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MinusP - Shura no Niwa

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wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月9日 at 18:46:38

Artist: MinusP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left_4_Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2
BPM: 200
Filesize: 3645kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.94 stars, 314 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 479 notes)
  3. Normal (3.08 stars, 141 notes)
Download: MinusP - Shura no Niwa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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insane hitsound by Left 4 Dead
shInjiju'nana'c17 by Osu_Cc1Y7
Last edited by wantuole , edited 43 times in total.
Evil_Twilight
587 posts
Joined July 2010
Evil_Twilight
BG好評
Cyc17-
128 posts
Joined July 2011
Cyc17-
老前辈的教诲深深的刻在我心中
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
Please choose a better fitting BG lol
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Saten wrote:

Please choose a better fitting BG lol
sorry,lol
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
Artist: mainasuP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left 4 Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2

BG以下自選 :3
SPOILER
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Azure wrote:

Artist: mainasuP
Title: Shura no Niwa
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 Kagamine Rin Len Left 4 Dead wonderful opportunity! vol.2

BG以下自選 :3
SPOILER
thx :)
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
听不到歌词QAQQQQQQQQQ
Melt
353 posts
Joined May 2011
Melt
;w;
mintong89
3,695 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
SPOILER
21:26 wantuole: hi~
21:26 mintong89: hey :3
21:26 wantuole: 来求mod了~
21:26 wantuole: ;w;
21:26 mintong89: hao
21:27 wantuole: thx~
21:27 *wantuole is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/262126 mainasuP - Shura no Niwa [Insane]]
21:27 mintong89: irc can?
21:27 wantuole: 好啊好啊
21:28 mintong89: delete Letterbox
21:28 mintong89: untick*
21:28 mintong89: duibuqi xianzai buneng huawen
21:29 wantuole: 看拼音也无压力i~
21:29 mintong89: .
21:29 mintong89: hao
21:30 mintong89: 00:09:628 (7,8,1) - zhe ge jue de zhi jie NC zai 00:09:628 (7) - jiu hao le
21:31 wantuole: k
21:31 mintong89: 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - zhe ge ke yi nong ruan(circle) dian
21:31 mintong89: puu.sh/3n9tX.jpg
21:31 mintong89: http://puu.sh/3n9tX.jpg
21:32 wantuole: ok
21:34 mintong89: 01:28:978 (1,2) - xi wang keyi bu yao stack
21:35 wantuole: 好
21:35 mintong89: 01:55:378 (1) - zui hou gan jue keyi zuoge 0.5x slider
21:36 mintong89: 01:56:278 - dao zhe li
21:36 wantuole: 这个感觉一般哦
21:36 mintong89: enen~
21:36 mintong89: mei le
21:36 wantuole: :3 thx
21:37 mintong89: hard
21:37 mintong89: .
21:37 mintong89: meile
21:37 mintong89: too poor mod omg
21:38 mintong89: 哦好了, 01:16:678 - 这里hard可以加个小声的绿线
21:39 wantuole: 好

too naziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii mod ;w;
stared!
Zweib
579 posts
Joined November 2011
Zweib

Osu_Cc1Y7 wrote:

老前辈的教诲深深的刻在我心中
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 -
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好
NM
STR-1
Citrus
744 posts
Joined January 2011
Citrus
Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slider

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？
[Hard]
  • AR+1
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
hi, M4M for your queue~

[General]
it's cut? not really good end of mapping imo o.o will really like if you map full ver song although it's pretty late by now =="
also for Left 4 Dead tag it should be "Left_4_Dead" (example in ranked one is - t e n n y a - , her name in tag is -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-)

[Normal]
not reacommend slider velocity change in easiest diff, consider to delete 0.75x green line section
00:25:378 (3) - place upper and will become like this http://puu.sh/3oK09.jpg
00:25:978 (4,1,2) - make them symmetry? it will look neater
01:00:178 (3) - stacked by 00:58:978 (2) , move it lower, besides 01:01:378 (4) not really symmetry with 00:58:978 (2) ('cause you copy paste (3) slider from (1))
01:30:178 (3) - ctrl+H, it will look symmetry with 01:28:978 (1) and neater
01:49:378 (3) - ctrl+J, same reason as above and it still looks good http://puu.sh/3oKk1.jpg
overall pretty good, but still need more mods for design

