rust45 wrote:

Hey, saw this in the overdrive queue, figure you want to get this ranked, so here I am to help.

Delete the unused osb file.

[Hard]
00:43:264 (1,1) - These kinda make the map feel lazy. And I don't really like how there are two, either map the area, or make one spinner last the length of both of them. Fixed
01:29:098 (7) - I don't like this slider Hmm, I like this slider Is it so bad that because of it this wouldn't be ranked? Nobody else hasn't said anything about it.
02:17:986 (1) - Randon 2x but wasn't hard to adapt to. Yeah, it's a bit random. but looks cool to me. Not gonna change that if you don't mind
02:20:209 (7) - ^ ^
02:31:320 (1) - FUCK NO, no one can see that coming, for that, you need a warning. Dunno how to make a warning sign so I redid it.

[Roley's]
Make the countdown normal or not there at all, it messes me up the way it is. Fixed
2 minutes without a break? That's way too taxing on the player. Added a break
Once again, random 2x, but not very bad here.

[Aqua29 is a Fairytale]
Please increase the lead-in to at least 1 and a half seconds. 2 sec lead-in
A bunch of crap isn't snapped by just a little bit, just tell osu! to re snap all notes and it should be good. Done
There's a lot of kiai in here, maybe remove some? Removed some kiai

That's it, fun maps, call me back when you're done and I'll re check and pubble it.

rust45 wrote:

Missed a couple things in my original mod.

[Normal]
All of the timing sections that change the sample set are right on the beat they are meant to affect, this is wrong, please move all the sections that change the sample set and move them back 1/4. Fixed

[Hard]
01:31:320 - This timing section needs to be moved back 1/4. Fixed


[Roley's] Fixed 'em all
All of the times the sampleset or volume changes in this map, it's right on the note, which is not right as if a players hits that note just slightly early, it will give you the settings of the previous section. Please go through all of the sections change the volume or hitsounds (not if they they don't affect the hitsounds) and set them 1/4 back with the exception of these ones:
00:36:042 - This is on a slider end, so it's fine where it is.
01:31:320 - This can't go 1/4 back as there's a note there, so the next best thing is to move it 1/8 back.
01:46:875 - On a spinner, doesn't matter to change.
02:51:042, 02:51:181, and 02:51:320 are part of 1/4 steams, so instead they go back 1/8.
02:53:264, 02:53:403, and 02:53:542 are the same as the above.
02:54:931 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - This stream has timing sections like the above.

[Aqua29] Done and done
Some of the timing sections that affect the hitsounds are right on the note that they affect. Please fix this a remember to only change the timing sections that are changing the hitsounds. And don't do anything with the timing sections that are in the 1/8 repeating sliders, those are fine the way they are.

Alright, sorry for not noticing that before, please change and I'll re check and pubble.

And for the record, all of what I just said is objective, so it should all be changed before I come back.

MaxwellDemon wrote:

[Matma Rex's Normal+]

00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.

MaxwellDemon wrote:

[General]

Consider lowering the volume to around the fourth tick from the left. The hitsounds were overpowering the song for me. XD Did that

[Normal]

01:57:986 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't neccessarily find this fitting in this difficulty. Made 'em two constant sliders

[Matma Rex's Normal+] Matma fixed this

00:38:542 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Constant clapping is good enough, no need to create some sort of intense pattern with it XD
00:43:264 (4) - What's with this slider's look? XD
00:47:709 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as above.
01:51:875 (3,4) - I slipped on the spacing here, hahaha.

[Hard]

01:54:098 (6) - Too much claps, I think. XD XD Fixed
02:17:986 (1) - I don't really agree with the double speed slider here... XD Yeah, I know they seem random and a bit sudden but you'll adapt to them quickly enough (imo) and I personally like them. So if they're not a problem that wouldn't get this map ranked, I'd like to keep them ^^
02:20:209 (7) - ^

[Roley's Fairytale]

00:25:764 (1,2) - The finishes sound weird here XD I thought that too when I first heard them . But now I think they sound funny and out of the ordinary(=weird) . I'll let them be, if you don't mind ^^
00:47:431 (6) - Don't find myself agreeing with the whistle here either. XD Changed it to claps
00:48:542 (8) - ^ Deleted
00:52:153 (8) - ^ Deleted
01:01:320 (1) - Just claps are already good enough. Always a bad idea to put both clap and whistle on the same beat, in my opinion. XD Fixed
01:29:098 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Too much whistles... okay, well, you kinda get my point, I think you might be overusing the normal whistle. Only put whistles on the white ticks
02:02:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Yeah... this doesn't sound very good either to me.
02:31:320 (1) - And the double speed sliders from this point... yeah, I don't think this song needs it. XD

[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]

00:30:209 (1) - Not sure what I think about this slider... XD Looks nice to me
00:54:653 (1) - Any reason to why there is an extra timing section here? Deleted
01:34:514 (8) - Um... I kinda get what you are trying to do here, but it just ended up sounding loud. o_o Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume
01:51:875 (3) - ^ Added timing section here and lowered the volume a tick
01:58:542 (8) - ^ ^
02:31:597 (10) - Toooo much kiai time opening here. XD XD... I am actually not sure if you are allowed to abuse the kiai fountain THAT many times. XD Deleted half of them, this is okay?

