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Haru - Natsukage (Instrumental)

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Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
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Jeffro
Thank you Yes for difficulty and good choice of BG+Combo Colors.

Thank you Larto for the revive :)

I love your difficulty. I'm curious how you will map it further there, I'm on a writers block too there.

Also put it in pending for now.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
:) DONE! Kinda long but the song is so nice that I couldn't stop mapping T_T

Add the soft-normal2 also! THANKS!

Also, I think you should change preview point to 03:34:504. And the spinner is really super nice but ._. doesn't really go with the song because it's touhou ;_:

Download: yes (2).rar
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
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Jeffro

Yes wrote:

:) DONE! Kinda long but the song is so nice that I couldn't stop mapping T_T

Add the soft-normal2 also! THANKS!

Also, I think you should change preview point to 03:34:504. And the spinner is really super nice but ._. doesn't really go with the song because it's touhou ;_:
Yeah I already deleted it :(
HakanaiUtopia
17 posts
Joined September 2009
HakanaiUtopia
If you want to be really precise, BPM is 99.97 :)
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
natsukage!!!
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

3kinnagi wrote:

natsukage!!!
<3 love that song. ty for the star ^^
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
This should still be in WIP.

Requirements:
  • » Must make at least 2 difficulties consisting of Normal & Hard.
Hard is not a normal. Please change the source to Clannad Air and take out Touhou from the tags in all difficulties.

Hard:
01:27:904 to 01:28:804 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
01:29:554 (3) - Too close to 2. The spacing between 2 and 3 is not the same as 1 and 2. Or the way around and 1 is too close to 2.
01:30:754 (6) - Same problem as above.
01:33:904 to 01:34:504 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
01:46:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It looks like you got lazy here. Please think of different patterns and map the little mini breaks in between.
01:55:804 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
02:17:404 (x) - Add note?
02:29:704 to 02:30:304 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.

I think the 20 second break is way too much.

02:51:304 to 02:52:204 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
02:54:004 to 02:54:604 - ^
02:56:104 to 02:56:704 (3) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
02:58:504 to 02:59:404 (7) - ^
03:03:154 (x) - Add note?
03:08:104 to 03:09:304 (12) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
03:11:104 to 03:12:004 (5) - ^
03:12:604 to 03:14:404 (4) - ^
03:17:704 to 03:18:904 (8) - ^
03:20:704 to 03:21:604 (5) - ^
03:22:504 (5,7,9) - You can add notes here. I think it sounds nice if you give them hitsounds.
03:27:304 to 03:29:104 (5) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
03:31:804 (x) - A 0.5 slider would work well here going up to 03:32:704 with a whiste at the end of it.
03:32:854 (x) - A note here with finish if you do the above.
03:34:204 (6) - You should end the map here.

Everything after the 6 above is just a copy and paste. Really no point in it + playing a slow song for more then 3 minutes is way too boring imo.

I expected a lot more from you Jeffro. It's the reason why I said you were ok to map it.

Yes:
This difficulty is too quiet. It sounds quite horrible imo. Also, for keeping consistent with the other Haru maps; may you please make this difficulty have circle size 3? If this doesn't turn out to be the hardest difficulty later on; circle size 2 would be fine.

02:04:204 (x) - Add note?
03:34:204 (1) - You should end the map here for the same reason above.

I won't mod both difficulties any further because I don't think it should be mapped that far.
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Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
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Jeffro

Nexy wrote:

This should still be in WIP.

Requirements:
  • » Must make at least 2 difficulties consisting of Normal & Hard.
Hard is not a normal. Please change the source to Clannad and take out Touhou from the tags in all difficulties. Done but I still need a normal difficulty. Preferably from someone else because if I have to map a normal difficulty with alot less notes it doesn't feel right for me. Maybe you can make one? :D

Hard:
01:27:904 to 01:28:804 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here. Done
01:29:554 (3) - Too close to 2. The spacing between 2 and 3 is not the same as 1 and 2. Or the way around and 1 is too close to 2.Done
01:30:754 (6) - Same problem as above.Done
01:33:904 to 01:34:504 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done
01:46:204 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It looks like you got lazy here. Please think of different patterns and map the little mini breaks in between.Done
01:55:804 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^Mapped the mini breaks but I do like the 2 last sliders there.
02:17:404 (x) - Add note?Done
02:29:704 to 02:30:304 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done

I think the 20 second break is way too much.
This is a part where I have to really think out what to put in here then though.

