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Tamura Yukari - W:Wonder Tale (TV Size)

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S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
建议而已，我也是新人XD
几个难度请用EASY NORMAL HARD INSANE来标注

easy

00:14:134 (4) - 这个地方摆好，ez不能有重叠
00:32:495 (3) - ^
00:33:806 (4) - ^
还有easy请不要使用变速

节奏的话EASY好像没什么问题，恩

normal

normal也请不要加变速.. 除了开头可以适当加下= =
00:34:462 (4) - 要叠的话请叠好
00:44:954 (5,6,1) - 是个三角吧，摆正一点
问题不大

hard
00:21:839 (6,1) - 这个中间明明有音为什么是空着的，如果你全程跟人声的话，请无视，还有很多类似这样的地方，就不一一举出了..
00:35:937 (3,4) - 这里的3可以考虑换一下位置，这样不太好看

insane
00:42:822 (2,1,2,3) - 这个地方可以考虑下别的排列方式?直直的会感觉有点僵硬?
00:55:773 (2,3,1) - ^


其他都不错呢ww加油
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
……Easy做的不错不过还是不推荐改滑条速度 Normal也是
所有diff的最后一个转盘尝试提前1/2结束
00:30:199 - 从这里开始按照鼓点下clap试试:3
Normal
00:09:631 (1) - 改成一次往返
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

S o a p wrote:

建议而已，我也是新人XD
几个难度请用EASY NORMAL HARD INSANE来标注

easy

00:14:134 (4) - 这个地方摆好，ez不能有重叠
00:32:495 (3) - ^
00:33:806 (4) - ^
还有easy请不要使用变速

节奏的话EASY好像没什么问题，恩

normal

normal也请不要加变速.. 除了开头可以适当加下= =
00:34:462 (4) - 要叠的话请叠好
00:44:954 (5,6,1) - 是个三角吧，摆正一点
问题不大

hard
00:21:839 (6,1) - 这个中间明明有音为什么是空着的，如果你全程跟人声的话，请无视，还有很多类似这样的地方，就不一一举出了..
00:35:937 (3,4) - 这里的3可以考虑换一下位置，这样不太好看

insane
00:42:822 (2,1,2,3) - 这个地方可以考虑下别的排列方式?直直的会感觉有点僵硬?
00:55:773 (2,3,1) - ^


其他都不错呢ww加油
谢谢
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

ts8zs wrote:

……Easy做的不错不过还是不推荐改滑条速度 Normal也是 已改
所有diff的最后一个转盘尝试提前1/2结束
00:30:199 - 从这里开始按照鼓点下clap试试:3 好主意我试试
Normal
00:09:631 (1) - 改成一次往返
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
先吐槽下Insane裏面ar8/sv1.8/cs4這種看起來像遠古時期map設定的設置.
如果你想ar8的話 sv建議降低到1.3到1.6之間.如果你要ar9那麼現在就可以.cs麻煩提升到4,anime歌曲裏面用cs5的比較少,因為畢竟不是鬼畜圖.還有建議找個無聲slider聲效丟到文件夾裏,hard和insane使用.
歌曲難度名字必須修改,不然bat會找你麻煩

  • Insane

    00:23:150 (11) - change to slider
    00:30:199 - add note
    00:52:003 (4) - change to slider 後面空太多了 能多塞點東西讓他變快點嗎
    01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what happend
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    如果這個是insane的話請把他做的再快點,現在這個像hard的節奏,建議可以去看看rue的dear you,總之我感覺停頓太多,kiaitime你可以把裏面紅線都塞滿.甚至藍線也塞.
  • Hard

    sv改成1.3然後重新修正

    00:21:839 (6) - change to slider
    00:32:495 - add circle
    00:36:265 (4) - 如果你是故意疊在上一個slider的尾巴的話請疊好
    00:39:216 (1) - 刪掉
    01:05:281 (9) - 改成slider
    01:27:577 (1) - Q
改完請pm我 我會試著remap一些地方給你看
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

etc wrote:

先吐槽下Insane裏面ar8/sv1.8/cs4這種看起來像遠古時期map設定的設置.
如果你想ar8的話 sv建議降低到1.3到1.6之間.如果你要ar9那麼現在就可以.cs麻煩提升到4,anime歌曲裏面用cs5的比較少,因為畢竟不是鬼畜圖.還有建議找個無聲slider聲效丟到文件夾裏,hard和insane使用.
歌曲難度名字必須修改,不然bat會找你麻煩

