Hollow Wings wrote:

Azmato's Hard only as his request in game.

generally u didn't finish ur hitsound work, long parts in ur diff has no hitsound at all, that's an unrankble issue.

00:18:607 (5) - arrange ds, 1.06 and 0.97 are really different O
00:21:428 (1,2) - maybe blanket O
00:23:992 (1,2,3,4) - there are lots of parts like this in ur diff, personally i prefer these ds are same as 1.00x with little deviation. won't mention other parts like this here after this. O
00:59:889 (1) - awkward the finish hitsound's volume here. (coz there's no hitsound in a long part before kiai, and the kiai after this O
02:44:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe u can make them a hexagon I'll think about it
03:56:556 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
02:46:556 (1) - u really need to get serious in hitsound work, even no finish at the head of this slider O
03:48:095 (5,6,7) - make them symm O

some parts' rhythm can be better imo
and plz at least finish ur map before asking modding D:

good luck anyway

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding req

[Azmato's Hard]
00:03:736 (3) - 3st notes remove clap and 2st notes add clap O
00:04:761 (4) - 2st notes add clap O
00:06:043 (1) - 1st notes add clap and 3st notes add finish O
00:11:684 (3) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다. O

good lcuk

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding req

[Soar's Normal]
00:07:838 (2) - 3st notes add finish O
00:12:710 (1) - start notes remove finish O
00:13:479 (2) - end notes remove finish O
00:32:197 (3) - start notes remove finish O
01:09:633 (1) - change clap O
01:11:684 (1) - ^ O
01:30:659 (4) - ^ ? 뭔가 이상하지만 O
01:40:915 (1) - 이 파트 이후에 히트사운드가 없습니다. 모딩을 해드릴 수 없는 점 양해 바랍니다.

good lcuk

neonat wrote:

Hi Senbonzakura~


Hard

00:11:428 (2,3) - slider before circle, place the clap at the same time as what it is currently 00:12:197
00:15:530 (2,3) - ^
00:27:838 (2,3) - ^
00:31:941 (2,3) - ^
00:36:043 (2,3) - ^
00:53:736 - 00:56:043 - looks a little bit cramped up, maybe you could shift them around
01:12:197 (4) - finish on the start of slider
01:13:223 (6,7) - I don't think they should stack
01:15:787 (6) - the music here in the song has a cymbol sound, you could put finish here as well
01:28:607 (1) - finish on the start of slider
01:31:171 (4) - finish
01:32:454 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:32:838 (1) - finish
01:37:582 (3) - ^
01:38:607 (6) - ^
01:40:402 (1) - ^
01:40:915 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:13:736 (8) - NC here instead of 02:15:018 (1)
02:12:197 (6) - finish
02:13:736 (8) - finish on start of slider
02:16:556 (4,5) - slider before circle
02:21:941 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:23:992 (5) - ^
02:26:043 (2) - ^
02:29:633 (4) - finish
02:38:351 (2) - finish on start of slider
02:39:120 (4) - ^
02:40:402 (3) - ^
02:41:171 (5) - ^
02:42:454 (1) - ^
02:49:633 (7) - finish on end of slider
02:50:659 (1) - finish on start of slider
02:54:761 (1) - ^
02:55:530 (3) - ^
02:56:812 (3) - finish
02:58:864 (3) - finish on start of slider
03:00:915 (5) - clap
03:01:428 (6) - finish
03:08:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
03:10:915 (3) - ^
03:12:710 (6) - finish on end of slider
03:15:274 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:16:300 (3) - ^
03:17:069 (4) - finish
03:18:351 (2) - ^
03:43:992 (5,6,7) - they can look nicer by overlapping less:

SPOILER

03:50:146 (1) - finish on start of slider
03:50:915 (3) - ^
03:52:197 (7) - finish
03:52:710 (9) - finish on end of slider
03:54:248 (2) - finish on start of slider
03:56:043 (5) - finish on end of slider
03:57:838 (6) - finish
03:58:351 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:01:428 (7) - finish on end of slider
04:02:454 (1) - finish on start of slider
04:06:556 (1) - ^
04:07:325 (3) - ^
04:08:607 (3) - ^
04:09:377 (5) - ^
04:10:659 (8) - ^
04:12:710 (1) - clap
04:13:223 (2) - finish
04:13:736 (1) - clap
04:18:864 (6) - finish on start of slider
04:19:633 (8) - ^
04:20:659 (1) - ^
04:22:710 (2) - ^

ALL APPLIED!

neonat wrote:

Normal

O

jonathanlfj wrote:

From my birthday queue~
this song brings back some k-on memories xD

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[Soar's Normal]
instead of using so many finishes on the 3rd white tick, how bout swap them for whistles instead? sounds a lot nicer imo O
00:14:761 (4,2) - use 3 point algorithm for these sliders, right now they look asymmetrical with the 4 point O
00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - this overlap is a bit harder to read with this AR, suggest you to remove the stack or change the direction of the repeat on 00:22:710 (1) for less confusion O-change the direction
00:39:120 (1,2,3) - a triplet in Normal? not a good idea >< either delete 00:39:248 (2) or use a short slider for 00:39:120 (1,2)O - delete a note
01:08:095 (2) - missing a finish on the end O
01:09:889 (2,3,4) - again, prevent using 1/4 circles in a Normal diff O
01:14:505 (5) - break this up into 2 repeat sliders, its currently hard to predict how many repeats it has O
01:21:428 (4,1) - the spacing change here may cause some confusion especially since the AR is slow, use normal spacing or just a more distinguishable spacing O
01:25:274 (5) - finish on end, also no finish for 01:26:300 (1,4)? O
01:40:915 (1) - 03:02:710 (3) - this section seems to be a copy paste and flip of the first section, so all suggestions above applies to the same occurrences in this section O
03:08:864 (3) - add a finish since it is present in the music O
03:10:915 (3) - ^ O
03:12:966 (3) - ^ O
03:17:069 (5) - ^ O
03:19:377 (7) - should have a NC here to represent the start of vocal hold O
03:41:941 (1) - 04:14:505 (3) - this section is a mix of the second kiai and first kiai, so suggestions on the first kiai also applies here
I remap this part
04:19:633 (3) - add a finish O
04:20:659 (6,3) - ^ on start O
04:24:312 (2) - this should be snapped like this, but i actually suggest you just swap the whole thing for a spinner since this is a Normal diff:

SPOILER

O- add spin

Probably the longest mod i have written, though i have to say the maps are not bad, just need to get more consistency on hitsounding NC spacing and such
Good luck on ranking~

Thanks for modding

Sonnyc wrote:

Soar's Normal:

00:22:710 (1,2,3,4) - 좁은 공간에 오밀조밀 모여있어서 읽기 힘들거 같다는 개인적 의견입니다. O
00:23:992 (5) - 시작의 피니시 제거 O
00:29:120 (3) - 리버스의 클랩 제거 O
00:39:120 (1,2) - 헐 노말에서는 연타 쓰는게 아닙니다 O
01:04:761 (3) - 패턴상 피니시는 시작이 아닌 끝에 가야 하지만, 이왕이면 피니시는 소리나는 곳에만 넣는게 좋으실거 같아요 O
01:06:812 (3) - ^ O
01:08:095 (2) - 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요 O
01:09:889 (2,3) - 연타 out O
01:14:505 (5) - 잡기 어려운 엇박자니까 뉴콤 넣어주세요 O
01:17:325 (3,1) - 간격 바로잡아주세요. 노말에서 안티점프는 헷갈립니다. O
01:21:428 (4,1) - ^ O
01:26:300 (1) - 끝에 피니시 O
01:27:325 (4) - 피니시 O
01:29:633 (2,3) - (2)를 리버스 있는 3/4 슬라이더로 바꾸는게 음악에 더 잘 맞을거라고 생각합니다. 고민해봤는데 그냥놔두는게 좋은거 같습니다
복붙 부분 알아서 찾아주세요~ O
03:17:069 (5) - 피니시 O
03:19:377 (7) - 뉴콤 O
음 키아이 복붙도 알아서 공통되는거 고쳐주세요. 그나저나 두번이나 복붙하는건 좀 뭐하니 마지막 키아이 만큼은 새로 만드는게 나을거 같아요 O
03:52:197 (4) - 두번째 리버스 피니시 제거 O
04:07:325 (5) - 피니시 O
04:16:556 (1) - 끝의 피니시 제거 O
04:19:633 (3) - 피니시 O
04:20:659 (6) - 시작에 피니시 O
04:22:710 (3) - ^ O
04:23:992 (1) - 피니시 제거 O
04:25:530 - 노트 대신 스핀 넣는게 나을듯 합니다. O

좀 노말 치곤 어려워 보이네요 공감하긴하는데 노트빼기가 뭐해서 ar 하고 od 1씩낮췄습니다

모딩해주셔서 감사합니다

Startrick wrote:

Azmato님이랑 M4M으로 왔는데 경험이 없어서...

[Sakura]
03:21:556 부터 03:23:479 까지 스피너 넣으시는건 어때요?

ㅠㅠ 잡을게 있는지 모르겠어요... 일단 스타 드릴게요~
꼭 랭크 되시길!

HabiHolic wrote:

mp3 파일 못구하시겠으면

밑에꺼쓰세요 192 비트레이트로 변환했어요~

http://puu.sh/44rgo.mp3

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey Senbonzakura! I promised you I'd mod this, so when you're done remapping your Insane, feel free to ask for a mod again.^^

1. Your hitnormal2 is completely silenced, and you use it at some parts in the insane for triplets making notes completely inaudible. I suggest that you delete the hitnormal2, and instead try to use the default soft hit sound that the spots where you wanted to use it. You'll have to change you normal-hitclap2 over to the soft sampleset.

