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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年8月8日 星期四 at 0:55:10

Artist: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi
Title: One-Chance!! (Short Ver.)
Source: Pure Girl
Tags: I've Frontwing
BPM: 143
Filesize: 21133kb
Play Time: 00:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.46 stars, 7 notes)
  2. FS's Chance (4.92 stars, 306 notes)
  3. Hard (4.88 stars, 311 notes)
  4. No More Chance... (5 stars, 348 notes)
  5. Normal (4.22 stars, 153 notes)
  6. One More Chance!!! (5 stars, 372 notes)
  7. sammy's Chance (4.92 stars, 309 notes)


Download: KOTOKO & Satou Hiromi - One-Chance!! (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://puu.sh/3W6PK.png I have listened to this song for 742 times
And is the last update of this map: 2013.08.08
I have given up to make this one ranked, but i have learned much from this map
The first version of this map:http://puu.sh/3W6Ao.osu
My first map
An awesome song from KOTOKO, which is the opening of Pure Girl
from a KOTOKO’s fan
Intend to make a good song,but probably not a good map...
All remapping
no mod now please
Easy...Remap
Normal...Done!
sammy's Chance...Done!
Hard...Mapping!
FS's Chance(Insane)...Done by FreeSongs!
No More Chance...(Insane)...Done!
One More Chance!!!(Insane+)...Done!
old hard diff(sammy's Chance) will be removed to DarknessAngel's mapset
All done and ready for mod!!

Sorry to FreeSongs that i make this one graveyard
Thanks for modding!
FreeSongs Ts8zs

Thanks for your maps!
I use a part from your map
Laurier
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41282 I Love2 Darling!![Collab]
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/71990 Ceui - COLORFUL DAYS!![Insane]
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/88465 nao - Komorebi Fresnel[Insane]
7odoa
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38316 S.S.H. - Intersect Thunderbolt-Remix[Exceed]
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45074 Black Hole - Pluto[Challenge]
kanpayin
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/68388 Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size)[Hard]
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/31964 fripSide - closest love[Insane]
bakabaka
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36569 Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - My Pace de Ikimashou[Yuri]
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38846 Shiroi Yuki no Princess ha ...[Collab]
kusano
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/40962 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - My Sweet Lady (Short Ver.)[kusano's Insane]
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/173243 fripSide - LEVEL5 -judgelight- (TV Size)[kusano's Raigun]
http://osu.ppy.sh/b/131790 fripSide - Last Fortune (Short Ver.)[Insane]
Star Stream http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50081 Prim - Koisuru*Uchu Sensou!! (Ryu* Remix)[S.S]
Blue Dargon http://osu.ppy.sh/s/40344 Hatsune Miku - Atama no Taisou[Nogard]
rui http://osu.ppy.sh/s/33651 Hatsune Miku - Rubik's Cube[7x7x7]
Nakagawa-Kanon http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39804 xi - FREEDOM DiVE[FOUR DIMENSIONS]
val0108 http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28561 Megpoid GUMI - Carnival[Carnival0108]
Saten http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53923 Yousei Teikoku - Wahrheit[Saten]
Niva http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50648 Hundred Percent Free - Juugoya Crisis ~Kimi ni Aitai~[Hard]
DarknessAngel http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45626 KOTOKO - Namida no Chikai[D.N.Angel]
Scorpiour http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53451 eikkaleyd - Kachou Fuugetsu (PV Ver.)[Lunatic]
Amamiya Yuko http://osu.ppy.sh/s/76396 Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos[Skystar]
tutuhaha http://osu.ppy.sh/s/51755 nano - Now or Never[Never]
donpen http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48368 yuikonnu - Souzou Forest[Insane]
Zero__wind http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92424 Evanescence - Taking Over Me[Hard]
Andrea http://osu.ppy.sh/s/97359 ave;new feat. Sakura Saori - Graceful Anomaly[Insane]
Melophobia http://osu.ppy.sh/b/147104 Sakakibara Yui - Scarlet (Short Ver.)[Insane]
L_P http://osu.ppy.sh/b/181204 mafumafu - Yuugure Semi Nikki[Yuugure]
and continue