Have to go to work now. I'll fix the following stuff later :)

02:51:304 to 02:52:204 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
02:54:004 to 02:54:604 - ^
02:56:104 to 02:56:704 (3) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
02:58:504 to 02:59:404 (7) - ^
03:03:154 (x) - Add note?
03:08:104 to 03:09:304 (12) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
03:11:104 to 03:12:004 (5) - ^
03:12:604 to 03:14:404 (4) - ^
03:17:704 to 03:18:904 (8) - ^
03:20:704 to 03:21:604 (5) - ^
03:22:504 (5,7,9) - You can add notes here. I think it sounds nice if you give them hitsounds.
03:27:304 to 03:29:104 (5) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.
03:31:804 (x) - A 0.5 slider would work well here going up to 03:32:704 with a whiste at the end of it.
03:32:854 (x) - A note here with finish if you do the above.
03:34:204 (6) - You should end the map here.

Everything after the 6 above is just a copy and paste. Really no point in it + playing a slow song for more then 3 minutes is way too boring imo.

I expected a lot more from you Jeffro. It's the reason why I said you were ok to map it.
Sorry I was totally stuck on some of the patterns and was pushing myself to map the full song as everyone said it was too short.

Yes:
This difficulty is too quiet. It sounds quite horrible imo. Also, for keeping consistent with the other Haru maps; may you please make this difficulty have circle size 3? If this doesn't turn out to be the hardest difficulty later on; circle size 2 would be fine.

02:04:204 (x) - Add note?
03:34:204 (1) - You should end the map here for the same reason above.

I won't mod both difficulties any further because I don't think it should be mapped that far.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Sorry for source, I meant Air, not Clannad. As for your normal request; I've actually been quite busy, so I'll try to make one but don't expect anything.
Jeffro
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Joined October 2008
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Jeffro
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mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Only thing I didn't like about your difficulty was that it was boring. It could be due to all the parts you didn't map. You also used a lot of the same patterns, which I really hate. You might like it, so you don't have to change anything.

Since this song is repetitive, only thing I can think of to make it more fun is to map out those parts and add your own beats to it that go along with the music (As you have in some places). Listen to the song more closely, there are parts in the background that are subtle that would work great if mapped. For example around here: 02:29:404. You can map the drums in the back and make some kind of pattern up to 02:31:204. There a lot more places with things similar to this example.

01:19:804 (1) - BTW, this spinner makes no sense.
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
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Jeffro
I'll work on it some more when I'm home (posting from my work atm ;P)

This is vital feedback for becoming a great mapper. Even I realise my first beatmap was boring as hell even though people downloaded it for Mafiamasters Hard :P

I consider my Difficulty on Yui - Again (TV Size) my best difficulty atm. and I admit I got lazy last night I was tired but wanted to finish the map so I copied one part of the map and flipped them over which really doesn't turn out well :(

I'll make this map work! :)
lzy
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Joined July 2009
lzy
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Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
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Jeffro
Continuing

Nexy wrote:

I think the 20 second break is way too much. I really can't make up patterns for that part :(

02:51:304 to 02:52:204 - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done
02:54:004 to 02:54:604 - ^Done
02:56:104 to 02:56:704 (3) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done
02:58:504 to 02:59:404 (7) - ^Done
03:03:154 (x) - Add note? Done
03:08:104 to 03:09:304 (12) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done
03:11:104 to 03:12:004 (5) - ^ Done
03:12:604 to 03:14:404 (4) - ^ Done
03:17:704 to 03:18:904 (8) - ^ Done
03:20:704 to 03:21:604 (5) - ^ Done
03:22:504 (5,7,9) - You can add notes here. I think it sounds nice if you give them hitsounds.Done
03:27:304 to 03:29:104 (5) - Map this part out. It breaks the map's flow with nothing here.Done
03:31:804 (x) - A 0.5 slider would work well here going up to 03:32:704 with a whiste at the end of it.Done a little different but gives a nice touch too :)
03:32:854 (x) - A note here with finish if you do the above.^
03:34:204 (6) - You should end the map here.Done

Everything after the 6 above is just a copy and paste. Really no point in it + playing a slow song for more then 3 minutes is way too boring imo.

I expected a lot more from you Jeffro. It's the reason why I said you were ok to map it.

Yes:
This difficulty is too quiet. It sounds quite horrible imo. Also, for keeping consistent with the other Haru maps; may you please make this difficulty have circle size 3? If this doesn't turn out to be the hardest difficulty later on; circle size 2 would be fine.

02:04:204 (x) - Add note?
03:34:204 (1) - You should end the map here for the same reason above.

I won't mod both difficulties any further because I don't think it should be mapped that far.
I also need someone to optimize the custom whistle (I ripped it out of the song but it doesn't work 100% but I want that one.)
happy30
Featured Artist
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Joined August 2008
happy30
hi hi :3

offset: 632

I think you should remove soft-hitclap2
It sounds messy, sometimes it gives a strange sound
if you can hear what i mean :?
Maybe you can change the sound to a normal-hitnormal, but i havent tried it myself.

