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alacat
Thanks ~

@Aka all fixed :3

http://puu.sh/bsxUK/1543d0aee7.zip
HabiHolic
NC Colour

[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,187,255
Combo2 : 112,209,183
Combo3 : 114,175,243
Combo4 : 253,151,158
Combo5 : 255,184,149
Combo6 : 128,128,255
IamKwaN
hai, as promised.

General

  1. metadata我要再confirm一下 但據我找到的資料 (TV size) 應該要刪除 還是你有reference?
  2. Snap the preview time to 00:45:819.
  3. Current combo colors are inconsistent.
  4. The spread is worrying, especially the gap between N & H and that of H & I. Personally, Hard should be easier. I need to discuss with other team members before pushing this set forward.

Insane

  1. 從00:04:165 開始 我覺得S:C2的clap的音量太高 雖然不至於跟音樂本身違和 但好像蓋過了音樂本身 能降低10~20%就好
  2. 00:24:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^
  3. 00:43:429 (1) - 尾巴的finish略吵 背景的cymbal比較小聲 建議降低20%音量 00:43:870 (2,3) 也是很吵 連續的音效往往發揮不了它的功效
  4. 00:44:312 (3) - 這些鼓點是1/4 snapped才對吧 然後那clap太吵了 像機關槍
  5. 00:45:856 (1,3) - 考慮加whistle?
  6. 01:02:841 - 這條綠線調整成70%如何? 我看第一個kiai都是70% 80%有點高
  7. 01:15:194 (2) - 3/4滑條有點彆扭 另外三個都是1/2 只有這個特別是3/4 kiai前面那些跟的是人聲以及沒有鼓點我覺得還可以 但這兒的背景鼓點還蠻明顯的 建議還是縮短成1/2吧
  8. 01:16:959 (3) - ^ Also applies on 01:20:047 (1).

alacat's Hard

  1. As I mentioned above, the gaps of NH and HI are imbalanced. So, I put my two cents in to help reduce the difficulty. First of all, I believe only mapping with slight jumps are efficient to decrease the star rating. So, some adjustments might be needed for these.
    SPOILER
    00:04:606 (2) -
    00:06:370 (2) -
    00:13:870 (3,4) -
    00:23:576 (1,2,3,4,5) -
    and many more.
    I see a lot of jumpy patterns up to 2.1x, which soars the rating a lot. Please consider rearranging some of these to polish the spread, as I strongly feel the current spread quite dangerous to be safely ranked. Or you can take a look at this map recently being unranked, https://osu.ppy.sh/s/193996
  2. 00:08:907 (4) - Delete the circle here? The stresses should lie on the drum and electronic guitar on red and white lines imo, and only very light guitar sound is heard on blue tick. Same applies on 01:15:966 (6).
  3. 00:43:650 - The finish on the tail is too noisy. Compared to 00:42:988, here isn't any vocals nor high volume cymbals in the background. Consider reducing the volume by 20%.
  4. 00:55:341 (1,3,4) - The angle between 1 and 3 might be too acute. Also, the orientation of 3 and 4 isn't quite aesthetic with both straight sliders. Try something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2056878
  5. Not much to say about the rhythm and hitsounds, the only issue which requires consideration is the placements, reducing the number of jumps and triplets are necessary in order to reach the spread standard of current mapping climate. Or else, one more light Hard is needed imo.

Flask's Normal

  1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為normal節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果
  2. 00:00:635 (2) - Whistle on head? Also, on tail of 00:01:959 (3) and head of 00:03:723 (5).
  3. 00:21:812 (1,2) - 我個人不太喜歡這種突然從鼓點轉換到人聲的手法 綜觀這段都沒有跟人聲的地方 所以這裡我聽著有點不舒服 http://puu.sh/bHCjf/0c3f1282f5.jpg
  4. 00:29:091 (2) - ^ Same for 00:50:047 (1,2,3) - 這個連clap的pattern都破壞了 and also 00:53:576 (1,2,3) -
  5. 00:45:856 (5) - 頭尾whistle?
  6. 00:45:635 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這段的密度有點誇張 考慮降低一下? http://puu.sh/bHCVl/fe2b47a5f0.jpg and also 00:59:973 (4,1,2,3,4) -
  7. 01:25:782 (1) - 可以在紅線開始

