还是刚才那事,三连的起点要一致
就是一个拍子拆成4份,哪3个是打哪1个是空要一致,这样就不太突兀了
就是一个拍子拆成4份,哪3个是打哪1个是空要一致,这样就不太突兀了
Alex:Gah! It's +10 million points. D: Oops... Rankability is questionable.
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage Moved it.. -.-
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5eh? No nazi...
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4Eh, fine...
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring tooGah, remade it, but still questioning the rankablity. D:
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen-.- There's been more offscreen... But I'll change it.
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2nah
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
fixed.thx blissfulyoshi !blissfulyoshi wrote:
Quick mod.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:19:71 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:43:30 (2,3,4) - DONE
00:56:08 (5,6,7,8) -DONE
01:01:97 (3,4,5) -DONE
01:09:84 (5,6,7) -DONE
I think you get what I am looking at.
Also I noticed you have notes offscreen like 01:20:65 (1)DONE
Normal:
basically the same opinion and advice from easy.
Edit:
Other inconsistent spacings:
00:04:23 (1,2,3,4) - small spacing changeDONE
00:08:16 (3,4,5,6) - " " (also notice how the overall spacing changed between these 2 combos)DONE
00:28:06 (3,4,5) - DONE
There seem to be fewer problems in this difficulty.
Vikon hard:DONE
Get rid of the first timing section because you are not using it in this diff.
I did not like how you sometimes changed spacing randomly, but I guess it is okay
00:28:56 (4,5,6) - make a straight line
01:02:71 (6) - make a horizontal reflection of 4
01:11:07 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like how the spacing between 2,3 is smaller than the rest of the combo
02:08:07 (4,5,6) - make the end of 4 and the start of 6 the same distnace form 5
Vikon's ultimate:DONE
your spacing seems to vary through a combo
00:16:02 (2) - make this properly distance snapped
00:17:01 (8,9,10) - make the spacing here the same as that in 00:16:27 (4,5,6)
00:36:42 (9,10,11,12) - inconsistent spacing
00:48:21 (1) - I think it is illegal for a slider and spinner to be on the same point on the timeline
00:52:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - inconsistnet spacing
you might want to comb through this map with distance snap.
Alex:DONE
00:00:30 (1) - this note is very high, almost touching the drain guage
00:02:76 (6) - have this directly under the end of 5
00:28:07 (6) - have this directly under the end of 4
00:46:62 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - I really think this stream is too close together. It is also sort of boring too
00:54:11 (7,8) - make parallel to 5,6
01:09:10 (2,4) - make the spacing between these 2 similar to the spacing between 1,3
01:16:97 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
01:17:21 (4) - make the same distance from 5 that 6 is
01:22:86 (9,10,11) - make similar to 3,4,5 (don't know which one is wrong)
01:40:80 (3) - not onscreen
01:53:83 (2) - stack on the end of 1
02:05:13 (3,4) - nice if parallel to 1,2
02:15:45 (1,2,3) - make parallel to 4,5,6
02:20:36 (7,8,9) - might look nicer if all 3 of these were exactly the same
fixed.thx fufe. love this song,do the best we can .fufe wrote:
I used translator. The notes may not move a lot but it is hard to mod if timing looks bad.
ALL:
!! Look at HP drain on empty space. You might have to add breaks.
!! Please add breaks! two minutes is very long. This is more important for harder difficulties.
Vikon Hard
The stopping sliders look messy =x
01:09:84 (3,4) - move away a little?DONE
02:09:30 (5,6) - align with 4? if you wantDONE
Vikon Ultimate
Use "Catmull" sliders? (push 's') [00:17:62 (11) - looks bad]
01:37:11 (1) - spacing might be hard to see when you have to click this fast. Move away?DONE
01:40:31 (1,2,3) - make spacing the same for all hitsDONE
02:22:45 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - impossible to see for me.DONE
-i do not like maps that have too much 1/4hitstreams
Normal
Timing:52,886 please inherit timing here alsoDONE
01:59:96 (7) - move down so it follows slider (6)?DONE
02:56:85 (10) - spacingDONE
02:57:71 (3) - spacingDONE
Easy
Inherit timing again.
