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Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Tsuki no Inori

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Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年2月17日 at 02:03:44

Artist: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
Title: Tsuki no Inori
Source: Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags: ハヤテのごとく！ ending 福音 Fukuin kawaiwkyik Zero__wind
BPM: 117
Filesize: 8278kb
Play Time: 03:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.43 stars, 435 notes)
  2. Insane (3.34 stars, 590 notes)
  3. Zero's Normal (1.56 stars, 267 notes)
Download: Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka - Tsuki no Inori
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#11
ハヤテのごとく！ Cuties Episode 7 ED Full
Ruka <333333333333333333333333333
For rank
Normal - by Zero__wind (100%)
Hard - by me (100%)
wkyik - by me (100%)
Last edited by Rizia , edited 61 times in total.
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happy623
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Joined April 2010
happy623
Foreverends
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Joined July 2011
Foreverends
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sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
Normal
Good!
Hard
00:18:971 - add a circle?
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:03:331 - 这个音符冲淡了00:03:587 - 的人声
在这里 人声强于鼓声，不应该用circle继续加强效果。
所以说 把00:03:331 (2) - 删掉，在00:03:075 (1) -这里同样位置放上一个1/2滑条，我觉得会好得多

02:14:356 (6) - 这里的reverse箭头跑到屏幕外了 快移回来>.<

03:21:023 (4) - 这里没有像02:29:997 (5) - 音乐的停顿
所以最好将这个节奏连上:将这个4 reverse一次 可以把这个右移一点以便于靠近03:21:792 (1)
wkyik
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:02:049 (6) - 真难看....建议弄得弧度小点...要不就不要reverse了

00:08:716 (8) - NC and 00:08:972 (1) - remove NC
第一是为了提示玩家音符从二分音符变成了四分音符 因为你本身就没通过间距来提示接下来的是个三连
第二是和之前的节奏一样 长白线起NC
(如果你真的不想改的话 也务必要把00:08:203 (6,7,8,9,1) - 拿DS摆)

00:25:382 (1) - 这个note冲淡了节奏 理由和hard里第一条一样 最好把这个删了 00:24:869 (5) - 这个reverse一次

00:53:074 (4) - 出界啦

02:04:613 (4) - 这里感觉突然间距就减小了 像是被左上角了压制了一样
要我说 把这个音符放到02:04:100 (2) - 的位置上 打起来会更爽一些 体会一下ww

02:41:536 (3,4) - 这两个中间一直有一个xi的音 可以说应该是连续的
而你用两个音符把这个连续的xi的音拆掉了
把4删了 在3原处放个滑条(可以考虑放1/2的或者3/4的) 会感觉好很多

02:52:818 (5) - 该跳的时候就要跳>.<! 移到(0,300)你看如何

awesome

好图 好歌 here's your star
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=advice
Normal
Good!
Hard
00:18:971 - add a circle?
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:03:331 - 这个音符冲淡了00:03:587 - 的人声
在这里 人声强于鼓声，不应该用circle继续加强效果。
所以说 把00:03:331 (2) - 删掉，在00:03:075 (1) -这里同样位置放上一个1/2滑条，我觉得会好得多

02:14:356 (6) - 这里的reverse箭头跑到屏幕外了 快移回来>.<

03:21:023 (4) - 这里没有像02:29:997 (5) - 音乐的停顿
所以最好将这个节奏连上:将这个4 reverse一次 可以把这个右移一点以便于靠近03:21:792 (1)
wkyik
00:19:228 - 无用的绿线
00:02:049 (6) - 真难看....建议弄得弧度小点...要不就不要reverse了

00:08:716 (8) - NC and 00:08:972 (1) - remove NC
第一是为了提示玩家音符从二分音符变成了四分音符 因为你本身就没通过间距来提示接下来的是个三连
第二是和之前的节奏一样 长白线起NC
(如果你真的不想改的话 也务必要把00:08:203 (6,7,8,9,1) - 拿DS摆)

00:25:382 (1) - 这个note冲淡了节奏 理由和hard里第一条一样 最好把这个删了 00:24:869 (5) - 这个reverse一次

00:53:074 (4) - 出界啦

02:04:613 (4) - 这里感觉突然间距就减小了 像是被左上角了压制了一样
要我说 把这个音符放到02:04:100 (2) - 的位置上 打起来会更爽一些 体会一下ww 這個我想保持原樣

02:41:536 (3,4) - 这两个中间一直有一个xi的音 可以说应该是连续的
而你用两个音符把这个连续的xi的音拆掉了
把4删了 在3原处放个滑条(可以考虑放1/2的或者3/4的) 会感觉好很多

02:52:818 (5) - 该跳的时候就要跳>.<! 移到(0,300)你看如何

awesome

好图 好歌 here's your star
Thank you for your modding :D
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623
yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 家佑 :D
request via in-game

[General]
  1. BG.png 換做 jpg, 減低file size
  2. wkyik的source漏了
  3. Tags 加一下參與這圖的人吧
  4. 打開letterbox?
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 00:29:228 (3) - 左1格做nice blanket?
  2. 00:59:997 (6,1) - normal碰到血條不知道允不允許;w;
  3. 01:22:561 (4) - finish?
  4. 01:57:177 (1) - 左1格跟前面連住
  5. 03:39:997 (3) - 感覺這個的音量可以加大w 大概70%?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 一開始用reverse slider較好?
  2. 00:11:793 (1) - 包成這樣好看一點? http://puu.sh/3vDsu.jpg
  3. 00:14:998 (1) - remove whistle
  4. 00:39:484 (4) - 試著放在(3,1)的正中間
  5. 01:37:177 (6) - 感覺這個之後放一個spinner到01:40:253 完結好一點 8-)
  6. 03:11:535 (6) - NC
  7. 03:29:484 (7,8,9,10,1) - 放右一點? 因為test的時候overlap了 http://puu.sh/3vDIG.jpg
[wkyik]
  1. 囧都是finish沒下好(找死我了
  2. 00:08:716 (8) - NC, 不然很難讀ww
  3. 00:13:074 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:35:638 (1) - 開首finish
  5. 00:43:843 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:202 (7) - NC
  7. 01:00:254 (1) - 開頭finish
  8. 01:06:407 (5) - 聽著覺得reverse不太對音, 換個慢的sv拉到01:07:433 如何?
  9. 01:12:049 (8) - finish?
  10. 01:22:561 (6) - NC
  11. 01:33:074 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:37:177 (4) - 同hard
  13. 01:53:587 (1) - finish
  14. 02:09:997 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 02:16:151 (5) - NC + finish
  16. 02:26:407 (1) - 開頭finish
  17. 02:32:305 (1) - ^
  18. 02:34:613 (3) - ^
  19. 03:05:382 (3) - ^
  20. 03:19:484 (1) - ^
  21. 03:20:510 (3) - ^
  22. 03:29:997 (1) - ^
  23. 03:34:100 (5) - ^
  24. 03:40:125 (1) - 可以換成normal的finish
好圖(Y)(Y)(Y) star✧
rank加油 8-) 8-) 8-)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

happy623 wrote:

yooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo 家佑 :D
request via in-game

[General]
  1. BG.png 換做 jpg, 減低file size
  2. wkyik的source漏了
  3. Tags 加一下參與這圖的人吧
  4. 打開letterbox?
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 00:29:228 (3) - 左1格做nice blanket?
  2. 00:59:997 (6,1) - normal碰到血條不知道允不允許;w;
  3. 01:22:561 (4) - finish?
  4. 01:57:177 (1) - 左1格跟前面連住
  5. 03:39:997 (3) - 感覺這個的音量可以加大w 大概70%?
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 一開始用reverse slider較好?
  2. 00:11:793 (1) - 包成這樣好看一點? http://puu.sh/3vDsu.jpg
  3. 00:14:998 (1) - remove whistle
  4. 00:39:484 (4) - 試著放在(3,1)的正中間
  5. 01:37:177 (6) - 感覺這個之後放一個spinner到01:40:253 完結好一點 8-) 給人家多些休息時間嘛Xdd
  6. 03:11:535 (6) - NC
  7. 03:29:484 (7,8,9,10,1) - 放右一點? 因為test的時候overlap了 http://puu.sh/3vDIG.jpg
[wkyik]
  1. 囧都是finish沒下好(找死我了
  2. 00:08:716 (8) - NC, 不然很難讀ww
  3. 00:13:074 (6) - NC?
  4. 00:35:638 (1) - 開首finish
  5. 00:43:843 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:202 (7) - NC
  7. 01:00:254 (1) - 開頭finish
  8. 01:06:407 (5) - 聽著覺得reverse不太對音, 換個慢的sv拉到01:07:433 如何?
  9. 01:12:049 (8) - finish?
  10. 01:22:561 (6) - NC
  11. 01:33:074 (1) - 開頭finish
  12. 01:37:177 (4) - 同hard 同hard
  13. 01:53:587 (1) - finish
  14. 02:09:997 (1) - 開頭finish
  15. 02:16:151 (5) - NC + finish
  16. 02:26:407 (1) - 開頭finish
  17. 02:32:305 (1) - ^
  18. 02:34:613 (3) - ^
  19. 03:05:382 (3) - ^
  20. 03:19:484 (1) - ^
  21. 03:20:510 (3) - ^
  22. 03:29:997 (1) - ^
  23. 03:34:100 (5) - ^
  24. 03:40:125 (1) - 可以換成normal的finish
好圖(Y)(Y)(Y) star✧
rank加油 8-) 8-) 8-)
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
@623 : All fixed, thx
code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tsuki no inori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no inori
TitleUnicode:月の祈り
Artist:Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku!  Cuties
Tags:Zero__wind NewibornCLivee Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:270013
BeatmapSetID:99611

