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ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Piste SMILE Non-stop!!

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Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 3 luglio 2013 at 01:03:25

Artist: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori
Title: Piste SMILE Non-stop!!
Source: PistStar
Tags: osuplayer111 Darksonic Saten-san Kagayake Ashina no Star Dai Sakusen
BPM: 212
Filesize: 4768kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. DS's Hard (5 stars, 294 notes)
  2. Insane (4,82 stars, 496 notes)
  3. Saten's Normal (3,24 stars, 112 notes)
Download: ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Piste SMILE Non-stop!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 182nd Beatmap.

These days I'm finding really nice Game Songs, thanks to Vicho! <3


Mapset:

Insane - Done.
DS's Hard - Done.
Saten's Normal - Done.
Darksonic
First <3
Miya
lol, i already have this music from a long time. Good luck Andrea :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Moved to Pending Beatmaps :)
Jenny
It's DS' Hard, as DS does end on an s-sound and so the genitive should not be s's but rather only s'.

(Same goes for x, z and ß)
Topic Starter
Andrea
I'll tell that to Bruno, but usually he wants to keep the 's at the end as well.
Darksonic

Jenny wrote:

It's DS' Hard, as DS does end on an s-sound and so the genitive should not be s's but rather only s'.

(Same goes for x, z and ß)
I know that it's DS instead DS's but I already ranked 10 guest diffs like this, so it wouldn't be ok if I use a different one now, shouldn't be a big problem.
Makar
Cleaned thread. If you don't have criticism for this map specifically, do not post here.
Miya
Wrong tittleeeee!!! I told you the correct one, but why its still wrong??

ave;new Project feat. Sakura Saori - Piste ☆SMILE♪ Non-stop!! ~ Kagayake Ashina no Star Dai Sakusen~
Topic Starter
Andrea

Miya wrote:

Wrong tittleeeee!!! I told you the correct one, but why its still wrong??

ave;new Project feat. Sakura Saori - Piste ☆SMILE♪ Non-stop!! ~ Kagayake Ashina no Star Dai Sakusen~
I have added the rest as tags, the osz gets corrupted if I add that part of the title.

EDIT: Reported in Technical Support.

EDIT2: After many tests, it's characters' limit on title, added the other part of title in tags.
Kodora
I added correct artist using notepad and my osu still alive, you should try.

+ starred
GIDZ
I am from your M4M post and I am new to modding so I hope this helps :)

Insane:
00:12:380 - 's game play was uncomfortable.Too many tight notes.
00:16:343 - 's stream is far away for a continuing stream.Put them closer.
00:25:965 - 's game play was a bit tight (The notes were a bit off beat)
00:37:852 - ~Add a circle.Without it,it's kinda confusing.
Suggestions:
01:24:267 - ~01:24:762 - : I think it should be triplets as it matches the beat more.
I think 01:32:050 - should be a triplet and then make a triangle jump to make the ending match the jump beats.

Hard:
This difficulty is as good as perfect ^^ That's what I had to expect from you :)

Suggestions:
There should be more triplets in the map.I am not trying to brag but this I could complete this map with a track pad ><.
Some notes could be further away to make it harder.

Normal:
01:21:764 - Should start a new combo to not let the beginners get confused with the beat.Same for 01:23:984 -
Others are fine.

Suggestions:
The star shaped slider in the end could be fixed in order to look more like a star,as the end does not link the head of the slider.


I hope this helped! :)
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks ^^
taiko_maniac1811
May i make taiko diff? please :3
Topic Starter
Andrea
Sorry, I don't want taiko/ctb/mania guest difficulties. ><
xChippy
Hi~
Trying M4M from your queue >w<
General
All fine~
I'll just be really nazi lol =w=

Saten's Normal
00:07:003 (3) - The distance here. If it's not intentional I think you should fix it since you use 1.00x here :3.
00:14:644 (1) - 117|59 to stack with (1)
00:37:569 (1) - NC here?
00:38:135 (3) - Same as 00:07:003 (3) but in this case around 1.35
Just a suggestion maybe.. : 01:10:116 (4,5) - put finishes on both heads.
01:13:512 (1) - move to 257|171 to stack with (1)
01:27:097 (1) - maybe move it to 248|96?

DS's Hard
00:18:607 (3) - move the end point a little for a better blanket
00:20:588 (1,2,3) - maybe like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/830301, Coordinates are: (1) at 328|238 (2) at 395|157 (3) at the same place where it was.
00:20:871 (3,4) - make it so it curls evenly around?
01:25:824 (4,7) - maybe copy (4) and Rotate a little bit to make them similiar ?
Same finish suggestion just like in Easy

Insane
00:56:814 (6) - Stack it
01:16:059 (2) - Ctrl G ? Flows better imo
01:30:635 (7,1) - Maybe remove these and put some circles (jumps) ?
Same finish suggestion just like in Easy

This is all I could find to suggest~
Nice map~ :3 and catchy song >w<
(╯°□°)╯︵
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for modding!

