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Normal Diff added!
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added hitsounds, and made the diff a bit harder http://puu.sh/4MEBM.rar
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Updated :3
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[Общее]
• Куда дела hit300g.png? xD
[Изя]
• Между 00:12:374 (3,4) - расстояние больше чем на 00:12:374 (4,5) - АйМод молчит по этому поводу, но в глаза бросается.
• 00:27:803 (4) - Я думаю, будет лучше Ctrl+G-эшнуть его, убрать пятый серкл, добавить на этот слайдер реверс и покрутить следующие слайдеры, чтоб подходили по дистанции и тд. Это для лучшего флоу. Новичку будет сложновато здесь. Скорее всего, он нажмет на конец слайдера и сфэйлит комбо. Впрочем, небольшая проблемка, можно оставить как есть.
• 00:37:232 (2) - Тоже самое. Для лучшего флоу, Ctrl+G-эшни его xD
• 01:14:946 (1) - Для лучшей обводки расставь точки на слайдере так: Первую не меняй. Она в центре. Вторую точку на х:276 у:280, третью на х:200 у:340 (Так же скопируй третий слайдер) 01:16:232 (2) - х:184 у:248
• 01:18:803 - Поправь под 01:16:232 (2)
[Tony's Normal]
Perfect diff.
[Хардик]
Тоже афигенно сделано. Однако..
• 01:23:946 (2) - подвинь его на х:124 у:312
• 01:33:803 (3,4,5) - Так флоу будет лучше:

В остальном, как я и говорил, все круто :3
[ezek's Cimpoi]
• 01:20:089 (1,3) - Move two grids down second point of sliders. Like that:

It's not necessary, but looks better.

Это все, что я смог найти :)
Удачи :3
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DexFrild wrote:

[Общее]
• Куда дела hit300g.png? xD точно, добавила)
[Изя]
• Между 00:12:374 (3,4) - расстояние больше чем на 00:12:374 (4,5) - АйМод молчит по этому поводу, но в глаза бросается. ага
• 00:27:803 (4) - Я думаю, будет лучше Ctrl+G-эшнуть его, убрать пятый серкл, добавить на этот слайдер реверс и покрутить следующие слайдеры, чтоб подходили по дистанции и тд. Это для лучшего флоу. Новичку будет сложновато здесь. Скорее всего, он нажмет на конец слайдера и сфэйлит комбо. Впрочем, небольшая проблемка, можно оставить как есть. хорошо, исправила
• 00:37:232 (2) - Тоже самое. Для лучшего флоу, Ctrl+G-эшни его xD сделала чуть иначе, но смысл тот же)
• 01:14:946 (1) - Для лучшей обводки расставь точки на слайдере так: Первую не меняй. Она в центре. Вторую точку на х:276 у:280, третью на х:200 у:340 (Так же скопируй третий слайдер) 01:16:232 (2) - х:184 у:248 действительно
• 01:18:803 - Поправь под 01:16:232 (2) да
[Tony's Normal]
Perfect diff.
[Хардик]
Тоже афигенно сделано. Однако..
• 01:23:946 (2) - подвинь его на х:124 у:312 окей)
• 01:33:803 (3,4,5) - Так флоу будет лучше: хорошо

В остальном, как я и говорил, все круто :3 и это хорошо! (с)
[ezek's Cimpoi]
• 01:20:089 (1,3) - Move two grids down second point of sliders. Like that:

It's not necessary, but looks better.

Это все, что я смог найти :)
Удачи :3
Спасибки большое :)
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No changes, thanks anyways for the mod DexFrild. :)
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So let's check this, PM-requested mod here :)

[General]

Seems to be okay, you might want to check this:

hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1)
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1)

[Easy]

First impression
When I first had a look through the diff I kinda felt that the rhythm is weird, and I want to give you suggestion how to improve your whole map with those. The problem is that you kinda just placed the stuff, without paying attention to the vocals really good. I'm going to suggest "CTRL + G to the rhythm". It simply means you should click on the timelink, press CTRL + G and listen to the rhythm. If you like it, place it that it fits again. I hope you know what I mean, if you don't simply PM me.
I'm just going to check the rhythm for now, since it requiers some replacing, i'll do a recheck after.

00:02:946 (2,3) - CTRL + G this first, because the slider fits so much better at the first spot. You can also hear the connecting between the words.

00:05:517 (6,7) - CTRL + G those as well, to make a pattern with 5, and the important thing: The slider doesn't end on a strong tick; please let people click something 00:06:374 - to get the best emphasis.

00:06:374 (7) - If I think about it, I got a completely different rhythm here to fit the.. pa cimpoi or w/e he's saying: http://puu.sh/4RM60.jpg (1 starts 00:06:374 - here.) 4 Circles because of the relatively strong voice.

00:09:803 (1) - This rhythm here is a bit messed up as well, the uh uh doesn't sound like a circle and a reversed slider, I think the slider should come first, followed by other things: http://puu.sh/4RMeT.jpg Try this out. Here is part 2 of this combo: http://puu.sh/4RMgi.jpg (5 and 6 are CTRL + G again)

00:16:660 (2,3) - For here I suggest you to build up some tension, and put a break to let the player rest, and to avoid boring rhythm. Delete 00:16:660 (2,3) - first, then add a slider from 00:16:660 (2) - to 00:17:089 - and a circle here 00:17:517 - . I hope you like this, it's a good variation!

00:27:803 (4) - If I were you I would dereverse this one and add a circle 00:28:660 - here instead, with a finish. Then, delete this one here 00:29:089 - . Will bring a good emphasizing point and a break.

00:38:089 (3,4) - Here I suggest CTRL + G for the consistency 00:39:803 (5,6) - to this one here. Sounds good.

00:36:374 (1,2) - Well this one is not placed really nicely, make sure they both are the same slider and make a nice blanket (puush disabled idk why -_-)

00:48:374 (4,5) - CTRL + G, same reasons as above.

01:02:517 (5) - Add two circles 01:02:517 - 01:02:946 - instead of having this weird big slider? The slider follows nothing, that's why I'm suggesting it

01:03:803 (1) - From here on you've suddenly mapped so less, can you explain that? It breaks the rhythm flow somehow.. Consider adding more there.