Easy

  1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為Easy節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果
Topic Starter
Dino99

IamKwaN wrote:

hai, as promised. owo/

General

  1. metadata我要再confirm一下 但據我找到的資料 (TV size) 應該要刪除 還是你有reference? fixed
  2. Snap the preview time to 00:45:819. Done
  3. Current combo colors are inconsistent. Hmm which color too dark?? or... why?? I think it's fine orz
  4. The spread is worrying, especially the gap between N & H and that of H & I. Personally, Hard should be easier. I need to discuss with other team members before pushing this set forward. ok~ QAQ

Insane

  1. 從00:04:165 開始 我覺得S:C2的clap的音量太高 雖然不至於跟音樂本身違和 但好像蓋過了音樂本身 能降低10~20%就好 OK
  2. 00:24:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^ here I think it's ok.... :3
  3. 00:43:429 (1) - 尾巴的finish略吵 背景的cymbal比較小聲 建議降低20%音量 00:43:870 (2,3) 也是很吵 連續的音效往往發揮不了它的功效 FIXED!!
  4. 00:44:312 (3) - 這些鼓點是1/4 snapped才對吧 然後那clap太吵了 像機關槍 噗 好像真的是1/4.. 可是這樣我覺得1/6聽起來還不錯 如果你也覺得還行 我不太想改囧~~ O3Oa (降低10%音量了~)
  5. 00:45:856 (1,3) - 考慮加whistle? 嗯嗯 後面那個圈也加了
  6. 01:02:841 - 這條綠線調整成70%如何? 我看第一個kiai都是70% 80%有點高 OK!
  7. 01:15:194 (2) - 3/4滑條有點彆扭 另外三個都是1/2 只有這個特別是3/4 kiai前面那些跟的是人聲以及沒有鼓點我覺得還可以 但這兒的背景鼓點還蠻明顯的 建議還是縮短成1/2吧 這裡我覺得還行>_> 想做些變化哈哈~
  8. 01:16:959 (3) - ^ Also applies on 01:20:047 (1). ^

Flask's Normal

  1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為normal節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果 嘛 你說的對 是沒I的效果<_< 但我覺得還OK拉 聽起來還行 Sorry拉o.o"
  2. 00:00:635 (2) - Whistle on head? Also, on tail of 00:01:959 (3) and head of 00:03:723 (5). added!!
  3. 00:21:812 (1,2) - 我個人不太喜歡這種突然從鼓點轉換到人聲的手法 綜觀這段都沒有跟人聲的地方 所以這裡我聽著有點不舒服 http://puu.sh/bHCjf/0c3f1282f5.jpg @@我覺得這裡還行耶 打起來也ok sorry!
  4. 00:29:091 (2) - ^ Same for 00:50:047 (1,2,3) - 這個連clap的pattern都破壞了 and also 00:53:576 (1,2,3) - 嘛 跟vocal我覺得還行拉 clap也都有加到 應該沒問題唄<_>
  5. 00:45:856 (5) - 頭尾whistle? nice ww
  6. 00:45:635 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這段的密度有點誇張 考慮降低一下? http://puu.sh/bHCVl/fe2b47a5f0.jpg and also 00:59:973 (4,1,2,3,4) - 我覺得還好 不會很難 這歌也蠻慢的~ ok的xD
  7. 01:25:782 (1) - 可以在紅線開始 ok changed!