[Hard]
00:00:178 (1) - add clap? (comsider clap use at 00:04:978 (1) )
00:02:878 (2) - clap at slider's start not reall fit, remove it
00:05:878 (2) - prefer whistle at slider's end
00:06:778 (3) - clap here is pretty good
00:13:978 (2) - make it further from 00:13:378 (1) ? consider jump at 00:11:578 (3,4)
00:23:578 (3,1) - 1,96 then 0,86? too far difference and weird imo, make 00:24:178 (1) further maybe?
00:28:528 (3) - not really legit anti-jump, make the spacing with 00:28:078 (2) further than now
00:46:678 - add a note here, weird gap
00:57:028 (2) - curve it better, like this http://puu.sh/3oLFe.jpg
01:01:078 (4) - stacked with 01:00:478 (2) , move it somewhere
weird jump pattern at beginning but it become better at the end

[Insane]
00:04:978 - 00:06:778 - fill with some notes, orz. too empty
01:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - something like ? (better jump pattern, switch (2) and (3,4) placement) http://puu.sh/3oM3m.jpg
can't play insane much but this diff is good imo :)

I thinks that's all, good luck then~
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole
SPOILER

ts8zs wrote:

01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 - 01:36:178 加了个小喷泉
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？没改 我现在做渐进感要强点
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手没改
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好k
NM
STR-1不用 我确定2很适合
SPOILER

thou bad wrote:

Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x直接0.5ds了

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slidernice 好主意

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？恩 收尾
[Hard]
  • AR+15 8 9的ar提升 三维不均匀 等更多人吐槽
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪k
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）nice
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？我是神麻婆=w= (被殴打
SPOILER

shikyu wrote:

hi, M4M for your queue~

[General]
it's cut? not really good end of mapping imo o.o will really like if you map full ver song although it's pretty late by now =="
also for Left 4 Dead tag it should be "Left_4_Dead" (example in ranked one is - t e n n y a - , her name in tag is -_t_e_n_n_y_a_-)
ok fixed~
[Normal]
not reacommend slider velocity change in easiest diff, consider to delete 0.75x green line section ok
00:25:378 (3) - place upper and will become like this http://puu.sh/3oK09.jpg k
00:25:978 (4,1,2) - make them symmetry? it will look neater
01:00:178 (3) - stacked by 00:58:978 (2) , move it lower, besides 01:01:378 (4) not really symmetry with 00:58:978 (2) ('cause you copy paste (3) slider from (1))
01:30:178 (3) - ctrl+H, it will look symmetry with 01:28:978 (1) and neater
01:49:378 (3) - ctrl+J, same reason as above and it still looks good http://puu.sh/3oKk1.jpguse other idea
overall pretty good, but still need more mods for design

[Hard]
00:00:178 (1) - add clap? (comsider clap use at 00:04:978 (1) ) k
00:02:878 (2) - clap at slider's start not reall fit, remove it k
00:05:878 (2) - prefer whistle at slider's end
00:06:778 (3) - clap here is pretty good
00:13:978 (2) - make it further from 00:13:378 (1) ? consider jump at 00:11:578 (3,4)
00:23:578 (3,1) - 1,96 then 0,86? too far difference and weird imo, make 00:24:178 (1) further maybe?k
00:28:528 (3) - not really legit anti-jump, make the spacing with 00:28:078 (2) further than now k
00:46:678 - add a note here, weird gap k
00:57:028 (2) - curve it better, like this http://puu.sh/3oLFe.jpg k
01:01:078 (4) - stacked with 01:00:478 (2) , move it somewhere
weird jump pattern at beginning but it become better at the end

[Insane]
00:04:978 - 00:06:778 - fill with some notes, orz. too empty empty is fine, maybe
01:15:778 (1,2,3,4) - something like ? (better jump pattern, switch (2) and (3,4) placement) http://puu.sh/3oM3m.jpg k
can't play insane much but this diff is good imo :)