I'll stop here, because most things are the same as listed above.. I hope you can go through your map and fix them yourself, i'm sure you can do this! Call me for a recheck if you want :)


will go on in a bit :)

k since you already asked me for a recheck (even if it wasn't finished)

let's start again

[Easy - with good rhythm]

Well, the Rhythm is good now, now let's go on with the spacing issues (unfortunately it's a bit more weird than before >.<) well dw, we can handle thaaat

00:01:232 (1,2) - The natural flow is really broken here, consider placing slider 2 UNDER slider 1, so it looks like this http://puu.sh/4ShPE.jpg

00:03:802 (3,4,5,6) - Tbh, this looks very crumped together, in an easy, in my opinion, it's important to give everything a clear structure which a newbie can follow. http://puu.sh/4ShVB.jpg It would be good if it was something like this, but you might rework some parts (dw, you can't see 6 in game, so this WON'T be an overlap)

00:06:374 (1,2,3) - This stacking is too misleading for a beginner, probably too frustating. Try following the instruction above. You can also try it yourself, those are just suggestions.

00:36:374 (1) - If you play it ingame, it looks very unnatural placed and it's just so close to slider 2. Try to space it a bit up, and place it above it or so.

00:37:232 (2,3) - Well, both things going up, doesn't flow well with each other. Also; NC to 3? http://puu.sh/4Si2h.jpg something like this flows much better.

00:43:232 (3,1) - I can see you want to create symmetry here, yet it's forced and makes no sense; 00:43:232 (3) - here sings the man 00:44:946 (1) - and here is uh uh uh again, so it makes no sense to be the same slider shape, does it? Please change it to something more outstanding

01:00:374 (4) - NC due to the new sentence

01:18:803 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit messy too, try to create simple shapes in easy. http://puu.sh/4Si7n.jpg I've put another slider shape for 3, because it's something new in the song, also for variation.

01:29:089 (2,3,4,5) - Space differently, it's so close, please you have enough space to place it! D:

01:58:660 (3,1,2) - Compare the spacing between those please, the DS between 01:58:660 (3,1) - and 02:00:803 (1,2) - seems so much bigger (the gap between slider > circle, nto the REAL DS)

Well, it would be nice if you tidy the things up >.< I guess you've rushed a bit too much with placing a new rhythm, take some more time next time :o

[Tony's Normal]

00:20:946 (4,1) - If you want to create smth ilke this, it would be quite nice if they are paralell.

01:55:232 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/4Siqt.jpg ? A nicer curve looks better here.
:)
Feedback

Rhythm: Nothing to point out, fits everything
Placing / Spacing : Very good, i like how you use the same slider shapes for the same parts.

[Hard]

Let's talk IRC about it, i try to catch you, or you me, however it works!

[ezek's Cimpoi]

Really good diff, very solid and fully enjoyable

00:36:374 (1,2,4,1) - Make sure DS between those is exactly the same, it looks a bit too close as well :c

01:06:803 (1) - This is like the only thing that throws me out in game, it's like being on nothing, and the gap before, i just want to follow the rhythm and miss here, could you think of smth different? maybe even delete it?

Feedback

Rhythm: Easy to follow, solid.
Placing: Although it's very much symmetry (i normally don't really like it) It fits so good here. Good job, really.

Take a star from me for this.. funny and catchy song :P
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Irreversible wrote:



So let's check this, PM-requested mod here :)

[General]

Seems to be okay, you might want to check this:

hit300k.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1) okay
hit300g.png's dimensions must be exactly 256x256 (currently 1x1) okay

[Easy]

First impression
When I first had a look through the diff I kinda felt that the rhythm is weird, and I want to give you suggestion how to improve your whole map with those. The problem is that you kinda just placed the stuff, without paying attention to the vocals really good. I'm going to suggest "CTRL + G to the rhythm". It simply means you should click on the timelink, press CTRL + G and listen to the rhythm. If you like it, place it that it fits again. I hope you know what I mean, if you don't simply PM me.
I'm just going to check the rhythm for now, since it requiers some replacing, i'll do a recheck after.

00:02:946 (2,3) - CTRL + G this first, because the slider fits so much better at the first spot. You can also hear the connecting between the words.

00:05:517 (6,7) - CTRL + G those as well, to make a pattern with 5, and the important thing: The slider doesn't end on a strong tick; please let people click something 00:06:374 - to get the best emphasis.

00:06:374 (7) - If I think about it, I got a completely different rhythm here to fit the.. pa cimpoi or w/e he's saying: http://puu.sh/4RM60.jpg (1 starts 00:06:374 - here.) 4 Circles because of the relatively strong voice.

00:09:803 (1) - This rhythm here is a bit messed up as well, the uh uh doesn't sound like a circle and a reversed slider, I think the slider should come first, followed by other things: http://puu.sh/4RMeT.jpg Try this out. Here is part 2 of this combo: http://puu.sh/4RMgi.jpg (5 and 6 are CTRL + G again)

00:16:660 (2,3) - For here I suggest you to build up some tension, and put a break to let the player rest, and to avoid boring rhythm. Delete 00:16:660 (2,3) - first, then add a slider from 00:16:660 (2) - to 00:17:089 - and a circle here 00:17:517 - . I hope you like this, it's a good variation! sorry, i don't understand what you mean ._.

00:27:803 (4) - If I were you I would dereverse this one and add a circle 00:28:660 - here instead, with a finish. Then, delete this one here 00:29:089 - . Will bring a good emphasizing point and a break.

00:38:089 (3,4) - Here I suggest CTRL + G for the consistency 00:39:803 (5,6) - to this one here. Sounds good.

00:36:374 (1,2) - Well this one is not placed really nicely, make sure they both are the same slider and make a nice blanket (puush disabled idk why -_-) tried to do somthing

00:48:374 (4,5) - CTRL + G, same reasons as above.

01:02:517 (5) - Add two circles 01:02:517 - 01:02:946 - instead of having this weird big slider? The slider follows nothing, that's why I'm suggesting it i'll leave it at thet cause i feel some incompleteness with these circles

01:03:803 (1) - From here on you've suddenly mapped so less, can you explain that? It breaks the rhythm flow somehow.. Consider adding more there.

