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Lieselotte wrote:

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Hi where is my mod point :O
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Tari wrote:

Hi where is my mod point :O
20:32 Tari: lol
20:33 Tari: you asked me to play your map
20:33 Tari: and then suddenly logged off
20:33 HanzeR: OHHHH
20:33 HanzeR: aaaaa
20:34 HanzeR: i accidentally kicked my power cord and then got angry and didnt log back in
20:34 HanzeR: zzz
20:34 Tari: o.o
20:34 HanzeR: IM SORRY /.\
20:34 Tari: what map is it
20:34 Tari: orz
20:35 HanzeR: sec
20:35 HanzeR: i need to
20:35 HanzeR: upload it
20:35 HanzeR: http://puu.sh/36h9O.osz
20:35 HanzeR: yay ~
20:36 Tari: uhmm
20:36 Tari: sure
20:37 HanzeR: ignore the kias
20:37 HanzeR: lol
20:38 Tari: uhmm
20:38 Tari: maps fine
20:38 Tari: but need to wath your spacing ><
20:38 Tari: watch*
20:39 Tari: because
20:39 Tari: 00:25:210 (6) - you didn't put any jumps here
20:39 Tari: I mean
20:39 Tari: you didn't put jumps here 00:25:552 (1) -
20:40 Tari: put you out of nowhere put a jump here 00:31:038 (1) -
20:40 Tari: and imo it would help if you make spacing consistent there
20:40 Tari: to make it more readable
20:40 HanzeR: hmm
20:41 Tari: yeah it would kinda ruin your pattern ><
20:41 Tari: so sorry
20:41 HanzeR: well i think like
20:41 HanzeR: this slider 00:30:695 (6) - is curvy enough so that it doesnt really get followed
20:41 HanzeR: when your playing
20:41 HanzeR: 00:25:210 (6) - this one you pretty much have to follow
20:41 HanzeR: or you break
20:42 HanzeR: idk
20:42 HanzeR: i kind of like patterns like that
20:42 HanzeR: abusing sliderballs and such
20:42 Tari: its okay
20:42 Tari: but
20:42 Tari: you were doing so well on flow
20:42 Tari: until that came up
20:42 HanzeR: no yeah
20:42 HanzeR: that makes sense
20:44 Tari: and
20:44 Tari: you should really curve these sliders
20:44 Tari: 00:51:610 (3,4) -
20:44 Tari: they seem really odd
20:45 Tari: I guess it will flow better
20:45 Tari: because I see your pattern in slider usage.
20:45 Tari: sometimes you make all your sliders curve
20:45 Tari: like here
20:45 Tari: 00:45:438 (1,2,3,4) -
20:46 Tari: and you need to add a new combo here
20:46 Tari: 01:01:895 (5) -
20:47 HanzeR: i curved 00:51:610 (3) - and made 4 the same
20:47 HanzeR: like that http://puu.sh/36hwZ.jpg
20:47 HanzeR: i think the straight one fits on 4
20:47 Tari: ok
20:47 Tari: :3
20:47 Tari: and make sure you add the nc where I told you
20:48 Tari: and here too
20:48 Tari: 01:20:410 (3) -
20:48 Tari: and remove it here 01:20:981 (1) -
20:48 Tari: if you do the above
20:48 HanzeR: ok
20:48 Tari: or your combo's will be phuqed
20:48 HanzeR: hehe
20:49 Tari: and here
20:49 Tari: 01:31:381 (3) -
20:49 Tari: same thing as above
20:49 HanzeR: yup
20:50 Tari: and this jump is way too much
20:50 Tari: 01:32:410 (2) -
20:50 HanzeR: yeah it probably is lol
20:50 HanzeR: ok
20:52 Tari: I'm really worried about your spacing
20:52 Tari: cause
20:52 HanzeR: ;w;
20:52 Tari: sometimes you switch it
20:52 Tari: for pattern use
20:52 Tari: but thats ok
20:52 Tari: like this
20:52 Tari: 01:39:952 (4) -
20:52 Tari: and this
20:53 Tari: 01:40:981 (4) -
20:53 Tari: 01:39:952 (4) - this slider spacing should be increased
20:54 Tari: that would be the best fix
20:54 HanzeR: mm
20:54 HanzeR: hm
20:55 Tari: sorry for ruining your style .___.
20:55 HanzeR: is this too much http://puu.sh/36hPl.jpg
20:55 HanzeR: haha
20:56 Tari: uh
20:56 Tari: yeah that kinda is
20:56 Tari: as said
20:56 HanzeR: well that makes it
20:56 HanzeR: 2,94x
20:56 HanzeR: the other combo you compared it to was 2.6x
20:57 Tari: well
20:57 Tari: I guess its fine
20:57 Tari: better than previous.
20:57 HanzeR: haha
20:57 HanzeR: ok cool
20:57 Tari: remarkable ain't it
20:57 Tari: just going through the map
20:57 Tari: I find all these erros
20:57 Tari: Lol
20:58 HanzeR: \o/
20:58 HanzeR: tari pro ><
20:58 Tari: hopefully they flow better now
20:58 Tari: o.o
20:58 Tari: or better than previous
20:58 HanzeR: im not nearly meticulous enough to be good at modding
20:58 HanzeR: lol
20:59 Tari: and
20:59 Tari: you can add more creativity
20:59 Tari: by changing these sliders
20:59 Tari: 00:20:752 (1,2,3,4) -
20:59 Tari: by making the middle slider point red
21:00 Tari: cause I suppose they need to stand out from these two sliders
21:00 Tari: 01:22:467 (1,2) -
21:00 HanzeR: ohh neat
21:00 HanzeR: ok


