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Kelly Clarkson - Stronger (What Doesn't Kill You) [Osu|Taiko

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DeletedUser_2179411
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happy623 wrote:

love this song

thanks :D <3
Mismagius
9,237 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
ok I'm not really good at doing this anymore so I'll pretty much give you a check and a general opinion

[Normal]
  • Spacing in general is inconsistent, and I severely recommend you to make it consistent. As a normal diff, beginners still have to get the idea of rhythm, which gets a bit messed up when the spacing doesn't make much sense. 1.4x seems fine to use.
  1. 00:22:053 (6,1) - This jump is a bit too big.
  2. 00:34:208 (2,3,4,5) - Considering that this is the easiest diff of the mapset, it might confuse people. I'd say do something like this?
  3. 00:37:311 (4,1) - Jump a bit too big, maybe move (1) to x384 y104?
  4. 00:55:673 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are way too harsh for just a Normal diff. I'd say move (2) to 392;192.
  5. 01:25:673 (1) - Okay, from here the spacing gets waaaaaay too harsh. Remember that beginners will have to play this diff, so please set the spacing a bit lower (and make it consistent).
  6. 01:35:501 (5) - This slowdown really... doesn't make sense with the song/map. Can you remove it?
  7. 01:40:415 (1) - You have basically no time to finish the spinner and react to the note. Finishing the spinner at 01:41:708 would be better.
  8. 01:53:604 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:55:673 (1,2,3,4), but mirrored
  9. 02:06:018 (1) - Why this new combo? I'd say remove it o:
  10. 02:30:328 (8,9) - Jump too hard, use normal spacing there, please.
  11. 02:31:622 (2) - Much better if you insert a break after this note, so the player doesn't unnecessairily lose HP. Also, fits better.
  12. 02:43:259 (1,2,3) - Jump is a bit too harsh for a Normal diff.
  13. 02:59:811 (1,2) - Same as ^
  14. 03:03:949 (1) - Same as 02:06:018 (1)
  15. 03:09:122 (3) - Slider goes offscreen, which isn't rankable.
  16. 03:18:949 (5) - This is rather... unpredictable. Maybe remove 2 repeats from it?
  17. 03:26:190 (5,6,7) - Jump is a bit too harsh.

    Yeah, map needs some more work. The spacing is completely unpredictable, but your rhythm sense is perfectly fine. After a rework in spacing I don't see why this shouldn't be good for ranking.
Mapper asked me to stop modding so I'll just end up with this :P
Kareov
349 posts
Joined July 2013
Kareov
Hi. I'm not very good at modding but I said, I'll try, so, yeah.

[General]
The Storyboard is quite nice, but looks like something wrong happened.
PreviewTime:42484
I also think you need to make an Easy diff.

[Normal]
00:11:190 (6) - Too far from the slider '5'
00:13:777 (3) - 1 grid down is better
00:16:622 (6) - oh too weird here
00:25:673 (4) - finish
00:33:690 (6) - remove newcombo
00:34:208 (1) - new combo
and just saying, i really can't look these words clearly.
01:03:949 (1,2,3,4) - oh no don't use overlaps
01:04:984 (1) - new combo
01:27:225 (4,5,6,7) - too hard for beginners to reach them
02:15:846 (1,2,3,4) - this is normal diff, not Hard!
03:09:122 (3) - quite ugly here

[Hard]
AR:7
OD:6
and where's the hitsounds?
01:54:639 (2) - suddenly slowdown, and this slider scars me

[Kill-Ben's CRAZY INSANE]
02:10:672 (4) - don't put this note here, quite ugly
awwwwww,too difficult, too fast... and Slider Tick Rate should be 3
02:28:258 (5) - one grid right
02:31:880 - add a note here

[Insane]
00:11:966 (1,2,3) - ugly
02:39:380 (5) - this note touchs HP bar.



uhm,you're quite good at making nice hitsounds, but Spacing in general is inconsistent, just like Blue Dragon said, but I'm sure you'll finally make a good beatmap!
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
I'm not going to bother modding this yet. There's still so much common errors found in this map, that still needs to be fixed.

[General]
*The volume of you objects are too loud. Consider lowering it to 40 - 50% in non Kai times, and 65% in Kai times.
*You need to turn on epilepsy warnings in all your diffs
*So much audio preview time conflicts without the entire mapspread.
* Inconsistent Kai times in your diffs.
*SB lyrics needs majoy fixing: The lyrics 'stand a little taller' comes in a bit late. It should come in at 01:43:130 instead of 01:43:259
The lyrics 'Doesn't mean I'm lonely when I'm alone' at 01:45:199 fades to early.
*Missing SB files
[Normal]
*Okay, you really must use DS snap in this diff - which clearly you haven't, because I see this in AiMod:

Ar -1

.....