Easy

  1. S:C2 clap有點違和 我覺得S:C1 clap比較合適 因為Easy節奏稀疏 很難營造像Insane的效果 同Normal摟 覺得還行!
謝謝拉!!~ wwww :D
alacat
ok, I removed some jumps and notes for spread :>

http://puu.sh/bNi3d/3745040a81.zip
Topic Starter
Dino99
ww updated!
IamKwaN
[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/bXtx0/bfbcfe0a0a.png
[Insane]
  1. 00:44:312 (6,7) - 我個人還是主張這兒跟鼓點放1/4 比現在舒服多了
Topic Starter
Dino99

IamKwaN wrote:

[General]
  1. http://puu.sh/bXtx0/bfbcfe0a0a.png
[Insane]
  1. 00:44:312 (6,7) - 我個人還是主張這兒跟鼓點放1/4 比現在舒服多了
Fixed!!~ :D
IamKwaN
Beep.
Topic Starter
Dino99

IamKwaN wrote:

Beep.
\Yay/~~~ thx!! :>
HabiHolic
\Yay/!!!
Umi
hi there :3/ kaichou wa maid sama, it bring me back lot of memories~

Easy

  1. 00:23:576 (3) - rythm is awkward to me cuz you're skipping a important beat with a finish and also a strong vocal 00:24:459 - , so i recommend u one of these rythms
  2. 00:32:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - using 3 times in a row the same rythm isn't it a bit boring ? how about diversify, example :
  3. 00:51:812 (3) - and 01:05:929 (3) - pretty much the same reflexion as 00:23:576 (3) -
  4. 01:22:473 - it shouldn't be SC:1 ? considering your clap's pattern.

Flask's Normal

  1. 00:00:194 (1,2) - flow is kinda messed here, i'd turn the pattern like this
  2. 00:00:635 (2,3) - idk if it's intentional but they're not perfectly parallel
  3. 00:31:518 (5) - Delete the reverse and add a note 00:32:400 - cuz it's where the NC should start and cuz it's a strong beat who need the click action.
  4. 01:02:179 (3,4) - move them to x:68,y:108 to increase the flow.
  5. 01:22:473 - same as easy diff
  6. 01:22:694 (3) - forgot a clap ?

Alacat's Hard

  1. 00:14:532 - add a note it feel empty, you can stack it with 00:13:429 (2) - for example.
  2. 00:12:768 (8,1) - keep the DS consistent between these two (1,2x), it doesn't need a jump imo
  3. 00:11:003 (1,2,3) - NC should be on (3) swap them
  4. 00:18:062 (1,2,3) - ^ (fix the others as well, there is still 8 of them, i'll skip them from now on)
  5. 00:28:429 (4) - move this note to x:392,y:208 this jump is quite large imo
  6. 00:29:532 (4,6) - stack them, so it reduce the jump between (5) and (6) and give a better flow
  7. 00:35:929 - unnecessary green line, delete it
  8. 00:48:723 (3,4) - i'd reduce the DS.

Insane

  1. Increase AR to 8,5 for a better also it makes the whole diff easier to read imo
  2. 00:16:959 (1) - and 00:17:400 (1) - these NC aren't really needed
  3. 00:24:900 - reduce the volum to 30%, too noisy
  4. 00:24:459 (1) - delete NC
  5. 00:29:312 (1,1,1) - ^ no particular reason to have NC here (no SV Change or anti-jump)
  6. 00:42:106 (1) - and 00:43:429 (1) - same as above
  7. 01:02:179 - i don't really understand why u increased the SV here, it's acutally the same vocal as 01:01:297 - a normal SV would fit better. have a look at this pattern
  8. 01:24:679 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC again
  9. 01:24:459 - volum down to 45%
  10. 01:24:900 - ^ to 55%

sweet set, call me back~
Topic Starter
Dino99

Umi wrote:

hi there :3/ kaichou wa maid sama, it bring me back lot of memories~ Yes >w</

Easy

  1. 00:23:576 (3) - rythm is awkward to me cuz you're skipping a important beat with a finish and also a strong vocal 00:24:459 - , so i recommend u one of these rythms Hmm~ I changed to another pattern~ and I think it's better!! owo
  2. 00:32:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - using 3 times in a row the same rythm isn't it a bit boring ? how about diversify, example :
    Hmm yes maybe a bit boring lol But as a Easy Diff~ for beginner, I think it's more clear and easy to with the same beat here!! so... Sorry <.>
  3. 00:51:812 (3) - and 01:05:929 (3) - pretty much the same reflexion as 00:23:576 (3) - Here I think these rhythm are fine and fit the music >.< Sorry
  4. 01:22:473 - it shouldn't be SC:1 ? considering your clap's pattern. Fixed!!

