抢沙发> <~~
> <被抢走了233Sweet Vanilla wrote:
抢沙发> <~~
谢谢checkSweet Vanilla wrote:
没抢到> < 算了 咱来摸一下~~
[General]
玩了一下做的好好> <~~
但是乃的combo阵型没有向左右方向展开 这是咱觉得比较可惜的地方嗯这里不加kiai的原因是为了突出最后的一部分 但是还是加上了fountains
- 00:55:822 - 这里加kita
同上
- 01:50:679 - 这里也要加
[384]还好吧 因为和前面对称
- 01:15:107 (5,6) - 好不容易发现一个 这里不太齐不是咩
做的很好 in的难度这些跳都是允许的节奏感也很好
[normal]
很好了 咱认为没有什么大问题
[easy]
great!
能rank 加油> <
谢谢米桶神麻婆mod!mintong89 wrote:
hiBlack: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue[384]
00:21:108 (6,7) - +clap or whistle fixed
00:23:037 (3) - 太弯不好看 fixed
00:25:822 (2,3) - 没包好, 也就是slider不够弯 还好吧 懒得改了233
00:39:322 (3,4) - ^, 建议用Grid Snap 4 ^
00:40:179 (5,6) - ^ ^
00:52:393 (5) - NC ok
01:09:536 (1) - 不要NC ok
01:15:107 (5) - 中间的拉下一格 尾端拉右一格 (Grid Snap 3) fixed
01:36:322 (7) - 不是很好, 头变成个note, 尾端的和01:37:179 (8) - 连在一起 fixed
01:59:465 (4) - +clap added[Normal]
01:04:179 (3,5) - +clap added
Easy look's fine
Good Luck~
other mods are all fixed!AlpacaCokelat wrote:
Hello, from queue :3
i'm a noob modder and your mapset is already great, so mostly shitty suggestions =w=
[General]
- fine :3
[Easy][Normal]
- 00:18:965 (1,2) - only pointing this out, i'm not sure newbie player won't be confused with this
00:41:250 (3) - whistle at slider arrow?
00:55:822 (1,2) - only suggestion, but you can improve the flow a little bit with ctrl+j ahh..imo there's no need to keep the flow
00:59:250 (1) - how about adding a finish? like this slider's head 01:12:965 (1) -
01:18:965 (1) - 168|172 , so 01:17:679 (2,1) - won't be too close
01:19:822 (2) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the downbeat
01:22:393 (3) - nc? like 00:47:250 (1) -
01:42:965 (2) - add finish at slider's tail? there's a faint cymbal sounds in the song
02:24:965 (1) - only suggestion, but making this slider curve a bit symmetry with the y axis is nice
03:03:965 (4) - move some grids to the left? to make it not really linear
i have some hitsounds suggestion, it's up to you to use it or not because i noticed there are some downbeats which can be accented with finish hitsounds, but if you prefer the current the hitsounds pattern, then... /runs accept someSPOILER02:13:822 (4) - add finish at slider's tail
02:21:536 (1) - add finish at slider's head
02:24:965 (1) - add finish at slider's head
02:28:393 (1) - add finish
02:31:822 (1) - add finish at slider's head
02:34:393 (3) - add finish at slider's tail?
02:38:679 (1) - add finish at slider's head
03:07:822 (1) - add finish at slider's head
- 00:38:679 (1) - whistle at slider's head?
00:41:893 (5) - ^
00:47:250 (1) - ^
00:48:750 (3) - add finish at slider's tail
00:59:679 (1) - remove nc, then add nc 00:59:250 (7) - the current one can avoid newbie's confusion
01:06:107 (3) - add finish? to accent the downbeat
01:19:822 (3) - ^
01:18:965 (1) - remove nc, then add nc 01:19:822 (3) - ? downbeat the same above
01:36:107 (7) - only mere suggestions, making this slider ends at 01:36:536 - fits the vocal better
01:50:679 (3) - nc? to accent the kiai
02:00:536 (5) - add finish at slider's tail? to accent the downbeat
02:14:465 (2) - ^
02:35:036 (6) - ^
02:38:679 (2) - add finish? fits with the previous hitsound pattern
02:43:822 - add a note? /runs
03:07:393 (2) - add finish at slider's tail
[384]i'm sorry for poor mod :'3 take my star
- 00:38:465 (1) - this is only my opinion, but this one is a bit too soon, i think that's okay right now
00:48:965 (8) - add finish
00:52:393 (1) - add finish at slider's head? to accent the downbeat
01:09:536 (3) - nc like 00:54:965 (1,2,1) -
01:19:822 (1) - add finish at slider's head?
