watashino wrote:

General

Lead-in一定要設最少兩秒 原因呢...你自己按一下TEST就知道了... k

Easy

00:25:567 (1) - 這個BLANKET感覺做得有點不美 試試把中間的點往右上移一點 沒要blanket啊
00:39:685 (4) - 這個SLIDER的尾與00:38:979 (3) - 的距離有點遠 如果是想做BLANKET的話 不妨把SLIDER尾移上一至兩TICK 不想
00:41:097 (5) - SPACING變了1.7...到最尾都是1.7....這.... ..好吧

Normal

00:00:156 (1) - slider的尾巴可以移上一點 令blanket變得更美一點 k
00:02:979 (3) - ^, 尾移右一點 會更歪吧
00:05:803 (1) - ^尾移上一點 k
00:14:273 (1) - 這個slider如果直接拉到00:14:979 (2) - 的方向會不會比較好?? 像這樣 k
00:16:391 (3) - 可能跟2做blanket會好一點吧??? 懶
00:24:155 (1,2,3) - 這三個同一x坐標會不會比較好?? 動了一下
00:25:920 (4,5) - 怎麼突然用1.5x? k
00:32:626 (6) - 這個slider的尾巴跟00:32:273 (5) - 太近了 要移右一點 還好吧
00:45:332 (1) - 這個slider的中間和尾巴都移右一格會比較好 k
00:54:861 (2) - spacing... k
00:57:861 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺這部份很難...還有spacing問題... k
kiai time spacing轉成1.6x沒問題??? 故意的
01:09:332 (5) - 覺得這個slider應該在01:09:685 - 完 然後在01:10:038 - 加個slider, 在01:10:391 - 或01:10:567 - 完 想把兩邊連起來

Hard

00:00:156 (1,2,3,4,5) - 可以的話這幾個slider的spacing都一致點吧...不過因為這是hard 可以不用理會spacing k
00:18:508 (5) - 這個移上一點或00:17:450 (2) - 移右一點?? 因為看到2,4 和3,5之間的距離有明顯差別...感覺不太美...這是小問題 可以不改的~ 還好啦
00:19:567 (1) - 這個slider中間的點向右移一格至兩格吧~~我想沒理由向右包...明明前一個slider在左面... 為了讓(1,2)間的flow好點
00:22:744 (1,3) - 有一點重疊 會考慮把3向下移嗎? 哪有重疊啊
00:28:214 (1) - 不明白為什麼這裡加nc...因為你加在每個1/1拍後...感覺這可以不加~~反而覺得00:28:744 (2) - 才要加nc 去提醒別人spacing在改變~ k
00:32:273 (2) - 這個換slider會不會比較好? 意思是00:32:273 (2,3) - 這兩個換位會不會比較好??? 不會
00:50:273 (5) - 這個slider的尾巴向右移一格會好一點 往左了
00:50:803 (6) - 這個note有點突兀... 不會的
00:54:861 (2) - 如果想跟00:53:097 (4) - 的尾重疊 要把他放在x:382; y:59才行. 差一點... k
00:55:920 (4) - nc? 因為你原本跟vocal的 突然跟背景音... 這也有跟到vocal啊
00:59:450 (1) - 放在x:416; y:205 如果想疊得好一點的話... k
01:02:273 (1) - slider的開始和中間向左移一格會好看一點 k

感覺找到的都是小問題...我不太懂mod啦~~希望幫到你啦~~

Gloria Guard wrote:

Sorry my modding dealy.

[General]

Fine

[Easy]


00:11:630 I suggest this part, i think add spinner is better imo because
feeling a little empty since the AR is kinda low, it won't be that empty :p
00:58:748 (1) remove NC and 00:59:454 (3) add NC k
01:02:983 (1,2) i think this two slider symmetry is better imo Dislike this idea, sorry >:

SPOILER

[Normal]

i think this diff no problem imo.
Sorry.

[Hard]

01:01:126 (1,2,3) hmm.. i don't understand this slider curve flow. i recommend flow k

SPOILER

01:10:655 (1) This is slider end point sound 5%? sure!

Good luck.

HelloSCV wrote:

yo

General

1. maybe you forgot to set audio lead-in

Easy

00:33:332 (2) - touching HP bar little bit k
00:36:155 (4) - need normal sample set on end nice catch
00:48:861 (1) - try whsitle
00:54:508 (2) - ^ both added :>
00:58:744 (1) - delete NC , 00:59:450 (3) - add NC Add NC at (3)
01:24:685 (1) - same as Hard k

Normal

00:17:097 (4) - NC k
00:17:097 (4) - whistle on start? there's no slider o3o
00:53:803 (1) - ^ on end k
01:12:155 (5) - missed clap on repeat k
01:24:685 (1) - same as Hard k
[notice]Hard

00:20:626 (4) - try delete whistle on this start and add it 00:20:450 (3) - here k
00:36:508 (1) - this NC color is purposed? yep :>
00:48:508 (2) - missed whistle on repeat k
00:53:803 (1) - ^ on end k
01:00:861 (1) - delete NC for consistence? k
01:04:391 (9) - hmm i think 1/2 slider is better for rhythm I want to make a little break here :>
01:24:597 (1) - how about increase slider length by 01:28:920 - here? much better imo k

mostly HS mods orz because this mapset is fking awesome
hope will be ranked soon!

