soon(tm)
[General]
try offset + 5ms, feels more accurate to play on my end. Mod is done with your original timing
[Yomi's Normal]
00:27:809 (1,3) - the extra node after the red one makes these look really awkward, was that intentional?
00:54:348 - there is both a strong vocal and piano here, so maybe add a note
01:09:809 (2) - maybe a whistle here
01:13:502 - end the spinner here, since thats where the violin(?) comes to a halt
01:33:809 (5,6,1) - i would arrange it like this so it flows better afterwards:
03:02:425 - i would remove this break here, its really short and not very necessary since it just transitions immediately
03:13:963 (4) - clap on end
03:37:502 (4,1) - blanket this a bit better, also this rhythm might throw some players off, might want to swap 03:37:963 (1,2) for a repeat slider
[Hard]
00:24:117 (3) - NC here and remove NC at 00:25:963 (1)
00:31:502 (1) - whistle or finish on start?
00:47:194 (1) - remove NC, also maybe a whistle on the start
01:12:233 (1) - end this spinner at 01:13:502 to capture the halting music
01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - when i first played this the spacing is not very obvious hinting at 3/4, so i would make the spacing even bigger here (try 1.7x or 1.8x)
01:52:733 (1) - add finish or whistle to the start?
02:01:963 (4) - add a whistle for the piano sound
02:37:040 (1) - i would end this at 02:38:656, it follows the piano better also making the gap consistent like between 02:39:348 (1,2) and 02:40:271 (3,4)
02:47:194 (1,2) - if you just read this by the relative spacing its really easy to mistaken them as 1/4 spacing, try moving 02:47:502 (2) - more down
03:37:963 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - if you enlarged spacing at 01:34:271 (1,2,3,1,2,3) do it to this as well. Also you might want a NC on 03:38:886 (4)
Pretty nice set, let me know after