MathiasXII wrote:

Alright, here's my mod. I may sound harsh at some part (as usual), it's not because I'm being mad. It's just that it's how I communicate .

So overall, the maps makes sense... It seems this song would be ready to welcome the idea of a harder difficulty, but for what's there, it is very good quality .

[Easy]

- All good

[Normal]

Probably this beatmap's best asset. This is a really good normal difficulty!

I really have nothing to say here. I love the funky sliders, the flow is perfect.

- All good

[Hard]

Overall this difficulty is nice! It just all makes sense while being challenging.

Just a general remark : Make sure to use overlapping sliders SELDOMLY as in "it was absolutely necessary to overlap those sliders for my note pattern that I was trying to make". I wouldn't recommend overlapping sliders as a pattern itself just because it prevents you from using the precious 196 608 other pixels on your screen waiting for their time to shine . Some of the recent modding made you remove some overlapping sliders thought, making it acceptable now ~.

00:07:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't relate ANYTHING from the song that justifies the use of a 0,50 spacing instead of the regular 1,00 spacing at that specific part. I'm not saying it's a bad idea to do so, I'm just saying that if there's no reason behind the variation of your spacing or no constancy (it happens once and that's it), you're better off using regular spacing. - fixed

00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - I saw this part has been fixed! Thumbs up! - ^^

01:04:966 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just for feeback, I'm not really fond of slider orgies, even if I'm pretty sure they love each other so much they couldn't help it! I'm sure there is many other pattern possibilites that would be as fun and would not require sliders to be cramped up in such a tiny space. It's not a problem thought as it still plays decently well. - i like them (was before modding way worser ;3)


That's anything really. The spacing is great and the pace is great too! Everything I spotted was fixed in the previous moddings.

Good luck!

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from in-game request

[General]
1. You can delete the .osb file if the beatmap doesn't have a storyboard. Oops.. I forget u have combo burst in ur map - XD

[Easy]
1. 00:10:966 (1) - would it be better to make this slider doing a blanket with 00:12:466 (2)? Or I will suggest something like this:

SPOILER

1.Sry this slide don't exist anymore, say thanks to NewRulerNA ._.
2. 02:07:966 - I would suggest adding a break time in between these two notes: 02:07:966 (1,1). It helps players realize the appearance of the next note because some arrows like these will come out. The same trick can be put within 02:10:966 (1,1) and 02:13:966 (1,1).

SPOILER

2. added

[Normal]
1. 00:24:466 (5) - same as those previous reversed sliders, make a kink at the middle would fit the music more imo like this:

SPOILER

1. okay
2. 00:27:466 (3) - ^
2. ^
3. 00:31:966 (1,3) - stack the end of the slider with the circle.
3. i didn't like this idea ._. sry
4. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4) - I would say it's too difficult to put such a pattern which only appears in hard or insane in a normal difficulty. Try to use curved sliders to indicate the music. What I mean is to create some sliders like these three: 02:07:966 (1,1,1). I think your creativity is far more than enough to do such stuff. lol
4. already fixed

[Hard]
1. OD+1
1. no way XD
2. 00:06:278 (3,4,5) - how about changing into this pattern?

SPOILER

2. lol already fixed , say thanks to NewRulerNA
3. 00:27:278 - add a circle here.
3. added
4. 01:57:091 (4,1) - switching these two guys sounds nice.

SPOILER

4. makes no difference since i added a normal-sliderslide
5. 02:16:216 (7,8) - ^
5. ^
That's all. Nice song and map! Good luck!
If you have any questions, feel free to pm me or find me in-game!

1. Tags könntest du noch die Firma und die Konsole eintragen: Square Soft und PS1, Playstation, PSX
2. Den Applaus könnte man eig. stutzen, um Platz zu sparen. Niemand wird sich eine Minute lang das Lied geben ...
3. Ist wirklich nur persönliche Präferenz und kann sogar als nicht nötig argumentiert werden, wegen Visual Settings und Skin ignorieren:
   - Ich finde, dass die dunkelblaue und braune Farbe zu sehr in dem Hintergrund untergehen und nicht sehr leicht zu sehen sind :/

1. 00:29:716 (2) - Keine Ahnung wieso aber ich finde der Flow ist besser insgesamt von (1,2) und (2,1,2) wenn du diesen Slider umdrehst mit Strg+g oder Strg+h.
2. Der nächste Punkt ist wirklich nur meine Meinung aber
   01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
   01:17:716 (2,4,2,4) - fühlen sich so ... fehl am Platz an, weil für mich kein spezifischer Ton getroffen wird. Ich würde die entfernen oder zumindest die lauten Whistles entfernen bzw. leiser machen
3. 01:23:716 (2) - Die Claps passen nicht so, finde ich :/ Ich würde sie lieber weglassen oder andere Hitsounds nehmen.
   
4. NCs
5. 00:13:966 (3) - Die NCs in deiner Map wären konstanter wenn du hier einen NC setzt. Du verfolgst die gesamte Zeit über einen "Jeder dritte Downbeat" NC Trend. Daher solltest du den hier fortsetzen eig.
   Eigentlich, weil dir das bestimmt nachher noch mehr Leute erzählen werden und weil mit persönlich NCs zum großteil egal sind ...
6. 01:01:966 (5) - ^
7. 01:52:966 (5) - ^

1. 01:06:091 (4) - Ein wenig Nazi aber du könntest den Slider noch mehr wie ein S aussehen lassen oder zumindest die Kurven runder aussehen lassen
2. 01:24:466 (1) - stack den vllt auf 01:22:966 (1) - Das hat einen besseren Flow mit 01:23:903 (3,1,2) - meiner Meinung nach.
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Das ist so ein Finish spam :S außerdem zu laut :/ leiser machen? ein paar entfernen vllt? Ich finde es momentan etwas störend

1. 00:12:466 (3) - Strg + G ? Hat irgendwie einen etwas besseren Flow für mich
2. 00:54:091 (2) - Ich würde es auf die selbe Position wie 00:55:591 (4) - setzen. Füllt sich besser an im Flow mMn.
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - wie auch bei Normal ist das ein Finish spam für mich. Ich würde sie zumindest viel leiser machen, weil man eig. gar nicht mehr mitbekommt was das Lied angibgt. Hitsounds sollten das Lied unterstützen und nicht "sein"
4. 01:30:091 (4,6) - Finde die beiden Slider etwas unschön, die sind schon wirklich sehr gequetscht und überlappen sich selbst :/

