GeneralOffset 2290? I'm not sure really. I would ask a BAT to check the timing.
EasyDo not use the lowest drain setting.
00:02:276 - Break after the first note is unnecessary. Please fill this out.
00:11:416 (1,2) - Blanket isn't perfect.
00:12:608 (3) - You have a lot of repeats for this slider, but no repeats for a very similar part of the song here 00:15:787 (7) -. There is nothing really wrong about this other than the repeats are repetitive.
00:14:595 (4) - New combo (to be consistent with 00:17:773 (1) - )
00:17:376 (7,1) - Exactly 1.00
00:17:773 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this transition. The straight alignment going into that type of curve doesn't work IMO. Try a curved transition or lowering the curved part of the pattern.
00:27:310 - Why do you end kiai here?
00:27:707 (1,2) - Blanket doesn't look perfect to me.
00:30:886 (6) - New combo.
00:36:846 (6) - ^
00:41:217 (3) - Repetitive like the first repeat slider, but I guess this is fine.
00:44:396 (8) - Please remove finish from the start.
00:45:985 (1,2) - feel offbeat because of the current timing.
00:49:164 (3) - Move to x 368 y 264
00:54:330 (2) - Slider isn't straight.
00:56:317 (4) - New combo?
01:02:277 (7) - ^
01:07:045 (1,2) - Off blanket.
01:10:224 (4) - same comment about combo.
01:13:005 (7,1) - same as first kiai
01:13:402 (1,2,3,4) - ^
NormalThe combos are a tad long for a Normal, but they don't bother me personally.
Unsnapped issues: Check AiModWhy is OD higher than the AR? This is almost never necessary.
00:05:455 (5) -
This should not be snapped to 1/3rd. 00:18:568 (2,3) - Try to make this 1.00.
00:40:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern could be cleaner. Make the points even and keep the exact same spacing throughout.
00:41:217 (3,4) - What's with the double finishes?
00:49:164 (5) - Remove finishes? They sound out of place.
00:56:316 (4,5) - I like this transition.
00:57:508 (5,6) - Use 1.00 spacing like the rest of the sequence. (grid snap off)
01:01:084 (2) - I suggest positioning more towards the center of 1. A blanket looks much nicer.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82223701:02:276 (4,5,6) - Doesn't look nice. Have 5 follow the curve of 4.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82224001:13:402 (1,2) - This is hitsounded differently than the same part in first kiai. I think i like this better than what you did the first time.
01:14:197 (2,3) - Too close.
01:14:594 (3) - Have a shape like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/82224301:17:773 (4) - Remove for a better flow?
Hard00:02:276 (1,2) - Improve this blanket.
00:20:356 (2,3) - Use 1.00 spacing. The finish usage is also throwing me off. I experimented with stacking the slider on 00:18:966 (6) - . i'm not sure if that's better though.
00:22:144 (5) - Slider is not the same distance from previous slider at all parts. The beginning is further away than the rest of the slider.
00:27:707 (1,2,3,4,5) - Offset of these feels weird. This part is awkward to play, but it might be due to the wrong offset.
00:30:224 (6) -
This song is not 1/3rd.00:44:992 - Sounds like there should be a slider here.
00:47:575 (5) - One pixel from being perfectly vertical. Is this intentional? Straighten this?
00:58:105 (5,6,7) - Use equal spacing here.
01:01:084 (4) -
Shouldn't be 1/3rd01:02:475 (8) - If you're going to have a slider it should be 1/2th later. Finishes make more sense of white ticks too.
01:15:985 (2,3) - Same comments as first kiai.
01:17:773 (5) - ^
InsaneI was reserved when I modded this difficulty. Not everything may necessarily need to be changed. Feel free to seek more mods if you are unsure.
00:03:866 (6) - New combo. It is more fitting.
00:05:058 (7) - I suggest reducing by 1/2th and adding a note here 00:05:455 -
00:12:807 (5,6) - Spacing is closer than the rest of the notes in the square pattern.
00:14:595 (10) - New combo
00:15:985 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:773 (5) - New combo.
00:20:952 (1) - I suggest reducing to the white tick, then adding a note where it ended. you can then make a triangle pattern with the notes.
00:34:065 (5) - Please recreate this slider. Also new combo.
00:36:648 (1) - Remove new combo
00:37:244 (4) - New combo.
00:38:634 - Skipping this sound is just weird.
00:43:601 (10) - New combo.
00:43:999 (12,13,14) - Perhaps a softer curve would be better. (like what you did with 10,11,12)
00:44:992 (1) - End 1/2th later.
01:07:045 - same things about first kiai apply to second kiai.