I'll stop here, because most things are the same as listed above.. I hope you can go through your map and fix them yourself, i'm sure you can do this! Call me for a recheck if you want :)


will go on in a bit :)
thanks very much o3o
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Check the mod above. xD haha
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Irreversible wrote:

Check the mod above. xD haha
oh, i haven't seen that ._.

Irreversible wrote:



k since you already asked me for a recheck (even if it wasn't finished)

let's start again

[Easy - with good rhythm]

Well, the Rhythm is good now, now let's go on with the spacing issues (unfortunately it's a bit more weird than before >.<) well dw, we can handle thaaat

00:01:232 (1,2) - The natural flow is really broken here, consider placing slider 2 UNDER slider 1, so it looks like this http://puu.sh/4ShPE.jpg yes, good way!

00:03:802 (3,4,5,6) - Tbh, this looks very crumped together, in an easy, in my opinion, it's important to give everything a clear structure which a newbie can follow. http://puu.sh/4ShVB.jpg It would be good if it was something like this, but you might rework some parts (dw, you can't see 6 in game, so this WON'T be an overlap)

00:06:374 (1,2,3) - This stacking is too misleading for a beginner, probably too frustating. Try following the instruction above. You can also try it yourself, those are just suggestions.

00:36:374 (1) - If you play it ingame, it looks very unnatural placed and it's just so close to slider 2. Try to space it a bit up, and place it above it or so. i replaced it another way

00:37:232 (2,3) - Well, both things going up, doesn't flow well with each other. Also; NC to 3? http://puu.sh/4Si2h.jpg something like this flows much better.

00:43:232 (3,1) - I can see you want to create symmetry here, yet it's forced and makes no sense; 00:43:232 (3) - here sings the man 00:44:946 (1) - and here is uh uh uh again, so it makes no sense to be the same slider shape, does it? Please change it to something more outstanding

01:00:374 (4) - NC due to the new sentence

01:18:803 (1,2,3) - Spacing here looks a bit messy too, try to create simple shapes in easy. http://puu.sh/4Si7n.jpg I've put another slider shape for 3, because it's something new in the song, also for variation.

01:29:089 (2,3,4,5) - Space differently, it's so close, please you have enough space to place it! D:

01:58:660 (3,1,2) - Compare the spacing between those please, the DS between 01:58:660 (3,1) - and 02:00:803 (1,2) - seems so much bigger (the gap between slider > circle, nto the REAL DS)

Well, it would be nice if you tidy the things up >.< I guess you've rushed a bit too much with placing a new rhythm, take some more time next time :o

[Tony's Normal] DONE

00:20:946 (4,1) - If you want to create smth ilke this, it would be quite nice if they are paralell.

01:55:232 (1,2,1) - http://puu.sh/4Siqt.jpg ? A nicer curve looks better here.
:)
Feedback

Rhythm: Nothing to point out, fits everything
Placing / Spacing : Very good, i like how you use the same slider shapes for the same parts.

[Hard]

Let's talk IRC about it, i try to catch you, or you me, however it works! okay!

[ezek's Cimpoi] in progress

Really good diff, very solid and fully enjoyable

00:36:374 (1,2,4,1) - Make sure DS between those is exactly the same, it looks a bit too close as well :c

01:06:803 (1) - This is like the only thing that throws me out in game, it's like being on nothing, and the gap before, i just want to follow the rhythm and miss here, could you think of smth different? maybe even delete it?

Feedback

Rhythm: Easy to follow, solid.
Placing: Although it's very much symmetry (i normally don't really like it) It fits so good here. Good job, really.

Take a star from me for this.. funny and catchy song :P


Thanks for a star and for a mod C:
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[General]
(Minor) I see someone told you to make the 300 hitbursts the same as the template skin but seeing as they aren't being used/seen in the map I really think they should be 1x1 as you had them.
I personally think the spinner at the end of the maps doesn't really fit and I prefer the style insane does it instead.

[Easy]
Hard to tell when claps are left out on purpose but I think it sounds better with them in
00:11:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - continue clap pattern?
00:27:803 (4) - clap at the end
00:32:946 (1,2) - could sound better with hitsounds, maybe with whistles on the start/end (check normal)
00:48:374 (4) - clap on repeat
00:53:517 (1,2) - same as 00:32:946 / all the rest of these
01:08:517 (2) - clap
01:30:374 (4,5) - still sounds better with claps to me

[Tony's Normal]
01:28:232 (3,6) - (nazi)could be stacked more

[Hard]
Kind of sad to see so much copy/paste during kiai times, could be made more creative
00:06:803 (2,3) - aren't quite aligned
00:48:160 (3,5) - 3 could curve around 5 in a nicer way
01:30:160 (3,5) - ^ (Same for other kiai time)
02:02:517 (5,2) - aren't quite stacked

[ezek's Insane]
00:16:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice hitsound placement in places like this
Nothing to point out, nicely done Insane

Even with a new difficulty added recently a very nice mapset. Not much else I can say apart from have a star! Good luck on bubble/rank.
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fix'd second suggestion from irreversible and james' suggestion http://puu.sh/4SvD5.rar
thanks
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wow Irre <3
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huh?
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James2250 wrote:

[General]
(Minor) I see someone told you to make the 300 hitbursts the same as the template skin but seeing as they aren't being used/seen in the map I really think they should be 1x1 as you had them.
I personally think the spinner at the end of the maps doesn't really fit and I prefer the style insane does it instead. i'll leave it at that

[Easy]
Hard to tell when claps are left out on purpose but I think it sounds better with them in
00:11:089 (2,3,4,5,6) - continue clap pattern? oh, yes..
00:27:803 (4) - clap at the end
00:32:946 (1,2) - could sound better with hitsounds, maybe with whistles on the start/end (check normal)
00:48:374 (4) - clap on repeat
00:53:517 (1,2) - same as 00:32:946 / all the rest of these
01:08:517 (2) - clap
01:30:374 (4,5) - still sounds better with claps to me

