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JauiPlaY diff
00:14:251 (8) - slider尾巴缩短2格到00:14:472 -
00:14:692 - 到00:16:016 - 每个红条和白条放NOTE...
形状大致为这2张图 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/868267 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/868272
我认为这样比较好,至于摆放问题我能力有限...相信你有很多的经验...就不说了
00:27:928 (1) - 我个人认为摆到X120 Y108会看起来舒服一点,00:28:810 (2,3) - 这2个也搬过去...
00:45:575 (1,2) - 改成slider
00:46:457 (1,2) - 同上
00:47:339 (1,2) - 同上
因为后面有太多note所以应该先放几个滑条缓冲一下...否则这一段全是NOTE了...
01:04:104 (1,2,3) - slider reverse
01:42:487 (3) - 尾巴缩短到01:42:707 -
01:42:928 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 为什么不和前面01:41:163 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一样呢?
02:04:104 (1,1) - 缩短距离
02:04:545 (1,1) - 同上
02:36:751 (5) - reverse
02:37:192 (6) - 删掉 这里和开头00:14:251 (8,1,2,3,4) - 节奏一样,所以我觉得应该在同一个节奏结束就可以了。图http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/868480 如果不行的话在02:37:413 - 到02:37:634 - 这里加个slider 图http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/868476 不要吐槽我的摆放位置,随便摆的,你应该知道怎么摆好...
03:20:869 (1) - 到03:21:310 (2) - 和03:21:310 (2) - 到03:21:751 (1) -为什么距离不一致?建议03:20:869 (1,2) - 这2个缩短距离或者拉长03:21:310 (2,1) - 这2个距离,我推荐前面那个方案
就这样了,第一次帮人MOD,很蠢,顺便求原谅,希望能帮助你...
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M4M req
BG竟然不是巨乳
为何你的图如此屌?

Cah-m's Normal
00:37:634 (1,2,3) - why overlap..I think you should avoid overlap in normal
03:30:575 (1,2,3) - ^

Hard
为什么kiai不加多点whistle,如果加多了请务必在03:23:516 (1) - 尾端whistle,巨爽
00:56:163 加个note过渡感觉好
还有一个地也是
03:37:413 (5) - 像这样的结尾不考虑加一个叮铃铃的音效么,比如http://puu.sh/3DZv8.wav。。最近我好像特喜欢给人推荐这个。。

JauiPakyin
kiai多加whistle啊 =。=
00:04:987 (1) - 这个NC以后面点吧
00:09:398 (1) - 用不着NC吧
01:51:751 (1) - 为何不叠在前面的滑条尾
01:54:619 (5) - 没叠好是故意的么
02:10:722 (2) - 有点远?
02:07:634卧槽这段有点NC spam的感觉减一点?

摸不出啥;w;
posted
hi.this my simple mod

Cah-m's Normal

00:03:663 - add circle[if you want place]

01:45:354 - add circle

02:08:075 - add circle


Hard

00:54:509 - 00:54:950 - how about try add slider, remove the circle 3,4

you have six object not snapped .__. be sure you fix it


Hard

00:04:766 (2) - why not added new combo?

00:05:869 - reduce slider then add note

02:09:398 (1) - why you add finish? o3o

03:27:707 - add circle

this is only my mod..hope this helpful
posted
[Cah-m's Normal]
02:19:104 (4) - 第一个点移到x460 y176
02:19:987 (1) - 没有blanket好
03:10:722 (1) - 移到x416 y256
[Hard]
00:16:457 (7) - NC?
01:11:163 (1,2,3,4) - 改成whistle来强调效果会好点
02:04:986 (3,4,5,6) - 这部分考虑用些whistle来加强原曲中的铃铃声
02:09:177 (7) - 感觉可以删掉
02:28:810 (4) - whistle?
03:19:987 (4,5,6) - ^
03:27:045 (3) - ^
[JauiPakyin]
00:37:964 (2,3) - 00:39:729 (1,2) - 感觉有点怪...考虑改成三连?
00:57:045 (1,3,1,3) - 试试在这几个note上加SC2的clap
01:04:104 (1,2,3) - whistle?
01:07:413 (1) - 总觉得这个不应该和后面长音归为一类
01:26:163 (3) - 最后一下加一个sc1的clap吧
02:37:192 (6) - 试试加速?
02:53:516 (1) - 到03:00:354 (4) - 这一段的每一个NC上都考虑加个可以加重音的音效吧 并且可以做一个音效渐强效果
03:03:222 (5,6) - 个人感觉whistle放在滑条头更合适