01:22:393 (7) - nc? to accent this pattern 01:22:393 (7,8) -
02:00:965 (1) - add finish at slider's head?
02:06:965 (7) - not really symmetry, i'm not really good at this, so you can make it better than thisSPOILER02:14:679 (1) - add finishi don't know how to input the codes, i'm sorry ;_;
02:18:107 (1) - add finish at slider's head?
02:21:322 (1) - ^
02:24:965 (1) - ^
02:28:393 (1) - ^
02:30:322 (3) - that's a weird anti-jump, i think
02:31:822 (1) - add finish at slider's head
02:35:250 (1,2,3,4) - add finish?
02:38:679 (1) - add finish at slider's head
02:42:107 (5) - add finish
03:07:822 (12) - ^ ? to accent the downbeat
Good luck~
谢谢mod!eikkaleyd wrote:
又是神麻婆讨厌>A<又mod不出东西了
[三八四]
00:48:107 (5,6) - 感觉都是单点,人声还是很连贯的推荐把67连起来变成个slider fixed
01:10:179 (2) - 和13间距是不是有点小 等边三角形 所以不改了:D
01:21:750 (5,8,1) - 试试让这三个的位置做成等腰三角形(虽然没什么意义总感觉好看点? 有遮挡在前面 所以不太想再加图形pattern了
01:33:750 - 感觉这里有人声节奏却空了。。考虑下加个圈或者把5reverse一次 这边留空感觉效果好一点
02:08:679 (3) - 间距,是说你3绕着2的间距和4绕着3的间距差距太大了 调整了一下之前的梗
02:39:536 (3) - 这种重叠要加NC的吧 去掉重叠了
03:00:965 (1) - 感觉2和3是逆向的话,1也和2逆向吧,把1掉个头 GOOD!!
[Normal]
00:48:750 (3) - 虽然DS是对的但是好像有点会误读,掉个头拿远点会好点吧 感觉原来那样挺好玩233 另外这个normal也偏上
01:45:750 (5,6) - N难度来说好像有点难读啊,既然45是跟着鼓点的话6移到01:46:393 应该也好读也简单了 这里我想跟人声
02:21:107 (5,1) - 人声唱了两个字你只有一个圈也有点不好打。。删掉5把1放在那里好点 改成滑条了
03:03:107 (4,5) - 4的拖条像是忽然就结束了呢,4这里放个点然后把拖条放在后面红线上并拉长一倍会简单一些 跟人声
[Easy]E难度有什么好写的
shentu。 ball no black
谢谢modding!Zero__wind wrote:
玛德我疯了 本来给你几乎写完的的mod被浏览器吃掉了
我点post 卡住了 然后就没了
General
换bg 血条挡脸 暂时没有好的BG,其它BG都太单调了(living things的封面) 所以先放着
384
用自定义难度名不错 可以避免这到底是Hard还是Insane的问题 ahahaha(
00:18:965 (2) - 太近 fixed
01:49:822 (1,2,1) - 你之前的段落是和后面slider叠一起的 这里的话娿 干嘛不让#2 CTRL+H 重音放跳不是跳合适的 02:56:679 (1,2,3,1) - 这里就挺好的 相比起来02:27:536 (5,6,7,8) - 就很蛋疼 建议改掉 这跳得不合曲啊 fixed
02:39:322 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里stack有点多 不太舒服 不过我没太想好怎么改 或者把2拉高一些 或者让2345字上面一些的地方摆个结构 不要在底下叠着 找到比较好的改法了 fixed
03:11:036 (1) - NC不太必要 对于读图还是有用的(前面是1/2单点后面就是1/4三连) 所以不改了
03:11:357 (1) - 转的过程中80%左右音量就可以了 最后那一下finish多大声无所谓 其他2个diff也一样的意见 fixed
Normal
00:48:107 (2,3) - 0.94x 间距容易被吐槽 建议2和3都各自往两边挪一格(横坐标+-4) 然后把00:46:822 (4,5,1) - 和 00:49:393 (1) - 配合性地微调一下即可 fixed
01:18:322 (5) - 求求你啊 先考虑ds再对称 其实原来也没问题(只考虑读图的话) 既然被挑了还是改了
01:24:107 - 这个braek往后拉得完全没必要 貌似是我多拉了一拍。。往前拉了一拍
02:03:108 (4) - (152,272) 现在的完全不会影响读图 所以先保留
02:19:607 (3) - 间距 fixed
02:26:250 (2) - (64,156) fixed
02:43:822 - 干嘛不加个带finish的note然后直接break 先留着 低难度note比较疏 这里留空比较好
03:05:893 (3) - 间距 这里不会读错成1/4,留着
Easy
01:24:107 - 同样 break不用拉到这里 直接起就可以了 同上
02:26:250 (2) - (300,180) 然后再对称 fixed
02:43:822 - 同样意见 加个note呗 同上
03:03:965 (4) - (52,160) 现在的更好 和之前slider边缘一致
高难度版面利用率太低了 以后做新图的时候再改吧 何况这首歌实际BPM才70 我更喜欢收敛
Good luck
可以quantum-rose wrote:
384难度的01:31:393 (8) - 01:32:250 (2) - 可不可以考虑把1和2往下挪几格?
