spacing is pretty large here.. i'd move it back to 1.20 like used before jumps Will thik about this one
00:40:763 (1) - excessively high spacing again here, caught me off guard reduced a little
01:00:118 (1) - this should be starting at 00:59:957 - yeah it should if i follow vocals but im following the most of downbeats on music thats why
01:10:441 (1) - ^ 01:10:279 - ^
01:27:699 (4,5) - these two 1/2 sliders are really confusing especially with the stack of 01:28:344 (1) - , it looks nice but it doesn't really play nice. i wouldn't overlap such a large jump pattern lol troll slider dont slap me(slap goldenwolf he make it) Since i dont have an idea what i can do in this spot)
01:40:118 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the symmetry is nice here but nothing in the music is suggesting jumps this extreme I thinks this part flow way actually need to heart more opinions about this
03:01:570 (1) - i'd like this stream down around x:112 y:76 so it isn't so high up done
03:51:731 (1) - high spacing reduced jump
this was a fun diff, especially the streams! try to keep your spacing a little more consistent though. Im happy you like it about distance I like to make jumpy maps since it just my flow orz

[Hard]
00:57:054 (1,2,3,4) - the way this is stacked feels like it would confuse most [hard] players, try to rework the shape will think about this one i need to have a idea how to make it better x_X
01:27:376 (2,3,1,2) - a little too difficult again. why not try adding a 1/2 repeat slider in this? ok i reduce the jump
02:09:876 (1) - spinner feels unneccessary. auto only gets 3k this so it's not a very forgiving spinner in a [hard] difficulty. you should keep the slider pattern going for this. following vocals with it since i think it fit nice also 3k is ok for hard since minimun is 1k
03:20:924 (2,3) - lower this spacing to 1.50x? 1.7 is a lot for something so sudden done
03:23:505 (1,2,3) - i feel each note should be nced here to add impact for the kiai time souhnd nice gonna redo my combo pattern tonight and add this one
eeh...this feels nearly identical to the insane with lowered sv and ar..still enjoyable though~ thats why I dont like to make insane + Hard since is my flow they gonna be symilars orz


nice mapset and song! good luck~ thanks for mod :3
MeatloafCereal
Sorry for the huge delay
Very good mapset, not much to say
Xinley's Normal
00:07:860 (1) - move back to the red tick on 00:07:699
00:08:505 (2) - move back 1 beat on 00:08:183
00:10:441 - feels off, try:
00:42:054 (2) - move up to the red tick on 00:42:215
01:41:086 - a circle maybe?
Warning: Nazi modding on some blankets
remove grid snap
00:33:021 (1) -
00:35:602 (1) -
00:39:150 (2) -
00:45:924 (1,2,3) -
01:00:118 (4,5,1) -

The rest without imgs:

01:19:473 (1) -
01:47:860 (1,2) -
01:51:086 (3,4) -
02:02:054 (3,4,1) -
02:48:505 (3,1) -
02:57:537 (1) -
03:29:150 (4,1) -
i think i'll shutup now :oops:

Hard

02:01:892 (1) - a circle instead? the end of this slider doesn't sound right
02:46:408 (2,3,4,5,6) - i feel small jumps would sound nicer than a pentagon

Insane is out of my skill level but i tried :oops:

01:07:699 (1,2) - remove these
03:18:183 (1) - you can stop the stream here, the rest of the yellow don't sound necessary
Topic Starter
Natsu

MeatloafCereal wrote:

Sorry for the huge delay
Very good mapset, not much to say thanks :D

Hard

02:01:892 (1) - a circle instead? the end of this slider doesn't sound right done
02:46:408 (2,3,4,5,6) - i feel small jumps would sound nicer than a pentagon will think about this one

Insane is out of my skill level but i tried :oops:

01:07:699 (1,2) - remove these keeping on my way now :3
03:18:183 (1) - you can stop the stream here, the rest of the yellow don't sound necessary is neccesary to follow the music properly :3
thanks for mod
Gero
Gorda :v! Aqui esta la easy!

Gero's Easy
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Inside Identity.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: -1
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:Natsu
Version:Gero's Easy
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:1
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"z004.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,89995,98438
2,182899,191341
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Topic Starter
Natsu
added gero easy Andrea is your after this o3o

/me hides huehue
Gero

Natsu wrote:

added gero easy Andrea is your after thiso3o

Shut up Bitch!

GO GO! BAKA XD
kisata
Couple quick thoughts:

1) I'd seriously consider using less distance snap in the Insane. It's pretty inconsistent as is. I understand you're trying to make a jumpy map, but the jumps should be consistent and not, well, random.
2) The difficulty gap between the Normal, Hard, and Insane is quite large. The Hard is also basically a somewhat less difficult AR8 insane.
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one.
4) Blankets that could be improved:
  1. If you're trying to do some sort of overlapping blanket here or w/e, it doesn't look very good and could be improved.
  2. This blanket can be improved as well. Space it out a bit more.
  3. This one too.
  4. I actually don't know what this is supposed to be.
5) [Insane] 01:27:537 (3,4) - Yeah, this is just... no. Don't make this jump so harsh.
6) [Insane] 03:44:634 - Something weird happened here. You've got two green lines and kiai toggled for less than 50ms lol.

I did enjoy it though. Just some things people might complain about.
Topic Starter
Natsu

apaffy wrote:

Couple quick thoughts:

1) I'd seriously consider using less distance snap in the Insane. It's pretty inconsistent as is. I understand you're trying to make a jumpy map, but the jumps should be consistent and not, well, random. Is not random I put the jumps how I feel the music maybe is random for you but for me all is fine
2) The difficulty gap between the Normal, Hard, and Insane is quite large. The Hard is also basically a somewhat less difficult AR8 insane. the spread is already good for me making a easy hard with hight bpm gonna be ending in a bad rhythm hard
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one. the density of the beats is enought for hp 7 also od 8 make this fun is a rhythm game what is wrong with make the players be accuracy in the game?
4) Blankets that could be improved: I gonna checkk my map and gonna improve they
  1. If you're trying to do some sort of overlapping blanket here or w/e, it doesn't look very good and could be improved.
  2. This blanket can be improved as well. Space it out a bit more.
  3. This one too.
  4. I actually don't know what this is supposed to be.
5) [Insane] 01:27:537 (3,4) - Yeah, this is just... no. Don't make this jump so harsh. How that can be hard? since im not good playing this and I can FC this mappu
6) [Insane] 03:44:634 - Something weird happened here. You've got two green lines and kiai toggled for less than 50ms lol. Fixed lol

I did enjoy it though. Just some things people might complain about.
yeah I wanna make a kinda challenge insane since im tired of those generic maps, you can have fun with this one imo, idk why you think OD 8 is wrong is totally fine for me well i know is your opinion but i have my own too i think the mappu play really fine
GoldenWolf
Where is OD9? ;_;
Topic Starter
Natsu

apaffy wrote:

Couple quick thoughts:
3) OD8/HP7 combination on the Insane makes some of the patterns (like the stars) quite difficult. I'd seriously consider lowering either the OD or HP by one.
yeah maybe I will OD 9 again in the next update since i agree with Goldenwolf what is wrong with hight OD? that just make you be more accurate is a rhythm game o.o so acc is important IMO
[Yue]
Aqui va el horrible mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D:

Gero's Easy:
  1. 00:13:666 - creo que deberias agregar un circle aqui, se oye un poco vacio y hay musica asi que deberias considerarlo.
  2. 00:16:247 - ^
  3. 00:17:537 (1,2) - siento que esto no esta bien, podrias intentar algo asi-> se oye mucho mejor es mas facil de jugar
  4. 01:03:344 - deberias agregar un circle porque va perfectamente con la voz. O por lo menos colocar un slider con repeticion que empieze ahi, claro que tendrias que borar los 2 circles que siguen.
  5. 02:15:602 - aqui tambien puede ir perfectamente un circle o3o
  6. 04:14:796 (2,1) - o.o! creo que deberias borrar (2) y poner el spiner ahi
Hard:
  1. 00:18:828 - agrega circle o3o
  2. 00:51:086 (1,2) - aqui es la quinta vez que repites ese mismo patron de sliders D:! creo que deberias variar un poco y mover el slider 00:51:570 (2) - hacia otro lado :b (seria bueno que el tercero tambien lo muevas, osea este 00:31:570 (1,2) - ) senti que lo repetias muchas veces en poco tiempo x_x
  3. 00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aqui formas con el primer combo un cuadrado pero luego con el segundo combo otro mismo cuadrado, creo que con el segundo combo podrias hacer algo diferente.. algo como un rombo tal vez xD aqui un ejemplo:
  4. 01:20:441 (3,1) - lo mismo que te dije en 00:51:086 (1,2)
  5. 02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - igual que en 00:56:247 pero aqui trata de hacer algo diferente (digamos que ya usaste el rombo la vez anterior y aqui un triangulo o nose x_x dale variedad :3)
  6. 03:34:795 (1) - quita en nc D: no entiendo porque lo pusiste ahi u.u
  7. 03:43:666 (1) - ^
  8. 04:08:505 (1,2) - otra vez siento que lo repites mucho en muy poco tiempo porque ya tienes uno en 04:03:344 (1,2) - y en 04:06:408 (2,3) - ! mueve el slider (2) hacia otro lado porfavor
Insane:
OD+1
  1. 01:27:215 (1,2,3,4) - wow x_x siento que este saldo esta demasiado dificil, trata de ponerlos un poco mas juntos uwu
Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o
Topic Starter
Natsu