moe tari ><
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Hi there.

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.

[Beginner]
01:05:667 - Unsnapped circle, you should probably snap it or stack it under the previous sliderend.
01:29:324 - Unsnapped as well, but not that big of a problem.

[Hard]
01:38:924 (98924|6) - Either this one is too long or the other ones are too short.

[Hyper]
00:21:781 (4) - That's a rather annoying place to put a sliderstart.
00:26:124 - This 'jump' is rather sudden.
01:05:667 (4) - ^^
01:31:952 - ^^

[Insane]
Can't say I found anything wrong. This map fries my brain when I look at it too hard.

[Another]
This map is rather hard to read with AR 8.
00:33:724 (2) - I can't hear anything that would line this up with the music.
00:39:210 (2) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^
01:23:724 (6,1) - That is a HUGE jump.
01:39:552 (2) - ^^
01:45:038 (2) - ^
01:45:724 (2) - ^
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Yoeri wrote:

Hi there.

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.
Hmm I'm not sure about this -- i dont think its necessary since http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83094 was ranked without key names in the title

[Beginner]
01:05:667 - Unsnapped circle, you should probably snap it or stack it under the previous sliderend. oops, fixed
01:29:324 - Unsnapped as well, but not that big of a problem. fixed

[Hard]
01:38:924 (98924|6) - Either this one is too long or the other ones are too short. its following the deep bass note here, that goes for the full bar :D

[Hyper]
00:21:781 (4) - That's a rather annoying place to put a sliderstart. fixed
00:26:124 - This 'jump' is rather sudden. fixed
01:05:667 (4) - ^^ fixed
01:31:952 - ^^ fixed

[Insane]
Can't say I found anything wrong. This map fries my brain when I look at it too hard.
ahaha

[Another]
This map is rather hard to read with AR 8. Hmmm Ill get some more opinions about the AR. I think ar8 can make it fun for dt \:D/
00:33:724 (2) - I can't hear anything that would line this up with the music.
00:39:210 (2) - ^
01:03:552 (2,4) - ^ remapped this part
01:23:724 (6,1) - That is a HUGE jump. It is ... however I think its perfectly ssable due to slider leniency
01:39:552 (2) - ^^
01:45:038 (2) - ^
01:45:724 (2) - ^
Fixed all others
Thanks so much for the mod Yoeri!!! helped me make alot of changes ~
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HanzeR wrote:

Yoeri wrote:

First off, all the osu!mania difficulties need to be renamed to have the key configuration in them.
Hmm I'm not sure about this -- i dont think its necessary since http://osu.ppy.sh/s/83094 was ranked without key names in the title
t/128012
Well I suppose it's not mandatory.
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Wow
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UnitedWeSin wrote:

Wow
i am not worthy o_o
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xDDDDDD
<3
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Beginner:
~Too many sliders exceed 1 reverse arrow,try to use less to avoid confusion for beginners.\
~01:05:667 - Dun do that for beginners.

Hyper:
~You could organise and tidy the notes,they're a bit messy.
~Dun really see any problems.

Another:
~00:33:781 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:34:724 - Hard to read the triplets there,I suggest removing it.
~00:39:267 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:40:210 -Same with these triplets.
~01:45:095 (3) - Put closer to circle 2.
~Again,this map is a bit messy,try to arrange and tidy them.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
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General
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1.Offset: 181 (the first beatline)
2.Is there any reason you add " smooooch sig sig" in tag?

Normal
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HP:7 OD:6

00:33:095 (33095|6) - move to 1 or 2, the pattern will be much easier, the same to 00:38:581 (38581|6) -


Hard
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01:03:381 (63381|4,63610|4,63838|4,64067|4,64295|4,64524|4) - move to column 4
01:04:752 (64752|2,64981|2,65210|2) - move to column 5
01:05:438 (65438|4) - move to column 4
01:49:895 (109895|3) - move to 5 and add a note at 6


Insane
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HP:7

01:49:895 (109895|3) - I'd prefer add 3 notes at 5,6,7 and remove this one.
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woc2006 wrote:

General
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1.Offset: 181 (the first beatline)
2.Is there any reason you add " smooooch sig sig" in tag?