1. 01:11:622 (2,3) - Ich weiß beim besten Willen nicht wieso mir das hier nicht gefällt aber ich finde es hört sich besser an wenn du statt (2,3) einen einzigen Slider verwenden würdest oder (2,3) vertauschst :/ ...
2. 02:07:778 (6) - Ich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du (6) entfernst
3. 01:55:591 (1) - Würde lieber einen Repeater entfernen und stattdessen eine Note auf den Downbeat setzen. "Sliderenden" haben nunmal nicht so einen Eindruck wie Noten wo man klicken muss, finde ich

bomber34 wrote:

Hey du hast mich um 'nen Mod gebeten und hier bin ich

Allgemein:

1. Tags könntest du noch die Firma und die Konsole eintragen: Square Soft und PS1, Playstation, PSX - gute idee , fixed
2. Den Applaus könnte man eig. stutzen, um Platz zu sparen. Niemand wird sich eine Minute lang das Lied geben ... - doch, ich jedes mal XD
3. Ist wirklich nur persönliche Präferenz und kann sogar als nicht nötig argumentiert werden, wegen Visual Settings und Skin ignorieren:
   - Ich finde, dass die dunkelblaue und braune Farbe zu sehr in dem Hintergrund untergehen und nicht sehr leicht zu sehen sind :/

- tzz , es gibt maps bei denen es viel schlimmer ist, man muss sich bei sowas nicht immer reinsteigern XD

Easy

1. 00:29:716 (2) - Keine Ahnung wieso aber ich finde der Flow ist besser insgesamt von (1,2) und (2,1,2) wenn du diesen Slider umdrehst mit Strg+g oder Strg+h. - fixed
2. Der nächste Punkt ist wirklich nur meine Meinung aber
   01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
   01:17:716 (2,4,2,4) - fühlen sich so ... fehl am Platz an, weil für mich kein spezifischer Ton getroffen wird. Ich würde die entfernen oder zumindest die lauten Whistles entfernen bzw. leiser machen - ich hab auf allen diffs zwei timingpoints gelöscht der ablauf war 60,70,80,70 , die zwei in der mitte wurden entfernt
3. 01:23:716 (2) - Die Claps passen nicht so, finde ich :/ Ich würde sie lieber weglassen oder andere Hitsounds nehmen. - mir gefällt es so :3
4. NCs
5. 00:13:966 (3) - Die NCs in deiner Map wären konstanter wenn du hier einen NC setzt. Du verfolgst die gesamte Zeit über einen "Jeder dritte Downbeat" NC Trend. Daher solltest du den hier fortsetzen eig.
   Eigentlich, weil dir das bestimmt nachher noch mehr Leute erzählen werden und weil mit persönlich NCs zum großteil egal sind ... - fixed
6. 01:01:966 (5) - ^ - fixed
7. 01:52:966 (5) - ^ -fixed

Schöne Easy, hab zwar einen Punkt geschrieben zu Claps ... aber ich bin eigentlich für die gesamte Maps kein Freund von denen ... naja es war noch in einem erträglichen Bereich. Ich finde nicht, dass das Lied Töne/Instrumente/Stellen bietet wo Claps passen :/ - ich kann wirklich nicht verstehen , was alle gegen die claps haben, ich persönlich mag sie sehr, vorallem in easy, gibt der Kiai ein wenig PEPP imp XP

Normal

1. 01:06:091 (4) - Ein wenig Nazi aber du könntest den Slider noch mehr wie ein S aussehen lassen oder zumindest die Kurven runder aussehen lassen - ein runderes S, Tadaaaa :3
2. 01:24:466 (1) - stack den vllt auf 01:22:966 (1) - Das hat einen besseren Flow mit 01:23:903 (3,1,2) - meiner Meinung nach. - ich würde den persönlich echt ungern stacken, das wäre mir dann wieder zu kreisartig, da die die pattern danach dann in etwa das ganze wieder umschließt , und das gefäält mir garnicht <_<
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Das ist so ein Finish spam :S außerdem zu laut :/ leiser machen? ein paar entfernen vllt? Ich finde es momentan etwas störend

- ich hab jeweils auf dem beginn des taktes von Finish zu whistle gewechselt, ist jzt etwas weniger schlimm XD
Sehr schöne Normal. Allerdings stören mich hier die Claps sogar noch mehr als bei Easy was aber vermutlich daran liegt, dass du auf 1/2 repeater slidern alles mit Claps belegst wie z.B. 01:44:716 (3,6) - 01:47:716 (3,6) - . Ich würde lieber bei den Custom Claps bleiben, welche du am Anfang verwendet hast
- niemand wird mir diese claps wegnehmen XD
Etwas was in meiner Grauzone liegt ist 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - da das Spacing abnimmt. Es ist schwer zu erklären, weil auf der einen Seite es zum Lied passt und das auch keine "Anfänger" Map unbedingt sein muss aber solche Spacing Veränderungen sind dennoch unüblich für Normals :/ Ich würds jetzt nicht ändern wollen aber ich merke es dennoch mal an - das ganze ist nur von 6 zu 1, ich hab ne SV änderung drin, deshalb ist das so, ich benutzte SVänderungen ziemlich
gerne, wobei ich sagen muss, dass das bis jzt nie ein Problem war, vorallem da die Geschwindigkeit ab-, und nicht zunimmt, meiner Meinung nach ist das noch im Bereich des möglichen :3

Hard

1. 00:12:466 (3) - Strg + G ? Hat irgendwie einen etwas besseren Flow für mich - und da merkt man , dass jeder flow anders definiert, ich kann behaupten, dass ich ich das aus demselben grund schon getan habe, vorher war es wie du es jzt willst, ich lass es wie ist, einfach weil das jzt sonst wirklich ins lächerlich abrutscht XD
2. 00:54:091 (2) - Ich würde es auf die selbe Position wie 00:55:591 (4) - setzen. Füllt sich besser an im Flow mMn. - da das ganze auf symetrie aufbaut, nein, ausserdem find ich das ganze als Viereck besser :3
3. 01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - wie auch bei Normal ist das ein Finish spam für mich. Ich würde sie zumindest viel leiser machen, weil man eig. gar nicht mehr mitbekommt was das Lied angibgt. Hitsounds sollten das Lied unterstützen und nicht "sein" - Das sollte ich mir merken, wundevolles Zitat, siehe oben - allerdings will ichs nicht noch leiser machen, ehrlich gesagt finde ich es von der Lautstärke gut wie es ist , trotzdem danke der anmerkung :3
4. 01:30:091 (4,6) - Finde die beiden Slider etwas unschön, die sind schon wirklich sehr gequetscht und überlappen sich selbst :/- wollte ich eigentlich zuerst nicht ändern, aber nun gut, da