图很不错 如果kiai加点whistle会更带感_(:3」∠)_
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as your request, JPY sama

[General]
nope

[Cah-m's Normal]
  1. 00:16:573 綠線沒在線上
  2. 02:04:987 換成slider跟vocal
  3. 02:28:589 拿掉finish
  4. 02:32:339 沒blanket好
  5. 03:37:634 結束時間一樣比較好,所以做到這裡在結束吧


[Hard]
  1. 開Aimod檢查下唄。
  2. 00:06:089 (2,5) 意義不明,其實可以拿掉
  3. 00:08:737 +note 位置 x168, y272
  4. 00:57:045 NC
  5. 01:26:604 這個NC移到下個note
  6. 02:07:634 NC


[JauiPakyin]
  1. 00:47:339 - 00:53:295 的音效試試這樣:
    00:47:560 (2) +clap
    00:51:090 (6) ^
    00:51:972 (2,4)、00:51:972 (2) -clap
    00:52:192 (3)、00:53:075 (3) +clap
  2. 01:04:987 (1,2,3,4) 好唄我覺得這裡的音效很怪(2 4白線就好),如果不改的話就在01:05:869 (1) +finish
    01:18:222 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 這裡也是... ^
  3. 03:00:575 加跟綠線S:C2,然後2 4白線+clap 到這裡 03:03:663
  4. 03:07:634 這段kiai的音效跟上面意思一樣 01:04:987
  5. 03:33:222 最後一段其實可以弄成這樣
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hi
鸭子你的BG真是

[General]
* Artist可以写日文,Romanised Artist里写罗马音


[Collaboration]
* 用SB把Collab的人标出来?

* 00:21:310 (1) - 这个slider缩短到3/4然后00:21:751 - 加一个note 感觉打得比较好

* 00:53:516 (1) - 这里就和00:53:075 (3) - blanket起来吧 如果同意的话后面对称也要改

* 01:18:442 - add a note?

* 01:24:178 (4,1) - 这么擦到边觉得不太好,而且spacing突然缩小了,放远一点再对称?

* 01:57:045 (4) - New Combo

* 02:26:384 (4,5,6,7,1,2) - 我觉得这里的flow不是特别好,但是我也没想到比较好的改法。。考虑一下?

* 02:53:516 - 03:00:354 - 这一段放跳简直人性 如果是我的话我会选择spacing放得比较小,当然这样也没问题只是我打起来不太爽(感觉不合曲)

* 03:20:869 (1,2) - 这里有点坑……

* 03:27:707 - 这里留空有些不习惯,前面的类似的地方都没留空,何况这里已经是最后一段kiai,就加上一个note吧


[Hard]
* 00:14:692 (4) - New Combo

* 01:02:339 (1) - 这个reverse会不会被01:02:119 (6) - 挡住?

* 复制粘贴差评

* AIMod里有6个unsnapped,但是我怀疑是bug,因为怎么调都是unsnapped。。


[Normal by Cah-m]
* 00:54:839 - Add a note?

* 00:16:573 - kiai's end isn't snapped
posted

ts8zs wrote:

Ca's E
00:28:810 - Break end here
01:39:398 - Break end here =>nope

baldrace wrote:

Cah-m's Normal
00:37:634 (1,2,3) - why overlap..I think you should avoid overlap in normal
03:30:575 (1,2,3) - ^ =>well...I like these and a few overlaps is no problem imo, so retention.

Nikita35 wrote:

Cah-m's Normal

00:03:663 - add circle[if you want place] =>I don't want to.

01:45:354 - add circle =>If I do it, I must add circles at many places. no.

02:08:075 - add circle =>It's hard for newbies to play. no.

judgment light wrote:

[Cah-m's Normal]
02:19:104 (4) - 第一个点移到x460 y176 =>Fixed but I don't use your value.
02:19:987 (1) - 没有blanket好 =>fix.
03:10:722 (1) - 移到x416 y256 =>fix.

Azure wrote:

[Cah-m's Normal]
  1. 00:16:573 綠線沒在線上 =>fix
  2. 02:04:987 換成slider跟vocal =>retention
  3. 02:28:589 拿掉finish =>no. There's a symbal sound at here undoubtedly.
  4. 02:32:339 沒blanket好 =>fix
  5. 03:37:634 結束時間一樣比較好,所以做到這裡在結束吧 =>no.

384059043 wrote:

[Normal by Cah-m]
* 00:54:839 - Add a note? =>sorry, no.

