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pw384

jyc-Binggan wrote:

general]
打着太软,感觉不适合soft音效,建议用normal,然后把音量调低,或者normal和soft混用 :arrow: 用了custom音效了
4.5星的normal建议再加几个note变成简单hard,384难度当作送分insane好一些 :arrow: 现在的spread还好啦 都是送分w
[easy]
nothing
[normal]
00:40:607 (3) - 这个滑条头的whistle建议改到尾巴上,因为这里soft-whistle当重音用,加在红线上听着别扭
00:41:893 (5) - 同理这个whistle去掉
00:42:536 (6) - 在这加whistle
00:44:036 (2) - 同理改到尾巴上
00:45:322 (1) - 这个whistle去掉
00:45:965 (2) - 在这里加whistle
后边的也差不多,你看着改吧
:arrow: 有的短滑条下错的改了 长滑条的whistle感觉还是有用的 即使在红线上

[384]
00:18:965 (2,3) - 这两个互相遮挡感觉没有必要啊,建议重摆一下 :arrow: 挺好的啊 穿心梗
01:54:750 - 加note
02:03:536 (1,2) - 这两个note建议改到右边,增加一些利用率啊,之前的02:00:536 (6) - 已经用了左边
02:41:250 (1) - 去掉NC
02:41:679 (2) - 加nc
02:43:822 - 建议加note :arrow: 看低难度就知道了ww
:arrow: 其它的改了

祝rank :)
谢谢mod! :)
Flower
Hi
废话少说进入正题 我喜欢这图 所以就简单mod了 不然又要搞一个下午

[sanbasi]
00:14:680 (1) - 试试normal音效,比较厚重,但是比不上soft强烈,可以对比权衡下
00:28:393 - 推荐normal音效 (以上两条同样适用于另外两个难度)
00:37:822 - 不是很必要但是可以试试在这里加个soft whistle来帮助读图
00:44:250 - whistle?
00:53:250 (2,3) - 没包好
01:10:179 (2) - 感觉这里间距可以大一点 突然变小感觉娘娘腔
01:32:036 (1,2) - 缩小一些间距 这里不是特别燃的地方
01:57:322 (8,9,10) - 增加一些间距?

[normal]
02:27:965 (5,2) - 没包好
02:43:822 - 加个note?

[Easy]
01:35:679 (3,4) - 包的更好些
03:00:965 (1,2) - ^

没了 看了下星星够了就不射了 Good luck~
Topic Starter
pw384
fixed all
谢谢色卡:D

edit: 除了加note..
lkx_Shore
[Easy]
01:42:965 (2) - 似乎没包好

[Normal]
02:43:822 - 加个note?..

[384]
00:55:393 (2) - 加个whistle?
01:43:822 (1) - 和下面的滑条配着来看觉得不太好看..
01:57:322 (8,9,10) - 链接到后面的滑条的话...打起来感觉不是很好
02:43:822 - 加个note在x256 y272?

[Other]
Goodluck.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from your queue


General

  1. change the diff spead to 384,059,043
  2. add pierrot_wang in tags for tieba ID
384

  1. 00:16:179 (4,5,6) - 一看你这就不科学, 建议改成这样的形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826582
  2. 01:02:036 (7) - 我觉得太高了 y:120差不多
  3. 01:03:107 (2) - 然后这个就可以和上面滑条尾叠着了
  4. 01:05:250 (1) - 我觉得3/4比较合适 我觉得I'll这个音失恋者的不能者么愤慨感觉号下铺两个单从一压屏幕
  5. 01:26:893 (8) - 这个往前移到01:26:679 - 感觉节奏比较好啊
  6. 01:53:250 (6) - 你这是hard吧我觉得还是ctrl+G
  7. 02:20:893 (5,6) - 感受一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826602
  8. 02:23:250 (6) - 往上移半格
  9. 02:30:965 (6,7,1) - 我觉的不需要这样 都往下一点不就好了
  10. 02:43:822 - 随便加个note?
  11. 02:59:250 (1,2) - 怎么说呢 我感觉就奔放了这么一下 后面还是不够霸气 你怎么看
Normal

  1. 00:38:679 (1,2) - 其实这个的blanket不科学
  2. 01:23:250 (7) - move up 1 grid
  3. 02:20:893 (5) - next: 0.85x 啦啦啦
  4. 02:40:607 (5) - 我觉得这个不做slider art的话后面不如从上面放回去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826619
Easy

  1. 01:50:250 (2) - .-.
Topic Starter
pw384

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

from your queue


General

  1. change the diff spead to 384,059,043
  2. add pierrot_wang in tags for tieba ID
:arrow: 吉安帕 下张图改!

