rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

M4M:

[Personnal Opinion]

• "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D:
  About "Insane" i don't really like playing it because of the sudden jumps. A lot in this diff you're nearly motionless and right after you have a huge jump then after some notes you have to stop. It's really weird when playing it and i think you should make the jump less far. For the jump 2x take 1.7/1.8x and for the jump 3x (at the end of the map) go to 2.3/2.4x for example.sry, that's just like that. maybe it's difficult to fc or combo, even pass for noob players. but as a matter of fact, i just make them like this. YES, yes this a jumpy map with insane diff. but i'll consider ur advice seriously,too. D:
  About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
  And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D:
  Moreover, good map + song i like + You draw this yourself!!!!!! Wow. = Star ^^thank you very much. painting's just my hobby, and i drawed the whole sb pics which is still wip. Wait and see! XD
  It's so good i've hardly find anything. Most of what i saiy is just suggestion but nothing really important (except for the spinner)I'll read ur mod very seriously for ur good suggestiion :3

[General]

1. You need a spinner for nearly all your diff!For example you can put one from 00:29:729 to 00:32:337. actually with my own feeling, the real opinion of mine is that I won't add any spinner in this map in any diff... but consider to the ranking list of normal and hard diff have so many closed scores just deviced by bonus getting from spinners, i'll consider to add each one spinner in normal and hard diff. thx for your kind suggestion anyway :3
2. You have updated your beatmap after i've done some of my mod some maybe some things aren't good.lol, u know what? i received an other modder's m4m at moment i remapping my map after received from yours. That means if i complete my remapping from your m4m and update, the modder send m4m after u didn't mod the fresh map as well~ how u gays requote so fast? i even don't have enough time to update :3

[Normal]

1. 00:15:381 (1) - I think a finish is a little too much and a whistle is enough here. fixed
2. 00:22:337 (4,5,1) - It's one of these "turn around". But you just have to use CTRL+G on the big slider and it's way better to play it imo. good!! fixed
3. 00:29:729 (1) - Maybe a spinner here? nope, this diff already has a spinner and i've said something about spinner in this map before. sry. reject D:
4. 00:33:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This combo is way too long for a Normal. Maybe NC on the 4.fixed
5. 00:38:424 (8,1,2) - I think that this plays better:
   
   In this case you keep moving your cursor at the same speed without havong to stop on the 8.gooood! fixed
6. 00:42:337 (5) - NC?fixed
7. 00:43:642 (8,1,2) - Same as 00:38:424 (8,1,2) and this time the shape is the same. You just have to use some CTRL+G and change the order of the sliders.fixed and change some pattern
8. 00:49:294 (1) - Too high, it touches the accuracy and the life bar.fixed
9. 00:51:903 (1) - Too short imo. Use a slider here instead of one at 00:29:729 (1) where the spinner fits better. this spinner has more than 2 secs. idk... if it's too short for noob players, but i think it's just enough, and i won't add another spinner except this. sry, reject D:
10. 01:02:772 (7) - The long blanck after feels awkward. Maybe put a 1 beat long slider instead of a note. ok, fixed
11. 01:04:077 (1,2,1) - ....Make a triangle instead of this "turn around" good suggestion! fixed
12. 01:08:859 (6) - Another long blanck. Same suggestion as before.fixed
13. 01:14:077 (5) - ^fixed
14. 01:24:946 (1,2,1) - Guess....lol
15. 01:25:816 (1,3) - Little overlapping. Maybe you could avoid it. maybe no problem indeed :3
16. 01:37:990 (3) - NCok
17. 01:36:251 (2,3,4) - ....???
18. 01:44:511 (6) - CTRL+G feels better when playing.fixed and changed some pattern
19. 01:48:424 (4) - NC (combo way too long)fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:02:990 (2,3) - Imo it would be better if you would swap them. (and then turn 00:04:294 (4,5,6) as well) good suggestion! fixed
2. 00:04:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ u really excellent modder D:
3. 00:18:424 (2,3) - With the same logic swap them then 00:19:294 (4,6) then 00:20:598 (1,2). ok... thou that makes some of the jumps between them smaller... but ok :3
4. 00:24:511 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Stop/Jump 2x/Stop/Jump 2x etc... Feels really strange when playing.i've changed this part D:
5. 00:29:729 (8) - I remind you that you need a spinner in this diff. reject as I said before, but i'll try to add a spinner somewhere
6. 01:01:033 (5,6) - I don't know if it's done on purpose but the overlapping doesn't seems really good. Maybe avoid it (and do the same in all the copy paste of these there are in your map) I don't think these would cause a serious problem. D:
7. 01:23:642 (8,9) - Why the note on the end of the slider where there isn't one for 01:22:338 (6,7) and 01:21:034 (4,5)? that's the middle point of kiai time with special song's rhythm, so i made a special pattern, too D:
8. 01:41:468 (1) - CTRL+G?fixed
9. 01:51:903 (1) - ^fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:26:251 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here the jump are just 1.5x? So why are they 2x on the Hard diff? coz slider speed in hard diff is 0.5x and it's 1.0x in insane. actually they are the same at last D:
2. 00:30:164 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Really weird to play. hmm... it's just a pattern D:
3. 00:46:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You follow the violin, right? So you should use . Like you did at 00:49:294 (1,2,3,4).wow, good, i'll fix this :3
4. 01:07:990 (6,7,8) - These anti-jump feels really awkward! Especially in the kiai time with all these jumps. These sliders should be way further from each other. you are right, fixed :3
5. 01:26:685 (5,6) - CTRL+G plays better imo. nope, that'll be worse in jump, reject D:
6. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3
7. 01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump x3.31 and in a quiet moment. Seriously, i know it's insane but you don't need that huge jumps... Really... you're right, the song's already finish its main part. i should make smaller jumps, thx for suggestion. :3
8. 01:53:207 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - Just to say that i really like this part and maybe you should do something like this too in the "Hard" and "HW" diff. hmm, ok, i'll consider that, and i'm glad there's pattern u really like. :3