Flask's Normal

  1. 00:00:194 (1,2) - flow is kinda messed here, i'd turn the pattern like this Changed~~ :3
  2. 00:00:635 (2,3) - idk if it's intentional but they're not perfectly parallel Fixed, parellel now~~~
  3. 00:31:518 (5) - Delete the reverse and add a note 00:32:400 - cuz it's where the NC should start and cuz it's a strong beat who need the click action. Fixed!
  4. 01:02:179 (3,4) - move them to x:68,y:108 to increase the flow. Here I think the flow is okay~~ :3
  5. 01:22:473 - same as easy diff Sure~~~
  6. 01:22:694 (3) - forgot a clap ? ww Added~~

Insane

  1. Increase AR to 8,5 for a better also it makes the whole diff easier to read imo Okay~~
  2. 00:16:959 (1) - and 00:17:400 (1) - these NC aren't really needed Okay removed~ lool
  3. 00:24:900 - reduce the volum to 30%, too noisy I think it's not too loud here... Okay reduce 5% volume~~ owo
  4. 00:24:459 (1) - delete NC Hmm.. no~ I think this NC fit the music and the finish hitsound!!
  5. 00:29:312 (1,1,1) - ^ no particular reason to have NC here (no SV Change or anti-jump) Hmm yes it's unneeded... but I like here, I think it looks more colorful xDD If it's not neceessary to change, I wanna keep now sorry Q.Q
  6. 00:42:106 (1) - and 00:43:429 (1) - same as above Hmm... Same as above~~ >.<a
  7. 01:02:179 - i don't really understand why u increased the SV here, it's acutally the same vocal as 01:01:297 - a normal SV would fit better. have a look at this pattern Hmm I wanna blanket it~~~ yay your suggestion is nice too >.< But I still wanna keep this, maybe for more fun~~~ Sorry <_>
  8. 01:24:679 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC again Looks more colorful~~~~~~~~~~~ Orz /me runs
  9. 01:24:459 - volum down to 45% 55% (Reduce 10%) I wanna make the end more powerful~~ I think 45% is too quite xD
  10. 01:24:900 - ^ to 55% 65%

P.S: Easy, Normal, Insane, I changed some hitsounds at 00:18:282 - These part (I use Drum and I think it sounds better :3/) Hope you think so~~~~~~~~~ o/

sweet set, call me back~
Thank YOU Umi!!!~~~~ OwO/
Waiting for alacat~~ ww
alacat
fixed all points and changed new combo patterns! Thanks Umi :3! not Alacat lol

http://puu.sh/cnA45/3171eddebe.zip
Topic Starter
Dino99
Updated!!! :3
Umi
We fixed some HS/patterns/SV changes through IRC

