1. Easy (2.78 stars, 96 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 219 notes)
3. Normal (4.29 stars, 134 notes)
4. yanlu's Hard (4.84 stars, 180 notes)

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hi, From my queue ~

[Insane]
00:02:533 (5,6) - Slider's end has a tiny overlap, fix it k
00:48:533 (1,2) - Distance problem I intended to make it like this, not changing it for now, will consider when other modders mention it
01:15:733 (5,1) - ^
01:10:533 (1) - remove NC no, this NC is for the sv change

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Sorry if my mod is short, your map is really perfect ^^
Good Luck ~

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

1分半的话我比较推荐加个easy.不过你这N太简单就直接改成Easy然后加个normal比较好 oh well 好吧 4diff好像更好rank一些

[Normal]
00:06:933 - 这边开始钢琴都是1/1而且没什么起伏。。1/1上下满whistle比较好听 嘛 感觉有点吵 于是降了音量之后加满了
00:18:133 (3,4,1) - 用DS排吧。 暂时没改 我觉得效果还挺好 汪汪要吃我我再挪吧
01:15:733 (3) - finish意义不明 和Insane保持一致的。有益无害
01:22:133 (1,1) - 我总觉得低难度这样会被BAT吐槽。。 呃…到时候看看看吧
蛮不错的diff

[Insane]
00:06:933 - 跟normal一样还是推荐把每个1/1加上whistle听起来舒服 同
00:12:400 (2,3,4,1) - 开test看其实效果很不好 嗯这个我之前自己也注意到了…改了一下 哎 我恨偏移
00:48:533 (1,2,3) - 虽然我1PC读出来了但是还是建议价加个NC ok把NC交换了一下
整体看着挺乱不过打起来还意外的可以，因为歌曲本身就挺跳跃的缘故? omg所有人看了我图都说乱……
不过比如00:39:467 (3,4,5,6,7) - 这里想不太好 而且感觉关系不大因为3是个短滑条 只要点到头就好
或者是00:37:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - 嗯这里改了 调整了一下1的位置和弧度
我感觉打起来手感不是很好，你在稍微斟酌下?

整体来说还算是不错的图o.o

Xinely wrote:

wow 1/3, first mod in 1/3, don't expect it's useful, i will do my best ><

[Easy]
00:06:933 (1) - change finish in head? considering many modders mentioned this point, well but I'm not really fond of using finish here, so I changed the similar points' volume instead
00:13:333 (1) - finish in head?
00:16:533 (1) - make curved so consistency with other sliders? ex : http://puu.sh/3tmJI.jpg k
00:19:733 (1) - normal finish? sorry, the current is enough
00:20:933 (3) - 188,232? k
00:22:533 (5) - 340,224? no, mine is better imo
00:29:400 - move green point to 00:29:467 - ? i know it's snapped in 1/6 but move to 1/3 since spin start in 1/3? :p
someone can think it's unsnapped k
00:33:333 (2) - move in 504,200 and then 00:34:133 (3) - 444,346? to make tail can be diagonal http://puu.sh/3tnp8.jpg?
if yes 00:35:333 (4) - 324,160 to avoid spacing issue due that pattern sorry I don't feel like ruining my blanckets
00:38:133 (4) - 240,328? to staight with previous and make little branket with next slider
00:47:333 (2) - 324,72 for better flow? nice point, changed the previous slider instead
01:01:733 (1) - nazi, 1 grid left? k
01:07:733 (1) - end in 01:10:133 - to follow music and give little break to newbie? Nice idea ! I have been really concerned about this
01:12:533 (3) - ctrl+H and put in 28,48? better flow imo ok, though I feel mine is also fine
01:15:733 (3) - change finish like finish in 01:14:133 (1) - ? well it's for consistency between diffs while it doesn't sound bad

[Normal]
00:04:533 (2) - whistle in end? well changed volume as Imentioned above
00:19:733 (1) - finish?
00:46:533 (3) - make it curved? http://puu.sh/3u1mv.jpg I'd like to make it head up, well I made it a little bit curved though
00:51:333 (6) - 244,352? make it easier to catch nice point

[Insane]
HP+1 fine
can't mod insane orz =w= np

GL ~

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No General issues to point.

* No complaints at [Normal], [yanlu's Hard] or [Insane].

[Easy]
00:18:133 (3,4,1) - Unintuitive spacing, surely causing player hit the button earlier, breaking combo and getting upset. Initially, also I couldn't find a solution, but.... Looking on prior patterns, you could make 00:16:533 (1,2) like this ---> http://puu.sh/3vLn7.jpg <--- and place 00:18:133 (3) at x:272 y:88 and then place 00:18:933 (4) at x:76 y:52. I feel if you do all this way, unintuitive spacing will be solved and you get a bit better flow overall (:
♥ Good flow at 00:24:933 (5,1)

CDFA wrote:

omg short songs

Insane:
00:03:733 (1,2,3) - It feels weird having this so normal when the map has been established by the first few rhythms to not be such It's not a matter of normal or not, it's that I want this part slow down according to the music
00:13:200 (4) - This note is really hidden well yeah, I'm still finding for better sollutions, but the current one is also that critical
01:16:000 (1) - Anti-jumps on increased SV sections are totally counter-intuitive and feel really weird that's what the finish sound here implying. Also, the stop is what I want. If players hit the next note early, it's their reading problem, if they try to move away after hitting it, they will move back after moving away a little. And that's just actually what I wwant, after a drop-off jump
01:16:533 (3) - Note's kind of hidden It just simply shared same starting point with 2

Normal:
01:02:133 (2,3) - Make this symmetrical to (1) Symmetrical is not possible or supposed. I rotated 120° from 1 to 2. But well, the fact is that it doesn't really look nice neither being easy to catch, so I've fixed it, overcoming the distance issue. You've got a point

Easy:
Seems fine atm~

Desu~.