[HW]

1. 00:16:685 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Compare what you use in your "Insane" diff and in your "HW" diff and guess what i think. ^^
   Insane:
   HW: lol, i made them different on purpose. your idea is great, really, but i prefer not to fix them. sry, reject :3
2. 00:40:164 (1) - ~You need a spinner~ (Besides this slider is really ugly)sry for the ugly slider, i've change its shape, and hope it can be better. D: As for the spinner... nope and i've told u why before :3

My final opinion?
You Really like triangles ^^ Me too! lololol, another reason is that this is a 3/4 clap song. i just set notes like triangle by my feeling XD
And you need to rank this, seriously...... i'll try my best to get this map ranked

InC0nceNtrateD wrote:

My Modsry for requesting late, u just sent your mod after rezoons in a short time, and i haven't enough time to remap a fresh one for u. So there'll maybe some points in your suggestion already fixed, thank u for your modding anyway thou :3
Normal

GREAT DIFF! This looks much, but infact these are just three or four things you COULD change.

00:10:164 (4) - I'd Flip it Vertically, leads better to next note imo. great idea, fixed :3
00:12:772 (1) - How about this positioning: great idea again! fixed D:

Click Me

00:25:816 - Add a Note here maybe. hmm...ok~ :3
00:27:555 - ^ nope
00:28:859 - ^ ^
00:41:903 - ^ I see you did this on purpose, but I think heres missing some Constance in the map. hmmmmm, maybe that's not one question. D:
00:44:946 (2,3) - I suggest the 2 leading towards the 3. i've changed this part :3
00:47:555 (2,3) - ^ If it is your special pattern, ignore this. ^, lol
00:54:077 - DEM HITSOUNDS *-*! aha...alright then. :3
00:57:990 - Again I am missing a couple of Notes, but it sounds great anyway, just keep it if u want! It is really only an alternativ way, but I think it is Kiai, the strongest part of the song, and this should be mapped completely. hmmmmmmmmmmm, after a long time consideration, i decide to make some of them reverse and fill some of the blank clap in kiai time, maybe it'll give a better impression. :3
00:58:859 - ^
01:03:207 - ^
I think some reversed sliders would be cool.
01:08:424 - ^
01:09:729 - ^
01:18:859 - ^
01:19:729 - ^
I think you understand what I mean, I'll go on with other things and let these beside.


Hard

Perfect in my Eyes, so perfect, that I started my perfectionism mode:

00:33:207 (1) - The perfect position is x: 88 y: 55, I know this comment sucks xD but you can do this by placing a new circle at 00:32:881 - , if u are close to the slider's end, it automatically snaps there. actually this is a good comment, and very useful to snap notes under slider's end perfect, thx anyway. fixed :3
00:51:033 (4) - ^ with x:139 y is correctxD damn how did I even see this O_O fixed, damn how did u even see this XD
01:03:316 (9) - x:284 y: 250 I just want this to be even more perfect than it is ! Soooooooorrryy that's just the meaning of modding, don't be worried, fixed :3
01:24:511 (9) - x: 197 y: 316 Damn what am I doing here? modding, bro, fixed D:
01:30:598 (1,2,3) - I think the three should be farer away by DS. u'r right, and this is really a serious problem in ds, fixed D:
01:41:468 (1) - Correct x is 169. fixed thou