I thinks that's all, good luck then~

thx for mod :)
update
Last edited by wantuole , edited 2 times in total.
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs

wantuole wrote:

SPOILER

ts8zs wrote:

01:16:378 - preview time
01:16:978 - make kiai longer
from 01:16:978 - to 01:34:678 -
from 01:36:178 - to 01:55:378 - 01:36:178 加了个小喷泉
IS
00:11:878 (11) - 像这种我觉得改成短滑条后加上一个note比较好？没改 我现在做渐进感要强点
00:28:228 (3) - 尾部用normal的默认Finish？ 00:28:978 (1) - 这个Finish去掉？
00:47:428 (3) - 我觉得Ctrl+G之后比较顺手没改
HD
00:58:378 (3) - 没包好k
NM
STR-1不用 我确定2很适合
SPOILER

thou bad wrote:

Hi~m4m
[Insane]
  • 00:07:978 (2,3,4,5,6) - 间距可以再大一点，推荐ds 0.45x直接0.5ds了

    00:21:178 (5,6) - 换个方向好看一点，并且用弧度大一点的slidernice 好主意

    01:52:378 (3,4) - 这两个Sampleset-Soft是故意的么？恩 收尾
[Hard]
  • AR+15 8 9的ar提升 三维不均匀 等更多人吐槽
    00:13:828 加个note，空着感觉有点奇怪k
[Normal]
  • 01:15:778 (1,2,3) - 还是用slider比较好
    或者
    01:21:778 (1,2,1) - 改了一下，和01:31:378 (1,2,1) - 相呼应（233）nice
    348,92,81778,6,0,B|410:95|410:95|456:140,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    372,184,82978,2,0,B|337:236|337:236|275:253,2,120
    280,158,84178,6,0,B|251:101|251:101|268:39,2,120
    324,244,85378,2,0,P|279:300|200:335,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
这么好的图要怎么mod？我是神麻婆=w= (被殴打

感谢mod :)
update
为什么会这么抢手……噗
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
赞
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

Modding

General

  1. I want long KIAI TIME.

Normal

  1. 00:38:128 (3,2) - overlap. move note another location.
  2. 00:58:978 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:04:378 (4,5) - ^
  4. 01:08:578 (2,1) - ^

Hard

  1. 00:21:478 (4,1) - overlap.
  2. 00:41:878 (7,1) - ^
  3. 01:04:078 (6,7) - ^
  4. 01:09:328 (4,1) - ^
  5. 01:14:578 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - how about you? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835781 / https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835782

Insane

  1. 00:09:778 (3,4) - delete "4" note. and "3"slider end at 00:10:078
  2. too many blue line bit end slider. ex. 00:43:378 (1,2) 00:45:178 (4) (you can ignore this mod)
  3. 01:12:028 (6,1) - overlap.
  4. 01:54:328 (2,3) - too hard :? ......maybe?

i'm noob modder.

End!
sjoy
1,023 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
我来MOD了._.不好请见谅._.
HARD:
00:07:978 (4) - 换颜色吧。试试换成 2短条+1单点如何？
00:09:628 (5) - 2个单点？
00:28:978 (1) - 把来回滑条换成长条？
00:29:428 (2) - 感觉可以删掉。
01:00:178 (1) - 不考虑摆01:00:478 (2) - 远的距离吗？感觉2分单点以内叠比较好._.
01:07:078 (6) - 试试摆在01:07:378 (1) - 这里？
01:16:378 (2) - 感觉要滑到01:16:828这里
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

sjoy wrote:

01:07:078 (6) - 试试摆在01:07:378 (1) - 这里？

Losertic wrote:

Insane

  1. 01:12:028 (6,1) - overlap.