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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216,360,56151,6,0,P|256:320|264:268,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,216,56920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,272,57433,2,0,P|124:284|108:284,2,55,0|0|0,0:0|3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,220,58202,2,0,P|180:158|152:120,1,110,0|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
104,100,58971,2,0,P|51:69|37:20,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,2:0:0:0:
148,20,59997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,20,60253,6,0,L|253:56,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,32,61023,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,4,61535,2,0,P|414:36|408:64,1,55,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,112,62048,2,0,P|392:196|444:252,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,63330,2,0,P|352:332|312:328,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,220,64869,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,220,65125,6,0,P|236:252|184:252,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,216,65894,2,0,P|116:164|116:112,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,68971,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69228,2,0,P|296:232|308:288,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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56,176,72305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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444,232,121535,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,264,123330,2,0,P|196:308|152:320,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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184,220,142305,6,0,P|120:228|76:208,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,143074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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412,108,147433,6,0,P|440:160|440:212,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,148,151023,2,0,L|132:172,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,152048,2,0,L|292:108,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,155382,2,0,P|200:224|152:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,156151,2,0,L|48:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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144,20,158202,2,0,L|192:48,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,158715,6,0,P|296:72|332:40,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,32,159484,2,0,P|424:64|484:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,126,160253,2,0,L|464:160,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,161023,2,0,L|450:298,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,161535,2,0,P|344:316|312:280,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,162305,2,0,L|400:256,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,328,164612,2,0,P|80:348|12:304,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,252,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,165894,2,0,P|40:160|72:136,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,188,192818,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193074,2,0,P|200:192|157:221,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,204,194612,2,0,P|36:132|44:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,48,195382,2,0,P|144:36|184:44,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,196151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,172,196664,2,0,L|200:208,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,197433,6,0,P|280:276|304:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Mio_chan
172 posts
Joined July 2010
Mio_chan
[General]
offset -32
disable countdown 和 letterbox during breaks?

[wkyik]
最前面的音量較小一點...?因為音樂比較靜

00:39:196 (5) - 加個小JUMP?
00:48:427 (2) - spacing有點怪，因為看起來像1/2
01:37:273 - 加spinner? 01:40:478 - 完
01:51:504 (7) - NC
02:04:325 (3,4) - 這兩個我覺得大spacing會較好，跟 (2,3)一樣
02:32:273 (1) - delete NC?
02:34:581 (3) - NC?
02:50:479 (4) - slider用曲的?
02:52:786 (5) - 2.0x?
03:21:761 (3) - NC?
03:36:889 (1) - 尾部不好看...圓滑點會更好

[Hard]
一開始音量跟insane一樣
OD + 1?

00:45:382 (4) - 突然2x DS有點怪...1.5x?
01:48:971 (5) - 直slider? 因為 (2) 是直的
02:07:433 (4) - ^ 因為(1,2,3)都是直的
02:10:766 (3) - 弧度可以大多一點點
02:14:356 (6) - 指向相反方向? 因為overlap了
02:42:818 (1,2,3) - 改成這樣? 因為 (3) overlap了
SPOILER
02:58:971 (1) - remove NC?

[Normal]
AR - 1?
01:45:894 (1,2) - 距離spinner太近了...在 01:46:407 才開始?
02:12:818 (4,1) - NC放在02:12:818 (4) - ?
02:20:510 (4) - 指向第2個方向?
02:32:048 (7) - 放在約 x:32 y:292?
02:32:561 (1) - 在 02:34:100 完?
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Mio_chan wrote:

[General]
offset -32
disable countdown 和 letterbox during breaks?

[wkyik]
最前面的音量較小一點...?因為音樂比較靜

00:39:196 (5) - 加個小JUMP? 不了
00:48:427 (2) - spacing有點怪，因為看起來像1/2 Fixed
01:37:273 - 加spinner? 01:40:478 - 完 理由與上個mod一樣
01:51:504 (7) - NC 歌詞未完
02:04:325 (3,4) - 這兩個我覺得大spacing會較好，跟 (2,3)一樣 這個我想保持原樣
02:32:273 (1) - delete NC? 小Bug,,因為唔知點解變左NC係02:31:536 (8) -
02:34:581 (3) - NC?
02:50:479 (4) - slider用曲的? 剛剛把變成直02:49:997 (3) -
02:52:786 (5) - 2.0x?
03:21:761 (3) - NC?
03:36:889 (1) - 尾部不好看...圓滑點會更好

[Hard]
一開始音量跟insane一樣
OD + 1?

00:45:382 (4) - 突然2x DS有點怪...1.5x?
01:48:971 (5) - 直slider? 因為 (2) 是直的 與01:49:484 (1) - 對稱
02:07:433 (4) - ^ 因為(1,2,3)都是直的 我想做一個1,4曲與2,3直的
02:10:766 (3) - 弧度可以大多一點點
02:14:356 (6) - 指向相反方向? 因為overlap了
02:42:818 (1,2,3) - 改成這樣? 因為 (3) overlap了
SPOILER
02:58:971 (1) - remove NC?
Thx
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
一根红线767不就行了……要是不喜欢红线前有note可以用负数啊？算了不清楚你去问别人……
背景怎么了……？不是蛮好的么
[wkyik（话说这啥啊,能解释下么:3）]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:11:150
Object's end is not snapped! 00:14:355
00:01:280 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873002
00:09:484 (4) - blanket:3
00:11:792 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873010 5叠在下一个NC的4上面
00:13:843 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873013
00:25:638 (6) - NC
00:25:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873027
>00:27:433 (1,2) - exchange
01:08:459 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873032
01:09:997 (6) - Blanket
01:15:382 (6) - NC
01:20:510 (1) - remove 3rd point,move down new 3rd one（啊嘞……吧第三个点去掉然后新的第三个点往下拖）
01:22:561 (6) - NC
01:32:305 (9) - NC
01:34:869 (6) - ……这种滑条4个点就够了，多了没拉好反而不好看
01:51:279 (6) - NC
算了不NC了……以下只给出梗和flow的建议
03:09:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 突然就鬼畜了什么情况
03:38:972 (7) - 终于见到一个拉好的了= =
[Hard]
00:02:049 (4) - Remove slider whistle
02:05:382 (4) - 改成3返？
[0's Normal]
Seems good（单个note有点难抓啊= =）
[Oni]
00:11:279 (39,40,41) - kkd
00:43:330 (150,151,152,153,154) - kkDkk
01:09:997 (12,13,14,15,16) - kkDDk
01:14:356 (35) - k
01:31:279 (121) - k
01:33:587 (134,135,136,137) - k ddd change to kk dd
01:37:048 - k
02:25:125 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - dkddkkdkd
02:26:920 (55,56,57,58) - kk kd
02:43:330 (145,146,147,148) - kdk d
03:33:330 (365) - k
03:40:253 - 加个滑条？（什么馊主意）
[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N，不要用自定义
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove
03:07:689 (281,282) - del
03:09:869 (288) - cut
03:24:356 (333) - k
03:35:894 (371) - k
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

ts8zs wrote:

一根红线767不就行了……要是不喜欢红线前有note可以用负数啊？算了不清楚你去问别人……
背景怎么了……？不是蛮好的么
[wkyik（话说这啥啊,能解释下么:3）]
Object's end is not snapped! 00:11:150 不明白啊...下面同上
Object's end is not snapped! 00:14:355
00:01:280 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873002
00:09:484 (4) - blanket:3
00:11:792 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873010 5叠在下一个NC的4上面
00:13:843 (4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873013
00:25:638 (6) - NC
00:25:638 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873027
>00:27:433 (1,2) - exchange
01:08:459 (3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/873032
01:09:997 (6) - Blanket
01:15:382 (6) - NC
01:20:510 (1) - remove 3rd point,move down new 3rd one（啊嘞……吧第三个点去掉然后新的第三个点往下拖）
01:22:561 (6) - NC
01:32:305 (9) - NC
01:34:869 (6) - ……这种滑条4个点就够了，多了没拉好反而不好看
01:51:279 (6) - NC
算了不NC了……以下只给出梗和flow的建议
03:09:741 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 突然就鬼畜了什么情况
03:38:972 (7) - 终于见到一个拉好的了= =
[Hard]
00:02:049 (4) - Remove slider whistle
02:05:382 (4) - 改成3返？
除了有注明的那個其他改了
thank your modding
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
就是AImod啦……滑条往前拉一下往后拉一下就行……unrankable来着:3
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

ts8zs wrote:

就是AImod啦……滑条往前拉一下往后拉一下就行……unrankable来着:3
Done!
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

ts8zs wrote:

[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N，不要用自定义 fixed
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d fixed
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk 264比263高音呢@@"維持原狀
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd fixed
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove fixed
03:07:689 (281,282) - del fixed
03:09:869 (288) - cut fixed
03:24:356 (333) - k fixed
03:35:894 (371) - k fixed
感謝mod~
更新: 點我 :3
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

ts8zs wrote:

[Muzu]
这奇葩的clap……音效换成默认N，不要用自定义 fixed
00:02:562 (9) - k
00:07:177 (22,23,24) - kdd
00:48:715 - d fixed
00:51:792 (113) - k
01:37:689 (263,264) - kd or kk 264比263高音呢@@"維持原狀
好像被催眠了>A<
02:36:920 (171,172,173) - dkd fixed
03:03:074 (270) - k
03:05:638 (275,276) - remove fixed
03:07:689 (281,282) - del fixed
03:09:869 (288) - cut fixed
03:24:356 (333) - k fixed
03:35:894 (371) - k fixed
感謝mod~
更新: 點我 :3
updated
-xNaCLx-
363 posts
Joined April 2012
-xNaCLx-

ts8zs wrote:

[Oni]
00:11:279 (39,40,41) - kkd nope,did not fit the pitch
00:43:330 (150,151,152,153,154) - kkDkk nope
01:09:997 (12,13,14,15,16) - kkDDk did not see the point of adding the second D
01:14:356 (35) - k nope
01:31:279 (121) - k nope
01:33:587 (134,135,136,137) - k ddd change to kk dd nope
01:37:048 - k no.fits the diff. flow better
02:25:125 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - dkddkkdkd why
02:26:920 (55,56,57,58) - kk kd nope
02:43:330 (145,146,147,148) - kdk d nope
03:33:330 (365) - k nope, did not fit
03:40:253 - 加个滑条？（什么馊主意）nope...i would rather keep it empty
thanks for mod. since most of them are sthing related to my modding style but not major problem, i refuse to change.
taiko_maniac1811
1,060 posts
Joined December 2010
taiko_maniac1811
Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

    00:13:075 (40) - delete?
    00:36:407 (52,53) - dd?
    00:36:664 (54) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:202 (59) - k?
    00:38:587 (61) - delete?
    00:40:638 (69) - d?
    00:40:766 (70) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:50:894 (109) - d?
    00:52:305 (115) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:54:997 (124) - d?
    00:59:100 (139) - ^
    01:08:971 (171) - k?
    01:10:382 (178,179) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:17:561 (200) - d?
    01:43:330 (1) - end this spinner at 01:44:612
    01:58:587 (44) - d?
    02:08:843 (82) - ^
    02:18:715 (111) - k?
    02:27:305 (142) - d?
    02:27:433 (143) - move this to 02:27:561
    02:58:074 (249) - delete?

    [NC's Taiko Oni]

    00:09:367 (31) - delete?
    00:11::023 (37,38) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:14:485 (51) - delete?
    00:22:305 (65) - k? have piano sound here
    00:36:664 (114) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:330 (122) - delete?
    00:40:766 (136) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:42:433 (144) - delete?
    00:44:869 (157) - move this to 00:44:997
    00:46:535 (165) - delete?
    00:48:971 (179) - move this to 00:49:100
    01:06:023 (266,267,268) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:42:689 (8) - delete?
    01:47:433 (23) - move this to 01:47:561
    01:51:535 (42) - move this to 01:51:664
    01:56:279 (65) - delete?
    02:14:484 (159) - ^
    02:15:766 (166,167,168) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    02:40:510 (128) - k? follows the vocal
    02:55:510 (189) - move this to 02:55:766
    02:55:894 (191) - move this to 02:56:023
    03:25:125 (314) - k?
    03:33:202 (364) - delete?

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
Hanabi
Hanabi
Hi from my queue

[Hard]
00:42:818 (8) - it would be nice
image
01:04:612 (3) - change into circles
01:28:459 (3) -
imake
03:20:894 (3) - it's very hard to hit circle on the blue line..remove it

[Insane]
perfect!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

[ Sana ] wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Hard]
00:42:818 (8) - it would be nice Not fix because i think after fix it will more harder
image
01:04:612 (3) - change into circles fixed
01:28:459 (3) - fixed
imake
03:20:894 (3) - it's very hard to hit circle on the blue line..remove it fixed

[Insane]
perfect!
thanks for your modding
Rotte
582 posts
Joined October 2011
Rotte
Hi~ From my queue

[General]


    1. Fine.

    ---------------------------------------------------------

    [Zero's Normal]


    • Useless Green line
      1. Fine.


      Rhythm

    • 00:47:433 (5,1) - 1是不是有点高？
    • 01:02:048 (4) - 往左挪点吧，flow貌似不在一条线
    • 01:15:382 (5) - 往下
    • 01:20:510 (1,2,3) - 会不会难读了？
    • 02:38:202 (5,1) - 交换NC试试
    • 02:43:843 (1,2) - 好 丑 啊 ！！！

Sound Effect

00:11:280 (5) - 红线上放whistle貌似好些
00:14:869 (3) - 一个finish足够了，clap就画蛇添足了
02:26:151 - 试试换成clap貌似带感而且合曲


---------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

  • Useless Green line
    1. 02:16:664 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么
  • 00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
  • 00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
  • 00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着，但是还是要说这里最好别空
  • 00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢？如果是故意的，就算了，如果是blanket的话，建议包好看些
  • 00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
  • 00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
  • 01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ，咱美化了下
    IMG
    　　
    CODE
    120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
    200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
    280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  • 01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
  • 01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
  • 01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
  • 02:10:766 (3) - 同上面，弯的好丑
  • 03:08:715 (3) - NC
  • 03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
  • 03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
  • 02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
  • 03:12:818 - 不能无视啊

Sound Effect

00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线，音效，渐进即可00:35:638 - Finish02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效


--------------------------------------------------------

[wkyik]


  • Useless Green line
    1. 00:18:972 -
      00:35:638 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开，整个移动stream太快，后面的1.0体现不出来，然后导致结构松散
  • 00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的，但是这儿的移动却是一个直线，没有能够体现出节奏的变化
  • 00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音，建议用个小jump
  • 00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪，读起来太过麻烦，不适合这儿，因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
  • 00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
  • 00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试，clap如果不好听就换个音效，至少感觉这儿应该加音效
  • 00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
  • 00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了，打起来也不舒服
  • 00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
  • 00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
  • 00:30:895 (3) - 不建议
  • 00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊，但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
  • 01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
  • 01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余，或者直接扔到5进行stack
  • 01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
  • 01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
  • 01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
  • 01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
  • 01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来？
  • 01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试？
  • 01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话，这儿请交换NC，01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
  • 02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
  • 02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些？
  • 02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
  • 02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么
  • 02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点，怎么说呢，估计会被挑
  • 02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
  • 02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试？
  • 02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4
  • 02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此，code下放
    code
    72,144,164613,6,0,P|156:120|176:36,1,180
    180,64,165254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    192,88,165382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    284,208,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  • 02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向
  • 03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何？
  • 03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗？
  • 03:11:535 (4) - NC？
  • 03:12:818 - 怎么会空着？很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
  • 03:38:972 (7) - slider丑