* 00:16:573 - kiai's end isn't snapped =>fix
I could read Chinese with difficulty :o
Thanks for mod everyone~

http://puu.sh/3EWoU.osu
posted



[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only
红色:必须遵守
蓝色:只是建议
·according to wiki your source is wrong. It should be Haiyore! Nyarukosan but not Haiyore! Nyaruko-san
·维基上关于奈亚子的写法是Haiyore! Nyarukosan,Nyarukosan中间没有“-”,具体参考http://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%A2%AD%E6%9D%A5%EF%BC%81%E7%BE%8E%E5%B0%91%E5%A5%B3%E9%82%AA%E7%A5%9E。是否要修改还请和BAT商量下



[Cah-m's Normal]
00:30:575 (1) - whislte in slider end?
00:32:339 (2) - ^
00:35:869 (6) - ^
00:37:634 (1) - ^
00:41:163 (1) - ^
01:41:163 (1) - ^
01:42:928 (2) - ^
01:49:987 (3) - ^
01:51:751 (1) - ^
01:57:045 (3) - ^
02:00:575 (3) - ^


[Hard]
00:02:339 (1) - 滑条头finish
00:05:869 (1,2,3) - ctrl+g
00:06:751 (4,5,6) - ^
00:08:957 (4) - 这个我建议换成circle
00:15:134 (5) - 滑条头whistle
01:26:163 (5,6) - 这两个我建议干脆不要whistle,直接和前面的1234一样下clap
01:47:119 (4,5) - 这段我建议你4换成1/2的slider,然后5从01:47:560 - 开始,最后01:48:222 - 的部分你可以复制01:48:663 (1) - 然后放个好的位置
02:05:869 (1) - 建议位置 x:276,y:252
02:29:692 (1) - finish
02:36:751 (5,6) - 同01:26:163 (5,6) -
03:19:766 (3) - remove


[JauiPakyin]
00:06:089 (3) - remove
00:19:545 (3) - 恩,建议00:19:545 - 加circle然后把滑条缩减下从00:19:656 - 开始
00:38:957 (5) - 我建议可以改成和00:38:516 (4) - 一样的滑条然后做对称最后00:39:398 - 加个circle,具体位置的话如果之前你按照我这么做了可以参考谱面自己调整
00:39:619 - add circle,建议和00:39:729 (1) - 重叠
01:07:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 4个滑条全部往后1/2,然后那个5放在01:07:413 - ,如果改了记得对应的音效也修下
01:18:553 (2) - 移到01:18:442 - ,如果你一定要保持这个连打,01:18:442 - 加个circle
01:53:516 (1,2,3,4) - 这4个怎么突然变成了normalhit?
02:04:545 (1) - remove NC
02:32:781 (4,5,6) - 4改1/2或者3/4,然后5和6往前1/2


差不多就这点了,good luck~
posted

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[Cah-m's Normal]
00:30:575 (1) - whislte in slider end?
00:32:339 (2) - ^
00:35:869 (6) - ^
00:37:634 (1) - ^
00:41:163 (1) - ^
01:41:163 (1) - ^
01:42:928 (2) - ^
01:49:987 (3) - ^
01:51:751 (1) - ^
01:57:045 (3) - ^
02:00:575 (3) - ^
Thanks for mod, but all retention~
posted
Hi :3 as requested

Collab
00:04:104 (1) - 和00:04:987 (1) - 去掉NC 然后在00:03:884 (5,2) - 都加NC会不会比较好?
00:06:310 (4) - http://puu.sh/3Hfhw.jpg ?
00:12:487 (5) - 加个NC ?
00:19:325 (2) - 按照前面的一致性 尾巴上不应该有whistle吧
00:19:545 (3) - 尾巴上或许也去掉whistle? 参照00:20:428 (1) -
00:24:398 (5,1) - 互换NC
00:44:251 (6) - 或许加个finish ?
00:51:751 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - clap好奇怪 如果你想要无视掉3上的音把clap加在24 那我觉得你最好在00:54:398 (3) - 的尾巴也加clap
01:04:987 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方节奏变化 我觉得也应该是2和3clap 不是24clap
01:07:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - 为什么感觉长音错位了呢 01:07:413 - 这里先填个circle 然后白线再连起4个slider感觉比较好
01:12:486 (4) - 音效呢
01:18:222 (1) - 这个circle的位置…嗯 想说离后面2远一点比较好 但是它好像和后面的结构有关系=。=所以不太好挪?
01:19:545 (6,7) - 同样建议把7脑袋上的clap挪到6上
01:24:398 (1,2,3,4) - 有点想说顺序改成3214 但是那样好像太难了…但是1实在是离前面太近了啊=。=
01:44:251 (1,2) - 按之前的一致性好像应该互换NC 因为前面好像都是加在白线后的
01:46:016 (1,2) - 这里也互换NC 然后01:48:222 (3) - 加NC
01:47:560 (1,3) - 叠着吧 现在01:47:781 (2,3) - 离得太远了ORZ 或者让01:47:781 (2) - 尾巴位置不动 缩短成1/2 slider
01:50:648 (4,5) - 好吧我看到这里才发现前面那不算啥……
01:57:045 (4) - 这里可以加NC 感觉这里是按结构整体性加的NC
02:10:281 (1,2) - ORZ距离越来越大
02:12:045 (1,3,5) - 感觉不等距不幸福
02:19:987 (5) - NC呗 还可按重音划分一下 反正你02:20:428 (1,2) - 这两个也是单独一NC
02:53:516 - 我各种试图读出这一段的whistle是按什么规律加的but failed