Insane

00:29:729 (3) - Whistle sounds godlike here.alright :3
00:42:772 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - I suggest to overlap 5,6,7 at least, Fits more to the song imo.no overlapping here i think D:
00:49:294 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapp them? nope...
00:51:903 (5,6) - Here I think it would really be better to overlapp, since the song is not that speedy. actually i don't want to overlap anything anywhere, coz i don't like their shape. and don't forget this is insane diff... however, u said the reason: "since the song is not that speedy", that's correct and acceptable suggestion, let's see what other modders said then. :3
01:34:946 (5,1) - Timing Space is 1/8? Dont space them. why?
01:45:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice Pattern!that's too far away from each other thou, i've made the distance smaller. D:
01:50:164 (3,4) - A space here? uh?
01:55:974 (1) - I suggest a Slider to 01:56:096 - With Whistle, optional a Green Line at 01:56:096 - With audio Change to 5%, but I think it sounds great with previous settings. Give it a try tried ur suggestion... However, the song's end there at 01:55:974 (1) - , the hit sound of slider's end is loud but unnecessary when there's no other sounds... and slider here would made a worse shape... so, reject D:


HW"

Click For A Journey

00:23:207 (1,2,3,1,2) - If you have things like the 1,2 (Both of them) I would not stack them, looks better without stacking.
Thats all alright, fixed :3
Did not say it will be a long Journey maybe it is... i'll try my best thou :3

All in all great work so far, could not find more, I overlooked the map about 10 times .-. I am sorry Very nice song btw, good luck to get ranked!
maybe have got lots of work to do with this map, thx for ur modding!

1. 00:04:946 (4) - add nc on this slider
2. 00:10:164 (4) - ^
3. 00:26:685 (4) - ^
4. 00:32:772 (2,1) - switch nc
5. 00:40:598 (3) - this slider would look and plays better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/3dLaH.jpg
6. 00:51:468 (4) - this note would look better if you move it to x:340 y:188
7. 00:57:120 (4) - add nc here
8. 01:01:033 (4) - ^
9. 01:07:555 (5) - ^
10. 01:12:772 (5) - ^
11. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
12. 01:21:903 (4) - ^
13. 01:33:642 (5) - ^

1. 00:02:990 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 3 grids down and 1 grid to the right
2. 00:08:207 (3) - move this slider to x:256 y:268, so the end can be stucked under 00:06:251 (3,6) - o.o
3. 00:08:859 (5) - add nc here
4. 00:09:729 (4) - this note will be more fun and playable if you move it to x:188 y:292
5. 00:11:468 (5) - add nc here
6. 00:17:990 (1) - move this note one grid up so it'll be lined with the other note
7. 01:33:642 (7) - add nc here

Hollow Wings wrote:

[Personnal Opinion]

1. "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D: I would like to precise that i played these diff with DT so maybe it's not a big problem at a normal speed but it's what i felt when playing with DT
   
2. About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
   And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D: Personally i think that bright combo goes with dark background and bright background with dark combos and since your background is really bright that's why i said that. But you can keep the combo like this. ^^

[Insane]

1. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3 Well, in fact i got an S at this diff at the first try so, it's not about the difficulty but really about the feeling.

thank you very much for your good modding, your mod just amazed me! XD Well, i don't do that kind of mod often. It's really because i've seen that you made a really good map, that i really like the song and you did a M4M. But my mod are always less complete than this

Zweib wrote:

wpcap神图来支持下orz

其实看了下thread感觉有点出乎意料说的都很有道理的不是么

我觉得这个碉堡了a妈蛋mapping果然也是天赋游戏;w;我只是个新人mapper而已。。。

顺便大触手（各种意义上的）赐我一发mutual吧 噗，，，你是哪儿冒出来看到我的orz

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Hi, Mod4mod from my queue ~ :3


Normal:

1. 00:04:946 (4) - add nc on this sliderfixed
2. 00:10:164 (4) - ^fixed
3. 00:26:685 (4) - ^fixed
4. 00:32:772 (2,1) - switch ncfixed
5. 00:40:598 (3) - this slider would look and plays better if you do it like this http://puu.sh/3dLaH.jpg good suggestion, fixed
6. 00:51:468 (4) - this note would look better if you move it to x:340 y:188 fixed, and fixed some ds problem
7. 00:57:120 (4) - add nc here all nc problem after are fixed, some hitsound problem as well :3
8. 01:01:033 (4) - ^
9. 01:07:555 (5) - ^
10. 01:12:772 (5) - ^
11. 01:17:989 (5) - ^
12. 01:21:903 (4) - ^
13. 01:33:642 (5) - ^

Hard:

1. 00:02:990 (2) - move the 2nd slider point 3 grids down and 1 grid to the right lol, why u can apply this suggestion? i'm curious... fixed anyway D:
2. 00:08:207 (3) - move this slider to x:256 y:268, so the end can be stucked under 00:06:251 (3,6) - o.o thou they're not stack at that grid, i'll fixed this pattern well, thx :3
3. 00:08:859 (5) - add nc here hmm, nope, it's just fine D:
4. 00:09:729 (4) - this note will be more fun and playable if you move it to x:188 y:292 hmm, nope, i just want to make a shape that this note is fit to the bent of 00:10:164 (1) - , reject D:
5. 00:11:468 (5) - add nc here nope...
6. 00:17:990 (1) - move this note one grid up so it'll be lined with the other note lol, fixed
7. 01:33:642 (7) - add nc here fixed