Nette Hard. Im Gegensatz zu Easy und Normal benutzt du hier nur für den einen ruhigen Part in der Mitte die Default skin Claps. Das kommt schon viel besser finde ich, auch wenn ich die Claps von 01:04:966 - bis 01:25:778 - trotzdem eher als störend und unpassend empfinde :/ - claps, i love them Q_Q

BounceBabe's Insane

1. 01:11:622 (2,3) - Ich weiß beim besten Willen nicht wieso mir das hier nicht gefällt aber ich finde es hört sich besser an wenn du statt (2,3) einen einzigen Slider verwenden würdest oder (2,3) vertauschst :/ ... - etwas , dass ich iwie nicht nachvollziehen kann :c
2. 02:07:778 (6) - Ich finde es hört sich besser an, wenn du (6) entfernst - gehört zur drum im hintergrund
3. 01:55:591 (1) - Würde lieber einen Repeater entfernen und stattdessen eine Note auf den Downbeat setzen. "Sliderenden" haben nunmal nicht so einen Eindruck wie Noten wo man klicken muss, finde ich

- fixed
Sehr gute Insane, sry das ich nicht wirklich Weltbewegendes gefunden habe. Gab im Gegensatz zu den anderen Diffs auch keine Default Skin Claps (oder ich hab das verpeilt ...)
Einziges wo ich mir unschlüssig ist der Stream: 01:29:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - weil vor dem Spinner man schon eig. klar diesen Stream hört und das etwas komisch kommt. Ich weiß, dass man nicht direkt nach einem Spinner Noten setzen soll aber so ist es nunmal :/ - ich fand dies im ersten moment auch nicht sehr schlüssig, aber den stream an den spinner anzuschließen ist defintiv zu viel, widerrum kann man aber auch nicht den spinner durch nen stream ersetzten , dass wäre wirklich zu viel des guten, lassen wir uns mal sahen was die folgenden modder sagen :3


Das war mein Mod, hoffe da ist was hilfreiches dabei.
Das Mapset ist insgesamt wirklich schon sehr gut ^^ fang an BATs zu nerven ^^

1. Timing point - note is placed before timingpoint in insane diff. This is not recommended. You should put a timing point(offset) before it. so change to 1966⇒466 is better. (Resnap by changes do not require. but please do not forget to change the all diff. )
2. Song Setup - Romanised Artist 「Nobuo Uematsu」 - it is better to change 「Uematsu Nobuo」. This is the name of Japan and You use the Japanese name for Artist.
   
   Rule

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - consecutive 1 and 4 have a similar color. so I suggest the order that it understands clearly. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lhqj.png ( replace the 3 and 4 )
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,0,64
   Combo2 : 128,64,0
   Combo3 : 255,255,157
   Combo4 : 255,128,0

1. OD+1 balance with the normal diff is not good. it mean Easy;HD2 OD1 but Normal;HD3(Easy+1) OD4(Easy+3, This difference is too big)
2. 00:13:966 (1) - i suggest ctrl+G flow. 00:10:966 (1,2,1) - These flows are always constant. so I suggest that change the flow regularly. ( 00:06:466 (2,1,2) - Here also, but I did not have good design..orz )
3. 00:37:966 - I thought that there is no need to lower the volume in the middle of a spinner. If anything, I thought that you should increase the volume. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lbio.png ( 00:40:216~ sound less, so lower the volume ..etc )
4. 01:04:591 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out in this time. but if this is intentional I do not recommend. You should not put the thing which is not necessary for map
   
   SPOILER

   ・01:27:091
   ・01:28:591
   ・01:55:591
5. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - A lot of circle avoids continuing for easy. for ex; 01:19:966 (1,2,3,4) - These use the slider. Suggestion of the design for ex: http://puu.sh/4lgwD.jpg Please refer to code for the later flow.
   
   SPOILER

   256,76,79216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
   192,188,79966,6,0,P|160:260|192:332,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,330,81466,2,0,P|351:258|320:188,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,76,82966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   128,68,83716,2,0,P|44:76|8:144,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

6. 01:25:966 (1,2) - remove finish to end of the slider. and add whistle instead. finish is too much outstanding. I thought that original finish was not necessary here. ( i mean do not have a sound that is instead of a finish here. )
7. 01:28:966 (1) - add Additions-soft finish? and volume same as 00:34:966 (1). ( 01:31:216~ Because It have not almost sounds, so i feel it is slightly noisy )
8. 02:07:966 (1,1,1,1) - have a space to put the Breaktime between these. i think it is better to put break time imo. It helps timing and decrease of hp.

1. 00:18:466 (5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7wt.jpg It is faithful to the flow direction of the slider.
   
   SPOILER

   56,256,18466,2,0,P|36:184|52:112,2,150,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   104,332,19966,5,4,0:0:0:0:
   192,320,20341,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   240,244,20716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   172,184,21091,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:23:341 (2,3,4) - ^ and same reason. for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7Hi.jpg ( 00:23:341 (2) - x376,y128. 00:23:716 (3) - x460,y160. 00:24:091 (4) - x488,y244. )
3. 00:25:966 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( same as similar pattern. 00:18:466 (5,1) - 00:21:466 (5,1) -
4. 00:28:966 (1) - ^ If you do not put it I feel it particularly quiet here. and same as other diff
5. 00:37:966 - same as Easy diff
6. 00:52:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1)
7. 01:01:966 (5) - add NC is better. ( combo is not long but time to change little longer.
8. 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - I do not recommend that change the interval suddenly in the same timing for normal. If you want to really use it, you should put it to be easy to understand. In this case, If this is me do not put 6. As for the timing, i think it will become clearer.
9. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (2,3,4) - 01:28:966 (1) - remove finish. reason same as Easy diff 01:25:966 (1,2).
10. 01:43:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1)
11. 01:51:466 (1) - remove NC and 01:52:966 (3) - add NC.
12. 01:57:466 (5) - try the blanket here? http://puu.sh/4m9uM.jpg ( 02:00:466 (5) - distinguish a slider direction

