Normal Diff added!
• Куда дела hit300g.png? xD точно, добавила)
• Между 00:12:374 (3,4) - расстояние больше чем на 00:12:374 (4,5) - АйМод молчит по этому поводу, но в глаза бросается. ага
• 00:27:803 (4) - Я думаю, будет лучше Ctrl+G-эшнуть его, убрать пятый серкл, добавить на этот слайдер реверс и покрутить следующие слайдеры, чтоб подходили по дистанции и тд. Это для лучшего флоу. Новичку будет сложновато здесь. Скорее всего, он нажмет на конец слайдера и сфэйлит комбо. Впрочем, небольшая проблемка, можно оставить как есть. хорошо, исправила
• 00:37:232 (2) - Тоже самое. Для лучшего флоу, Ctrl+G-эшни его xD сделала чуть иначе, но смысл тот же)
• 01:14:946 (1) - Для лучшей обводки расставь точки на слайдере так: Первую не меняй. Она в центре. Вторую точку на х:276 у:280, третью на х:200 у:340 (Так же скопируй третий слайдер) 01:16:232 (2) - х:184 у:248 действительно
• 01:18:803 - Поправь под 01:16:232 (2) да
Тоже афигенно сделано. Однако..
• 01:23:946 (2) - подвинь его на х:124 у:312 окей)
• 01:33:803 (3,4,5) - Так флоу будет лучше: хорошо
В остальном, как я и говорил, все круто :3 и это хорошо! (с)
• 01:20:089 (1,3) - Move two grids down second point of sliders. Like that:
It's not necessary, but looks better.
Это все, что я смог найти
thanks very much o3o
So let's check this, PM-requested mod here
Seems to be okay, you might want to check this:
hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1) okay
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1) okay
When I first had a look through the diff I kinda felt that the rhythm is weird, and I want to give you suggestion how to improve your whole map with those. The problem is that you kinda just placed the stuff, without paying attention to the vocals really good. I'm going to suggest "CTRL + G to the rhythm". It simply means you should click on the timelink, press CTRL + G and listen to the rhythm. If you like it, place it that it fits again. I hope you know what I mean, if you don't simply PM me.
I'm just going to check the rhythm for now, since it requiers some replacing, i'll do a recheck after.
00:02:946 (2,3) - CTRL + G this first, because the slider fits so much better at the first spot. You can also hear the connecting between the words. ✓
00:05:517 (6,7) - CTRL + G those as well, to make a pattern with 5, and the important thing: The slider doesn't end on a strong tick; please let people click something 00:06:374 - to get the best emphasis.✓
00:06:374 (7) - If I think about it, I got a completely different rhythm here to fit the.. pa cimpoi or w/e he's saying: http://puu.sh/4RM60.jpg (1 starts 00:06:374 - here.) 4 Circles because of the relatively strong voice.✓
00:09:803 (1) - This rhythm here is a bit messed up as well, the uh uh doesn't sound like a circle and a reversed slider, I think the slider should come first, followed by other things: http://puu.sh/4RMeT.jpg Try this out. Here is part 2 of this combo: http://puu.sh/4RMgi.jpg (5 and 6 are CTRL + G again)✓
00:16:660 (2,3) - For here I suggest you to build up some tension, and put a break to let the player rest, and to avoid boring rhythm. Delete 00:16:660 (2,3) - first, then add a slider from 00:16:660 (2) - to 00:17:089 - and a circle here 00:17:517 - . I hope you like this, it's a good variation! sorry, i don't understand what you mean ._.
00:27:803 (4) - If I were you I would dereverse this one and add a circle 00:28:660 - here instead, with a finish. Then, delete this one here 00:29:089 - . Will bring a good emphasizing point and a break.✓
00:38:089 (3,4) - Here I suggest CTRL + G for the consistency 00:39:803 (5,6) - to this one here. Sounds good.✓
00:36:374 (1,2) - Well this one is not placed really nicely, make sure they both are the same slider and make a nice blanket (puush disabled idk why -_-) tried to do somthing
00:48:374 (4,5) - CTRL + G, same reasons as above.✓
01:02:517 (5) - Add two circles 01:02:517 - 01:02:946 - instead of having this weird big slider? The slider follows nothing, that's why I'm suggesting it i'll leave it at thet cause i feel some incompleteness with these circles
01:03:803 (1) - From here on you've suddenly mapped so less, can you explain that? It breaks the rhythm flow somehow.. Consider adding more there.✓
I'll stop here, because most things are the same as listed above.. I hope you can go through your map and fix them yourself, i'm sure you can do this! Call me for a recheck if you want
will go on in a bit
Check the mod above. xD hahaoh, i haven't seen that ._.
k since you already asked me for a recheck (even if it wasn't finished)
let's start again[Easy - with good rhythm]
Well, the Rhythm is good now, now let's go on with the spacing issues (unfortunately it's a bit more weird than before >.<) well dw, we can handle thaaat
00:01:232 (1,2) - The natural flow is really broken here, consider placing slider 2 UNDER slider 1, so it looks like this http://puu.sh/4ShPE.jpg yes, good way!