Insane:
good insane o.o thx :3



That's all i found.... Good luck with your map :3 thx for ur modding

Setsurei wrote:

[General]
source > Touhou should be with capital Tlol, fixed

some suggestions

[Normal]
01:23:642 (6) - change to slider that ends here 01:24:511 - and add finish on tail and clap on both head and tail

SPOILER

good idea, fixed
01:24:946 (1,2) - fix this if you change ^^

[Hard]
01:01:033 (5,6) - ugly, change to this]sry for this bad pattern, i've fixed them into an other style, not urs thou. thx anyway. fixed things after as well D:

SPOILER

01:02:337 (7,8) - ^

SPOILER

01:21:903 (5,6) - ^
01:23:207 (7,8) - ^

Normal and Hard was modded before you update this and I was too lazy to mod them (because the placements are perfect, I can't find any)
anyway, I've updated the Insane and HW" that's all right, ur suggestions were just not be mentioned by other modders :3

[Insane]
01:00:816 (5) - don't put this too far from 01:00:164 (4) - not suit with the music x 448 y 228 hmm...alright, i'll take ur advice, even make this jump smaller D:
01:02:120 (9) - ^ x 256 y 308 nope, this is just fine D:
01:23:859 (4) - stack to 01:23:642 (3) - I think it's better lol, nope, those are just jumping pattern here. worse if stack some where, sry D:

[HW'']
these placements are on the same pattern, too far the flow isn't good lol, nope, they're just like that. Maybe to far to u, but i think that jump feel good to most pro players, me either. btw, they're just jumpings, not flow. I know this is difficult for noob players, this is a harder diff than insane thou. all i want to do is make these jumps more acceptable and players will feel good with these jumping patterns. thx for ur suggestion anyway. :3
00:54:729 (2) - x 176 y 96
00:57:337 (2) - x 128 y 112
00:59:946 (4) - x 160 y 160
01:02:555 (2) - x 304 y 16
01:05:164 (2) - x 40 y 256
01:15:598 (2) - x 184 y 168
01:18:207 (2) - x 200 y 336
01:20:816 (4) - x 160 y 352
01:23:424 (2) - x 456 y 272
01:26:033 (2) - x 136 y 304

I think that's all

I love the song, good luck for ranked i'm glad u like the song, and thx a lot for ur modding :3

rezoons wrote:

Just some precision about my mod:

Hollow Wings wrote:

[Personnal Opinion]

1. "Normal" and "Hard" are very good. The only problem i really have with thses diff is when you have to suddendly turn back like 01:04:077 (1,2,1) in your "Normal" diff. You're map has a very good fluidity and when i play your map it's like following a smooth curve and so it seems weird to play these sudden "turn auround".maybe that's a serious problem in normal and hard diff. actually i rarely play these diff, but insane or extra. so i'll consider your suggestion seriously D: I would like to precise that i played these diff with DT so maybe it's not a big problem at a normal speed but it's what i felt when playing with DTlol, i think these patterns won't be any problems to the players playing normal and hard diffs with dt. but anyway, rules are rules, i'll pay more attention to these things, thx a lot. :3
   
2. About "HM" well it's much better because the jump aren't more difficult than the "Insane" diff but seems easier since your map has a fast rythm. And i like it even if it's kinda awkward to have a fast map for a quiet song. But you're not the only to do it.
   And the combo color are kinda hard to read. Maybe make them a litlle bit darker. is that so? may a darker combo color be a good choice? as a player i must say that maybe the bright ones' better. hmm, let's see if an other modder mentioned this. D: Personally i think that bright combo goes with dark background and bright background with dark combos and since your background is really bright that's why i said that. But you can keep the combo like this. ^^hmm, that's really an useful suggestion to me, i'll consider seriously :3

[Insane]

1. 01:33:641 (1,2,3) - Jump x3 WTF. take it easy, just a difficult jump pattern, i don't think its an impossible one for pro players who can maybe fc this map or even with dt mode :3 Well, in fact i got an S at this diff at the first try so, it's not about the difficulty but really about the feeling.hmm... actually i set these three notes by feeling, too... maybe we just different style at this part... let's see if other modders mentioned this jump pattern XD

thank you very much for your good modding, your mod just amazed me! XD Well, i don't do that kind of mod often. It's really because i've seen that you made a really good map, that i really like the song and you did a M4M. But my mod are always less complete than this Is that so? then that's my honor XD

Hollow Wings wrote:

Zweib wrote:

wpcap神图来支持下orz

其实看了下thread感觉有点出乎意料说的都很有道理的不是么

我觉得这个碉堡了a妈蛋mapping果然也是天赋游戏;w;我只是个新人mapper而已。。。

顺便大触手（各种意义上的）赐我一发mutual吧 噗，，，你是哪儿冒出来看到我的orz

ts8zs wrote:

约好的交网费wwwwww
背景质量提高了……图的质量也提高了那就好orz
HW
AR这么高用往返梗没问题么……比如
00:54:946 (3) - 这个在384,160是不是会舒服一点……？跳大了ar才需要高，这个图ar8老实说我读起来也有点累，本来我想bpm138用ar9是不是有点太高了，但经过很多人试玩后发现不然。正因为跳大，bpm又低，所以才需要高ar，为此我hp和od都设置得很低。至于这个跳，你那样摆虽然也不错，不过我还是倾向于原状
01:32:337 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里应该朝上舒服一点故意那么摆的，为了一个折返跳
IS
00:36:685 (1) - Ctrl+Gnope
00:37:120 (2,3,4) - 分别Ctrl+Gnope
00:59:294 (1,2,3) - 为什么突然顺时针了啊……突然么？
01:01:033 (6) - Ctrl+Gnope
01:01:685 (7,8,9,10) - Ctrl+H虽然看上去不错，但是和01:00:164 (4,5) - 感觉差距太大了，所以依旧reject
01:31:033 (1) - Ctrl+Gnope
HD
00:29:729 (5) - 这个东西想办法去掉就perfect了嗯没拿掉，改了下形状
NM
这是EZ吧！！！居然说这是easy？那我把cs改小一号
01:08:859 (3) - 第二个点128,80第三个152,120fixed
01:21:033 (3) - 诶……改一下吧……第二个点和第三个点适当改改后面都不用动这个怎么改。。。
01:23:642 (4) - 最好别这么做……如果你把这个名改成EZ？NM也不推荐其实……fixed
01:54:511 - 最后改成转盘怎么样nope
我来补个normal吧= =b第一张图不想要GD呢。。。以后吧

Sieg wrote:

Hallo

General:
BG quality is really poor try to find better one all right then

Normal:
OD+1fixed
00:54:077 (1) - NC here make no differences... but fixed
01:28:424 (1) - maybe try http://puu.sh/3fprn.jpg for better flowhmm... ok, fixed
01:33:642 (1,2,3) - this also not a great flow especially for normal, maybe http://puu.sh/3fpsR.jpg alright
01:55:486 (2) - add finish on slider's end nope

Hard:
OD+1 fixed
00:27:120 (1,2) - that fells strange, not really follows anything in music and suitable for overall style of your hard actually they follow the violin, and they are just patterns
01:10:816 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:12:120 (7,8) - ^^
01:31:685 (4,5) - and here too^
00:54:511 (1) - better to place NC on 00:54:946 (2) - instead of 1 nope
01:15:381 (1) - ^ ^
01:54:998 (4) - finish like on normal ^

Insane:
00:40:164 (1) - this SV changes seems for me not related too music at all :\ that notice for hard diff too but it's more noticeably on insane why u get notice like that D:
01:12:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - you made a good insane on calm music with good jumps and this stream is really overdone :\ same goes for repeat slider the only stream in this diff, just a pattern, take it easy
01:34:077 (3,4,5) - ^
01:55:974 (1) - finish here nope

well, I like this 3 diffs didn't like the last one? :3
oh and... good hitsounds :3 lol, maybe it is
Good Luck! thx for modding

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites
2. Two more combo-colors will be better.
3. It should be th10.5 in tags, I guess
4. I don't see the need of Tenshi Hinanawi in tags because it's just the title screen theme (btw add Tasofro to tags, because Twilight Frontier)

• 
  Uh.. you could rename it Lunatic, would fit better

1. 00:44:077 (1) - Remove this new combo

1. 00:54:946 (2) - Bad shape, make slider more symmetrical
2. 00:56:251 (6) - ^
3. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
4. 01:01:033 (6) - ^
   You should rework on sliders' shape, they seems they are done in a fast and unaccurate way

1. 01:19:077 (7) - Move a little on the right

• 
  CS-1

Leader wrote:

Hello, M4M from my Modding Queue

[General]

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites hmm... idk that before, and i think it'll be a diffcult work to change the romanised title... can u tell me how to change it?
2. Two more combo-colors will be better. hmm... i do this map only two combo color on purpose, and i don't think it troubled. D:
3. It should be th10.5 in tags, I guess fixed
4. I don't see the need of Tenshi Hinanawi in tags because it's just the title screen theme (btw add Tasofro to tags, because Twilight Frontier) u r right, all fixed

[HW]

• 
  Uh.. you could rename it Lunatic, would fit better lol, i just want make some of the diff's name special...

1. 00:44:077 (1) - Remove this new combo fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:54:946 (2) - Bad shape, make slider more symmetrical
2. 00:56:251 (6) - ^
3. 01:00:164 (4) - ^
4. 01:01:033 (6) - ^
   You should rework on sliders' shape, they seems they are done in a fast and unaccurate way fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:19:077 (7) - Move a little on the right fixed

[Normal]

• 
  CS-1 seems like a easy diff? lol

Very good beatmap, you mapped a particular (and quite boring) song in a way it makes the map enjoyable. It still needs some work but I want to see it ranked, so good luck :3 thx for ur modding! i'll try my best to get it ranked. :3

Hollow Wings wrote:

Leader wrote:

[General]

1. Romanised title is: Sky of Scarlet Perception according to most famous Touhou websites hmm... idk that before, and i think it'll be a diffcult work to change the romanised title... can u tell me how to change it?