I'll mod once the SB lyrics animation is fixed.
Xiaolin
1,857 posts
Joined April 2013
Xiaolin
مرحبا ^^
[General]
-Preview Point: 00:42:484 حطي البرفيو بوينت
[Normal]
-سليدر فيلوسيتي لازم يكون 1.30

انا مشغولة, فالزم اخلص هني ^^" انشالة هال ماب يكون رانكيد
wasonz
714 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz
from my queue

Taiko
00:11:966 (7) - move to 00:12:484 (8) - and change to d
00:42:096 (119,120) - Ctrl+G

01:26:320 (40) - move to 01:25:932 (39) - also you can add d to 01:26:061 (40) -

01:32:397 (66,67,68,69,70) - :oops: remap at this place \I feel weird about kkddk at here
<- my idea if you don't know how to map here :P

01:43:906 (7) - delete //look bad imo
01:49:208 (33,34) - Ctrl+G
01:55:285 (65) - k
02:02:915 (102,107) - k \\follow voice ~

02:05:630 (118) - 02:05:759 (119) - add d \\no break in kiai is better imo

02:18:820 (14) - add d
02:23:734 (32) - move to 02:23:346 (31) -
02:23:863 (33) - delete

02:25:415 (38) - add k \\follow voice

02:28:518 (47,48) - Ctrl+G
02:29:294 (50) - k
02:39:122 (4) - k
02:47:527 (35) - k

Oni
00:12:096 (16,19) - Overmap !! remove finish !!
00:12:742 (21) - k also you can add k
00:25:027 (82) - add k
00:26:708 (91) - k \\follow the voice

00:32:139 (118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) -


00:35:759 (140,141) - k \\follow guitar

00:37:958 (152) - k
00:39:509 (160) - add d

00:48:432 (28,29) - DDD: remap here look bad imo
00:52:570 (10,11) - and here
00:56:708 (14,15) - and here ~
01:07:311 (72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86) - Remap this .It's feel weird for me

01:17:139 (135,136) - k
01:29:035 (20) - d

01:48:690 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - ^^^

02:05:242 (215) - kdddD idk but feel like it's overmap change 02:05:242 (215) - to k

02:30:328 (351,352,353,354,355,356) - Ddk Ddk :oops: overmap remove that finish

02:31:492 (358,359) - Ctrl+G

02:40:156 (8) - overmap :oops:

02:51:794 (75) - d \\follow voice

03:03:173 (133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - like those mod ^^^^^^^^^

03:15:328 (202,204) - k

03:24:768 (256) - k


Extra Mod
set preview time at here 00:00:846 (1) -
or 02:40:156 (1) -
or 02:38:346 (1) -

Good Luck ~ :)
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
Hi, from V&V's Modding Queue!