  • Insane

    00:23:150 (11) - change to slider Accepted
    00:30:199 - add note 虽然怪怪的不过accepted
    00:52:003 (4) - change to slider 後面空太多了 能多塞點東西讓他變快點嗎 OK
    01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what happend ?
    01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
    如果這個是insane的話請把他做的再快點,現在這個像hard的節奏,建議可以去看看rue的dear you,總之我感覺停頓太多,kiaitime你可以把裏面紅線都塞滿.甚至藍線也塞.
  • Hard

    sv改成1.3然後重新修正 我比较懒==

    00:21:839 (6) - change to slider Accepted
    00:32:495 - add circle Accepted
    00:36:265 (4) - 如果你是故意疊在上一個slider的尾巴的話請疊好 不是的 :lol:
    00:39:216 (1) - 刪掉 怪怪的
    01:05:281 (9) - 改成slider Accepted
    01:27:577 (1) - Q
Accepted

改完請pm我 我會試著remap一些地方給你看
感谢mod，kd已投
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ 615915887

Late m4m sorry ...

Chiwa Harusaki

00:29:216 (4) - delete

SPOILER

01:22:331 (2) - Add slider

01:23:642 (3) - Add slider

01:24:954 (4) - Add slider

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:09:545 (1) - At the end of the slider one tick +

SPOILER

01:30:036 (1) - It's the end of the spinner

so noisy

Looks like the same degree of difficulty. What about the difficulty of that if you delete the. The level of difficulty ..

Himeka Akishino

00:06:413 (2) - ctrl + g

00:19:708 (1) - Add to Circle

00:25:773 (3) - x208 y108 This is more good things

00:30:199 (1) - Add to Circle

Ai Fuyuumi

01:10:527 (5) - Suddenly, the player's slowness can be confusing
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ 615915887

Late m4m sorry ...

Chiwa Harusaki

00:29:216 (4) - delete Accepted

SPOILER

01:22:331 (2) - Add slider Accepted

01:23:642 (3) - Add slider Accepted

01:24:954 (4) - Add slider Accepted

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:09:545 (1) - At the end of the slider one tick + I think you are right but a previous modder told me not to :?

SPOILER

01:30:036 (1) - It's the end of the spinner Accepted
so noisy

Looks like the same degree of difficulty. What about the difficulty of that if you delete the. The level of difficulty .. deleted

Himeka Akishino

00:06:413 (2) - ctrl + g Accepted

00:19:708 (1) - Add to Circle ?

00:25:773 (3) - x208 y108 This is more good things Accepted

00:30:199 (1) - Add to Circle ?sorry my englishh is suck

Ai Fuyuumi

01:10:527 (5) - Suddenly, the player's slowness can be confusing I cant think of a better idea :?


thanks for modding
Xivaxi
133 posts
Joined November 2011
Xivaxi
Hi! From my mod queue~

[Ai - Insane]
00:28:068 (4) - x:313 y:274 to stack perfectly on the previous slider
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space these out a little so they're not overlapping
00:35:773 (2,3) - Replace these with two sliders
Pic
00:44:298 (3) - Repeat this slider? the short rest here feels a little awkward
00:50:773 (12) - Note here to match the triple in the piano
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are extremely awkward to play, nothing in the bgm lends itself to doubles here and the beats on the red ticks are being missed by the doubles. Just make them all evenly spaced on the timeline like this:
Pic
The placement on the map is fine the way it is
01:10:527 (5) - A little weird to play. Either NC this to make the SV change more obvious, or increase the slider tick rate so we can see the SV change
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above about doubles
01:21:019 (5) - Same as above sv change

[Himeka - Hard]
00:04:142 (4) - Make this a mirror of 00:02:628 (1) -> copy 1 -> ctrl h -> ctrl g -> adjust positioning
00:31:019 (4) - ctrl g? It follows the line of the previous pattern better
00:41:511 (4) - Add note here, the short rest in the vocals is slightly off time and is hard to time correctly without a note here bridging it
00:46:921 (3) - Add note here to match vocals
01:07:904 (1,2,3,4) - This square looks lopsided a little? Maybe i'm just going crazy
01:18:396 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Masuzu - Normal]
I'm not sure normal should have SV changes or distance snap changes, though I'm no expert on this subject
00:21:347 (3) - x:119 y:174 to stack on the slider
00:28:560 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These notes are not very pretty, I'd suggest a pattern like this:
Pic 6,7,1,2
Pic 3,4
With 3 stacked on 1 and 4 stacked on 2.
00:32:495 (1,2,3) - Make them like this
Pic
00:35:445 (2) - Can this stack on 00:34:462 (4) 's reverse arrow?
00:38:068 (6) - 2nd point x:222 y:194, Final point x:211 y:274
00:39:052 (7) - 2nd point x:375 y:159, Final point x:347 y:274
00:45:937 (2) - x:64 to stack on previous slider
00:54:790 (3) - y:268 to stack
01:15:118 (4) - x:389 y:194 to stack
01:26:265 (2) - 2nd point x:381 y:192 Final point x:350 y:108, to blanket better