1. Check AIMod, there are some unsnapped sliders that you need to fix. You'll have to remake the sliders to fix them.
   
2. 00:06:556 (3,4) - A finish on the head of the 3 and the repeat of the 4 is nice to follow the music.
   
3. 00:07:838 (5,6,1) - You can make a better pattern if you center the 1 on the grid and have the 5 overlapped with its tail, and the 6 below it in the center of the grid. That way the 1 will flow back into where the 5 was. Here's the idea:
   
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4. 00:08:351 (7) - Try a NC here to show the change in slider velocity a little better.
   
5. 00:28:864 (1,2) - Placements feel too random. Try ctrl+G on the 1 and making a placement similar to the 00:27:069 (1,2) where sliders reflect each other. Copy the 00:28:864 (1) and paste if over on the other side, maybe have it blanket the 00:30:402 (4) is nice. Example:
   
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6. 00:31:171 (5) - Try ctrl+G on this slider then place it more to the right. Also I suggest put NC on this slider and now on 00:31:684 (1). I don't like the current placement, the flow is awkward. Here's what I mean:
   
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7. 00:47:710 (2) - Try triplet feels really overmapped. I recommend try a different rhythm here. Follow vocals by putting something to hit at 00:47:582. Delete 00:47:325 (1,2) and move the 00:47:838 (3) left 1/2
   
   
8. 00:58:351 (4) - Try making it a 1/2 slider instead flowing into the 00:58:864 (5,6,7) triplet. The pause doesn't fit the music well.
   
   
9. 01:03:992 (4,6) - Looks a bit messy imo. Try having the sliders reflect perfectly.
   
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10. 01:13:992 (1,3) - I suggest for readability and to follow the music better, switch these NC's here. NC is better on the 01:14:505 (3) to start the large jumping pattern.
    
11. 01:17:325 (3) - Remove finish from the head, I figure it's a mistake here.
    
12. 01:21:428 (4,5,6) - It looks very sloppy because the 6 has less of a curve than the 4. When making a blanket pattern like this, it's nicer to make the sliders the same and to place the 5 perfectly in the center. Here's an example:
    
    
    You can use the approach circle from the 5 to make sure it's right.
13. 01:28:608 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Listen to the music more closely here. You can make this play better if you match your rhythms to the music. The triplet is actually at 01:29:377 in the music, so I suggest rearranging this part like so:
    
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    The gap at 01:30:915 feels nicer and fits the music well.
14. 01:30:146 (7) - Missing clap here.
    
15. 01:32:710 (3) - It's really strange that you have this slider following the melody in the new phrase, but then you start the break after it. I suggest delete this slider here and add a circle at 01:32:710 then start the break right after it. Like this:
    
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    Don't forget to add a finish to the 3.
16. 01:49:120 (6) - Try to place it blanketing the 01:47:838 (3) instead of overlapping it.
    
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17. 01:52:966 (4,5) - Stack the 5 better under the 4's tail, it's really noticeable.
    
18. 01:55:530 (1,2,3,4) - Make it so this is perfectly centered and symmetrical on the axis. That way you won't have overlap on the 01:56:556 (5,6,1).
    
19. 01:56:556 (5,6,1) - I'd like it if you removed the 1 from this stack. It's nicer to have movement to the 1 when the vocals start again.
    
20. 01:59:889 (3) - Hidden slider repeat here, you'll have to spacing the sliders apart more so that the repeat is clearly visable.
    
21. 02:32:197 (5) - Try moving it upwards to avoid the overlap. It's a nicer pattern:
    
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22. 02:46:556 (1,2,3) - Space them more, it will have nicer flow and you can place the 2 more centered.
    
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23. 02:48:607 (5,6,7) - This is the pattern you want here.^^
    
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24. 03:14:248 (1,2,3,4) - The extended sliders feel pretty overmapped and awkward to me. I suggest to shorten them to end properly in 1/2. It feels nicer with the music.
    
25. 03:41:941 (6) - NC missing? Check the combos in the last kiai, they are way different and more frequent than the other kiais.
    
26. 03:42:710 (7) - Sloppy placement. Place it at (236,360) in a blanket with the 6.
    
27. 04:20:145 (1,3) - Switch the NC's here. NC on the 3 is better to show the change in SV.
    
28. 04:22:966 (1) - It's a bug here. Add a NC to the spinner. Spinners must have a NC on them.

1. Tons of minor spacing inconsistencies in this diff. It doesn't effect play much, but when you switch from 1.0 spacing to .92 or 1.06, your map can start to look really sloppy. That's what is happening here. I suggest to go through and snap notes along the grid in consistent spacing.
   