Also, I don't see any custom skin elements, full reupload ? :?

nothing wrong with spacing

Maybe move to WIP? since youll need a normal or easy to get this ranked.

star :)
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro
Problem is nobody will look at it in WIP and I still need someone to map a normal or easy. I know the softclap sounds weird. I actually want to use that sound but it has to be corrected. Maybe anyone who's good with sound editing here :D

I don't have custom skin elements :( I used to had a spinner but it was touhou and not air so it had to be removed. So I still need a custom skin :(

Gonna do the offset in the weekend. Have a party tonight and then I'm at my dad :)
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
:)

Download: Haru - Summer Shadows (Instrumental) (Jeffro) [Yes].osu
DJPop
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DJPop
I just wondered... Are Haru's songs converted from BMS ?


hitsounds seem fine.

~Yes~
02:15:332 (9) - new combo
03:34:232 (1) - remove new combo

~Hard~
02:28:532 (5) - new combo
03:17:432 (7) - ^
03:22:532 (10) - ^
03:23:732 (1) - remove new combo
03:31:532 (5) - silence the sliderslide
03:34:532 - end Kiai here.


+Star
Jeffro
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Jeffro
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Layola_old
51 posts
Joined February 2009
Layola_old
Source: Air (not viotex instrumentals)

All suggestions:

Hard:
00:44:732 (x) - Add note here?
00:45:032 (x) - Add a 1/4 slider here if you do the above with a whistle @ end.
00:48:632 (4) - Should make this into something else. It looks + plays really bad.
01:55:832 (1,2) - Instead of putting whistle on the whole slider; put them on each end. The slider-slide sounds horrible.
01:58:232 (1,2) - ^
02:00:632 (1,2) - ^
02:28:532 (1,2) - Remove these? They don't really follow anything. If you do or don't do this, you should think of another way to arrange this stream.
02:29:732 (x) - Add a slider or hitcircles up to 02:30:332.
02:49:532 (x) - Spinner up to 02:50:732?
03:03:932 (x) to 03:04:532 (x) - Keep the flow going, no need for this gap.
03:25:232 (3,6) - Re-stack on ends of slider.
03:28:232 (4) - Make this slider look better: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TnNbW.png
03:31:532 (5) - It sounds better if you remove the whistle @ start and turn the volume to 0. Add a clap to the end of the slider (End should be whistle + clap now) and turn volume all the way up. I think it sounds nice ;o.
03:33:932 (x) - Add note here.
03:33:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you do the above, you should rearrange these and make the 4 a new combo: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/8H781.png

The pictures are just examples. You could come up with something better.

Yes:
This difficulty is too silent D:!
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

Layola wrote:

Source: Air (not viotex instrumentals)

All suggestions:

Hard:
00:44:732 (x) - Add note here?Done
00:45:032 (x) - Add a 1/4 slider here if you do the above with a whistle @ end.Done, and it sounds very nice, I love it :)
00:48:632 (4) - Should make this into something else. It looks + plays really bad.
01:55:832 (1,2) - Instead of putting whistle on the whole slider; put them on each end. The slider-slide sounds horrible.Done
01:58:232 (1,2) - ^Done
02:00:632 (1,2) - ^Done, can't believe I missed these <3
02:28:532 (1,2) - Remove these? They don't really follow anything. If you do or don't do this, you should think of another way to arrange this stream.Done
02:29:732 (x) - Add a slider or hitcircles up to 02:30:332.Done
02:49:532 (x) - Spinner up to 02:50:732?Done
03:03:932 (x) to 03:04:532 (x) - Keep the flow going, no need for this gap.Done
03:25:232 (3,6) - Re-stack on ends of slider.Done
03:28:232 (4) - Make this slider look better: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/TnNbW.pngDone
03:31:532 (5) - It sounds better if you remove the whistle @ start and turn the volume to 0. Add a clap to the end of the slider (End should be whistle + clap now) and turn volume all the way up. I think it sounds nice ;o.Done, had to mess with hitsounds again though or else the sliderslide could be heard.
03:33:932 (x) - Add note here.Done
03:33:032 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - If you do the above, you should rearrange these and make the 4 a new combo: https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/8H781.pngDone with a different pattern indeed, I hope you like it :P

The pictures are just examples. You could come up with something better.