[Yue] wrote:

Aqui va el horrible mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D: arreglado

Hard:
  1. 00:18:828 - agrega circle o3o prefiero dejar la pausa porque o.o siento q mi hard cansa mucho al jugarala para algunos newbies asi q mejor puse pequeos descansos de 1/2
  2. 00:51:086 (1,2) - aqui es la quinta vez que repites ese mismo patron de sliders D:! creo que deberias variar un poco y mover el slider 00:51:570 (2) - hacia otro lado :b (seria bueno que el tercero tambien lo muevas, osea este 00:31:570 (1,2) - ) senti que lo repetias muchas veces en poco tiempo x_x hahahaah es que siento que va con la cancion ademas no tengo una idea de que otro pattern podria intentar :C
  3. 00:56:247 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - aqui formas con el primer combo un cuadrado pero luego con el segundo combo otro mismo cuadrado, creo que con el segundo combo podrias hacer algo diferente.. algo como un rombo tal vez xD aqui un ejemplo:
  4. 01:20:441 (3,1) - lo mismo que te dije en 00:51:086 (1,2) oh si hoy en la noche veo que hago ahi
  5. 02:18:828 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - igual que en 00:56:247 pero aqui trata de hacer algo diferente (digamos que ya usaste el rombo la vez anterior y aqui un triangulo o nose x_x dale variedad :3) ^
  6. 03:34:795 (1) - quita en nc D: no entiendo porque lo pusiste ahi u.u ok
  7. 03:43:666 (1) - ^ ok
  8. 04:08:505 (1,2) - otra vez siento que lo repites mucho en muy poco tiempo porque ya tienes uno en 04:03:344 (1,2) - y en 04:06:408 (2,3) - ! mueve el slider (2) hacia otro lado porfavor okis mas noche pienso q otra cosa podria hacer aqui ahorita tengo las ideas congeladas
Insane:
OD+1 hahaha ok since is more fun :p
  1. 01:27:215 (1,2,3,4) - wow x_x siento que este saldo esta demasiado dificil, trata de ponerlos un poco mas juntos uwu listo rehice el jump del 3 al 4
Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o gracias por el mod y la estrella
kogasa_old_1
Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size?

Gero's Easy
00:05:925 (1) - Unsnapped spinner ending.
00:39:150 (2) - Placement looks a little odd.
03:42:699 (1) - The timing on the end of this sounds off.
-Slider at the end seems a bit too short for new players.

Xienly's Normal
02:10:924 (1) - Placement seems odd in comparison to surroundings.

Hard
-AR 1? Seems a bit more like an insane map.
01:08:666 (2) - Not sure about the placing here.

Insane
-The jumps and the (kinda ridiculous) stream at 02:40:763 (1) - are nice. Though I might suggest shortening the stream or breaking it up a bit.

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

kogasa wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size? yeah will fix tomorrow


Hard
-AR 1? Seems a bit more like an insane map. I think 8 fit the bpm and sv really good but i reduce it and lets next modders check this
01:08:666 (2) - Not sure about the placing here. move to other place hope is better now

Insane
-The jumps and the (kinda ridiculous) stream at 02:40:763 (1) - are nice. Though I might suggest shortening the stream or breaking it up a bit. Is ok for me

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck! :) Im glad you like it :3 and thanks mod help me to improve
Chloe
hi there Natsu,as your mod request~


[General]
  1. BGsize is weird, suggesting change to 1366x768, but if you want to keep it, feel free to ignore.

    I love 中二病 ;)
[Normal]
  1. 01:51:086 (3) - make a perfectly blanket here
  2. 02:03:021 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891029 look at the approach circle, what do you find here? I think you can know my meaning xD
  3. there're some useless green lines in the end


[Hard]
  1. 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane
  2. 00:35:118 (1) - decrease one reverse to fit the rythem
  3. 00:42:215 (1) - 1/6 here give a more fitting
  4. 00:55:118 (1) - ^
  5. 01:22:054 (1) - blanket with 01:21:731 (3) -

    Uh, I think you should make those blanket better in this diff.
[Insane]

  • OD-1?
  1. 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - set a gather volume here? It does sound well for now.
  2. 00:10:924 (1,2,3,4) - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891008 for the better flow imo
  3. 00:23:989 (1) - delete?
  4. 00:34:634 (2,4) - ctrl+G
  5. 00:49:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891013 better flow imo
  6. 00:59:957 (5) - stack with 00:59:795 (4) -
  7. 01:06:408 (5) - stack with 01:05:763 (3) - 's top
  8. 01:10:279 (5) - x 148 y 113
  9. 01:27:376 (2,3) - ctrl+g better flow!
  10. 01:51:731 (1,2,3,4) - maybe don't fit the music imo, also I can't play well here
  11. 01:53:344 (2,3,5) - I think you should pay more attention on design ;_;
  12. 02:31:247 (2) - maybe you should decrease the ds here
  13. 02:31:570 (1) - make a perfectly blanket here?
  14. 02:46:892 (3,4) -
  15. 03:46:408 (5) - stack with 4
Good luck <3.
mathi747
Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_;


easy
01:28:021 - me parece que qedaria bueno una nota aca y que el spin empezara aca 01:28:344 -
04:14:473 - algo parecido a lo de arriva aca(?
00:39:150 (2) - se que es por simetria pero este cambio de spacing lo siento feo
02:20:602 - no muy importante pero aca hay una linea verde sin usar
pd:espero no te hallas olvidado de los histounds que me prometiste ;_;
normal
i dont know i love your normals :3
01:18:828 - maybe change this for a slider or delte 01:19:150 (4) - feels better
01:51:086 (3,4) - i think this blanket can be improved(? and some others but i dont think is worth to list them all
maybe ar 5 too high i find it hard to dt hr, how about ar 4 that said i like high ar because of the bpm so how about reducing od -1 plays really well
hard
00:26:570 - en esta parte que te parece algo asi
00:42:215 (1,2) - me encantan estos sliders pero creo que se pueden ver mejor, asi se ve mejor ingame
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4) - esto se veria mejor con unos saltos *A*( por ejemplo cambiar el 2 por el 3)
01:27:537 (3,1) - stack this?
02:23:989 (1,2) - veo que te gusta esa convinacion de sliders(?
02:54:150 (2) - talves borrar este slider y agregar un circle ahi 02:54:312 -

no insane mod because im too lazy its too hard for me
Xinely

kogasa wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue.

Xienly's Normal
02:10:924 (1) - Placement seems odd in comparison to surroundings. fixed
Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck! :)
is wrote my name is so hard TwT

Chloe wrote:

hi there Natsu,as your mod request~
[Normal]
  1. 01:51:086 (3) - make a perfectly blanket here done
  2. 02:03:021 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891029 look at the approach circle, what do you find here? I think you can know my meaning xD err wat?
  3. there're some useless green lines in the end *facepalms, it's reduce volume

mathi747 wrote:

Hi~ late mod
normal
i dont know i love your normals :3 yay ty :3
01:18:828 - maybe change this for a slider or delte 01:19:150 (4) - feels better i know you follow vocal but i'm follow music too sorry ;-;
01:51:086 (3,4) - i think this blanket can be improved(? and some others but i dont think is worth to list them all
maybe ar 5 too high i find it hard to dt hr, how about ar 4 that said i like high ar because of the bpm so how about reducing od -1 plays really well fixed
diff
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Tags:Xinely Gero 中二病でも恋がしたい! Lantis ZAQ Uchida Maaya Akasaki Chinatsu Asakura Azumi Uesaka Sumire Kyoto Togashi Yuuta Takanashi Rikka Nibutani Shinka Dekomori Sanae Tsuyuri Kumin Ending
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176,60,152376,2,0,P|244:36|328:72,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,153344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,153666,2,0,P|416:244|372:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,368,154312,6,0,P|324:344|304:264,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,155602,2,0,P|436:256|472:208,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,132,156247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,84,156570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,8,156892,6,2,P|296:88|368:176,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,157860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,324,158183,2,0,P|492:264|480:184,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,159473,6,2,P|340:268|268:236,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,160441,2,2,P|168:252|220:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,161408,2,0,P|220:56|164:44,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162054,12,0,164473,0:0:0:0:
288,128,164957,6,0,P|376:84|468:136,2,200,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,166570,2,0,P|288:216|384:156,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167699,2,0,P|460:200|436:108,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,168505,2,0,P|284:36|216:64,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,116,169795,6,0,P|248:148|180:164,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,170441,2,0,L|44:168,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,171086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,171408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,171731,2,0,L|332:260,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,172376,6,0,P|420:272|392:192,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,173828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,324,174312,2,0,P|152:268|244:268,1,150,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,175279,6,0,P|440:310|462:216,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,104,176408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,40,176892,2,0,P|228:56|192:92,1,100,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,177537,6,0,P|156:148|272:140,2,200,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,92,179150,2,0,P|12:144|32:208,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,276,179795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,324,180118,6,0,P|172:312|224:324,1,100,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,180763,2,0,P|344:282|392:270,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,181408,2,0,P|312:128|224:176,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,182215,2,2,L|204:260,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,256,193021,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,168,193344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,193666,2,0,P|180:52|264:64,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,194957,2,0,L|260:220,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,195602,6,0,P|288:304|344:244,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,376,196892,2,0,P|128:292|162:194,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,197860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,72,198183,6,0,P|332:48|392:56,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,198828,2,0,P|453:98|465:26,2,150,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,200118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,200441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,148,200763,6,0,P|116:144|88:148,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,201086,2,0,L|48:212,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
84,280,201570,1,4,1:0:0:0:
172,304,201892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202054,12,0,203344,0:0:0:0:
76,132,203989,6,0,P|128:140|172:192,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,204473,6,0,P|240:244|312:212,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,205279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,248,205602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,296,205924,2,2,P|244:328|140:292,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,206892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,192,207215,6,0,P|80:160|152:192,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,208505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,308,208828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,300,209150,2,8,P|284:280|328:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,209795,6,2,P|316:164|232:216,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,210763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,284,211086,2,0,P|256:292|328:236,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,211892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,212376,6,0,P|344:24|264:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,213666,2,0,L|292:208,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,272,214312,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,304,214473,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,256,214795,6,0,P|124:192|156:112,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,215602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,64,215924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,116,216247,2,2,P|400:208|356:304,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,320,217215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,276,217537,6,0,P|116:256|80:188,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,218828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,219150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,192,219473,2,0,P|408:240|392:292,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,348,220118,6,2,P|232:368|152:308,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,221086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,144,221408,2,0,P|248:108|308:144,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,222376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,222699,6,0,P|236:352|156:312,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,300,223666,2,2,P|88:228|192:236,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,224634,2,0,P|308:164|376:180,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,204,225118,6,0,P|352:272|384:356,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,320,225924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,240,226247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,148,226570,2,2,P|408:92|316:120,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,227537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,252,227860,6,0,P|128:280|56:248,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,228828,2,2,P|220:88|324:100,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,229795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,220,230118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,292,230441,6,0,P|336:296|292:344,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,304,231086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,252,231408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,168,231731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,84,232054,2,0,P|164:76|212:104,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,232537,2,0,L|344:128,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,233021,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,184,233344,2,0,L|512:184,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,272,233828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,336,234150,2,2,P|356:360|296:324,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,234957,2,0,L|196:216,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,132,235441,6,0,P|268:88|352:108,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,236247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,236,236570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,304,236892,2,2,P|304:340|204:300,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,244,237860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,238183,6,0,P|232:108|316:128,2,150,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,239473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,239795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,320,240118,2,0,L|192:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,240763,6,2,P|92:272|136:164,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,124,241731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,76,242054,2,0,P|348:48|420:88,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,132,243344,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,260,243828,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,344,244312,2,2,P|144:272|160:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,104,245279,2,0,P|268:84|324:96,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,245924,6,2,P|348:100|376:176,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,246892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,272,247376,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,228,247860,2,2,P|100:196|80:152,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,248505,6,2,P|208:100|312:112,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,156,249473,2,2,P|384:192|280:180,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,250441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,208,250763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,116,251086,6,0,P|184:72|268:96,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,252537,2,2,P|280:224|364:232,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,253344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,100,253666,6,0,L|316:64,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,60,253989,2,0,L|224:80,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
172,128,254473,1,4,1:0:0:0:
136,208,254795,2,2,P|176:264|252:260,1,150,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Natsu
Chloe

Chloe wrote:

hi there Natsu,as your mod request~ hi


[General]
  1. BGsize is weird, suggesting change to 1366x768, but if you want to keep it, feel free to ignore. yeah will change it im lazy now hahahah

    I love 中二病 ;) :3

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - same as insane will try
  2. 00:35:118 (1) - decrease one reverse to fit the rythem if other mod say this i will change it
  3. 00:42:215 (1) - 1/6 here give a more fitting I think current is fine
  4. 00:55:118 (1) - ^^
  5. 01:22:054 (1) - blanket with 01:21:731 (3) - ok

    Uh, I think you should make those blanket better in this diff.
[Insane]

  • OD-1? actually i can try a kind of challenge with the map thats why i wnna keep od9
  1. 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - set a gather volume here? It does sound well for now. k
  2. 00:10:924 (1,2,3,4) - change to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891008 for the better flow imo ok
  3. 00:23:989 (1) - delete? is fine it got sound
  4. 00:34:634 (2,4) - ctrl+G I preffer my flow now
  5. 00:49:634 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/891013 better flow imo will thik about this one
  6. 00:59:957 (5) - stack with 00:59:795 (4) - since dont fit the music in this way also in dont like so muchs the stacks
  7. 01:06:408 (5) - stack with 01:05:763 (3) - 's top ^
  8. 01:10:279 (5) - x 148 y 113 ok
  9. 01:27:376 (2,3) - ctrl+g better flow!maybe will try
  10. 01:51:731 (1,2,3,4) - maybe don't fit the music imo, also I can't play well here It fit the guitar is a lttle sound but i wanna map it
  11. 01:53:344 (2,3,5) - I think you should pay more attention on design ;_; omg fixed
  12. 02:31:247 (2) - maybe you should decrease the ds here ok
  13. 02:31:570 (1) - make a perfectly blanket here? done
  14. 02:46:892 (3,4) - ^
  15. 03:46:408 (5) - stack with 4
Good luck <3. thanks for mod <3

mathi747

mathi747 wrote:

Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_; xD

hard00:26:570 - en esta parte que te parece algo asi creo q mi ritmo sigue mejor la musica aqui
00:42:215 (1,2) - me encantan estos sliders pero creo que se pueden ver mejor, asi se ve mejor ingame okas
00:56:247 (1,2,3,4) - esto se veria mejor con unos saltos *A*( por ejemplo cambiar el 2 por el 3) no quiero tener muchos jumps en hard el bpm es muy alto x_x
01:27:537 (3,1) - stack this?
02:23:989 (1,2) - veo que te gusta esa convinacion de sliders(? si
02:54:150 (2) - talves borrar este slider y agregar un circle ahi 02:54:312 - mi ritmo sigue mejor la cancion para mi lo considerare

no insane mod because im too lazy its too hard for me gracias por el mod :3
Chronotakular
Hello there!

[Gero's Easy]

This map, as of right now, is very good.

-The first spinner might be too short for an easy difficulty. Also, I would completely get rid of the last spinner. The last spinner is too difficult for an easy difficulty, in my opinion.

[Xinley's Normal]

This map is also well done.

00:00:751 (1) - As a general rule, I would try to put the first note near the center of the map, just because it is expected to be around there. Not too big of a deal though.
01:28:021 (3) - I would move this note away just a little bit from the tail of the previous slider.
03:21:570 (3,4) - I would move these a little bit further away from note 2 and each other as well.
03:23:989 (1) - Is this 1 note combo intentional?
04:14:473 (3) - I would move this note a little bit further away (up) from 2 and 4.

[Hard]

Fun map! :D

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early.
00:36:892 (1,2,3,4) - I thought I would mention this. It feels natural to hit these notes according to the lyrics, but they are charted to the instruments. You don't have to/need to change this, but I thought I would point it out. (Perhaps changing the spacing might help make these easier to hit.)
00:57:054 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early.
01:27:376 (2) - I think it would be easier to hit this if 2 was closer to 1 and 3.
02:04:312 (1,2,3) - I would do something entirely different here. It doesn't seem to fit at all.
02:19:634 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early.
03:02:215 (1) - I would move this farther away from slider 1. I was also hitting this pretty early.
02:52:376 - 03:02:699 - I would make the hit sounds a little louder here.

[Insane]

Even more fun! :)

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early.
00:11:408 (1) - Try moving this where the 3 of the previous combo was. The current gap is a bit bigger. Note 2 might need to be moved to compensate for distance if you do move this.
00:23:989 (1) - Consider deleting this note, and giving the player the small break. The note here doesn't really seem to fit in my opinion.
00:56:247 (1) - I would move this just a little bit closer to 5. Just a little bit.
00:59:957 (5) - I would move this just slightly off to the side of the slider in front of it.
02:18:021 (2) - This kinda threw me off track. The reason for this is that sliders 1,3, and 4 loop. This slider does not. Because of how fast the map is moving and the notes are coming and going, it's very hard to see that 2 is not looping. Consider making this note loop like sliders 1 and 3, and making slider 4 not loop, and similar to the current slider 2.