Sound Effect

02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢01:33:074 - Finish？


----------------------------------------------------------------

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Hi~ From my queue

[General]


[list][notice][*]Fine.[/notice][/list]


---------------------------------------------------------

[Zero's Normal]


[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]Fine.[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:47:433 (5,1) - 1是不是有点高？
[*]01:02:048 (4) - 往左挪点吧，flow貌似不在一条线
[*]01:15:382 (5) - 往下
[*]01:20:510 (1,2,3) - 会不会难读了？
[*]02:38:202 (5,1) - 交换NC试试
[*]02:43:843 (1,2) - 好   丑    啊    ！！！[/notice]


[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]00:11:280 (5) - 红线上放whistle貌似好些
00:14:869 (3) - 一个finish足够了，clap就画蛇添足了
02:26:151 - 试试换成clap貌似带感而且合曲[/list][/notice]


---------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]02:16:664 -[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么
[*]00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
[*]00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
[*]00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着，但是还是要说这里最好别空
[*]00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢？如果是故意的，就算了，如果是blanket的话，建议包好看些
[*]00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
[*]00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
[*]01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
[*]01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ，咱美化了下
[box=IMG][img]http://puu.sh/3IOmo.jpg[/img]　　[img]http://puu.sh/3IOmG.jpg[/img][/box]
[box=CODE][code]120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:[/code][/box]
[*]01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
[*]01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
[*]01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
[*]01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
[*]02:10:766 (3) - 同上面，弯的好丑
[*]03:08:715 (3) - NC
[*]03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
[*]03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
[*]02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
[*]03:12:818 - 不能无视啊[/notice]


[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线，音效，渐进即可
[*]00:35:638 - Finish
[*]02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效[/list][/notice]


--------------------------------------------------------

[wkyik]


[list][notice][color=#FF4000][b]Useless Green line[/b][/color]


[*]00:18:972 - 
00:35:638 -[/notice]


[notice][color=#FF80FF][b]Rhythm[/b][/color]


[*]00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开，整个移动stream太快，后面的1.0体现不出来，然后导致结构松散
[*]00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的，但是这儿的移动却是一个直线，没有能够体现出节奏的变化
[*]00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音，建议用个小jump
[*]00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪，读起来太过麻烦，不适合这儿，因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
[*]00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
[*]00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试，clap如果不好听就换个音效，至少感觉这儿应该加音效
[*]00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
[*]00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了，打起来也不舒服
[*]00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
[*]00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
[*]00:30:895 (3) - 不建议
[*]00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊，但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
[*]01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
[*]01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余，或者直接扔到5进行stack
[*]01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
[*]01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
[*]01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
[*]01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
[*]01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来？
[*]01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试？
[*]01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话，这儿请交换NC，01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
[*]02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
[*]02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些？
[*]02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
[*]02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么
[*]02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点，怎么说呢，估计会被挑
[*]02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
[*]02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试？
[*]02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4
[*]02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此，code下放  [box=][img]http://puu.sh/3ICXg.jpg[/img][/box]
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436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:[/code][/box]
[*]02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向
[*]03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何？
[*]03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗？
[*]03:11:535 (4) - NC？
[*]03:12:818 - 怎么会空着？很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
[*]03:38:972 (7) - slider丑[/notice]




[notice][b][color=#0080FF]Sound Effect[/color][/b]


[*]02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢
[*]01:33:074 - Finish？[/list][/notice]
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
为什么小猫大人的mod不能回复 太腻害了
slider只有个往左的没改 音效就去掉了个clap
谢谢小猫大人
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Tsuki no inori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
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GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no inori
TitleUnicode:月の祈り
Artist:Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku!  Cuties
Tags:Zero__wind NewibornCLivee Nardoxyribonucleic
BeatmapID:270013
BeatmapSetID:99611

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
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444,232,121792,6,0,P|424:296|392:328,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,328,122561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,264,123074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,264,123330,2,0,P|196:308|152:320,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,320,124100,2,0,L|52:352,2,55,0|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,125638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,125894,6,0,P|104:100|144:64,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,20,126664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,60,127177,2,0,L|372:104,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,140,127946,2,0,P|416:204|396:248,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,272,128715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,316,129741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,316,129997,6,0,P|176:352|228:360,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,324,130766,2,0,L|212:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,192,131535,2,0,L|116:212,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,20,132818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,20,133074,6,0,P|192:16|148:32,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,220,134869,2,0,P|380:232|436:224,1,110
472,184,135638,2,0,P|484:128|476:72,1,110,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136407,12,4,138202,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138715,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138971,2,0,P|312:192|364:168,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,139741,2,0,L|348:80,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,68,140510,2,0,P|268:52|293:47,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,141792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142048,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,142305,6,0,P|120:228|76:208,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,168,143074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,64,143587,2,0,L|64:32,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,16,144100,2,0,P|152:64|148:112,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,144869,2,0,L|236:180,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145894,2,0,L|324:308,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,147433,6,0,P|440:160|440:212,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,256,148202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,360,148715,2,0,L|320:380,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,380,149228,2,0,L|208:372,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,150253,2,0,P|216:248|212:192,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,148,151023,2,0,L|132:172,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,60,152048,2,0,L|292:108,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152561,12,4,154612,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155125,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,155382,2,0,P|200:224|152:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,204,156151,2,0,L|48:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,128,156920,2,0,L|66:98,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,20,158202,2,0,L|192:48,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,158715,6,0,P|296:72|332:40,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,32,159484,2,0,P|424:64|484:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,126,160253,2,0,L|464:160,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,161023,2,0,L|450:298,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,328,161535,2,0,P|344:316|312:280,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,236,162305,2,0,L|400:256,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,212,163843,6,0,P|161:243|172:300,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,352,164612,2,0,P|74:359|13:306,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,252,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,165894,2,0,P|40:160|72:136,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,166920,12,0,169997,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181279,12,0,183074,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183330,12,4,185382,0:0:0:0:
176,124,186664,6,12,P|136:96|116:60,2,82.5
354,156,188715,6,12,P|399:136|440:136,2,82.5
237,295,190766,6,12,P|232:343|211:379,2,82.5
256,188,192048,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192561,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,192818,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,188,193074,2,0,P|200:192|157:221,1,110,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,308,194100,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,204,194612,2,0,P|36:132|44:92,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,48,195382,2,0,P|144:36|184:44,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,196151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,172,196664,2,0,L|200:208,1,55,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,197433,6,0,P|280:276|304:228,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,198202,2,0,L|408:240,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,199228,2,0,L|325:54,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199741,12,4,201792,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202305,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,202561,2,0,P|284:244|276:296,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,203330,2,0,L|184:320,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,272,204100,2,0,L|76:325,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,112,205894,6,0,P|112:112|160:87,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,59,206664,2,0,P|235:39|299:40,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,207433,2,0,L|364:148,1,55,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,228,208202,2,0,L|279:178,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,136,208715,2,0,P|184:132|140:156,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,208,209484,2,0,L|208:240,2,55,8|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,244,210510,5,8,0:0:0:0:
128,328,211023,2,0,P|104:344|77:353,2,55,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,211792,2,0,P|248:276|316:320,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,344,212818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,312,213074,2,0,P|420:264|404:228,2,82.5,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,214100,12,0,217177,0:0:0:0:
256,192,217689,6,0,L|300:228,2,55,2|4|4,0:0|3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
92,176,218971,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,48,219997,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,220253,12,4,224356,1:0:0:0:
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia
[Hard]

  • Useless Green line
    1. 02:16:664 -


    Rhythm

  • 00:04:357 (4,2,3) - 遮住没事儿么 時間相隔得遠,,我覺得沒問題
  • 00:11:793 (1) - blanket没弄好呢
  • 00:22:818 (7) - 试试blanket5
  • 00:24:869 - 虽说这里咱知道你想空着，但是还是要说这里最好别空 這裡依然我想空著,,
  • 00:31:535 (1,2) - 怎么评价呢？如果是故意的，就算了，如果是blanket的话，建议包好看些
  • 00:40:510 (3) - 后半部分弯的好难看啊
  • 00:52:305 (4) - 和前面遮的好难看
  • 01:04:612 (3,4) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:03:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 1做的有点丑 ，咱美化了下
    IMG
    　　
    CODE
    120,40,63330,6,0,P|72:84|68:140,2,120
    200,56,64356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    184,136,64612,2,0,L|140:116,2,40,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    232,200,65382,2,0,P|256:172|260:128,1,80
    280,52,65894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    356,72,66151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    336,148,66407,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  • 01:06:407 (1) - 去掉NC
  • 01:20:253 - 即便觉得跟vocal这里空着也不是很好
  • 01:28:459 (3,2) - 遮挡啊遮挡
  • 01:33:074 (1) - NC去掉吧
  • 02:10:766 (3) - 同上面，弯的好丑
  • 03:08:715 (3) - NC
  • 03:10:766 (5) - NC吧
  • 03:36:407 (5,6) - 遮住了
  • 02:48:459 (4,6) - 遮住了
  • 03:12:818 - 不能无视啊