[Chiwa - Easy]
00:10:200 (1) - 2nd point x:201 y:62, Final point x:298 y:111 - cleaner blanket
00:12:822 (3) - 1st point x:111 y:267, 2nd point x:206 y:306, 3rd point x:299 y:252 ^
00:16:757 (3) - x:292 y:193 - Cleaner triangle
00:36:429 (2) - Only adjust first point of this -> x:282 y:178 - fixes blanket a bit
00:49:544 (4) - 2nd point x:125 y:286, Final point x:84 y:200 - blankets 1 better, and makes it more distinct from 3
Rest of map is pretty nice~
Cute song and cute show~ GL!
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Xivaxi wrote:

Hi! From my mod queue~

[Ai - Insane]
00:28:068 (4) - x:313 y:274 to stack perfectly on the previous slider
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6,7) - Space these out a little so they're not overlapping
00:35:773 (2,3) - Replace these with two sliders
Pic
00:44:298 (3) - Repeat this slider? the short rest here feels a little awkward
00:50:773 (12) - Note here to match the triple in the piano
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These are extremely awkward to play, nothing in the bgm lends itself to doubles here and the beats on the red ticks are being missed by the doubles. Just make them all evenly spaced on the timeline like this:
Pic
The placement on the map is fine the way it is
01:10:527 (5) - A little weird to play. Either NC this to make the SV change more obvious, or increase the slider tick rate so we can see the SV change
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as above about doubles
01:21:019 (5) - Same as above sv change

[Himeka - Hard]
00:04:142 (4) - Make this a mirror of 00:02:628 (1) -> copy 1 -> ctrl h -> ctrl g -> adjust positioning
00:31:019 (4) - ctrl g? It follows the line of the previous pattern better
00:41:511 (4) - Add note here, the short rest in the vocals is slightly off time and is hard to time correctly without a note here bridging it
00:46:921 (3) - Add note here to match vocals
01:07:904 (1,2,3,4) - This square looks lopsided a little? Maybe i'm just going crazy
01:18:396 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Masuzu - Normal]
I'm not sure normal should have SV changes or distance snap changes, though I'm no expert on this subject
00:21:347 (3) - x:119 y:174 to stack on the slider
00:28:560 (5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - These notes are not very pretty, I'd suggest a pattern like this:
Pic 6,7,1,2
Pic 3,4
With 3 stacked on 1 and 4 stacked on 2.
00:32:495 (1,2,3) - Make them like this
Pic
00:35:445 (2) - Can this stack on 00:34:462 (4) 's reverse arrow?
00:38:068 (6) - 2nd point x:222 y:194, Final point x:211 y:274
00:39:052 (7) - 2nd point x:375 y:159, Final point x:347 y:274
00:45:937 (2) - x:64 to stack on previous slider
00:54:790 (3) - y:268 to stack
01:15:118 (4) - x:389 y:194 to stack
01:26:265 (2) - 2nd point x:381 y:192 Final point x:350 y:108, to blanket better

[Chiwa - Easy]
00:10:200 (1) - 2nd point x:201 y:62, Final point x:298 y:111 - cleaner blanket
00:12:822 (3) - 1st point x:111 y:267, 2nd point x:206 y:306, 3rd point x:299 y:252 ^
00:16:757 (3) - x:292 y:193 - Cleaner triangle
00:36:429 (2) - Only adjust first point of this -> x:282 y:178 - fixes blanket a bit
00:49:544 (4) - 2nd point x:125 y:286, Final point x:84 y:200 - blankets 1 better, and makes it more distinct from 3
Rest of map is pretty nice~
Cute song and cute show~ GL!
How perfect this mod is!
thx very much :)
etc
84 posts
Joined March 2012
etc
說好的m4m呢
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

etc wrote:

說好的m4m呢
额，忘了==晚上弄
Unsfamiliar
540 posts
Joined May 2013
Unsfamiliar
Hiya! From my queue thingo. Alright, here we go:

Chiwa Harusaki (Easy)
Seems fine. I can't really mod easy :P

Masuzu Natsukawa (Normal)
00:55:773 - Add a note here if you think it's appropriate (same with hard) for the drum hit
I don't see an other real problems with this diff

Himeka Akishino (Hard)
00:09:631 (1,1) - Some funky business going on around here. Overlapped. Move 00:09:626 (1) to 00:09:545
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - I think these are too close, given your spacing during other combos? Maybe it suits this particular part of the song but up to you.
00:37:740 - Add a note here and move the start of 00:37:740 (1) spinner 1/2 forward? Sounds better imo.
00:48:068 - Add a note here maybe. Kinda flows into the slower part
00:55:773 - I think there needs to be a note here to match the drum as in normal