1. HD +1 I thought 4 is too low for Hard. 5 or 6 is generally used for hard. and because this hard is not so difficult
2. 00:13:966 (1,2) - 00:14:716 (3,4) - sorry, nazi. It symmetrical slightly different. http://puu.sh/4mb3Z.jpg
3. 00:34:966 (1,1) - This rhythm is too simple and i think repeat part does not match rhythm. 00:37:966 (1) - especially i feel that rhythm from 00:40:216~ does not match. Please consider increasing the 1/4 instead >.<; reference to insane.
4. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel noisy you put finish in all here suggestion of rhythm and hitsound for ex: http://puu.sh/4mddE.jpg and hitsound, 01:02:341 (2,3,5,6) - not put finish.
5. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (6,7,8) - 01:28:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sorry, finish sound same as Normal. volume increase of them is too large if you use a finish. I cannot recommend that you put finish of the megavolume(about 80~100%) in succession.
6. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
7. 02:01:966 (1,1) - add finish to start of the slider.
   
   comment about the rhythm
   00:16:966~ hihat is added to the music from here. so I thought that you could increase note a little more.
   00:28:966~ 00:40:966 - especially this part, I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard. if anything, I thought that you should increase rhythm than before.
   
   Design is made neatly. but I felt that some original nature stood out too much about the hit sound.

1. 00:10:966~ i think volume is too increased. ( difference of 25% before and after ) I think that do not have much difference in the sound 00:07:966 - add the volume of the middle here? ( about 62% )
2. 00:16:403 (6,7,8,9) - i suggest replace the placed. http://puu.sh/4n0f7.jpg I think that it has a more faithful flow.
3. 00:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1) - I suggest that you make these the flow that is different from 00:22:966 (1,2,3,4,1). because They have a similar pattern and similar flow. so I thought that you changed the flow and should increase variations. for ex changed to reverse flow from the 00:25:966 (1). http://puu.sh/4n0OI.jpg code↓ ( This is for example. form is not accurate )
   
   SPOILER

   272,128,25403,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   288,16,25591,1,4,0:0:0:0:
   288,16,25966,6,0,P|200:16|144:56,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   88,152,26528,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   144,56,26716,2,0,P|184:112|184:200,1,160
   152,304,27278,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   184,200,27466,6,0,L|248:248,1,80,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   424,208,27841,2,0,L|359:161,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,112,28216,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   200,16,28403,1,0,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:49:403 (2,3) - I felt a little strange this jump. because it do not have most of the jumps of such a circle in map. I thought it was slightly sudden jump. I prefer do not put the jump here. or 00:49:216 (1,2,3,4) - let these jump at similar distance.
5. 00:52:216 (4) - add finish to start and end of the slider and 00:52:591 (5,6) - add finish?
6. 01:13:028 (5,7) - add whistle. It is slightly quiet as compared with before and after sound.
7. 01:17:341 - Why is this breaktime pulled backward? The beginning of breaktime is slightly slow and it is strange to me. I think that it should put it just after 01:15:466 (4) -
8. 01:31:966~01:43:966 - I think the volume is too large ( vol 100% ) 　i feel excitement of kiaitime from 01:43:966 is not enough. ( vol 100% ⇒ 70%. lower the volume too much. i think kiaitime is directed to increase the excitement ) so i suggest return the volume after 01:31:966. ( it is better to put 01:32:059 - and volume 50~60% )

kosiga wrote:

Hello AnimeStyle >_<

sorry, for the long long delay... orz

only when you are really useful, please throw kudosu

here my mod~

[General]

1. Timing point - note is placed before timingpoint in insane diff. This is not recommended. You should put a timing point(offset) before it. so change to 1966⇒466 is better. (Resnap by changes do not require. but please do not forget to change the all diff. )
2. Song Setup - Romanised Artist 「Nobuo Uematsu」 - it is better to change 「Uematsu Nobuo」. This is the name of Japan and You use the Japanese name for Artist. - fixed
   
   Rule

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BAT/MAT for help.
3. Song Setup - combo colors - consecutive 1 and 4 have a similar color. so I suggest the order that it understands clearly. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lhqj.png ( replace the 3 and 4 ) -fixed
   
   SPOILER

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,0,64
   Combo2 : 128,64,0
   Combo3 : 255,255,157
   Combo4 : 255,128,0

[Easy]

1. OD+1 balance with the normal diff is not good. it mean Easy;HD2 OD1 but Normal;HD3(Easy+1) OD4(Easy+3, This difference is too big) - fixed
2. 00:13:966 (1) - i suggest ctrl+G flow. 00:10:966 (1,2,1) - These flows are always constant. so I suggest that change the flow regularly. ( 00:06:466 (2,1,2) - Here also, but I did not have good design..orz ) - fixed
3. 00:37:966 - I thought that there is no need to lower the volume in the middle of a spinner. If anything, I thought that you should increase the volume. for ex; http://puu.sh/4lbio.png ( 00:40:216~ sound less, so lower the volume ..etc ) - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
4. 01:04:591 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out in this time. but if this is intentional I do not recommend. You should not put the thing which is not necessary for map - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
   
   SPOILER

   ・01:27:091
   ・01:28:591
   ・01:55:591
5. 01:16:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - A lot of circle avoids continuing for easy. for ex; 01:19:966 (1,2,3,4) - These use the slider. Suggestion of the design for ex: http://puu.sh/4lgwD.jpg Please refer to code for the later flow. - [color=#40FF00 ]fixed[/color]
   
   SPOILER

   256,76,79216,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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6. 01:25:966 (1,2) - remove finish to end of the slider. and add whistle instead. finish is too much outstanding. I thought that original finish was not necessary here. ( i mean do not have a sound that is instead of a finish here. ) - i don't like whistle at this point, i prefer finish sry
7. 01:28:966 (1) - add Additions-soft finish? and volume same as 00:34:966 (1). ( 01:31:216~ Because It have not almost sounds, so i feel it is slightly noisy ) - 00:34:966 is quiter , thats's why I made it louder
8. 02:07:966 (1,1,1,1) - have a space to put the Breaktime between these. i think it is better to put break time imo. It helps timing and decrease of hp. - but it looks way too stupid