Sound Effect

00:34:612 (1,2) - 绿线，音效，渐进即可00:35:638 - Finish02:34:100 (8,9) - 个人觉得每个四个地方都应该添加一个音效


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[wkyik]


  • Useless Green line
    1. 00:18:972 -
      00:35:638 - 這要轉用s:c1


    Rhythm

  • 00:00:511 (1,2,3) - 这里刚开始给咱的感觉就是太开，整个移动stream太快，后面的1.0体现不出来，然后导致结构松散
  • 00:00:767 (3,4,5) - 这儿按照节奏的话应该是有所起伏的，但是这儿的移动却是一个直线，没有能够体现出节奏的变化
  • 00:05:382 (2,3) - 很明显3是个重音，建议用个小jump
  • 00:08:203 (6,7,1,2,3) - 这个梗很奇怪，读起来太过麻烦，不适合这儿，因为节奏不同而ds未表现出来。
  • 00:12:561 (5) - 再逆时针旋转些
  • 00:17:433 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这串听起来有点怪 00:14:997 (1) - 试试这儿加个finish 00:18:459 - 和 00:18:715 (5,6) - 加上clap试试，clap如果不好听就换个音效，至少感觉这儿应该加音效
  • 00:19:228 (1) - Finish声音加大些
  • 00:21:407 (5) - 这个加note太奇怪了，打起来也不舒服
  • 00:25:766 (2) - 和上面一样
  • 00:28:843 (5) - 不建议
  • 00:30:895 (3) - 不建议 這個想依舊
  • 00:51:023 (4,5,6,7) - 音效确实很不错啊，但是这儿用个jump显然会更好
  • 01:04:356 (5,6,7) - 这里反而觉得jump不好了
  • 01:06:279 (4) - 有点多余，或者直接扔到5进行stack
  • 01:16:664 (1) - 3/4slider试试
  • 01:21:279 (3,4) - 这个应该用个jump吧...
  • 01:24:356 (5,6,7,8,1) - 像这种stream就是用的相对比较好了
  • 01:32:818 (4,1) - 这种梗一般都是jump结束了会用用吧? 也许前面应该是个jump?
  • 01:37:048 (3,4) - 尝试重合起来？
  • 01:48:972 (6) - 换个方向试试？
  • 01:48:972 (6,1) - 如果跟歌词的话，这儿请交换NC，01:51:279 (6) - 同时这里也NC。如果跟节奏 01:51:536 (7) - 请NC这个地方
  • 02:02:946 (5) - 放到 02:03:202 - 试试
  • 02:09:741 (4,5,1) - space是不是太散了些？
  • 02:11:279 (5,6) - 这个组合起来有些不好看啊...
  • 02:13:587 (3) - 和前面的8遮起来没关系么 對於打圖來說沒太大問題
  • 02:15:895 (3,4,1,2,3) - 这个梗有点，怎么说呢，估计会被挑
  • 02:21:023 (3) - 挪到208|280试试
  • 02:39:100 (2) - 去掉试试？
  • 02:42:818 (1) - 试试3/4 不了,,好難做
  • 02:44:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 如此如此，code下放
    code
    72,144,164613,6,0,P|156:120|176:36,1,180
    180,64,165254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    192,88,165382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    284,208,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    436,200,165895,2,0,P|452:144|420:64,1,135,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  • 02:50:510 (4) - 换个方向 我覺得不換比較好看
  • 03:00:766 (7,8,1) - jump如何？
  • 03:03:330 (1) - 可以再弯的圆一点吗？
  • 03:11:535 (4) - NC？
  • 03:12:818 - 怎么会空着？很明显这里还应该有个beat啊
  • 03:38:972 (7) - slider丑



Sound Effect

02:38:715 (1) - 开头的finish呢 這裡聽不出有聲01:33:074 - Finish？
謝小貓 :DDDD
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [Nardo's Taiko Muzukashii]

    00:13:075 (40) - delete? fixed
    00:36:407 (52,53) - dd? fixed
    00:36:664 (54) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo fixed
    00:38:202 (59) - k? fixed
    00:38:587 (61) - delete? fixed
    00:40:638 (69) - d?
    00:40:766 (70) - move this to 00:40:894 fixed
    00:50:894 (109) - d? fixed
    00:52:305 (115) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:54:997 (124) - d? fixed
    00:59:100 (139) - ^ fixed
    01:08:971 (171) - k? fixed
    01:10:382 (178,179) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:17:561 (200) - d? fixed
    01:43:330 (1) - end this spinner at 01:44:612 fixed
    01:58:587 (44) - d? fixed
    02:08:843 (82) - ^ fixed
    02:18:715 (111) - k? fixed
    02:27:305 (142) - d? fixed
    02:27:433 (143) - move this to 02:27:561 fixed
    02:58:074 (249) - delete? fixed

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
Fixed most of them~
Thanks 1811 for the mod~ :)
Updated Version: Here
-xNaCLx-
363 posts
Joined April 2012
-xNaCLx-

taiko_maniac1811 wrote:

Taiko mod as requested from Malaysian Taiko Queue :3

MOD
  • [NC's Taiko Oni]

    00:09:367 (31) - delete?
    00:11::023 (37,38) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    00:14:485 (51) - delete?
    00:22:305 (65) - k? have piano sound here
    00:36:664 (114) - move this to 00:36:792 plays better imo
    00:38:330 (122) - delete?
    00:40:766 (136) - move this to 00:40:894
    00:42:433 (144) - delete?
    00:44:869 (157) - move this to 00:44:997
    00:46:535 (165) - delete?
    00:48:971 (179) - move this to 00:49:100
    01:06:023 (266,267,268) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    01:42:689 (8) - delete?
    01:47:433 (23) - move this to 01:47:561
    01:51:535 (42) - move this to 01:51:664
    01:56:279 (65) - delete?
    02:14:484 (159) - ^
    02:15:766 (166,167,168) - delete? have a little break here sounds nice
    02:40:510 (128) - k? follows the vocal
    02:55:510 (189) - move this to 02:55:766
    02:55:894 (191) - move this to 02:56:023
    03:25:125 (314) - k?
    03:33:202 (364) - delete?

That's all from me :3
Good luck~
fixed ddd d -> dd dd pattern stuffs on first part of the song,

thanks for mod =D

->updated version.
abdomsisn
abdomsisn
wkyik
00:29:997 (7,8,1,2,3,4) - 这个给人感觉有点突兀，很奇怪，其它的这种跳就没突兀的感觉
01:14:997 (5) - 节奏？

很不错的图。挑不出毛病来XD

HARD
挑不出毛病orz

好吧这个图我觉得接近完美了【可能是因为我太渣
kds随便给不给了
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
hi~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[General]
  • Timing;第一根红线downbeat错误，必须offset=767，然后第二根红线去掉PS:红线前面允许最多两个note
  • 把所有难度把etterbox，countdown统一

[ wkyik]

