Lally wrote:

[*]02:23:790 (5,6) - how about to doit like: I kinda like it now so didn't fix *_*

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DarknessAngel wrote:

02:11:361 (7) - 在(117,194)才是和02:10:076 (4)完全重疊。no grid重疊不看座標只看眼力是不可靠的=.= 我剛開始no grid製圖也只靠眼力，後來都乖乖看座標了lol 其实我觉得这种玩起来肉眼看不出来是不是重叠啊所以完全不在意不过强迫症害我还是改了

我覺得比較可惜的是第2段kiai time相較於其他兩段無聊了些，只用了一些簡單的重疊跳，跳的數量遠比其他兩段少，設計感也相對低下。但除了這點之外就沒什麼能抱怨的，很好的圖:> 第二段kiai是我做的Zzz 所以就不会有KPY的设计感和跳跃啦

fanzhen0019 wrote:

[H]
02:38:147 - 这段break可以考虑下anti jump转一圈转回来 太慢了没啥做的劲zz

Megurine Luka wrote:

[H]

1. 02:16:933 (6) - ^ K
2. 02:58:076 (6) - ^ don't like this one *_*

Nemis wrote:

• 02:28:504 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket a little bit done
• 02:31:076 (1,2,3) - Improve this triangle hmm I don't mean to make it perfect triangle 0 0
• 02:36:647 (6) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it flows better with 02:36:218 (5) - this one and you did the same 02:20:790 (8,9) - here sure
• 02:49:504 (1) - until this KIAI's end you are missing the clap hitsounds like 02:46:290 (5) - this one (S:1 clap) I did have a clap here?, they fits the music a lot and I don't understand why you should stop using them from 02:49:504 (1) - here, so add them
• 02:50:790 (4) - Here is missing a clap k

Dark_Ai wrote:

Hey Mod from my Queues ~

General

• • may add epilepsy warning? //no need imo

Normal

• • 00:12:218 (1) - try to make a better stack with 00:09:647 (1) end //nope. If I do this, the blanket will be failed.
  • 00:13:933 (1) - same here //done
  • 00:24:218 (1,2,3,4) - may make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/3GAFR.jpg or better. I think it looks better imo //changed something in my own way.
  • 01:01:933 (1,2) - these notes feels kinda wrong, may try to make like this? http://puu.sh/3GALP.jpg I think this way fits more with the rhythm //I prefer the pattern I used more. Would love to keep this for now.
  • 01:13:933 (2) - may try to stack this better with 01:11:790 (4) end? here the code if you want
  
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  254,308,71790,2,0,P|221:298|184:296,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
  104,348,72647,6,0,P|62:349|24:340,2,71.9999978027344,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  184,296,73933,2,0,B|196:259|196:259|175:207|193:148,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

  • 01:34:290 (3) - delete this note because it doesnt even fit with the Rhythm and also it's better/easier for newbews too remember this is the easiest Diff //are you serious.....I mean it does follow the drum sound and that's what i want to emphasize.
  • 01:53:361 (5,1,2) - what do you think to make it lihe this?
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  I think it look much better imo //what is the difference between yours one and my pattern?...
  • 02:16:504 (1) - hmmm I think to add a circle only here it better instead of this slider. It may confuse the beginner because it's hard to read as a slider. It's more like 2 circle one after the other. I'm note sure if this a problem but it's only my suggestion ;P
  • 03:02:361 (1) - same here //would love to keep this as it fits the atmosphere in kiai time and music.
  • 03:27:218 (2,3) - actually I dont really like this.. but well
  • 04:25:504 (1) - stack this better with 04:23:361 (1) endpoint

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• • 03:47:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels kinda out of the Rhythm or vocal whatever *hides* What do you think about this way?
  
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  I think it fits really much better imo[/color]
  04:25:290 (4) - this Note feels really out of the rhythm here may delete it?
  04:34:504 (1) - Let the spinner begin here it fit better? [/color]

ts8zs wrote:

感觉很难mod的样子XD
同一首歌第一人……不同mode不算XD （其实我有夏祭 taiko.ver jubeat.ver miku.ver …… Full.ver 还没动 XD）
[Hard]
STR2?
00:01:933 (3) - NC?
01:04:290 (3) - remove? //不 remove的話這個跳就沒有意義了
01:33:647 (1) - Ctrl+G?(感觉再跳一下就是insane了:3) //這才是我想要的效果阿, 不改
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STR2?
02:54:218 (3) - blanket
04:04:933 (2,3,4) - 不顺着弧线摆么？//已經是了
就这些……好少

DexFrild wrote:

Hi :з

[Hard]
03:48:647 - pleeease add slider here

T_T

//....a mistake had happened, I was aware about it, and now it's fixec.
[Normal]
No problem ^_^

Good luck~

Nemis wrote:

Here as requested <3

• Suggestion
• Must fix/High suggestion

[General]
• Add the epilepsy warning, it's needed for flash like 01:08:790 (1) - this one //personally don't think that is really needed.