[Normal]

1. 00:18:466 (5,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the flow for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7wt.jpg It is faithful to the flow direction of the slider. - fixed
   
   SPOILER

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2. 00:23:341 (2,3,4) - ^ and same reason. for ex: http://puu.sh/4m7Hi.jpg ( 00:23:341 (2) - x376,y128. 00:23:716 (3) - x460,y160. 00:24:091 (4) - x488,y244. ) - fixed
3. 00:25:966 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. ( same as similar pattern. 00:18:466 (5,1) - 00:21:466 (5,1) - fixed
4. 00:28:966 (1) - ^ If you do not put it I feel it particularly quiet here. and same as other diff fixed
5. 00:37:966 - same as Easy diff fixed
6. 00:52:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1) - don#t really fits, and i don't want to use it one this spinner at the other diffs
7. 01:01:966 (5) - add NC is better. ( combo is not long but time to change little longer. - fixed
8. 01:01:966 (5,6,1) - I do not recommend that change the interval suddenly in the same timing for normal. If you want to really use it, you should put it to be easy to understand. In this case, If this is me do not put 6. As for the timing, i think it will become clearer. - okay D:
9. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (2,3,4) - 01:28:966 (1) - remove finish. reason same as Easy diff 01:25:966 (1,2). - same reason then before
10. 01:43:966 (1) - add finish. reason same as 00:28:966 (1) - ^
11. 01:51:466 (1) - remove NC and 01:52:966 (3) - add NC. - fixed
12. 01:57:466 (5) - try the blanket here? http://puu.sh/4m9uM.jpg ( 02:00:466 (5) - distinguish a slider direction- fixed

[Hard]

1. HD +1 I thought 4 is too low for Hard. 5 or 6 is generally used for hard. and because this hard is not so difficult - fixed
2. 00:13:966 (1,2) - 00:14:716 (3,4) - sorry, nazi. It symmetrical slightly different. http://puu.sh/4mb3Z.jpg - fixed
3. 00:34:966 (1,1) - This rhythm is too simple and i think repeat part does not match rhythm. 00:37:966 (1) - especially i feel that rhythm from 00:40:216~ does not match. Please consider increasing the 1/4 instead >.<; reference to insane. - i really don't think so , i won't repeat this anymore, have a look at some other mods
4. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I feel noisy you put finish in all here suggestion of rhythm and hitsound for ex: http://puu.sh/4mddE.jpg and hitsound, 01:02:341 (2,3,5,6) - not put finish. - i really don#t want to change this
5. 01:26:341 (2,3,4) - 01:27:841 (6,7,8) - 01:28:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - sorry, finish sound same as Normal. volume increase of them is too large if you use a finish. I cannot recommend that you put finish of the megavolume(about 80~100%) in succession. - success XD
6. 01:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
7. 02:01:966 (1,1) - add finish to start of the slider. - fixed
   
   comment about the rhythm
   00:16:966~ hihat is added to the music from here. so I thought that you could increase note a little more.
   00:28:966~ 00:40:966 - especially this part, I feel the rhythm is too simple for Hard. if anything, I thought that you should increase rhythm than before. - something that disturbs me in osu, it's just annoying that people make their hard diffs harder and harder, almost every hard, i have seen in the last time was totally an insane, this is nonsense, why people do this? in this case i make real hards, which havent't got 5,00 stars ~
   
   Design is made neatly. but I felt that some original nature stood out too much about the hit sound.

[/list]

sorry again for the delay - no prob :3

Good luck~

Irreversible wrote:

The link is broken for me.. could you reupload? ><

jericho2442 wrote:

nana its still broken, i get the mp3 but not the .osu

reup again and check the beatmap id in each of the .osu´s

also check for any 0byte hitsounds and remove them

1. Song title should be "Battle Theme" or even "Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix)" as it's listed on his bandcamp. If you want to use the official title from the game which would be "Battle 1".
2. The artist could be Fredrik Miller instead of Nobuo Uematsu see here - http://fredrikmiller.bandcamp.com/album ... -3-remixes
3. It should be Nobuo Uematsu (the preferred romanisation which is accounted for in the rule) not Uematsu Nobuo, a quick glance at itunes (or elsewhere) could have told you this.

Shulin wrote:

Your artist and song title is wrong.

1. Song title should be "Battle Theme" or even "Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix)" as it's listed on his bandcamp. If you want to use the official title from the game which would be "Battle 1".
2. The artist could be Fredrik Miller instead of Nobuo Uematsu see here - http://fredrikmiller.bandcamp.com/album ... -3-remixes
3. It should be Nobuo Uematsu (the preferred romanisation which is accounted for in the rule) not Uematsu Nobuo, a quick glance at itunes (or elsewhere) could have told you this.

I'd go for Nobuo Uematsu - Battle 1 (Fredrik Miller Remix) if you want to credit the original composer or Fredrik Miller - Final Fantasy 9 - Battle Theme (Remix) if you want to be uber correct.

Sorry for jumping in and good luck ^_^

1. 01:25:966 (1,2) - would really advise not stacking slider ends on a easy difficulty, it just becomes a little bit harder to read which is something we try to avoid in the easiest map of the set.

1. 00:40:966 (1) - i really dont understand this thing of having one note after every spinner, it doesnt really make sense to me tbh. would you be able to explain the reason behind these?
2. 00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - sorry but the clap spam here is abit toooo much, it really hurts the sound of the map. it just doesnt suit the rest of your map and feels really overpowered, it would be better to keep the clap pattern you used before this section
3. 01:04:591 (2,1) - the way the spacing changes so suddenly here to the slower section doesnt feel correct when playing. due to it being in a very simple pattern where the spacing is consistent throughout the whole section, to suddenly change to this smaller spacing just didnt feel natual, i understand you have changed it due to the song getting actually weaker which is fine buuuut the pattern and position it is done in just felt incorrect. so i would suggest maybe reshaping this whole pattern to make it all feel like it flows abit better
4. also in this slowdown section you have tiny inconsistent spacings what might look better if you cleaned it up a lil, your choice
5. 01:10:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this section feels a little bit cramped and crushed, i felt like i wanted to spread out abit more but was forced into the same places many times. i do really think if you used less stacking here and made everything direct away from each other a lil it would make this section play soooo much better.
6. 02:03:466 (5) - super nazi but this kinda needs a liiiiil more space to be consistent