  • 建议用空白音效把滑条滑动音代替掉http://puu.sh/3ToiX.wav
    另外可以试试这个claphttp://%20puu.sh/3Toi4.wav
    Inconsistent new combo建议统一
    00:14:997 (1) –转盘上的finish不合适
    00:19:356 –这里音效75感觉略吵，特别是滑条滑动时候那个声音听着特不舒服，建议减小,前面的过门声音倒可以大点
    00:19:356 –从这里开始的一段，clap我建议在第四根白线上加，第二跟白线别clap（PS:音效是节奏的体现，音效密度跟着节奏密度才有好效果）
    00:25:895 (2,3) –反flow
    00:29:997 (7,8,1) –等距
    00:31:920 (2) –remove note有点overmap
    00:32:946 (7) -^
    00:33:587 (1,2) –节奏密度别这么大，本身音乐很平稳的这块
    00:39:228 (5) –尾端clap与音乐一致？
    00:43:330 (5,6,7,8) –少点overmap，音乐里没1/4音
    01:06:407 (5) –折返上箭头的clap去掉
    01:05:125 (1,5) –中心对称？
    01:15:510 –add note做连打，有1/4音
    01:15:766 -^
    01:17:561 -^
    01:18:074 (5) –remove note
    01:18:459 (1) –尾finish
    01:20:510 (1) –首finish，其他的还可以加更多的finish
    01:53:074 (6) –竖直保持flow？
    01:48:972 (1) –尾clap
    01:53:074 (6) -^
    02:16:664 (2) –去掉换个转盘？
    02:23:074 (2,4) –可以再overlap的好看点;w;
    02:25:125 (6,7,8,9,10) –我觉得反flow
    02:28:202 (6) –前面的3,4,5都是斜着的偏有一定角度，这个别那么左右对称，也可以斜起来
    02:31:536 (8) –insane出现这个合适吗，换成连打或者3个note单点或者1/2滑条单折返
    02:41:279 (2,3) –这个也有点反flow
    02:44:613 (1,2,3) –别这么坑吧，1PC好难读0.0
    03:06:664 (1,2) –分别用三个circle代替，insane这样用折返滑条还没hard那样的难，还跟normal一模一样
    03:09:741 - 03:10:638 这段建议放连打别空
    03:26:151 (2,3,4) –这flow反的0.0

  • [hard]
    [list:1337]
    New combo音效和insane类似不说了
    AR+1试试？，有些三连note多的地方似乎眼花缭乱例如01:11:023 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5)
    02:17:946 –remove多余的绿线
    00:24:869 –add note,然后把把3靠近。。这个千万不能空，要空也别空这里
    00:38:459 (2) –长滑条节奏略违和
    00:48:715 (2,3) –感觉有点远，因为这里00:47:433 (8,1) –顺flow距离远易读。。
    00:54:869 (4) –形状上，上面弯的部分可以长点，做成半酒杯样
    01:06:407 (1) –后面转盘？
    01:37:048 (5) –建议去掉，去掉后这个重音01:37:177 (6) –的打击感会增强打着也舒服
    01:58:459 (2) –上端向左弯点，01:59:228 (3) –这个位置也向左调整或者到其他位置
    02:16:151 (3) –后接转盘？
    02:30:510 –add note
    02:54:356 -^
    02:54:869 -^
    03:03:459 (1) –转盘加finish
    03:11:535 (2,3,4) –别这样间距，这几个是不一样的不要等距，保持spacing一致才行
    03:21:023 (3) –我建议你从03:21:279 –开始，03:21:792 (1) –删了，03:22:048 –放circle
    03:36:407 (5,6) –改成blanket好看点
    03:40:125 (1) –这个转盘上的音效，insane难度是normal的finish音，这里是soft的，建议统一

[ Zero's Normal]

  • 全跟人声真是恶俗;w;以下mod很多都与这有关，很多废话54就是
    00:21:792 (4) –为什么往右弯，看着也不好看flow也不好
    00:34:612 –add note
    00:37:177 –加note上音效，提供的那个clap可以试试
    00:45:382 –不怕麻烦的话弄个tick音同上后略
    01:06:664 (1) –怎么不用闷闷的normal finish了？soft太脆，后同
    01:12:048 (5,6,1) –没EZ的nm这样不太难？？
    01:14:869 (4) –残念，几乎都跟人声，打的真残念，移到大白线，再01:15:125 –这里加note
    01:15:382 (5) –注意spacing
    01:37:177 (1) –转盘晚开始点，大白线加note加音效，后同
    01:53:074 (5)-，真是好flow
    02:00:766 –加note。。。全跟人声大量空拍残念无BI
    02:07:177 (3) –换成短滑条，后面的滑条红线02:07:689 –开始，结束点不变
    02:08:715 (5) –去掉
    02:08:971 –加note
    02:09:484 -^
    02:19:741 (3,4) –这摆放位置真奇葩啊;w;两者平行试试
    02:42:305 (6) –话说，能不能别这么绕啊，把滑条的斜率设置为大概-10的样子。后面隔那么远还担心flow吗？
    03:06:664 (1,1) –怎么不跟人声了啊;w;和Insane一样恶评
    03:29:484 (6) –顺着5的轨迹放啊，然后03:30:510 (1) –放到内侧来。03:31:792 (3) 这根也变下位置
    03:39:997 (3) –太吵


没有小猫大人的长真是残念


good luck~
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind

Fycho wrote:

hi~

Black: suggetions
Blue: might consider
Red: You Must Fix

[General]
  • Timing;第一根红线downbeat错误，必须offset=767，然后第二根红线去掉PS:红线前面允许最多两个note
  • 把所有难度把etterbox，countdown统一

[ Zero's Normal]

  • 全跟人声真是恶俗;w;以下mod很多都与这有关，很多废话54就是
    00:21:792 (4) –为什么往右弯，看着也不好看flow也不好
    00:34:612 –add note
    00:37:177 –加note上音效，提供的那个clap可以试试
    00:45:382 –不怕麻烦的话弄个tick音同上后略
    01:06:664 (1) –怎么不用闷闷的normal finish了？soft太脆，后同
    01:12:048 (5,6,1) –没EZ的nm这样不太难？？
    01:14:869 (4) –残念，几乎都跟人声，打的真残念，移到大白线，再01:15:125 –这里加note
    01:15:382 (5) –注意spacing
    01:37:177 (1) –转盘晚开始点，大白线加note加音效，后同
    01:53:074 (5)-，真是好flow
    02:00:766 –加note。。。全跟人声大量空拍残念无BI
    02:07:177 (3) –换成短滑条，后面的滑条红线02:07:689 –开始，结束点不变
    02:08:715 (5) –去掉
    02:08:971 –加note
    02:09:484 -^
    02:19:741 (3,4) –这摆放位置真奇葩啊;w;两者平行试试
    02:42:305 (6) –话说，能不能别这么绕啊，把滑条的斜率设置为大概-10的样子。后面隔那么远还担心flow吗？
    03:06:664 (1,1) –怎么不跟人声了啊;w;和Insane一样恶评
    03:29:484 (6) –顺着5的轨迹放啊，然后03:30:510 (1) –放到内侧来。03:31:792 (3) 这根也变下位置
    03:39:997 (3) –太吵
[/list]


没有小猫大人的长真是残念


good luck~
Thx for your mod~ will fix later
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m www
std only sry
General
open aimod and check problem with taiko diffs:
letterbox conflict
too much kiai time
wkyik
00:12:049 (4) - reverse
00:18:715 (5,6) - ^
01:07:946 (1,2) - ^
02:29:484 (1) - ^
02:48:459 (5,6) - ^
02:49:997 (3) - ^
03:26:151 (2,3) - ^
03:38:202 (4,6) - ^
00:53:074 (4) - ^ and arrange ds
02:52:561 (4,5) - ^
02:57:177 (5) - ^
00:23:330 (1,2,3) - change to (2,3,1)
02:35:382 (3,4,5) - ctrl+h and move to 463.103
02:45:254 (2,3) - completely overlap???
03:06:664 (4) - nc

...
Hard
6 unsnaped
00:22:048 (6,7) - blanket
00:31:535 (1,2) - ^
00:27:433 (1,3) - reverse
01:29:741 (4) - ^
01:47:177 (1) - ^
01:52:561 (8) - ^
02:09:484 (4) - ^
02:51:279 (2,3) - ^
03:25:382 (9) - ^
02:58:202 (1,2,3) - change to 3/4 repeating slider+1/2 repeating slider
02:59:997 (4) - change to two 1/4 notes+1/2slider

...
Zero's Normal
11 unsnaped
disable countdown
00:44:612 (2) - maybe don't overlap the arrow?

good
nothing to say 0.0
good luck
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
小柚子你的图发生了什么 我一点update全unsnap
帮我修一下吧 谢了
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
stressed
osu file format v14