Also, I think this difficulty needs to turn on the epilepsy warning... you can do this by going to: Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?
Song Setup > Storyboarding

It's under misc. toggles and check 'Display epilepsy warning (storyboard has quick strobing)'.

Overall, nice map... most of these are just suggestions. I think the most important bit is to decrease the volume a bit! I found it really, really difficult to play or listen to the map without decreasing the hitsound volume first, so you should really consider doing this. XD

Mianki wrote:

I thought that too when I first heard them . But now I think they sound funny and out of the ordinary(=weird) . I'll let them be, if you don't mind ^^

Mianki wrote:

Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?

Mianki wrote:

Deleted half of them, this is okay?

Mianki wrote:

01:34:514 (8) - Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume

MaxwellDemon wrote:

[General]

Forgot about this, but delete the .osb file from the folder and reupload. XD XD Done

Mianki wrote:

I thought that too when I first heard them . But now I think they sound funny and out of the ordinary(=weird) . I'll let them be, if you don't mind ^^

Getting used to something in order for it to be good is a bad thing, in my opinion. XD
But I won't force you to make changes you don't want to, as none of those are technical errors. :3 Allright, I'll keep them

Mianki wrote:

Did it but then the sign comes on top of the first beat and I put the lead-in on max, what should I do?

Good question...

Don't bother with it then, I'll hit the admin board about it. XD XD Fixed

Mianki wrote:

Deleted half of them, this is okay?

02:49:097 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I am afraid I have to ask that to be turned into one kiai section instead.
02:31:597 (10) - And to remove all the fountains here. >_>; One kiai section it is

Just read the guidelines again, preferably not to use kiai for the fountain at all. Never read these guidelines, and never will

Mianki wrote:

01:34:514 (8) - Should sound okay now that I lowered the volume

Now that just sounds sudden, it was really low then suddenly really loud. XD Normal slider, no rising sound or anything

Still star for now... will have to check with the admin board about the strobe warning.

roflninja wrote:

Hi,

[easy]
01:31:875 (2) - i wouldnt stack this one imo Fixed
01:54:098 (1) - no new combo? Fixed

[matma rex's normal]
no kiai? Fixed

[roley's fairytale]
00:25:764 - dont like all the finishes here, doesnt sound good or go to the song imo Changed hitsounds

[aqua92 is a fairytale]
00:09:097 (1,1,1,1) - why not all one combo? Fixed
00:55:209 (b) - why do you have kiai during the break? Fixed
02:09:653 (b) - ^ Fixed
02:31:598 (k) - maybe start this kiai at 02:31:320? I think the kiai was intended to start when the slider starts, so no change
end kiai at the last note? Fixed

nice map

Garven wrote:

This poor map...

[Easy]
Nothing really wrong here anymore - I'd just nitpick at sliders, hehe.

[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:22:709 (1) - Remove new combo Fixed
00:40:209 (1,2,3) - I'm not so sure about stacks like these in normal. I'll just mention this one since they're all over the map, hehe. Won't change them
01:31:320 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner... though I guess with the level of difficulty in general of the map, it fits. Eh, I'll just mention and move on, hehe. Deleted the circle and lenghtened the spinner over it
01:34:375 (1) - This is really short for a spinner on a Normal. And the notes right after it... it's really pushing beyond the normal barrier here. Lenghtened the spinner
01:47:709 (1) - Ugh... so many of them... Please cut a couple of the quick notes after the spinners. The recovery time on spinners is pretty bad for newer people. Fixed

[Hard]
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ? Fixed
00:41:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Uh, what is this following in the music? Meh, you use this a lot too. Doesn't sound very good to me. Don't intend to change this, follows the lyrics
The ending was kind of anti climactic. Good enough to me

[Roley's Fairytale] Guess I'll delete these two diffs, kinda tired to 'em >.<
00:08:820 (1,2) - These two notes kept confusing the hell out of me. They're following absolutely nothing in the music. Please get rid of 'em.
00:43:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Where in the music is this?
So many streams in such a laid-back song. orz
02:16:875 (1,2,3,4) - Why don't you just get that last hit in there to at least go with the violin?
02:31:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is clustered really bad, especially with such a low OD. Spread 'em out or something. Or you could make it go with the music. which would be much better.
02:46:598 (1) - It gets 2000, but man does it not fit at all when it's that short. Make it last the duration of the "CURRRRRRSED!" or something.
Then general layout is really linear too with lots of straight lines going up/down and left/right. Not very good as eye candy.
I just... really couldn't get into this difficulty compared to the song.