384

  1. 00:16:179 (4,5,6) - 一看你这就不科学, 建议改成这样的形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826582
  2. 01:02:036 (7) - 我觉得太高了 y:120差不多
  3. 01:03:107 (2) - 然后这个就可以和上面滑条尾叠着了
  4. 01:05:250 (1) - 我觉得3/4比较合适 我觉得I'll这个音失恋者的不能者么愤慨感觉号下铺两个单从一压屏幕
  5. 01:26:893 (8) - 这个往前移到01:26:679 - 感觉节奏比较好啊
  6. 01:53:250 (6) - 你这是hard吧我觉得还是ctrl+G
  7. 02:20:893 (5,6) - 感受一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826602
  8. 02:23:250 (6) - 往上移半格
  9. 02:30:965 (6,7,1) - 我觉的不需要这样 都往下一点不就好了
  10. 02:43:822 - 随便加个note? :arrow: >_<
  11. 02:59:250 (1,2) - 怎么说呢 我感觉就奔放了这么一下 后面还是不够霸气 你怎么看
:arrow: 除了加note全改了 ar3神mod 最后一部分改得更跳了+尾杀

Normal

  1. 00:38:679 (1,2) - 其实这个的blanket不科学 :arrow: 挺科学
  2. 01:23:250 (7) - move up 1 grid :arrow: fixed
  3. 02:20:893 (5) - next: 0.85x 啦啦啦 :arrow: 不要在意这些细节,小学生肯定不会读错
  4. 02:40:607 (5) - 我觉得这个不做slider art的话后面不如从上面放回去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826619
:arrow: slider art了

Easy

  1. 01:50:250 (2) - .-. :arrow: 改了(放弃spacing了

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Easy]
01:42:965 (2) - 似乎没包好 :arrow: fixed

[Normal]
02:43:822 - 加个note?.. :arrow: >_<

[384]
00:55:393 (2) - 加个whistle? :arrow: fixed
01:43:822 (1) - 和下面的滑条配着来看觉得不太好看.. :arrow: 还好、、不想打破梗了
01:57:322 (8,9,10) - 链接到后面的滑条的话...打起来感觉不是很好 :arrow: 我再想想
02:43:822 - 加个note在x256 y272? :arrow: >_<

[Other]
Goodluck.
谢谢mod!!

为什么泥萌都想让我在hard那个break之前加note .-.
BoWAct
:) hi~ from #modreq
It is MAP fun in a very beautiful place!

I thought the difficulty of one on the other and want

Ranked hope.
Topic Starter
pw384

BoWAct wrote:

:) hi~ from #modreq
It is MAP fun in a very beautiful place!

I thought the difficulty of one on the other and want

Ranked hope.
thanks :D
Banana
忙成狗终于闲了一天 补半天觉起床还债

[384]
00:18:965 (2,3) - 好吧 这边建议是关gs然后往下保证三个滑条包的程度差不多
00:22:393 (2) - 似乎可以修一下
00:28:393 - 其实这边不推荐用滑条尾巴跟finish stack一个圈然后滑条头跟finish然后折返一次跟电吉它?
00:37:822 (1) - 个人不太喜欢对称轴起滑条 而且由于后面是个空拍放中间这么排列略容易读错 两个建议 一种是放右边找个合适位子 另一个是干脆和下一个(1)stack
01:26:465 - 把滑条换到后面来?像这样 然后stack 01:25:822 (6,7),还是有一个0.5 spacing的1/2节奏 不过1/1滑条的位置个人感觉会舒服一点
01:46:179 (5) - 直滑条或者红锚点?因为没有对称所以可以考虑变化
01:48:965 (5,6,7) - 要是我来做这段肯定不会放在上面 大概会和01:49:822 (1,2) - stack
01:52:822 (5) - 和01:54:107 (1) - 对应于是ctrl+g一下?
说实话不喜欢尾杀 不过歌曲确实是这样...

[Normal]
00:21:322 - 感觉这边加圈没太大意义,删?
01:11:036 (3) - 我觉得这个地方节奏跟的就比较自然 后面有一些直接一个滑条就带过去了有点唐突 比如01:21:322 (5) - 02:02:465 (3) - 02:23:036 (3) - (别的不改最后一个在kiai段的感觉最好改一下 这个03:02:465 (3) - )

[Easy]
02:05:250 (2) - 这个似乎可以包的再远一点


喵喵喵喵喵喵(
Niko-nyan
let see
General~
01:50:679 - i think this kiai doesn't fit
02:04:393 - ^
seems not much kiai that fit - just the last one that fit
(on Easy and Normal) because Hard looks better

Easy~
02:28:393 (1,2) - maybe you can try like this

Normal~
00:48:750 - i suggest you to use Drum hitsound on the tail of slider

Hard~
01:05:572 - the end of slider looks unsnapped or make the tail without sound looks better


omg another short mod huehuehue
Chloe
hi there~

Just some suggestions, not necessary. : )