Yes:
This difficulty is too silent D:!
I really love your suggestions <3 Kudosu very well earned!
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Sonnyc
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Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
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Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

sonnyc wrote:

Random mod~

[General]
  • Needs an easier difficulty
I know right :(, I want someone to make one :D I love maps with multiple ppl's difficulties! :)

[Yes]
  • 02:22:532 (5) New combo
[Hard]

  • 01:03:932 (4) None Done
    02:54:032 (8) New combo Done
    03:09:632 (4) Clap? Done
    03:22:532 (10) New combo Done


Star~
Thank you ^_^
Hikato
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Hikato
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Jeffro
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Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

Hikato wrote:

You need to full submit again. There's no audio file when downloading.
Shit :(

Not at home atm >.<
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
How did i get then..?
EDIT : Oh, the title has changed :D
Xgor
Elite Mapper
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Xgor
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Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro
Uploaded :)

And sure go ahead xgor, I accept about all difficulties :)
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro
Damn doubleposted again ~ Delete this please mods.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
>O<

Download: Haru - Natsukage (Instrumental) (Jeffro) [Yes].osu
termerys
537 posts
Joined March 2009
termerys
This song needs easy/normal diff / it looks like Offset is not yet match the song :3

+star
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

termerys wrote:

This song needs easy/normal diff / it looks like Offset is not yet match the song :3

+star
Yeah, there are some people who wanne make them ;)

Offset doesnt match. Aww damnit I always get like 20 offset corrections xD
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
You can take out "Air" from the tags. Having it in the source is good enough. Remember these are all suggestions:

Yes:
You added more whistles + finishes, but I think you could use more whistles at places:

00:45:032 (3,4,5,6,7) - Just an example. Look over the map instead of me suggesting every place.

Regarding the finishes; I would replace some of them with whistles, but that's just me. Anyways, it sounds better than before.

Hard:
Make the default volume to 8 instead of 10?

01:35:432 (3) - Whistle on each point sounds better than whole slider. Slider-slide sounds bad.
01:36:632 (3) - ^
01:37:832 (3) - ^
01:39:032 (3) - ^
03:31:532 (5) - Add finish @ the end? Sounds better than just a normal-hit imo.

Getting better :) !
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
i made a comboburst n-n you can use it if you like it!

edit: omg lol im dumb. i didnt realize it was the same picture as the background >____> ill leave it in the spoiler anyway but i dont think you should use it xD

SPOILER


Jeffro
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Jeffro
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Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Tonoko
:)
[DBF]
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[DBF]
[Yes]
01:11:132 - maybe add bit? see screenshot
01:56:732 - ^ see screenshot
02:16:832 (5,6,1) - little bad spacing~
[Hard]
00:56:282 (3,4) - maybe flip vertically?
01:57:932 (4) - add bit with clap.
02:53:132 (6) - why this is bit down?

Good job! good luck, star~
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
Jeffro

[DBF] wrote:

[Yes]
01:11:132 - maybe add bit? see screenshot
01:56:732 - ^ see screenshot
02:16:832 (5,6,1) - little bad spacing~
[Hard]
00:56:282 (3,4) - maybe flip vertically?Breaks my layout there :(
01:57:932 (4) - add bit with clap.Sorry but no, I purposely didn't add a 4th note here for consistency.
02:53:132 (6) - why this is bit down?Distance snap -,- but I can manually set it there, it doesn't hurt there :)

Good job! good luck, star~
jockeytiyan
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Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
Been a while since I've modded. So forgive me if my observations are kinda crude now.

Well, according to the IRC mod I made, 627 - 628 sounds like good candidates for the offset. But I really recommend consulting a timing expert for this matter.

Yes:
SPOILER
General: If I'm right, this is a Normal diff. Correct me if I'm wrong. It's one of the fun Normal diffs I've ever seen. Yes actually made a good map for me to see, because it's my first time to see a Yes map. However, it could use some hitsounding such as whistles and finishes and the such.

00:44:730 (2,3) - Suggestion: Align these 2 beats.
01:45:030 (5,6,1) - Nazi suggestion: Move 1 grid upward. It should sustain the "curvature" of the beats 01:43:830 (3,4) -
02:30:630 (3) - You could straighten this up, it doesn't look ok that much if it has the same slanting angle such as 02:30:030 (2) -
02:31:680 (x) - You could add a beat/s or a slider here up to the white tick.

Note: I suggest the parts where hitcircle streams like 00:40:230 (3,4,5) occurs, should have had a higher spacing. IMO, it restricts the map's good flow and disrupts the beginning a bit.


Hard:
SPOILER
General: I guess I'm too obsessed with maps that has curved patterns so I won't comment on this anymore. However, I've done some suggestions that are purposely made to make some patterns look curved.

01:23:428 (1) - Suggestion: Place a whistle at the returning point of the slider.
02:18:928 (5) - Suggestion: Place a whistle at the endpoint of the slider.
03:07:078 (7) - Suggestion: Move 1 grid up.
03:13:078 (4) - Suggestion: Move 1 grid right and down.
03:29:878 (2,3,4) - Wow, this part hits my head pretty much. 2x BPM sliders. IMO, it doesn't sound good on the map because it was a sudden speed-up. But I don't think it's really necessary to take these out.

Such a short kiai time. :(

Star~ Hope I'll get to mod incoming diffs. :)
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