1. Easy (1,56 stars, 143 notes)
2. Hard (4,93 stars, 346 notes)
3. Normal (3 stars, 188 notes)

Andrea wrote:

I'd love some mods if possible

1. Add some more tags like remix techno. So, we'll find your map easier.
2. That'd be great if you cut at least 5-10% of your mp3 in the end. So, we won't DL extra data, that is NOT used at all!
3. You have a lot of bright colours, they don't really fit with calm music and soft colours on BG. What's more, bright colours may hurt players' eyes!
4. 2000 ms lead in is enough. No need to make players wait too long.
5. 00:03:428 - 00:10:285 - echo from the piano fades here. That'd be great if you drag here end of your break!

1. Well, I'd say that even for such a relaxing song HP Drain 1 is too low. Consider using HP1 to keep diff spread more balanced.
2. Every time I see CS2 I feel bad about beginners. Notes are HUGE, that really looks boring. Try CS3 because even beginners need something challenging sometimes
3. 00:18:000 (3,1) - nazi - you could make an awesome blanket here. Instead of this you do strange flow and place (1) too close to (3)'s reverse arrow. It kinda breaks your soft and awesome flow here.
4. 00:24:857 (1) - sounds like this circle isn't really needed here, consider removing it to follow only loud piano sounds.
5. 00:28:285 (1,2) - I'd replace them with 1/1 sliders to emphasize piano sounds here. Anyway, your rhythm sounds a bit... off when you ignore LOUD piano beats. try to follow piano a bit closer
6. 00:44:571 (2) - amost the same as 00:18:000 (3,1) - instead of making a neat and cute blanket you place it TOO close to reverse arrow. Move (2) away from reverse arrow or beginners may mistakenly click it.
7. 01:08:142 (1) - replace it with two circles, so start of kiai will have circle which fits here much better. example 1 / example 2.
   Note: just poke me if you'll need code! Anyway, you're quite skilled, so you can do it without my help.
   Note2: same goes for 02:06:428 (1) -
8. 01:21:428 (2,3,4) - try to avoid overlaps like this one. Numbers are visible, but beginners are stressed, so they will click (4) instead of (3). :<
   Note: 02:19:714 (2,3,4) - same :< someone does some copypasta again :<

1. If you agreed to change HP Drain on Easy, do the same here. These emty spaces won't kill players, anyway.
2. 00:00:428 - 00:02:142 - 00:07:285 - 00:09:000 - 00:15:000 - you don't have to ignore these beats! There're a lot of ways to map them, for example reversed 1/1 sliders or something. For example, beat at 00:15:000 - could be mapped in interesting way. example
3. 00:54:214 - missed a note here? I guess it meant to be 1/2 triplet. At least it SOUNDS like 1/2 triplet.
4. 01:07:285 (3) - not exactly sure, but I'd place a new combo. end of kiai and etc.. well, it needs NC here, imo
   Note: 02:05:571 (3) - uguuu. Copypasta here.
5. 01:32:143 (1,3) - nazi - it's your 180+th map! You know how to make nice blankets, so make them here! It'll improve your flow!

1. First of all, I sjhould say that you're a bit overusing 1/4 notes. This is [Hard] diff and song is relaxing, so.. yeah.. more 1/4 sliders would work here better.
2. 00:06:750 - 1/4 note here? I feel like you should map these sounds, this is hardesrt diff of the mapset, after all!
3. 00:37:285 (5) - how about placing a new combo here? Looks like it'd fit with vocals quite good.
4. 01:06:428 (1,3) - swap NCs here to emphasize end of kiai. what's more you can replace 01:06:857 (3,4) - with circles to follow clapping sound better
   
   It's a nice diff, but it's too much like your previous maps. People will rage again, so I'd recommend you to try something new for next map, it's not like something wrong with your current style. But people really need something new. Yuserrating of your previous maps says it's quite clear. ;_;

1. Red - Unrankable
2. Purple - Highly recommended
3. Black - Just suggestion

• General

1. 00:44:571 - I think from here hitsound volume can increase slowly
   
   Easy
2. 00:02:571 (2) - delete whistle at end
3. 00:09:428 (2) - ^
4. 01:14:571 (1) - NC
5. 01:15:857 (2,3) - move these a little right for better looking?
6. 01:46:714 (3) - move this a little down?
   
   Normal
7. 00:26:571 (1) - NC move to 00:27:857 (2) -
8. 00:35:142 (1) - NC move to 00:36:000 (2) -
9. 02:00:428 (2) - move this a little down?
   
   Hard
10. from 00:00:000 - to 00:09:857 - keep 13whistle? (Your Easy and Normal keep 13whistle)
11. 00:25:714 (6) - move this up to keep a straight of 00:25:285 (4,5) -
12. 01:39:857 (2,3) -
    What about this?