[Tony's Normal] DONE
01:28:232 (3,6) - (nazi)could be stacked more

[Hard]
Kind of sad to see so much copy/paste during kiai times, could be made more creative
00:06:803 (2,3) - aren't quite aligned
00:48:160 (3,5) - 3 could curve around 5 in a nicer way changed a bit
01:30:160 (3,5) - ^ (Same for other kiai time) ^
02:02:517 (5,2) - aren't quite stacked

[ezek's Insane] in progress
00:16:660 (1,2,3,4,5) - nice hitsound placement in places like this
Nothing to point out, nicely done Insane

Even with a new difficulty added recently a very nice mapset. Not much else I can say apart from have a star! Good luck on bubble/rank.

thanks a lot! :3
and thanks Tony c:
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Aarghhh!! I don't have a computer right now... and I really want to check these recent mods!
I'm not sure if I would be able to do changes this weekend..
Well.. at least I'm reporting that I'm alive :?
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Hi irre~

2013-10-18 13:40 11t: the maps flows well and looks nice
2013-10-18 13:40 11t: sometimes the rhythm is hard to read though
2013-10-18 13:40 Irreversible: thanks
2013-10-18 13:40 Irreversible: i see
2013-10-18 13:40 11t: the spacings you use for your 1/2 timings are sometimes the same as the spacings for your 1/1 timings
2013-10-18 13:40 11t: and it gets a bit confusing
2013-10-18 13:41 11t: like here 00:56:518 (5,1) -
2013-10-18 13:41 11t: is pretty much the same distance as 00:57:803 (4,1) - if not even larger
2013-10-18 13:41 Irreversible: oh
2013-10-18 13:41 Irreversible: fixed
2013-10-18 13:41 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/4TfPH.jpg
2013-10-18 13:41 11t: and then you have like this here 01:01:232 (4,1) -
2013-10-18 13:42 11t: and then like this here 01:06:374 (4,1) -
2013-10-18 13:42 11t: and like this here 01:03:375 (7,1) -
2013-10-18 13:42 11t: all similar spacings, all different timings
2013-10-18 13:42 Irreversible: well i guess you can read that pretty well.. hm
2013-10-18 13:43 11t: 01:11:089 (3,1) - and 01:12:374 (4,5) -
2013-10-18 13:43 11t: i mean the map overall isn't very difficult, but these sorts of things can really mess up players who are at this sort of difficulty level i think
2013-10-18 13:44 11t: 01:24:803 (3,1) - here you have this after a jump sequence
2013-10-18 13:45 11t: i feel like a lot of these could be easier to read and play more smoothly if they were stacked
2013-10-18 13:45 11t: they're not hard to read if you're familiar with the song, because they all follow the vocals
2013-10-18 13:46 11t: but for players who are hearing this song for the first/second/third time it can get confusing
2013-10-18 13:46 11t: and usually you can't expect players to give your map more than 2 or 3 plays
2013-10-18 13:46 11t: if they even play it more than once
2013-10-18 13:47 Irreversible: well i guess its kinda easy to get the rhythm and see that i've followed the vocals
2013-10-18 13:47 Irreversible: but i'll try to fix it, but i'll leave some of them
2013-10-18 13:47 11t: i think in general, you know, with your maps, you've got neat arrangements and jump patterns
2013-10-18 13:48 11t: but the spacing gets a bit weird when you start using 1/1 gaps
2013-10-18 13:48 11t: that's really the only issue i can see with your maps, everything else is great
2013-10-18 13:49 11t: it's just things like this 01:39:803 (4,5,1) - next to things like this 01:43:660 (6,7,1) -
2013-10-18 13:51 Irreversible: like, with all m maps?
2013-10-18 13:51 Irreversible: my*
2013-10-18 13:52 11t: in general i think it's something you should focus on
2013-10-18 13:52 Irreversible: okay
2013-10-18 13:52 Irreversible: i'll remember that
2013-10-18 13:52 Irreversible: thanks very much o.o
2013-10-18 13:52 11t: this map plays a lot more smoothly at AR8 for me
2013-10-18 13:53 Irreversible: yeah idk why it was 7, i already upadted it LOL
2013-10-18 13:53 11t: 01:24:803 (3,1) - but yeah this ;_;
2013-10-18 13:54 11t: do you use pause stacks often?
2013-10-18 13:54 Irreversible: ah
2013-10-18 13:54 Irreversible: fixed
2013-10-18 13:54 Irreversible: in general?
2013-10-18 13:54 11t: yeah in general
2013-10-18 13:54 11t: i think just by convention and players being so used to them nowadays that they're one of the easiest ways to deal with 1/1 gaps
2013-10-18 13:55 Irreversible: well
2013-10-18 13:55 Irreversible: not sure if i do
2013-10-18 13:55 Irreversible: hm
2013-10-18 13:55 11t: they're everywhere in recent maps, so it's sort of become a universal thing that players are used to
2013-10-18 13:56 11t: these 01:59:089 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - might be a bit too spaced
2013-10-18 13:57 Irreversible: and fixed
2013-10-18 13:58 11t: 00:28:446 (1,2,3,4,1) - this is nice
2013-10-18 13:58 Irreversible: yeah i love this pattern
2013-10-18 13:58 Irreversible: i found it randomly
2013-10-18 13:59 Irreversible: when i wanted to make a triangle
2013-10-18 13:59 Irreversible: but i couldn't get out of it
2013-10-18 13:59 Irreversible: without looking ugly
2013-10-18 13:59 Irreversible: *-*
2013-10-18 13:59 11t: that's how everyone seems to map nowadays haha
2013-10-18 13:59 11t: they try to make triangle patterns and then mess up or accidentally ctrl+g something and then it works
2013-10-18 13:59 11t: mythol/fycho/cryo etc. maps are all about making triangle patterns
2013-10-18 13:59 11t: then ctrl+ging random pairs of circles
2013-10-18 14:00 11t: 01:09:374 (3,4,5) - i don't know about this either
2013-10-18 14:01 11t: the actual distance isn't bad it's just when you have multiple of them in a row
2013-10-18 14:01 11t: having to do that kind of jump twice seems like it could be a bit too difficult in comparison to the rest of your map
2013-10-18 14:01 Irreversible: yeah i love triangle
2013-10-18 14:01 Irreversible: sometimes it just doesn't work idk
2013-10-18 14:03 11t: i can see this part being the part where the blue retry graph just spikes here
2013-10-18 14:03 Irreversible: fixed it a little
2013-10-18 14:03 Irreversible: ^.^
2013-10-18 14:04 11t: 02:04:232 (4,5,1) -
2013-10-18 14:04 11t: these aren't centered
2013-10-18 14:04 Irreversible: lol stupid me
2013-10-18 14:05 11t: 01:34:875 (4) - not centered
2013-10-18 14:05 11t: i'm not really sure if it matters though
2013-10-18 14:05 11t: yeah it probably doesn't matter