It's simple

Leader wrote:

It's simple

Armin wrote:

....but it's not impossible
Try with uploading the map after you changed the title WITHOUT saving it.

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) -
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好
6. 01:31:685 (2) -
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack
   Good stuff

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D:

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding

Hollow Wings wrote:

Chloe wrote:

hi there, as your pm request~

And just some suggestions, not necessary. : )

[Hard]

1. 01:05:164 (4) - add 这难度是怎么回事 全是1/1 到底是normal还是hard.... 还是多塞点拍子吧 以现在这状态难以MOD 这里要改什么。。。顺便，这个图移动不算小吧，多塞拍子也感觉有点多余。。。有些梗normal也不能有的吧，我再观望一下

[Insane]

1. 00:47:555 (3) - ctrl g 00:47:990 (4) - 这个也换一下位置 reject，这就是个梗
2. 00:53:098 (7) - add, stack with 00:53:207 (8) - 蓝线开打大丈夫？和8 stack因为有人说看不见8所以特意分开了，不过更多人建议stack，所以还是叠起来吧
3. 01:00:816 (5) - x 342 y 373 我也觉得这么摆比较好，奈何前面有人叫我改近一点。。。既然你这么说了那我就改回来
4. 01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？ 啊 这个http://puu.sh/3gWQD.png
5. 01:15:381 (3) - 我觉得这边开始用3/4的滑条比较好 前面又有人说3/4不好。。。orz，我琢磨了一下这里相比3/4还是用1/2比较好，所以还是这样吧
6. 01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？ 这边我想了下应该是建议取消滑条后面的那个NOTE 然后滑条移到后面的白线 红线加个单点
7. 01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D: 对 我的意思是这里换成一根滑条

[HW``]

1. 00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz 这边.. 我想不起来了
2. 00:38:207 (8) - 移开别stack fixed
   Good stuff

GL thx for modding

Chloe wrote:

[*]01:10:164 (3) - HW2 嗯？ 啊 这个http://puu.sh/3gWQD.png 唔，不太想要这么下节奏呢，保留意见
[*]01:31:685 (2) - 嗯？？ 这边我想了下应该是建议取消滑条后面的那个NOTE 然后滑条移到后面的白线 红线加个单点 滑条接滑条是个梗，reject
[*]01:37:337 (5,6) - 换个滑条 纳尼？？5,6是note吧？D: 对 我的意思是这里换成一根滑条 这个感觉没太大必要，如果这里改了的话01:47:771 (4,5) - 也要改，当时搞成单点貌似是为了好看(?),这个保留意见


[*]00:06:903 (7) - HW1 咦？老实说真心不懂orz 这边.. 我想不起来了 orzzz

暂时就先这样吧 好的多谢

Lucy_Heartfilia wrote:

Normal
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题

Hard
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题
01:09:729 (1) to (3) - 4星半的，三圈跳的距离还是近点比较好 因为感觉作为hard来说本来就很简单了，跳大一点应该没什么

Insane
扫描
没什么UNRANKABLE问题
后期如果RANK不了又没什么实质性的问题，但又想把精力投在歌上的话，INSANE蛮多滑条可以提升
00:54:077 (1) - 既然覆盖了就全覆盖-，- 你肯定没update。。。
01:27:120 (7) - 滑条要尽量避免尖角的出现，除非你是刻意对称的 fixed
01:31:033 (1),(2) - 这个我觉得肯定要改的 fixed

HW''
精细MOD

美观：
因为 138BPM的关系，加上滑条很短，都是单小直条，所以无明显问题
00:28:424 (4) - 因为同点有三个圈，所以STACK把(5)往左边移了点，可以调整STACK但是不建议（可能影响其他地方，所以滑条(5)可以另外设置位置 老实说没看懂orz
01:08:859 (5) to (9) - 这5个圈各自覆盖的距离不一样，不应该吧-，- fixed D:

Hitsound：
没神马问题

Combol：
00:28:424 (4) - 开始，和前面那段00:23:207开始一样的音乐为什么，前面都NEW了，这里却一口气“黄”下去了？ fixed D:
00:51:033 (5) - NEW COMBOL fixed
01:14:837 (15) - 你以为你缩在一起，别人就看不出这里超过15COMBOL了吗？^ ^ fixed D:

距离，节奏：
00:46:251 (1) to (3) - 别这样，大哥。我建议把(1)和前面(4)组成滚轮，2,3跳 好想法，多谢，fixed
00:48:859 (1) to (3) - 同上 ^