[Hard]
• Since you used stack leniency 1 stack manually each stack that's not readable (notes under sliders' ends or on sliders' heads). They are hard to read, especially with hidden... //Stack leniency is 3 and it is clearly readable
• Fix all the stacks like 02:10:076 (4,7) - this one since stack leniency 0 doesn't stack them
• The greenline at 229076 is not necessary //this is necessary now.

• 00:11:361 (2) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it would flow a lot with the next pattern (00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - this one)
• 00:23:790 (4) - Move this note at x:264 y:80 beetween 00:23:361 (3,1) - these two elements //no intention to do this. Sorry
• 00:36:218 (3) - I don't see the necessity to make this slider 3/4, end its end 1/4 before //This 3/4 can emphasize 00:37:076 (4) - .
• 00:37:504 (1,2) - Change this rhythm is the one in the screenshot below, it follows the vocals: //the link of first one dead. And I didn't prefer the second one.

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• 00:54:218 (3) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it flows a lot with 00:53:361 (2) - this slider
• 01:08:790 (1) - until 01:36:218 (3) - add a clap on each white tick between the downbeat, it follows the music very well: //seems that you are confusing about this. I did this, but in other way. I use normal hitsound on 1.3 beat as you can see that I used the hitsound pannel to change it.

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• 01:14:361 (4) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it would flow better
• 01:21:218 (4) - Change this slider with 01:20:790 (3) - this one reversed for a better flow:

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• 01:33:647 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 03:25:933 (1,2) - Fix this blanket, 03:27:218 (2) - this note is not so visible //not really.
• 03:39:647 (1) - until 04:07:076 (5) - here I'd say the same as I said before, add the S:1 claps where they are needed //As I said before. There is no need to change it.
• 03:46:504 (3,1) - Improve this stack, the note is not so visible //Same.
• 03:48:433 (4) - Add a 1/2 slider after this note, it follows the vocals: //this should be a mistake, already fixed.

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[Normal]
• Since you used stack leniency 1 stack manually each stack that's not readable (notes under sliders' ends or on sliders' heads). They are hard to read, especially with hidden...
• Fix all the stacks like 00:22:076 (2,4) - this one since stack leniency 0 doesn't stack them
• The greenline at 273861 is not necessary //All explained.

• 00:20:361 (4) - Move this note at x:368 y:200, it flows better with 00:20:790 (1) - this slider //I didn't open grid when mapping...
• 02:54:218 (3,4) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 02:57:647 (3) - Curve this slider and then make a blanket with 02:56:576 (2) - this slider //I think straight slider is better.

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• 03:43:504 (6,1,2) - Stack these notes manually, if you play the map you'll see this:

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• 03:58:504 (3,4) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 04:31:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is like a stream, I'd not put it in a normal, especially when the normal is the easiest difficulty of the mapset //considering this as a super slow bpm song, this is fine for it.

Wow, awesome map! Good luck kanpakyin

LunarSakuya wrote:

hey

General
- In your skin, you're missing "reversearrow.png"

Normal
00:33:647 (3) - you could stack this on the head of (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880544 would look neater imo //hum, I would like to keep this because I think the flow of striaght flow is better here.
00:44:361 (4,5,6) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880568 , it bothered me that (5) kept going past the vocals, a pretty strong part too //as you can notice, I followed the instrument in whole part instead of vocal. I think the pitch of instrument is more stranger than vocal.
03:37:933 (3) - not really important but moving this a little to the right will make a neater blanket with (1)'s tail imo


Hard
00:37:718 - Add note? the vocals seem pretty prominent here
01:14:361 (4) - Ctrl+G, better cursor/oval flow from this to the next note imo
04:00:218 (1) - Ctrl+H and adjust around the head of (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880653 creates a better sense of directional flow i feel. After coming off from 03:59:790 (5) - I have the mentality of shooting towards the left after notes like 03:57:647 (1,2) - //Sorry but I don't intend to change this as the current flow is better. I intentionally made 04:00:218 (1) - to overlap 03:58:933 (3) -
04:14:361 (4) - NC, delete NC on next note; similar part as 04:24:647 (1) -

peppy wrote:

This is shit. Why is distance snap completely ignored? Why? Why whyw hyw hyw hwy hwy whyw hyw hwy hwy?

peppy wrote:

This is shit. Why is distance snap completely ignored? Why? Why whyw hyw hyw hwy hwy whyw hyw hwy hwy?

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

I liked old, it was my first SS xD
grats

Flask wrote:

老話一句 不服不要玩