1. 00:18:663 (4) - In order this to work, curve it more to make a better blanket + you're making it more fitting with 00:19:905 (1) -
2. 00:20:732 (2) - ^
3. 00:36:870 (2) - No wonder the triangle was imperfect due to the DS error, fix it please!
4. 00:37:698 (3) - ^
5. 00:40:181 (2,4) - Blankets
6. 01:12:870 (1,2) - Usually when doing this, the blanket is the most important thing but now it is off by a little from the start :/

1. This difficulty is really great, although I got sad because (almost) every blanket got ignored, few things on the beginning though.
2. 00:18:250 (4) - Because you got every slider curved here, it's really weird that this is a straight one, mind doing it like this? http://puu.sh/94AeF/1373b7dc41.jpg
3. 00:18:870 (5) - This overlaps kind of funny with 00:17:422 (3) - , it's noticeable in-game so you could rotate it a bit maybe?
4. 00:26:112 (6,1) - DS error
5. 01:10:801 (3) - ^
6. 01:17:422 (2) - ^
7. 01:17:629 (3) - ^
8. 01:24:250 (3) - ^
9. 01:32:732 (4) - Maybe add a NC to be consistent with the other difficulties?
10. 01:44:112 (3) - The rhythm gets really weird here because you ignored the stanza which is way more powerful than 01:44:112 - , that being said, you either can add another note at 01:44:112 - and start the slider at 01:44:319 - or make it a 1/2 slider, your choice!
11. 01:49:905 (2) - DS

1. Played nicely, although some of your spacing seems to be really weird and some of your NC'ing confuses me.
2. 00:36:457 (1,2,3) - Why this sudden spacing change to 1.55-ish? It doesn't make that much sense imo because the song isn't more powerful than it was before?
3. 00:38:939 (1) - Shouldn't you NC the previous stanza or the next? It would seem that it'd do a better job.
4. 00:39:767 (5) - Not the mos appealing slider, either you can rework it (which I recommend) or at least fix the blanket
5. 00:50:732 (3) - Kind of unnecessary spacing change here, although it plays fine.
6. 01:08:732 (2) - ^ but this time it doesn't play that great
7. 01:11:008 (1) - What's with this NC, shouldn't this be added to the stanza instead?
8. 01:13:698 (3) - Feels way too forced to play, the sudden distance jump at 01:12:870 (1) - plays fine but this just doesn't.
9. 01:24:250 (1) - What's with this NC, shouldn't this be added to the stanza instead? This kind of thing continues so fix the rest by yourself if you agreed with me.
10. 01:47:629 (5) - If you would just distance snap this correctly, it'd make a triangle with previous sliders. http://puu.sh/94AXO/4926bea850.jpg
11. 02:01:905 (7) - The spacing
12. 02:09:146 (3) - I'd add a NC, that way it's somehow consistent with 01:32:732 (1) - ?

Asphyxia wrote:

This BG gives me the creeps check the SB, I use some animation there, it's rain0.png, rain1.png and rain2.png as the result, I have rain.png animation sdjlfasfbasfbaslfb it's kinda hard to explain, but there's animation and it works properly, se for yourself if you don't trust me!

[Hard]

1. 00:38:939 (1) - Shouldn't you NC the previous stanza or the next? It would seem that it'd do a better job. But i'm trying to emphasize the vocals here ;_;

'Kay, nice diffs although I think the Hard difficulty needs to get more polished, the NC'ing and the sudden spacing changes make it sometimes forced to play, which isn't great. Call me back~

• 
  I download you map again, but i missed rain/rain.jpg
  Al diff: Check Widescreen Supprot and Display epilepsy warning (You have a SB, right?)

• 
  Perfect~

• 
  i think is so hard but is okay~
  Perfect~

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  00:57:560 (5) - NC
  00:58:388 (8) - NC
  01:01:284 (5) - NC
  01:02:939 (1) - Remove NC
  01:06:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:19:491 (1) - Are you serious, man? (i so miss, lol)
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:50:939 (5) - NC

gokugohan12468 wrote:

Hai, Mod req~



[General]

• 
  I download you map again, but i missed rain/rain.jpg Please, check the post above. I've already explained it like 3 times
  Al diff: Check Widescreen Supprot and Display epilepsy warning (You have a SB, right?) The SB has practically no brigh flashes, and it's made for 4:3 displays, so I find both of these toggles unnecessary

[Hard]

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  00:57:560 (5) - NC I've got my own combo pattern, and I try to follow it. Sorry, but placing these NCs would ruin it
  00:58:388 (8) - NC
  01:01:284 (5) - NC
  01:02:939 (1) - Remove NC
  01:06:663 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - like this: I do it on purpose, it makes pattern more interesting and looks prettier, to my eyes. so, no. sorry
  01:19:491 (1) - Are you serious, man? (i so miss, lol) what so wrong about this slider? can you, please, explain?
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:50:939 (5) - NC

Sorry if my mod is bad

Good Luck~

Waiting for BAT approval (29 days ago)

-Bakari- wrote:

Sorry, don't know how that 1/16 thing got there. Anyway, fixed.

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best my bad, missed that
After polling around, we're getting around -5 on the offset. Okay, let's fix that

[Easy]
00:49:698 (1) - This is really soon after a spinner for a map labeled as Easy. I am 100% sure that it is playable for the beginners and gives nough time to recover. Confirmed it with som modders and mappers just to be sure.
01:06:250 (1) - ^ Same as above, sorry.
To be honest, none of the spinners really fit where they were placed. They were more filler rather than trying to represent the music. Well, yeah. But now I kinda like hw they're placed here.

[Normal]
00:20:732 (3,5) - This overlap is pretty bad. Consider moving things around so that so much of the 5 slider isn't as covered up. Whoops, nice catch.
00:33:146 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Give more recovery time. Sorry, but I believe that the 1/1 gap is enough. It is easy to read and players should expect it when they're playing Normal diff.
Note: confirmed this with some mappers, just to be sure
00:49:698 (1) - ^
01:06:250 (1) - ^ Same for these two

Pretty nice mapset, though I wish the Normal was mapped so it wouldn't have so many overlaps. I think it was meant toI love those long sliders in the chorus of the Hard.

-Bakari- wrote:

Sorry, don't know how that 1/16 thing got there. Anyway, fixed.