1. 00:06:278 (3,4,5) - yea welll this really just doesnt work, i understand you have used this purely to create a nice shape but the break in spacing really really hurts how this plays. it needs correct spacing here and something so the player can understand how to play the timing. i would advise doing a "reverse selection" on the 4 which then keeps the identical pattern you have but also makes the spacing perfectly readable for players
2. 00:10:966 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels out of places, its much more weaker than the patterns before and after. it makes it feel abit wrong and annoying to get the flow to. i would advise to remap this pattern and give it abit more spice like the patterns before
3. 00:25:403 (4,5) - again you have the problem here of just not spreading out abit more, everything is becoming very clustered which makes it become hard to read for a not needed reason, i really advise to spread out abit more and dont stack this under the slider before it
4. 00:34:966 (1,1) - i understand why you used it....but it just feels sooo weak where the music is actually becoming more powerful
5. 01:00:091 (4,1) - again its too clustered, this pattern is too tight to fit another inside it. this really looks bad and it needs changing up so it doesnt have overlaps
6. 01:04:966 (1,2,3,4) - this becomes extremely unreadable with having so many sliders ending at the same point and starting too, its mainly the first 3 sliders what really need to be directed away from each other or remapped.
7. 01:08:716 (3,4) - really dont advise this either, unstack these two
8. 01:10:216 (5,6,1) - you know what i wanna say ^^
9. 01:57:278 (1,2,3) - spacing here is broken again here and could be improved greatly
10. 02:00:278 (1,2,3,4) - same as above

1. 00:34:216 (5,1) - i didnt like how the player stands still here then plays from the same section again, i personally think having it move to a different part of the screen here keeps that active flow you have going better. it personally really wanted to be starting from a different section.
2. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is fine buuut i feel like it would suit much better if you followed the 1/2 lead instrument what becomes more powerful than the rhythm.
3. 01:12:091 (4,5) - again i think this would work better moved away than being used as a stack
4. 01:23:903 (2) - very light suggestion here, maybe point the end of this slider into the direction of the slider before it, just flows better imo
5. 01:31:966 (1) - i found this became abit blind due to still being covered by the after effects of the slider before it, i think its because it is perfectly stacked under one of the stream notes before it, it would make it much easier to read if you moved it abit into a more visible position
6. 02:06:466 (1,2) - this jump felt a little not needed, the rest of the whole section doesnt have a jump so it felt abit out of place
7. 02:13:216 (7,1) - this doesnt work, it uses the same spacing used as the 1/2 notes before it and this is a 1/1 also every other time you have used this same style pattern in this section its with a stacked note to wait, so suddenly having the one antijump note felt again out of place and actually breaking the flow in a negative way. i really love this section and how it maps to follow the feeling of the song....buuut this one note just broke that feeling a little overall. i needs to follow that same "stack/wait" style as the ones before and after it.

1. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is fine buuut i feel like it would suit much better if you followed the 1/2 lead instrument what becomes more powerful than the rhythm. It follows the music right so ^^
2. 01:12:091 (4,5) - again i think this would work better moved away than being used as a stack Same melody sound so i prefer having it stacked, sounds and plays better, visually looks better too.
3. 01:23:903 (2) - very light suggestion here, maybe point the end of this slider into the direction of the slider before it, just flows better imo Its meant to overlap with the slider, i never meant to have that kind of normal flow there

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Final Fantasy - IX Main Battle Theme Remix.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 52966
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Random Battle (Fredrik Miller Remix)
TitleUnicode:Random Battle (Fredrik Miller Remix)
Artist:Uematsu Nobuo
ArtistUnicode:植松伸夫
Creator:AnimeStyle
Version:BB's Insane
Source:Final Fantasy IX
Tags:Zidane Vivi Lili Dagger Steiner Freia Quina Eiko Mahagon Kuja Trance BounceBabe Square Soft PS1 Playstation PSX
BeatmapID:261809
BeatmapSetID:98073

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:7
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jericho2442 wrote:

ok soooo lets give this a quick mod.

Easy

1. 01:25:966 (1,2) - would really advise not stacking slider ends on a easy difficulty, it just becomes a little bit harder to read which is something we try to avoid in the easiest map of the set.-fixed

Normal

1. 00:40:966 (1) - i really dont understand this thing of having one note after every spinner, it doesnt really make sense to me tbh. would you be able to explain the reason behind these?- yes, you know the song has then a cliffhanger (can I say this XD? wow me and english, something that should never been mixed .__.), and then after it, it goes forward, imp it fits very well, I'm sry that I can't explain it so well :c
2. 00:58:966 (1,2,3,4) - sorry but the clap spam here is abit toooo much, it really hurts the sound of the map. it just doesnt suit the rest of your map and feels really overpowered, it would be better to keep the clap pattern you used before this section - it's the kiai time, and i personally like this very much, I'm very disappointed in changing it, I know it's a little bit outstanding, but does that mean I can't use it? I don't think so :c
   
3. 01:04:591 (2,1) - the way the spacing changes so suddenly here to the slower section doesnt feel correct when playing. due to it being in a very simple pattern where the spacing is consistent throughout the whole section, to suddenly change to this smaller spacing just didnt feel natual, i understand you have changed it due to the song getting actually weaker which is fine buuuut the pattern and position it is done in just felt incorrect. so i would suggest maybe reshaping this whole pattern to make it all feel like it flows abit better
4. also in this slowdown section you have tiny inconsistent spacings what might look better if you cleaned it up a lil, your choice
5. 01:10:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this section feels a little bit cramped and crushed, i felt like i wanted to spread out abit more but was forced into the same places many times. i do really think if you used less stacking here and made everything direct away from each other a lil it would make this section play soooo much better. - i will remap it :3
6. 02:03:466 (5) - super nazi but this kinda needs a liiiiil more space to be consistent- fixed