This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously! :oops:

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck!
Topic Starter
Natsu

Chronotakular wrote:

Hello there! hi hi~

[Hard]

Fun map! :D thanks

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early. Is on purpose to follow musci better imo
00:36:892 (1,2,3,4) - I thought I would mention this. It feels natural to hit these notes according to the lyrics, but they are charted to the instruments. You don't have to/need to change this, but I thought I would point it out. (Perhaps changing the spacing might help make these easier to hit.) keep this for now
00:57:054 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early. fixed
01:27:376 (2) - I think it would be easier to hit this if 2 was closer to 1 and 3. fixed
02:04:312 (1,2,3) - I would do something entirely different here. It doesn't seem to fit at all. It fit for me if other modder say this i will change in another way
02:19:634 (1) - I wouldn't stack this with the 4 before it. I kept hitting this really early. fixed
03:02:215 (1) - I would move this farther away from slider 1. I was also hitting this pretty early. okay
02:52:376 - 03:02:699 - I would make the hit sounds a little louder here. lower a little

[Insane]

Even more fun! :) Im glad you have fun with this

00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - I would have a greater distance snapping on these notes. I tend to hit all of these early. same as hard
00:11:408 (1) - Try moving this where the 3 of the previous combo was. The current gap is a bit bigger. Note 2 might need to be moved to compensate for distance if you do move this. since i try to make a jumpy pattern here thats why
00:23:989 (1) - Consider deleting this note, and giving the player the small break. The note here doesn't really seem to fit in my opinion. but it have music
00:56:247 (1) - I would move this just a little bit closer to 5. Just a little bit. ok
00:59:957 (5) - I would move this just slightly off to the side of the slider in front of it. is my flow wanna keep this since is easy to read o.o
02:18:021 (2) - This kinda threw me off track. The reason for this is that sliders 1,3, and 4 loop. This slider does not. Because of how fast the map is moving and the notes are coming and going, it's very hard to see that 2 is not looping. Consider making this note loop like sliders 1 and 3, and making slider 4 not loop, and similar to the current slider 2. fixed i add a 5 circles stream and 2 1/4 sliders is better thanks for poiting this

This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously! :oops:

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck! yeah thanks for mod that help me so impreve some parts im glad you like this and thanks for mod
aabc271
After some consideration, I thought taiko inner oni is quite similar to oni, so it could be better to use my inner oni as oni. PM me for more details
Also as talked in pm, as ReySHeL will be responsible for muzu, I think I can say I've finished my taiko diff :)

aabc's Taiko Oni
^ Added tag : aabc271

Please check, thx :3
btw this is probably my hardest aabc's Taiko ever made lol
Topic Starter
Natsu

aabc271 wrote:

After some consideration, I thought taiko inner oni is quite similar to oni, so it could be better to use my inner oni as oni. PM me for more details
Also as talked in pm, as ReySHeL will be responsible for muzu, I think I can say I've finished my taiko diff :)

aabc's Taiko Oni
^ Added tag : aabc271

Please check, thx :3
btw this is probably my hardest aabc's Taiko ever made lol
Nice diff added thanks awesome taiko (I fix some tags in your diff also i change the preview time)
Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

Modding

General

  1. Pass.

Gero's Easy

  1. 00:30:763 (1) - NC.
  2. 00:39:795 (3) - move x-346.
  3. 00:45:279 (4) - NC.
  4. 01:03:344 - add note? or 01:03:344 ~ 01:03:666 add slider.
  5. 02:26:247 (1) - nc 02:26:570 (2) - remove nc
  6. 03:29:473 (1) - nc 03:29:795 (2) - remove nc
  7. 04:14:473 - add note?

Xinely's Normal

  1. 00:40:118 (4) - move. (274,206)
  2. 01:01:086 (5) - move (371,126)
  3. 01:01:408 (1) - move (405,209)
  4. 02:49:795 (1) - move (285,120)
  5. 03:29:795 (1) - move (402,201)
  6. 03:31:892 (4) - ^

Hard

  1. maybe, same kiai time another difficult
  2. 00:05:083 (1) - i know triangle combo. (1,2,3) consider 00:05:403 (2) - nc. if you change this combo, 01:27:699 (1). change this (same pattern)
  3. 01:22:054 (1) - move (0,143)
  4. 03:19:473 (1) - remove nc
  5. 01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782

Insane

  1. OD -1? or HP -1?
  2. maybe, same kiai time another difficult
  3. 00:01:553 ~ 00:01:914 reverse slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/895201
  4. 01:59:635 (1) - nc? 01:59:472 (9) - remove nc.


ahhhhh

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part.

and good map. S.T.A.R
Xinely
fix a little, ty 4 mod all ~
update
osu file format v12

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Artist:Black Raison d'etre
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Version:Xinely's Normal
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:Xinely Gero aabc271 中二病でも恋がしたい! Lantis ZAQ Uchida Maaya Akasaki Chinatsu Asakura Azumi Uesaka Sumire Kyoto Togashi Yuuta Takanashi Rikka Nibutani Shinka Dekomori Sanae Tsuyuri Kumin Ending
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144,156,111086,2,0,P|216:118|285:151,2,150,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,199,112376,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,264,112699,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,113021,6,0,P|376:216|400:264,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,280,113666,2,0,P|432:336|360:328,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,188,114957,2,0,P|464:120|424:96,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,76,115602,6,0,P|276:28|184:80,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,144,116570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,236,116892,2,0,P|180:252|240:232,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,172,117537,2,0,P|332:156|392:176,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,200,118183,6,0,P|523:283|468:372,2,200,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,152,119795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,112,120118,2,0,P|248:92|168:124,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,121086,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,256,121408,2,0,P|116:304|144:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,296,122054,2,0,P|304:312|352:224,1,200,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,236,123021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,160,123344,6,0,P|232:156|184:204,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,124634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
484,148,124957,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,84,125279,2,0,L|380:40,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,92,125763,6,0,P|232:120|160:88,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,108,126570,1,4,0:0:0:0:
100,196,126892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,276,127215,2,0,P|236:316|328:268,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,128183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,128,128505,6,0,P|224:88|132:136,2,200,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,200,130118,1,4,0:0:0:0:
420,276,130441,2,0,P|364:296|316:280,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,272,130924,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,204,131408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,136,131731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,184,132054,2,0,P|352:176|412:192,2,100,8|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,272,133021,2,0,P|276:328|240:360,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,300,133666,6,0,P|128:308|32:248,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,172,134473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,172,134634,2,2,P|124:140|228:176,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,132,135602,1,4,0:0:0:0:
376,184,135924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,260,136247,6,0,P|328:292|236:256,1,200,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,216,137215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,212,137537,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,132,137860,2,0,P|92:88|120:36,2,100,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,84,138828,6,0,P|256:56|332:88,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,16,139634,2,0,P|412:92|380:152,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,284,140763,2,0,P|212:296|176:348,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,141247,6,0,P|116:296|144:212,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,142054,2,0,P|244:136|308:140,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,96,142699,2,2,P|357:194|268:220,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,164,143666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,104,143989,6,0,P|56:92|-12:144,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,60,145279,2,0,P|264:48|320:60,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,120,145924,1,4,0:0:0:0:
388,208,146247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,288,146570,6,2,P|280:224|272:116,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,147537,1,0,1:0:0:0:
132,96,147860,2,0,P|107:146|118:208,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,148344,2,0,P|157:243|222:229,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,288,149150,6,0,P|326:208|266:166,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,340,150441,2,0,P|204:364|156:356,1,100,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
80,328,151086,2,0,L|68:264,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,192,151570,6,0,P|44:128|89:52,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,60,152376,2,0,P|244:36|328:72,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,153344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,192,153666,2,0,P|416:244|372:292,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,368,154312,6,0,P|324:344|304:264,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,155602,2,0,P|436:256|472:208,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,132,156247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,84,156570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,8,156892,6,2,P|296:88|368:176,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,157860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,324,158183,2,0,P|492:264|480:184,2,150,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
412,240,159473,6,2,P|340:268|268:236,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,348,160441,2,2,P|168:252|220:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,88,161408,2,0,P|220:56|164:44,1,100,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162054,12,0,164473,0:0:0:0:
288,128,164957,6,0,P|376:84|468:136,2,200,0|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,172,166570,2,0,P|288:216|384:156,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167537,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,240,167699,2,0,P|460:200|436:108,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,64,168505,2,0,P|284:36|216:64,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,117,169795,6,0,P|248:149|180:165,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,170441,2,0,L|44:168,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,171086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,300,171408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,171731,2,0,L|332:260,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,336,172376,6,0,P|420:272|392:192,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,173828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,324,174312,2,0,P|152:268|244:268,1,150,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,340,175279,6,0,P|440:310|462:216,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,104,176408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,40,176892,2,0,P|228:56|192:92,1,100,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,64,177537,6,0,P|156:148|272:140,2,200,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,92,179150,2,0,P|12:144|32:208,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,276,179795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,324,180118,6,0,P|172:312|224:324,1,100,4|2,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,272,180763,2,0,P|344:282|392:270,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,180,181408,2,0,P|312:128|224:176,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,182215,2,2,L|204:260,2,50,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,256,193021,5,4,0:0:0:0:
72,168,193344,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,96,193666,2,0,P|180:52|264:64,2,150,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,194957,2,0,L|260:220,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,195602,6,0,P|288:304|344:244,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,376,196892,2,0,P|128:292|162:194,1,200,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,132,197860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,72,198183,6,0,P|332:48|392:56,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,140,198828,2,0,P|453:98|465:26,2,150,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,192,200118,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,188,200441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,148,200763,6,0,P|116:144|88:148,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
48,148,201086,2,0,L|48:212,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
72,284,201570,1,4,1:0:0:0:
160,288,201892,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202054,12,0,203344,0:0:0:0:
76,132,203989,6,0,P|128:140|172:192,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,216,204473,6,0,P|240:244|312:212,1,150,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,164,205279,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,248,205602,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,296,205924,2,2,P|244:328|140:292,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,206892,1,8,0:0:0:0:
12,192,207215,6,0,P|80:160|152:192,2,150,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,248,208505,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,308,208828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,300,209150,2,8,P|284:280|328:228,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,209795,6,2,P|317:162|232:216,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,210763,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,284,211086,2,0,P|256:292|328:236,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,208,211892,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,212376,6,0,P|344:24|264:36,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,100,213666,2,0,L|292:208,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,272,214312,1,4,0:0:0:0:
220,304,214473,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,256,214795,6,0,P|124:192|156:112,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,48,215602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,64,215924,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,116,216247,2,2,P|400:208|356:304,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,320,217215,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,276,217537,6,0,P|116:256|80:188,2,150,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,208,218828,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,144,219150,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,192,219473,2,0,P|408:240|392:292,1,100,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,348,220118,6,2,P|232:368|152:308,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,224,221086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,144,221408,2,0,P|248:108|308:144,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,264,222376,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,320,222699,6,0,P|236:352|156:312,1,150,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,300,223666,2,2,P|88:228|192:236,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,180,224634,2,0,P|308:164|376:180,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,204,225118,6,0,P|352:272|384:356,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,320,225924,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,240,226247,1,8,0:0:0:0:
492,148,226570,2,2,P|408:92|316:120,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,227537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,252,227860,6,0,P|128:280|56:248,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,228828,2,2,P|220:88|324:100,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,144,229795,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,220,230118,1,8,0:0:0:0:
388,292,230441,6,0,P|336:296|292:344,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,304,231086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,252,231408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,168,231731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
120,84,232054,2,0,P|164:76|212:104,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,128,232537,2,0,L|344:128,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,124,233021,5,2,0:0:0:0:
448,184,233344,2,0,L|512:184,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,272,233828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,336,234150,2,2,P|356:360|296:324,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,260,234957,2,0,L|196:216,1,50,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,132,235441,6,0,P|268:88|352:108,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,160,236247,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,236,236570,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,304,236892,2,2,P|304:340|204:300,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,244,237860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,160,238183,6,0,P|232:108|316:128,2,150,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,239473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,239795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,320,240118,2,0,L|192:356,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,360,240763,6,2,P|92:272|136:164,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,124,241731,1,8,0:0:0:0:
276,76,242054,2,0,P|348:48|420:88,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,132,243344,5,4,0:0:0:0:
304,260,243828,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,344,244312,2,2,P|144:272|160:164,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,104,245279,2,0,P|268:84|324:96,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,245924,6,2,P|348:100|376:176,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,300,246892,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,272,247376,1,4,0:0:0:0:
148,228,247860,2,2,P|100:196|80:152,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,136,248505,6,2,P|208:100|312:112,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,156,249473,2,2,P|384:192|280:180,1,150,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,272,250441,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,208,250763,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,116,251086,6,0,P|184:72|268:96,2,150,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,252537,2,2,P|280:224|364:232,1,150,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,176,253344,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,100,253666,6,0,L|316:64,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
292,60,253989,2,0,L|224:80,1,50,4|4,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
164,116,254473,1,4,1:0:0:0:
136,200,254795,2,2,P|176:256|252:252,1,150,4|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Natsu

