Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven · forum

Yumiko

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Yumiko 2009-06-08T20:12:57+00:00

Lokamp wrote:
Yumiko's Hardish (it's good to see how much osu! Italian community usually helps each other!)
[General] the 1st part of the song (until 00:53:00) hasn't enough whistles; try to add some of them: this song is MADE for it! Done
[00:43:90] (3) finish here Done
[00:52:37] (1, 2, 3) set normal whistles here instead of soft ones! Done
[01:02:43] (3) clap here Done
[01:17:43] (7) make this slider MORE longer (in spacing, not in timing!) I think it's ok. To make it longer in spacing it becomes longer in timing too. I should remove the 0.5x section but i like it ç_ç

I forgot to star it

Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (Card N'FoRcE) [Yumiko's Hardish].osu

HarryOrunitia

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HarryOrunitia 2009-06-16T23:12:28+00:00

Normal:
Nothing, as expected

Yumiko's Hardish:
Ok, claps really fit this difficulty but I don't like them on the reverse sliders, I'd take them off but it's just a suggestion.
00:25:02 (3) - Align this with 5 and 7
00:47:08 (5) - You could try to shape this one so that it has a curve like 00:46:02 (3)
00:55:19 (5) - I don't like the claps here D:
01:04:19 (4) - Move this one 1 square to the right with grid 3

Hard:
01:00:49 (3) - This slider sound weird. I think you can add 1 or 2 repeats or at least some hitsounds?

osuplayer111's Insane:
The parts where you lower the sound volume and then go back to normal volume feel too sudden (For example: 00:07:72 (3)). Also, Normal hitsounds are too loud for the verses (Example: 00:22:72 (1)), even though they fit the chorus imo.

Btw, the map is really nice and I love all the diffs. Starred

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-06-17T00:35:38+00:00

Normal:
00:54:83 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 5

Hardish:
00:06:30 (3,4) - might want to make parallel to 1,2
00:25:71 (7,1) - make parallel to 5,6
00:29:77 (5) - make this have the same distance from 4 that 3 is
00:30:13 (6) - make the start the same distance from 3 that 4 is
00:37:18 (2) - make this have the same distance from 3 that 1 is
00:39:30 (5,6,7,8) - make the each side of this figure be of equal length (bacially the same as 00:29:77 (5) and 00:30:13 (6))
00:41:07 (1) - align with 8?
00:46:01 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:53:07 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
01:10:71 (1) - make a vertical reflection of 2
01:21:48 (7) - make the same distance from 6 as 4 is from 5
01:28:18 (10) - align with 7?

Hard:
00:07:71 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:13:71 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:40:71 (1) and 00:41:42 (2) - make these the same distance from 4 that 00:39:30 (1, 3) are
00:53:07 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:49:18 (1) - align with 5?
00:53:07 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is
00:59:77 (1) - make the same distance from 2 that 5 is

Insane:
00:20:07 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 2,1 respectively
00:21:13 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is
00:37:18 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
00:59:77 (6) - make the same distance from 5 that 4 is
01:26:60 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 3 is

Nice beatmap. Star.

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-06-18T19:33:11+00:00

blissfulyoshi wrote:
Normal:
00:54:83 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 5 why? it's useless D:

Hard:
00:07:71 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is Fixed
00:13:71 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1 Useless
00:40:71 (1) and 00:41:42 (2) - make these the same distance from 4 that 00:39:30 (1, 3) are Fixed
00:53:07 (3) - make this have the same distance from 2 that 1 is Fixed
00:49:18 (1) - align with 5? No
00:53:07 (3) - make the same distance from 2 that 1 is Impossible to do without removing grid snap, so it's useless
00:59:77 (1) - make the same distance from 2 that 5 is Fixed

Insane:
00:20:07 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 2,1 respectively Useless
00:21:13 (7) - make the same distance from 6 that 5 is Fixed
00:37:18 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1 Fixed
00:59:77 (6) - make the same distance from 5 that 4 is Fixed
01:26:60 (5) - make the same distance from 4 that 3 is

Nice beatmap. Star.

Yumiko will fix her difficulty by herself and will post it here

Yumiko

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Yumiko 2009-07-07T11:17:24+00:00

This is the fixed version of my diff ^^

Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (Card N'FoRcE) [Yumiko's Hardish].osu

minyeob

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minyeob 2009-07-07T11:55:48+00:00

[Normal]
44:954(1)-> Useless New Combo?

[Yumiko's Hardish]
1:15:66(3)-> This jump makes hard to hit 300 on the next circles

This map needs BAT modding.
Starred~!