I'm sorry, i don't speak arabic much... I'm a car... ;_;
[> General <]
  1. - I think the Offset should be on 840...
  2. - Haven't you check this map often? I think not... > http://puu.sh/anPl3/4cc21e2df4.png
  3. - I recommend the preview point should be on 00:42:354 -
  4. - I bet you need to check your storyboarding, since i see some wrong lyrics on the wrong song track.
[> Normal <]
  1. 00:09:122 (1,2,3) - Bad start, remap this part, also curve the slider.
  2. 00:09:639 (3,4,5) - On Easy/Normal diffs, use one Distance Spacing at a time, Not this kind of spacing. This'll also mention on other parts than here, Try finding it yourself.
  3. 00:12:225 (7,1) - A jump on Normal? This is seriously against the criteria.
  4. 00:15:846 (5,6,7,8) - The circle (8) doesn't look like it's blanketing under the slider (5), Remap this at once.
  5. 00:17:139 (8,1) - Same as 00:12:225 (7,1) - This'll also be on other parts, so find it yourself.
  6. 00:22:828 (1,2,3,4) - Straightic, Curve the flow.
  7. 00:33:690 (6,1,2,3) - Make a square or diamond formation here.
  8. 00:35:501 (5,2) - Overlap, or on purpose?
  9. 00:38:863 (3,4,5,6,7) - Making a bit of a Star formation here is fine here.
  10. 00:45:328 (2,3,4) - Parallel here is bad, try another pattern.
  11. 00:47:397 (1,2,3,4) - Rhythm doesn't look great here, At least shorten the slider on the long white line, and add a circle next to it.
  12. 00:52:311 (6,7) - Same as above, but this kind of downbeat doesn't make sense here, the long line should be hittable to players, remap.
  13. 00:53:604 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:22:828 (1,2,3,4) -
  14. 00:59:035 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Such a pure clicking, Make a Hexagon formation here.
  15. 01:04:984 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:22:828 (1,2,3,4) -
  16. 01:14:553 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This flow looks like 2008 style strange, remap.
  17. 01:25:673 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:22:828 (1,2,3,4) -
  18. 01:33:173 (4,5,6) - 1/4 note in Normal diffs, Yep, seriously won't be ranked when this showed up.
  19. 01:35:242 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:59:035 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -, Make a Hexagon/Star formation here.
  20. 02:22:570 (2,3) - I think this is complicating with Normal players when stacked like that, Unstack them, and make a blanket for short.
  21. 02:24:639 (2,3,4,5) - "Splitting these circle" will make you stronger :3
  22. 02:41:190 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make a Star formation here
  23. 02:44:294 (3,4,5,6,7) - Remap this as symmetry, plus, the sliders doesn't flow well here. Just make them a normal-curved sliders.
  24. 02:51:535 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:22:828 (1,2,3,4) -
  25. 02:55:415 (4,5,6) - Make a blanket here instead.
  26. 03:03:173 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is a good pattern, why not try this on other parts too?
  27. 03:09:122 (3,4,5) - Unstack, doesn't fit the rhythm.
  28. 03:15:846 (5,6) - Overlap...
  29. - This diff still needs more work, try getting more mods from others.
[> Hard <]
  1. 00:09:768 (4) - Remove this circle, I don't hear anything on this track.
  2. 00:14:553 (4,5) - Make a blanket here.
  3. 00:17:397 (5) - Add NC, New track.
  4. 00:21:018 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Make a Star formation here.
  5. 00:24:380 (2,7) - A bit overlap, Stack?
  6. 00:31:880 (3,4,5) - The flow here just broke, Remake them.
  7. 00:37:570 (4,5) - Use DS and make a better blanket.
  8. 00:40:156 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:45:328 (3) - Curving this slider as a waving slider will flow better than the current one. If you want to keep it but change, Just move the slider's tail to x:212|y:180.
  10. 00:48:432 (4,5) - Same as 00:37:570 (4,5) -
  11. 00:50:759 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - A bit boring when staying in one place, Just rotate 00:51:535 (5,6,7) - , And it'll automatically make for you a Tornado Formation.
  12. 00:53:734 (5) - Same as 00:09:768 (4) -
  13. 00:58:518 (5,6) - Ctrl + G for great flow
  14. 01:00:070 (2) - Curve like the previous two sliders for a Cycle pattern.
  15. 01:00:846 (5,7) - Same as 00:37:570 (4,5) -
  16. 01:01:363 (7,2) - An overlap like this won't be playable well... Why not stack on the slider's tail at least?
  17. 01:07:311 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Same reason on the previous diff... But i think you need to make a better pattern here. Also, fix some of the spacings.
  18. 01:12:225 (5,1) - Stack on slider's tail on head.
  19. 01:13:259 (1,2,3) - Blanket instead?
  20. 01:27:742 (5,6,7) - Little boring, Make a Triangle formation here.
  21. 01:29:811 (4) - Same as above, but worse. Reduce the repeating and make a bit of style here.
  22. 01:31:880 (7,1,2) - ^
  23. 01:37:053 (6,7) - Speeding up velocity slider doesn't make sense here. Only on the chorus does, so remake this.
  24. 01:40:027 (6) - Same as 00:09:768 (4) -
  25. 01:47:397 (2,3,4,5) - Unstack, same reason as 01:27:742 (5,6,7) -
  26. 01:47:527 (3) - ^, or move this near the slider.
  27. 01:48:691 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Make a Tornado formation here.
  28. 01:53:734 (6) - Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  29. 01:54:639 (2) - Curve this slider for symmetry with the previous one.
  30. 01:56:966 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:50:759 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  31. 01:58:777 (7,1,2) - Same as 00:37:570 (4,5) -
  32. 02:00:846 (4,5,6) - ^
  33. 02:08:863 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:50:759 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
  34. 02:19:984 (1,5) - Same as 01:01:363 (7,2) -
  35. 02:21:665 (7) - Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  36. 02:27:484 (5) - Make a downbeat here by shorten-ing this slider and add circle next to it.
  37. 02:29:553 (3) - ^
  38. 02:31:492 (7) - Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  39. 02:46:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:07:311 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -
  40. 02:49:854 (5) - Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  41. 02:54:897 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 01:07:311 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) -, and the flow broke here.
  42. 03:03:173 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  43. 03:06:535 (2,3) - Same as 00:37:570 (4,5) -
  44. 03:12:354 (3) - Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  45. 03:12:225 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:50:759 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -, And remake a blanket here.
  46. 03:19:725 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
  47. 03:25:285 (4) - Same as Same as 01:47:527 (3) -
  48. 03:29:682 - Add two circles here for better streaming. Plus, it's ending.
  49. - This needs more work than Normal, Try getting a better maintenance here...