Losertic wrote:

Hello!


Hard

  1. maybe, same kiai time another difficult I dont understand what you mean :C
  2. 00:05:083 (1) - i know triangle combo. (1,2,3) consider 00:05:403 (2) - nc. if you change this combo, 01:27:699 (1). change this (same pattern) actually that combos help the player to read the pattern keep it for now
  3. 01:22:054 (1) - move (0,143) ok
  4. 03:19:473 (1) - remove nc ok
  5. 01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782 I have to think about this one


Insane

  1. OD -1? or HP -1? hp -1 but i keep the od since is the spirit of my mappu xD
  2. maybe, same kiai time another difficult need a explain about this
  3. 00:01:553 ~ 00:01:914 reverse slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/895201 fized on my way :D
  4. 01:59:635 (1) - nc? 01:59:472 (9) - remove nc. ok

ahhhhh

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part. will be ok since i reduce the hp

and good map. S.T.A.R thanks for mod and star :D/
Wafu
M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

I miss storyboard on this map so much :(
What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<)
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.


[Insane]

Either -1HP or -1OD. It's not hard to play. But missing 3 notes here can be death because of high HP drain and if you cannot play high OD accurately, you will fail too easily.
00:04:280 (3) - Moving this slider on 134;149 makes the pattern visually better, because before the distance between object was visually not perfect.
00:14:150 (3) - ^ 368;23

00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move circles like this to make shape symmetrical with 00:16:570 (2), this is kinda unsymmetrical and why would it be unperfect?
  1. 00:16:892 (3) - 84;296
  2. 00:16:972 (4) - 87;271
  3. 00:17:053 (5) - 97;248
  4. 00:17:133 (6) - 113;229
  5. 00:17:214 (7) - 134;216
00:37:537 (4,5) - Stack them on the same place. It fits the music better because these are exactly the same notes.
00:47:699 (2,3) - I still don't like this pattern. Reason is just at the start of a mod.
00:55:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe some symmetry with 00:55:441 (5)
01:03:344 (3,1) - Make a perfect stack.
01:03:989 (1,2,3,4) - Make the space between all these sliders consistent.
01:05:763 (3,4) - Told before.
01:23:989 (2,3) - ^
01:45:602 (2,3) - ^
01:50:117 (5,6,7,8) - Place any hitsound or change sampleset here. If you listen to music you can hear that there is just such a rare sound which imo should be hitsounded. Obviously at all diffs.
02:15:279 (2,3) - Same as before.
02:25:602 (2,3) - ^

02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about making more clear shape?
03:14:957 (3) - I'd use copy of 03:14:634 (2) instead and using CTRL+H, CTRL+J on it, this is imo not so clear pattern.
03:26:570 (3,4) - Same as before.
03:48:344 (2,3) - Atleast blanket with 03:47:860 (1) properly.
03:49:795 (3,4) - It's really such annoying pattern.. just saying it again and again :D
03:57:537 (3,4) - ^


Good map, but needs a bit of improvement of perfection and needs to get aesthetic.

[Hard]

00:07:699 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - Quite flow break. I prefer adding note on 00:27:537. You can stack with slider or with 00:26:892 (2)'s start.
00:38:505 (2) - Moving on 143;115 avoids ugly overlap perfectly.

03:30:441 (2,1) - Make a perfect blanket

Much better diff, but I recommend to clear a lot of overlaps.

[Xinely's Normal]

00:25:279 (1,2) - Symmetry please
00:33:989 (2) - Don't worry of ignoring distance snap a bit to imrpove blanketing. See it's better when it's on 206;123
00:37:215 (2) - ^
00:39:150 (2,3,4) - Gosh.. make this pattern perfect, it sux.
00:45:924 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:118 (4,5,1) - ^
02:02:054 (3,4,1) - ^
02:56:892 (3) - Sounds weird. Consider using another slider length.
03:58:183 (1,2) - Blanketing..


Good difficulty, but needs to improve blanketing really much and it will be fine.

[Gero's Easy]

Perfect map, but I've got only one think I'd like to change:
02:21:247 (1,2) - Could you consider making place where is red point sharper by making previous point's curve lower? It's your choice, but I think this shape is nicer than you've done.

[aabc's Taiko Oni]

I'd delete all new combos. It's unnecessary.
00:16:892 (4) - k
00:55:118 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda over+offmapping :D (well, whole map is overmapped, but this is kinda confusing)
02:17:699 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ^

02:31:086 (1) - k
02:43:989 (2,3) - kk
02:56:892 (2) - k
03:34:312 (1) - k
03:54:957 (1) - k

Good diff, but kinda overmapped.