384059043 wrote:

占坑 有空来mod

EDIT: No Kudosu for this post!
算了 补一颗星做补偿

what the flask 根本找不出什么东西QAQ

[Normal]

* 00:24:155 (1,2) - R U sure? 0.0 有些难读图 况且是Normal 還好啦還好啦 lol

* 00:25:920 (4) - 这里应该New Combo k

* 01:14:803 (3,4,5,6) - 沾到边了 第二段kiai remap了 ;_____;

[Hard]

*AR=8也没问题 毕竟kiai跳得厉害 试试？ nice

* 00:50:803 (6,1,2,3) - 试试摆出一个正方形来 spacing故意弄不一樣 (才分的清1/4跟1/1) 所以大概不能了囧


Hard跳得巨爽._. 什么时候有kds了补上一颗星

mintong89 wrote:

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
前段可以加绿线从小声到大声 k

[Hard]

00:35:273 - 加个note会比较好, 最好是slider到 00:35:803 - 不太好吧感覺對不上什麼東溪
01:10:038 (1) - 感觉直线会比较好 還行啊

找不到东西啊哭哭！

No_Gu wrote:

lead-in 你好

[Easy]
00:08:626 (1) - repeat上面没音啊 明明有orz
01:23:450 (2) - 拆成带repeat的slider跟个finish多好 難 懶

[Normal]
00:02:626 (2,3) - 不好看啊 動了下
00:17:803 (6,7) - 没音啊 有的吧
00:43:920 (2,3) - kick意义何在。。 改了
kiai间距有点乱。你自己修一下看是都分开好还是都遮一点点 後面SV開到1.2x了..重新排了下

[Hard]
00:42:508 (5,1) - 不好看发自真心 還好啊啊啊
00:56:626 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 反正1PC我是读出来了但是其他人怎么看我就不知道了 AR+1應該好讀點
01:04:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然没什么问题但是感觉有点随便 吃事

。。没了

Sun Rainbow wrote:

M4M

Nazi MOD...zzz...

Easy
00:14:273 (1) - 可以找个铃铃铃的Hitsound 懶啊~_~
00:59:450 (3) - NC k

Normal
00:11:450 (1) - 沒差吧
00:50:979 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得你可以摆正点 還好
00:56:626 (1) - 首尾对齐 調了下

Hard
00:11:450 (4) - NC比较好 懶 因為後面NC梗就不見了
00:39:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - 各NC 還是算了
01:07:214 (3,3) - 重叠比较好看吧 不相干啊
01:15:685 (6) - x:392 y:104 y:134吧104搞啥
让其看起来像和01:14:273 (3,2) - 是个三连一样
01:21:685 (5) - 不不這是故意的
01:22:391 (3) - 如果改了之前那条 那么这个note和其重叠 你懂

EmingK wrote:

/w\

[General]
天国的lead in君。。

[Easy]
00:25:567 (1,2) - 专注blanket三十年 明明就沒有blanket hhh

[Normal]
00:00:156 (1,2) - 专注blanket三十年
00:05:803 (1,2) - ^
00:32:273 (5,6) - ^
01:13:214 (7,1) - ^ 這些其他modder都堤過了 我就不動了 (
00:17:097 (4) - NC
00:25:920 (4) - NC 這兩個也是 都改了

[Hard]
00:49:567 (4,5) - 专注blanket三十年 還行吧

;w;神麻婆的图果然厉害 ;_;

P A N wrote:

hi flask :3 your map is already nice orz
so this is JUST a little suggestion

[Hard]
00:39:685 (1) - 1 grid right? Seems ugly afterwards orz
00:50:273 (5) - move tail 1 grid left k
01:08:626 (3) - what about move it to stack with the previous (3) for make it clean? and fix its shape a bit. oh well, current pattern is okay I think =.=
01:16:214 (1) - remove NC and add NC at 01:16:391 (3) instead. that's ugly D:

[Normal]
00:55:214 (3) - move tail 1 grid down would be great k
00:56:626 (1) - move center 1 grid down and move tail 2 grid right? k

[Easy]
00:39:685 (4,5) move to 248|316 , 61|217 for make (5)'s tail perfect stack with the previous (3). alright

thats all good luck x_x