[General]
  1. 应该没啥问题。
[Easy]
  1. 00:20:815 (3,1) - 感觉有点乱 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829235
  2. 02:50:004 (3) - …^
  3. 00:03:463 (4) - 这边节奏不太好 建议 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829242
  4. 00:43:842 (3) - whistle
  5. 02:25:680 (4) - 这尾巴的whistle不太好 建议拿掉
  6. 02:29:734 (3) - 尾巴上的whistle换成clap怎么样
  7. 02:55:842 (3) - 开始的whistle拿掉比较舒服
  8. 03:03:301 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829259
  9. 03:32:004 (1) - 整个滑条加个clap
[Normal]

  • 感觉可以找个slidertick
  1. 00:15:965 (2,3) - 2的结尾和3的开头加个clap
  2. 00:22:822 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:43:393 (1) - 这边找BAT应该会被挑DS 建议再考虑一下
  4. 02:40:393 (5) - add
  5. 03:04:179 (6,1) - stack
  6. 03:11:465 (1) - 延后1/4


[Hard]
  1. 00:38:679 (2) - 开头加个whistle
  2. 01:11:679 (6) - 其实我觉得这样的真的不好 如果我要这样摆的话我会摆个这样的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/829975
  3. 01:17:250 (2) - 开头换成finish
  4. 01:20:679 (3) - ^
  5. 01:22:822 (8) - finish不好听
  6. 01:46:179 (5) - blanket
  7. 01:48:965 (5) - delete
  8. 01:59:250 (3) - ^ 其实是不是我看山妖图看多了... 他很多这种地方都是空拍 感觉听起来舒服
  9. 03:05:036 (3) - 03:10:179 (7) - ^
  10. 02:10:607 (7) - flow bad...
  11. 02:22:822 (5,8,9,1,2) - 建议全部ctrl g
  12. 02:27:536 (5,6,7,8) - 综合全局来看不太好吧...
Good luck to your map <3.
Topic Starter
pw384
wow three mods...... it's hard to paste what i've fixed >.< but I've fixed a lot! thanks!

咦chloe你的easy的mod好像贴错了呦 :3
Chloe

384059043 wrote:

wow three mods...... it's hard to paste what i've fixed >.< but I've fixed a lot! thanks!

咦chloe你的easy的mod好像贴错了呦 :3
好像是0.0 欠MOD太多记不清了..
Alarido
From * THE SLOW BPM FREE MODDING QUEUE *
Sorry for being so late :(
Awesome song ♥ (Alarido, you'd not seen it's Linkin Park? The best so far!)

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

384059043 wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96277

Although I set the BPM as 140.00, the real one is 70.00. You can ignore it if you don't agree with me.
thanks! :>
I accepted your request, and let's check the real BPM of it in [General] section below.

[General]

Checking the song's timing...
According to the .exe, the BPM seems to be 140.
Having a sight on your note placements on [384] diff (the harder one), I seen too few 1/4 notes (that harder triplets) and majority of notes are 1/2 (red ticks). This fact + the song's feeling (depressive?) + the downbeats = they lead me belive it's a 70 BPM song, not 140 as the program said.
Remember that these kind of applications (MixMeiseter included too) usually may halve (or double) the song's real BPM.
I strongly recommend checking your song's BPM on this topic (the Rolled's one). You can even ask a BAT if you in doubt yet.

If you'd find that my reasonings are valid and then you'd decide to change the BPM to 70, please follow these steps:

1. Close osu! and go to the song's folder
2. For each difficulty, find this line:
[TimingPoints]
965,428.571428571429,4,2,1,80,1,0
and change to
[TimingPoints]
965,857.142857142858,4,2,1,80,1,0
3. For [384] diff, find this line
SliderMultiplier:1.3
and change to
SliderMultiplier:2.6
4. For [Normal] diff, find this line
SliderMultiplier:1.1
and change to
SliderMultiplier:2.2
5. For [Easy] diff, find this line
SliderMultiplier:0.9
and change to
SliderMultiplier:1.8

Note: these settings MUST BE done with the osu!.exe CLOSED (not running), or files can be corrupt.

6. Finally, close all files.
7. Run the osu!.exe and use "Resnap all notes" and "Recalc. Slider Lengths".
8. If you find anything got awkward, adjust it by your own feel, based on commonsense.

[Easy]
* This diff is clean. I've no complaints here.

[Normal]
* Newly, no complaints but I find a bit harder to a [Normal] diff... it feels like a [Normal+] imo

[384]
* I like crescent difficulties :)

Remind the moddings below are based upon the 140 BPM version. Please apply them before any BPM/offset change!

01:19:286 (7) - This note feels overmapped, since there is no BG beat here.

Aaaand that's it!

Newly, sorry for the late :(
♥ Awesome song
And GOOD LUCK
GO GO RANK!!!