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.
aabc271

Wafu wrote:

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

[aabc's Taiko Oni]

I'd delete all new combos. It's unnecessary. I have no preference for this. Maybe Natsu can help me fix this ?
00:16:892 (4) - k I'll keep this as d because DK (4,1) is actually based on the rising instrumental pitch. Changing this to KK is like ignoring the music, which doesn't fit well
00:55:118 (2,1,1,1,1,2,3,4,1) - Kinda over+offmapping :D (well, whole map is overmapped, but this is kinda confusing)Well, this actually looks fine for me. In terms of difficulty, this stream has a very similar level with others. I know this stream is not strictly following the music, but after consideration of pattern consistency and feeling delivery, I decided to use the current stream
02:17:699 (2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ^ ^
02:31:086 (1) - k Same reason as 00:16:892
02:43:989 (2,3) - kk I used DD here because the later K (1) has a significantly higher pitch than these 2, so I think DD is a better choice
02:56:892 (2) - k Similar reason as 00:16:892, the later K (1) sounds more high-pitched, so DK fits better in my mind
03:34:312 (1) - k ^
03:54:957 (1) - k ^

Good diff, but kinda overmapped. I'm sorry, but I really think this song justifies this level of taiko oni ( 9+* )
The song is intense throughout the song ( except the x0.8~0.9 section ) and therefore a harder diff fits this song well
As I mentioned in my post, this is actually my hardest aabc's Taiko, and at first I even named this as inner oni
This map is indeed not easy, but I do believe I have valid reasons supporting that
But well, at least I'm glad to hear this is a good diff :3


I'll ask Natsu about the hitsound volume issue. Current volume in my diff sounds reasonable for me

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.
Nothing changed, but still, thanks for your mod :)
Topic Starter
Natsu

Wafu wrote:

M4M

I miss storyboard on this map so much :(
What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<) Yeah SB gonna be nice If you wanna do it go ahead It will be nice :3
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.[/color]

[Insane]

Either -1HP or -1OD. It's not hard to play. But missing 3 notes here can be death because of high HP drain and if you cannot play high OD accurately, you will fail too easily.
00:04:280 (3) - Moving this slider on 134;149 makes the pattern visually better, because before the distance between object was visually not perfect.
00:14:150 (3) - ^ 368;23[/color] done in my way
00:16:892 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move circles like this to make shape symmetrical with 00:16:570 (2), this is kinda unsymmetrical and why would it be unperfect? okay
00:37:537 (4,5) - Stack them on the same place. It fits the music better because these are exactly the same notes. I dont like stacks so much since they break the flowhttps://osu.ppy.sh/forum/posting.php?mode=quote&f=6&p=2464823#
00:47:699 (2,3) - I still don't like this pattern. Reason is just at the start of a mod. maybe it not look cool but play so natural with player cursor
00:55:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe some symmetry with 00:55:441 (5) okay
01:03:344 (3,1) - Make a perfect stack.
01:03:989 (1,2,3,4) - Make the space between all these sliders consistent. done
01:05:763 (3,4) - Told before.
01:23:989 (2,3) - ^
01:45:602 (2,3) - ^
01:50:117 (5,6,7,8) - Place any hitsound or change sampleset here. If you listen to music you can hear that there is just such a rare sound which imo should be hitsounded. Obviously at all diffs. since i dont like hitsounds in the middle of stream since they confuse the player thats why I use normal smaplest to makke it easy to follow
02:15:279 (2,3) - Same as before.
02:25:602 (2,3) - ^[/color]
02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - What about making more clear shape? I move some circles making ti more curved
03:14:957 (3) - I'd use copy of 03:14:634 (2) instead and using CTRL+H, CTRL+J on it, this is imo not so clear pattern. okay
03:26:570 (3,4) - Same as before.
03:48:344 (2,3) - Atleast blanket with 03:47:860 (1) properly. done
03:49:795 (3,4) - It's really such annoying pattern.. just saying it again and again :D same explain as before x_X
03:57:537 (3,4) - ^[/color]

Good map, but needs a bit of improvement of perfection and needs to get aesthetic. thanks

[Hard]

00:07:699 (2,1) - Avoid this overlap done
00:27:699 (1,2,3) - Quite flow break. I prefer adding note on 00:27:537. You can stack with slider or with 00:26:892 (2)'s start.
00:38:505 (2) - Moving on 143;115 avoids ugly overlap perfectly. okay[/color]
03:30:441 (2,1) - Make a perfect blanket ok

Much better diff, but I recommend to clear a lot of overlaps. yeah maybe I will up AR to 8 to avoid they



Overall map is good. Good luck with rank. thanks for mod
Xinely

Wafu wrote:

M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

[Xinely's Normal]

00:25:279 (1,2) - Symmetry please
00:33:989 (2) - Don't worry of ignoring distance snap a bit to imrpove blanketing. See it's better when it's on 206;123
00:37:215 (2) - ^
00:39:150 (2,3,4) - Gosh.. make this pattern perfect, it sux.
00:45:924 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:118 (4,5,1) - ^
02:02:054 (3,4,1) - ^
02:56:892 (3) - Sounds weird. Consider using another slider length.
03:58:183 (1,2) - Blanketing..
[/color]

Good difficulty, but needs to improve blanketing really much and it will be fine.

thanks 4 mod :D
.osu given natsu in game


Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.
riffy
yo!

[General]
  1. Try to find an 1024x768 BG or 1366x768 BG. So, we will make sure that BGl looks good on any PC.
  2. Taiko diff has different offset. :< Please, fix it as soon as ppossible!
  3. You need one more taiko diff! according to this rule your mapset is unrankable.
  4. I'd add a storyboard. I know, it's hard and takes a lot of time. But it will make mapset much more interesting for players! Well, I'm not forcing you but please, think about it! :)
[Gero's Easy]
  1. First of all, AR1 is TOO low. I'd recommend you to use AR3 because song is kinda fast. Anyway, if you want to keep this diff really ease, AR2 is fine, too.
    Note: don't forget to increase HP Drain by one tick, too! (Only if you set AR3)
  2. 00:05:925 (1) - unsnapped spinner. :< You know, all objects should be snapped properly to fit with music :)
  3. 00:25:279 (1,2) - your consistent 1/1 rhythm kinda breaks here, it may confuse beginners a little bit. If you try to mphasize vocals here, you can get more consistent rhythm like uh.. this.
    Note: 01:08:505 (4,1) - 01:16:892 (1,2) - and so on - same as above. I know, it's really hard to make an [Easy] for fast songs. Just make sure that it is playable for beginners! :)
  4. 00:30:763 (4) - consider adding a new combo here? I'm sure that it will help you to emphasize vocals! What's more it fits with your pattern much better!
  5. 00:33:344 (2) - nazi - I'm not sure if beginners are able to read such patterns. That loop can confuse them, so how about using something more readable?
  6. 00:37:537 (3) - This slider doesn't reflect music well, imo. I'd recommend you to place an 1/2 slider or a circle on 00:37:537 and slider on 00:38:021. So, rhythm will look like this
  7. 01:03:989 (1,1) - to keep your comboing consistent, I'd remove NCs here and place one NC on 01:04:312 (2) - it will help you to keep patterns and rhythm consistent + it fits here better, imo!
  8. 01:04:312 (2) - consider adding a circle here to follow vocals and music better. It is really needed here!
  9. 02:20:602 - try to place an 1/2 slider with repeat here. Too much of empty space will stress beginners!
    Note: if you dsagree - remove unused green line :3/
  10. 02:38:183 - this beat is begging for a circle! Place it here to emphasize vocals and music, beginners will like it, I'm sure!
  11. 03:29:473 (6,1,2) - nazi - there is only ONE overlap in the whole diff. It looks kinda out of your pattern. I'd recommend you to avoid this overlap if it is possible. :<
  12. 04:14:876 (1) - is this spinner really needed here? This is the easiest diff, I think there's no need to place this short spinner here. It will confuse players. :<

    I don't really like low AR and some rhythm changes here. Anyway, diff is pretty good!
[Xinely's Normal]
  1. 00:02:035 - I'd recommend you to start mapping from this point. As for 00:00:751 (1,2,3,4) - you should remove them. Players will use these 4 ignored beats to catch your rhythm!
  2. 00:17:215 - music stops and fades out here, so consider ending a slider here as well. Adding a repeat to 00:16:892 (3) - will be a good idea.
    Note: 00:27:537 - same happens here with vocals. But I'm not sure about this one, please ask someone else to confirm it :<
  3. 00:33:021 (1,2) - nazi - I know you as a really good mapper, and I'm 140% sure that you can make a cute blanket slider here!
    Note: unfortunately, a lot of blankets here look a little bit messy. I think you can change them yourself since you're experienced enough. Anyway, feel gree to poke me if you'll need some help with them :>
  4. 00:47:860 (3,1) - nazi - it doesn't flows really good. Tail of (1) is too close, so players may mistakenly hit it. Consider moving it somewhere else, please!
    Note: same 01:40:118 (1,2) - 02:28:344 (4,1) - :<
  5. 01:40:118 (1,2) - how about adding a circle here to emphasize drums? It will also make yourrhythm more consistent and easier understandable :)
  6. 03:20:763 (1) - ULTRA-NAZI - for some reason I really dislike the curve here. Just make this slider straight as you did it with (2). It looks much better, imo.