Armin

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Armin 2009-07-07T12:42:25+00:00

Ma è perfetta, che cosa ti moddo XD
Stella

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-07-07T12:45:52+00:00

minyeob: Fixed both, thanks

mrtn

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mrtn 2009-07-11T12:09:40+00:00

try offset 489

[normal]
no problems here

[yumiko's hardish]
00:13:18 (7) - new combo
00:15:66 - reinsert break
01:17:42 (7) - new combo

[hard]
01:31:54 (8) - new combo

[osuplayer's insane]
00:22:71 (1) - maybe lower the hitsound volume of this note? It overpowers the music too much imo
00:29:07 (2) - ^
00:30:13 (5 the endpoint) - ^
01:18:30 (2,3,4,5) - kinda confusing

good job as usual. starred

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-07-11T13:05:20+00:00

mrtn wrote:
try offset 489

[normal]
no problems here

[yumiko's hardish]
00:13:18 (7) - new combo I think it's intentional
00:15:66 - reinsert break Fixed
01:17:42 (7) - new combo Ok

[hard]
01:31:54 (8) - new combo Ok

[osuplayer's insane]
00:22:71 (1) - maybe lower the hitsound volume of this note? It overpowers the music too much imo
00:29:07 (2) - ^
00:30:13 (5 the endpoint) - ^ All done
01:18:30 (2,3,4,5) - kinda confusing I guess he made it intentionally, fixed with new combos

good job as usual. starred

Thanks for modding

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2009-07-20T22:09:13+00:00

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good

[NORMAL]

seems good

[YUMIKO'S HARDISH]

its all good

[HARD]

can't find anything

[OSUPLAYER111'S INSANE]

nothing...

perfect map. since you play it so safe when mapping i can never find anything to rag on.

well deserved star

tieff

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tieff 2009-07-28T18:09:09+00:00

Azumanga. <3

[Normal]
00:06:13 (6,7,8) - Spacing.
01:33:660 - Remove volume?

[yumiko's hardish]
00:04:89 (2,3) - Whistles?
00:08:95 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:09:48 (2) - Whistle on start.
00:23:60 (5) - Kinda random clap.
01:13:54 (4) - Clap.
01:27:13 (6) - New combo.
01:33:836 - Remove volume.

[Hard]
All cool.

[osuplayer111's Insane]
Cool.

I like all diffs, star+kudosu star.

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-01T20:57:05+00:00

tieff wrote:
Azumanga. <3

[Normal]
00:06:13 (6,7,8) - Spacing. Wow tieff so nazi xD
01:33:660 - Remove volume? Nah, i like it that way

[yumiko's hardish] I'll ask Yumiko later
00:04:89 (2,3) - Whistles?
00:08:95 (1) - Whistle on end.
00:09:48 (2) - Whistle on start.
00:23:60 (5) - Kinda random clap.
01:13:54 (4) - Clap.
01:27:13 (6) - New combo.
01:33:836 - Remove volume.

[Hard]
All cool.

[osuplayer111's Insane]
Cool.

I like all diffs, star+kudosu star.

Thanks a lot =3

Last edited by Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-01T23:05:07+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Yumiko

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Yumiko 2009-08-01T23:04:37+00:00

Here's my fixed difficulty

Thanks, tieff ^^

Download: Oranges and Lemons - Raspberry Heaven (Card N'FoRcE) [Yumiko's Hardish].osu

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-03T22:29:26+00:00

Updated

Waiting new moddings =3

Andrea

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Andrea 2009-08-06T14:10:29+00:00

Bump. Go check this map guys

sesito71

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sesito71 2009-08-07T14:10:53+00:00

hehe cool map

[Normal]

00:32:24 (5) - New combo here?

[Hard]

00:30:13 (5) - New combo here?
00:32:24 (8) - ^

[Yumikos' Hardish]

00:13:18 (7) - New combo?
00:28:01 (2) - ^
00:30:13 (6) - ^
00:32:24 (3) - ^
00:51:30 (3) - ^

[osuplayer111's Insane]

00:22:71 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to make a triangle, fix it

00:30:13 (5) - New combo?
00:32:24 (8) - ^

Love this map

Star*

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-07T14:34:20+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

proseyu

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proseyu 2009-08-10T15:25:20+00:00

star ☆_☆

Symbolic

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Symbolic 2009-08-11T18:51:37+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Iluhiwizel

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Iluhiwizel 2009-08-12T10:16:05+00:00

cool map.

Stared~* xD

Card N'FoRcE

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Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-12T13:26:46+00:00

Symbolic wrote:
[Normal]

00:05:95 (5) - New combo. No
00:10:18 (5) - ^ v
00:10:36 (1) - Remove new combo. No, there's a change of what's being mapped
00:20:77 (5) - New combo. ^
00:20:95 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
00:53:42 (TIMING SECTION) - Put Kiai Time on at this Timing Section. We didn't like Kiai for this map, sorry D:

[Yumiko's Hardish]

00:53:42 (x) - Make a Timing Section with Kiai Time here. No kiai on ^

[Hard]

00:53:42 (TIMING SECTION) - Put Kiai Time on at this Timing Section. ^

[osuplayer111's Insane]

00:53:42 (TIMING SECTION) - Put Kiai Time on at this Timing Section. ^
01:05:42 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed in another way
01:24:13 (1) - ^ Ok

Funny song and nice map
Starred *

Thanks for modding