fix this, thx for mod :)
sammy711
207 posts
Joined November 2012
sammy711
From 复读群 很久以前(?
以前Plan8坑了我就试试这张吧
Red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=just advice
Normal
01:31:528 - 多余的绿线
Looks Good!
Hard
00:07:978 (4) - 改成往返一次吧.节奏太散了
00:23:578 (3) - Ctrl+G?
00:35:878 (2) - 这个可以和00:34:978 (1) - 的结尾重合，感觉会很坑
01:11:578 (2) - Ctrl+G?
00:56:503 - 可以add a circle做个三连 感觉Hard都没四分音符好枯燥:O
Insane
00:10:453 - 00:10:528 - 做个滑条+二连感觉不错
00:13:078 (5) - NC?

really good map
我mod能力有限,说不出来什么了....
Jycool
397 posts
Joined April 2012
Jycool
m4m from your queue
[general]
感觉音效下的很散，没有形成一个很好的音轨，特别是哨音，建议重下
[normal]
nothing
[hard]
00:21:778 (1) - 建议从00:21:178 (3,4) - 中间穿过，不要有重叠，不是很好看
00:35:878 (2) - 建议摆远点，容易读错
00:42:178 (1) - 建议这么摆
SPOILER
00:42:178 (1) - 加note
01:18:628 (2) - 和01:18:178 (1) - 摆的近点
[insane]
00:24:553 (2) - 去掉note，这个加的效果不好
00:48:628 (3) - 建议和00:47:428 (3) - 的滑调头stack



祝rank :)
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群 很久以前(?
以前Plan8坑了我就试试这张吧
Red=unrankable
black=strongly recommend
pink=just advice
Normal
01:31:528 - 多余的绿线既然发现就删了=w=
Looks Good!
Hard
00:07:978 (4) - 改成往返一次吧.节奏太散了 no
00:23:578 (3) - Ctrl+G? no
00:35:878 (2) - 这个可以和00:34:978 (1) - 的结尾重合，感觉会很坑这ok的说
01:11:578 (2) - Ctrl+G?no
00:56:503 - 可以add a circle做个三连 感觉Hard都没四分音符好枯燥:O 我是善良麻婆
Insane
00:10:453 - 00:10:528 - 做个滑条+二连感觉不错 有三个人吐槽了 于是我换了个节奏
00:13:078 (5) - NC?

really good map
我mod能力有限,说不出来什么了....

jyc-Binggan wrote:

m4m from your queue
[general]
感觉音效下的很散，没有形成一个很好的音轨，特别是哨音，建议重下音乐已经很嘈杂了 一点重音和clap符合着是我认为最好的
[normal]
nothing
[hard]
00:21:778 (1) - 建议从00:21:178 (3,4) - 中间穿过，不要有重叠，不是很好看中间穿过这串就显得拥挤了
00:35:878 (2) - 建议摆远点，容易读错三个人提到了这个地方 改的远了
00:42:178 (1) - 建议这么摆
SPOILER
00:42:178 (1) - 加noteno 两可的造型 我觉得现在的玩起来顺手
01:18:628 (2) - 和01:18:178 (1) - 摆的近点 no 1 2 3合起来是一个图形
[insane]
00:24:553 (2) - 去掉note，这个加的效果不好k
00:48:628 (3) - 建议和00:47:428 (3) - 的滑调头stackk



祝rank :)

感谢mod :)
[Mahua]
702 posts
Joined November 2010
[Mahua]
我是来支持的
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
from my queue

庭和(中间应该留个空格，记得两个title都改掉
不到2分你不加个easy?

[Normal]
00:46:978 (4) - 你把00:45:778 (2) - 复制过去感觉好得多
01:00:178 (3) - 你不觉得1对称过去好看么
01:08:578 (2,1) - 别overlap
感觉就这diff看着比较顺眼。。

[Hard]
00:07:978 (4) - 不应该在00:08:128开始么
00:11:878 (4,1) - 这是hard?
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - clap让你吃了吗。。。
01:04:378 (7,1) - 这是hard?
01:15:178 (2,1) - ^
虽然比insane强点但是还是乱 不少跳在200之下对于hard来说挺大的，你自己斟酌下

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - tick毁气氛
00:09:628 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:678 (1,2) - 不看上面的话你觉得哪个比较像1/4?
00:11:578 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这么摆比较顺 http://puu.sh/3rtI5.jpg
00:17:578 (3,4) - 为啥这边又挫了
00:40:978 (1,2,3) - 你开test看看这边效果多吃翔
01:12:178 (1,2) - 太近
01:31:528 (2) - 这节奏有意义?
乱就一个字，我只说一次。。
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
wantuole (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
title: Shura no Niwa (Short Ver.)
修羅ノ庭 (Short Ver.)
remember adding space before "(Short Ver.)"