I will not mod other diffs since it's the same reason as well, so I recommend you to see other and newer ranked maps to see how they made a great pattern and flowed well. This is just my suggestion...
Great song anyway~ Good Luck!
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
hi, mod from my quehuehue

[Oni]
wow, nice diff
nothing to be mentioned

[Taiko]
err btw, is this muzukashii??

from here 00:27:225 to 00:29:553 , try to use this pattern
00:37:958 (99) - delete
00:38:087 (99) - and D
00:38:475 (101) - kat
00:43:001 (121) - delete | imo make a little break and flowing with kiai /o/
00:45:328 (5) - don
00:49:984 (25,26) - ctrl + g
00:50:501 (27,28) - ctrl + g
00:51:794 (34) - kat
01:09:639 (118,121) - don please, it's better
01:12:096 (131) - delete and 01:12:225 (132) - kat here
01:21:535 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - so hard here for muzukashii

01:44:423 (9,10) - kat here
02:51:535 (57,60) - don
02:58:389 (91,101) - kat
03:23:734 (16) - delete
03:23:863 (16) - kat 03:23:863 (16,17) - ctrl + g http://puu.sh/aIqrt/2d73e78112.png

[Other]
n/o
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
oh i missed this,for muzukashii don't use kkd/ddk/kdk/dkd it's :|
and
01:33:949 (69) - K
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

General

  1. add some tags maybe... there must be something 0.0

IInsane

  1. 00:11:966 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - arrange these ds
  2. 00:20:242 (8) - uhh... i'm not sure if this can be ranked... ask bats for details plz ;w;
  3. 00:36:277 (5) - nc
  4. 00:57:742 (5,6,3,6,7,8) - not stack together very well
  5. 01:01:880 (3,4,5) - put these in the very middle? 256,192? and stack 01:03:949 (3,5,7) - these as well
  6. 01:09:122 (1,3) - swap nc setting
  7. 01:11:190 (7,8,9,10,11) - regular star here?
  8. 01:37:570 (7,1) - stack
  9. 01:39:897 (6,1) - ^
  10. 01:46:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange ds
  11. 02:15:199 (5) - ^
  12. 02:15:846 (1,2,3) - blanket these?
  13. hmm, and lots of stuffs have issues like things above, check them by urself
  14. 03:27:742 (4) - set this shape in symm style maybe, sliders like this in the whole map as well
  15. generally nothing wrong in this map, but i think u really need to do more work to give better stuffs in detail

kill-ben's Insane

  1. all of nc settings confused a bit, just set them at long white line rather than follow the vocal track or something, better idea ever imo.
  2. 00:11:448 (8) - ctrl+g?
  3. 00:27:483 (8) - ^
  4. 00:46:879 (10,11) - larger ds
  5. 01:44:810 (10,11) - ^
  6. 02:14:811 (7) - arrange into same ds?
  7. 02:27:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - regular pentagon?
  8. 02:29:810 (10) - nc
  9. 03:27:224 (4) - a bit offscreen

Insane

  1. 00:15:845 (2,4) - stack
  2. 00:17:397 (10,1) - just spread them, and keep those blanket
  3. 00:19:725 (1,2,3,4,5) - regular pentagon?
  4. 00:22:828 (4,5,6) - stack? maybe... lots of stuffs like this orz
  5. 00:27:225 (2,3,4,5,6) - arrange ds, really... and a looot of others
  6. 00:28:130 why not follow this vocal beat?
  7. 00:39:122 (1,2) - blanket each other?
  8. 01:13:777 (8) - offscreen
  9. pretty same issues after, and as IInsane's as well... check them by urself

Hard

  1. 00:09:897 (4,5) - blanket? 00:14:553 (4,5) - and this, and a lot
  2. hmm... really detail things just same to insane, too...
well, i think details decide the quality a lot...

good luck
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
HootOwlStar
Hihi I'm here for mod from my queue :D
osu! needs more Kelly Clarkson lol
No kudos pls

[General]

AiMod wrote:

More than 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this.
Audio lead-in conflicts with kill-ben's Insane diff.
This mapset needs at least 1 Easy/Normal diff.
Well, this is only from 1 diff so better check other diffs' AiMod too~
Erm... there are 126 information in kill-ben's Insane diff?

