[Easy]
00:40:619 (1,2) - try to avoid stacks in Easy level difficulties. Players at this skill level have a tendency to look for the next note by the hitcircle and not by the approach circle, so they are unlikely to notice (although this is a slider so its kind-of ok)
00:52:927 (1) - I think that this particular pattern with this rhythm is going to cause newbie players to miss this note. Perhaps if you moved 2 so that it was to the side of 1 instead of directly beneath it would help.
01:15:542 (1,2,3,4) - too many claps bro
;-; can you find a custom whistle?
01:30:158 (2,3) - again with the stacks
01:32:619 (5) - imperfect blanket
02:10:312 (2,4) - stack pls
02:48:927 (1,2) - stacks
02:51:388 (4) - imperfect blanket
03:30:004 (3,4) - stacks
03:33:389 (1,2,3,4,5) - clap overuse
This map is exceedingly difficult for an Easy based off of the rhythms you are choosing to follow. Its not that the rhythms don't follow the music so much as the music is rhythmically erratic and that makes things very difficult for new players.
[Normal]
00:04:773 (1,2,3) - what part of the music are 1 start, 3 start, and 3 end supposed to be mapped to?
01:00:312 (1) - this feels kinda weird, like your map has the hiccups
X.X please custom whistle?
02:00:466 - feels like there should be a note here
02:16:466 (3) - new combo?
03:22:158 (3,4) - stack the ends pls
03:32:004 (7) - is this supposed to be a blanket...?
03:51:696 (4) - can you center the slider over the end of 3 horizontally?
03:54:158 (8) - ^ same idea
04:08:927 (4) - extend the end by 1/2. delete following circle. the end of this slider is not currently mapped to any part of the music.
[Hard]
00:03:389 (6) - what the fuck is wrong with this slider
00:06:927 (3) - the strong melodic note is really on the tick 1/2 after you start this...it doesn't fit the music like this at all because all the strong beats fall mid-slider and not on the endpoints
01:02:312 (2,4) - stack endpoints
01:09:235 (4) - center slider on previous circle
01:28:312 (9) - ^
01:35:542 (2) - ^
02:00:927 (5) - YES LIKE THIS DO THIS TO ALL OF THE SLIDERS LIKE THIS PLEASE THANK YOU SO MUCH
02:18:773 (8) - huuuuurgh
02:34:927 (3,5) - stack endpoints
03:34:312 (4,5) - stacking
...I already fear for Insane
[pkhg]
random combo color change?
00:04:773 (3,4) - try blanketing 3 in the other direction so that it doesn't overlap 4 so messily
00:06:927 (3) - center the sliderpath through the end of 2
00:11:696 - feels like there should be a note here
00:12:158 (5,7) - messy overlap
00:48:927 (3) - curve this the other way so it doesn't overlap 1,2
01:06:466 (3) - blanket this differently so that it doesn't overlap 4
01:14:158 (5) - messy overlap with 3,4
01:22:158 (6) - ^
01:24:004 (5) - ^
01:35:081 (1) - ^
02:29:696 (2) - center through end of 1
04:12:619 (1) - messy overlap
[Insane]
00:16:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - the fuck is this
00:47:542 (6) - make this symmetrical around 5
00:45:850 (1) - ^
01:08:773 (5,6) - stack endpoints
02:04:619 (1) - center around 2
02:08:312 (8) - ^
02:19:850 (2) - ok it looks like you tried to make a straight slider and ran out of the room and decided to squish it up a bit to make it fit
02:38:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - the fuck was that
03:53:389 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - the fuck are we (sorry couldn't resist)
no but in all seriousness the streams have little to nothing to do with the music and appear to have been inserted for the sole purpose of having random deathstreams in your map.