2013-10-18 14:05 Irreversible: idc if it matters
2013-10-18 14:05 Irreversible: i mod this all the time
2013-10-18 14:05 Irreversible: so i can also do it
2013-10-18 14:05 Irreversible: fixed
2013-10-18 14:06 11t: so yeaaaaah interesting song haha
2013-10-18 14:06 11t: anyway i think that's all
2013-10-18 14:06 Irreversible: 01:11:517 (1,2,3) - fixed
2013-10-18 14:07 11t: good work! the jumps are pretty fun all around
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Hi and Irc mod :D
20:42 Parachute: 00:06:803 (3,3) - und die solltest du woanders hintun iwie passt das für mich gar nich
20:42 Parachute: aber ich find das lied total behindert vll liegts ja daran. xD
20:42 Parachute: 00:07:874 - da solltest du nen circle adden das is iwie komisch
20:43 Irreversible: iwie fixed xD?
20:43 Irreversible: vocals
20:43 Irreversible: > no
20:43 Parachute: was iwie fixed?
20:43 Irreversible: ja den teil den du komisch findest
20:43 Irreversible: ich finds relativ schwer etwas zu verbessern wenn du keinen vorschlag bringst lol
20:44 Parachute: >.>
20:45 Parachute: es is einfach zu gerade und man kanns nich spieln mach entwegen paar gute jumps rein oder einfach iwas andere keine ahnung ok ? x.x
20:45 Irreversible: hab doch gesagt hab geändert
20:45 Irreversible: hab iwie gestacked und ka xD
20:45 Parachute: o_o
20:46 Parachute: ok
20:46 Parachute: der skin is total scheiße.. wollt ich nur mal sagen xD
20:46 Irreversible: ja das ist nicht meine sache XD
20:49 Parachute: hm ok also der anfang war vll doch ok
20:49 Parachute: 00:06:160 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - aber das hier wirklich ändern xD
20:49 Parachute: vll den jump auch wegmachen
20:49 Parachute: o.o
20:49 Irreversible: ich habs
20:50 Parachute: ich glaub der verwirrt dann auch mit dem circle danach
20:50 Irreversible: einfach ctlr + j
20:50 Parachute: ctrl + j? wo o_o
20:50 Irreversible: 00:07:017 (1,2,3) -
20:50 Irreversible: hab das angeklickt und ctrl + j XD
20:54 Parachute: 00:39:802 (1,2,3,4) -
20:54 Parachute: mach das entwegen so
20:54 Parachute: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045012
20:54 Parachute: oder
20:54 Parachute: 1 und 2 in der mitte und 3 und 4 aussen
20:54 Irreversible: entwegen omg
20:54 Parachute: ja was? XD
20:54 Parachute: ok
20:55 Parachute: endwegen
20:55 Parachute: besser?
20:55 Parachute: xDDDD
20:55 Irreversible: noch schlimmer XDDD
20:55 Parachute: Q.Q
20:55 Irreversible: enddarmwegen
20:55 Irreversible: kwat
20:55 Irreversible: XDDDD
20:55 Parachute: ja was soll i ch dann schreiben ._.
20:55 Parachute: omg du weißt was ich gemeint hab also >.<
20:57 Irreversible: FIXED
20:57 Irreversible: FIND ICH NE GUTE IDEE
20:57 Irreversible: dem caps wtf
20:57 Parachute: 00:47:946 (6) - du ich würd das
20:57 Parachute: 00:48:803 (4) - unter dem machen
20:57 Parachute: und xD
20:58 Irreversible: 00:47:946 (6,4) - stacked? XD
20:58 Parachute: ja. o.o
20:58 Irreversible: oki
21:00 Parachute: 00:56:732 (1) - bei dem find ich solltest du den jump nich von der 5 zur 1 machen sondern von 1 auf 2 :o
21:00 Parachute: also mach die 1 vll iwo unten rechts hin xD
21:02 Parachute: 00:58:660 (1) - das würd ich vll iwie so machen:
21:02 Irreversible: ah
21:02 Irreversible: das hab ich schon fixed
21:02 Parachute: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045022
21:02 Parachute: xD
21:02 Irreversible: das mit 1 und 2 und 5 und 1
21:02 Parachute: ok xD
21:02 Irreversible: fixed
21:03 Irreversible: gute suggestion
21:03 Irreversible: kriegstn cumsh- keks
21:03 Irreversible: lol Xd
21:04 Parachute: cumsh keks? o_O
21:04 Irreversible: ...
21:04 Irreversible: xDDD
21:04 Irreversible: beende ds 1. wort
21:04 Irreversible: xDDDD
21:05 Parachute: o_o... xDDDDD du bist.. omg ey.. xD
21:05 Parachute: 01:11:517 (1) - xD
21:05 Parachute: also ehm entweder.. (besser ?>.<) du machst den weiter weg oder
21:06 Parachute: 01:11:946 (3) - das da iwie näher oder so
21:06 Parachute: hmm mom xD
21:06 Irreversible: fixed
21:06 Irreversible: nene habs fixed
21:08 Parachute: 01:25:232 (1) - 01:26:946 (1) -
21:08 Parachute: o.o
21:09 Parachute: das musst du auch anders machen weil so is das echt doof xD
21:09 Irreversible: ah
21:09 Irreversible: schon fixed
21:10 Parachute: 01:19:445 (4) - das solltest du einfach in die mitte machen xD
21:10 Irreversible: auch gut fixed
21:12 Parachute: ok also
21:13 Irreversible: ist alles? :o
21:13 Parachute: 01:53:089 (3) - das unter 01:53:517 (1) -
21:13 Parachute: nein D
21:13 Parachute: x
21:13 Parachute: xD* ><
21:13 Parachute: 01:57:374 (2,3,4) - und das würd ich so machen das die 3 unter 01:59:303 (3) - is
21:14 Parachute: 01:40:232 (5) - das würd ich unter 01:41:303 (3) - machen dann is der jump auch viel besser
21:14 Irreversible: stimmt
21:14 Irreversible: ist wahrscheindlich einfacher
21:15 Parachute: ich schau nich drauf deine map einfacher zu machen o.o xD
21:15 Parachute: 02:03:803 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - :c
21:16 Irreversible: xDDD
21:16 Parachute: 02:05:303 (1) - und das richtig in die mitte machen xD
21:17 Irreversible: fixed
21:17 Irreversible: ka wieso das nie in der mitte ist
21:17 Irreversible: HURENMIST
21:17 Irreversible: xD
21:18 Parachute: mach das so <3
21:18 Parachute: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1045045
21:18 Irreversible: ok
21:19 Irreversible: wie kriegt mans so schön hin?
21:19 Parachute: compose dann create polygon circles
21:19 Parachute: mach 1-7 weg davor :o
21:19 Parachute: und dann halt so machen das irgendeine zahl bei 8 is und dann mit ctrl + g xD
21:21 Irreversible: k
21:21 Irreversible: iwie ist es jez ein stern und ein dreieck
21:21 Parachute: aber machs vll nich gaaanz so groß wie auf meinem bild
21:21 Parachute: und ja oh man aaaaalso
21:21 Parachute: lösch die wieder
21:21 Parachute: dann machst du
21:22 Parachute: beat snap divisor 1/2
21:22 Parachute: dann gehst du wieder rauf und bei points muss 7 sein
21:23 Irreversible: oki habs
21:23 Irreversible: xD
21:23 Irreversible: danke
21:23 Irreversible: wegen 1/2 is nich gegangen
21:23 Parachute: ok :D
21:24 Parachute: 00:40:659 (5) - das ende des sliders is nich snapped xD
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Thanks guys, updated! c:
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Irre asked me for a IRC mod. Don't know how he manages to convince me always to do that stuff ...