Ai Fuyuumi (Insane)
00:33:642 (4) - Snap this to the start of 00:32:986 (2) slider
01:01:019 (2,1) - I think a 1/4 beat stream of some sort would be appropriate to fill in the gap between these two combos
01:21:019 (1) - I think this slider is too slow for the part. Maybe speed it up; add a reverse slider or something to match the guitar part like you do here 01:21:675 (1,2,3)
Since this is insane difficulty, I think you could get away with 1/4 beat stream from 01:26:265 (1) to 01:27:577 (1)
01:27:740 (1) - The end of this spinner conflicts with the one in hard norma and easy. Up to you but move the one here back 1/2 note, I think it sounds better as in the previous difficulties.

Overall, very nice! Feel free to look at my suggestions, disregard them if you wish. Anyway hope you found this helpful, good luck!! :D

Ciao~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Unsfamiliar wrote:

Hiya! From my queue thingo. Alright, here we go:

Chiwa Harusaki (Easy)
Seems fine. I can't really mod easy :P :D

Masuzu Natsukawa (Normal)
00:55:773 - Add a note here if you think it's appropriate (same with hard) for the drum hit accepted
I don't see an other real problems with this diff

Himeka Akishino (Hard)
00:09:631 (1,1) - Some funky business going on around here. Overlapped. Move 00:09:626 (1) to 00:09:545 accepted
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - I think these are too close, given your spacing during other combos? Maybe it suits this particular part of the song but up to you. it's not that close
00:37:740 - Add a note here and move the start of 00:37:740 (1) spinner 1/2 forward? Sounds better imo.
00:48:068 - Add a note here maybe. Kinda flows into the slower part
00:55:773 - I think there needs to be a note here to match the drum as in normal

Ai Fuyuumi (Insane)
00:33:642 (4) - Snap this to the start of 00:32:986 (2) slider
01:01:019 (2,1) - I think a 1/4 beat stream of some sort would be appropriate to fill in the gap between these two combos
01:21:019 (1) - I think this slider is too slow for the part. Maybe speed it up; add a reverse slider or something to match the guitar part like you do here 01:21:675 (1,2,3)
Since this is insane difficulty, I think you could get away with 1/4 beat stream from 01:26:265 (1) to 01:27:577 (1)
01:27:740 (1) - The end of this spinner conflicts with the one in hard norma and easy. Up to you but move the one here back 1/2 note, I think it sounds better as in the previous difficulties.

Overall, very nice! Feel free to look at my suggestions, disregard them if you wish. Anyway hope you found this helpful, good luck!! :D

Ciao~
others nearly all accepted
thanks for your mod :D
[-mii-chan-]
167 posts
Joined March 2012
[-mii-chan-]
From my queue :)

Overall
Your symmetry is good, but there are still some gliches that I found, I mentioned them in my mod below & I recommend you to fix those.
Your kiai is half-mapped, half copy & flip :) It's ok to use flips but your map is TV size, flipping half of the kiai can bore some players
Hitsounds are good :) no overdose~

Chiwa Harusaki
00:29:872 (1) - can you move this note a little downward? the spacing seems too near/not easily seen, my suggestion goes like this: http://puu.sh/3J0eP.jpg
00:31:183 (2,3,4) - move the slider 4 to the right for nicer symmetry between 3-4-5, like here: http://puu.sh/3J0lG.jpg
00:48:232 (3) - rotate this slider by -90degree? just for nicer symmetry ;)
00:50:855 (1) - remove a repeat at the end & put a note (2) there at 00:52:167 - like this: http://puu.sh/3J0B2.jpg

Masuzu Natsukawa
01:05:281 (3) - move this a little closer so that 01:04:626 (2,3,1) - are evenly spaced between each other, more symmetrical & beat-regconizing
01:13:478 (6) - remove this note? not match with the vocal :(

Himeka Akishino
no problems detected :) at least in my view

Ai Fuyuumi
00:54:462 (4) - maybe you can fix it like this for more symmetry. BEFORE & AFTER
00:58:232 - add a note at the center of the playfield, turning it into a tap 3?
01:04:626 (3) - rotate this by 10degree clockwise, selection centre for better look at the 4 sliders
01:15:118 (3) - ^

Great song~ Good luck to you getting it ranked~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

o0ohitomio0o wrote:

From my queue :)