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ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Rizia
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags:ハヤテのごとく！ ending 福音 Fukuin kawaiwkyik Zero__wind
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412,316,77689,6,0,L|464:352,2,55,0|0|8,1:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
376,272,78459,2,0,P|368:216|392:168,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,136,79228,1,8,1:2:0:0:
477,105,79484,2,0,P|499:58|491:2,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,44,80510,6,0,P|331:64|284:51,1,110,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,28,81279,1,8,1:2:0:0:
200,70,81535,2,0,P|160:98|100:98,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,196,82561,1,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,82818,12,4,84869,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85638,6,0,P|196:192|152:216,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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171,367,87946,1,0,1:0:0:0:
280,356,88459,1,8,1:2:0:0:
280,356,88715,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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200,344,95894,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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484,32,109228,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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124,264,116151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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120,24,118202,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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288,112,119484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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444,232,121279,1,8,1:2:0:0:
444,232,121535,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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340,328,122561,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,264,123074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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52,132,125638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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160,30,126664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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378,92,127690,1,0,2:0:0:0:
408,140,127946,2,0,P|416:204|396:248,1,110,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
348,272,128715,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,332,129484,1,8,1:2:0:0:
195,332,129741,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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232,20,132818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,20,133074,6,0,P|192:16|148:32,2,82.5,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
276,56,134100,1,0,1:0:0:0:
304,164,134613,1,8,1:2:0:0:
304,164,134869,2,0,P|357:185|413:187,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,136407,12,4,138202,1:2:0:0:
256,192,138971,6,0,P|312:192|364:168,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,124,139741,2,0,L|348:80,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,46,140510,2,0,P|263:22|284:3,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,101,141279,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,202,141792,1,8,1:2:0:0:
187,202,142048,1,0,1:0:0:0:
187,202,142305,6,0,P|123:215|78:199,1,110,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
37,171,143074,1,2,0:0:0:0:
16,64,143587,2,0,L|64:32,1,55,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
116,16,144100,2,0,P|152:64|148:112,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,152,144869,2,0,L|236:180,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,145638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
272,280,145894,2,0,L|324:308,2,55,8|2|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
412,108,147433,6,0,P|440:160|440:212,1,110,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
416,259,148202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,360,148715,2,0,L|320:380,1,55,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,380,149228,2,0,L|208:372,2,55,0|2|0,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,150253,2,0,P|236:228|232:172,1,110,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,128,151023,2,0,L|152:152,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,44,152048,2,0,L|316:92,1,55,8|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,152561,12,4,154612,1:2:0:0:
256,192,155382,6,0,P|200:224|152:224,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,208,156151,2,0,L|48:244,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,128,156920,2,0,L|2:158,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,80,157690,1,0,1:0:0:0:
156,12,158202,2,0,P|180:24|204:40,1,55,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,84,158715,6,0,P|296:72|332:40,1,110,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
388,32,159484,2,0,P|424:64|484:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,126,160253,2,0,L|464:160,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,161023,2,0,L|452:308,1,55,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
408,328,161535,2,0,P|344:316|312:280,1,110,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,232,162305,2,0,L|304:168,1,55,8|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
320,124,162818,1,4,1:2:0:0:
120,212,163843,6,0,P|161:243|172:300,1,110,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
154,352,164612,2,0,P|74:359|13:306,1,165,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
2,252,165638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,200,165894,2,0,P|40:160|72:136,2,82.5,0|2|2,1:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
46,248,166920,1,4,1:2:0:0:
256,192,167177,12,0,169997,0:0:0:0:
256,192,181279,12,0,183074,0:0:0:0:
256,192,183330,12,4,185382,1:2:0:0:
176,124,186664,6,12,P|136:96|116:60,2,82.5,4|4|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
352,156,188715,6,12,P|397:136|438:136,2,82.5,4|4|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
237,295,190766,6,12,P|232:343|211:379,2,82.5,4|4|4,1:2|1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,192048,1,12,0:0:0:0:
184,112,192561,1,4,1:2:0:0:
184,112,192818,1,4,1:2:0:0:
184,112,193074,2,0,P|137:143|114:190,1,110,2|4,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
88,296,194100,5,8,1:2:0:0:
36,200,194612,2,0,P|27:127|37:87,1,110,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
72,48,195382,2,0,P|144:36|184:44,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,84,196151,1,8,1:2:0:0:
152,172,196664,2,0,L|200:208,1,55,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,312,197433,6,0,P|280:276|304:228,1,110,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,198202,2,0,L|408:240,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,76,199228,2,0,L|325:54,1,55,8|4,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,199741,12,4,201792,1:2:0:0:
256,192,202561,6,0,P|284:244|276:296,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,332,203330,2,0,L|184:320,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,272,204100,2,0,L|76:325,2,55,0|8|2,0:0|1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,216,204869,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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48,112,205638,1,0,1:0:0:0:
48,112,205894,6,0,P|112:112|160:87,1,110,2|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
195,59,206664,2,0,P|235:39|299:40,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,84,207433,2,0,L|364:148,1,55,8|2,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,228,208202,2,0,L|279:178,1,55,2|8,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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56,244,210510,5,12,1:2:0:0:
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366,344,212818,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,008 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Oh, it's pretty sad that taiko difficulties were removed. T_T
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia
帶多個模式始終有點麻煩(對我來說
updated
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

Combo Colors
  1. Pure white combo colors are not encouraged due to the flashing effect in kiai section. Using something grayish is recommended.
  2. Personally combo color 4 was a little hard to read due to the dark BG. Consider using something brighter.
Zero's Normal:
  1. Volume 40% will be enough for 00:00:767. The current sliderslide volume is too high.
  2. Since the default normal-hitnormal.wav is same with the custom soft-hitclap.wav, your hitsound setting such as 00:36:151 and many more terribly hurts user's ear. Please use only one hitsound, not both sampleset-normal and soft-clap.
  3. 00:15:125 (1,1) - I'm not confident with the spinner recovery time for the lowest difficulty in the mapset. Ending it at 00:18:202 would be a safe decision, but do what you want for now.
  4. 00:58:972 (5) - The rhythm wasn't cool enough since it is ignoring a beat at 00:59:741. Consider increasing 1/2 in length.
  5. 01:05:125 (3,4) - Hope this 1.2x was a mistake.
  6. 03:01:279 (1,1) - I wouldn't recommend double spinners for the lowest difficulty.
    My ears really hurt. Hope you can fix the hitsounds x.x
Hard:
  1. Volume 40% will be enough for 00:00:767. The current sliderslide volume is too high.
  2. 00:39:484 - 00:47:690 - 01:12:305 - 01:28:715 - 01:57:433 - etc - Consider adding clap to fit the music better.
  3. 00:50:253 (5,1,3) - I think starting the combo from 00:52:049 is more natural and fits the song better. Suggesting (5) (3) - add nc, (1) remove nc.
  4. 01:24:356 (1,2) - Starting the combo from (2) will be more natural along the kiai fountain.
  5. 02:09:997 (1) - Missing Finish.
  6. 03:10:766 (1) - Not sure if this NC is needed.
  7. 03:12:561 (3,4,5) - Similar with Insane. Reverse arrow of (5) was barely visible.
  8. 03:20:253 (2,3,1) - I personally feel ctrl+G of (3) is way better in readability. Hope you feel yourself confident with your selection.
  9. 03:33:587 - Unlike your previous rhythms where you did a 3/4 reverse slider, a straight 3/4 slider made this rhythm empty for me.
Insane:
  1. 00:01:536 (1,2) - This large spacing felt quite big considering the song was pretty calm here.
  2. 00:24:869 (5,1,2) - This sudden jump does not fit the song properly. You may want to change this pattern less excessive.
  3. 01:44:869 (1,2) - Consider ctrl+G to give a jump towards (3). It will work nicely along the strong sound there.
  4. 03:12:561 (1,2,3) - The reverse arrow of (3) is barely visible. Consider another note placement to assure players notice (3) is a slider better than now.
  5. 03:20:510 (1) - Remove NC for combo consistency.
ReFaller
1,233 posts
Joined August 2014
ReFaller
Hi, you know why i'm modding, so let's start.
[Zero's Normal]
00:21:792 (3) - whistle on tail?
00:25:125 (3) - whistle too?
00:29:228 (3) - ^^
00:37:177 - i'm sad that it isn't mapped
00:41:279 - ^^
00:58:972 (5,6) - may you try a little remap this part to receive the blanket between them?
Ok, nothing else.
[Hard]
01:13:330 (3) - fix a distance between 01:12:561 (1)
01:30:510 (5) - fix a stack with 01:29:484 (3)
So much to fix, yea!
[Insane]
00:58:202 (1,2,3) - i'm not sure for this part, i prefer ctrl+g for 00:58:202 (1,2) then again ctrl for current 00:58:459 (2)
01:32:690 - Oh yes, missed sound, gz baby 8-)
Also lots things to fix.
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See ya, i'm waiting for your mod.
Kencho
952 posts
Joined August 2013
Kencho
速水
[General]
  1. Nothing

[Zero's Normal]
  1. 原來01有做gd嗎233

  2. 01:05:895 (4) - 這裡DS變成1.21x了

    00:08:715 (1) - 換成1/4折返會好點吧，BPM不高可以接受

    01:06:664 (1,1) - NM轉盤後要隔兩拍誒，我覺得可以把轉盤刪掉，然後01:06:536 - 到01:07:818 - 空著，01:07:946 - 這裡開始加上物件