29SP应该也没什么UNRANKABLE的问题了，那么接下来大多是RP了。以及自己对RANK这件事情的理解和坚持了。大爱东方 抓紧搞sb然后就看造化了orz

祝早日RANK thx for modding

LKs wrote:

liuming

xChippy wrote:

Hihi~ M4M from my queue >w<

General
All fine~
Really nice map you have here thank u :3

Normal
I'll just be really nazi here lol =w= it's already very good imo >w< lolol
01:42:772 (2) - 179|108 fixed
01:45:816 (1) - 256|248fixed
01:50:598 (5) - 378|80fixed
01:53:642 (3) - Maybe Align this with (1) end to make the triangle prettier :3? (You'll have to fix the spacing after this =w=) ok~ fixed

Hard
00:29:511 (4) - Looks better if you place it at 380|107 good, fixed
00:51:903 (8) - There should be another repeat imo. hmm... i know this is a 3/4 repeat part in main song's violin... i just make it a slider easier for catching rhythm... ok, I'll fix it :3
01:15:381 (1) - Remove this NC fits the music better imo hmm... actually it's an other modder suggest me nc here, but now i want to take urs. fixed and remove 00:54:511 (3) - 's nc as well :3

Insane
OD +1fixed
00:34:946 (1) - NC fixed
01:01:033 (6) - Don't really like how this looks, try to make them symm lol, sry idk what is "symm", u mean "symmetry"? hmm... that's just like that, actually i like slider's shape like this... maybe it's not the perfect fit here thou... let's see what other modders say... D:
01:34:077 (3) - Lower distance a little? its 9.00 here coz slider speed change to 0.5x here, actually it's 3.0x in distance just same to 01:33:641 (1,2) - . So don't worry about it, it's just a big jumping pattern. :3
01:37:990 (1) - Looks better this way imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/824740 oh no... look at 01:37:990 (1,2,3) - , u will see. btw, u really should redowload my map and take a look at my storyboard. :3

That's all for me >w<
Great map :3
(╯°□°)╯︵
Good Luck ^^

Nymph wrote:

第二个红线应该是114548

别的懒得说 改完走起


This map is so amazing that I can't say too much about it, the storyboard, hitsounds and stuff are just awesome that I can hardly know this is a 1st map by a new mapper. However, there seems to be some parts, we can call it, overmap. But it did feel nice during playing, and the hitsounds make them didn't feel awkward at all. So, let's give it a try.

bubbled.

DarkDunskin wrote:

I should have returned earlier to map a Taiko for this map dangit :/

Scorpiour wrote:

irc mod log

the map is pretty well made and impressive sb work.