Overall
Your symmetry is good, but there are still some gliches that I found, I mentioned them in my mod below & I recommend you to fix those.
Your kiai is half-mapped, half copy & flip :) It's ok to use flips but your map is TV size, flipping half of the kiai can bore some players
Hitsounds are good :) no overdose~

Chiwa Harusaki
00:29:872 (1) - can you move this note a little downward? the spacing seems too near/not easily seen, my suggestion goes like this: http://puu.sh/3J0eP.jpg
00:31:183 (2,3,4) - move the slider 4 to the right for nicer symmetry between 3-4-5, like here: http://puu.sh/3J0lG.jpg
00:48:232 (3) - rotate this slider by -90degree? just for nicer symmetry ;)
00:50:855 (1) - remove a repeat at the end & put a note (2) there at 00:52:167 - like this: http://puu.sh/3J0B2.jpg

Masuzu Natsukawa
01:05:281 (3) - move this a little closer so that 01:04:626 (2,3,1) - are evenly spaced between each other, more symmetrical & beat-regconizing
01:13:478 (6) - remove this note? not match with the vocal :(

Himeka Akishino
no problems detected :) at least in my view

Ai Fuyuumi
00:54:462 (4) - maybe you can fix it like this for more symmetry. BEFORE & AFTER
00:58:232 - add a note at the center of the playfield, turning it into a tap 3?
01:04:626 (3) - rotate this by 10degree clockwise, selection centre for better look at the 4 sliders
01:15:118 (3) - ^

Great song~ Good luck to you getting it ranked~
thx :D
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ 不多说了咱们开始 :3

[Insane]
00:04:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，莫名的overmap，实际上反而00:04:142 (1) - 这里可以拆成1/2。建议开头到00:08:684 - 的地方重做一下，减低滑条速度然后用1/1来下节奏，可以得到一个渐入的效果
00:11:347 (1) - 建议前移1/2并且在原滑条尾加圈（然后调整音效）。有一个渐开的跳感觉还是不错的
00:13:970 - 加note
00:15:445 (1,2,3,4) - 做好对称
00:18:068 - 去掉whistle看看
00:24:544 - 如果不介意的话可以试试加个note 当然这会影响到排列
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6) - 不是很动感 - 仅供参考
SPOILER
00:32:331 - +whistle，如果如此，00:32:495 - 改成finish，减小音量
00:32:986 (2) - ctrl+G
00:43:806 - 前面有点无聊，可以加个note
00:55:609 (1,2,3,1) - 跳起来很吃力，建议改成四方跳
01:06:265 (2) - flow有点差
SPOILER
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 私下觉得这种重复的跳有点二了 你看一下吧
01:16:429 (1,2) - 同01:06:265 (2) -
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同上
01:22:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 对称做好
01:24:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 虽然随你 不过我觉得这里增大密度最后加一个连打的串比较符合曲子的流向

[Hard]
SV1.8不是很适合Hard，建议改成SV1.6左右（虽然我都用1.3 /runs）
00:12:003 (2,3,4) - flow不太好，试试这个
SPOILER
00:17:577 - 00:17:904 - 可以加note 弄成一点小跳
00:32:822 (1) - 往右边放一些，拉远一些距离
00:44:954 (5,6,7) - 这样？
SPOILER
00:54:790 (3) - 向上平移一些，不要完全被前面的重合
01:05:281 (9) - 同上
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用ctrl+shift+D来创造完美的多边形
后面同上

[Normal]
我的建议是SV1.2 AR+1
00:02:627 (1,2) - ctrl+G
00:04:142 (4) - 放左边来比较有flow，后面的顺移到右边
00:22:822 (1) - 减速莫名
00:25:937 (3) - 最好不要有多于一次的折返
00:27:249 (4) - Normal最好不要给单个的滑条减速 这里很容易混淆
00:28:560 (5) - NC
00:50:527 (6) - 增大间距并且不要被遮挡 为后面的加速做提示
00:40:691 (2) - 折返箭头不能被遮盖
00:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个1/2都很莫名啊 原曲里不明显 不如改成1/1
00:58:724 (1) - 改成x0.8 0.5太突然了
后面的加速不适合Normal整个难度1.0其实也就足够了

[Easy]
感觉1.0有些太快了 推荐0.8 这样也可以减少与一开始的减速的速度差距（在0.8的速度下请把开头的SV设成x0.625）
有一些间距不太对 建议时时开启distance snap以及关闭grid snap来对齐
00:14:134 (4) - 这里不要有多于一次的折返 比较快的多次折返会让玩家无法反应
00:53:478 (3) - ^

就是这么多啦~ Good luck~
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Flower wrote:

Hi~ 不多说了咱们开始 :3

[Insane]
00:04:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，莫名的overmap，实际上反而00:04:142 (1) - 这里可以拆成1/2。建议开头到00:08:684 - 的地方重做一下，减低滑条速度然后用1/1来下节奏，可以得到一个渐入的效果
00:11:347 (1) - 建议前移1/2并且在原滑条尾加圈（然后调整音效）。有一个渐开的跳感觉还是不错的
00:13:970 - 加note
00:15:445 (1,2,3,4) - 做好对称
00:18:068 - 去掉whistle看看
00:24:544 - 如果不介意的话可以试试加个note 当然这会影响到排列
00:31:019 (3,4,5,6) - 不是很动感 - 仅供参考
SPOILER
00:32:331 - +whistle，如果如此，00:32:495 - 改成finish，减小音量
00:32:986 (2) - ctrl+G
00:43:806 - 前面有点无聊，可以加个note
00:55:609 (1,2,3,1) - 跳起来很吃力，建议改成四方跳
01:06:265 (2) - flow有点差
SPOILER
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 私下觉得这种重复的跳有点二了 你看一下吧
01:16:429 (1,2) - 同01:06:265 (2) -
01:17:085 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同上
01:22:331 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 对称做好
01:24:954 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 虽然随你 不过我觉得这里增大密度最后加一个连打的串比较符合曲子的流向

[Hard]
SV1.8不是很适合Hard，建议改成SV1.6左右（虽然我都用1.3 /runs）
00:12:003 (2,3,4) - flow不太好，试试这个
SPOILER
00:17:577 - 00:17:904 - 可以加note 弄成一点小跳
00:32:822 (1) - 往右边放一些，拉远一些距离
00:44:954 (5,6,7) - 这样？
SPOILER
00:54:790 (3) - 向上平移一些，不要完全被前面的重合
01:05:281 (9) - 同上
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 用ctrl+shift+D来创造完美的多边形
后面同上

[Normal]
我的建议是SV1.2 AR+1
00:02:627 (1,2) - ctrl+G
00:04:142 (4) - 放左边来比较有flow，后面的顺移到右边
00:22:822 (1) - 减速莫名
00:25:937 (3) - 最好不要有多于一次的折返
00:27:249 (4) - Normal最好不要给单个的滑条减速 这里很容易混淆
00:28:560 (5) - NC
00:50:527 (6) - 增大间距并且不要被遮挡 为后面的加速做提示
00:40:691 (2) - 折返箭头不能被遮盖
00:50:855 (1,2,3,4) - 这几个1/2都很莫名啊 原曲里不明显 不如改成1/1
00:58:724 (1) - 改成x0.8 0.5太突然了
后面的加速不适合Normal整个难度1.0其实也就足够了

[Easy]
感觉1.0有些太快了 推荐0.8 这样也可以减少与一开始的减速的速度差距（在0.8的速度下请把开头的SV设成x0.625）
有一些间距不太对 建议时时开启distance snap以及关闭grid snap来对齐
00:14:134 (4) - 这里不要有多于一次的折返 比较快的多次折返会让玩家无法反应
00:53:478 (3) - ^

就是这么多啦~ Good luck~
完全重做了ez和nm==
1PSA
119 posts
Joined November 2010
1PSA
[Chiwa Harusaki]
  1. 00:31:183 (2,3) - 2结尾和3开头好像不水平吧
  2. easy当中最好不要出现遮盖的note吧，挨得太近也不是很美观其实，比如00:14:134 (4,1) - 01:02:659 (2,4) - 01:09:216 (3,4,1) - 01:19:708 (3,1) - etc.
  3. 01:19:708 (3) - easy中最好不要太低哦
  4. 最好不要复制粘贴太多哦
  5. 真的二四白线不加音效么，加上比较好一些感觉
[Masuzu Natsukawa]
  1. 00:10:200 (1) - 这个slider有些问题吧大于一拍了
  2. 00:13:150 (2) - 如果包住00:12:167 (4) - 会不会更好
  3. 没什么了，和easy一样其实最好不要总是有些遮挡，毕竟给新手玩，不是hard，有些滑条和easy一样不太美观
[Himeka Akishino]
  1. 其实也没什么还是一样有些滑条不太美观
  2. 如果是hard，BPM又很高那么滑条其实1.3-1.6就可以了，distance开1.1-1.2，那样最美观，一般图都是这样不是么
  3. 高潮部分太简单了吧，总是每拍一个note
[Ai Fuyuumi]
  1. 00:03:385 (3,1) - 如果竖直对齐呢
  2. 00:49:216 (7,8) - 如果斜着在一条线上会更好
然后，然后就没有然后了，不错，加油 :)
以上纯是个人意见可随意忽略 :D
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
hi
我忘了mod 抱歉 = =