00:03:802 (3,4,5,6) - Tbh, this looks very crumped together, in an easy, in my opinion, it's important to give everything a clear structure which a newbie can follow. http://puu.sh/4ShVB.jpg It would be good if it was something like this, but you might rework some parts (dw, you can't see 6 in game, so this WON'T be an overlap) ✓
00:06:374 (1,2,3) - This stacking is too misleading for a beginner, probably too frustating. Try following the instruction above. You can also try it yourself, those are just suggestions. ✓
00:36:374 (1) - If you play it ingame, it looks very unnatural placed and it's just so close to slider 2. Try to space it a bit up, and place it above it or so. i replaced it another way
00:37:232 (2,3) - Well, both things going up, doesn't flow well with each other. Also; NC to 3? http://puu.sh/4Si2h.jpg something like this flows much better. ✓
00:43:232 (3,1) - I can see you want to create symmetry here, yet it's forced and makes no sense; 00:43:232 (3) - here sings the man 00:44:946 (1) - and here is uh uh uh again, so it makes no sense to be the same slider shape, does it? Please change it to something more outstanding ✓
01:00:374 (4) - NC due to the new sentence ✓
01:18:803 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit messy too, try to create simple shapes in easy. http://puu.sh/4Si7n.jpg I've put another slider shape for 3, because it's something new in the song, also for variation. ✓
01:29:089 (2,3,4,5) - Space differently, it's so close, please you have enough space to place it! D: ✓
01:58:660 (3,1,2) - Compare the spacing between those please, the DS between 01:58:660 (3,1) - and 02:00:803 (1,2) - seems so much bigger (the gap between slider > circle, nto the REAL DS) ✓
Well, it would be nice if you tidy the things up >.< I guess you've rushed a bit too much with placing a new rhythm, take some more time next time
[Tony's Normal] DONE
00:20:946 (4,1) - If you want to create smth ilke this, it would be quite nice if they are paralell.
01:55:232 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/4Siqt.jpg ? A nicer curve looks better here.
Rhythm: Nothing to point out, fits everything
Placing / Spacing : Very good, i like how you use the same slider shapes for the same parts.
Let's talk IRC about it, i try to catch you, or you me, however it works! okay!
[ezek's Cimpoi] in progress
Really good diff, very solid and fully enjoyable
00:36:374 (1,2,4,1) - Make sure DS between those is exactly the same, it looks a bit too close as well :c
01:06:803 (1) - This is like the only thing that throws me out in game, it's like being on nothing, and the gap before, i just want to follow the rhythm and miss here, could you think of smth different? maybe even delete it?
Rhythm: Easy to follow, solid.
Placing: Although it's very much symmetry (i normally don't really like it) It fits so good here. Good job, really.
Take a star from me for this.. funny and catchy song
Thanks for a star and for a mod C:
(Minor) I see someone told you to make the 300 hitbursts the same as the template skin but seeing as they aren't being used/seen in the map I really think they should be 1x1 as you had them.
I personally think the spinner at the end of the maps doesn't really fit and I prefer the style insane does it instead. i'll leave it at that
Hard to tell when claps are left out on purpose but I think it sounds better with them in
00:11:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - continue clap pattern? oh, yes..
00:27:803 (4) - clap at the end ✓
00:32:946 (1,2) - could sound better with hitsounds, maybe with whistles on the start/end (check normal) ✓
00:48:374 (4) - clap on repeat ✓
00:53:517 (1,2) - same as 00:32:946 / all the rest of these ✓
01:08:517 (2) - clap ✓
01:30:374 (4,5) - still sounds better with claps to me ✓
[Tony's Normal] DONE
01:28:232 (3,6) - (nazi)could be stacked more
Kind of sad to see so much copy/paste during kiai times, could be made more creative
00:06:803 (2,3) - aren't quite aligned ✓
00:48:160 (3,5) - 3 could curve around 5 in a nicer way changed a bit
01:30:160 (3,5) - ^ (Same for other kiai time) ^
02:02:517 (5,2) - aren't quite stacked ✓
[ezek's Insane] in progress
00:16:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice hitsound placement in places like this
Nothing to point out, nicely done Insane
Even with a new difficulty added recently a very nice mapset. Not much else I can say apart from have a star! Good luck on bubble/rank.