• • Combo colour 1 and 3 are pretty similar, try these?
  
  
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  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 106,218,255
  Combo2 : 255,255,106
  Combo3 : 255,106,143
  Combo4 : 106,255,106

• • I know this is an Easy but AR 4 fits much better here, check it out yourself.
  • 00:04:933 (x) - Add a circle here like you did at 00:01:733 (2) to keep a consistency. (or delete that circle)
  • 00:14:933 (3,4,5) - Try this:
  
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  • 00:18:133 (3,4,1) - Why 0,60x spacing here? A long repeating slider would be better imo:
  
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  • 00:43:733 (1) - This is the only diff with a spinner here, is it necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders like you did in the other diffs.
  • 00:54:933 (1) - ^
  • 01:10:933 (1,2) - Try this:
  
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• • 00:06:533 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider.
  • 00:49:333 (2,3) - Try this:
  
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  • 01:10:933 (1) - Keep this slider at x:44 y:180 and flip it vertically and horizontally:
  
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• • 00:00:133 (1) - Convert this slider in 2 circles. (or add a repeat and delete the next circle)
  • 00:16:000 (2,3,4,5) - Meh, I don't really like how this pattern sounds, I know you're following the lyrics but it doesn't sound that good imo, try this pattern for example:
  
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  • 00:28:933 (1) - Start this spinner 1/1 later and add a circle here.
  • 00:34:000 (6) - Start this slider 1/3 later and add a circle here.
  • 00:56:133 (2) - Convert this slider in 2 circles.
  • 01:10:400 (1) - Move this circle at x:340 y:332.
  • 01:11:733 (6,7,8) - I don't understand what are you trying to follow here, try this pattern:
  
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  • 01:13:733 (x) - Add a circle.
  • 01:16:400 (1,2) - Convert these circles into a slider.

• • 00:02:133 (4) - Try this:
  
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  • 00:26:133 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  
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xxheroxx wrote:

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Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
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General

• • Combo colour 1 and 3 are pretty similar, try these?
  
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  [Colours]
  Combo1 : 106,218,255
  Combo2 : 255,255,106
  Combo3 : 255,106,143
  Combo4 : 106,255,106

sorry I think that's too colorful, and you know, 1 similar to 3 is not actually a problem since there's 2 in between
Easy

• • I know this is an Easy but AR 4 fits much better here, check it out yourself. keeping it for now, need more consideration
  • 00:04:933 (x) - Add a circle here like you did at 00:01:733 (2) to keep a consistency. (or delete that circle) added
  • 00:14:933 (3,4,5) - Try this:
  
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  k
  • 00:18:133 (3,4,1) - Why 0,60x spacing here? A long repeating slider would be better imo:
  
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  yes
  • 00:43:733 (1) - This is the only diff with a spinner here, is it necessary? Delete it and add some circles/sliders like you did in the other diffs. no change for I mapped only to lyrics in this diff, and there's no more vocal here. And also, it's a way of making the map easy
  • 00:54:933 (1) - ^ same here no more vocal
  • 01:10:933 (1,2) - Try this:
  
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  k

Normal

• • 00:06:533 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove the one on the next slider. I add on downbeats, not on beginning of a sentence
  • 00:49:333 (2,3) - Try this:
  
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  nice
  • 01:10:933 (1) - Keep this slider at x:44 y:180 and flip it vertically and horizontally:
  
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  k

Insane

• • 00:02:133 (4) - Try this:
  
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  k
  • 00:26:133 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  
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  not really fond of it

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Sonnyc wrote:

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Easy:

00:13:333 (1) - This 1/1 slider felt odd. made another one to respond
00:18:133 (3) - Highly suggest an NC for the short distance. changed that part
00:28:533 (4) - I think deleting the hitsound at the end sounds better. turned down the volume
00:54:933 (1) - Ending at 00:57:333 will give more time. not really needed
01:07:733 (1) - I don't think a hit sound fits here. you're right
01:14:133 (1,2) - I hope you can follow the clap pattern as clap-for the first upbeat, clap+whistle-for the second upbeat like 01:10:933 (1,2). So briefly, delete whistle at the end of 01:14:133 (1) and add whistle at the end of 01:14:933 (2). fixed all below
01:16:133 (4,6) - ^
01:18:133 (2,4) - Add Whistle at the end, which is similar to ^.
01:21:333 (2) - ^

Normal:

00:56:933 (4) - NC? not neccessary

Insane:

00:06:933 (2) - NC to follow the piano. oops, my mistake
00:22:400 (4) - Will be better in playing.
00:35:200 (4) - I think this is a bad spacing, which is confusing. Hope you can maintain the distance here. did
00:38:933 (1,2) - Start NC from (2) to make more readable. I'll ask for some more opinions, but I'd like to keep it for now for consistency
00:59:733 (1,2) - ^ also here, I add NC on downbeats
00:42:133 (1,2) - Switch orders please. The flow was hard to play. Similar pattern appears in 01:17:333 (1), but I think that one is fine since that's a kiai,, not changing for now, I like how it feels
00:54:933 (1,2) - Start NC from (2) to avoid confusion of the distance. Also 00:54:933 (8) belongs to the previous pattern. under consideration