[Normal]
  1. 01:09:778 (1) slider's tail stick with 01:08:578 (2) head
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) DS?
  2. 00:21:178 (2,3,4,1) WT try this (focus on 00:21:028 (2)、00:21:778 (1) )
  3. 00:22:228 (2) stick with 00:21:178 (3) slider's tail
  4. 01:00:478 (2,4) OMG please fix it http://puu.sh/3rxIP.jpg
  5. 01:21:478 (4) move to x:168, y:164
  6. 01:30:478 (2,4) ctrl+G then 01:30:778 (3,4) ctrl+G
  7. 01:40:678 (4) move to x:240, y:80
  8. 01:43:078 (4) move to x:236, y:144
  9. 01:50:278 (4) move to x:240, y:216
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:378 (4) move to x:196, y:176
  2. 00:06:178 (4) ctrl+G
  3. 00:16:378 (2,5) try this http://puu.sh/3r5Yf.jpg
  4. 00:20:728 (2,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r6eS.jpg
    let 00:21:028 (4) stick with 00:19:303 (6)
  5. 00:25:378 (1) ctrl+G
  6. 00:26:278 (5,6) try this http://puu.sh/3r65F.jpg
  7. 00:30:778 (3) stick with 00:30:328 (1) slider's tail
  8. 00:30:928 (3,4,5) DS
  9. 00:32:878 (2) move to x:180, y:64
  10. 00:34:528 (6) stick with 00:33:178 (3) slider's head
  11. 00:51:478 (4) ctrl+G
  12. 01:08:728 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r78g.jpg
  13. 01:39:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I like this
that's all ((●゜c_゜●))
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - 我感觉没对齐
01:29:428 (3,4) - 跳过来的感觉有点不顺？
01:34:378 (4,5) - 感觉3跳到这里有点牵强...移右点试试？
01:35:878 (5) - 为什么不改成5连(其实这么燃的曲子不放5连衬托真是太可惜
01:55:378 (1) - 加个finish?

[Hard]
00:47:428 (2) - 滑条头加whistle?
01:55:378 (1) - 同insane

[Normal]
01:55:378 (1) - 不加点什么吗...

[Other]
你的insane我打起来就是在飞来飞去...感觉没什么爽的感觉...莫名

Goodluck

另外有时间的话可不可以看看我这图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82542 thx
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

No_Gu wrote:

from my queue

庭和(中间应该留个空格，记得两个title都改掉k
不到2分你不加个easy?=w=

[Normal]
00:46:978 (4) - 你把00:45:778 (2) - 复制过去感觉好得多还是压红线感觉好
01:00:178 (3) - 你不觉得1对称过去好看么微调了下
01:08:578 (2,1) - 别overlapk
感觉就这diff看着比较顺眼。。

[Hard]
00:07:978 (4) - 不应该在00:08:128开始么好怪 没改
00:11:878 (4,1) - 这是hard?近了点
00:21:778 (1,2,3) - clap让你吃了吗。。。忘了加=w=
01:04:378 (7,1) - 这是hard?k
01:15:178 (2,1) - ^没改动
虽然比insane强点但是还是乱 不少跳在200之下对于hard来说挺大的，你自己斟酌下

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - tick毁气氛调低了音量
00:09:628 (1,2,3,4) - 00:10:678 (1,2) - 不看上面的话你觉得哪个比较像1/4?调整了
00:11:578 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这么摆比较顺 http://puu.sh/3rtI5.jpg
00:17:578 (3,4) - 为啥这边又挫了我是那神挫挫的人啊=w=
00:40:978 (1,2,3) - 你开test看看这边效果多吃翔看了以后我大吃一斤 改了
01:12:178 (1,2) - 太近这段spacing调整下
01:31:528 (2) - 这节奏有意义?拆分了
乱就一个字，我只说一次。。感谢批评 其实我也一直对这难度很无语 自己搞的那么乱 别人又乱黑 乱赞 :o 奇怪的现象