Normal
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HP:7 OD:6

00:33:095 (33095|6) - move to 1 or 2, the pattern will be much easier, the same to 00:38:581 (38581|6) -


Hard
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01:03:381 (63381|4,63610|4,63838|4,64067|4,64295|4,64524|4) - move to column 4
01:04:752 (64752|2,64981|2,65210|2) - move to column 5
01:05:438 (65438|4) - move to column 4
01:49:895 (109895|3) - move to 5 and add a note at 6


Insane
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HP:7

01:49:895 (109895|3) - I'd prefer add 3 notes at 5,6,7 and remove this one.
Fixed all. Thanks so much woc! you're the best :)


Smoooch/sig sig are in tags because they're part of the same series of songs
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gideon5504 wrote:

Beginner:
~Too many sliders exceed 1 reverse arrow,try to use less to avoid confusion for beginners.\
~01:05:667 - Dun do that for beginners.

Hyper:
~You could organise and tidy the notes,they're a bit messy.
~Dun really see any problems.

Another:
~00:33:781 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:34:724 - Hard to read the triplets there,I suggest removing it.
~00:39:267 (3) - Put it closer to circle 2.
~00:40:210 -Same with these triplets.
~01:45:095 (3) - Put closer to circle 2.
~Again,this map is a bit messy,try to arrange and tidy them.

That's all from me^^ Good luck!
Thanks so much for mod! going to go through and make things neater :o
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mania diffs o.o
[Normal]
\:D/

[Hard]
00:31:952 (31952|1) - seems you are following the syncs but there is no sync sounds here(high pitch one that you followed, 2-2-31)
01:41:438 (101438|6) - This note should be at 01:41:552

didn't have time to look at insane ;w;

anyway, nice mapset :D
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chonicle wrote:

mania diffs o.o
[Normal]
\:D/

[Hard]
00:31:952 (31952|1) - seems you are following the syncs but there is no sync sounds here(high pitch one that you followed, 2-2-31)
01:41:438 (101438|6) - This note should be at 01:41:552

didn't have time to look at insane ;w;

anyway, nice mapset :D
Fixed all, thanks so much chonicle !!
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mania checked.
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woc2006 wrote:

mania checked.
thank you so much >w<

I hope its ok, but I went back and removed a couple of speed changes to avoid controversy.
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Hi there! As requested, I will mod your map. :D
Sorry for the late reply though, I was busy with RL stuff.

[General]
- Wouldn't it be easier if you just add the suffix "Mania" for your mania charts? I mean, look at this: http://puu.sh/3xQj5.png
While it is more obvious to tell the difference in the song select menu, it would again sound confusing whenever socializing that involves between both your standard and mania maps. It's not mandatory of course, but I recommend this to avoid further confusion.
- Your tags contain "beatmania iidx lincle 19" while I don't recall this song in IIDX 19... You may need to remove these tags.

[Normal]
00:11:495 (11495|3,12181|3,12866|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:12:752 (12752|6) Move to 5th column.
00:16:295 (16295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:19:609 Try something more fun like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855416
00:24:181 (24181|0) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
00:29:667 (29667|0) ^
00:35:724 (35724|5,35838|6,36181|6) Move left by 3 columns.
00:41:666 (41666|6) Move to 2nd column.
01:19:038 (79038|0) Move to 4th column.
01:40:295 (100295|6,100638|5,100981|4,101324|3) Move left by one column.
01:45:781 (105781|6,106124|5,106467|4,106810|3) ^

[Beginner]
01:27:952 (2) Add New Combo.

[Hard]
01:03:266 This is a really awkward drumroll that involves one hand (if you're a right-hander). You should do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855450
01:44:752 This staircase is really boring compared to what you've done before this part. I suggest you add drumbeat notes for each beat.

[Hyper]
01:48:067 (6,7) The distance between these two notes are x0.67 and not anywhere close to x1.00. Please fix this to anywhere between x0.95 to x1.02.

[Insane]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
01:18:010 (78010|6) Move to 4th column.
- Hmm... Interesting speed changes. :)

[Another]
01:23:724 (6) The jump between this note and the next is really huge. I recommend removing this note or at least having this moved closer to the next note. (Distance spacing < x1.8 or something like that)
01:25:095 (6) ^

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)
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PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! As requested, I will mod your map. :D
Sorry for the late reply though, I was busy with RL stuff.