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2014-10-24 01:12 Umi: rechecking atm
2014-10-24 01:13 12BARRY21: ww yay~ :> Is it still ok to be qualifield??? xDD
2014-10-24 01:13 12BARRY21: ACTION feels sorry orz
2014-10-24 01:13 Umi: yeah HS change doesn't need pop
2014-10-24 01:14 Umi: but could u tell when u're susing D:C1 ?
2014-10-24 01:14 12BARRY21: yay!!~~~~ >w<
2014-10-24 01:14 12BARRY21: ok~
2014-10-24 01:14 12BARRY21: 00:18:282 - Here
2014-10-24 01:15 12BARRY21: to 00:27:106 -
2014-10-24 01:15 12BARRY21: owo
2014-10-24 01:15 Umi: that's strange cuz it's S:C1 for me
2014-10-24 01:15 12BARRY21: Oh you need to ReDL Orz
2014-10-24 01:16 Umi: i already did
2014-10-24 01:16 Umi: http://puu.sh/cnZhw/3500547e7b.png
2014-10-24 01:17 Umi: still S:C1
2014-10-24 01:17 12BARRY21: OOPS
2014-10-24 01:17 12BARRY21: 00:20:047 -
2014-10-24 01:17 12BARRY21: Here = =
2014-10-24 01:17 Umi: ah k
2014-10-24 01:17 12BARRY21: ..... xD
2014-10-24 01:18 12BARRY21: :3
2014-10-24 01:19 Umi: well i saw that u rejected my suggestion here
2014-10-24 01:19 Umi: 01:02:179 (1) -
2014-10-24 01:19 Umi: but this SV change doesn't make sense to me
2014-10-24 01:20 12BARRY21: Hmm I think it fit the music here >.< and it's more fun~~
2014-10-24 01:20 Umi: why does it fit the music ? :/
2014-10-24 01:21 Umi: it's exactly the same as 01:01:297 -
2014-10-24 01:21 Umi: i didn't expect this SV change during the play
2014-10-24 01:21 Umi: it suprised me though
2014-10-24 01:22 12BARRY21: Hmm let me consider a second~~ x33
2014-10-24 01:22 12BARRY21: i wanna wrap it nicely~ don't wanna stack Q.Q
2014-10-24 01:23 Umi: i see take your time to find a idea :3
2014-10-24 01:23 12BARRY21: !!
2014-10-24 01:23 12BARRY21: Thx for understanding ><
2014-10-24 01:23 12BARRY21: ^^
2014-10-24 01:24 Umi: poke me when you're done
2014-10-24 01:27 12BARRY21: Hmm?? What thing?? o"o
2014-10-24 01:27 12BARRY21: oh lol
2014-10-24 01:27 Umi: to fix this
2014-10-24 01:37 12BARRY21: OK!
2014-10-24 01:37 12BARRY21: Sorry for waiting x3
2014-10-24 01:37 Umi: Np alright let me check
2014-10-24 01:38 12BARRY21: owowowowowo
2014-10-24 01:39 12BARRY21: I just do your suggestion~ Stack is not bad actually :>
2014-10-24 01:39 Umi: yeah that's cool =w=b
2014-10-24 01:39 Umi: 00:28:870 (1,1,1,1) -
2014-10-24 01:40 Umi: for this patttern it'd be cool to play with SV don't u think ?
2014-10-24 01:40 Umi: let me show u
2014-10-24 01:40 12BARRY21: Yes it's cool!!
2014-10-24 01:40 12BARRY21: lol
2014-10-24 01:40 12BARRY21: With SV change?
2014-10-24 01:40 Umi: yeah increasing SV
2014-10-24 01:40 Umi: each slider
2014-10-24 01:41 12BARRY21: OK let me change now~~ x)
2014-10-24 01:41 Umi: like 1,00 > 1,15 > 1,30 > 1,45
2014-10-24 01:41 12BARRY21: Cool
2014-10-24 01:41 12BARRY21: !!
2014-10-24 01:42 Umi: it'd look like this http://puu.sh/co0Zu/1ed8dbe7ff.jpg // http://puu.sh/co10I/33e798ed65.jpg
2014-10-24 01:43 12BARRY21: so Pro xD
2014-10-24 01:45 Umi: i can give u the code for the pattern if u want
2014-10-24 01:47 12BARRY21: Hmm almost done >w<
2014-10-24 01:47 12BARRY21: no need I think :P
2014-10-24 01:47 Umi: k :3
2014-10-24 01:48 12BARRY21: But... here
2014-10-24 01:48 12BARRY21: 00:30:635 (1,2,3,4) -
2014-10-24 01:48 12BARRY21: Too close orz 00:30:635 (1) -
2014-10-24 01:48 Umi: just move it a bit up
2014-10-24 01:48 12BARRY21: OK~
