Yay, weekend! I finally have time to check the mods ;u;!
Updated mapset!
Quiz-chan wrote:
Ohai~ from the QAT's queue Hello!
[General]
This is really a high-quality mapset. Well done! Omg, thank you! >.<
But, an Easy with 3 stars? Kind of high. Also the settings are quite high for an Easy, either lower the settings (HP -1, OD -1) or rename the diff to Easy+ (even if it is not a beautiful name, but you already have a Normal). Yeah, I'm not very used to making Easy difficults, that's why I always get my friend's GD for it :'D
[Easy]
High settings, please lower as described above. Yup, done!
00:39:047 - Kind of strange time to slightly accelerate spacing. It may be very subtle, but still, nothing has changed in the song. Indeed, the spacing even changed in the middle of a combo. Not saying it must be fixed, just wondering why it is there. Hmm, I fixed it anyways~
Cool Easy actually, but really, it is darn hard for its tier! Thank you! And yup, I really need to fix it ;-;
[Normal]
Actually, I'd also lower HP and OD by -1. These settings are really hard for a Normal. Yeah, I fixed it
This is also a marvellous diff, also a little hard, but OK. Yay, thank you!
[Second Reproduction]
00:41:218 (4,5,6) - I find this pattern a little crooked. Moving (5) to x:80 y:216 would match my taste a little more. Since I think what you mentioned isn't there anymore, I'll keep it >.<
00:51:482 (1) - This NC counts as NC spam, the previous NC is enough to emphasize the instrumental hit in the background. Oh, alright! Fixed
TBH, the diff is objectively well constructed, but I didn't really feel... "the kick" in it, you know. It was nothing really special. At least, for my taste. Yeah, I still need to improve a lot on Insanes. There are lots of things I still den't fully get it~
Even if the easier diffs aren't really easy, this mapset's got quite some potential to be ranked in the near future. more mainstream japanese stuff, meh Thank you for mod!!! I'm glad to know that ;u;! And yeah, I'm a fan of japanese stuff, hahaha!Good luck!
PS: this post is not to be kudosu'd, it isn't kd-worthy Ohh, alright! It was short, but really helpful, though!
Irreversible wrote:
Hi there, it's my turn, from QAT-Queue! Hello!Probably all of this will be suggestions. Feel free to deny them, if you don't like it.
[General]
Everything seems fine, but something bothers me : sb\lrc\l-7.png seems unused, remove it. Ohh, didn't notice it. Fixed
[Easy]
00:38:258 (3) - Try to get a nicer pattern here? Let me show you: http://puu.sh/4cch4.jpg I think I understood. Fixed!
00:39:837 - Well, imo this rhythm could fit the lyrics a bit better, if you put it like this: http://puu.sh/4ccjv.jpg Nice! Done!
00:47:732 (3,4) - The rhythm again, try to click on both, and press CTRL + G, I think it would fit the rhythm better. You are right!
01:02:732 (2,3) - Lol, same here. You don't need to change these, yet it would be a better rhythm imo. It's also more consistent with 01:14:968 (2,3) - . I see, but I'll keep it this way
Solid Easy, just those minor rhythm things which bothers me. I'm glad it's solid >.<
[Normal]
The settings are rather high for a normal, aren't they? Try reducing OR and HP by 1 tick each. Yeah, fixed xD
00:37:271 (3,4,5) - Same suggestion as in easy, try to get a better triangle pattern. 00:38:653 (5) - would be at 408 304. Should be better now
00:50:100 (3) - You used quite a lot 1/2 circles, after a slider. Why not here? It plays better, since currently the rhythm sounds a bit too late. My suggestion: 00:49:903 - move it to this spot. Looks nice! Done
01:03:521 (4) - This rhythm fits better if you add a circle 01:03:324 - . It's because it feels very empty, if you leave out that vocal. Hmm, yeah, indeed. But I'd better not add so many circles because it's a Normal
01:03:521 (4) - Also, did you miss a hitsound on the slider tail? Hmm, I guess not? Checked it and it seems all okay.
Not much to say, although I would use more 1/2, but that's up to you completely. Mentioned some above, if you didn't notice. Yeah, thank you! I added one, but I'll keep the others like that because too many 1/2 would be bad for Normal diff
[Second Reproduction]
Wtf. Just realised that this is an SB, and not a video, wtf good job!!! How comes that it doesn't lag? Since if i make a single picture SB in my maps, my computer nearly crashes, well w/e. ~ Ha, ha! That's sherrie's SB! The file size isn't so heavy, so I think that's why ^^
Going to be a little nazi, since there are some not-really-nice circles/sliders. Okay!
00:21:482 (2,3) - Move this a little up, to get an increased flow between these and the slider before. Done!