20:53 Irreversible: hey bomber xD
20:53 bomber34: xD
20:53 Irreversible: kann ich dich um einen irc 1 diff mod bitten? o.o
20:53 Irreversible: XD
20:53 Irreversible: wow, ich fühl mich grad wie leute die mich so anschreiben
20:53 Irreversible: xDD
20:54 bomber34: .___.
20:56 bomber34: eig. dachte ich die Zeiten wo mich Leute um mods fragen wären vorbei
20:58 Irreversible: warum das xD
20:59 bomber34: weil mich schon seit Monaten niemand mehr deswegen angeschrieben hat
20:59 Irreversible: achso o,o also willst du? lol xD
20:59 bomber34: ka A) hasse ich IRC mods eig. B) ist es wahrscheinlich ein Anime Lied *würg C) bin ich müde und bräuchte daher etwas wo ich mich nich aufrege
21:00 bomber34: musste ja heute arbeiten :P
21:00 bomber34: außerdem demotiviere ich mich anscheind die ganze Zeit selber >.>
21:00 bomber34: so viele Lieder die ich eig. mappen müsste, die ich ranked sehen will
21:00 bomber34: aber ich bekomme sie sowieso nich ranked außer ich warte 86 Monate
21:01 Irreversible: a) irc mod beschde
21:01 Irreversible: b) nein rumänisch
21:01 Irreversible: c) rumäänisch XD
21:01 bomber34: ...
21:03 bomber34: ALSO
21:03 bomber34: wenn du schon schreist das es rumänisch is
21:03 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/314672 Sandu Ciorba - Pe Cimpoi [Irre's Cimpoi]]
21:03 Irreversible: SENOWI FARA CIMPOI
21:03 bomber34: dann wenigstens /np
21:04 bomber34: dafür guckste die vollen 7 Minuten hiervon bitte
21:04 bomber34: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jG7IGiBJU4c
21:04 bomber34: ich geh was trinken
21:04 bomber34: und danach mach ich n mod
21:04 bomber34: ... aber ich sag dir ich hasse IRC mods
21:04 Irreversible: XD wtf ist das man
21:05 bomber34: schau es komplett
21:05 Irreversible: k..
21:13 bomber34: das wäre die perfekte Marathon Map
21:16 Irreversible: XDD
21:16 Irreversible: stimmt
21:20 bomber34: 00:11:089 (5,1) - ich weiß nich, der Jump fühlt sich so sinnlos schwer an. Die Map is ja insgesamt etwas leichter ... ka. Ich schreib btw. erstmal nur meine Eindrücke beim spielen auf
21:21 Irreversible: warte kurz
21:21 Irreversible: muss updaten lassen
21:21 bomber34: Ich mag den Skin nicht >: unsichtbare 300er sind instant 1 von 10 Sternen
21:23 bomber34: 00:40:016 (2,3) - hier ebenfalls ... der Jump fühlt sich zu krass im Vergleich zum Rest an. Wenn man es wie die Ähnlichen Stellen 01:27:588 (2,3,4,5) - machen würde, wäre es imo besser
21:24 Irreversible: warte doch xDD
21:24 bomber34: nein
21:24 Irreversible: ja aber das hab ich schon geändert
21:24 Irreversible: XD
21:24 bomber34: IRC mods sind scheiße. >.>
21:24 Irreversible: 1 sekundee xD
21:27 bomber34: 00:47:089 (4,5,6,1) - das hier is richtig ätzend zu spielen. Ich sehe ja, was du planst und die Idee is nicht schlecht aber das spacing funkt mit dieser AR nich so gut
21:27 Irreversible: hab ar 8
21:27 bomber34: vorallem, weil die Musik dafür nich klar genug ausgelegt is
21:27 Irreversible: und gechanged
21:27 Irreversible: xD
21:27 bomber34: is wenigstens updated?
21:28 Irreversible: immer noch nicht xD
21:28 Irreversible: omg einfach off
21:28 Irreversible: XDD
21:28 bomber34: Achtung Achtung wichtige Durchsage für diesen Chat: bomber34 findet IRC mods scheiße
21:28 Irreversible: interessant
21:28 Irreversible: dalal
21:28 Irreversible: @@
21:28 Irreversible: XD
21:28 bomber34: wie soll ich denn modden, wenn alles was ich vor mir habe nich up to date is
21:29 Irreversible: is wieder on jez wird hochgeladen @@
21:29 Irreversible: XD
21:32 Irreversible: k updated
21:32 Irreversible: k jez
21:32 bomber34: hat Cimpoi eig. ne Bedeutung? oder wieso gibs das 2mal=?
21:33 bomber34: 00:47:089 (4,5,6,1) - viel besser
21:33 bomber34: 00:39:802 (1,2,3,4) - ebenfalls besser
21:33 Irreversible: cimpoi dudelsack
21:34 bomber34: aich wenn Leute dir wieder erzählen könnten, das (2,3) vom spacing scheiße sind. Aber es is ganz schnieke find ich
21:34 Irreversible: okay, danke :3
21:35 bomber34: 00:02:732 - Note hinzufügen? Ich sehe nich ganz warum da leer ist. Die Stimme zieht da nochmal hoch und man hört noch ein Instrument
21:37 bomber34: dort ne Note auf X: 256 Y:196 würde einen Jump von 5 zu 6 erzeugen was auch zu der Stimme passt, weil diese Hochzieht. und es sieht ganz nett aus