[Normal]
CS is too small for a Normal diff so please try to change it
And please, at least use distance snap in Normal diff
The combo thing also needs to be changed for some notes, you go figure out on your own
00:09:122 (1,2) - Suggest making them into a straight slider
00:24:380 (4) - Remove this
00:38:087 (1,2,3,4) - Change the placement
02:31:363 (1,2) - The vocals here are triplets so the notes should be placed in 1/3 beat snap divisor

I just want to say like that. GL~ :D
Fuuyu
856 posts
Joined September 2013
Fuuyu
From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[ Normal]

00:15:328 (4) - Why not flatten the slider?

00:24:380 (4) - Move it here 00:24:639

00:24:897 (1) - Remove NC

00:25:673 (8) - Apply NC

00:52:828 (7) - Remove

00:56:708 (3) - Why not change this into a single hit object

01:17:139 (7) - Flatten the slider

01:54:639 (3) - Change into a single hit object

01:54:639 (3) - Curve the slider

02:15:070 (7) - Flatten the slider

03:09:122 (3) - ^ like this 03:08:604 (2)

03:15:070 (4,5) - Stack the slider tail/s also make the sliders identical kinda off

[ Hard]

00:20:242 (3,4) - DS Error

00:27:225 (4) - Curve the slider

00:30:070 (5) - Check the placement of the slider

00:39:897 (1,3) - Stack the head properly

00:58:777 (6,7) - DS Error

01:38:087 (1) - How about stacking it on (2) instead the tail of (7)

01:54:639 (2,3) - Stack them properly

01:56:191 (6,7) - ^

02:08:087 (7) - Start the NC here instead of 02:08:216 (1) - here . .

02:31:363 (7,8) - Don't stack them

GL~
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
start of irc mod, we'll continue later:


SPOILER
2014-12-30 13:51 Hard: okay i just tested your insanes
2014-12-30 13:51 Hard: and they lack consistency
2014-12-30 13:52 R a n i n: i see
2014-12-30 13:52 Hard: oh wait i have to go my brother wants to go to the cinema and i have to go too. i'll just do a thread-mod okay?
2014-12-30 13:53 R a n i n: ok
2014-12-30 13:53 R a n i n: thanks alot aain
2014-12-30 13:53 R a n i n: again*
2014-12-30 13:53 Hard: no w8 maybe he won't go
2014-12-30 13:53 Hard: xD
2014-12-30 13:53 R a n i n: lol xD
2014-12-30 13:53 Hard: 00:10:156 (4) - why
2014-12-30 13:53 Hard: did you put a repeating slider there?
2014-12-30 13:54 R a n i n: yeah
2014-12-30 13:54 Hard: why
2014-12-30 13:54 Hard: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/267034 Kelly Clarkson - Stronger (What Doesn't Kill You) [Insane]]
2014-12-30 13:54 Hard: i am editing the insane atm
2014-12-30 13:54 R a n i n: oh wait
2014-12-30 13:55 Hard: tbh honest your map is a very beginner map
2014-12-30 13:55 R a n i n: cause its my first map ..
2014-12-30 13:55 Hard: yeah
2014-12-30 13:55 R a n i n: so everything is beginner for me
2014-12-30 13:55 Hard: you'll be dissappointed and I doubt that you will rank this map
2014-12-30 13:56 Hard: so i wont do a real mod but give you mostly tips on how to improve
2014-12-30 13:56 R a n i n: ok
2014-12-30 13:59 Hard: 00:09:380 (2,3) -
2014-12-30 13:59 Hard: i suggest you stack 2 under 3
2014-12-30 13:59 Hard: because both are vocals
2014-12-30 13:59 Hard: and it's the same note
2014-12-30 14:00 R a n i n: ok
2014-12-30 14:00 Hard: 00:10:156 (4) -
2014-12-30 14:00 Hard: the "feels" shouldn't be on a repeat-end of a slider
2014-12-30 14:00 Hard: sliderends are there for notes that don't need to feel played
2014-12-30 14:01 Hard: 00:10:415 - this should be clicked
2014-12-30 14:01 Hard: 00:10:156 - make this a circle
2014-12-30 14:02 Hard: and then this 00:10:415 - a slider until00:10:673 -
2014-12-30 14:03 R a n i n: http://puu.sh/dQzmB/de4858c8e5.jpg .. should i put it like this
2014-12-30 14:03 R a n i n: ?
2014-12-30 14:03 Hard: no w8
2014-12-30 14:03 Hard: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2410859
2014-12-30 14:04 Hard: i have to go now
2014-12-30 14:04 Hard: i pm you l8er i think irc mod is better for you than a normal one
2014-12-30 14:04 R a n i n: ok ..
2014-12-30 14:04 R a n i n: cya ..
2014-12-30 14:04 Hard: c u :)
2014-12-30 14:04 Hard: i won't forget you and if i forget you just pm me
2014-12-30 14:05 Hard: add me as a friend, then you won't block me
2014-12-30 14:05 R a n i n: ok ..
2014-12-30 14:05 Hard: :D
2014-12-30 14:05 R a n i n: yeah that's what i did
2014-12-30 14:05 Hard: good
2014-12-30 14:05 Hard: cu :)
2014-12-30 14:05 R a n i n: see ya
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Quick SB mod because I could pretty much find most of the flaws instantly.