    

1. Clean~

1. 00:42:000 (1,2) - Blanket this so it will be like this http://puu.sh/3kF2u.jpg ? Current pattern is kinda awkward to see..
2. 01:40:286 (1,2) - Same ^, i see you copy pasta this xD
3. 01:53:143 (1,2) - Touch the hp bar, it will be good if you move this sliders a bit down.

1. 01:46:714 (3,1) - Switch NC here, not consistant with your previous NC.
2. 01:48:428 (4,1) - ^
3. 02:00:857 (3) - This combo is too long, you can add a NC here.
4. Oh well, check your NC again at previous pattern, since you just copy paste it again xD

1. 00:33:285 (4) - Ugh, 1/12 slider pop out so suddenly, this is seriously hard to read. I suggest you just remove this slider repeat 00:32:142 (3) - then add a new slider at 00:33:000 - but end at 00:33:285 -. Then you can add a new circle here at 00:33:428 - . This rhythm is much better to read for player.
2. 00:42:642 (3,4,5,6,1) - Can you move this down a bit? Almost touch the hp bar
3. 00:50:142 (5,1) - ^ This one too~
4. 01:44:571 (5,6) - Same problem with previous 1/12 slider.
5. 02:17:142 (1,2) - This one almost touch the hp bar too.

1. Clean some codes and that produced a bit of overload in the SB

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"Love.jpg",320,240
 F,0,-2571,0,0,1
 M,0,0,,320,240
 S,0,0,,0.818225
 F,0,0,12857,1
 F,0,12857,13714,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Calm1.jpg",320,240
 S,0,13285,,0.8
 F,0,13285,13714,0,1
 F,0,13714,54000,1
 F,0,54000,54857,1,0
 F,0,54857,,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Happy1.jpg",320,240
 S,0,54642,,0.8
 F,0,54642,54857,0,1
 F,0,54857,81857,1
 F,0,81857,82285,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Happy2.jpg",320,240
 S,0,112928,,0.8
 F,0,112928,113142,0,1
 F,0,113142,139928,1
 F,0,139928,140571,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Calm2.jpg",320,240
 S,0,85285,,0.8
 F,0,85285,85928,0,1
 F,0,85928,112500,1
 F,0,112500,113142,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\End.jpg",320,240
 S,0,140357,,0.8
 F,0,140357,141000,0,0.5228403
 F,0,141000,154071,0.5228403,0.4915504
 F,0,154071,154285,0.4915504,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Text.png",320,240
 M,0,140357,,320,380
 S,0,140357,,0.7
 F,0,140357,140785,0,1
 F,0,140785,154071,1
 F,0,154071,154285,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

• • Metti il nome dell'eroge da dove hai preso le immagini della SB nelle tags.
  • Perchè così tanti colori delle combo? Non sono necessari e alcuni poi sono simili fra loro, se vuoi usarne così tanti che ne dici di usare solo i 7 colori dell'arcobaleno?
  • Mi sarei aspettato due immagini diverse per ogni kiai, avere un fade nero per poi rivedere la stessa immagine non mi piace, al limite se non vuoi usare altre immagini togli il fade.
  • Io ridurrei il volume degli hitsounds ancora un pò, mi sembra troppo alto, le parti a 50% mettile a 30~40% e quelle a 80% a 60~70%.
  • Nella Easy e nella Normal metà diff è copypastata, perchè? Rivedere le stesse pattern due volte è noioso, si capisce che è tutto capovolto mentre si gioca e che le pattern sono uguali, posso capire copypastare i kiai se la melodia è uguale ma non intere parti di mappa.

• • 00:35:142 (1,2,3) - Perchè sta pattern dritta stile 2009? Sposta i cerchi e prova a creare un triangolo:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:20:571 (1,2,3) - ^ qua prova a fare una pattern a rombo:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:16:285 (1) - Usa 00:14:571 (3) capovolto orizzontalmente/verticalmente per un flow migliore.
  • 00:32:142 (2) - Spostalo a x:256 y:56.
  • 00:46:714 (1,2,3) - Non mi piace il flow qui, prova a fare qualcos'altro:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:22:285 (3) - Stackalo col (2) o muovilo a x:256 y:256.

• • AR 8 con una canzone così calma? 7 sta meglio con l'attuale bpm imo.
  • 01:57:857 (1,2,3,4,5) - Prova a ridurre ancora un pò lo spacing come hai fatto con gli stream precedenti.
  • 02:02:785 (2,3,4) - ^ usa sempre lo stesso spacing.
  • 02:04:714 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  • 02:05:142 (5,6) - Prova a centrare questa pattern oppure fai qualcosa di diverso, trovo che questa pattern attualmente sia forzata e fuori luogo.