[Aqua92 is a Fairytale]
Argh, those flashes... do you really need to have them in? They're incredibly annoying and hurt my eyes.
Make lead-in time maybe 1.5 seconds?
End your kiai. Maybe at 02:49:098 - ?
That intro just plays really bad. The 1/8 sliders sound horrible.
Just horribly overmapped too.
I don't know what to say besides that I couldn't really find any part of this map that was enjoyable and felt like it was showing off the song at all.

Still needs a lot of work if you plan on keeping some of your guest difficulties.

gyt wrote:

[Matma Rex's Normal]
00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5) - such things are too hard for normal, imho. Maybe use 1/4 repeat slider? Fixed
00:51:875 (4) - add clap? Fixed
00:52:153 (5) - add clap at the start? Fixed
01:03:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - oh, it's hard. Replace at least two streams with sliders? Fixed
02:00:764 (4) - replace finish to whistle at the end? Fixed

[Hard]
00:24:931 (3) - delete finish? Fixed
00:25:209 (4) - add finish? Fixed
00:25:348 (5) - delete circle? (it feels random here) Fixed
00:34:098 (2) - add finish? Nah
00:37:986 (4) - add clap at the start? Fixed
00:41:736 (3) - delete circle? (it makes this combo similar to 01:51:598 (2,3,4,5,6,7) or 02:04:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6), which, imho, fits better). Fixed
01:26:875 (2) - add whistle at the start and at the end? Fixed
02:08:403 (6) - delete circle? [it makes this combo similar to 01:57:986 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8)] Fixed
02:49:098-02:57:709 - maybe delete these short breaks? Fixed

also delete Roley and Aqua92 from tags.. Fixed

star

Lesjuh wrote:

Surprise~

Wow I remember playing this in MP shortly after you uploaded it. Can't believe it isn't ranked yet

Remove 'Roley' and 'Aqua92' from the tags in all difficulties. Fixed
Remove the .osb file, 'white.png' and 'alexander.jpeg' from the song folder. Fixed

Hard
01:51:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - Move this stack further away from the previous object. Because of the stack leniecy it starys at a different position in play mode. You can see this by testing the map. Fixed
02:03:264 (1) - Bit of a ninja spinner that kinda kills the flow and doesn't suit the map. Place something else here. Fixed

Normal
I strongly recommend removing all 1/4 stacks/streams. You can compare it with 1/2 beats at 216 bpm wich is without a doubt too fast for a normal difficulty. Fixed
01:15:764 (7) - New combo Fixed
02:09:098 - End kiai time here Fixed

Easy
02:09:098 - Place a beat here to end the song. Fixed

Fix this and I'll bubble it!

rust45 wrote:

This still isn't ranked?

[Tags]
"eurovision" and "2009" are unneeded in the tags as they are in the source. Fixed

[Matma's Normal]
00:22:709 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo doesn't really make sense, it goes from instruments to vocals without changing combos, this can be very confusing and it doesn't feel right. Fixed. Also I fixed the distance snapping.

Much better than I remember it to be. I would shoot a star if I could so I'll shoot a pink one. And if you tell me when you're done looking at my post, I may just put on one of these:

Larto wrote:

Use this BG. It will make the black bars disappear and the thumbnail will be prettier. Fixed

SPOILER

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Also,
Matma's Normal:
00:54:236 - Make this break start on 00:54:653 - by dragging the beginning? That would look cooler! Fixed
01:11:875 - Maybe remove this break. Fixed
01:34:375 (1) - Could you replace this spinner with something else? >_> It doesn't fit much at all. Fixed

Do Easy and Normal have to end so early? Kinda sucky. Yeah, it sucks. I send a msg to Matma few days ago, to ask if he wanted to have a last look on his diff. He replied that he's not active and haven't felt "the osu spark" for awhile. And I don't really have the energy right now to map both diffs 'till the end. Also, it wouldn't be so much of Matmas diff if I mapped half of that . So if it's okay to You Sir, I'd like to keep them as they are

Larto wrote:

Okay. Good luck to finally get this ranked!

deepsea wrote:

Wow another ooooooold map.

I was about to rank it but why there are some spinners that have no new combo? editor bug hmmm? >_>