[General]
- Wouldn't it be easier if you just add the suffix "Mania" for your mania charts? I mean, look at this: http://puu.sh/3xQj5.png
While it is more obvious to tell the difference in the song select menu, it would again sound confusing whenever socializing that involves between both your standard and mania maps. It's not mandatory of course, but I recommend this to avoid further confusion. hmm.. Ill see if i can think of something more interesting hahaha
- Your tags contain "beatmania iidx lincle 19" while I don't recall this song in IIDX 19... You may need to remove these tags. I found it out from here :e http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beatmania_IIDX_19:_Lincle

[Normal]
00:11:495 (11495|3,12181|3,12866|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:12:752 (12752|6) Move to 5th column.
00:16:295 (16295|3) Move to 3rd column.
00:19:609 Try something more fun like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855416
00:24:181 (24181|0) Move to 3rd or 4th column.
00:29:667 (29667|0) ^
00:35:724 (35724|5,35838|6,36181|6) Move left by 3 columns.
00:41:666 (41666|6) Move to 2nd column.
01:19:038 (79038|0) Move to 4th column.
01:40:295 (100295|6,100638|5,100981|4,101324|3) Move left by one column.
01:45:781 (105781|6,106124|5,106467|4,106810|3) ^
fixed all ^

[Beginner]
01:27:952 (2) Add New Combo. fixed

[Hard]
01:03:266 This is a really awkward drumroll that involves one hand (if you're a right-hander). You should do something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/855450 fixed
01:44:752 This staircase is really boring compared to what you've done before this part. I suggest you add drumbeat notes for each beat.
remapped this part
[Hyper]
01:48:067 (6,7) The distance between these two notes are x0.67 and not anywhere close to x1.00. Please fix this to anywhere between x0.95 to x1.02.
hehe oops, good catch

[Insane]
HP Drain + 1 or 2 oooo i really dont want to do this, otherwise I cant pass it xD
01:18:010 (78010|6) Move to 4th column. done
- Hmm... Interesting speed changes. :)

[Another]
01:23:724 (6) The jump between this note and the next is really huge. I recommend removing this note or at least having this moved closer to the next note. (Distance spacing < x1.8 or something like that)
01:25:095 (6) ^remapped this part

Hope this helps! Good luck! :)
Thanks so much for the mod!!! really helpful :D
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-- All Diffs

Remove 'smooooch', 'sig sig' and 'wuv u' from tags. They are only part of the Candy Rave series, so having 'Candy Rave' in the tags is good enough.
Add 'candy handz up' to the tags. This is the set genre of the song.




--- Standard

I think you'd be better off not using the white combo color. It's quite hard to see on the backgronud.

[Beginner]
00:12:524 (1,2) - These sliders should end on white ticks.
00:22:124 (1) - This slider comes very soon after the spinner. Beginner players are often too busy spinning to hit an object so close. I suggest shortening the spinner.
01:01:895 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - This part overlaps itself a lot and is very confusing. I recommend redesigning this portion of the map.
01:41:667 (1,2) - Fix the spacing, it's too close.

[Hyper]
00:41:895 - Add circle.
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723.
01:20:981 (1) - This slider should end at 01:21:323.
01:38:924 (1) - Slow this slider down to 0.85x? It'd fix the spacing (and it'd be cool)

[Another]
Tickrate 1. Tickrate 2 sounds really weird and adds many ticks right at the end of sliders since it's a swing map.
00:43:381 (3) - This slider should end at 00:43:723. To do this quickly and easily, scale the slider by 0.84 with selection center (Ctrl+Shift+S)



--- Mania

[Normal]
OD 7? Traditionally mania maps have a high OD unless they are filled with lots of sliders.

[Hard]
01:04:638 (64638|6,64638|0) - Remove one of these two? It was very awkward to hit two notes in the middle of this 1/3 stream.
01:05:438 (65438|3) - Move this to 01:05:552. It fits more with the music there. After that, add an object in the middle to 01:05:323, like this http://puu.sh/3zW3r.png

[Insane]
00:55:038 (55038|0,55381|0) - Turn these into a hold? The speed change wasn't immediately clear, so throwing in a slider will help tell the player that something different is going on here. The hold would also fit the zooming speed :D
01:06:009 - The sudden slowdown here is very jarring. I find myself hitting 01:06:352 (66352|2) - very early as I expect it to be 1/3. I suggest making the slowdown gradual, something like this maybe http://puu.sh/3zVHR.png
01:22:466 - These slowdowns were really unexpected X_X, I'd recommend something like 0.75x for those slow sections.
01:48:352 - Same with this part for the slowdowns.
01:49:895 (109895|5) - Remove this object? I think two notes is sufficient impact at the end and feels better than three.


Where did this god tier map come from and why haven't I seen it sooner
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