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Persona - Area 184

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Topic Starter
Angelic Force
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, 23 June 2013 at 3:48:14 PM

Artist: Persona
Title: Area 184
Source: Cytus
Tags: Apple Android iPhone Rhythm Game Rayark
BPM: 184
Filesize: 2223kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.98 stars, 368 notes)
Download: Persona - Area 184
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Modding needed!
Song: Area 184
Source: Cytus
Difficulties: Hard by me
More difficulties in progress.
Guest difficulties welcome :D
Important changes
SPOILER
17/6/13 - 'Million Master' difficulty mapped
22/6/13 - Changed 'Million Master' difficulty to 'Hard' difficulty
Cobra
Uh, M4M here

General
To be honest I think the combo colors should all be blue themed or something, the current colors don't fit with the BG imo.
You used the largest grid size for most of the map... you should usually use the smallest grid size. Don't be afraid to lower the grid size.
It looks like there is a lot of distance issues in the Insane diff, you should use it most of the time, even if it's an Insane diff. This distance is just horribly confusing and you will see me point out some issues below.

Million Master
Like I said, the distance is horribly confusing. Please be consistent in your spacing.
00:07:080 (3) - distance from previous note too small
00:08:384 (3) - ^
00:09:689 (5,6) - weird distance...
00:10:993 (5,6) - ^
00:12:298 (3) - ^
00:13:602 (3) - ^
00:14:906 (5) - ^
Loving these copy paste patterns
Well, I'm done pointing out distance errors, they're pretty much everywhere, so you can go ahead and fix the whole map after understanding the points above.

00:16:700 (1) - try using more hitsounds, instead of just claps
00:39:852 (6) - not stacked perfectly on the slider reverse.
00:41:156 (8) - ^
00:46:048 (1) - this stream has a weird curve at the end, try to make a nice curve all the way through.
01:28:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - way too confusing/harder than the rest of the map.
2 more patterns like that up ahead...
02:03:656 (1) - try adding a timing point here and lowering the volume.

Well, good luck.
sheela
Hi! M4M. Maybe my suggestions aren't useful but I will try.
[quote="Cobra]This distance is just horribly confusing and you will see me point out some issues below.[/quote]
Yes. It is true.

It's short 'cause I'm kind of a new modder.
[Million Master]
00:19:309 (7) - New combo
00:56:401 (11) - New combo
01:28:439 - 02:03:656 - Kiai Time?
Topic Starter
Angelic Force

Cobra wrote:

Uh, M4M here

General
To be honest I think the combo colors should all be blue themed or something, the current colors don't fit with the BG imo.
You used the largest grid size for most of the map... you should usually use the smallest grid size. Don't be afraid to lower the grid size.
It looks like there is a lot of distance issues in the Insane diff, you should use it most of the time, even if it's an Insane diff. This distance is just horribly confusing and you will see me point out some issues below.

Million Master
Like I said, the distance is horribly confusing. Please be consistent in your spacing.
00:07:080 (3) - distance from previous note too small
00:08:384 (3) - ^
00:09:689 (5,6) - weird distance...
00:10:993 (5,6) - ^
00:12:298 (3) - ^
00:13:602 (3) - ^
00:14:906 (5) - ^
Loving these copy paste patterns Not sure if this is sarcasm lol.
Well, I'm done pointing out distance errors, they're pretty much everywhere, so you can go ahead and fix the whole map after understanding the points above. Fixed most spacing inconsistencies, except for the parts meant to be hard.

00:16:700 (1) - try using more hitsounds, instead of just claps Will fix when I think of a suitable hitsound pattern for the song.
00:39:852 (6) - not stacked perfectly on the slider reverse. Fixed due to using distance snap.
00:41:156 (8) - ^
00:46:048 (1) - this stream has a weird curve at the end, try to make a nice curve all the way through. Fixed.
01:28:439 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - way too confusing/harder than the rest of the map.
2 more patterns like that up ahead... Well, it is meant to be an insane map after all, I toned down the jumps and made the patterns slightly less confusing though.
02:03:656 (1) - try adding a timing point here and lowering the volume. Fixed.

Well, good luck. Thanks!
Topic Starter
Angelic Force

sheela901 wrote:

Hi! M4M. Maybe my suggestions aren't useful but I will try.

It's short 'cause I'm kind of a new modder.
[Million Master]
00:19:309 (7) - New combo Fixed.
00:56:401 (11) - New combo Fixed.
01:28:439 - 02:03:656 - Kiai Time? Added, but only the hard jumpy part, not until the end of the song.
Thanks, I'll mod your map tomorrow :D
Tiger Jackie
00:17:026 - A circle wouldn't be a bad idea here
00:31:700 (3,4,5,6) - Move them a bit so they don't fully overlap
00:42:135 (10) - Not sure if it was a purpose but 10 is peeking out of the grid
00:45:233 - The 2click streams don't fit the music ( Not fully )
00:57:053 - The stream should end here so add one more circle
01:09:944 - (Optional) There is 3 of these sliders in your bm, make this one shorter with more repeats
01:50:531 - Idk if it's supposed to be symmetrical but if yes then it isn't

Otherwise I'm happy with this map ^^
Good luck with it :)
Topic Starter
Angelic Force

hornex wrote:

00:17:026 - A circle wouldn't be a bad idea here Circle added.
00:31:700 (3,4,5,6) - Move them a bit so they don't fully overlap Fixed.
00:42:135 (10) - Not sure if it was a purpose but 10 is peeking out of the grid Fixed, moved it slightly in.
00:45:233 - The 2click streams don't fit the music ( Not fully ) Fixed, tried a new beat pattern.
00:57:053 - The stream should end here so add one more circle Circle added.
01:09:944 - (Optional) There is 3 of these sliders in your bm, make this one shorter with more repeats Felt these fitted with the music nicely, extra repeats would add unneccessary beats.
01:50:531 - Idk if it's supposed to be symmetrical but if yes then it isn't It's just supposed to look like an 'A', so doesn't matter.

Otherwise I'm happy with this map ^^
Good luck with it :) Thanks!
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