All of your lyric images has unused transparency. You need to crop them.

No reason to have epilepsy warning for this SB. There is nothing bright flashy and in your face here.

Untitled-17.png during the start of the first chorus is really compressed horizontally and it just looks weird. I suggest you scale it like every other time.

On Untitled-14.png it should be "What doesn't kill you makes a fighter" not "What doesn't kill you makes you fighter"

On Untitled-19.png to the text is completely different between the two rows so it looks really really weird. Make it consistent.

Some of the lyric images has light green and it blends in quite a lot with the background. I suggest you pick a more contrasting colour.

Is it really needed to remove lightning.png? If somebody doesn't like it they probably has it disabled in the options anyways.

Why not get a widescreen background and add widescreen support?
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
From LordRaika's Party

[General]
YOU MUST GET A DIFF BELOW 2.00 STARS IF YOU WANT TO RANK THIS!!
Normal also feel way too hard

[Normal]
So much overmap
DISTANCE BETWEEN NOTES MUST BE THE SAME IN NORMAL!! MAKE ALL NOTES HAVE 1.00
I can't really mod this diff, as there are many problems (mostly due to spacing, sorry)

[Hard]
00:11:966 (5) - This feels terrible, make it a 1/2 reverse slider
00:19:725 (2,4) - These notes are overlapping, which looks ugly, consider fixing it
00:24:897 (4,5,6) - Try to blanket better
00:30:070 (5) - NC
00:35:759 (5) - This might go up to high, and hit the HP bar, which is not good
00:36:018 (6,7,8,1,2) - Blanket better
00:36:794 (8,1,2,4) - Ugly overlap
00:37:570 (4) - Ugly slider, completely change shape, as the slider has no flow for me
00:40:156 (2,3) - Blanket better
00:46:104 (4,5) - ^^
00:52:570 (2) - Change
Look at spoilerbox for suggestion
SPOILER

01:14:811 (4) - Delete, for this, you can ctrl d (3), then push it back to the white tick, and then ctrl j
01:27:225 (4) - Move to 158:145 (select note, and then click coordinates)
01:25:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - Terrible blankets, please improve them
01:38:346 (2,3,4) - Blanket better
01:47:397 (2,3,4) - Feels bad (due to no distance), also, move them up by 1 (348:121)
01:52:570 (3) - Flows bad, ctrl G please
02:31:880 (9) - Move to 335:117
02:43:259 (8) - NC
02:43:777 (1) - Delete NC
02:45:458 (4) - Better make it circles
02:48:432 (1,2) - Fix blanket
02:57:225 (6) - NC
03:02:397 (4) - Feels terrible, make it end at the white tick
03:12:225 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Fix blanket
03:21:018 (5) - Move to 63:18
03:21:277 (6,7) - Move to 83:133
03:22:053 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blanket