    Awesome diff! Cute patterns and simple rhythm! I like it very much!
[Hard]
  1. AR7 looks too slow here. Playfield is flooded with hitobjecs and Ar doesn't match with SV at all. try to use Ar8, it will make your patterns much more readable!
    Note: yes, it will hurt balance of this mapset. But I'm SURE that it's needed here. at least ask someone else to confirm that I'm right/wrong.
  2. 00:05:805 (1,1) - players need some time after spinner. Slider appears too fast. It's reeeeally hard to catch it, a specially here, when BPM is so fast! Try to leave some space between spinner and slider. Same happens with other spinners! :<
    Note: also, spinner should be started EXACTLY on the red tick. We should follow music as close, as possible!
  3. 00:27:699 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I don't really like these triplets. It seems like you don't really use 1/4 circles in this diff. So, these tripletsmay confuse players.
    Note: 00:58:021 (1,2,3) - same :<
  4. 02:09:876 (1) - 02:17:941 (1) - 03:33:586 (1) - don't you think that such spinners are too short. This is not an [Insane] diff and some players need more time to detect and complete the spinner. :<

    Low AR looks really strange here, imo. Diff is well-mapped and has cute rhythm, tho.
[Insane]
  1. Personally, I don't relly like diff settings here. How about OD8 and H Drain 7? it will make diff more playable and it makes sense with your rhythm. :<
  2. 00:47:699 (2,3) - nazi - I like this diff so much, but some blankets are a little bit messy. It bugs me a lot, so please make this blanket a bit neater.
  3. 01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
    Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - OH MY GOD
  4. 01:49:473 (3) - I'd use Ctrl+G for this slider because it gives better flow, imo. Anyway, just try and see if you like it or not!
  5. 02:04:634 (1,1) - remove these NCs becausethey follow nothing in music and break your comboing :<
    Note: 04:04:957 (1,1,1) - same
  6. 03:58:666 (1) - nazi - this heart doesn't looks PERFECT, so you can improve this. Read this to improve this slider and to avoid the same mistake in future :)

    Those streams are really crazy. o3o/ Just make sure that there's no overmapping and you'll get really awesome map!
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Good luck!
Topic Starter
Natsu

-Bakari- wrote:

yo!

[General]
  1. Try to find an 1024x768 BG or 1366x768 BG. So, we will make sure that BGl looks good on any PC. yeah will fix x_x
  2. Taiko diff has different offset. :< Please, fix it as soon as ppossible! Oh I will discuse this with the mapper :3
  3. You need one more taiko diff! according to this rule your mapset is unrankable. I know another mapper is making muzu right now I think
  4. I'd add a storyboard. I know, it's hard and takes a lot of time. But it will make mapset much more interesting for players! Well, I'm not forcing you but please, think about it! :) yeah since wafu told me the same maybe he wanna make some for this
[Hard]
  1. AR7 looks too slow here. Playfield is flooded with hitobjecs and Ar doesn't match with SV at all. try to use Ar8, it will make your patterns much more readable! yup up to AR8
    Note: yes, it will hurt balance of this mapset. But I'm SURE that it's needed here. at least ask someone else to confirm that I'm right/wrong.
  2. 00:05:805 (1,1) - players need some time after spinner. Slider appears too fast. It's reeeeally hard to catch it, a specially here, when BPM is so fast! Try to leave some space between spinner and slider. Same happens with other spinners! :< fixed i reduce 1/2 some spinners
    Note: also, spinner should be started EXACTLY on the red tick. We should follow music as close, as possible!
  3. 00:27:699 (1,2,3) - to be honest, I don't really like these triplets. It seems like you don't really use 1/4 circles in this diff. So, these tripletsmay confuse players.
    Note: 00:58:021 (1,2,3) - same :< I will keep this for now since just 2 triplet dont hurt it but your opinion is right too so i wanna hear more opinions about his one
  4. 02:09:876 (1) - 02:17:941 (1) - 03:33:586 (1) - don't you think that such spinners are too short. This is not an [Insane] diff and some players need more time to detect and complete the spinner. :< I map that three spinner :3 should be fine now

    Low AR looks really strange here, imo. Diff is well-mapped and has cute rhythm, tho. thanks look and play alñlot better with AR8
[Insane]
  1. Personally, I don't relly like diff settings here. How about OD8 and H Drain 7? it will make diff more playable and it makes sense with your rhythm. :< Yeah but since alt of testers and me want to keep the OD9 since this make the map more challenge imo
  2. 00:47:699 (2,3) - nazi - I like this diff so much, but some blankets are a little bit messy. It bugs me a lot, so please make this blanket a bit neater. fixed
  3. 01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
    Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - OH MY GOD well mmm they fit the music for me since the 3/4 rhythm is really low but is on there and the overmap is just little mmm more of tester and modders enjoy this part of deathstream since it make the game more intersting also in my point of view they follow the music vocals/rhythm thats why I wanna keep they
  4. 01:49:473 (3) - I'd use Ctrl+G for this slider because it gives better flow, imo. Anyway, just try and see if you like it or not! i move the slider to another position better :D
  5. 02:04:634 (1,1) - remove these NCs becausethey follow nothing in music and break your comboing :< Done
    Note: 04:04:957 (1,1,1) - same ok
  6. 03:58:666 (1) - nazi - this heart doesn't looks PERFECT, so you can improve this. Read this to improve this slider and to avoid the same mistake in future :) orz I add a spinner there better T-T

    Those streams are really crazy. o3o/ Just make sure that there's no overmapping and you'll get really awesome map! thanks :D
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Good luck! thanks you and thanks for mod also xinely diff updated but she is lazy huehue so always bring me her diff on pm iin game
Hikaros

-Bakari- wrote:

01:07:699 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is overmap! Please, try to avoid overmap because it is confusing for players and doesn't fit with music! I'm sre, that you can make this diff challenging enough without overmapping!
Note: 01:16:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 02:40:763 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - OH MY GOD
wtf? you basically want to kill the funniest parts of the map? without those itd be just as generic as most of the recent maps. Id call it streamy not overmapped and in my opinion every map should have things like that instead of being so boring... latest maps are so damn easy because they lack these kind of streams. Please stop suggesting for them to be removed.

Natsu i love dem streams, keep up the awesome job <3
Wafu
^ We're finding fun in perfection, not in overmap.
@Natsu: Okay, storyboard is WIP.
Topic Starter
Natsu

Wafu wrote:

^ We're finding fun in perfection, not in overmap.
@Natsu: Okay, storyboard is WIP. thanks :3
Gero
Yue
Aqui va el horrible mod:

General:
-La diff de Gerin no tiene puesto el PreviewTime mientras que todas las demas diff si la tienen D: yeah, fixed :3

Gero's Easy:
  1. 00:13:666 - creo que deberias agregar un circle aqui, se oye un poco vacio y hay musica asi que deberias considerarlo. fixed
  2. 00:16:247 - ^
  3. 00:17:537 (1,2) - siento que esto no esta bien, podrias intentar algo asi-> se oye mucho mejor es mas facil de jugar meh, no me gusta :< no cambios yue lo siento
  4. 01:03:344 - deberias agregar un circle porque va perfectamente con la voz. O por lo menos colocar un slider con repeticion que empieze ahi, claro que tendrias que borar los 2 circles que siguen. Fixed
  5. 02:15:602 - aqui tambien puede ir perfectamente un circle o3o fixed
  6. 04:14:796 (2,1) - o.o! creo que deberias borrar (2) y poner el spiner ahi necesito mas opiniones acerca de esto :3 no cambios por ahora
Yo y mis mods feos.

Mucha suerte Natsu-nyan! de dejare una estrella o3o


kogasa
Hello! From my modding queue.

General
-Background image is not the recommended size?

Gero's Easy
00:05:925 (1) - Unsnapped spinner ending. Fixed
00:39:150 (2) - Placement looks a little odd. i dont think so
03:42:699 (1) - The timing on the end of this sounds off. Fixed
-Slider at the end seems a bit too short for new players.

Sorry I couldn't be of much help.
Love this map, good luck! :)

mathi747
Hi~ late mod
yo tenia un mod para esto pero lo perdi por un apagon ;_;


[box=easy]01:28:021 - me parece que qedaria bueno una nota aca y que el spin empezara aca 01:28:344 -
04:14:473 - algo parecido a lo de arriva aca(?
00:39:150 (2) - se que es por simetria pero este cambio de spacing lo siento feo
02:20:602 - no muy importante pero aca hay una linea verde sin usar
pd:espero no te hallas olvidado de los histounds que me prometiste ;_;

All fixed

no insane mod because im too lazy its too hard for me

Chronotakular
Hello there!

[Gero's Easy]

This map, as of right now, is very good.

-The first spinner might be too short for an easy difficulty. Also, I would completely get rid of the last spinner. The last spinner is too difficult for an easy difficulty, in my opinion. this is not very difficult no changes :P


This map is really great! I hope it hits ranked in the near future so I can play it seriously! :oops:

I hope I was able to help you in someway! Good luck!