The eternal memory in osu lifetime
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One easy :o
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回来了~
Normal

00:35:941 (4) - 建议少一个折返然后加一个圆圈在00:37:199 -
00:54:822 (1) - 从00:55:242 - 开始 00:54:822 - 加一个圆圈
从00:59:647 - 到 01:06:780 - 感觉有点紧了 感觉玩家需要一些空间去休息 可以考虑空出01:02:584 - 和01:05:522 -
更改建议
01:02:584 (5,6,7) - 替换成一个圆圈在01:02:794 - 一个1/2折返滑条在01:03:004 -
01:04:473 (3) - 少一个折返然后加一个圆圈在01:05:731 -


01:31:326 (1) - 调整调整让它对称
01:33:004 (2) - ^

音效:
00:04:052 (1) - finish
00:07:409 (8) - finish
00:10:766 (1) - 头finish
00:12:444 (4) - 头finish
00:17:479 (1) - 头finish
00:18:108 (2) - 头尾finish
00:19:787 (5) - 头finish
00:20:836 (6) - 尾finish
00:24:192 (1) - 头finish
00:24:822 (2) - 头finish
00:25:871 (3) - finish
00:32:584 (4) - 头尾finish
00:33:633 (5) - 头finish
00:38:039 (6) - finish
00:38:668 (1) - finish
00:39:088 (3) - 尾finish
00:42:654 (2,3) - 建议换掉这两个滑条然后用其他方法压住00:43:283 - 和00:43:703 - 毕竟这两个是相对很重的音
00:44:332 (4) - 头finish
00:45:381 (1) - finish
00:46:011 (3) - 头finish
00:47:060 (4) - finish
00:51:046 (4) - 00:51:885 (5) - 头finish //这个模棱两可 感觉不加效果也还可以
00:57:759 (6) - 头finish
00:59:228 (1) - 尾finish
01:06:151 (5) - 头尾finish
01:07:200 (1) - 头finish
01:12:864 (1) - 头finish
01:20:417 (4) - 头finish
01:22:095 (3) - 头finish
01:24:613 (5) - finish
01:26:291 (3) - 头finish
01:27:130 (4) - 头finish
01:31:326 (1) - 头finish
01:33:004 (2) - 头尾finish
finish压住的时间点在其他难度也可考虑下加finish所以在其他难度里就不说音效了


Hard

加两个圆圈在00:08:877 - 00:08:982 - 感觉正好可以配音乐 不加上感觉也挺好的
00:26:710 (5) - 调整角度使其正对00:27:549 (1) -
00:30:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个移到使前三个圆圈与00:29:227 (1) - 重合 这样感觉更有连续性
除此之外还可以考虑空出00:30:696 - 这个时间点
00:57:759 (1) - 感觉滑条速度突然加快太多 可以考虑尺寸弄小一点
01:13:284 (3,6) - 让这两个滑条在同一直线上?
除此之外考虑让两组的朝向角度不同?类似于这样

01:16:850 (3) - 往上移一点使01:16:431 (2) - 所在直线过这个圆圈 然后01:17:060 (4,5) - 往右移一点为了保持包住圆圈

话说结尾处的那几个notes真的是神排列啊…

No More Chance...

嘛等回国了再说
00:57:759 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 打起来总是不顺手 放慢仔细听了下 发现00:58:074 - 这个时间点是有重音的 感觉还是压住比较好
建议缩短00:57:759 (9) - 1/4拍 把00:58:179 - 用圆圈压上 然后00:58:284 - 空出像这样

01:28:389 (1) - 转盘从01:28:074 - 开始

One More Chance!!!