黑: 普通的建议
红: 不符合规则

[Ai Fuyuumi]

00:03:006 (2,3,4) - 这些slider我还是建议你用没红点的slider
00:11:347 (1) - 这个略奇怪 我建议你把它弄成1/2 note 还是 slider
00:15:445 (1) - 头部加上finish?
00:15:937 - 为什么要空呢...不好玩... 之后的两个红点也是
00:22:003 (8) - NC
00:22:659 - 为什么要空
00:26:757 (1,2) - 这DS也太大了吧...
00:30:527 (1) - 这个不用NC
00:31:101 - 为什么要改音量...巨难听..
00:39:708 (4) - 我觉得加fnish好过加clap
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看这slider 还有怎么一直重复这梗
01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 竟然复制

总结就是图有点单调 而且各种对称 不是很好

[Himeka Akishino]

00:09:872 (1,1) - 这两个不用NC吧...
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - 看起来好挤 不美
00:27:085 (1,2) - 卧槽

kiai 部分真的好单调 note好少 各种对称 感觉是懒图 ._.

[Masuzu Natsukawa]

00:10:200 (1) - 不用NC

需要一些改进...
Good Luck
Sleepy Tori
103 posts
Joined May 2013
Sleepy Tori
[general]
none

[chiwa harusaki]
wow i couldn't find a single thing wrong.
great timing and slider shape and placement :D

[masuzu natsukawa]
again, i can't find anything wrong.

[himeka akishino]
00:32:495 (6) - the overlap right here is really hard to see.try moving it slightly above the slider.
00:41:347 (3) - ^ or maybe you could change the color.it might help a little.
00:45:609 (7) - ^ :x

no further problems

[ai fuyuumi]
OH MY GOODNESS I'M IN LOVE.

I'm sorry i can't be more helpful.these maps are just so amazing.this map must be ranked and approved.
because of that, im going to shoot you a kudosu star
:D
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

mintong89 wrote:

hi
我忘了mod 抱歉 = =

黑: 普通的建议
红: 不符合规则

[Ai Fuyuumi]

00:03:006 (2,3,4) - 这些slider我还是建议你用没红点的slider
00:11:347 (1) - 这个略奇怪 我建议你把它弄成1/2 note 还是 slider
00:15:445 (1) - 头部加上finish?
00:15:937 - 为什么要空呢...不好玩... 之后的两个红点也是
00:22:003 (8) - NC
00:22:659 - 为什么要空
00:26:757 (1,2) - 这DS也太大了吧...
00:30:527 (1) - 这个不用NC
00:31:101 - 为什么要改音量...巨难听..
00:39:708 (4) - 我觉得加fnish好过加clap
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看这slider 还有怎么一直重复这梗
01:11:839 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 竟然复制

总结就是图有点单调 而且各种对称 不是很好

[Himeka Akishino]

00:09:872 (1,1) - 这两个不用NC吧...
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - 看起来好挤 不美
00:27:085 (1,2) - 卧槽

kiai 部分真的好单调 note好少 各种对称 感觉是懒图 ._.

[Masuzu Natsukawa]

00:10:200 (1) - 不用NC

需要一些改进...
Good Luck
果断考虑remap了==
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
Video Offset:

Video,2480,"ED.avi"
覆盖OSU里的同行文字啊
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow 
osu file format v12

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sjoy
1,024 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
Hi from M4M
Easy:
00:10:200 (1) - 头加个FIN吧 感觉比尾巴好
00:29:872 (1) - 没必要独立一种颜色吧
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:16:429 (1) - ^
01:21:675 (1) - ^
01:28:068 (1) - 拉到长白线把
Normal:
00:13:150 (2,4) - 叠好
00:29:216 (5,6,1,2) - 做个平行四边形比较好看
00:35:445 (2,4) - 感觉折歪了，中间那个点可以参考
00:41:675 (3,1) - 叠好
00:46:921 (3,1) - ^
00:55:281 (4,5) - 建议合并滑条
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角歪了建议用ctral+shift+d andctral+shift+s
01:18:724 (4) - 下移1像素和3平
01:27:904 (1) - 拉到长白线把
Himeka:
00:13:314 (2,3,4,5) - 全部分开摆吧
00:48:232 (4) - NC
01:07:249 (4) - 感觉角对着2比较顺
01:18:396 (1,2,1,2) - 要么去掉2 要么变滑条
Rainbow:
00:11:511 (1,4,5) - 1 4尾巴 5 头建议一直线
00:23:150 (6) - NC
00:58:560 (7) - NC
01:00:773 (1) - NC
01:28:970 (1) - 最后变成一个转盘吧 感觉HD会坑掉。