Hard
00:54:619 (4) - 和collab一样 建议加clap
01:02:339 (1) - 第二个折返箭头被01:02:119 (6) - 的hitburst遮挡 于是你就美丽
02:12:928 (1) - ^

01:12:045 (1) - 尾巴上的音效
02:22:634 (1) - ^
03:03:221 (2) - body whistle加得好

Normal
02:29:692 (3) - the finish on head is not quite needed, I think the finish at 02:28:589 - is already nice enough, another one would be a bit too more
03:16:457 (1,2) - maybe move the NC from 1 to 2
03:31:898 (3) - not reccomended to stack notes like this in the easiest diff

就这些了
Good Luck
posted
Star for some reason
posted

sammy711 wrote:

Star for some reason
What the reason is? I'm curious...

Thanks for modding guys! I've read your post very carefully and made some changes on the map.
Here is a list about what have I fixed:

[ Sana ] wrote:

03:35:869 (1,2,3,4,5) - hit sound is too loud (40~50%)

Nikita35 wrote:

you have six object not snapped .__. be sure you fix it

Azure wrote:

開Aimod檢查下唄。
00:06:089 (2,5) 意義不明,其實可以拿掉

384059043 wrote:

00:14:692 (4) - New Combo
01:02:339 (1) - 这个reverse会不会被01:02:119 (6) - 挡住?
AIMod里有6个unsnapped,但是我怀疑是bug,因为怎么调都是unsnapped。。

Zero__wind wrote:

01:02:339 (1) - 第二个折返箭头被01:02:119 (6) - 的hitburst遮挡 于是你就美丽
02:12:928 (1) - ^

ts8zs wrote:

00:40:722 (4) - 没包好

[ Sana ] wrote:

03:27:707 (4) - add circle on the center

zlfence wrote:

02:36:751 (5) - reverse

Nikita35 wrote:

03:27:707 - add circle

judgment light wrote:

02:53:516 (1) - 到03:00:354 (4) - 这一段的每一个NC上都考虑加个可以加重音的音效吧 并且可以做一个音效渐强效果

384059043 wrote:

01:57:045 (4) - New Combo
03:27:707 - 这里留空有些不习惯,前面的类似的地方都没留空,何况这里已经是最后一段kiai,就加上一个note吧

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

02:04:545 (1) - remove NC

Zero__wind wrote:

00:12:487 (5) - 加个NC ?
00:24:398 (5,1) - 互换NC
01:57:045 (4) - 这里可以加NC 感觉这里是按结构整体性加的NC
posted

Zero__wind wrote:

Normal
02:29:692 (3) - the finish on head is not quite needed, I think the finish at 02:28:589 - is already nice enough, another one would be a bit too more =>fix~
03:16:457 (1,2) - maybe move the NC from 1 to 2 =>fix
03:31:898 (3) - not reccomended to stack notes like this in the easiest diff =>ok, fix (also 00:39:839 (3) - )
Thanks for mod~

http://puu.sh/3JEdZ.osu
posted
[General]
日语artist记得填 顺便一提这2星diff你真打算让他算normal么?这绝壁是个easy少个normal啊


mapset is fine.
posted
I love this beatmap and song. Wondering why its pending : /... GL!
posted
ok
posted
卧槽老泥我爱你啊

Nymph wrote:

[General]
日语artist记得填 顺便一提这2星diff你真打算让他算normal么?这绝壁是个easy少个normal啊


mapset is fine.
反过来说hard其实也不难啊=。=
昨晚上不来回复不鸟 sry
posted
酷爱rank
posted
I just wondering how to finish the insane diff with HD mode o.o
posted
i hope this map ranked cause i love the song so much >,<
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