Impossible to fail
make hit circle bigger?DONE
make hp drain a little bigger?DONE
01:11:80 (2,3,4) - spacingDONE( problem?)
01:17:70 (3,4,5) - spacingDONE(^)
01:32:44 (9) - move forward 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:34:90 (1) - move away. down?DONE
01:37:11 (5) - move away.DONE
01:44:24 (7) - move forward 1/4DONE
01:48:17 (4) - move forward 1/4. shorten by 1/4. then fix spacing.DONE
01:52:84 (5,6) - move away.DONE
02:07:58 (6) - too far.DONE
02:08:81 (7) - new combo?DONE
02:11:76 (13) - move forward 1/4 and shorten? It is ok to be late for easy if you do a 1/1 beat combo. DONE
02:15:57 (6) - ^DONE
02:19:62 (5) - forward 1/4?DONE
I will only mod a map that i can complete, I cannot do Alex Insane.
osuplayer111 wrote:
Remove the [Air] on the title please.
[Easy]
Remove first offset.DONE
BPM 122,10 Offset 15.305DONE
01:08:87 (4) - New combo.DONE
01:24:35 (4) - Extend by 1/4.DONE
01:31:47 (7) - New combo.DONE
02:10:79 (12) - ^DONE
02:13:24 (1) - Too close from 02:11:53 (14)DONE
[Normal]
01:05:96 (1) - Finish.DONE
01:40:30 (4) - Remove this note.DONE
[Vikon's Hard]DONE
00:42:81 (5) - Illegal slider.
[Vikon's Ultimate]DONE
Abuse of claps on this difficulty.
[Alex's Insane]Waite Alex's Edit
02:09:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) - Hard to read imo.
thanks you james039!james039 wrote:
[All difficulties]i will mod when i have best idea
02:54:02 and on -> The tempo is decreasing, please use additional timing sections. All difficulties are falling completely out of sync at this point, and this must be corrected.
Also, Adjust all offsets in the song by +30ms is sounding much better to me.
The following are just suggestions to perhaps improve the flow of each map, I recommend them, but feel free to only use some of them.
[Easy]
01:24:34 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorter done
01:47:93 (4) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 shorterdone
01:59:85 (6) - Move back 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:03:90 (5) - Move back 1/4 tick to blue and make 1/4 longerdone
02:11:52 (13) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
02:15:45 (6) - Move ahead 1/4 tick to bluedone
02:19:38 (5) - Move ahead 1/4 tick and make 1/4 shorterdone
[Normal]
00:25:62 (5) - Back 1/4 tick to bluedone
00:33:24 (5) - Shorten 1/4 tick to end on bluedone
00:41:10 (6) - ^done
00:57:19 (4) - move ahead 1/4 tick and shorten by 1/4 so it goes from red to whitedone
01:04:69 (1) - shorten 1/2 tick to end on previous whitedone
01:29:01 (3) - back 1/4 tick to bluedone
01:29:50 (4) - back 1/2 tick to reddone
02:47:88 (6) - back 1/4 to bluedone
02:49:84 (6) - ^done
02:51:81 (6) - ^done
Everything past this point is out of sync and I can't mod due to timing problem.
[Vikon's hard]
well synced, but it is surprising when the music switches from soft to normal samples.
[Vikon's ultimate]
I really don't like this difficulty. It's nothing but streams all the way through and that makes it tiring to play. My advice is to replace half of the streams with other unique patterns.
[Alex's insane]wait alex's mod
01:47:42 (1) - The mid point of the slider does not sync the music at all. Try another pattern.
I think the stacks should be removed
01:37:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
02:09:90 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26) -
02:25:75 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41) -
These run too long.
Also, this is overmapped. There should be some regular pauses in the map. There is no stopping clicking at all in this. >_<
I really don't like the flow of it when there is just no stop and endless stacks.
Please consider my suggestions, I just want to help improve the map.
It is much better than when I first looked at it a month ago, so it is now getting my star.