Hard

1. 00:06:278 (3,4,5) - yea welll this really just doesnt work, i understand you have used this purely to create a nice shape but the break in spacing really really hurts how this plays. it needs correct spacing here and something so the player can understand how to play the timing. i would advise doing a "reverse selection" on the 4 which then keeps the identical pattern you have but also makes the spacing perfectly readable for players - one of these everybody has to say something different moments, I'm confused X_X, I can't do this, because it would be different to all other beat placements, that are having the same melody, tried something different :/
2. 00:10:966 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern feels out of places, its much more weaker than the patterns before and after. it makes it feel abit wrong and annoying to get the flow to. i would advise to remap this pattern and give it abit more spice like the patterns before- yeah fancy slider now XD
3. 00:25:403 (4,5) - again you have the problem here of just not spreading out abit more, everything is becoming very clustered which makes it become hard to read for a not needed reason, i really advise to spread out abit more and dont stack this under the slider before it - changed, but ya know, it was better before
4. 00:34:966 (1,1) - i understand why you used it....but it just feels sooo weak where the music is actually becoming more powerful - the music is getting weaker/quiter imp, but I'm happy that you're the FIRST person that has understood it D:
5. 01:00:091 (4,1) - again its too clustered, this pattern is too tight to fit another inside it. this really looks bad and it needs changing up so it doesnt have overlaps - why I can't use overlaps? That's your personal opinion, you can say it of course, but you can't force me to do only respect your opinion :'C (I'm way to emotional), i could understand the other suggest, but they're were often because of the spacing, this part is spaced right, and I like it how it is
6. 01:04:966 (1,2,3,4) - this becomes extremely unreadable with having so many sliders ending at the same point and starting too, its mainly the first 3 sliders what really need to be directed away from each other or remapped. - first got away, I hope your happy now .__.
7. 01:08:716 (3,4) - really dont advise this either, unstack these two - fixed
8. 01:10:216 (5,6,1) - you know what i wanna say ^^ - yes , but I don't have really an idea how to change it, bwithout destroying the whole pattern after, and before
9. 01:57:278 (1,2,3) - spacing here is broken again here and could be improved greatly - then tell me how it could be improved such greatly D:
10. 02:00:278 (1,2,3,4) - same as above^

BBs Insane

1. 00:34:216 (5,1) - i didnt like how the player stands still here then plays from the same section again, i personally think having it move to a different part of the screen here keeps that active flow you have going better. it personally really wanted to be starting from a different section.
2. 01:01:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part is fine buuut i feel like it would suit much better if you followed the 1/2 lead instrument what becomes more powerful than the rhythm.
3. 01:12:091 (4,5) - again i think this would work better moved away than being used as a stack
4. 01:23:903 (2) - very light suggestion here, maybe point the end of this slider into the direction of the slider before it, just flows better imo
5. 01:31:966 (1) - i found this became abit blind due to still being covered by the after effects of the slider before it, i think its because it is perfectly stacked under one of the stream notes before it, it would make it much easier to read if you moved it abit into a more visible position
6. 02:06:466 (1,2) - this jump felt a little not needed, the rest of the whole section doesnt have a jump so it felt abit out of place
7. 02:13:216 (7,1) - this doesnt work, it uses the same spacing used as the 1/2 notes before it and this is a 1/1 also every other time you have used this same style pattern in this section its with a stacked note to wait, so suddenly having the one antijump note felt again out of place and actually breaking the flow in a negative way. i really love this section and how it maps to follow the feeling of the song....buuut this one note just broke that feeling a little overall. i needs to follow that same "stack/wait" style as the ones before and after it.

Overall its a nice mapset and i really like it, just needs some refining and also dont be so scared to spread out more across the screen when mapping- It was more, but the most modders are mentointed that I can't do it, so the most stuff is in the grid
You know it's really difficult for me to guess which suggest is good, and which is step back.
I'm happy that you have moded it, but I still think this map won't get rank XD
One thing, i know you will hate me for this, but please don't say this is bad/unreadable/weak by not giving an example how it could be improved, i personally really dislike such mods, because they doesn't help me really .__.

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

why this is in graveyard?

Mei wrote:

as you request

first uncheck widescreen support cuz it is for storyboard I think - fixed

[BB's Insane]

1. 00:03:278 (4) - change you grip level to 4(you can find the option under "view") and move this note to x324 y368 for perfect blanket
   
2. 00:47:716 (2) - i suggest stratght slider for this cuz it's a better symmetric pattern
   
3. 01:08:528 (4) - NC？
   
4. 01:31:966 (1,2,3,4) - fix your blanket here

[hard]

1. 00:09:278 (7,8,9) - 1.0 DS there? - fixed
   
2. 00:23:341 (2) - this long slider is not really suit for this rythmn I think - added extrabeats
   
3. 00:34:966 (1,1,1) - not really fit , this should be better - sry, i like it how it is :C
   
   Picture

   
   
   
4. 02:01:966 (1,1,1) - this also not fit, I think you really should make sure your beats is on the white tick but not the red cuz no any voice there - i guess it's okay, nobody mentioned it before
   
5. 02:09:466 (5,1) - blanket - fixed

[normal]

• 
  cs -1? - would be okay, but look at the last pattern

1. 00:06:278 (3) - remove this
   
2. 00:09:278 (4) - same
   
3. 00:12:278 (3,5) - ^
   
4. 01:57:278 (4,4,4) - same - All fxed ^
   
5. 02:06:278 (4) - remove this and then add a note at 02:06:466 - better who i made it

too many symmetric so no much can be mentioned
anyway good luck

SuperAFK wrote:

1st mod here. Hope you take my suggestion

Normal
00:24:466 (5) - remove the clap at the end cuz there is no accent can fit it
00:27:466 (3) - same ^ - fixed^

Hard
00:06:278 (3,4,5) - larger distance makes player easy to read the map
00:24:841 (3,4) - larger distance as well - what do you mean? xD^

That's all advice I'm able to give.
Hope This map could be ranked soon.

Mei wrote:

[BB's Insane]

1. 00:03:278 (4) - change you grip level to 4(you can find the option under "view") and move this note to x324 y368 for perfect blanket Fixed
   
2. 00:47:716 (2) - i suggest stratght slider for this cuz it's a better symmetric pattern It is a curved slider because i wanted to create a cradle
   
3. 01:08:528 (4) - NC？No
   
4. 01:31:966 (1,2,3,4) - fix your blanket here Not meant to be a perfect blanket

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248,128,55216,5,4,0:0:0:0:
152,72,55403,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,72,55497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Irreversible wrote:

This song is really great.