Azure wrote:

wantuole (ｏ´艸｀ｏ)

[General]
title: Shura no Niwa (Short Ver.)
修羅ノ庭 (Short Ver.)
remember adding space before "(Short Ver.)" 有提到了 fixed

[Normal]
  1. 01:09:778 (1) slider's tail stick with 01:08:578 (2) head
fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:18:628 (2) DS? no
  2. 00:21:178 (2,3,4,1) WT try this (focus on 00:21:028 (2)、00:21:778 (1) ) 这是原稿位子-3 -
  3. 00:22:228 (2) stick with 00:21:178 (3) slider's tail用其他的摆设了
  4. 01:00:478 (2,4) OMG please fix it http://puu.sh/3rxIP.jpg 没问题的说
  5. 01:21:478 (4) move to x:168, y:164 k
  6. 01:30:478 (2,4) ctrl+G then 01:30:778 (3,4) ctrl+G no
  7. 01:40:678 (4) move to x:240, y:80k
  8. 01:43:078 (4) move to x:236, y:144k
  9. 01:50:278 (4) move to x:240, y:216
no

[Insane]
  1. 00:01:378 (4) move to x:196, y:176k
  2. 00:06:178 (4) ctrl+Gk
  3. 00:16:378 (2,5) try this http://puu.sh/3r5Yf.jpgno
  4. 00:20:728 (2,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r6eS.jpg其他用法
    let 00:21:028 (4) stick with 00:19:303 (6) ^
  5. 00:25:378 (1) ctrl+Gk
  6. 00:26:278 (5,6) try this http://puu.sh/3r65F.jpgno
  7. 00:30:778 (3) stick with 00:30:328 (1) slider's tail no
  8. 00:30:928 (3,4,5) DS fix
  9. 00:32:878 (2) move to x:180, y:64 fix
  10. 00:34:528 (6) stick with 00:33:178 (3) slider's head k
  11. 00:51:478 (4) ctrl+G no
  12. 01:08:728 (2,3,4) try this http://puu.sh/3r78g.jpg 又回到初稿了 yeah
  13. 01:39:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) I like this
thx

that's all ((●゜c_゜●)) ((●゜c_゜●))

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Insane]
00:06:178 (4) - 我感觉没对齐 已改
01:29:428 (3,4) - 跳过来的感觉有点不顺？没变动
01:34:378 (4,5) - 感觉3跳到这里有点牵强...移右点试试？不用
01:35:878 (5) - 为什么不改成5连(其实这么燃的曲子不放5连衬托真是太可惜我才不会说还一个难度太鬼畜被我砍了
01:55:378 (1) - 加个finish?没必要的感觉

[Hard]
00:47:428 (2) - 滑条头加whistle? nice
01:55:378 (1) - 同insane^

[Normal]
01:55:378 (1) - 不加点什么吗... 去了clap 让你失望了

[Other]
你的insane我打起来就是在飞来飞去...感觉没什么爽的感觉...莫名和来爽点啊！ 那是被人黑的啊！

Goodluck

另外有时间的话可不可以看看我这图 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/82542 thx 当然可以！ :)
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
家里网太差下不下来啊;w;