谢谢Az摸图!:3Azure wrote:
384にゃ
[General]
把這個加進資料夾裡 http://puu.sh/3fhyu (檔名 soft-sliderslide)
把這個換成soft-hitclap看會不會適合點? http://puu.sh/3fple
[Easy][Normal]
- 這Easy做的還真漂亮,不過休息時間點多? 还好吧 和Normal难度统一的break
[384]
- 4星半Normal? 其实现在也挺正常了._.
- 02:43:822 (2) 折返,尾巴+finish 不喜欢._.
那個Normal實在看不出甚麼東西不好意思了にゃ。
- 很多combo都疊在一起其實可以分開,可是這是對稱圖所以我也不知道說要移到哪裡...
- 01:12:750 (8) 跟7分開 (x:256 , y:192) fixed
- 01:25:607 (5,6) ctrl+G fixed
- 01:26:893 (8,9) 移到7的圈圈裡面 http://puu.sh/3fq4s.jpg fixed,但是有点担心间距
- 01:45:965 (4)http://puu.sh/3fq7s.jpg fixed
- 01:54:107 (1) ctrl+G fixed
- 01:57:322 (7) 分開 http://puu.sh/3fqcu.jpg fixed
- 02:03:107 (5) 往下移到 (x:256 , y:112) fixed
- 02:14:250 (7) ctrl+G fixed
- 02:27:107 (4) ^ fixed
- 02:27:750 (6,7) ^ 然後位置調一下 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3fqim.jpg 好球!
- 02:33:107 (3) ^ fixed
- 02:43:393 (2) ^ fixed
- 02:43:822 (3) 移到7,8之間 (x:256 , y:256) 突然发现这个地方没有遵循其它难度的梗 所以这里把note去掉了
- 03:02:465 (5) ctrl+G fixed
- 03:06:107 (6) ^ fixed
- 03:07:607 (10,11,12) 分開 同上面 http://puu.sh/3fqcu.jpg fixed
thanks!Reikosaka wrote:
[384]
01:57:322 (7,8,9) - 03:07:607 (10,11,12) - maybe you should space this note current one is good enough
01:57:322 (7,8,9) - add a note I can't get it
[Normal]
02:35:036 (6) - make it little bit closer to previous slider ok
I hope it helping you
有用的话我就给了 没用的话如果写得挺长的值得考虑的话我也会给..quantum-rose wrote:
我擦这也有kudos
谢谢mod!jyc-Binggan wrote:
general]
打着太软,感觉不适合soft音效,建议用normal,然后把音量调低,或者normal和soft混用 用了custom音效了
4.5星的normal建议再加几个note变成简单hard,384难度当作送分insane好一些 现在的spread还好啦 都是送分w
[easy]
nothing
[normal]
00:40:607 (3) - 这个滑条头的whistle建议改到尾巴上,因为这里soft-whistle当重音用,加在红线上听着别扭
00:41:893 (5) - 同理这个whistle去掉
00:42:536 (6) - 在这加whistle
00:44:036 (2) - 同理改到尾巴上
00:45:322 (1) - 这个whistle去掉
00:45:965 (2) - 在这里加whistle
后边的也差不多,你看着改吧
有的短滑条下错的改了 长滑条的whistle感觉还是有用的 即使在红线上
[384]
00:18:965 (2,3) - 这两个互相遮挡感觉没有必要啊,建议重摆一下 挺好的啊 穿心梗
01:54:750 - 加note
02:03:536 (1,2) - 这两个note建议改到右边,增加一些利用率啊,之前的02:00:536 (6) - 已经用了左边
02:41:250 (1) - 去掉NC
02:41:679 (2) - 加nc
02:43:822 - 建议加note 看低难度就知道了ww
其它的改了
祝rank
[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
from your queue
General吉安帕 下张图改!