Fixed some stuff and updated.
Irreversible
hey there, m4m i guess :P

so let's start then

[Insane]

00:07:993 (2) - Maybe, just maybe, rotate this by some degrees to the right, to get a nice path between 00:07:569 (1,2) - these two!
00:12:380 (1,2,3) - It's just me I suppose but could you check this part? Because for me, it sounds wrong... the jump to 00:12:805 (3) - doesn't fit the vocal (or the background) at all, .. up to you
00:17:899 (4,5,6,7) - http://puu.sh/3neyO.jpg Try this pattern! It has a better flow for overall.
00:22:427 (5) - An angular slider would fit better here, just to follow some nice patterns before, because the current curve seems a bit weird for me
00:40:965 (4,1) - What about stacking 4 to the slider start?
01:32:616 (10) - What about making this finish louder?

can't say much about it, there aren't a lot things i could suggest because it would destroy your map :D good job~

[DS's Hard]

00:23:984 (2) - I think the blanket could be a little better here, move the last white point a bit down.
01:06:295 (3,4) - This confused me a little, try regular spacing
01:28:088 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/3neR4.jpg Try this pattern? It looks a bit nicer if it's round imo

This map is really awesome! The blankets are perfectly used, the only thing i kinda dislike are these stacks (00:34:880 (6,7) - like this) Maybe you could replace some of them by sliders .. but it's up to you, i didn't mod them because it's like the map style of this map. xD

[Saten's Normal]

HP 2 and OD 3? raeally? increase both by 1, at least to get a better diffspread

00:14:644 (1) - This isn't perfectly stacked with 00:12:380 (1) - , please fix it :)
00:40:682 (2,3,4) - Could you check the DS between them? it seems like it isn't the same.
01:29:361 (1) - O: kawaii

Looks fine as well, just nazi i suppose ><


Sorry for that crap mod, but yeah, there isn't much to say, nice mapset!
Topic Starter
Andrea
Okay, fixed some small stuff.

Thanks for modding! <3
deadbeat
and looks fixed now, i wonder what the hell happened o_O
Topic Starter
Andrea
Yeah that's a weird bug, submitting again fixed it.

Thank you anyways!
Darksonic
Thanks for modding, fixed some stuff.

http://puu.sh/3noN4.osu
Topic Starter
Andrea
Updated o3o
Chyo-Kun


kk bby

[Saten's Easy]


  1. 00:07:852 (1,2,1) - So repetitive ;A; Use different pattern?
  2. 00:12:380 (1,2,1) - ^
  3. 00:25:258 (4) - Have a beat instead of a slider,so it's more predictable for newbies
  4. 00:50:588 (1) - Add a beat here and move the spinner start on 00:50:871 (1) and the end on 00:50:871 (1) . Looks and sounds way better imo
    y u no ar10 on kiai
  5. 01:04:173 (2) - Isn't this too fast compared to the rest of the map?

    [DS's Hard]

    nazii
  6. 00:22:427 (1) - I don't see why you added NC here
  7. 00:50:871 (1,2,3,4) - Use a different pattern,this one is too hard for a "Hard" diff
  8. 00:53:701 (4) - Add NC
  9. 00:54:267 (7) - ^
  10. 01:30:352 (3) - Hidden beat with a pause. Too confusive,use spacing for this one.

    [0108 Style]

    lol
  11. 00:12:380 (1,2,3,4) - Holy shit,jump enorme così all'inizio della mappa? Fallo un po' piu' facile..

Nice map val


/me runs
Saten

Chyo-Kun wrote:

[Saten's Easy]


  1. 00:07:852 (1,2,1) - So repetitive ;A; Use different pattern? different? look at the rest of the map =w=
  2. 00:12:380 (1,2,1) - ^ ^
  3. 00:25:258 (4) - Have a beat instead of a slider,so it's more predictable for newbies how would a hitcircle help them predict this better?
  4. 00:50:588 (1) - Add a beat here and move the spinner start on 00:50:871 (1) and the end on 00:50:871 (1) . Looks and sounds way better imo I used to have it like that, but then I changed my mind. It also makes the spinner fairly long enough
    y u no ar10 on kiai lol
  5. 01:04:173 (2) - Isn't this too fast compared to the rest of the map? how?
o.o
[ Zzz ]
HI~ Andrea

Saten's Normal

01:00:776 (2) - Can you try

01:29:361 (1) - You Here Change This?
(I If you change I think that ...)

Insane

Very interesting map !!

DS's Hard

00:03:748 (2) - x388 y272 More Good Thinking Shape

00:02:192 (3,4,5,6) - Notes Do not overlap Better I think that ... ex : Do not try Roughly like that

00:04:597 (3,4,5,6) - Notes Do not overlap Better I think that ... ex : 00:06:861 (3,4,5,6) -

00:11:248 (1,2,3,4) - Seems to be obscured

00:13:795 (2,3) - x288 y324 More Good Thinking Shape

00:47:899 (6) - Seems to be obscured

00:54:692 (8) - ^

01:20:729 (2) - x416 y248 More Good Thinking Shape

01:21:578 (3,4,5,6) - = 00:04:597 (3,4,5,6) - Notes Do not overlap Better I think that ... ex : 00:06:861 (3,4,5,6) -

Like this

01:27:522 (2) - x396 y256 More Good Thinking Shape

+Star!! Good Map!!
Chyo-Kun
My mods are so bad </3

Sorry ;(
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