不好意思可能得等明天家里通了光纤TAT
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M
[General]
Audio-Lead-In 2504→2500?
[Normal]
Placement
00:20:578(3) make a blanket like this?
SPOILER
00:39:178(2) move this note like this? it would be more neatly
SPOILER
00:49:978(4,5) not overlapped better
00:51:778(6) 1 or 2 bit up, and it would be nice blanket.
01:01:378(2) again, this overlapped will make newbie confused, since it is a easiest diff, you can put more easily.
01:30:178(3) maybe, you can put it symmetrically with (1)
SPOILER
01:40:978(1) tiny thing, spacing error.1 or 2 bit far away better
Rhythm
00:00:178 unnecessary green line
00:15:778(3) this reverse tick doesn't follow any audio and vocal, so more simply for newbie better
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
00:25:678(2) Ctrl+G makes nice jump I suppose.
01:27:478(4)^
00:42:178(1) looks ugly, maybe like this? it would nice flow
SPOILER
01:06:778(5,6) I don't suppose it is good spacing, keep proper distance better. so like this?
SPOILER
01:19:828(2,4) stack will stop the flow of playing, move away?
Rhythm
01:14:578(1) the reverse doesn't follow any music or vocal...
Hit Sonud
01:31:378(1) add whistle at head same as other diffs.
01:45:478(1) add finish at end
[Insane]
Placement
00:15:178(3) move like this? just a suggestion
SPOILER
00:25:978(3,4,5,6) make a consistence jumping?
SPOILER
01:24:778(4,5)to make a noce flow, stack(4) and (6) not (5)
Hit Sonud
00:28:228(3) finish better than clap at end

overall fine I suppose. good luck and star~
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
Hello 迟来的M4M


[G]
  1. Don't know why but I see Normal is 3.5 star rating. It should be a bug but in order to make confusion, try to reduce the difficulty?
    SPOILER
  2. I found a hitsound which serves perfectly as hitnormal sound for beginning - 00:09:628, you can set it as hitnormal2 and copy the other hitsounds to the second set of hitsound as well.
    http://puu.sh/3tf3S.wav
    Have a try. It's really nice
  3. I don't know how the rules change but according to the current rules and guidelines, you should not have "Short Ver." in your title as this post suggests, which is a silly rule imo. But ╮(╯▽╰)╭ you know...

[N]
  1. 00:06:778 (3) - move 2-3 grids right? make it the same vertical line with 00:05:878 (2) - , would be cleaner imo
  2. 00:16:978 (1) - pretty ugly imo.. maybe u can try something like this
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:578 (3) - compare to the current one I would prefer
    SPOILER
  4. 00:44:578 (1) - hmmm. kinda nazi but can you see the difference? I prefer the second one 0.0
    SPOILER

  5. 00:50:578 (5) - maybe rotate clockwise by 4°-5° in order to prevent overlap with 00:49:978 (4) - just like
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:178 (2) - hmmm... try this
    SPOILER
  7. 01:01:378 (2) - I really don't suggest this kind of overlap in E/N. Kinda difficult for new babies. .w.
  8. 01:21:778 (1) - nazi, one grid up to have the same horizontal line with 01:21:478 (4) -
  9. 01:30:178 (3) - why not copy a 01:28:978 (1) - and ctrl+g and move to the current position?

[H]
  1. 00:21:778 (1) - I would prefer
    SPOILER
  2. 00:51:928 (2) - move left and down a little bit? To make the spacing btw 1-2 and 2-3 equal
  3. 00:58:378 (3) - ctrl+g makes the flow better imo. and ctrl+g 00:58:678 (4) - as well if you do it
  4. 01:09:478 (5) - Try ctrl+g
  5. 01:21:178 (3) - I would add a NC to prevent confusion. But not really important ╮(╯▽╰)╭
  6. 01:37:077 (4) - Try ctrl+g to have a better flow
  7. 01:40:378 (3) - same as previous

[I]
  1. 00:17:878 (5) - I would suggest this:
    SPOILER
    looks better imo
  2. 01:22:228 (3) - Still, Move down a little bit to make the spacing btw 2-3 3-4 equal

Nothing else~ Good Luck !
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
wantuole

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hello 迟来的M4M


[G]
  1. Don't know why but I see Normal is 3.5 star rating. It should be a bug but in order to make confusion, try to reduce the difficulty?
    SPOILER
    ~改低了难度
  2. I found a hitsound which serves perfectly as hitnormal sound for beginning - 00:09:628, you can set it as hitnormal2 and copy the other hitsounds to the second set of hitsound as well. ~尝试着使用
    http://puu.sh/3tf3S.wav
    Have a try. It's really nice
  3. I don't know how the rules change but according to the current rules and guidelines, you should not have "Short Ver." in your title as this post suggests, which is a silly rule imo. But ╮(╯▽╰)╭ you know...
~ I Know ......