[General]

The hitsounds in the kiai Sound quite messy and don't fit together at all; what I want to say is, is it really needed to mix up the custom ones with the clap? Seems awkward for me. - fixed, only CH are used

Secondly, is the sliderslide (custom) needed at the begin? It sounds too loud as well. - fixed, i replaced the custon sliderslide, and deleted the customslidertick

[Easy]

HP 2, AR 3 (or 2, however you like), OD 2 for a better spread. - fixed, used HP 2 AR 3 OD 2

01:27:466 (2) - I'm a bit unsure about this pattern whether if it's appropriate for the easiest diff or not. If you can't come up with something easier, feel free to talk to me. - fixed

I like this easy, there is nothing much wrong with it. However; I'm not quite happy 01:33:466 - that you for example didn't map this part. It's a really cool one, and it makes me sad to see it empty. Imo the break is not really needed, it might even annoy the Player a Little. - I'm sry, but then i have to map the first break too (same part), and I need a break in the map q-q

[Normal]

00:01:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You have to Remake this, it's WAY too hard for a normal diff. You should use less circles for sure, 4 in a row are okay but definetly not 8. - fixed, deleted 4 circles, added 2 sliders
00:04:966 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The hitsounds here are really loud, please lower them a bit. - fixed, in hard and easy too
00:11:716 (2) - I'm not a fan of those, for me it sounds a bit rhythm breaking, but since it's in the song it's alright. - okay
00:16:966 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I'm sorry for marking the whole part again, but there is way more potential in it than it now has. First of all, are so many "DUF" hitsounds needed? They Sound so terribly noisy. At least make them a bit more quiet. Then, there is quite any Variation, and this gets boring really fast, don't you think you could use some more slider -> circle.. or slider > slider.. or circle > circle variations? I hope you know what I mean. Just don't use the same all the time.- delted 2 circles, added 1 slider, changed placement, ^ whole part is quiter 00:24:466 (5,3) - By the way, your hitsounding gets inconsistent here. - fixed
01:09:091 (4) - http://puu.sh/7tYLE/86b259844e.jpg - fixed
00:52:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Circle circle, repeater slider. Circle Circle, repeater slider. You can leave if if you like that, I just feel like mentioning it, so don't feel offended by any of it. I made you an example of different rhythms in the part, I hope you can read it: http://puu.sh/7tYTh/405a3098cf.jpg 00:52:966 - 1 starts here, so at least listen to it; if you have new ideas, it' great as well! - the rhythm sounds good, but i have the problem, that it's to komplex imp q-q
01:25:966 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same as above. - ^
01:37:216 - Same as in easy. - ^
02:07:966 (1,1) - Good Job! - oh thank you q-q

Yeah, you can definetly make your map more interesting with this, if any questions come up, you can ask me.

[Hard]

00:52:497 - MAYBE you can try adding a circle here.... I'm not sure tho myself.. it would be so cool tho. - i guess it's too diffi, would be only 1/16 in the whole hard, but i can understand what you meant
01:04:778 - I actually really liked this kiai, I like the way how you build up the rhythm. But imo a circle 01:04:778 - here is necessary to give it an even better finish of. - added (it's even in the song)
00:57:466 - But the Variation Problem is still there; 00:57:466 - http://puu.sh/7tZdU/a2b0084e8f.jpg How about trying a rhythm like that once? - i don't want to get inconsistent sry Q_Q
01:09:466 - add a slider tick with the hitsound, otherwise it's not being consistent anymore. - it shouldn't be consistent here, 01:10:216 (5,6) it's important to pronounce those two
01:32:716 - same as in easy and hard. - ^

I actually liked the hard; it has it's own style, and it works well. If you apply something of ^, don't Forget it to apply it to the other parts like These too please, since I didn't copy the suggestions to the similar parts (1st and 2nd kiai etc)

[Insane]

I've had a look through, and it was mostly fine. I like the kiai. Why didn't you use the custom hitsounds tho? They're quite cool. - ask bouncebabe xD

Good luck!

Irreversible wrote:

Viel Glück!

Bubbled

1. 00:15:466 (2) - Since the beginning you're using 1/2, all the time. For this slider, it feels like there was missing something to emphasize the sounds made between this slider and the next circle. What I suggest you, to make some variety over the rhythm, is to delete the next circle and add a reverse arrow on this slider. After that, since you've made some symmetry, all you have to do is to reverse them by highlighting and clicking of CTRL+G.

1. 00:06:841 (4) - It's a bit tricky here, since the objects are consistent on the timeline and they're not having a consistent spacing, it might be persuaded wrong. I suggest you to do CTRL+G to reverse beginning and end, I think it should be better that way.
2. 01:07:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - To be honest, I am really unsure about how these are arranged. I mean, the beginning of the slider (4) is hidden and then, the circle (1) is hidden by both sliders (5,6). So yeah, it would be less risky if you try something else here.
3. 01:50:903 (4) - I think it would be better if this slider was straight-up instead of pointing at the left? It would make a nice transition for the next objects

Gabe wrote:

Easy

1. 00:15:466 (2) - Since the beginning you're using 1/2, all the time. For this slider, it feels like there was missing something to emphasize the sounds made between this slider and the next circle. What I suggest you, to make some variety over the rhythm, is to delete the next circle and add a reverse arrow on this slider. After that, since you've made some symmetry, all you have to do is to reverse them by highlighting and clicking of CTRL+G.- fixed

Normal
Really nice slider art! - thanks >W<

Hard

1. 00:06:841 (4) - It's a bit tricky here, since the objects are consistent on the timeline and they're not having a consistent spacing, it might be persuaded wrong. I suggest you to do CTRL+G to reverse beginning and end, I think it should be better that way. - fixed
2. 01:07:966 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - To be honest, I am really unsure about how these are arranged. I mean, the beginning of the slider (4) is hidden and then, the circle (1) is hidden by both sliders (5,6). So yeah, it would be less risky if you try something else here. - (1) isn't hidden anymore by (5),(6), but (4) is still hidden, it's fine imp, if you have still a problem with it, pls tell me Gabe q-q
3. 01:50:903 (4) - I think it would be better if this slider was straight-up instead of pointing at the left? It would make a nice transition for the next objects - fixed

I have nothing to say over BB's Insane since I've looked at it many times..

Call me back when you're ready.- I'm ready o-o