Losertic
Hello!

From M4M.

[box=Modding][notice]

General

  1. Pass.

Gero's Easy

  1. 00:30:763 (1) - NC.
  2. 00:39:795 (3) - move x-346.
  3. 00:45:279 (4) - NC.
  4. 01:03:344 - add note? or 01:03:344 ~ 01:03:666 add slider.
  5. 02:26:247 (1) - nc 02:26:570 (2) - remove nc
  6. 03:29:473 (1) - nc 03:29:795 (2) - remove nc
  7. 04:14:473 - add note?
All Fixed

insane too hard ;_;. i died stream part.

and good map. S.T.A.R

Wafu
M4M

Black - Suggestion
Blue - Highly recommended to fix
Red - Unrankable

I miss storyboard on this map so much :(
What about considering making at least Lyrics storyboard. I think it would fit this map. Maybe some effect at the kiai start etc. But I can't force you. Just saying it would fit. (You can poke me and request me for it and I'll maybe accept, have nothing to do >_<)
Increase whole map's volume. I think the volume should be consistent with volume with music, so increasing it by 10% everywhere wouldn't kill you.


[Gero's Easy]

Perfect map, but I've got only one think I'd like to change:
02:21:247 (1,2) - Could you consider making place where is red point sharper by making previous point's curve lower? It's your choice, but I think this shape is nicer than you've done. Fixed

Overall map is good. Good luck with rank.

-Bakari-
yo! You! =3


[Gero's Easy]
  1. First of all, AR1 is TOO low. I'd recommend you to use AR3 because song is kinda fast. Anyway, if you want to keep this diff really ease, AR2 is fine, too. Yes bakadi fixed o3o
    Note: don't forget to increase HP Drain by one tick, too! (Only if you set AR3)
  2. 00:05:925 (1) - unsnapped spinner. :< You know, all objects should be snapped properly to fit with music :) fixed
  3. 00:25:279 (1,2) - your consistent 1/1 rhythm kinda breaks here, it may confuse beginners a little bit. If you try to mphasize vocals here, you can get more consistent rhythm like uh.. this. mmm i don't think so this soonds bad imo :<
    Note: 01:08:505 (4,1) - 01:16:892 (1,2) - and so on - same as above. I know, it's really hard to make an [Easy] for fast songs. Just make sure that it is playable for beginners! :) ^
  4. 00:30:763 (4) - consider adding a new combo here? I'm sure that it will help you to emphasize vocals! What's more it fits with your pattern much better! fixed
  5. 00:33:344 (2) - nazi - I'm not sure if beginners are able to read such patterns. That loop can confuse them, so how about using something more readable? orz :< i like this slider ;_; no changes for now
  6. 00:37:537 (3) - This slider doesn't reflect music well, imo. I'd recommend you to place an 1/2 slider or a circle on 00:37:537 and slider on 00:38:021. So, rhythm will look like this yes of course <3 fixed
  7. 01:03:989 (1,1) - to keep your comboing consistent, I'd remove NCs here and place one NC on 01:04:312 (2) - it will help you to keep patterns and rhythm consistent + it fits here better, imo! fixed
  8. 01:04:312 (2) - consider adding a circle here to follow vocals and music better. It is really needed here! fixed
  9. 02:20:602 - try to place an 1/2 slider with repeat here. Too much of empty space will stress beginners! fixed :3/
    Note: if you dsagree - remove unused green line :3/
  10. 02:38:183 - this beat is begging for a circle! Place it here to emphasize vocals and music, beginners will like it, I'm sure! mmm really? I think it's okay for now orz :c
  11. 03:29:473 (6,1,2) - nazi - there is only ONE overlap in the whole diff. It looks kinda out of your pattern. I'd recommend you to avoid this overlap if it is possible. :< orz orz i like this pattern :c , I need more opinions on this mentioned more times if it takes away
  12. 04:14:876 (1) - is this spinner really needed here? This is the easiest diff, I think there's no need to place this short spinner here. It will confuse players. :< fixed

    I don't really like low AR and some rhythm changes here. Anyway, diff is pretty good!
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Good luck!

My Updated
osu file format v12

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Version:Gero's Easy
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
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210,325,146570,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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318,357,152054,6,0,B|371:357|371:357|411:332|411:332|475:332,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
194,357,153989,2,0,B|141:357|141:357|101:332|101:332|41:332,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,112,156247,2,0,P|256:103|296:112,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
377,139,156893,5,4,0:0:0:0:
429,209,157215,2,0,P|402:282|326:312,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,262,158183,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,312,158505,2,0,P|112:281|85:208,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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249,218,160441,2,0,L|370:324,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,251,161409,2,0,L|480:305,2,79.9999999999999,8|8|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,162215,12,4,164635,0:0:0:0:
179,111,165602,6,0,B|227:111|227:111|278:133|278:133|334:133,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,87,168183,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,195,168828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
46,247,169150,6,0,P|110:290|180:258,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,196,170118,2,0,P|305:153|375:185,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
250,309,171408,2,0,P|320:341|384:298,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,246,172376,5,6,0:0:0:0:
375,185,172699,2,0,B|347:143|276:143|235:189|235:189|91:113,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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395,168,176892,2,0,L|446:133,2,59.9999999999999,10|10|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,53,177860,6,0,P|256:83|184:53,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,129,179473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
409,207,179795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
451,284,180118,6,0,P|493:242|493:184,2,120,10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,129,181731,2,0,L|206:105,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,92,182699,1,6,0:0:0:0:
56,334,193021,5,6,0:0:0:0:
118,271,193344,2,0,P|163:206|154:129,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,56,194634,2,0,P|378:101|455:92,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,154,195602,5,2,0:0:0:0:
449,216,195924,2,0,P|372:206|307:252,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,326,196892,2,0,L|179:347,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,260,197537,2,0,L|88:227,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,187,198183,5,6,0:0:0:0:
44,106,198505,2,0,P|115:73|182:108,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,281,200441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
110,311,200763,2,0,B|159:311|159:311|201:328|201:328|248:328,2,140,10|10|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202054,12,4,204473,0:0:0:0:
62,337,205279,5,2,0:0:0:0:
155,243,205764,2,0,B|204:215|254:245|300:274|349:240,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,178,206893,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,115,207215,2,0,B|285:115|285:115|238:78,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,239,208828,1,8,0:0:0:0:
302,288,209473,5,8,0:0:0:0:
213,288,209796,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,364,210119,2,0,L|256:200,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,211408,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,170,212054,6,0,L|115:251,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,283,212699,2,0,P|98:333|174:313,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,286,213667,2,0,L|256:333,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,259,214312,2,0,L|461:212,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
505,95,215280,6,0,P|447:45|370:66,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,187,217215,2,0,P|413:237|490:216,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,41,219151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
193,103,219473,2,0,L|146:169,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,243,220119,5,4,0:0:0:0:
58,320,220441,2,0,B|98:346|137:325|137:325|216:325,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,200,221731,2,0,B|413:200|413:200|452:179|492:205,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,281,222699,6,0,B|396:304|396:304|335:296,1,120,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,280,223667,2,0,B|161:260|126:281|88:298|38:268,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,198,224635,2,0,B|131:148|131:148|131:85,1,120,8|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,126,225924,5,2,0:0:0:0:
382,84,226408,2,0,B|410:133|380:183|351:229|385:278,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,350,227537,1,10,0:0:0:0:
343,350,227860,2,0,L|223:345,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,269,228828,2,0,B|134:192|134:192|90:125,1,160,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,62,229795,2,0,L|201:134,1,79.9999999999999,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,64,230441,5,6,0:0:0:0:
315,127,230763,2,0,L|361:62,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,125,231408,2,0,B|378:192|378:192|398:269,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,62,233021,5,6,0:0:0:0:
275,88,233344,2,0,B|234:112|197:91|169:74|118:87,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,62,234957,1,10,0:0:0:0:
452,155,235441,6,0,B|441:205|488:243|488:243|442:278|459:334,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,330,236731,2,0,B|342:277|296:242|296:242|343:204|332:154,1,200,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,92,237861,1,8,0:0:0:0:
331,29,238183,2,0,L|208:29,2,120,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,153,239796,1,8,0:0:0:0:
330,277,240441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
257,327,240764,5,4,0:0:0:0:
183,278,241087,2,0,P|150:207|76:186,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,105,243022,6,0,L|297:105,1,79.9999999999999,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,47,243667,2,0,B|393:75|388:117|388:117|474:142,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,228,244635,2,0,L|512:242,2,40,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,228,245279,2,0,P|302:221|248:279,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,246086,12,4,248505,0:0:0:0:
217,311,249473,6,0,P|146:346|70:308,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,259,251086,2,0,L|121:175,1,79.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,97,251731,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,59,252054,2,0,L|335:59,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,97,253667,6,0,P|74:159|93:206,1,120,12|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,268,254473,1,10,0:0:0:0:
234,305,254795,2,0,B|281:327|333:298|384:272|428:302,1,200,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

GO GO Natsu Hentai :P
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