[Insane]
This diff is quite decent :D, but very overmapped

00:14:035 (8) - Ctrl G, it disturbs flow the way it is now
00:16:622 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Weird usage of NC, please delete NC of all these notes except the first one
00:17:655 (1,2,3) - Fix Blanket
00:18:432 (3) - Ctrl G for flow
00:25:415 (6) - Move to 168:316, also NC
00:39:122 (1) - Ctrl G
00:41:190 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Weird usage of NC, please delete NC of all these notes except the first one
00:46:363 (2,3,4,5) - Change please, this is very overmapped
00:54:639 (2) - Terrible slider, make it a 1/1 slider
01:02:656 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - This looks really ugly, make a slider, and ctrl shift J it
01:09:122 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - Dat overmap, please change
01:24:639 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Looks bad, press ctrl shift d and set it to 7
01:32:785 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Weird NC, and terrible distance. Please make it look more neat
01:56:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please lower distance
02:00:587 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Ugly stream, make a slider and ctrl shift j it
02:58:518 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - No need for this imo
03:12:742 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks bad due to the (5) being at the (4)


[Kill-ben's Insane]
Set Slider Tick rate to 2
So freaking fast
I can't really mod this, or else I'd be to nazi

[Extra]
Please set CS to 4,0
I can't really mod this, as the diff is not ready for modding.
Consider getting a Extra GD, or completely delete it from the mapset. Also, for an extra, it's way to easy, it should be wel above 5(.25) stars

the Taikos are good!

Good Luck with the map!
BoatKrab
740 posts
Joined September 2012
BoatKrab
Hi!, form my queues. I'm going to mod only Normal & Hard Diff because your Insane diff it make me confused @_@
Please read before fix my mod
I recomend you fix some my mod

[General]

Secretpipe wrote:

Try to respect distance spacing ! :3
umm...like this
Move Kiai start line to White line
Move all timing section to should be

[Storyboard]
Add Fade in-out on your lyric

[Normal]
  • AR 6 It's too hard if you play with HR mod, try to change AR to 4 or 5
    CS is too small
02:23:604 (3) - Add finish
00:17:397 - Add note and if you add note at 00:17:397 - add finish too
00:17:656 (1) - Delete?
00:33:690 (6) - Add Finish (End)
03:21:277 (2) - ^
00:35:501 (5) - Move left a little bit
01:04:984 (1,4) - http://puu.sh/eM69p/2169282e9a.jpg
03:15:070 (4,5) - ^
03:17:915 (2,4) - ^
01:17:139 (7) - Add default finish
01:36:018 (6) - NC?
03:22:053 (4) - ^
01:40:415 (1) - Add Normal_Normal :/
01:50:242 (6) - Add default soft_finish
02:23:604 (3) - Add finish

[Hard]
00:44:229 - Move Kiai line to 00:44:294 -
00:24:380 (2,7) - http://puu.sh/eM6Zr/7d45fe6c4c.jpg
00:25:156 (5,9,1) - It's not blanket
00:36:018 (6,7) - ^
01:01:104 (6,7) - ^
01:53:604 (5,6,1,2) - ^
01:58:518 (5,6,7,2) - ^
02:00:846 (4,6) - ^
02:02:397 (6,7,1) - ^
02:09:897 (7,1) - ^
03:00:846 (2,3) - ^
03:12:225 (2,4,5,6) - ^
03:24:639 (2,3) - ^
00:44:294 (1) - It's too fast if you play with DT
01:09:122 (6) - NC
01:45:070 - If you change Slider Velocity Multiple in this line you need to NC on this 01:45:070 (6) -
02:40:932 (4) - ^
02:44:294 (3) - ^
02:13:777 (3) - ^
02:14:294 (4) - ^

Good luck :D
chisaki-san
20 posts
Joined December 2013
chisaki-san

hello from VINXIS and i's modding queue!


[general]
  1. please make sure to check AiMod (ctrl+shift+a) on all difficulties~
  2. for kill-ben's insane, go to timing -> resnap all notes?
[storyboard]
  1. shoutouts to xgor for mentioning basically everything i wanted please try and follow xgor's advice from his mod as well, as these are all really important things that will help a lot!!
  2. so much unused transparency wao, please click here to download these new files and replace your current files in the sb folder with these ones, as i've cropped out all the unused transparency which puts on unnecessary excess storyboard load and makes the file size of the song a lot larger than needed!
  3. widescreen support would be really appreciated, as well as a background that will fit with a widescreen resolution
  4. instead of switching the lyrics between the gold/green/purple colours, please keep the colours of the lyrics consistent! (i mean this is only a personal preference, but go for a different shade of green so that the colour of the lyrics suit the song's bg while still not blending in, making it readable)
  5. please re-check some of the lyrics in the storyboard to make sure they're the same as the official lyrics of the song!!