Take a star!
Topic Starter
pw384
Thank you! BPM has been fixed while the circle is still kept by me~
Andrea
~Easy~
  1. 01:47:250 (1) - This slider has too many slider repeats and it might be confusing for beginners, try to do something else instead.
~Normal~
  1. 02:01:393 (1) - Don't stack this circle under the previous slider, that's way too confusing for a Normal.
~384~
  1. I highly suggest you to rename this difficulty to "Hard", simple and better.
  1. 00:38:465 (1,2) - If you want to follow the music carefully, new combo should go on (2) instead.
  2. 01:26:250 - It feels like it's missing a note here, add it.
  3. 02:43:822 - Add a note here with a finish, it would fit greatly.
  4. 03:04:607 (1,2) - This jump feels a bit too high, try reducing the spacing of it.
  5. 03:11:036 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
Linkin Park the best <3
Topic Starter
pw384

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~
  1. 01:47:250 (1) - This slider has too many slider repeats and it might be confusing for beginners, try to do something else instead. :arrow: fixed
~Normal~
  1. 02:01:393 (1) - Don't stack this circle under the previous slider, that's way too confusing for a Normal. :arrow: fixed
~384~
  1. I highly suggest you to rename this difficulty to "Hard", simple and better. :arrow: ahh..I don't know if this diff is a hard or an insane or something between.. so I prefer to use '384'
  1. 00:38:465 (1,2) - If you want to follow the music carefully, new combo should go on (2) instead. :arrow: Ok
  2. 01:26:250 - It feels like it's missing a note here, add it. :arrow: Ok
  3. 02:43:822 - Add a note here with a finish, it would fit greatly. :arrow: ok
  4. 03:04:607 (1,2) - This jump feels a bit too high, try reducing the spacing of it. :arrow: fixed
  5. 03:11:036 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. :arrow: the current is okay imo
Linkin Park the best <3
thanks bakandrea <3 :)
Shohei Ohtani
I WANNA HEAL

I WANNA FEEL

WHAT I THOUGHT WAS NEVER REAL

Hard:
01:15:107 (5,6) - These would look a lot nicer as straight sliders
02:35:250 (1,2,3,4) - I think this would be a bit cooler with a long pretty shape slider.
02:43:822 (1) - Raise this up 1 grid so it stacks with the previous (5)
02:56:679 - From here out, it might be cool to use normal hitsounds rather than soft so it can have more of an impact

Normal:
AR +1
01:45:750 (5,6) - I know it follows the lyrics but it just feels awkward to play. Maybe make it a single note on the red tick? Idunno, it just feels off
02:43:822 - Add note here with finish

Easy:
02:18:107 (1) - Make the curve more notable
02:19:822 (3) - ^

Stellar map. Take some stars while you're at it.
Sun Rainbow
还债来了
[Easy]
00:28:393 (4) - NC?
00:38:679 (1,3) - 叠在一起了 分开不然就直接合在一起
01:03:536 (3) - 尾巴向上一点
01:12:965 (1,2) - 对齐点吧?
02:07:822 (1,3) - 有种不一样的感觉。。。。(PIA

[Normal]
这。。note会不会太小。。
:)

[Hard]
神麻婆

要死 做的那么好 真是zz
Topic Starter
pw384

CDFA wrote:

I WANNA HEAL

I WANNA FEEL

WHAT I THOUGHT WAS NEVER REAL :arrow: I WANNA LET GO OF THE PAIN I'VE FELT SO LONG

Hard:
01:15:107 (5,6) - These would look a lot nicer as straight sliders :arrow: fixed
02:35:250 (1,2,3,4) - I think this would be a bit cooler with a long pretty shape slider. :arrow: I want the players to feel the change here, so I kept.
02:43:822 (1) - Raise this up 1 grid so it stacks with the previous (5) :arrow: fixed
02:56:679 - From here out, it might be cool to use normal hitsounds rather than soft so it can have more of an impact :arrow: Cool idea~

Normal:
AR +1 :arrow: eh. ok, but I hope that there's AR5.5 (The AR here may be changed in the future. I just have a try)
01:45:750 (5,6) - I know it follows the lyrics but it just feels awkward to play. Maybe make it a single note on the red tick? Idunno, it just feels off :arrow: fixed
02:43:822 - Add note here with finish :arrow: ..fixed

Easy:
02:18:107 (1) - Make the curve more notable :arrow: fixed
02:19:822 (3) - ^ :arrow: ^

Stellar map. Take some stars while you're at it.
Thanks for your star and modding! :3

Sun Rainbow wrote:

还债来了
[Easy]
00:28:393 (4) - NC? :arrow: 同一直线上就不准备NC了
00:38:679 (1,3) - 叠在一起了 分开不然就直接合在一起 :arrow: 时间差距够大了,应该没多少人在玩的时候还注意这些细节
01:03:536 (3) - 尾巴向上一点 :arrow:
01:12:965 (1,2) - 对齐点吧? :arrow: fixed
02:07:822 (1,3) - 有种不一样的感觉。。。。(PIA :arrow: 吉安帕,但是懒得改

[Normal]
这。。note会不会太小。。 :arrow: CS3打起来莫名,还是CS4吧
:)

[Hard]
神麻婆 :arrow: 别黑

要死 做的那么好 真是zz :arrow: 说什么说,你也是zz
谢谢modding! :>
quantum-rose
赶在rank前补个星
Topic Starter
pw384

quantum-rose wrote:

赶在rank前补个星
谢谢!
为什么还不rank,哭哭哦
Topic Starter
pw384
Ready for ranking now.
Let me check if there's a BAT who can bubble this map...
sammy711
From 复读群
General
00:14:679 - 在所有难度里应该移除 默认的SV都是1.00 所以这条绿线是没用的
Easy
03:03:965 (4) - 这个不遵守DS大丈夫?
Normal
Good!
384
02:38:250 (1) - 的坐标应该和02:41:036 (6) - 的坐标相同 而不应该差1grid
00:54:536 (4) - 应和00:53:893 (3) - 的尾完全重合
384这里很多滑条不对称(仔细一看好难看好难看),需要进行微调 可以查看下滑条头和滑条尾的坐标 确认横/纵坐标相同
比如
01:50:679 (1,2) -
02:06:965 (7) -
02:23:250 (6) -
03:06:536 (7) -

Anyway 快去rank了吧
Topic Starter
pw384

sammy711 wrote:

From 复读群
General
00:14:679 - 在所有难度里应该移除 默认的SV都是1.00 所以这条绿线是没用的 :arrow: 你书的队但是现在这条规则貌似被取消了 看看bat怎么说想了想还是去掉吧233
Easy
03:03:965 (4) - 这个不遵守DS大丈夫? :arrow: fix
Normal
Good! :arrow: 好(那么难的normal没人挑了233
384
02:38:250 (1) - 的坐标应该和02:41:036 (6) - 的坐标相同 而不应该差1grid :arrow: fixed
00:54:536 (4) - 应和00:53:893 (3) - 的尾完全重合 :arrow: 即使调到完全重合,重新打开以后还会有偏差。但是4像素之内的都会自动堆叠,所以我也不管啦
384这里很多滑条不对称(仔细一看好难看好难看),需要进行微调 可以查看下滑条头和滑条尾的坐标 确认横/纵坐标相同
比如
01:50:679 (1,2) -
02:06:965 (7) -
02:23:250 (6) -
03:06:536 (7) -
:arrow: fixed~ (看的那么仔细怀疑是人
Anyway 快去rank了吧 :arrow: 还不rank哭哭哦
thanks for modding :D
quantum-rose
还不泡人性呢
Topic Starter
pw384

quantum-rose wrote:

还不泡人性呢
找了三个Bat都没下文。。
mancuso_JM_
Hi! As per your request :)

[General:]

• 800x600 is ok in a BG (with Ok I mean rankable :P), but I think a better option is if you can find or resize your current one in 1024x768. In addition, I think is better if you use a .jpg BG but this is up to you.
• This is a personal like, but in general in every map I like to see at least 3 combo coluours because with just 2 the map looks pretty repetitive. I'd use a darker brown, try this code:

Combo3 : 47,23,0

[Easy:]

• 00:18:107 (4,1) - For consistency with your next two combo patterns, is better if you swap the combo placement here. I mean, Add a New Combo in (4) and Remove it from (1)
• 00:27:536 (2,3,4) - This pattern is too much stright, and it doesn't flow really good. Try doing something like this:
• 00:28:393 (4) - I prefer a soft finish in this note instead of a Normal one. I think match better the cymbals
• 00:38:679 (1) - What about adding a whistle at the slider beginning? This section start sounds empty without it
• 00:40:822 - In this case, remove the whistle from here and add it one at the beginning of (3). This will make your whistle pattern more consistent
• 00:57:965 (2) - Listening properly the instrumental, you need a clap at the slider beginning imo.
• 01:03:107 (2) - I'd add some claps in some red ticks, because the music support them for example in this point, and in the previous point mentioned too.
• 01:05:250 (4) - As I mentioned above, clap at the slider end
• 01:23:679 - I don't know if it is really necessary to drag this break, anyway if you want to drag it this is not the best way. If I were you, I'd move the break start till 01:24:107
• 01:33:536 (1) - This start of the section sounds empty too, I'd add a whistle at the slider beginning
• 01:42:965 (3) - At the Slider end, use a soft finish instead of a drum one. Because fits much better with the music
• 01:44:679 (1,1) - *(A bit nazi)* The blanket between these sliders is not the best, try to fix it please. Especially the sliders shapes.
• 01:49:822 (4,5) - Stacks are not recommended in Easy diff. Try something like this if you want symetry

--> After that you need to do some tweaks in your next patterns, but anyway you don't need to touch the difficulty that much :P
• 02:00:965 (1) - The New Combo in this slider is not totally necessary here, because he is singing on the same pitch. In addition, this will help you to do a better symetry pattern
• 02:43:822 (x) - Hmm.. A note here is pretty necessary to me (with finish if possible). Give it a try please
• 03:10:393 (1) - Remove this New Combo, is not really necessary and gives a better look to your symetry.

- Not bad I have to say, just simple suggestions :). Oh.. btw, check properly these places where I said you that you can add claps over red ticks, and try adding them in the whole of the map.