21:37 bomber34: , weil 00:02:303 (4,5,6) - eine Linie bilden und 00:01:874 (2,3,4,6) - ein karo
21:38 bomber34: die nächste Kombo wäre theoretisch zu nah dran aber du machst ja mehrfach so einen verkürzten Distance Snaps an neuen kombos in der Diff
21:38 Irreversible: habs ixed
21:38 bomber34: und außerdem sollen die möchtegern Pro DT spieler die klappe halten :p
21:38 Irreversible: und das andere einfach weiter weg
21:39 bomber34: fixed?
21:39 Irreversible: sag mir all deine circle add ideen, und wohin
21:39 Irreversible: ja
21:39 Irreversible: find ich gut
21:39 Irreversible: amnchmal is so leer
21:39 bomber34: lol
21:39 bomber34: eig. hab ich gerade wieder so n Erklär gewitter erwartet was mir denn bitte einfalle dir was vorzuschlagen
21:40 Irreversible: nö finds ganz gut lol xD
21:40 bomber34: 00:02:732 (6,1) - hab ja nur theoretisch gesagt lol
21:40 bomber34: deine Entscheidung aber
21:40 Irreversible: eben hab einfach
21:40 Irreversible: 1 nach rechts
21:40 Irreversible: und fixed
21:40 Irreversible: XD
21:42 bomber34: 00:05:303 (4) - würde ich auf X: 472 Y: 240 setzen und (5) so lassen wie es is von der Startposition. höchstens Sliderrichtung etwas ändern
21:42 bomber34: ich weiß nich diese Map schreit viel nach Karos für mich xD
21:42 bomber34: der Flow von den passt einfach gut
21:43 Irreversible: omg
21:43 Irreversible: echt gut
21:44 Irreversible: omg die karos sind echt geil XDD
21:45 Irreversible: o r g a s m XD
21:45 bomber34: 00:11:946 (4,5,6) - Ich sehe ja, dass du sowas hier auch gerne verwendest in der Map aber ne Note zwischen (5,6) würde gut passen, weil 00:12:589 - (5) "auf dem selben Ton liegt wie 00:12:589 -
21:45 bomber34: ...00:12:374 (5) -
21:46 bomber34: ob du die neue Note stackst mit (5) oder einfach zwischen (5,6) setzt, wäre eig. egal beides is irgendwie nett zu spielen
21:46 Irreversible: fixed
21:47 bomber34: ODER 00:12:589 (6) - leg mal ungefähr auf X:464 Y:236
21:47 bomber34: dann is das n bisschen wie so ein Karo Tornado
21:47 bomber34: muss nich genau die Postion sein
21:49 Irreversible: k
21:49 Irreversible: alles fixed
21:49 Irreversible: @@@@XD
21:49 bomber34: ?
21:49 Irreversible: ka
21:49 Irreversible: finds voll gut
21:49 Irreversible: mehr pls
21:49 Irreversible: xDD
21:49 bomber34: 00:14:303 - hier is wieder dasselbe. Ne Note fehlt
21:49 Irreversible: das hab ich mit dem anderen gefixed
21:50 Irreversible: LOL xDDD
21:50 Irreversible: ehm ich muss kurz duschen gehen D:
21:50 Irreversible: kannst schreiben einfach, ich reply dann nachher
21:50 bomber34: LOL DU DENKST JA MIT DAS IS KONTRAPRODUKTIN IN PUNKTO ZEITVERSCHWENDUNG
21:55 bomber34: 00:19:232 (4) - Der Slider spielt sich sowohl von (3,4) als auch (4,1) nich ganz so gut. Bei (3,4) ist es ein wenig der Flow aber haupstächlich das Design.
21:56 bomber34: Ich würde einfach (4) Ctrl + h setzen und auf auf X: 236 Y: 88. Also so wie er auch im Moment startet
21:56 bomber34: (4,1) spielt sich komisch aufgrund der Lücke zu (1)
21:56 bomber34: ein Instrument is nicht wirklich da um eine Note zu rechtfertigen. Aber die Stimme zusammen mit Slider
21:57 bomber34: daher hättest du 2 möglichkeiten: 1) einen weiteren repeater oder 2) den repeat entfernen und einen zweiten Slider einsetzen
21:59 bomber34: ich würde als Slider für (5) [Die neue note / Slider] einfach (4) c&p mit j und vllt so auf X: 344 Y: 264 setzen
21:59 bomber34: ein gleichförmiges Spacing von (5,1,2) spielt sich nich so gut leider
22:00 bomber34: 00:19:660 (5) - eig. könntest du den sliderkopf mit dem sliderende von 00:18:803 (3) - stacken ._. sieht gut aus und spielt sich gut imo
22:03 bomber34: haha 00:35:732 (8,9) - ich mag sowas aber hier is wieder ein FD Punkt von der Möchtegern DT community
22:04 bomber34: |
22:04 bomber34: ^ ich glaube ich trenne meine Modpunkte absofort so ... is übersichtlicher
22:05 bomber34: 00:37:874 - hier fehlt wieder ne Note. Der selbe Punkt wie am Anfang von wegen das es mit Stimme und so passt
22:06 bomber34: vieles was ich ausprobiert habe, funkt. nur leider nich so gut da der übergang zu 00:38:088 (1) - immer scheiße bleibt ...