change the diff spead to 384,059,043add pierrot_wang in tags for tieba ID
384除了加note全改了 ar3神mod 最后一部分改得更跳了+尾杀
- 00:16:179 (4,5,6) - 一看你这就不科学, 建议改成这样的形状 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826582
- 01:02:036 (7) - 我觉得太高了 y:120差不多
- 01:03:107 (2) - 然后这个就可以和上面滑条尾叠着了
- 01:05:250 (1) - 我觉得3/4比较合适 我觉得I'll这个音失恋者的不能者么愤慨感觉号下铺两个单从一压屏幕
- 01:26:893 (8) - 这个往前移到01:26:679 - 感觉节奏比较好啊
- 01:53:250 (6) - 你这是hard吧我觉得还是ctrl+G
- 02:20:893 (5,6) - 感受一下 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826602
- 02:23:250 (6) - 往上移半格
- 02:30:965 (6,7,1) - 我觉的不需要这样 都往下一点不就好了
- 02:43:822 - 随便加个note? >_<
- 02:59:250 (1,2) - 怎么说呢 我感觉就奔放了这么一下 后面还是不够霸气 你怎么看
Normalslider art了
- 00:38:679 (1,2) - 其实这个的blanket不科学 挺科学
- 01:23:250 (7) - move up 1 grid fixed
- 02:20:893 (5) - next: 0.85x 啦啦啦 不要在意这些细节,小学生肯定不会读错
- 02:40:607 (5) - 我觉得这个不做slider art的话后面不如从上面放回去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/826619
Easy好
- 01:50:250 (2) - .-. 改了(放弃spacing了
谢谢mod!!lkx_Shore wrote:
[Easy]
01:42:965 (2) - 似乎没包好 fixed
[Normal]
02:43:822 - 加个note?.. >_<
[384]
00:55:393 (2) - 加个whistle? fixed
01:43:822 (1) - 和下面的滑条配着来看觉得不太好看.. 还好、、不想打破梗了
01:57:322 (8,9,10) - 链接到后面的滑条的话...打起来感觉不是很好 我再想想
02:43:822 - 加个note在x256 y272? >_<
[Other]
Goodluck.
thanksBoWAct wrote:
hi~ from #modreq
It is MAP fun in a very beautiful place!
I thought the difficulty of one on the other and want
Ranked hope.★
好像是0.0 欠MOD太多记不清了..384059043 wrote:
wow three mods...... it's hard to paste what i've fixed >.< but I've fixed a lot! thanks!
咦chloe你的easy的mod好像贴错了呦 :3
Legenda wrote:
→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts a.k.a. things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods
I accepted your request, and let's check the real BPM of it in [General] section below.384059043 wrote:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/96277
Although I set the BPM as 140.00, the real one is 70.00. You can ignore it if you don't agree with me.
thanks! :>
[TimingPoints]and change to
965,428.571428571429,4,2,1,80,1,0
[TimingPoints]3. For [384] diff, find this line
965,857.142857142858,4,2,1,80,1,0
SliderMultiplier:1.3and change to
SliderMultiplier:2.64. For [Normal] diff, find this line
SliderMultiplier:1.1and change to
SliderMultiplier:2.25. For [Easy] diff, find this line
SliderMultiplier:0.9and change to
SliderMultiplier:1.8
thanks bakandrea <3Andrea wrote:
~Easy~~Normal~
- 01:47:250 (1) - This slider has too many slider repeats and it might be confusing for beginners, try to do something else instead. fixed
~384~
- 02:01:393 (1) - Don't stack this circle under the previous slider, that's way too confusing for a Normal. fixed
- I highly suggest you to rename this difficulty to "Hard", simple and better. ahh..I don't know if this diff is a hard or an insane or something between.. so I prefer to use '384'
Linkin Park the best <3
- 00:38:465 (1,2) - If you want to follow the music carefully, new combo should go on (2) instead. Ok
- 01:26:250 - It feels like it's missing a note here, add it. Ok
- 02:43:822 - Add a note here with a finish, it would fit greatly. ok
- 03:04:607 (1,2) - This jump feels a bit too high, try reducing the spacing of it. fixed
- 03:11:036 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. the current is okay imo