00:10:556 (7) - 调整角度使其朝向00:11:080 (1) -
00:52:514 (1,2,3) - 移动这三个圆圈使00:51:885 (4) - 朝向他们 像这样


感觉能力有限 能给的建议就这么多了
希望有帮助~
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FreeSongs wrote:

回来了~
Normal

00:35:941 (4) - 建议少一个折返然后加一个圆圈在00:37:199 -
00:54:822 (1) - 从00:55:242 - 开始 00:54:822 - 加一个圆圈
从00:59:647 - 到 01:06:780 - 感觉有点紧了 感觉玩家需要一些空间去休息 可以考虑空出01:02:584 - 和01:05:522 -
更改建议
01:02:584 (5,6,7) - 替换成一个圆圈在01:02:794 - 一个1/2折返滑条在01:03:004 - 这个我再考虑
01:04:473 (3) - 少一个折返然后加一个圆圈在01:05:731 -


01:31:326 (1) - 调整调整让它对称 K
01:33:004 (2) - ^ K

音效: 音效我回国好好弄
00:04:052 (1) - finish
00:07:409 (8) - finish
00:10:766 (1) - 头finish
00:12:444 (4) - 头finish
00:17:479 (1) - 头finish
00:18:108 (2) - 头尾finish
00:19:787 (5) - 头finish
00:20:836 (6) - 尾finish
00:24:192 (1) - 头finish
00:24:822 (2) - 头finish
00:25:871 (3) - finish
00:32:584 (4) - 头尾finish
00:33:633 (5) - 头finish
00:38:039 (6) - finish
00:38:668 (1) - finish
00:39:088 (3) - 尾finish
00:42:654 (2,3) - 建议换掉这两个滑条然后用其他方法压住00:43:283 - 和00:43:703 - 毕竟这两个是相对很重的音
00:44:332 (4) - 头finish
00:45:381 (1) - finish
00:46:011 (3) - 头finish
00:47:060 (4) - finish
00:51:046 (4) - 00:51:885 (5) - 头finish //这个模棱两可 感觉不加效果也还可以
00:57:759 (6) - 头finish
00:59:228 (1) - 尾finish
01:06:151 (5) - 头尾finish
01:07:200 (1) - 头finish
01:12:864 (1) - 头finish
01:20:417 (4) - 头finish
01:22:095 (3) - 头finish
01:24:613 (5) - finish
01:26:291 (3) - 头finish
01:27:130 (4) - 头finish
01:31:326 (1) - 头finish
01:33:004 (2) - 头尾finish
finish压住的时间点在其他难度也可考虑下加finish所以在其他难度里就不说音效了


Hard

加两个圆圈在00:08:877 - 00:08:982 - 感觉正好可以配音乐 不加上感觉也挺好的
00:26:710 (5) - 调整角度使其正对00:27:549 (1) - K
00:30:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个移到使前三个圆圈与00:29:227 (1) - 重合 这样感觉更有连续性
除此之外还可以考虑空出00:30:696 - 这个时间点这个忘了改没改了,回国看下
00:57:759 (1) - 感觉滑条速度突然加快太多 可以考虑尺寸弄小一点 K
01:13:284 (3,6) - 让这两个滑条在同一直线上?
除此之外考虑让两组的朝向角度不同?类似于这样 K

01:16:850 (3) - 往上移一点使01:16:431 (2) - 所在直线过这个圆圈 然后01:17:060 (4,5) - 往右移一点为了保持包住圆圈 K

话说结尾处的那几个notes真的是神排列啊… loool

No More Chance...

嘛等回国了再说
00:57:759 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 打起来总是不顺手 放慢仔细听了下 发现00:58:074 - 这个时间点是有重音的 感觉还是压住比较好 K
建议缩短00:57:759 (9) - 1/4拍 把00:58:179 - 用圆圈压上 然后00:58:284 - 空出像这样

01:28:389 (1) - 转盘从01:28:074 - 开始 K

One More Chance!!!

00:10:556 (7) - 调整角度使其朝向00:11:080 (1) - K
00:52:514 (1,2,3) - 移动这三个圆圈使00:51:885 (4) - 朝向他们 像这样
改了

感觉能力有限 能给的建议就这么多了
希望有帮助~[/color]
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Hard diff will be removed to DarknessAngel's mapset
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