00:22:468 (7,8,3,4) - Well, tbh, I don't really like this slider placement, in the whole map it is quite nice, but here it looks stacked, and it's not a really good pattern. The rhythm is nice, but maybe a rearrangement would help? If you like it, you can keep it of course. But it would be nice if you could 00:22:468 (7,8) - place these others, because the stacking is meh. What about a similar pattern like 00:24:047 (3,4) - to make it consistent at least? Yeah, I got these comments about these sliders before. I think it would be better for 00:22:468 (7,8) to be consistent with 00:28:784 (7,8) instead because at those parts, there aren't any drums like 00:24:047 (3,4) I already fixed this on the other mods
00:27:797 (2,3) - Move them to 232 188, same reason as the first suggestion. Since I moved things here a bit on the other mods, I think it's fine now
00:42:008 (8,9) - If I were you, I'd replace them with a big slider. Fits this .. slight bgm really nice, and makes it a little more consistent with 00:40:429 (2) - those. Hmm, I started following the drums here, so I'll leave it like that for now c:
00:43:784 - I can't hear a sound here, you should work with a slider, passing through it, if you want something there. But currently, you should delete it for sure. Actually, there is a sound here. If you hear it carefuly, you'll hear a sound similar to soft-whistles. That's why I added it here. But I'll think about it
00:44:475 (1,2,3,4) - ? I don't get this, since this is a really.. created rhythm. Please space them with a 1/2 rhythm, since the current one doesn't fit at all. Hmm, it's not that created... If you hear the song with 25% of playback rate, you'll notice why I put those 1/4 notes there. If someone else complains about it, I'll remove it >.<
00:45:758 (6,7,8,9,1) - Try to get a better 'path' here. Let me show you what i mean. (Didn't make any big changes, just rearranging the placement.) Yeah, it feels much better!Puush still down00:46:942 (3,4) - Spacing looks messed up, just for aesthetitcs, move 00:47:337 (4) - to 204 308? I made changes on these and they aren't there anymore ^^132,192,45758,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,148,45857,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,112,45955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,92,46054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,80,46153,6,0,P|328:88|316:172,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:47:732 (5) - Don't forget to move this a bit upwards, if you applied ^. ^
00:58:784 (1) - Move to 192 184. Same as above, just this time only the slider. You should really do that. Done!
01:19:311 (6) - Not REALLY sure about that, but Ctrl + G 01:19:113 (5) - with this one. Because I think 'shi' is quite a strong vocal, even if it's on the red tick. You're quite right there. But if I did that, I wouldn't get the plate sounds on 01:19:311
Well that's it already o: Tari will mod it further, and then we'll look further Hope I was able to help you a bit. Thank you very much for modding! It was really helpful ^^
Okay, now I'm SO tired! But thank you, guys! Now I feel that my map improved a lot! >.<Tari wrote:
ok.
[Easy]
- 00:55:232 (4) - Not big issue, but I'd like you to make this note stack with 00:52:468 (1) - sldier end's here. It will require you rearrange some of previous notes. Okay!
- 01:05:495 (1) - Add finish to the end here? its to follow the same finish pattern as of here : 01:09:837 (4) - for the most part, since you add two finishes there too. Oh, I added it on 01:09:837 (4) because the song asks for it. But putting finish here follows the same pattern on my TSR diff, so okay
- 01:07:468 (3) - Whistle here? it doesn't hit exactly at the piano sound, but It still fits to me. You're right
- 01:18:916 (3) - Ehh, I think finish fits better than whistle at the end of the slider, the impact sound is much greater to me. Yeah, that was my mistake xD
- 01:24:837 (2,3,4) - Kinda overlaps previous pattern, can you move it to better spot? Like this : http://puu.sh/4degS.jpg I don't know if I got this right, but I think you meant to make a stack with 01:25:232 (3) and the tail of 01:22:468 (3) - ?
Thank you for modding!
[Normal]
- 00:41:021 (2,3) - Honestly, I'd like it if you stacked this note, just personal preferance here. I thought that not stacking them would be easier to read, but I think stacking them is easier to execute it, right? xD
- 01:03:521 (3) - Create a better blanket, bleh just do anything to make this better I guess you meant the flow? I tried to do something
- 01:05:692 (2) - Same thing as in easy, finish end Yup, added it
- 01:07:468 (4) - Same thing as in easy. Done!
- 01:24:837 (3) - Whistle to the start I guess? Okay
- 01:22:863 (4) - I feel that there can be something in the middle, and if you put some kind of beat or note in the middle you can add a finish with that too, but its your choice. Hmm, I think it's okay this way c:
That's all I got map is pretty nice
[Second Reproduction]
- 00:28:389 (5) - Please move this spacing equivalent to 00:22:074 (5) - or the other way around, they both should have the same spacing Done!
- 00:51:876 (1) - Whistle? Kay!
- 00:54:047 (5) - ^ to start ^
- 01:01:153 - This pause, meh, your choice but I think a note to the middle of this sym pattern would be better Hmm, okay xD
- 01:07:074 (6) - Whistle to the end sounds nice Okay
- 01:20:297 (8) - ^ but to the start Follows the vocal nicely!
Updated mapset!