good luck with the rank! (^˃ᆺ˂^)ﾉ”

edit: added a link in the post for downloading the new lyric pictures
Last edited by chisaki-san , edited 1 time in total.
Oriental Tank
56 posts
Joined November 2013
Oriental Tank
Hi~ mod from my queue

[General]
^^

[Easy]
I think you should make a map in a grid level 2 or 3
00:14:811 (4) - I think you can make more cool blanket. Like a x:304 y:256
00:16:880 (3) - ^
00:21:018 (5) - add a note ?
00:21:535 (1,2) - I think you can make more cool shape
00:29:294 (3) - Suggestion
00:32:397 (8) - I think you can make more cool blanket. Like a
00:41:708 (6) - whistle ?
00:52:570 (5) -
00:54:639 (3) - ^
00:57:742 (1) - I think you can make more cool blanket
01:06:018 (5,6) - Suggestion
this is better sound i think..
01:14:294 (5) - set a whistle at slider tail
01:15:846 (1) - clap
01:16:363 (2) - whistle
01:16:363 (2) - clap
01:26:190 (2) - i think set a whistle in this timing ,01:27:225 (4) -, 01:28:259 (6) - and ~~~ Just suggestion ^^
01:31:363 (2) - I think you can make more cool blanket
01:38:088 (2,3,4,5,6) - i think you can make more beautiful shapes like this ?? just suggestion
01:42:742 (1) - clap and 01:43:259 (2) - whistle - Follow this rhythm Everything that comes ^^ like a 01:43:777 (3) - clap 01:44:294 (4) - whistle
02:12:742 (6) - I think you can make more cool blanket
02:16:880 (3) - whistle 02:17:397 (4) - delete whistle 02:17:915 (5) - whistle ^^ Follow this rhythm Everything that comes
02:38:604 (1) - set a whistle at tail
02:39:639 (2) - clap and 02:40:156 (3) - whistle on head and clap at tail Follow this rhythm Everything that comes
03:17:397 (2) - delete note and make a slider like this
and 03:19:466 (4) - add a note
03:21:535 (8,9) - suggestion

[Normal]
00:25:156 (1) - delete NC ?
00:48:173 (4,5) - i think this rhythm is a little weird Suggestion
01:08:087 (1) - delete NC
01:10:932 (4) - i think this rhythm is a little weird Suggestion
01:30:587 (3) - I think you can make more cool blanket
01:33:561 (5) - So difficult for normal mapset i think, delete note?
01:35:759 (6) - add note
01:48:690 (1,2,3,4) - hit sound is so weird for me..
01:56:966 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:21:535 (5) - I think you can make more cool blanket
02:22:570 (2) - ^
02:30:846 (9) - x:136 y:368
02:41:708 (4,5) - change Location?
02:43:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) to END - where is Hit sound ?
03:17:139 (8,1,2) - difficult for normal.. i think
03:19:466 (6) - delete note and move 03:19:725 (1) - 03:19:466
03:23:346 (1,2) - so weird for me suggestion
03:25:415 (2) - add note
03:26:190 (4,5,6) - i think you can make more beautiful rhythm

[Hard]
Kiai is unsnapped
00:09:897 (4) - delete whistle
00:10:156 (5) - whistle at tail
00:10:156 (5) - delete whistle at head ?
00:14:553 (4) - whistle at tail
00:15:070 (5) - whistle on head
00:18:949 (5) - whistle ?
00:31:363 (1) - delete NC
00:31:880 (1) - add NC
00:40:673 (3) - i think you can make a more cool blanket
00:44:294 (1)to END - where is clap sound ?? T.T i like that sound like a 00:44:294 (1) - clap at tail T.T
00:51:535 (5) - x:256 y:272 ?
01:02:915 (4) - i think you can make more cool shape
01:11:191 (3) - i think you can make more cool blanket
01:29:811 (4) - ^
01:31:880 (9) - Suggestion
02:04:208 (2,3,4,5,6) - Suggestion
02:35:501 (1) - spinner end at 02:37:570
02:38:346 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggestion 02:39:380 (5) - x:256 y:112 02:39:897 (7) - x:320 y:40
02:45:587 (5) - x:304 y:342
03:00:070 (5) - add note
03:13:777 (6) - i think you can make more cool blanket

that's all
You can improve Hitsound some parts ^^
i cant mod Insane and other diff T.T because so difficult ..
I hope this modding help you ^^ :) Good luck
Oskar97EU
Oskar97EU
I love this song. <3
rhalp10
579 posts
Joined September 2013
rhalp10

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore .. :(
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