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> The Approach Rate is a bit high comparing it with the BPM. In addition, it doesn't provide a good spread between the difficulties, so I recommend you to reduce that in 1 Tick (AR-1)

• 00:15:965 (2) - Hmm.. I think you are missing a Clap at the slider end
• 00:22:822 (2) - (^)
• 00:28:393 (5) - As I said in Easy, I think a soft finish fits better here.
• 00:43:393 (1,2) - I personally don't know what you are following here, there is anything over the blue ticks. I suggest you to use a simple rhythmical pattern like this one:
• 00:49:822 (2,4) - Add drum finishes in this notes, at least they will cover much better the music, because they really need some kind of hitsound
• 00:59:250 (7,1) - For consistency, swap the combo placement in these objects
• 01:03:107 (x) - Add a note here, your next pattern in 01:04:179 (1,2,3,4) - will sound much better with it. Try it pls :)
• 01:06:536 (x) - (^)
• 01:07:607 (5,6) - Make this pattern a bit more interesting, both sliders in a rect line looks weird and not totally esthetic. Try moving (6) some grids up, as I did in the follow screenshoot
• 01:12:536 (6) - Use a clap here instead of a whistle *Note: You can follow the general thing, mentioned in Easy, about adding some claps over red ticks (in chorus especially).*
• 01:18:107 (x) - I excpected a note here, really, especially after to play the previous pattern, where the music sounds like here. In addition I think is a coherent pattern to be used in a Normal diff.
• 01:21:322 (5) - Add a Whistle at the slider end to follow properly the instrumental.
• 01:23:679 - Same as Easy, I don't totally sure if drag this break till here is necessary, but anyway, if you want to drag it, would be better if you do it till 01:24:107
• 01:33:536 (1) - Whistle at the slider beginning
• 01:36:107 (7,1) - For the sake of consistency, swap the combo placement in these objects
• 01:36:750 (2) - Whistle at the slider beginning
• 01:38:250 (4,5) - Add a Whistle at the beginning of (5) and at the end of (4).
• 01:45:107 (4) - I think sounds better if instead of that, remove the repetition from the slider, and then add a note in 01:45:750. At least that follow better the thematic of your patterns
• 01:43:822 (1) - As I said you in Easy, a Soft finish sounds better than a drum finish here
• 01:59:036 (3) - Whistle at the slider end
• 02:02:465 (3) - (^)
• 02:06:536 (4) - I think this slider is here just for symetry, because sincerely sounds much better a 1/2 Slider instead. I recommend you to change that, because is more important the rhythm than the symetry.
• 02:16:179 (2) - Whistle at the end. Check this kind of stuff by yourself, in the last part of the map, I think you got the point now.
• 02:39:107 (3,4) - I dislike the transition between these Sliders :/. I think works much better when you play the map, if you extend the slider (3) in 1/4, at least I felt that during the gameplay
• 03:09:750 (5) - The Whistle should be at the beginning and NOT at the end.

- Not bad, but I dislike some aspect of the hitsounding, for that reason I mentioned a lot of them :P: Other than that, you did a good job

[384:]

Well, as Andrea said, I suggest you to rename this diff. as Hard. I saw your response, and I can say that it is a potencial Hard difficulty, especially for the BPM. In addition, this help to the difficulty spread, a Easy/Normal/Hard works much better :P

Settings:
--> I recommend you to reduce the HP Drain Rate and the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick for a better spread (HP, OD-1)

--> First of All: I won't repeat the hitsounds mentioned in Normal and Easy, please check them if they are applicable in the other diffs.

• 00:28:179 (2) - Personally, I dislike the usage of a blue tick. Because I can hear a sound, yes, but only when I listen the music in 25% playback, I don't know, I'd like to add a repetition in the previous (1). I think this is more than enough
• 00:39:322 (2) - I find this note irrelevant, and is just here to keep a distance in the symetry, If I were you I'd remove this note
• 00:48:322 (6,7) - This flow awkwardly to me, if I were you I'd place this note in x:256 y:192 for a better flow
• 01:02:465 (8,9,1) - Comparing this with your other 3-plets, they are way too separated. Due to the 1/8 usage, I recommend you to compress a bit this 3-plet as you did in the whole of the map
• 01:05:250 (1,2) - Flow weird and it is a really weird pattern too. It is the only time that you used that in all the map, so I suggest you to remove the note (2) and extend the Slider (1) till there
• 01:16:179 (8,9,1) - Yeah, I suggest you to compress a bit this 3-plet too :P
• 01:18:536 (5) - The whistle in this Note sounds overused and bad, Remove it please
• 01:19:286 (7) - This note sounds bad and affect the instrumental in the song. With the two sliders is more than enough, so remove this note please.
• 01:22:822 (8) - Instead of the repetition, I'd recommend you a Note instead. Because it is the end of the chorus, and a note match better that imo
• 01:25:393 (4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern flows really weird to me, try something like this instead
• 01:31:393 (8,1) - Swap the combo placement in this notes (add a New Combo in (8) and remove it in (1)), because works much better with the music than now
• 02:14:143 (7) - remove this note as I said you in the previous chorus
• 02:14:893 (x) - And.. I think a note here is necessary :P
• 02:17:679 (1) - The combo here is not really necessary in my opinion, because is not following anything concrete in the music. Remove it from this object.
• 02:56:679 - 03:14:679 - I really dislike the way that you increased the difficulty in this last part of the map, it doesn't make sense to me because in general the map were really relaxing (not jumps, not streams, just some simple 3-plet in chorus). But here, you increased a lot the spacing and Slider Velocity, as I said, for me this doesn't make sense. If I were you, I'd reduce more the velocity in this part and reduce the jumps length of course, to make it more consistent with the whole of the map, I have to say that the idea is not bad but you apply it on a wrong way (at least for me). For me, this must be changed.