2. 00:45:274 (3) - Since the vocals hold here, I prefer that you make this a 1/1 slider. The pause feels a bit strange with the music.
   
3. 00:36:043 (2,3) - Flow is a bit awkward there imo. Try to place the 3 more below the pattern so that flow doesn't suddenly cut to the left.
   
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4. 00:37:325 (1,2) - Copy the 1 a flip it over to make it the same slider as the 2. You'll have a nicer pattern. When you place all of your sliders from scratch like you've done here, it can start to look really sloppy. Try it:
   
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5. 00:54:761 (3,4) - You can try giving the 3 less of a curve and having it blanket the 4. It might have a nicer flow here. Here's what I mean:
   
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6. 01:19:377 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
7. 01:27:838 (5,6,7,1) - Try having two stacks here instead of all in one. Stack the 5 and 6, then have movement to the 7 and 1 stacked. That way you'll have movement when the vocals start again.
   
8. 01:42:966 (1,2) - Try to move it slightly to the left to avoid overlapping the slider bodies.
   
9. 02:53:479 (6) - The slider with multiple repeats doesn't fit here. Try to remove the repeats and have a circle at 02:53:992 and 02:54:248 to hit aong with the loud claps in the music.

1. For a better spread try HP drain - 1 and OD +1
   
2. 00:07:838 (2) - I suggest remove the finish from the repeat here. Have two finishes is too much, you only need the one on the end.
   
3. The patterns in this diff are far too straight and bland. The flow is not very nice for this soft song. Patterns like 00:31:171 (1,2) or 00:36:812 (2,3) or 00:39:377 (2,3,4,5) are confusing because of the overlap and do not fit well in a Normal diff imo. I recommend learning to use curves to make beautiful placements and nice flow, especially in a nice song like this.
   
4. You've copied entire sections and pasted them later in the map. I don't recommend doing this...I suggest that you remap these sections.

1. 00:06:556 (4) - Try a finish on the head here, seems nice.
   
2. 00:14:761 (5,6,1) - The reason I don't like this is because it's essentially the same placement as 00:10:659 (1,2,3) so it feels quite boring. The player repeats the same motion twice. I don't think a beginner will enjoy that much, try changing the placement the second time around here.
   
3. 01:01:941 (2) - Really funky slider. =w= Sliders like this are best when they represent an idea in the song. There is no unique thing in the music for slider to represent, so it seems a little awkward.
   
4. 01:09:120 (4) - You can move the slider left 1/2 and extend it by 1/2 to follow the vocals better. Then you could have a finish on the head of the slider. You could then repeat the same rhythm at 01:11:171 (2,3) which would be nice. Try it out:
   
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5. 01:11:171 (2) - I'd remove the finish here. It sounds awkward because it comes after the finish in the music.
   
6. 01:14:248 (1,2) - Switch the NC's here seems much nicer to follow the music.
   
7. 01:16:300 (2) - Finish missing on the head I suppose.
   
8. 01:20:402 (6,1) - Switch NC's, same reason as 01:14:248 (1,2).
   
9. 01:24:505 (4) - Try a NC to show the change in music here.
   
10. 01:40:915 to 02:02:454 - For 20 seconds here you repeat the same rhythm over and over again. Try to add variations which can follow the vocals and other changes in the song. It will make your map feel much nicer. For example, you could change 01:47:069 (1) into a 1/1 slider with a repeat to follow the vocals. Also some missing claps in this sections, check it please.
    
11. 03:41:941 - Since you copied this section from earlier in the map, I recommend remapping it to make it unique. It will make your map much more interesting.

MineC24 wrote:

Modding~ (Taiko, Insane diff only)

Naryuga's Taiko Muzukashii

LetterBox During breake : no check - done

00:17:325 (3) - imo, kat - I'll keep this don. I din't map here with vocal's pitch here and d also play fine imo
00:33:992 (3) - kat - sounds random with the kat...
01:47:838 (3) - don - okay. and changed the color arrange here
01:59:889 (4,1) - don - already.
02:23:736 (3) - imo, don - nice
03:08:351 (1) - kat - ok
04:01:941 (1) - remove finish - nope, the mood is very similar to 02:50:146 (1,1) - and they are with finish, so it's ok with this

Naryuga's Taiko Oni

LetterBox During breake : no check

00:09:633 (5) - remove this - ok
00:39:120 (1) - imo, kat - no
00:58:351 (1) - remove finish - I want follow the cymbal... ;w;
01:35:530 (2) - don - ok
01:39:889 (5) - remove this - done as well as the before
02:36:300 (1) - don - kat plays well enough and 02:32:197 (1) - does so
02:40:274 - imo, add don and 02:40:402 (4) - remove finish and kat - let me try this... will change with one more person's opinion though

GL