Hey Yasora o/
Yay 2 kudo op.
[General]
[Niva's Insane]
[Shikyu's Normal]
Awesome map. I really like this song. See if you can't find a few mods and work more on the Insane/Hard, then let me know what's up in a couple of days.^^
Yay 2 kudo op.
[General]
- I think "the" should be capitalized in the source.
- 00:33:415 - It feels really strange in play when the SV does not decrease here since it's really similar in energy to 00:22:506. I want you to strongly consider decreasing the SV here to at least .75. It will feel much more fitting with the music. Of course it would return to 1.0 at 00:38:188.
- 00:32:903 (5,6,1) - More spacing seems fitting to match the spacing from the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4) star pattern. Please consider something like this:
- 00:49:778 (1) - Nazi/// I think a bit more curve is better to match the curve of the 00:50:801 (3). Example:
- 00:56:938 (6) - Curve the 6 less so that it matches the curve of the 00:57:960 (1). This way they will perfectly overlap and it will look nicer.
- 00:57:278 (7,8) - Spacing error, it's pretty noticeable. Move this stack to the left slightly to space it properly from the 00:57:960 (1).
- 01:04:608 - Feels a bit empty here imo. Try adding a note to fill the empty space. Like so maybe:
- 01:05:119 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - I found this pattern pretty uncomfortable to play. The music asks for more spacing here, try to place a pattern similar to the 00:32:222 (1,2,3,4,5) or 00:54:551 (2,3,4,5). It will play much nicer.
- 01:14:153 (7,8) - Auto stacking is ruining this blanket, try to move the 7/8 more to the right. (264,92) is nice.
- 01:15:688 (1) - Drum finish on the head is nice.
- 01:42:619 (1,2) - Try reverse these NC here so that the NC is on the slider jump to start this pattern. Seem more readable to me.
- 01:51:483 - Since the music is louder here than previous 40% sections, I suggest try 50% here.
- 01:56:256 (3) - Try curving it more to match the 2 better.
- 02:17:051 (5,6) - Make these the same slider? The different curves makes it look a bit strange.
- 02:36:824 (7) - It'll flow nicer if you give this slider a slight bend imo.
- 02:45:006 (5,1) - The 1 feels really awkward in normal spacing after the jumping before it imo. Try continuing with the jump pattern instead.
- 03:17:051 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - It's not very nice to play imo. Try listening to the music more closely. The music calls for a NC and jump at 03:17:733 and then increased spacing for the four hits. I suggest switch the NC on 03:17:563 (1,2) and then have a jump to the 03:17:733 and increase spacing to 1.5 or so like you've done before. You could try a 1/4 slider at 03:17:392 also which might play really nice. The stacked triplet under the slider end doesn't play that well imo.
- 03:37:335 (7) - Rhythm here could use work imo. This jump feels really random. Since you're following percussion with 03:35:801 (3,4,5,6), I suggest that you move the 7 1/4 to the right to be on the white tick. Maybe add a new combo to it also. From 03:38:017 to 03:39:551 I'd like you to fill the rhythm out more. The gaps are difficult to understand because they aren't obvious in the music. Try a rhythm like this:Image
Stack the 2 on the head of the to hit after playing the 1 there is nice.
[Niva's Insane]
- 00:22:506 - The fast sliders and small spacing here wasn't very fitting imo, it was difficult to understand it. I think you can make the section until 00:27:960 much nicer if you reduce the SV a bit.
- 00:38:188 (1,2,3,4) - Kind of difficult to notice these in the corner after the long spinner. Consider changing to 1/4 sliders instead.
- 00:44:324 (1,2) - I'd like it if you could reduce this jump. It's really big and surprising in the slow part here, and it makes the 00:47:222 (3) confusing in that it might be a jump since it's similar in spacing.
- 01:39:210 (1,3) - Nazi/// You could move it right a bit to fix the blanket. I noticed it in play.
- 02:55:233 (1,2,3) - Can you move the 1 and 2 closer? I feel that the jump is too surprising, especially because the sliders are in 1/6 which is surprising enough.
- 02:45:688 (3) - I'm not very fond of this straight down flow here, I find it uncomfortable after the square. Try the 3 at (220,240) for more triangle flow. Or you could try another pattern entirely. =w=
- 04:00:517 - Add a green line and reduce SV to .6 so that this slider ends at 04:01:369 where the song cuts out. If you do so, remove the whistle and reduce the volume for the slider end. This will have a much better effect to end the map than where you currently end the slider. I know it's been said before here but I want you to consider this. :>
- 00:32:733 (5) - Consider replacing with a 1/2 slider instead. I don't really like how you placed these 1/4 repeating sliders here. A 1/2 slider pointed downwards would feel better imo.
- 01:14:324 (1) - Drum finish on the end is nice.
- 01:27:278 (6) - Try two 1/4 sliders instead, I think it might be more enjoyable to play for hard players.
- 01:48:585 (4,1) - Try swapping the NC's here. I think it makes the 4 easier to understand with it being on the blue tick right after the slider and all.
- 02:05:460 (1,2,3,4) - Please try not to break the pattern here, it will confuse the player. Delete the 02:05:972 (2) and place a 1/2 slider at 02:06:142 to follow in your previous patterns is best imo. Also try to improve flow between the 02:04:778 (5,1) orz. Here's the idea:Image
Example: - 02:16:881 (3,4) - Watch your spacing here. ._.
- 02:43:983 (7,1) - More intuitive if you stack these imo
- 03:20:801 (6,1) - The gap is pretty awkward in play. It kind of breaks polarity here. It's difficult for the player to not see it as a jump. Try moving the 1 1/4 earlier to 03:21:483 and extending it by 1/4. The use a more simple rhythm after it to follow vocals. Try like:
[Shikyu's Normal]
- 00:32:051 (2) - I'd say change to 1/2 slider with a repeat to better represent the active drum transition. It will be more enjoyable to play.
- 00:52:676 (1) - Since the spinner is so short and this is the easiest diff, I'd like it if you wouldn't silence the end of it. I think it will confuse beginners since it ends so quickly. Or you could experiment with ending it later.
- 01:23:188 (1) - Try to give it more of a curve so that the with the 2 is consistent with blanket between the 2 and 3.
- 02:19:778 (3,4,1) - Same idea there. Try to adjust the blankets so the 4 is right in between the sliders, it will look much nicer.
- 03:39:551 (1) - Epic.
- 03:51:142 (1,2,3) - Careful with these sort of placements. The auto stacking is making the circles overlap a bit with the slider, I'd like it if you could move them to the right a bit to fix that.
Awesome map. I really like this song. See if you can't find a few mods and work more on the Insane/Hard, then let me know what's up in a couple of days.^^