    01:22:818 (1,1) - ^

    後面兩段的kiai也是，用同樣的改法比較好

[Hard]
  1. Aimod一堆沒對齊時間軸，fix一下

  2. 00:04:869 (6,1) - 交換NC

    00:07:177 (4,1) - ^

    00:08:972 (5,1) - ^

    00:13:075 (3,1) - ^

    後面NC還是有點亂，總之統一一條大白線或者兩天大白線一NC

    01:29:484 (3,5) - 沒疊好

    標準的Hard

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:997 (1) - 試試轉盤提前到00:16:920 - 然後00:17:177 - 加個物件？白線起會容易掌握點

    00:24:100 (4,5,1,2) - 這裡間距突然這麼大有點不適應，5可以ctrl+g換個方向

    00:48:972 (3,4,5,6) - 錯開一點？

    00:53:074 (6,7) - 滑條換個彎的方向會更順
    SPOILER

    01:06:408 (9) - NC

    01:07:946 (1) - No NC，01:08:459 (3) - NC
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Sonnyc
Zero's Normal:
  1. Volume 40% will be enough for 00:00:767. The current sliderslide volume is too high. ok fixed
  2. Since the default normal-hitnormal.wav is same with the custom soft-hitclap.wav, your hitsound setting such as 00:36:151 and many more terribly hurts user's ear. Please use only one hitsound, not both sampleset-normal and soft-clap. oh ;w; but I kinda like this sound effect... will see if others say the same
  3. 00:15:125 (1,1) - I'm not confident with the spinner recovery time for the lowest difficulty in the mapset. Ending it at 00:18:202 would be a safe decision, but do what you want for now. probably fine as it is
  4. 00:58:972 (5) - The rhythm wasn't cool enough since it is ignoring a beat at 00:59:741. Consider increasing 1/2 in length. good point, changed in another way
  5. 01:05:125 (3,4) - Hope this 1.2x was a mistake. indeed, fixed now
  6. 03:01:279 (1,1) - I wouldn't recommend double spinners for the lowest difficulty. should be fine imo
    My ears really hurt. Hope you can fix the hitsounds x.x
ReFaller
Hi, you know why i'm modding, so let's start.
[Zero's Normal]
00:21:792 (3) - whistle on tail? don't feel like so as the vocal is at a low pitch
00:25:125 (3) - whistle too? ok, fow the strong piano key I think
00:29:228 (3) - ^^ sure
00:37:177 - i'm sad that it isn't mapped I'm just kinda afraid that the comboing would be too long for this diff
00:41:279 - ^^
00:58:972 (5,6) - may you try a little remap this part to receive the blanket between them? changed in another way
Ok, nothing else.
Kencho
[Zero's Normal]
  1. 原來01有做gd嗎233 八百年前的图=。= 不忍直视

  2. 01:05:895 (4) - 這裡DS變成1.21x了 嗯改了

    00:08:715 (1) - 換成1/4折返會好點吧，BPM不高可以接受 我整张图应该都没有1/4 还是不用了

    01:06:664 (1,1) - NM轉盤後要隔兩拍誒，我覺得可以把轉盤刪掉，然後01:06:536 - 到01:07:818 - 空著，01:07:946 - 這裡開始加上物件 这个因为BPM很低 应该是可以接受的 不行到时候再改吧

    01:22:818 (1,1) - ^

    後面兩段的kiai也是，用同樣的改法比較好
thx for your mods~
code
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Tsuki no inori.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 67946
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no Inori
TitleUnicode:月の祈り
Artist:Suirenji Ruka starring Yamazaki Haruka
ArtistUnicode:水蓮寺ルカ starring 山崎はるか
Creator:Rizia
Version:Zero's Normal
Source:Hayate no Gotoku! Cuties
Tags:ハヤテのごとく！ ending 福音 Fukuin kawaiwkyik Zero__wind
BeatmapID:270013
BeatmapSetID:99611

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3.5
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3.5
ApproachRate:4.5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

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Rizia
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Joined January 2012
Topic Starter
Rizia

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

Combo Colors
  1. Pure white combo colors are not encouraged due to the flashing effect in kiai section. Using something grayish is recommended.
  2. Personally combo color 4 was a little hard to read due to the dark BG. Consider using something brighter.
Hard:
  1. Volume 40% will be enough for 00:00:767. The current sliderslide volume is too high.
  2. 00:39:484 - 00:47:690 - 01:12:305 - 01:28:715 - 01:57:433 - etc - Consider adding clap to fit the music better.
  3. 00:50:253 (5,1,3) - I think starting the combo from 00:52:049 is more natural and fits the song better. Suggesting (5) (3) - add nc, (1) remove nc.
  4. 01:24:356 (1,2) - Starting the combo from (2) will be more natural along the kiai fountain.
  5. 02:09:997 (1) - Missing Finish.
  6. 03:10:766 (1) - Not sure if this NC is needed.
  7. 03:12:561 (3,4,5) - Similar with Insane. Reverse arrow of (5) was barely visible.
  8. 03:20:253 (2,3,1) - I personally feel ctrl+G of (3) is way better in readability. Hope you feel yourself confident with your selection.
  9. 03:33:587 - Unlike your previous rhythms where you did a 3/4 reverse slider, a straight 3/4 slider made this rhythm empty for me.
Insane:
  1. 00:01:536 (1,2) - This large spacing felt quite big considering the song was pretty calm here. want to keep
  2. 00:24:869 (5,1,2) - This sudden jump does not fit the song properly. You may want to change this pattern less excessive. ^
  3. 01:44:869 (1,2) - Consider ctrl+G to give a jump towards (3). It will work nicely along the strong sound there.
  4. 03:12:561 (1,2,3) - The reverse arrow of (3) is barely visible. Consider another note placement to assure players notice (3) is a slider better than now. i feel it's fine
  5. 03:20:510 (1) - Remove NC for combo consistency.

ReFaller wrote:

Hi, you know why i'm modding, so let's start.

[Hard]
01:13:330 (3) - fix a distance between 01:12:561 (1)
01:30:510 (5) - fix a stack with 01:29:484 (3)
So much to fix, yea!
[Insane]
00:58:202 (1,2,3) - i'm not sure for this part, i prefer ctrl+g for 00:58:202 (1,2) then again ctrl for current 00:58:459 (2) keep
01:32:690 - Oh yes, missed sound, gz baby 8-)
Also lots things to fix.
=====================================================
See ya, i'm waiting for your mod.

Kencho wrote:

[Hard]
  1. Aimod一堆沒對齊時間軸，fix一下

  2. 00:04:869 (6,1) - 交換NC

    00:07:177 (4,1) - ^

    00:08:972 (5,1) - ^

    00:13:075 (3,1) - ^

    後面NC還是有點亂，總之統一一條大白線或者兩天大白線一NC

    01:29:484 (3,5) - 沒疊好

    標準的Hard

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:997 (1) - 試試轉盤提前到00:16:920 - 然後00:17:177 - 加個物件？白線起會容易掌握點

    00:24:100 (4,5,1,2) - 這裡間距突然這麼大有點不適應，5可以ctrl+g換個方向

    00:48:972 (3,4,5,6) - 錯開一點？ 不錯開

    00:53:074 (6,7) - 滑條換個彎的方向會更順
    SPOILER

    01:06:408 (9) - NC

    01:07:946 (1) - No NC，01:08:459 (3) - NC
thanks for mod!
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ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
[General]
怎么红线前面有东西 找个什么会timing的人在前面再加条红线如何
[Normal]
00:43:843 (1,2) - 低难度别把滑条挤一起 更别遮到折返箭头
01:06:664 (1,1) - 隔太近了 滑条最少从01:09:484 - 开始吧
01:25:638 (1) - 01:46:151 (1) - 02:18:972 (1) - 02:35:382 (1) - 03:22:561 (1) - ^
03:34:356 (1) - 在03:36:151 - 结束就可以了吧
[Hard]
01:15:895 - 01:11:792 - 建议这类统一下 要放1/4就都放 不放就都不放
01:32:561 (9,10,11,12,13) - 放五连感觉会跟normal的gap太大 建议这里不要放1/4或者用折返滑条代替
03:29:484 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^
[Insane]
03:21:279 (5) - 这里为什么要强行放3/4滑条 03:21:536 - 有音的

都改了跟我说吧
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