22:07 bomber34: |
22:07 bomber34: 00:53:517 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - wieso sind die beiden Kombos nich mehr identisch >:
22:07 bomber34: das hat mir vor dem Update besser gefallen
22:08 bomber34: ich sehe ja, dass bei der 2. Kombo dadurch ein leichterer Übergang zu dem anschließenden Kombos gemacht wird ... aber trotzdem
22:08 bomber34: |
22:09 bomber34: 00:57:803 (4) - hier würde ich wieder den Sliderrepeat entfernen und (4) kopieren und spiegel (ctrl + h und j)
22:09 bomber34: und die entstehende (5) auf das Sliderende von (3) packen
22:09 bomber34: dann wäre die Lücke weg
22:09 bomber34: es sähe und spiele sich gut
22:10 bomber34: einziges Problem is der übergang von (5) zu der nächsten Kombo :/
22:10 bomber34: |
22:11 bomber34: 01:05:517 (1) - pack das mal lieber auf den Slideranfang von (4). Der Stack is eher langweilig und nich so nett find ich ...
22:11 bomber34: 01:04:660 (4) - mein ich
22:12 bomber34: |
22:12 bomber34: 01:06:589 - und 01:06:803 - füg mal 2 Noten hinzu
22:12 bomber34: 01:06:589 (5) - auf 01:05:946 (3) - Sliderkopf
22:13 bomber34: 01:06:803 (6) - auf 01:05:731 (2) -
22:13 bomber34: ist zwar nich ganz Perfekt
22:13 bomber34: aber sowas um den dreh
22:13 bomber34: |
22:14 bomber34: 01:09:803 (5,1) - Die Lücke wäre weniger unangenehm wenn die beiden stacked wären. Aber ka. wenn du sowas nich willst, müssten neue Noten wieder her
22:14 bomber34: aber eig. is das alles schön auf der Stimme aufgebaut
22:14 bomber34: |
22:15 bomber34: 01:13:660 (2) - Ctrl + g. und mit dem Rest der Kombo kannst du wieder ein schönes Karo aufbauen xD
22:15 Irreversible: back
22:16 bomber34: dann dienst du mir wieder als Trennung meiner einzelnen Punkte und nich der |
22:16 bomber34: 01:22:445 (4,5,6) - keine Ahnung wieso. Aber von all den stack triplets die ich hier sehe gefällt mir der hier nicht. Ich hätte da gerne etwas Bewegung drin
22:17 bomber34: 01:28:446 (1,2,3,4) - und 01:30:160 (1,2,3,4) - ich glaube das werden nich so viele Leute mögen ... die 2. Kombo is schon eher zu lesen als die 1. weil man drauf gefasst is
22:18 bomber34: ich würde 1 und 3 oder 2 und 4 leicht versetzen zur Seite. damit es vllt leichter zu lesen is
22:18 bomber34: |
22:18 bomber34: 01:29:732 - neue Note, selbe Position wie 01:28:875 (3) -
22:19 bomber34: obwohl ... irgendwie fehlt auch auf 01:29:303 - ne Note
22:20 bomber34: aber die 3 sind ja wohl geplant 1/1
22:20 bomber34: ka ...
22:20 bomber34: |
22:20 bomber34: 01:44:089 - Downbeats auslassen is böse ...
22:21 bomber34: obwohl ... wieder KA D:
22:21 bomber34: >w<
22:22 bomber34: ich meine es passt zur Stimme
22:22 bomber34: |
22:23 bomber34: 01:46:446 (4,5) - mir gefällt der Flow nich so
22:23 bomber34: solltest (5) wahrscheinlich im selben abstand wie der rest der kombo lassen und so setzen das (1,4,5) eine Linie bilden
22:25 bomber34: |
22:25 bomber34: 01:52:232 (6,1) - der jump is vllt etwas zu stark
22:25 bomber34: das was dominiert und zum Jump einlädt is eher die Stimme, welche erst bei (1) beginnt
22:26 bomber34: |
22:26 bomber34: 01:53:089 (3) - statt Note lieber einen 1/2 Slider
22:26 bomber34: passt zur Stimme und füllt die Lücke
22:27 bomber34: |
22:27 bomber34: 01:58:232 - neue Note und stack mit 01:58:660 (1) -
22:27 bomber34: man könnte eig. mehr zur Lücke sagen aber die geht eig. klar.
22:27 bomber34: Allerdings is der beat von 01:58:232 - schon sehr gut hörbar
22:28 bomber34: |
22:28 bomber34: Das war es dann
22:28 Irreversible: hab alles fixed
22:28 Irreversible: ausser etwas
22:28 Irreversible: lol XX
22:28 Irreversible: XD
22:28 Irreversible: ka aber nach deinen mods find ich immer alles viel besser
22:29 bomber34: ka. ich versuch immer so zu modden, dass ich versuche den stil des mappers bei zu behalten oder zumindest seine Sicht nicht zerstöre sondern höchstens drüberpinsel
22:31 Irreversible: keine ahnung aber
22:31 Irreversible: iwie
22:31 Irreversible: bist du
22:31 Irreversible: einer von dem ich meist alles appl
22:31 Irreversible: y
22:31 Irreversible: sogar ohne grund, es ist einfach gut lol
22:32 Irreversible: danke vielmals ><
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