2014-10-24 01:49 Umi: http://puu.sh/co1q7/aedeedd703.jpg
2014-10-24 01:51 12BARRY21: www
2014-10-24 01:55 12BARRY21: Hmm done >.<
2014-10-24 01:56 12BARRY21: I add finsh xD
2014-10-24 01:56 12BARRY21: Reduce 10% volume and add finsh lol
2014-10-24 01:56 Umi: k wait a bit doing something atm back in 6-7min
2014-10-24 01:56 12BARRY21: ok!!
2014-10-24 02:06 Umi: k back
2014-10-24 02:07 12BARRY21: >w<
2014-10-24 02:08 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/264402 heidi. - Loop [alacat's Hard]]
2014-10-24 02:08 Umi: 01:02:179 (1,2) -
2014-10-24 02:08 12BARRY21: 00:31:518 - Hmm... I'm just thinking maybe I should follow the Drum here like alacat?? Orz
2014-10-24 02:08 Umi: switch NC
2014-10-24 02:09 Umi: well it' up to u
2014-10-24 02:09 Umi: both are acceptable
2014-10-24 02:10 12BARRY21: ok wait me a second =w=a
2014-10-24 02:10 12BARRY21: hmm
2014-10-24 02:10 12BARRY21: Don't wanna remove >.<
2014-10-24 02:10 12BARRY21: ACTION runs
2014-10-24 02:11 Umi: k then keep it
2014-10-24 02:11 12BARRY21: I just thik it's fine sorry >.<
2014-10-24 02:11 Umi: it's okay not a problem imo
2014-10-24 02:11 Umi: did u fix the NC in alacat diff ?
2014-10-24 02:12 12BARRY21: hmm??
2014-10-24 02:12 12BARRY21: alacat fix by herself?? lol
2014-10-24 02:13 Umi: 01:02:179 (1,2) -
2014-10-24 02:13 Umi: for a NC you can fix it though
2014-10-24 02:13 Umi: i guess she forgot this one
2014-10-24 02:13 Umi: nc should on 2 not on 1
2014-10-24 02:13 Umi: be*
2014-10-24 02:15 12BARRY21: sure!!
2014-10-24 02:15 Umi: ok update and we're good to go
2014-10-24 02:17 12BARRY21: Sure!! But is here really looks fine?? >3<a 00:30:635 -
2014-10-24 02:17 Umi: yeah i already saw it
2014-10-24 02:17 Umi: play good
2014-10-24 02:18 12BARRY21: OK!
2014-10-24 02:18 12BARRY21: Updateddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd x3
2014-10-24 02:20 12BARRY21: hmm wait a second I got a idea lol
2014-10-24 02:20 12BARRY21: orz
2014-10-24 02:20 Umi: lol k
2014-10-24 02:24 12BARRY21: done ww
2014-10-24 02:24 12BARRY21: 00:31:297 (4) - Just changed this
2014-10-24 02:24 Umi: let me see o3o
2014-10-24 02:24 12BARRY21: hmm don't know is it flow better? Q.Q
2014-10-24 02:25 Umi: yup it flow better
2014-10-24 02:25 Umi: but i'd stack 00:31:959 (1) - with 00:32:400 (1) -
2014-10-24 02:26 12BARRY21: Hmm glad to hear that Q.Q
2014-10-24 02:26 12BARRY21: I don't wanna stack~ owoa
2014-10-24 02:26 12BARRY21: sorry x3
2014-10-24 02:26 Umi: kk
2014-10-24 02:27 12BARRY21: >w<
2014-10-24 02:27 12BARRY21: I'm ready :>
2014-10-24 02:27 Umi: quick recheck
2014-10-24 02:28 12BARRY21: >"<
2014-10-24 02:29 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/286099 heidi. - Loop [Flask's Normal]]
2014-10-24 02:29 12BARRY21: ok :3
2014-10-24 02:29 Umi: 00:00:194 - up volum to 30% and add whistle on head
2014-10-24 02:30 Umi: 20% is too low
2014-10-24 02:31 Umi: 00:01:959 (3) - whistle on head as well
2014-10-24 02:32 12BARRY21: done
2014-10-24 02:32 12BARRY21: lol
2014-10-24 02:32 12BARRY21: But my Insane 20% too then is it ok?
2014-10-24 02:32 Umi: ah nop
2014-10-24 02:32 Umi: change it to 30% too
2014-10-24 02:32 12BARRY21: o.O
2014-10-24 02:32 12BARRY21: Sure :)
2014-10-24 02:32 Umi: same for easy
2014-10-24 02:34 12BARRY21: DONEEEE

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