总的来说不错
祝早日RANK吧 :D
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

sjoy wrote:

Hi from M4M
Easy:
00:10:200 (1) - 头加个FIN吧 感觉比尾巴好 好主意
00:29:872 (1) - 没必要独立一种颜色吧 也是
01:11:183 (1) - ^
01:16:429 (1) - ^
01:21:675 (1) - ^
01:28:068 (1) - 拉到长白线把 人声在红线上
Normal:
00:13:150 (2,4) - 叠好 Done
00:29:216 (5,6,1,2) - 做个平行四边形比较好看 Done
00:35:445 (2,4) - 感觉折歪了，中间那个点可以参考 Done
00:41:675 (3,1) - 叠好Done
00:46:921 (3,1) - ^
00:55:281 (4,5) - 建议合并滑条？
01:09:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角歪了建议用ctral+shift+d andctral+shift+s 确实是用系统做的==
01:18:724 (4) - 下移1像素和3平 ？
01:27:904 (1) - 拉到长白线把同上
Himeka:
00:13:314 (2,3,4,5) - 全部分开摆吧 原来那样挺好的
00:48:232 (4) - NC Done
01:07:249 (4) - 感觉角对着2比较顺 Done
01:18:396 (1,2,1,2) - 要么去掉2 要么变滑条 Done


总的来说不错
祝早日RANK吧 :D
感谢mod :D
Sun Rainbow
1,382 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow 
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Fixed Some NC Problem Thanks
imariL
370 posts
Joined February 2011
imariL
M4M from my queue~

Chiwa Harusaki

Perfect!

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:37:740 (5) - NC

Himeka Akishino

Awesome.

Rainbow

00:24:790 (10) - NC
00:25:281 (1) - remove NC
00:33:642 (7) - NC
00:48:560 (2) - Add whistle at slider's finish note. You used whistle already here 00:44:298 (3)

Lovely song, Perfect map.
I can't find any wrong thing :D
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
YoshinoSakura

Lirami wrote:

M4M from my queue~

Chiwa Harusaki

Perfect!

Masuzu Natsukawa

00:37:740 (5) - NC

Himeka Akishino

Awesome.


Lovely song, Perfect map.
I can't find any wrong thing :D
thx for your star
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello! ^^ Random mod!

[Chiwa Harusaki]
00:15:445 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish. if you listen carefully, you could hear the cymbal crash in the background music.
00:25:281 (1,2,3) - Flip objects Horizontally to avoid that ugly overlap for 00:23:970 (5,2) -
00:45:609 (1) - Change whistle on the head to a finish.
00:46:921 (2,3) - Really weird flow... o3o
00:50:855 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:56:101 (1) - ^ Instead of whistle.
01:19:708 (3) - ^
01:26:265 (2) - Remove finish, doesn't fit the ending.

Looks pretty good ^^

[Masuzu Natsukawa]
00:15:445 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish.
00:29:872 (1) - ^
00:40:363 (1) - ^
00:43:642 (2) - Move lower 00:42:003 (4,2) - are slightly overlapped :S
00:45:281 (6) - Same problem as ^ move this note a bit more to the right so 00:44:298 (4,6) - is not crowded so closely together.
00:45:609 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish.
00:50:855 (1) - ^ On the head.
00:56:101 (1) - ^
01:04:626 (2) - Move slightly higher, since 01:03:642 (6,2) - are connected :S
01:09:216 (1) - Try stacking this properly under the head of 01:07:249 (3) -
01:14:134 (6,2) - ...same issue as 01:04:626 (2)
01:17:741 (3,1) - Stack properly.
01:21:019 (5) - Change the whistle to a finish.
01:27:577 (1) - Remove finish.

Looks okay, only some really small and bad overlaps here and there. :P

[Himeka Akishino]
00:15:445 (1) - Change the whistle to a finish on the head.
00:37:904 (1) - ^
00:45:609 (7) - ^
00:56:101 (1) - ^
01:01:347 - During Kai time ,your clap hitsounds have shrunken to only 1 clap per rhythm cycle. Why not keep it as this pattern? D:

01:06:593 (1) - Add finish on the head.
01:11:839 (2) - ^
01:17:085 (1) - ^
01:22:331 (1) - ^
01:27:577 (1) - Remove finish.

Lacks hitsounds in the chorus of the song, that's all, looks pretty much good imo!

[Rainbow]
00:23:642 (7) - NC?
00:35:118 (1) - Change finish on the head to a whistle,since there's no cymbal crash there.
00:58:560 (1) - Add finish to the tail.

Hope this helps~! ^^
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好像有美味的2KD 我准备占位MOD

别回复我一回复2KD就没了
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