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IOSYS - F.O.E to no Souguu

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RatedNC17
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RatedNC17
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, September 05, 2013 at 8:46:27 PM

Artist: IOSYS
Title: F.O.E to no Souguu
Source: IOSYS
BPM: 180
Filesize: 18621kb
Play Time: 02:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.22 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4.47 stars, 224 notes)
  3. Insane (4.81 stars, 260 notes)
  4. Normal (3.66 stars, 179 notes)
Download: IOSYS - F.O.E to no Souguu
Download: IOSYS - F.O.E to no Souguu (no video)
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My 2nd beatmap and this time i wanted to mess around with the design tab some more rather than to leave a video and background. I hope Kharl does not mind if i use the video he used. So to practice with design i thought the easiest way was to make subtitles. Please tell me how i did when it came to the storyboard. thanks.
Last edited by RatedNC17 , edited 10 times in total.
chaee
chaee
The video just made my night. Thank you c:

This map needs an epilepsy warning because it has frequently toggled storyboards. (NOT NECESSARY)
Kiai isn`t snapped. (MUST FIX)
Kiai end isn`t snapped also. (MUST FIX)

SUGGESTIONS: NORMAL

00:10:047 (1) - Fix alignment.

00:25:380 (5) - Should be perfectly aligned with 00:24:964

00:46:380 (5) - Fix spacing with (5,6). Move a bit to the left.

01:12:213 (2) - Combo spacing needs help:

This looks more attractive.

02:02:378 (1) - imo adding two short back arrow sliders would be a cool finish :)
chaee
chaee

Shinchaechae wrote:

The video just made my night. Thank you c:

This map needs an epilepsy warning because it has frequently toggled storyboards. (NOT NECESSARY)
Kiai isn`t snapped. (MUST FIX)
Kiai end isn`t snapped also. (MUST FIX)

SUGGESTIONS: NORMAL

00:10:047 (1) - Fix alignment.

00:25:380 (5) - Should be perfectly aligned with 00:24:964

00:46:380 (5) - Fix spacing with (5,6). Move a bit to the left.

01:12:213 (2) - Combo spacing needs help:

This looks more attractive.

02:02:378 (1) - imo adding two short back arrow sliders would be a cool finish :)

HARD:
No real problems to report. You just gotta snap your kiai man!

00:24:713 (1) - Fix spacing :d

00:27:380 (5) - Love what you did here.

00:52:713 (1) - Cool
RatedNC17
397 posts
Joined May 2010
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RatedNC17
thanks for the feedback and i appreciate the help :D
chaee
chaee
[quote="RatedNC17":093e4]thanks for the feedback and i appreciate the help :D[/quote:093e4]



Gaah i have that warm fuzzy feeling in my stomach nao~~
I really want to see this map ranked! Good luck and pm me if you want more help~ *w*
-Erik-
-Erik-
May I comment?

Easy:
- Since this is an easy map, distance snap should be followed. I mean, beginners wouldn't recognize the difference on the beat and compare it with the distance of the objects.

All:
- Color 4 and 5 looks like the same color, or should I say analogous. Pretty seems like you retrieved the colors from the characters, but I guess you separate those two colors to avoid confusion on combo. :)

BTW, nice job on putting subs in-game. :D
RatedNC17
397 posts
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RatedNC17
Thanks, i switched 2 to 4 and 4 to 2
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