- Again, good. But I really dislike the last part, the hitsounding could use some more work too.

My conclusion, is that the map is not bad in general.
The hitsounding need some more reviews before to go, but other than that is ok for me.
At the moment, I'll give you as star icon (And.. I'll probably recheck it some day in the future if you can find some more mods).
Good Luck with this map (Incredible song btw :D)
Topic Starter
pw384
I'm fixing it now :3 thanks!


• 800x600 is ok in a BG (with Ok I mean rankable ), but I think a better option is if you can find or resize your current one in 1024x768. In addition, I think is better if you use a .jpg BG but this is up to you.

-> I prefer PNG documents bcz JPGs have lower qualities.


[Easy]
• 00:28:393 (4) - I prefer a soft finish in this note instead of a Normal one. I think match better the cymbals

-> I suppose that a soft hitfinish here may be a bit strange... I'll keep the current one. And the same in other diffs :3

• 01:44:679 (1,1) - *(A bit nazi)* The blanket between these sliders is not the best, try to fix it please. Especially the sliders shapes.

-> I found this problem too, but it is really hard to fix it due to the square pattern beside :3


[Hard]
I recommend you to reduce the HP Drain Rate and the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick for a better spread (HP, OD-1)

-> I think current one is okay :P . otherwise, there will be 2 diffs that is displayed as 4.5stars

• 00:48:322 (6,7) - This flow awkwardly to me, if I were you I'd place this note in x:256 y:192 for a better flow

-> I chose a stack :3

about the last part: I remapped._. I suppose this one is easier :P
Topic Starter
pw384
Finished! thanks!
Flask
M4M~

[General]
  1. 音效太輕了 感覺用原始的hitnormal當作自定音效會比較好
  2. 沒SB就刪.osb吧 反正佔著空間
  3. BG轉jpg試試?
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:179 (4,5,6) - 為什麼用1.4x? 感覺沒什麼跳的必要..
  2. 00:18:107 (1,2,3) - 這裡的flow沒有很好 特別是(2,3)的部份 參考一下例圖吧
  3. 00:45:965 - / 00:47:250 - 補個whistle? 聽起來比較順也比較有規律點
  4. 00:54:536 (4) - 加clap? 這樣下clap感覺挺好聽的
  5. 01:05:679 (2,3) - 跳的莫名 反倒是(3,4)應該來發跳
  6. 01:08:036 (6,7,1) - 等距
  7. 01:36:107 (6,7,8,9,10) - 節奏略詭異..應該是像下面這樣才對 (然候無聊弄了範例 參考看看)

  8. 01:57:536 (10,1) - 怎麼spacing徒然縮小了o.o;;
  9. 02:58:393 (3,4,1) - 等距
    整體圖很乾淨,不過有些spacing的變化以及一些不等距的東西都需要注意,我mod裡面也有提到,你自己在重新看過整張圖,把不必要的距離變化都弄好。另外音效的部份可以找我,我可以幫你弄一些比較酷的音效 (
[Normal]
  1. 01:23:357 - break這裡開始就好 不用特地拖到後面
    我不太想nazi 也不太想一直挑排版問題 不過下次做這種歌最好不要開CS4 然後也不要一直放到藍線 這樣會顯的節奏鬆散
E沒問題~

快泡吧
Stefan
要看到这个排名 oAO
Topic Starter
pw384

Stefan wrote:

要看到这个排名 oAO
thanks!

correct Chinese: 要看到这个上架oAo
Topic Starter
pw384

Flask wrote:

M4M~

[General]
  1. 音效太輕了 感覺用原始的hitnormal當作自定音效會比較好 :arrow: normal的话感觉听上去挺奇怪的,所以只在最后kiai用了
  2. 沒SB就刪.osb吧 反正佔著空間 :arrow: fixed
  3. BG轉jpg試試? :arrow: 懒了。。而且觉得jpg质量太差。。
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:179 (4,5,6) - 為什麼用1.4x? 感覺沒什麼跳的必要..
  2. 00:18:107 (1,2,3) - 這裡的flow沒有很好 特別是(2,3)的部份 參考一下例圖吧
  3. 00:45:965 - / 00:47:250 - 補個whistle? 聽起來比較順也比較有規律點
  4. 00:54:536 (4) - 加clap? 這樣下clap感覺挺好聽的
  5. 01:05:679 (2,3) - 跳的莫名 反倒是(3,4)應該來發跳
  6. 01:08:036 (6,7,1) - 等距
  7. 01:36:107 (6,7,8,9,10) - 節奏略詭異..應該是像下面這樣才對 (然候無聊弄了範例 參考看看)

  8. 01:57:536 (10,1) - 怎麼spacing徒然縮小了o.o;;
  9. 02:58:393 (3,4,1) - 等距
    整體圖很乾淨,不過有些spacing的變化以及一些不等距的東西都需要注意,我mod裡面也有提到,你自己在重新看過整張圖,把不必要的距離變化都弄好。另外音效的部份可以找我,我可以幫你弄一些比較酷的音效 (
:arrow: 这里是基本都改了,有的spacing觉得迫不得已,一是不太重要,二是会破坏对称 但是比较严重的还是fixed了~
:arrow: 至于音效,我觉得我的soft-whistle用的不太好,比方说上面提到的那个的确是我下错了,所以现在比较缺这方面的建议

[Normal]
  1. 01:23:357 - break這裡開始就好 不用特地拖到後面 :arrow: 拖到后面去,血条收回也挺有节奏感的ww
    我不太想nazi 也不太想一直挑排版問題 不過下次做這種歌最好不要開CS4 然後也不要一直放到藍線 這樣會顯的節奏鬆散
:arrow: 我的N一直很难的啦 CS4是我的保留意见,但是排版什么的下次会注意._.

E沒問題~

快泡吧
谢谢F酱mod! :)
mancuso_JM_
Recheck time (No kds here pls)

[Easy:]

• 01:44:679 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I improved the way of some sliders shape and some flow mistakes in this pattern. Give it a try at this code please (btw, I break some of symetry in a little part, but in general is pretty similar as your previous pattern)
196,76,104679,6,0,P|256:100|317:74,2,135,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,64,106393,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,152,106822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,107250,6,0,P|256:212|336:176,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,152,108536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,108965,2,0,P|405:65|357:81,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,109822,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,152,110250,1,10,0:0:0:0:
155,81,110679,6,0,P|107:65|68:64,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,111536,2,0,P|64:196|72:276,2,135,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,113250,2,0,P|143:142|172:268,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Hard:]

I recommend you to reduce the HP Drain Rate and the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick for a better spread (HP, OD-1)

-> I think current one is okay :P . otherwise, there will be 2 diffs that is displayed as 4.5stars
Oh.. really? You don't want to change that just for the Star rating? xD.
Don't you think a HP, OD 2 in easy, HP, OD 4 in Normal and HP, OD 6 in Hard is not a better spread? Just saying.
I still think that you should change that

About the BG, is ok if you want to keep the current one.
Other than that, everything is good to go for me.
Call me back later!
Topic Starter
pw384

mancuso_JM_ wrote:

Recheck time (No kds here pls)

[Easy:]

• 01:44:679 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I improved the way of some sliders shape and some flow mistakes in this pattern. Give it a try at this code please (btw, I break some of symetry in a little part, but in general is pretty similar as your previous pattern)
196,76,104679,6,0,P|256:100|317:74,2,135,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,64,106393,1,10,0:0:0:0:
88,152,106822,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,176,107250,6,0,P|256:212|336:176,1,180,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,152,108536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,64,108965,2,0,P|405:65|357:81,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,152,109822,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,152,110250,1,10,0:0:0:0:
155,81,110679,6,0,P|107:65|68:64,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,148,111536,2,0,P|64:196|72:276,2,135,10|10|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,104,113250,2,0,P|143:142|172:268,1,180,10|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
:arrow: really cool and fixed!
[Hard:]

I recommend you to reduce the HP Drain Rate and the Overall Difficulty by 1 tick for a better spread (HP, OD-1)

-> I think current one is okay :P . otherwise, there will be 2 diffs that is displayed as 4.5stars
Oh.. really? You don't want to change that just for the Star rating? xD.
Don't you think a HP, OD 2 in easy, HP, OD 4 in Normal and HP, OD 6 in Hard is not a better spread? Just saying.
I still think that you should change that
:arrow: finally I found a good reason to change it to 6 :D It's bcz the song is slow and OD6 fits it!
About the BG, is ok if you want to keep the current one.
Other than that, everything is good to go for me.
Call me back later!
EDIT: why did osu!forum add "e86" :o
mancuso_JM_
After a little IRC in Hard fixing some spacing, everything looks fine now.
Uff.. Such a long time without doing that xD
Bubbled!!
Topic Starter
pw384
Thanks! :D
Kinomi
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quantum-rose
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