376,144,63999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,88,64443,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,40,64887,6,0,L|200:32,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,68,66221,1,0,0:0:0:0:

ARE YOU SERIOUS about the kiais? this is a copy from the first kiai lol. Seriously, map it decently.
all of my lol.

Nemis wrote:

ARE YOU SERIOUS about the kiais? this is a copy from the first kiai lol. Seriously, map it decently.
all of my lol.

Ayu wanted a difficulty, I said him to give me more time but he wanted it asap, so I needed to copy-paste kiais and another part.

Nemis wrote:

@all: Applied almost all, thanks! I'll probably remap some parts a bit in the next update. For the breaks I'll talk with Ayu :3

Kyshiro wrote:

Copy pasting whole parts just to finish it fast is simply called being lazy, even if Ayu said he wanted it asap, asap doesn't mean right now. A mapset should have the highest quality possible, having the same things over and over by copying whole parts kills this.

Kyshiro wrote:

In other words, all the previous mods did not count for your diff since you'll be remapping it? I sure hope you're remapping it but next time just map the whole thing without copying in the first place.

Gabe wrote:

if you think your map is decent enought to be ranked, fucking poke me.

1. 00:51:110 (3) - It would be better if you make similar and opposite (2), like by moving middle and end sliderpoint up
2. 01:04:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - You should move this pattern a bit to the left in my opinion, as a 1024x768 player it's frustating to play that right in the corner.
3. 01:24:665 (1) - Try to move down a bit
4. 01:33:110 - Not necessary but a 1/2 slider wouldn't hurt here.
5. 02:03:999 (1,2,1) - You should space as you did before imo, gives a better effect to the gameplay
6. 02:12:887 (3) - What about making it linear? Fits better imo.
7. 03:30:443 (4,5,1) - Kinda nazi, is it intentional or are they supposed to be on the same diagonal line?
8. 03:43:332 (1) - Shouldn't it start on the red tick?

1. 01:24:443 (4) - Così dritto è un po' bruttino secondo me
2. 03:27:998 (2) - Qualche grid più in giù?

1. Are you sure that you want to keep KIAI playing during that Spinner on 03:41:554 - ? It feels pretty weird to have KIAI while spining, also I feel like the song already calmed down while the Spinner plays
   
   
2. Gap between the two diffs is pretty high, in fact; the SV change from 0,80 to 1,80 is not acceptable. Nemis' diff should be considered to be an Easy, so you should make a difficulty between Nemis' and your diff.

1. 00:32:887 (1) - Sounds a bit empty, using a whistle would be cool but then again it would be a bit lonely if you only use it once. So either just leave it or try to add some whistles to the downbeats, hue.
2. 00:44:887 (2) - You can try to place that on the middle of the grid, just for a neater look.
3. 00:45:332 (3) - I understand why this Slider looks like it looks, but it looks a bit untidy to me. Try to move the second wavepoint away from the other one.
4. 00:48:443 (2) - You should try not to let the Sliders end on heavy beats, you could try to replace it with 2 circles.
5. 01:04:887 (1) - Add a finish to the start, it will be consistent with the one on 01:01:332 -
6. 01:07:554 (4) - Remove the clap on the end; the song doesn't really call for an emphasize here, and it breaks consistency.
7. 01:08:443 (1) - Eh, I don't think you did that on purpose, but remove the whistle from the Sliderbody and add it on the parts of it only? Sounds way better to me.
8. 01:11:999 (1) - Not a big deal here aswell, but remove the whistle from the body? Sounds way too noisy.
9. 01:15:110 (6) - Same as 01:07:554 (4) -
10. 01:22:221 (4) - Same as above
11. 01:27:999 (3) - I don't know if you did that on purpose, but anyways, this is a good chance to improve the blanket with 4.
12. 01:51:110 (1) - Whistle seems to work well here, since you can try to show that a new part starts again.
13. 02:02:221 (1,2) - Try a whistle on 1 and 2's end, it will follow the melody becoming higher in a pretty cool way.
14. 02:08:887 (1) - Same as 01:04:887 (1) -
15. 02:12:443 (1) - Same as 01:08:443 (1) - but you have it on the body aswell, so I'd say just add the whistles on the Slider parts for the one I mentioned before.
16. 02:19:554 (1) - Try to add either a whistle or a finish to the start, the beat feels too heavy to be empty.
17. 02:26:665 (1) - Same here
18. 03:09:332 (1) - You can delete all the timing points which are during the Spinner, they are unused.
19. 03:16:443 (1) - I feel as if this Slider looks a bit wry, hue, try to align the wavepoints and move the end a bit up. Or just try to make the shape smoother all in all.
20. 03:19:999 (1) - Same as 01:04:887 (1) -
21. 03:30:665 (1) - Same as 02:19:554 (1) -
22. 03:37:776 (1) - And same as above.

1. 01:43:999 (1) - Try to shape it the same way as 5? Just an idea, but it could work well.
2. 03:41:332 (5) - Try to place this circle somewhere else, it's not well readable on that Slider's end. Besides that, it will be easily to just move somewhere else.

LunarSakuya wrote:

Congrats