the only issue left now is the timing that still need to confirm, don't worry :>

SPOILER

02:38 Scorpiour: 1
02:39 Hollow Wings: ok了~
02:40 Scorpiour: 别急
02:40 Scorpiour: 着急睡觉去么。。？
02:40 Hollow Wings: 不着急
02:40 Hollow Wings: 慢慢来吧~
02:40 Scorpiour: Audio Lead-in放回到0，感觉前面有点长了
02:41 Scorpiour: 全diff的
02:42 Hollow Wings: 网实在太破
02:42 Hollow Wings: 我可能会不时掉一下线。。。所以可能有正好没看到你说的话的情况出现，见谅一下哦QVQ
02:42 Scorpiour: Audio Lead-in放回到0，感觉前面有点长了<--有收到?
02:42 Scorpiour: 看到的就给我回一句
02:42 Hollow Wings: 没收到，我现在去改
02:42 Hollow Wings: 好
02:45 Scorpiour: 00:29:511 - 这里我倾向于加一个note，放在398:134
02:45 Scorpiour: 看下效果
02:47 Hollow Wings: 唔，那样的话干脆连着00:29:729 (4) - 一起甩出去比较好吧？
02:47 Hollow Wings: 感觉也顺手一点？
02:47 Scorpiour: 也可以
02:47 Hollow Wings: 好的
02:47 Scorpiour: 向右上拉出去
02:47 Hollow Wings: 嗯
02:48 Scorpiour: 00:40:164 (1) - 直觉上停在白线上会更舒服一点……吗估计弄起来会比较麻烦所以你自己决定把只是个小建议:>
02:49 Hollow Wings: 这个地方很多人都跟我说过，我也改了很多次。。。不过我觉得现在这样是最好的节奏了
02:50 Scorpiour: ok
02:50 Hollow Wings: 好了吗，别的diff不需要看吗
02:51 Scorpiour: 还没完
02:51 Scorpiour: 别急。。。
02:51 Scorpiour: 01:05:381 (3) - 这里
02:51 Scorpiour: 如果是我的话我会把这个放在(7)的那里
02:51 Scorpiour: 284:176
02:52 Hollow Wings: 唔，这个折返的梗整个高潮都有。。。
02:52 Hollow Wings: 我想统一都是这个样子的0.0
02:53 Scorpiour: 我明白，只是建议试下，把后面7放到300:64，把这个放到原先7的位置，如果你自己觉得舒服就改一下，不喜欢跳过即可
02:57 Hollow Wings: 又掉了QVQ
02:57 Hollow Wings: 关于01:05:381 (3) - 那里还有7
02:57 Scorpiour: 恩？
02:57 Hollow Wings: 我觉得还是不改吧
02:57 Hollow Wings: 因为这个梗后面接滑条都不是大跳
02:57 Scorpiour: 这没所谓啦纯属建议自己拿捏
02:57 Hollow Wings: 想统一一下
02:57 Hollow Wings: 好的~
02:57 Hollow Wings: 跟你说一下
02:58 Scorpiour: 恩
02:58 Scorpiour: 必须要改的东西你不想改我也会逼你弄的www
02:58 Hollow Wings: wwww
02:58 Scorpiour: Insane
02:59 Scorpiour: 00:57:772 (3) - 这个滑条“听起来不舒服”，尾巴压在了鼓点重音上而略过了00:58:207 - 的音
02:59 Hollow Wings: insane，嗯
02:59 Scorpiour: 如果可能的话我会期待这样的节奏，稍等截图
02:59 Hollow Wings: 好，等你截图
02:59 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/3lDMn.jpg
03:00 Scorpiour: (3)缩短到红线，然后从长白线拉一个滑条出来
03:00 Hollow Wings: 嗯，我看一下
03:00 Scorpiour: 可以考虑的排列：
03:00 Scorpiour: http://puu.sh/3lDO8.jpg
03:01 Hollow Wings: 我明白了，确实感觉不错
03:01 Scorpiour: 恩
03:01 Scorpiour: 如果改的话注意音效别丢了
03:02 Hollow Wings: 嗯嗯
03:02 Scorpiour: 01:02:772 (1) - 这里
03:02 Scorpiour: 把这个向后挪动1/2放到01:02:990 -
03:02 Scorpiour: 然后
03:02 Scorpiour: 01:02:772 - 加note叠到slider头，NC相应移动
03:03 Scorpiour: 音效在01:02:772 - 保留Finish+Clap,01:02:990 - 只留finish
03:03 Scorpiour: 试试看？
03:04 Scorpiour: 这种地方我个人会更倾向于使用切分音来让节奏的变化感多一些而不是使用1/1的slider
03:04 Hollow Wings: 嗷，如果这样改的话我想把滑条的形状变了，而且别让它和1叠在一起
03:04 Scorpiour: 这随意
03:05 Hollow Wings: 这样跳过去也算有个缓冲，直接stack感觉很奇怪
03:05 Hollow Wings: 嗯
03:05 Scorpiour: 重点是节奏，排列相对比较随意一些
03:05 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:05 Scorpiour: 01:05:381 (1,2,3) - 这里也类似，比较倾向于note->slider->note的切分音节奏，而不是slider->note->note
03:05 Scorpiour: 你自己可以试试看然后决定怎么弄
03:07 Hollow Wings: 哦哦
03:07 Hollow Wings: 那这边的改动会有点大呢
03:07 Scorpiour: 没事
03:07 Scorpiour: 所以说自己决定
03:08 Hollow Wings: 我把2拖到1前面去，位置也改一下吧
03:08 Scorpiour: 我认为这2个节奏可以比较明显的提升质量，不过没有到非改不可的程度
03:08 Scorpiour: 嗯
03:08 Hollow Wings: 嗯，跟你说一下怎么改
03:08 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:08 Scorpiour: 改好后给我发截图就可以
03:08 Scorpiour: 你改你的我看有问题会直接和你说
03:09 Hollow Wings: 好的
03:12 Scorpiour: Hard和Normal没什么问题
03:12 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3lEa9
03:13 Hollow Wings: 你看这样行吗
03:13 Hollow Wings: 好的~
03:13 Scorpiour: 应该可以
03:13 Scorpiour: 等下我还要confirm一下timing
03:13 Hollow Wings: 1是307,156
03:13 Hollow Wings: 嗯，我再改一下前面那里
03:17 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/3lEhm.jpg
03:17 Hollow Wings: 前面我改成了这样
03:17 Scorpiour: 恩……
03:17 Scorpiour: 有个问题现在
03:17 Scorpiour: timing好像有点不准…………
03:17 Hollow Wings: 是吗0.0
03:17 Scorpiour: 我自己初测-12....
03:17 Hollow Wings: 是整个timing吗
03:18 Scorpiour: 恩…………
03:18 Scorpiour: 别急…………
03:18 Hollow Wings: 唔，好，那我等你的结果
03:26 Scorpiour: 稍等下吧我需要找人确认
03:26 Hollow Wings: 好的QVQ
03:39 Scorpiour: 嗯…………你先更新一下吧

Scorpiour wrote:

confirmed, -12ms to first uninherited timing point, please fix that in All Diffs and ensure the snapping. Call me back when you finish all :>

edit : rebubbled~