[N]
  1. 00:06:778 (3) - move 2-3 grids right? make it the same vertical line with 00:05:878 (2) - , would be cleaner imo fix
  2. 00:16:978 (1) - pretty ugly imo.. maybe u can try something like this ok
    SPOILER
  3. 00:20:578 (3) - compare to the current one I would prefer用了大点幅度的
    SPOILER
  4. 00:44:578 (1) - hmmm. kinda nazi but can you see the difference? I prefer the second one 0.0ok
    SPOILER

  5. 00:50:578 (5) - maybe rotate clockwise by 4°-5° in order to prevent overlap with 00:49:978 (4) - just like换note了
    SPOILER
  6. 00:54:178 (2) - hmmm... try thisk
    SPOILER
  7. 01:01:378 (2) - I really don't suggest this kind of overlap in E/N. Kinda difficult for new babies. .w. 改了
  8. 01:21:778 (1) - nazi, one grid up to have the same horizontal line with 01:21:478 (4) - k
  9. 01:30:178 (3) - why not copy a 01:28:978 (1) - and ctrl+g and move to the current position?
k

[H]
  1. 00:21:778 (1) - I would prefer ok
    SPOILER
  2. 00:51:928 (2) - move left and down a little bit? To make the spacing btw 1-2 and 2-3 equalk
  3. 00:58:378 (3) - ctrl+g makes the flow better imo. and ctrl+g 00:58:678 (4) - as well if you do it 接近3了 有点远了
  4. 01:09:478 (5) - Try ctrl+g并不喜欢note切换slider的时候加大ds ╮(╯▽╰)╭我也很倔
  5. 01:21:178 (3) - I would add a NC to prevent confusion. But not really important ╮(╯▽╰)╭:>
  6. 01:37:077 (4) - Try ctrl+g to have a better flow略远了。
  7. 01:40:378 (3) - same as previous
和屁股的mod两种方向了~

[I]
  1. 00:17:878 (5) - I would suggest this:
    SPOILER
    looks better imo k
  2. 01:22:228 (3) - Still, Move down a little bit to make the spacing btw 2-3 3-4 equal

Nothing else~ Good Luck !

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M
[General]
Audio-Lead-In 2504→2500?k
[Normal]
Placement
00:20:578(3) make a blanket like this? do not want blanket here
SPOILER
00:39:178(2) move this note like this? it would be more neatlycool idea
SPOILER
00:49:978(4,5) not overlapped betterk'
00:51:778(6) 1 or 2 bit up, and it would be nice blanket.k
01:01:378(2) again, this overlapped will make newbie confused, since it is a easiest diff, you can put more easily.k
01:30:178(3) maybe, you can put it symmetrically with (1)k
SPOILER
01:40:978(1) tiny thing, spacing error.1 or 2 bit far away better
Rhythm
00:00:178 unnecessary green line del
00:15:778(3) this reverse tick doesn't follow any audio and vocal, so more simply for newbie better k
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
00:25:678(2) Ctrl+G makes nice jump I suppose. other idea
01:27:478(4)^
00:42:178(1) looks ugly, maybe like this? it would nice flow
SPOILER
01:06:778(5,6) I don't suppose it is good spacing, keep proper distance better. so like this?use other idea
SPOILER
01:19:828(2,4) stack will stop the flow of playing, move away?k
Rhythm
01:14:578(1) the reverse doesn't follow any music or vocal... 1 is ok, change 2 be a note
Hit Sonud
01:31:378(1) add whistle at head same as other diffs.k
01:45:478(1) add finish at end add whistle
[Insane]
Placement
00:15:178(3) move like this? just a suggestionk
SPOILER
00:25:978(3,4,5,6) make a consistence jumping? other idea
SPOILER
01:24:778(4,5)to make a noce flow, stack(4) and (6) not (5) nice idea
Hit Sonud
00:28:228(3) finish better than clap at endno

overall fine I suppose. good luck and star~
thx for mod :)
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